Endoskeletal Inversion Transformation: Dance of Lignum Vitae

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I know this is a pretty radical Jutsu. I am trying to figure out a way to go about getting this approved within the sites rules. I do know I will need admin approval to be able to make this, along with approval for when I want to train it when I am high enough ranked to do so.

I have tried to rationally think this one through and have taken into account the idea of balance. I feel that even though the out come of this jutsu will be great, I had to overly restrict it, make it hard to obtain, and penalize the user. Keep in mind that I feel the price for this dramatically burdens the user and would make for great character development of an S class ninja.

I will gladly accept any help to this from admin and staff, I know making this will be a long process. I would appreciate explained reason's why some things wouldn't work on this, and how I can make it more stable/balanced than it may be. I like when other minds review something like this and give hints on how this can be made and used with fairness within the rules of the site and the rules of development of a jutsu. I had an Idea in mind and wanted to pursue it without infringing on the rules or creating an unfair advantage against my piers.

Thank you for reading, and enjoy.

Name: Endoskeletal Inversion Transformation: Dance of Lignum Vitae
Rank: A
Type: Clan
Range: Self
Element: N/A
Description: Causes the Kagua clan member to "evolve" to a complete and permanent exoskeleton being. All Bones form on the surface of the body while muscles and ligaments reattach to the exoskeleton in a manner to where every joint operates with 360 degrees of full motion. Bodily functions and organs are exactly the same as before the transformation, however, the brain migrates to the chest next to heart. A layer of dense bone develop around the brain and heart to form a protective case around said organs with holes allowing normal functions of the heart and brain. The orifices open on the new body can be opened and shut at will. The user can move their body just as fast and accurate as normal once requirements for such are made. Due to now having and exoskeleton that's density can be controlled and sustained, muscles may be greatly increased and changed over time. These changes must have their own Jutsu that must be approved containing the details of the changes and how. An additional thread with at least 3 posts containing the changing process and adaptation to said major changes must be made. This new change or "form" will have it's own reason and personal pro's and cons. After the metamorphosis, the user must redo the "appearance" section of their Character Application. All Kaguya clan/weapon jutsu must be erased from the app, re-approved and re-learned/trained.

Pro's to this initial new form:

The Cons:

The new appearance (May stretch screen):

Chakra Cost: Reduces chakra points down to 5, must be able to spend at least 145cp
Price tag 50exp, topic trained with at least 3 posts, appearance change on app, 4 real life day activity post suspension, (Only social topics, no training, spar, or missions) a Recovery topic, deletion of all old Kaguya Clan Jutsu.

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Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Endoskeletal Inversion Transformation: Dance of Lignum Vitae
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Clan
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] Causes the Kagua clan member to "evolve" to a complete and permanent exoskeleton being. All Bones form on the surface of the body while muscles and ligaments reattach to the exoskeleton in a manner to where every joint operates with 360 degrees of full motion. Bodily functions and organs are exactly the same as before the transformation, however, the brain migrates to the chest next to heart. A layer of dense bone develop around the brain and heart to form a protective case around said organs with holes allowing normal functions of the heart and brain. The orifices open on the new body can be opened and shut at will. The user can move their body just as fast and accurate as normal once requirements for such are made. Due to now having and exoskeleton that's density can be controlled and sustained, muscles may be greatly increased and changed over time. These changes must have their own Jutsu that must be approved containing the details of the changes and how. An additional thread with at least 3 posts containing the changing process and adaptation to said major changes must be made. This new change or "form" will have it's own reason and personal pro's and cons. After the metamorphosis, the user must redo the "appearance" section of their Character Application. All Kaguya clan/weapon jutsu must be erased from the app, re-approved and re-learned/trained.

[spoiler=Pro's to this initial new form]
Due to the nature of being a Kaguya, the user may control the exoskeleton in various ways through means of making different types of jutsu to do so.

All joints of the body are able to move with a full 360 degree range of motion. Joints can only make one 360 degree rotation, nothing can rotate continually in one direction in the fashion of a drill.

All orifices may be shut and closed by will.
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[spoiler= The Cons]

Outer shell can be penetrated by weapons or jutsu that pierce of. The Armor is used more to be controlled rather than be protective and as such isn't meant to be used mainly for protective properties.

A Topic must be made after the transformation for recovery and minor adaptation, other wise the user can only use jutsu up to C rank and only be able to function at %50 speed and strength. The topic must be at least 2 posts long each with at least a 1000 word count describing how the user became accustom to the this new "form"

The user can feel a sense of temperature and pressure, however, these are weak. To be able to adapt and be able to have a normal sense of touch again, a topic must be made of how the user regained the same level of their old sense of touch. however, restrictions do apply. Due to not having any nerve endings grown into the bone as one would have with skin, the user will from now on, have a skewed perception of touch. The user can never enjoy the common pleasure of the sense of touch. This means the user will never really fell texture the same as we do, denying them the simple human things we take for granted i.e. never feeling the warm embrace of a lover.

The user cannot use standard Kaguya jutsu that involve use of an endoskeleton. However, the use may make new jutsu that are basically new forms of the old ones that must made, approved, and trained.

The use of this jutsu brings the user to near death, causing their chakra pool to descend to only 5cp and must be immobile for at least 4 real life days.

The user must be A ranked or higher, have admin approval, have medical as a sub or main and have the "Chakra control" SC to be able to preform this transformation. The user may never take a third element, control or contain a second KKG, control or gain a tailed beast, or ever be able to learn/use a limited Elemental jutsu. (i.e. Rasengan Chidori, and so on)

The user cannot undergo any surgery or take treatment from medical personnel lower than the user's own rank or who have not been trained to do so on this new body, it is too different from the normal human body. If a medical ninja of lower rank wishes to learn how to treat and take care of a being in this new form, they must have studied the new form of the Kaguya in a topic made just for that. Jutsu must be made to allow the medical ninja to preform especially on the Kaguys.

The user will be labeled by most of humanity as a monster and cannot go out into public without a scare unless the user has done something to overcome this and gain the people's trust. This can be done in various ways, one is to post a topic of a way the user reintegrated back into social life of their village. On the other hand, if it is not important to the user if people accept him, they may go about life as a monster and be shunned from society and live only as a killing machine with no one in the world that understands or accepts them other than those he has made strong bonds with.

Due to not having skin, the user does not have good body temperature maintenance. The user's body will tend to overheat after 3 post's of strenuous activity i.e. fighting. A jutsu must be made that cools the body off somehow or else the user will die after 5 posts of constant strenuous activity. If not, the user must cool down for 2 posts after every 3 posts of strenuous activity. leaving the user 50% weaker in speed and strength with a high body temperature.

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[spoiler=The new appearance (May stretch screen)]
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[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] Reduces chakra points down to 5, must be able to spend at least 145cp
[b]Price tag[/b] 50exp, topic trained with at least 3 posts, appearance change on app, 4 real life day activity post suspension, (Only social topics, no training, spar, or missions) a Recovery topic, deletion of all old Kaguya Clan Jutsu.

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