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Saisei, Fenikkusu.

THE INFO.

Name: Saisei, Fenikkusu
Nickname: Fireboy
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:Standing at 5'11 and weighing in at 150 pounds Fenikkusu is about the average size for a kid of 14 years.  His hair is a deep red earning him the childhood nick name of "fire boy." His eyes are a deep shade of green, the contrast between his eyes and hair makes his eyes seem to pop out of his head.  He starts his outfit with a dark red sleeveless shirt. Over that he throws on a white and brown waist-coat. The coat may not appear to have pockets but that is misleading, there are actually two pockets located on the front of the vest. Another item of clothing he might wear is his red hood. The hood is large enough for him to keep his face hidden but light enough to not cause a major problem with mobility.  Fenikkusu wears two gloves that only cover the pinky finger and the index finger. This style serves no real combat purpose he just likes how the gloves look. On the back of each of the gloves the symbol for Konohagakure have been imbedded. He made sure the gloves were like this so whenever he struggles with a fight or objective he would just have to look down at his hands to remember what he was fighting for.  Fenikkusu wears a three layered belt, the top layer bares the headband he received when becoming a genin. The other two layers act as actual belts holding up his pants. The reason behind this is that a majority of his equipment he stores in his pockets on are his pants. His pants are a dark red, similair to his shirt except they have yellow streaks going down the sides. Fenikusu chooses this outfit because of his love of the fire element and fire is best associated with tropical warm colors.
Forehead Protector: Fenikkusu wears the Konoha headband as a belt.
Personality:Fenikkusu looks at every problem with ration and logic. He tries his best to keep his emotions out of a situation, especially if it is intense. He believes that if a problem can be tackled with a cool head it can be over come. Fenikkusu is a quiet and reserved individual who is interested in the well being and safety of his village and villagers. He carries around a strong sense of duty, even though he in only a genin, to be ready to face any threat to the leaf village.  He believes in doing everything "by the book." this belief came to him by his upbringing. He respects all laws and traditions that his home has to offer. He is a loyal and trustworthy guy who will never purposely break a promise he made. To him the mission objective is the primary concern. Fenikkusu will put his heart and all of his energy into competing any task that he is given, especially by someone of higher rank. He isn't big into giving emotional support to others nor is he any good at receiving it. Being such a serious person his ability to make friends as lacked almost his entire life. Fenikkusu isn't one to boast and if teamed up with someone else he will be modest about his own skills and contribution to the mission. He can take charge of any situation but does prefer to follow. He has a weakness for the opposite sex. Fenikkusu is in no way perverted how ever gets weak kneed when talking to a pretty face.

For the most Fenikkusu is a quiet and reserved guy except when it comes to two things, battle strategies and politics. Every where there are certain politics that run it. Like how a man gets a promotion because he's married to the boss' daughter or how someone who is more deserving for a job promotion gets denied because of personal history that has nothing to do with the job. If he witnesses this happening he can not keep his mouth shut. Another thing that Fenikkusu hates is when someone from a nobility clan has a sense of entitlement just because of their last name. Fenikkusu firmly believes that it is the action of yourself that should be judged and not the actions of your forefathers. One thing that he loves to talk about is the strategy that comes with a good battle. Not every battle can be won by brute strength or superior jutsus alone. It takes knowledge to learn how be the best at fighting. This is something Fenikkusu wants to achieve. He doesn't really care for the fighting itself but that feeling someone gets when they win or lose. He loves the rush that comes with dodging attacks and countering so smoothly that his opponent would never see it coming.   

One thing that he likes to talk about is battle strategies, he loves to plan out fights and learn new counters. He choose the Katon and Doton element based on how offensive fire is and how defensive earth is. In his mind this gives him a greater margin to train with.
Clan: N/A
Nindō: "It's best to have failure happen early in life. It wakes up the Phoenix bird in you so you rise from the ashes."

THE NINJA.

Origin: The Fire Country
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialities: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities: Katon, Doton
Combat Style: Fenikkusu does not believe in real violence unless he has no other choice. Do to his gentle nature and calm way of fighting he has developed his own way of dealing with fights. He first will attempt to analyze the situation by testing what his opponent can do. He normally does this by throwing kunai or maybe using some fire ninjutsu. Most capable fighters will easily dodge or block these attacks. If they do then Fenikkusu will begin to spar with them, however if they show difficulty with the first strikes then Fenikkusu loses all interest in the battle. He tried to stay affair with using fire ninjutsu and the basic shinobi weaponry. However he is more then prepared to fight hand to hand if need be. Using the Doton element and his own Taijutsu Fenikkusu has a strong close and mid range offensive as well as a strong defense in a general sense. However though his form is far from perfect. One way to beat his combat style would be to keep the fight long range. His source of ranged combat would be his tools and fire ninjutsu. If someone were to simply outlast him in a fire fight so to say there isn't much in terms of offense Fenikkusu could do. Another simple way to beat him is a flaw in his character more then is fighting style. Fenikkusu simply likes to use certain Jutsus more than others. If someone were to fight him and figure his set plan then they could easily counter his moves. Of course doing so would make him reluctant to continue using those jutsus, so it all come down to who waits for the time to strike.  
Special Characteristics:
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
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Roleplay Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.

Ninjutsu

Academy
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Non-elemental
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Katon
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Doton
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Taijutsu
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Nin/Tai
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Equipment:

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim:Fireboy
Source:Mashiro-deviantart
Image URL:http://mashiro.deviantart.com/art/Fire-boy-42700091


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PostSubject: Re: Saisei, Fenikkusu [Konohagakure Genin] Saisei, Fenikkusu [Konohagakure Genin] EmptyWed 28 Aug 2013, 3:06 am

  • Your personality needs expanding.

  • Your combat style also needs expanding. It should be 250 words, at the least.

  • Other than that, this application looks good to me.
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Only thing I could pick up that blocked an approval was that you had Special Characteristics: missing from your application, however considering how minor of an issue it is I've edited it in myself. And so...

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