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Basic Information:

    Name: Kumori Harinezumi
    Secondary Title: The Black Hedgehog | Suna's Black Wind | Suna's Red Shadow
    Nickname Shadow
    Age: 16
    Gender: Male
    Physical Appearance:
    Harinezumi, Kumori [Suna Jounin] Human_Shadow
    Kumori has medium lengthened partially fiery red, gained from his father, partially raven black hair, gained from his mother, that is half spiked and half down. Kumori’s eyes hold an unusually deep hue of red in them, even without his Sharingan activated. The shirt Shadow wears would usually vary between days, but he would usually have black, fingerless gloves, a spiked kneepad and a necklace of his father's clan symbol. Kumori also wears a choker from time to time. He would usually let his leaf headband hang from his right back pocket. Kumori stands at about 5’8” and weighs around 157 lb.

    Most people, mostly adolescent females, say Kumori has that “pretty boy” face and attitude, along with a perfectly muscular body and nicely tanned skin. He also holds a book of various subjects in his right back pocket mostly just incase he gets bored. He also has an earing and two gauges on his left ear that he had received on a mission at one point in his life and it was a symbol of peace and friendship, though Shadow mainly agreed to get them because they looked cool.

    Personality:
    Kumori prefers to work alone and distances himself from essentially everyone, with few exceptions, given him the name “Shadow” to reflect his “dark” personality. Though soft-spoken and reserved, he never bluffs; if he makes a threat, he has every intention of carrying it out. Kumori views his half brother, Hayaku as his rival and equal in all aspects of his life, but still sees him as annoying and foolish as he can be.

    Kumori has a rivalry with Hayaku due to their animosity with each other in terms of how they view their own methods of justice and morality, but will work together despite certain problems they have with one another, and readily come to the others aid. Kumori is known to treat others in a very callous manner, and in combat, he displays a natural "killer instinct" that his brother lacks. Kumori sometimes displays an unusually rough manner of speech, often using light swear words such as “damn” and “hell” in reference to his failure or anger.

    Kumori is also the type of person to annoy rather easily because of his lone shark personality and his slight irritation with the level he gains from his training so his list of pet-peeves is quite long. Another interesting fact about Kumori is that he doesn’t believe in respect just from being a high rank. It’s not necessarily that he disrespects authority, it’s just that he has seen too many times (On his list of pet peeves) when people have just been given something and supposedly high ranking officers that seem not much stronger than he is, even though he’s a Gennin so he only gives respect to higher ranks if he’s been shown a reason to give respect.

    Kumori is also the quiet type, as stated before, but is somewhat different from most other quiet types. He’s actually the type of person who would never actually say a word unless absolutely necessary. Even when in battle, he has actually shown to stay completely quiet throughout the entire thing for he believes it not only wastes time but gives too much information. Fun fact: Another one of his pet peeves is when someone bothers to explain the entire aspect of their technique and end up losing a fight purely based on what he/she said.

    Thou his main goal in life is to be more powerful than his older brother, he is by no means a megalomaniac and is not a chaser of power, especially for something he did not earn, which is a reason that he barely even uses his Sharingan though it has been noted that he seems to have good control over it. He believes that this advantage wasn't earned and therefore has no right to be overused, though it doesn't stop him though from using it when he has to. Also, another one of his pet peeves is when anyone places him in the same group as an Uchiha, especially by calling him the name.

    Catch Phrase:
    "Call me an Uchiha one more time and I will [Insert physical threat here]."

    "Never Turn Back."


Clan Name: Uchiha
Clan Location: Konoha
Clan Traits:

The Uchiha have a number of traits which set them apart from the normal ninja. First off being that they all seem to have black hair. Also, every one in this clan has a main element of fire. They seem to be very proficient in the three basic jutsu arts of Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Taijutsu (This does not mean Uchiha characters can have three specialties), and are usually known as the elite brand of shinobi. Uchiha generally seem to work with their speed rather then raw brute strength and are very agile and quick.

* Must have Fire as main element and either Ninjutsu or Genjutsu as a specialty

Kekkei Genkai:

Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential.

The Uchiha clan member is not granted the Sharingan at birth; it is only activated later in life, typically during a time of emotional stress in the heat of battle. The Sharingan itself can be transferred to another non-Uchiha by a medical ninja, such as happened with Leaf ninja Uchiha Obito to his teammate Hatake Kakashi. Because his body was not born to carry the Sharingan, the eye is always activated and it burns Kakashi's chakra when used. To lessen the impact of the Sharingan on Kakashi's body, he normally keeps the eye hidden and out of use. Also of note, is the fact Kakashi, a non-Uchiha, was able to advance the Sharingan from two tomoe to three tomoe after gaining the eye.

The Sharingan itself contains three tomoe (comma). A higher mastery of the Sharingan can be seen in the creation of a new tomoe in the eye, with three tomoe being the typical highest form of the eye. The rare Mangekyou form is a unique evolution of the Sharingan beyond the three tomoe form, please see its entry for more information. An eye possessing two tomoe can allow the Uchiha clan member to track the movement of an opponent and do some minor copying of an opponents attack. For avoiding incoming attacks, the Uchiha's speed and agility will greatly control whether they can move to avoid it. However, three tomoe will greatly help in this area.

Two tomoe will also allow the ninja to pierce Genjutsu and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. It can also allow the member to pierce another’s body and see their chakra. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin.

An eye containing three tomoe will allow the ninja to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body. This prevents wasteful movement and allows the Uchiha clan member to conserve much needed chakra in battle. It allows them to synchronize their movement to strike at an area moments before their opponent is even in that spot, essentially allowing them to strike out and hit their opponent before they're even there.

Three tomoe also grants the Uchiha the ability to do Genjutsu and hypnosis after locking eyes with an enemy. This can be used to cause their opponent to do an attack of the Uchiha's choosing. This hypnosis can also be used as a Genjutsu counter, which is the ability to turn a Genjutsu spell back upon the original caster without the requirement of forming any handseals.

The Mangekyō Sharingan ( Literally meaning Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye) is a heightened form of Sharingan. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques. The Mangekyō Sharingan is distinguished from a normal Sharingan through its appearance, which changes the form of the tomoe seal. Unlike in the case of the Sharingan, the appearance of the Mangekyō Sharingan differs from user to user. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to several powerful techniques, and erodes the eyesight of its users, eventually causing blindness, which can be alleviated by obtaining another pair of Mangekyō Sharingan from a sibling. The new Sharingan is dubbed the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan. The techniques used by this eye vary from person to person and is limited to one technique per eye. It can be achieved by the killing of someone who is very close to the user as a display of being willing to sacrifice anything for power. This can not be fooled and be a fake friend. It must be a real and true strong connection so it takes a certain kind of individual to be able to get it. It can also be gotten by extremely brutal and long training, taking many many many years to obtain of constant hard work and dedication, though the person can not be aiming for it and it actually just happens at random. Even with the hardest work, it is possible for an Uchiha to never achieve this level of eye mastery.

Learned Secret Clan Jutsu:



Name: Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade
Type: Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Weaponry technique utilized by the Uchiha clan. Using the developed vision of the Sharingan eye, the clan member hurls three Windmill Shuriken which have wire attached. While in the air the clan member can manipulate wire to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them.

Name: Demonic Illusion - Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -
Description: A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent. This technique requires the user to have three tomoe in each eye to use it. This technique costs a A rank worths of chakra or twice the chakra cost of the technique it is reversing which ever is higher. It can not be used to reverse S Rank genjutsu

History:
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The Uchiha clan was descended from the elder of the two boys entrusted by the Sage of the Six Paths with the power and will of the way of the ninja. The elder believed that might would bring peace. The Sage chose the younger as more fitting to be his successor, causing the elder to be vengeful. From the younger boy descended the Senju clan who would be the eternal rivals of the Uchiha. Before the founding of the ninja villages, the Uchiha were one of the many mercenary clans for hire. Because of their Sharingan, the Uchiha clan came to be known as one of the two strongest clans, the second being the Senju clan. Madara Uchiha was particularly powerful, and, upon attaining the Mangekyō Sharingan, he took control of the clan. Under his leadership the Uchiha grew stronger, conquering whatever clans they came upon, such that, whenever the Uchiha clan was hired for a job, the opposing side would hire the Senju.

Hashirama Senju, the leader of the Senju clan, grew tired of the endless fighting, and approached the Uchiha clan with a peace treaty. Madara feared that an alliance would lead the Uchiha to ruin, but his clan disagreed, and he was forced to accept. The two clans came together to form Konoha, with Hashirama being selected as Hokage. Madara believed that this was proof that the Uchiha would be made subservient to the Senju, but his clan saw this only as his attempt to rekindle the flames of war. They turned their backs on him, and he defected. Following Madara's betrayal, the Second Hokage gave the Uchiha control of the Konoha Military Police Force as a sign of trust. According to Madara, this was really just a way of keeping the Uchiha in check and out of Konoha's governing affairs. Over the years, some Uchiha have figured out this motive's true meaning, and tried to rebel against the village as Madara did, but they found that it was too little, too late to make a difference, as the Senju had already completely suppressed the Uchiha. Eventually a revolt was attempted by a select few Uchiha members, but this was crushed quickly and they were thrown in jail or put to death based on their role in the uprising. The Uchiha who did not partake in it, were not held accountable and after that the relations between the Uchiha and the rest of the village grew stronger and trust was finally instilled.


Clan Details: Open

Rank Information:

    Rank: Jounin
    Village Affiliation: Sunagakure.


Special Information:

[list]Character Speciality:
Main: Genjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:

Main: Fire
Sub: Wind
Special Characteristics:
Photographic Memory
Kumori remembers everything he sees and hears with absolute clarity. To represent this extraordinary gift, the player controlling the character should take copious notes throughout play to represent his character's memory.

Time Sense
Kumori is never late. He possesses a preternatural sense of timing and knows the exact time down to a few seconds. Because punctuality and timeliness are intimately tied to professionalism in the Ninja mind, time sense is a much valued aptitude.

Dreamer
Kumori has a strange and uncontrollable oracular ability which manifests in dreams. This talent may be attributed to latent psychic abilities, a weird reaction to opiates, or another cause altogether. Whatever the case, from time to time, Kumori dreams of the near future, catching glimpses of events before they occur. These events always relate to the character or those closest to him. Kumori is only able to glean snippets from his dreams. These' visions are heavily symbolic and vague; the future is never spelled out.

Light Sleeper
Kumori is very light sleeper. Any noise at all will instantly awaken him to a state of full alert. He is no easier to sneak up on while asleep than he is when he is awake. His heightened senses are a result of being alone and in utter silence for a good majority of his life.

Resolve
Kumori has become accustomed to the horrors of the Ninja world and possesses a steely resolve. He has very little fears and tends to be rather emotionless when faced with imminent danger. Kumori may even become emotionless in simply casual situations, possibly causing a dent in his social life.

Excellent Liar Trait:
Kumori is extremely good at Lying, no one can read him even with the use of special mind probing jutsu or lie detectors. This unique trait is extremely useful. The only way to uproot a lie created is to prove it wrong; and even then Kumori may simply play the lie even more.

Lie Detector:
Kumori has an ability to read opponents, habits, quirks and other things will point the character out as a liar. This is useful in and out of battle, though it will sometimes drive men or women insane hearing their sweethearts lie to their faces.


Shadow
Kumori 's stealth is at an extraordinary level and is able to bypass many ninja that are not in tuned with their senses without alerting them as a result of his thinkly coated patient and his natural way of remaining calm and thinking things through in most situations.
Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:

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Ninjutsu
Name: Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.


Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: C
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade
Type: Ninjutsu/Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Uchiha clan. Using the developed vision of the Sharingan eye, the clan member hurls three Windmill Shuriken which have wire attached. While in the air the clan member can manipulate wire to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them.


Katon
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.


Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element : Fire
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Name: Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.


Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.

Name: Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete

Name: Dai Endan - Great Fireball
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. The ninja will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.

Name: Dai Karyuu Endan - Great Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Dai Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth. The difference between this jutsu and its proceeder, Karyuu Endan, is mainly in power and size.



Fuuton
Name: Fuyashi Chisoku (Enhanced Speed)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: Fuuton
Description: After performing the necessary hand sign, the user can enhance their speed by the given amount dependanton the chakra put into it in battle by decreasing air resistance around them and even sprint across or run up vertical surfaces by generating a wind current behind themselves to propel them along. After one post, jutsu will need a recharge of the same amount of chakra or it will cancel out.

C: 10% faster

B: 20% faster

A: 30% faster

S: 40% faster


Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Nagato will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.

Name: Dust Wind Technique
Type:Wind
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: The user creates a gust of wind that layers an area in loose sand and dust. Doing so also acts as a sandblaster on the surrounding area, causing the surface of trees to become like saw dust. This layer of debris makes it difficult for others to get a good footing. The initial gust can also temporarily blind opponents by lodging sand in their eyes.


Name: Renkuudan - Drilling Air Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Renkuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user inhales a large amount of air into his chest and then slams his fist into his chest to expel it. When expelled it forms concussive spherical projectiles capable of inflicting large damage.


Name: Senpuu Hashira no Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: This encircles the opponent with a spiral of wind, then the wind starts to rotate and is focused in rotating more and more fast. Once the opponent is imprisoned inside the spiral, the user can add projectiles, which will also encircle the opponent, effectively cutting them. That can make this jutsu deadly. This requires a fan, and will last one post.

Name: Kazekiri - Wind Cutter
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Kazekiri no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. To utilize this technique, the user will form the needed hand seal. A large slicing wind will then be created which can cut through his opponent. This can be used to immobilize large summons.

Name: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa - Infinite Dust Great Breakthrough
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Mugen Sajin Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user can inhale a large amount of air into the chest cavity. A ninja can then exhale the air in a large gust capable of turning back an incoming attack.

Name: Wind Release: Beast Wave Palm
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Description: A powerful jutsu that uses large amounts of wind nature chakra that can cut and slash through any material. The user activates it by summoning chakra in his right hand, and then swipes a slicing chakra wave which appears to be controlled by the user's will and thoughts.

Genjutsu
Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: -
Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.


Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: -
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.


Name: Double False Placement
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu places another illusion on top of a previous illusion created by the user. If and when the target dispels the first illusion, they will not realize that a second is in place.

Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.

Name: Hana Dizorubu
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This unnamed flower petal technique is a Genjutsu. If a ninja becomes trapped in a Genjutsu or wants to appear to be trapped they can disperse into a shower of flower petals. With this technique these petals will fly around and consume their targets, dissolving their bodies away.

Name: Hana Tonsou
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: This unnamed flower petal technique is a Genjutsu. If a ninja comes under attack, she can use this technique to cover her escape. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. These petals will confuse and distract an opponent while the user escapes or hides.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: This Genjutsu requires the Sharingan and eye contact to be activated. The illusion traps the victim in a dark empty space where their body is made of paper that burns from toe to head while the user is watching. The purpose of this jutsu is to use the target's vision of their new form to reduce their dexterity, making it harder for the victim to battle or perform hand seals.



Name: Demonic Illusion: Descending Hell Technique
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu causes the illusion of a tremendous ball of fire falling from the sky into a designated area. Anyone in the area will instinctively flee.

Name: Tatsumaki Genkaku - Tornado Illusion
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Description: One of the very few elemental Genjutsu, Tatsumaki Genkaku is a difficult technique to master despite its one handsign nature. Once the user forms a snake handsign, the target will feel as if a tornado is approaching and will instinctively brace him/herself by planting to the ground.


Name: Sheisho - Clean Copy
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: Combining both the copy & counter functions of the Sharingan as well as the Genjutsu aspects of it, the user will be able to make the illusion that he is copying a jutsu that he normally wouldn’t be able to copy, such as opposing specialties, different elements, jutsu of higher ranks than the user, even Kekkei Genkai.

Name: Kokuangyou no Jutsu - Journey into Black Darkness Technique
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element:N/A
Description: Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat.

Name: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu - Temple of Nirvana Technique
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place a large body of people into a unconscious state. The target can avoid the spell by forming and using the dispel skill.

Name: Magen • Kasegui no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Shackling Stakes
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: Magen • Kasegui no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. After activating their Sharingan, the clan member will look into the eyes of their target to bind them with a paralyzing illusion. This illusion takes the form of giant spikes which stake them in place and restrict their movement. A powerful enough ninja will be able to fight the bind to give themselves an opportunity to gain freedom.

Name: Kaosu Seishi - Chaos Control
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: After the activation of the Sharingan, this Genjutsu can only be activated if the target looks into the eyes of the user. Once placed in the illusion, the target's mindset will be momentarily stopped from shock, allowing the user to quickly maneuver in any direction for a short period of time, one post, without detection. In the target's eyes, it gives the illusion of teleportation.


Weaponry
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Element: -
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappelling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent.

Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Element:-
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Fuuma Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.


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Name: Shadow Shuriken
Quantity: x3
Rank: D
Appearance: Harinezumi, Kumori [Suna Jounin] ShadowShuriken

The Shadow Shuriken are two Windmill Shuriken tht are tied together via nin wire to give off the appearance of only one Shuriken. The Nin wire is set to break when the Windmill Shuriken are unfolded and are made for an easier way to pull off the Shadow Shuriken Technique without detection.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin: The Shadow Shuriken was made by Kumori Harinezumi upon learning the technique and had developed the plan to make these Shuriken to better deceive the enemy


Background Information

    History:
    Pre-Birth Arc


    Kumori’s internal family tree is as followed.
    Older half brother: Hayaku Harinezumi
    Mother: Ayako Uchiha and
    Father: Komodo Harinezumi.

    Several years before Kumori’s birth, Komodo Harinezumi was a researcher who had a child named Hayaku with a woman by the name of Miyumi Kushiki, but about a year after the birth of their child, Miyumi left them to pursue her dream of adventure. For several months, Komodo went heartbroken, feeling the pain of betrayal so he would always bury himself in his work while still trying to be a good single father.

    One day, Komodo was assigned to spend a few weeks with a kunoichi by the name of Ayako Uchiha to interview her and study the aspects of the Sharingan. At first, they had a deep distaste for each other, but soon they would learn to get used to one another. She would even help take care of Hayaku as if he were her own. Pretty soon afterwards, something sparked in between to two roommates and they fell in love with each other, got married and even had their own son, treating both him and Hayaku with the same amount of love.

    Childhood Arc

    Growing up, Kumori never once interacted with an actual Uchiha before due to his mother losing contact with the clan, but Ayako would always explain to him that he was still 100% Uchiha blood. Once Kumori was of age to start his training, he was taught by his mother the Uchiha ways of fighting and ninjutsu. Because of his unique Uchiha bloodline, Kumori was always told to train separately, but, even though they would always have constant disagreement, the half brothers would love to do almost everything together so they would both train with Kumori’s mother, even though Hayaku would always view her as just as much of a mother as Kumori just like she would view him just as much as her son. Due to this, Hayaku would develop the Uchiha style of fighting, the non Sharingan required at least.

    Academy Arc

    2 years after Hayaku enrolled, Kumori would be accepted into the Sunagakure Ninja Academy. So as to not cause him to gain any fame or to steal any attention away from his brother, Kumori kept the fact that he was an Uchiha descendant a secret, which was pretty easy considering that was only his mother’s maiden name. Even with his secret well hidden, Kumori was regarded as the most mentally atoned student in the academy as well as being the second in physical talent, the first being his older brother, which he would spend a lot of time, even though people would always confused him to be the older brother due to Hayaku’s immatureness.

    Kumori continued on with his Academy life for the remainder of the year, doing some of his own unique training without his older brother present, thinking of how much he wanted to just plain beat him already once they were full fledged ninja, or at least he was since Hayaku was already a ninja. He didn't really hang out with that many people but a few wanted to hang out with him. When suddenly, someone that had a parent that knew his mother from somewhere revealed that his mother was an Uchiha.

    Once it was revealed that Kumori to the students that Kumori was an Uchiha, he was praised among many. He was respected by the males of the school and loved by the females of the school. Though he was told that he could graduate from then on for his genius mind and heritage , Kumori wanted to graduate just like everyone else so he went on with his full four years in the Ninja Academy and graduated at the top of his class.

    Gennin Arc

    Once he reached Gennin level, Kumori would continue to train to his near limit and back while completing the petty missions that were given to newly ranked Gennin. Due to the unimportance and lack of effort it would take to complete those missions, Kumori would have a lot of free time to train with his mother and half-brother. Kumori would go on with his hard work and well known determination in an attempt to go about reaching to where his expectations lay, which was very high compared to what most people would wish to believe. Kumori didn’t have time to formulate the respective Gennin team so he wasn’t really able to utilize teamwork until a later date.

    Once he had finally finished a good amount of those pointless missions, Kumori now had the experience needed to be known as a C Rank instead of a part of the new breed D rank, enabling him to go on missions that were intended to be at least mildly dangerous. Kumori continued on with his missions, some more successful than some others, but all in all, he kept himself going on and trying his best to keep himself in tip top shape, though he was continuously upset over not being able to reach his peak.

    Though he was never officially given a Gennin team, Kumori did team up with members of the village on occasion if there was such a situation where a teammate couldn’t make it or for the sheer fact that he was just randomly thrown with in certain teams with a group of Gennin he barely knew as well as a Jounin to learn from every other day. Thanks to this, Kumori at least had an intermediate knowledge of a good amount of villagers. The down side to that however was that Kumori never really did learn the true meaning of “Teamwork” and would never learn to bond with anyone or had any true friends.

    Though Shadow was a bit of a loner and seldom ever spoke to anyone, he wasn’t too hard to work with not necessarily because of his skill but because of his willingness to complete whatever objective that he is faced with and would strive to allow no one to slow him or themselves down, inspiring some and even being inspired as well quite often by his own teammates, though it was always only temporary for obvious reasons.

    Chuunin Exams

    Within about half a year after becoming a Gennin for the Sand Village, Shadow was recommended by an anonymous shinobi to participate in the Universal Chuunin Exams. Some saw this as an opportunity to prove themselves, some saw this as an opportunity to truly find out what their worth, some found this as an opportunity to explore the other cultures and customs of other villages, hell, some saw this as an opportunity to meet girls from other countries, but Kumori just viewed this as another way of going the distance and basically played it out as just another mission that involved competition.

    Once he had found himself within the clutches of the Chuunin Exams, Kumori would soon enough hear a rumor about the basic layout of the Exams. Apparently, it was going to be set-up in a three layer tests. The first test would consist of ways that will test your cunningness and intelligence, the second would test your survival skills and the third was unknown but was rumored to be the true way to separate the Chuunin from the Gennin. Kumori’s confidence wasn’t boosted nor was it shaken by this, he just continued to shake it off and treat it like any regular mission he would be placed in.

    Despite the rumors that the first part of the exams would be mentally tormenting and the despite the fact that they were actually true, Kumori really didn’t have too much of a problem with this part mainly due to his knowledge of many books that both involved shinobi texted based facts that would help him in the “basic” knowledge and the interesting literature based on psychology, which was his ultimate partner in this uphill battle because it helped him immensely keep his state of mind and would keep him from having a mental break-down like the test was designed to do.

    Next up was the second test, aka the test of survival. Unfortunately though for the young ninja, during the course of this hard fought exam, he had actually grown rather ill. Of course, it wasn’t enough to kill him but if he was going to be able to survive in the midst of power and recognition hungry shinobi, then he was going to have to be at 100% but without medical knowledge or even support from any teammates, Kumori was running out of options. But alas, luck was with him for he was met up with one of his temporary teammates and though they knew it was a contest, Kumori was given advice on how to treat his illness and was able to complete the exam because of it.

    Next on the list of exams that may make or break the striving Gennin was the challenge of competition. This wasn’t really in Kumori’s strong suit due to the fact that he hated interacting too much with people he didn’t know. Once he was placed into a match, Kumori simply showed off his best stuff and did what he could to get the job done, allowing him to soon wield the rank of Chuunin once he eventually got home.

    Chuunin Arc

    Once word of his new status reached his family, they all decided to throw Kumori a celebration, much to the rookie Chuunin’s remorse, but nevertheless, they all went out to eat that night. During the dinner, Kumori’s mother called him in for a private conversation. Once they were all alone, Ayako went on to place a finger on his forehead and Kumori suddenly had his First Tomoe Sharingan opened, that he had secretly unlocked during the exams.

    Ayako silently congratulated her son on his accomplishment and growing expoditions on his new achievements and agreed to keep it a secret from his family as a means to see just how far he could go with it on his own. Ayame simply gave him some advice on how to maintain it before they were starting to grow rather late for their dinner and went off to eat with their family. For the first time in his life though, Kumori actually felt happy and was smiling and laughing for a majority of the time there, feeling just what it felt like to have people important to you right there when you needed them..

    After the celebration, the 13 year old Sunagakure Chuunin started his illustrious career, which had basically the same lay-out as when he was a Gennin, but with a lot more excitement and meaning to it. Kumori actually knew what it felt like to have an exciting time as a ninja and was starting to fail out on his callous manner of ways and started to become more social. It really did seem like Kumori was very happy with his career and more importantly, his life. He was finally a positive person.

    Resolve

    But alas, nothing would ever last forever and that also included Kumori’s new positive outlook on life in itself. The reason for this started when he had gotten a mission of escorting a bunch of little children as a means of helping them find their parents for they all got separated thanks to a disastrous storm. During the mission, Kumori quickly grew a bond between himself and the poor children while making them smile quite often. The next thing he knew though, a child was missing amongst them and he started to go search for him.

    Soon, he saw the boy in the forest laying died, knowing that something was up, Kumori quickly went back to the children only to find them dead as well in a field of corpses. He was then ambushed and told of plans to invade the original country these kids were from. He was confident in this for he had Kumori in an illusion, but without his knowledge. Of course, that was before Kumori’s vision suddenly became clearer and the chakra flow became obviously screwed up, revealing that he was within an illusion.

    Quickly dispelling it, the ‘children’ were revealed to be ninja from another country that were looking to seek information on Sunagakure by deceiving him. Though they did actually get the info that they needed, the ninja never actually sent the info anywhere so all Kumori had to do was dispose of them and then sweep this off like a bad hang-over, which, with just a bit of trouble, he was able to do. He was also able to retrieve and rescue the real children and personally found each of their parents for them.

    Rookie Jounin

    Given the nature of the mission change, Kumori had actually syccesfully completed two missions, one was the B Rank mission of the rescue of the children, the next was the other B Rank mission of successfully finding their parents on his own and the next was an A Rank, which consisted of disposing of the villages threat and thanks to that, was given a chance to rank up to Jounin at the age of 14. Kumori has taken a few weeks off before getting his official rank in order to train up with his new achievements before officially being accepted as a Jounin of Sunagakure.


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Uchiha is closed, there are no further village spots that will accept them.
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That's rather confusing seeing as I was told that Suna had the last spot and it's stated that it's open Neutral

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Hm, true enough, I was misinformed. Its fine.
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So is it ready to be checked?

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Well, for starters, you can't have the Sharingan to start with as Genin. You need to earn it in-character through some kind of traumatic event.

Physical Appearance needs to be 2 full paragraphs minimum.

'Fuyashi Chisoku (Enhanced Speed)'
- If you would need to apply more chakra after each post, you'd need to repeat handseals as well, which makes this technique kind of useless, eh? And also, what's keeping the wind under your feet?
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Actually, I'm going to scrap the character, just got an idea recently.
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I see no problems with this application. Approved.
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Removed from approved applications for update to Suna Jounin.
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The jutsu all need to be bolded and some of your special characteristic need more details.
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Bolded

It might help if you told me exactly which one(s) needed more detail lol
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The ones under three lines of details.
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Well, edited then.
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