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| Clan Name: Kaminahito
Location: Kumogakure
Signature Traits:
Lightning Affinity
The Kiminahito clan has a strong affinity for the Lightning element, to the point where they can not have any other. Any clan member must have Raiton as their primary element, and cannot have a secondary element or third element. Due to this affinity, Kiminahito clan members can learn Raiton jutsu one rank higher than their current rank allows, and have a 10% damage increase when using a Lightning jutsu.
Lightning Speed
Due to the nature of their Kekkai Genkai, the Kiminahito clan have honed their speed to the extent that they are on par with some of the fastest shinobi in the world. Kiminahito clan members have a 15% speed boost. But, due to their training of their legs, they have a 10% decrease in strength.
Man's Best Friend
The Kiminahito clan has had a tradition that dates back to their time in the mountains. They have always had dogs as either pets or for combat. No one knows why, but it seems that the first Kiminahito had a dog named Urufu. This has never been proven, but it has always been a prominent legend within the Kiminahito clan. Any member of the Kiminahito clan must have dogs as their summons.
Kekkei Genkai: Denkokikan (Doujutsu)
History: Nobody knows where the Kiminahito clan came from. When Daimu Kumogakure first became Raikage, they suddenly appeared from the mountains, offering their services as mercenaries. They showed themselves worthy of the job, beating the most skilled shinobi with ease. The key to their prowess lay in their Doujutsu, the Denkokikan. They were able to take the chakra from their eye and be able to slow down time for themselves. This allowed them to see their opponents attack almost before it was made. The most skilled could slow down time till it was almost stopped. This would have been amazing by itself, except the most skilled could also slow down certain portions of a scene. This allowed them to slow down their enemy in their minds while viewing themselves at normal speed. This made their moves seem like lightning. The downside to this was that when using the Doujutsu they had bad depth perception due to only one eye possessing the Doujutsu, and the eye eventually would become blind due to stress on the eye. The first could be overcome by having the other eye implanted with a family members eye (or in some very rare cases both the user's eyes will have the Doujutsu), and the second could be overcome by training the eye to detect chakra forces, or maybe by some other means... Despite these drawback's, the Kiminahito impressed the Raikage, resulting in their hiring. They have been Kumogakure's most elite set of mercenaries, and have been with every Raikage since. They have also had many elite sets of shinobi, producing some of the fastest shinobi ever. The clan members are loyal to the current Raikage. This is very unusual for a mercenary clan, but they will fight fiercely for whoever is currently Raikage, resulting in most people not wanting to off the Raikage as much. The Kiminahito clan are very secretive, keeping to themselves as much as possible. Though this has slowly changed since the election of their new clan leader, Akarei Kiminahito. He has slowly changed relations with the other clans within Kumogakure. Only time will tell whether he is successful.
Clan Jutsu:
- Spoiler:
Name: Denkokikan (Lightning Time)
Rank: D-S
Type: Doujutsu
Range: 20 to 60 meters, depends on rank
Element: N/A
Description: This Doujutsu allows the user to slow time down within the users mind. This is due to the fact that the eyes chakra slows down the electrical impulses from the eye to the brain, making everything seem as though in slow motion. This Doujutsu is best used with the other eye covered since the other eye will see the world around them at normal speed, causing confusion in the brain, making the user temporarily paralyzed.
D-Rank: When activated for the first time, it appears as a simple blue eye with one apostrophe pupil. At this stage, the user can slow time down for up to 20 meters, and the time is slowed to 85% of the original speed. This effect lasts for 1 post.
C-Rank: The next stage it appears as a blue eye with a pupil in the crude shape of a lightning bolt. At this stage, the user can slow down time up to 30 meters, and the time is slowed to 75% its normal speed. This effect lasts for 3 posts, or until the user turns off the Doujutsu (within those 3 posts).
B-Rank: The next stage the eye appears as a blue eye with yellow flecks with two black pupils, side by side. At this stage, the user can slow down time up to 40 meters, and the time is slowed to 50% its normal speed. This effect lasts for 5 posts, or until the user turns off the Doujutsu (within those 5 posts).
A-Rank: The next stage the eye appears as a blue eye with more yellow flecks with a half circle line with the open part facing up and two black pupils. at this stage, the user can slow down time up to 50 meters, and the time is slowed to 25% its normal speed. This effect lasts for 6 posts, or until the user turns off the Doujutsu (within those 6 posts).
S-Rank: At the last stage the eye appears as a half blue eye and a half yellow eye. The blue half is the outer half, while the yellow half is the inner half. There is a black line in between the yellow half and blue half, which connects to become a circle. In the middle is a black pupil in the shape of a lightning bolt. At this stage, the user can slow down time up to 50 meters, and can also slow down specific parts of the scene and keep the rest at normal time. The time is also slowed down to 15% its normal speed. This effect lasts for 8 posts, or until the user turns off the Doujutsu (within those 8 posts).
Chakra Cost:
D-Rank: 4 CP, no extra cost to keep the eye in use
C-Rank: 9 CP, 2 CP per post it's kept on
B-Rank: 13 CP, 4 CP per post to keep it on
A-Rank: 22 CP, 6 CP per post to keep it on
S-Rank: 36 CP, 10 CP per post to keep it on
- Spoiler:
Name: Torēsuchakura (Chakra Tracing)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Element: N/A
Description: The Doujutsu the Kiminahito clan possess eventually makes the user go blind, resulting in a useless eye. This can be avoided by allowing the user to see the chakra forces around him with the eye. This jutsu is like the Hyuuga's chakra tracing jutsu, except this jutsu can work in tandem with the Doujutsu's effect, allowing the user to still see the world at the slowed down pace. Great shinobi of the clan can even distinguish some images while using this jutsu, allowing them to "see" the world again. This jutsu will work for as long as the user wants, but the user has to be careful not to use it for so long with the Doujutsu, for they can both drain the user quickly of chakra.
Chakra Cost: 11 CP, 3 CP per post it is kept on
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Sasata
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| | Subject: Done Fri 02 Aug 2013, 6:44 am | |
| I finished the clan. Hope it goes well.  |
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Sasata
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| | Subject: Bump Sat 03 Aug 2013, 5:36 am | |
| | Bumping. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kiminahito Clan [done] Sat 03 Aug 2013, 9:04 am | |
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- Due to this affinity, Kiminahito clan members can learn Raiton jutsu one rank higher than their current rank allows, and have a 10% damage increase when using a Lightning jutsu.
The first part is a BIG no. The ranking system exists for a reason. Not about to let Genin run about tossing B-rank jutsu at their fellows. The 10% increase it out as well. We have an SC for that.
- Lightning Speed
Same as above. We have a Speed SC. General rule of thumb; do not create abilities that replicate SCs.
- Denkokikan (Lightning Time)
Right off the bat, Time Manipulation if Forbidden on Ultimate Shinobi. For that matter, slowing down the electrical impulses from your eye to your brain isn't going to slow time down. It's going to slow you down, because the brain can't process a damned thing until those impulses get through. So, you'd be seeing that fist flying towards your face about 5 minutes after it'd already knocked your teeth out.
For the above reasons, this clan is
Denied.
Locking. Will leave for 48 hours for the user to see and read, then will Archive. |
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