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PostSubject: Senju, Sazuki [Kiri Genin] Senju, Sazuki [Kiri Genin] EmptyWed 21 Apr 2010, 5:01 am

Basic Information:

Name:Senju,Sazuki

Secondary Title:

Age:12
Gender:Male

Physical Appearance:


Sazuki is the one who is behind the monkey puppet to the left of the picture.He has red/brown spikey hair.From a distance its hard to see what color is hair is but when you get closer to him its easier to tell its a mix of brown and red.He also has a lightish purpleish pair of markings on his face.Two comeing up from his chin and the other two comeing in from his cheek.He wears his regular kiri clothes.Above his regular outfit is a small cloak that hides his upper torso.His headband that he wears across his forehead is black with the kiri sign on it.He has black pants with a holster at the left side of his left leg.

Under his regular outfit he wears a light tan shirt and he always has his monkey puppet out on his shoulder and some times wraped up attached to his back.The monkey puppet has white hair and three eyes.All three eyes look as if they are closed and the third eye is on the forehead of the monkey puppet.The monkey puppet also has a cloak similar to Sazuki's.Sazuki also wears black gloves over his hands.His monkey also has fake monkey skin and hair over the wood to make it looki real.

Personality:Has a good personality aslong as your on his good side.He hates it when people waste resources of this planet.By haveing the elements of the earth.If someone would waste water or a tree he would remake another tree in place of the old one.He uses his Wood jutsu smartly and makes trees cut them down and makes puppets out of them that way hes not wasteing resources.He doesn't like it when people fight and if he has the power to he would break it up between them.Also he cannot say no to a challenge its a pride thing and he would never back down no matter what.

He has a good heart and some times when talking to others he can cheer them up easily and make them laugh easily to.His Nindo is to break the curse that has been layed upon the shinobi world by createing peace.He was a beace loveing person and he wants to raise through the ranks of Ninja becomeing stronger then he once was.He also likes to make vacation spots for example.If he found a nice normal grassy field he would turn a good part of it into a huge mountain.He would make a lake below the mountain and create a waterfall.Then he would use his wood jutsu to make a house at top for him to stay at till he decides to leave that spot.He is a smart thinker and can easily overcome many challenges.



Clan Information:
Clan Name: Senjuu

Clan Location: Konoha

Clan Traits: None

Kekkei Genkai: The Senju clan has the ability of the manipulation of the advanced element wood, or "Mokuton". They achieve this by having complete balance with two elements: Earth and Water. By combining these two chakra and implementing them into jutsu they can create wood or manipulate preexisting wood. By converting chakra into the source of life, senju areble to create trees, cause them to grow to great sizes, and manipulate them to diverse shapes and battle uses at will. It was said this ability was used to create the very landscape and foundation that Konoha is built on.

Clan Jutsu:

Name: Wood Clone
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Wood
Description: The Wood Clone Technique simply makes up to a few clones made of wood that emerges from the body of the user. The clones can be as simple in function as a wooden dummy for use in the Body Replacement Technique. More complex clones can travel far distances from the user and are able to communicate with the original

Name: Wood Release Secret Technique: Birth of Dense Woodland
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Element: Wood
Description: The user forces trees to grow on any surface, and can easily create a dense forest anywhere. It was this technique that allowed Hashirama to build the foundations of Konoha. This jutsu can also be used to bind an opponent and alter a battlefield for their own uses. This jutsu has an initial range of 25 meters in each direction. By adding an additional B rank amount of chakra they can extend this up to an extra 5 meters, A- 10 meters, and doubling the normal chakra cost will allow it to go 15 meters past the original boundary. The trees can be used as a focal point for other wood jutsu or the limbs can be maneuvered themselves using their mastery of the wood element.


Name: Wood Release Binding Nest
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Wood
Description: This technique lets the user summon a tree around their opponent to bind them. This technique is relatively powerful and holds opponents very gracefully, with less of a strain on the user, because the user sinks them into the ground. Afterwards, the user can enclose the opponent so that their body implodes.


Name: Dense Woodland Wall
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Wood
Description: The user touches their hands to the ground and calls upon there ability to manipulate and create the wood element. The surge their chakras through the ground and force them to come up from the ground as wooden poles which interlace to form a wide barrier of 5 meters in front of themselves.


Name: Four Pillars House
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Wood
Description: Using this jutsu the user can create an fairly basic house made entirely out of wood. Due to time needed, approximately five minutes, it has no use in battle and is entirely intended for the purposes of creating a quick shelter for over night stay.

Name: Four Pillars Prison
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Wood
Description: The user creates a quick, decently sized cage of straight wood pillars around the targets. This is for a quick capture and is not a very durable structure and can be quiet easily be broken out of. However it can also be used as a basis for other wood based jutsu.

Name: Great Forest Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Wood
Description: A technique that changes one's own arm into big trees. Using chakra, the tissues are transformed into trees at the cellular level. Then, by activating the trees, stimulating them to grow rapidly, they lengthen at high speed and fork into many branches. It is possible to capture the enemy with these branches and at the same time, if one changes the ends into sharp stakes, turn them into countless, sharp, spear-like piercing weapons.


Name: Serial Pillar Houses
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Element: Wood
Description: This is a grander scale of Four Pillars House technique. It is the same basic concept on the houses get more complex and it can create several of them all at once. This exhausts the user very rapidly, taking about half of their chakra supply to complete. The limit to this technique is 25 houses per use.


Name: Wood Release: Transformation
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Wood
Description: This jutsu is just like any other Transformation Technique. The user performs the necessary hand seals, then wood emerges and covers his entire body and a puff of smoke or chakra covers up the transformation. Once the jutsu is done, the transformation is complete. It acts more like a costume than a transformation, as a user is able to leave it behind if necessary.


Name: Wood Locking Wall
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Wood
Description: An extremely versatile move, this technique uses chakra to activate the roots in the ground and, using the user as a reference point, makes wooden pillars appear from left and right. The wooden pillars join together in a dome-shape with the user at the center. This process can be used to catch the enemy in a double sided attack. Also, in case one confronts the enemy at a short distance, the enemy can be locked up inside the dome, setting the situation for a one-on-one fight. This dome can also be collapsed or burnt with the enemy inside causing damage. Furthermore, it functions as a easy shelter against the enemy's long-distance attacks, like shuriken and kunai


History:
Senju, Sazuki [Kiri Genin] Senju

The Senju clan was descended from the younger of the two brothers chosen by the Sage of the Six Paths to inherit the way of the ninja. He was born with the "body" of the sage, and he believed that love was the key to peace. This led to the sage choosing him as his successor causing his older brother to attack him out of hatred. Eventually, the Uchiha clan was descended from this older brother and resulted in the bitter rivalry of the Senju and Uchiha.

The Senju clan gained their fame in the era before the founding of the hidden villages. Where other clans focused on mastering one particular skill, the Senju were masters in all skills, from ninjutsu, to taijutsu, to genjutsu. Because of this, they were feared as "the clan with a thousand skills", which gave them their name Senju ("a thousand skills", "a thousand hands"). The most famous member of the clan was their leader, Hashirama Senju. His unique Wood Release ninjutsu even gave the clan the nickname the Senju clan of the Forest . This Wood Release, and his ability to control the tailed beasts, made him the greatest shinobi of his time. The Senjus' place at the top of the shinobi world was undisputed, but there was one clan that was able to stand up to them: the Uchiha clan. Whenever one country hired the Senju, their enemies would hire the Uchiha, and vice versa. This led to a rivalry between the two clans and, more specifically, between the leaders of the clans, Hashirama and Madara Uchiha.

However, in a world of constant bloodshed, Hashirama had a dream of peace, and a great love for his fellow men. Known as the "Will of Fire" , this belief made the Senju clan propose a truce to the Uchiha clan. Weary of fighting, and persuaded by Hashirama's great charisma and negotiation abilities, the Uchiha accepted, ending their bloody rivalry. Only Madara was against this truce, believing the Senju would one day destroy the Uchiha clan. He was forced to accept, but his humiliation wouldn't end there.

Some time after the alliance between the Senju and the Uchiha was signed, the Land of Fire hired them to stabilize its borders, and the clans created a permanent settlement within the country. Thus, Konohagakure was founded, and, with it, the system of one Hidden Village per country. As the system spread throughout the world, the constant violence stopped, and Hashirama's dream began to become a reality. From that point on the Senjuu have been highly revered in Konoha as one of their great families and some of the most powerful ninja in their ranks.

Clan Details: Open

Rank Information:

Rank:Genin

Village Affiliation: Kirigakure

Special Information:



Main:Puppetry
Sub:Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:

Main: Water
Sub: Earth
MixWood


Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:
Name: Wood Release: Transformation
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Wood
Description: This jutsu is just like any other Transformation Technique. The user performs the necessary hand seals, then wood emerges and covers his entire body and a puff of smoke or chakra covers up the transformation. Once the jutsu is done, the transformation is complete. It acts more like a costume than a transformation, as a user is able to leave it behind if necessary.

Name: Dense Woodland Wall
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Wood
Description: The user touches their hands to the ground and calls upon there ability to manipulate and create the wood element. The surge their chakras through the ground and force them to come up from the ground as wooden poles which interlace to form a wide barrier of 5 meters in front of themselves.


Name: Four Pillars Prison
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Wood
Description: The user creates a quick, decently sized cage of straight wood pillars around the targets. This is for a quick capture and is not a very durable structure and can be quiet easily be broken out of. However it can also be used as a basis for other wood based jutsu

Name: Underground Fish Projection
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description:Doton • Dochuu Eigyo is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. Using the Oboro Bunshin, the Rain Genin use the clones to confuse their enemies and then hide within the earth. From the shadows of the clones, the actual ninja can then attack their target.



Name: Mud Overturn
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description:Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

Name: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton
Description:Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.


Name: Water Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton
Description:Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Name: Violent Water Wave
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton
Description:Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Yahiko will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.

Name: Revolving Split Earth Palm
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description:Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.

Name: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Doton
Description:Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.

Name: Water Prison Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton
Description:
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Name: Waterfall Basin Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-B
Element: Suiton
Description:Suiton • Takitsubo no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals to create a large volume of water. Yamato used this technique in conjunction with Earth Style Doryuu Jouheki. This allowed him to form a large waterfall.This jutsu only works when your on highly elivated ground.The waterfall can be made to keep going useing 1 chakra equal to the rank each post its up or you can make it stop when it hits the ground.C rank can generate enough water to be considered a pool.B rank can generate enough for water for a average sized lake.

Name: Water Bullet
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton
Description:Suiton • Teppoudama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, Gamabunta manifests a large amount of water in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.

Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/a
Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.



The 3 Basic Academy Jutsu

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Kugutsu no Jutsu - [Puppetry Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Kugutsu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to use a puppet to attack from afar. Using their body's chakra, the ninja emits strings of chakra that run from their fingers to the puppet. The puppet itself can be loaded with many weapons and tools, allowing the puppet master to remain hidden while the puppet moves and attacks the target.

Name: Kugutsu Henge
Rank: E
Type: Kugutsu
Element: None
Description: A standard puppeteer jutsu. The user causes their puppet to resemble themselves, or causes their own body to resemble their puppet, enabling them to fool opponents who assume the roles of puppeteer and puppet are as they appear when they are actually in reverse.



Puppet Template:
Name:Takata
Rank:C
Description:He always has his monkey puppet out on his shoulder and some times wraped up attached to his back.The monkey puppet has white hair and three eyes.All three eyes look as if they are closed and the third eye is on the forehead of the monkey puppet.The monkey puppet also has a cloak similar to Sazuki's.His monkey also has fake monkey skin and hair over the wood to make it looki real.The monkey is small and reaches up to Sazuki's knee.The monkey has similar clothes to so it wears pants and a shirt under and it looks like any normal monkey with three eyes.
Body Slots:4
Slot 1:This slot is in the hand.When the puppet takes its hand off a katana blade comes out its just a normal katana.The katana blade is 3 feet long and is black.It shoots out till the entire blade is seen.
Slot 2:Eyes.Both eyes are two little smoke bombs that would only be used if he would need to get away from his enemy. (*)
Slot 3:In its mouth.There is a slingshot like thing that shoot out senbon it only uses senbon because you cant fit alot of anything else in there.In the head there are 3 shelves two in the upper part and one in the mouth.The ones in the mouth are the ones being shot and when it runs out it rotates and a new box is set up in the mouth.The boxes are very small and only can hold 50 senbon each for a total of 150 senbon all together.With the weight of the senbon and the force of the slingshot it can shoot senbon off very fast and can shoot 5 at a time so after shooting 10 rounds it would have to rotate to a new box of them until each box has none left (*)
Slot 4:In the left arm.It opens up and a bunch of kunai with explosive tags on then so it can take them and throw them anywhere at any time needed.20 explosive tags can be fit in to the arm and sometimes are tied to kunai.But he can also take this arm off entirely and it would blast off into the sky and then drop down onto the target and once hit would explode the entire arm but he would only do this if he was in trouble because it would mean he would have to remake this arm
History:Had gotten it as a boy from his father who made it for him.Ever since that day he wanted to become a ninja and has he grew older and started to become a ninja he has upgraded it and made it stronger faster and better any chance he had got and he had enough material's at the moment to make 5 weapons for it and so he did.

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Background Information

History:Infant Arc:When Sazuki was born he had a little bit of red hair still and was kept inside of the hospital for some time so they can get all the information needed about his body such as if he had a disease or something.After a week he was sent home with a medical ninja the medical ninja could tell that he would be a good ninja if he chose to be so and so he has.He had great potential and at home he spent 5 years learning about the world he was born into.He was laying in his crib when all of a suddenly a small little wood man came in the room.It slowly walked into the room and the little Sazuki started to laugh and clap he was a lucky senju born into a family of puppet masters that used to hail from sunagakure there family tree has shown there years of history they now needed to add Sazuki's picture.

Academy Arc:Upon the age of 5 years old Sazuki was enrolled into the academy.He was a smart kid and easily learned the basic jutsus.After two years of the academy he started to finally learn jutsu and there concept.The teacher in charge started to talk "Okay class,first off we will begin the learning of Bunshin No Jutsu.But Sazuki has already learned about it from his father.The teacher then demonstrated the handsigns how to concentrate the chakra and everything needed to know.By the time he was done barely any one could do it.There were only three who could do it at that time and one of them was Sazuki he was a special student.He learned all the 3 normal basics so fast they started to teach them advanced jutsu.At the age of 10 they started to learn how to throw shuriken and kunai and senbon.The only one who did it the best was Sazuki.He was very strong and smart he was number one of the entire class.

Genin Arc:In this arc sazuki has gotten a sensei and he had learned most of the C ranked clan jutsu.Sazuki was on a mission with his sensei and his two other partners.They were running through the forest and all of a sudden were stopped by two men who were chaseing them without being detected.They were only Genin though so it would be an easy battle.Sazuki ran up and punches the one man in the jaw then jumps up into the air and kicks him in his side sending him at a tree.He then formed some handseals then ran up besides the other man who was guarding his knocked out comrade.He then said "Water Prison" the man was traped in a water Prison.He then let his sensei take care of them.They continued and succeded in this mission of theres.But he has been assigned a new group because his other group died in a mission while he ran and was unharmed.

Role-Play Sample:Dorokimo,Takumi was on a mission in charge of a squad of chuunin there were two other squads they were all spread out.Some of the chuunin on the other teams went ahead of them but ended in failure as they ran to the cave where the fight would begin explosions came as explosive tags exploded killing some of there team members.But getting rid of all traps for them.They ran faster when they got to the cave Takumi told his squad to go in.After that all he looked in and they were dead.Takumi and all the ones who were left came in there was a bunch of leaf jounin inside killing the last member of the squad sent in.He took out his puppet and had it take out its katana.He sent it in to the part where the leaf ninjas are he made him go and slash at one but it took out a kunai.He had it shoot kunai out of its mouth killing the one man.He told the others to go out and kill the other two.He put his puppet back and they proceeded into the cave.

As they proceeded they ran into more leaf ninjas but handled them easily.They entered a building that was in the cave and killed 4 guards inside easily since they were genin.They got to the up stairs when they found 5 jounin.He took his puppet and threw a explosive tag to the top of them makeing the ceiling collapse on them killing the 4 of the 5 jounin.He took his puppets katana and stabed the last right in the back of the last.He took a scroll which was there objective and got outside the cave and lined the entire cave with explosive tags makeing it all fall killing the rest of the ninja inside.They then ran back to the village to complete there mission.


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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Sazuki [Kiri Genin] Senju, Sazuki [Kiri Genin] EmptyWed 21 Apr 2010, 6:06 am

Do you have permission to create a Kumo Chuunin? From what I know its full.
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Eek! Seems your app's coding has made some of your jutsu appear in very large font. Please fix it.
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Fixed it
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Kumo Chuunin is closed, as Travis stated. The availability thread is extremely out of date due to a mass influx and outflux of people. Refer to the anouncement for more details.

Beyond that, the history is much to short for a Chuunin in the first place, Wood Clone is actually a B-Ranked jutsu, the template is wrong, and another moderator can finish looking this over once the rank has been changed.
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Switched Village and Rank
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You need Kugutsu no Jutsu, puppetry technique, otherwise you cant use your puppets. its on Y's application, or any other puppeteer application.
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Dark Shadow wrote:


Rank:Chuunin

Village Affiliation: Kumogakure

You need to change the rank and village.

Dark Shadow wrote:
Name: Thin Chakra Strings
Rank: E
Type: Kugutsu
Element: None
Description: Kaku extends a number of thin chakra strings from his hands that connect to any puppets Kaku is currently utilizing. The string is unnaturally thin, as compared to other puppeteers strings, due to his natural string chakra and even Hyuuga can miss them without tuning themselves in to note their presence.

If this jutsu doesn't belong to you, you need to make sure you have permission from the original user.

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Name: Kugutsu no Jutsu - [Puppetry Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Kugutsu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to use a puppet to attack from afar. Using their body's chakra, the ninja emits strings of chakra that run from their fingers to the puppet. The puppet itself can be loaded with many weapons and tools, allowing the puppet master to remain hidden while the puppet moves and attacks the target.

You still don't have this on your app. You need it to preform puppetry.
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Done Done and Done
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Waterfall Basin: How much water is generated?

As a Kiri genin you can add Kirigakure no Jutsu
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Waterfall Basin: How much water is generated?

That still isnt answered. You merely added a post and chakra cost.
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Approved
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Archived.
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