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Rosuto
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| Subject: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Sat 17 Aug 2013, 10:22 pm | |
| Kaguya, RosutoTHE INFO. Name: Kaguya, Rosuto Nickname: N/A Age: 13 Gender: Male Appearance: Rosuto doesn't resemble the average Kaguya due to taking the appearance of his father whom is from Kumogakure. He is a 6 foot even, 120 lbs, lightly tanned, caramel skin, male teenager that has a tall and slender frame as he stands much taller than most others his age with an already slightly impressive muscle build with firm tone in his upper body [arms, shoulders, chest, and abdomen]. He also has long, shoulder length, shaggy white hair with the tips of each dyed an ever fading, green that completely covers his Kaguya clan markings on his forehead from sight and matches with his green eyes. He has sharp white fang-like teeth that resembles a shark more soo than a canine. He has 2 piercings in his left ear, both in the bottom lobe and are gauges [one just slightly higher up being a size 10 and the one placed a little lower under that one being a size 6]. He currently has a crescent moon tattoo on his left shoulder, but over time plans on getting plenty more to accompany it.
Rosuto's day to day clothes that he wears casually and during light training consists of a long, light weight, white robe with navy blue trim along the edges that reaches down to his knees. It is tied at the waistline with a matching navy blue robe to keep closed when he doesn't want to reveal his somewhat muscular build as he doesn't wear a shirt underneath. He wears black cargo pants that hang loosely at his waist and kept up by a black, cloth belt. The pants legs are rolled up to the lower of his knee where one would notice he wears a pair of long white socks and wooden sandals.
He also has an alternate clothing outfit he wears on missions and more intense training that consists of a black, water resistant jacket with a hood that, when is being worn, covers his entire face except for his mouth. The jacket is zipped up either completely or halfway to reveal a tightly fitted, black muscle shirt and many bandages wrapped around various parts of his upper body [biceps/triceps, elbows, forearms, hands, and abdomen area] underneath the shirt which are also seen, but only if the jacket is removed. The muscle shirt is long enough that it has to be tucked inside his regular fit, black cargo pants that are kept up by a black, cloth belt with a metal buckle. The pants legs are rolled completely down to cover his long black socks and tucked into his black combat boots.
In either case, he keeps a Katana on his waistline on his left side, a metal Spear that he keeps on his back, his altered Hunter Nin mask that is either on his face or on top of his head, and his Shuriken Kit kept on his waistline on his right side, containing all of the basic Shinobi supplies he feels he needs; shurikens and smoke pellets.
Forehead Protector: Loosely around his neck
Personality: Rosuto is a fairly assertive person as he tends to be laid back and cool for the most part. He acts independently of others and perfers to work on his own as he feels no one shares his thoughts and ideas on life, so he tends to also keep quiet alot. He feels that he is so loyal to Kirigakure that he would put its best interest before his own. With such a strong passion for the village, he had to develop a high tolerance towards other people's actions and their behaviors because some of the shinobi Kirigakure produces can be quite the handful. On top of that he is quite resilient in his outlook on life as he thinks that everything he does is for the better.
When he is around his Elders and Higher Ups or Commanding Officers, he shows them great respect and admires everything they've done because they wouldn't be in the positions they were in if they hadn't done what they had to do. Therefore no matter what is asked of him, he obeys all his orders without any questions or hesitation. As a loyal shinobi of Kirigakure, he feels obligated to help the Village as its the least he can do. With such a sense of duty, its only right that Rosuto tries to be as considerate as he can be towards the other villagers and his peers as they shouldn't hurt each other intentionally even though it is the "Bloody Mist" and everything in his life had been nothing but hurt. He also tries to be as helpful around the village (such as odd jobs) and generous as well, giving away extra spoils from a mission.
However there is one group of people that tend to bring out an entirely different side to Rosuto that most others never see, his enemies. He feels as if you are classified as an enemy then you are to be punished and that is the end of it. Whether he has to be cruel and cause pain and suffering deeper than the physical aspects or go and return harm to someone for their previous actions towards him and his village, whoever manages to get on his bad side has truly put an end to their life for he won't quit until he finds them and handles them accordingly. The sad part is that sometimes he doesn't have a reason and out of simple, petty desires to hurt someone, will go out his way to harm them.
Clan: Kaguya Nindō: "I'm going to become a Swordsman. The greatest swordsman that Kirigakure has ever seen. Better yet. . . that the Ninja World has ever seen."
THE NINJA. Origin: Mizo no Kuni Affiliation: Kirigakure Rank: C Rank Specialities: Main: Weaponry [Kenjutsu] Main: Close Range Sub: Mid Range Secondary: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities: Main: Suiton [Water] Secondary: Raiton [Lightning] Combat Style: Rosuto is the kind of shinobi that tends to think before acting [most of the time unless he undergoes a wave of emotion, then he just goes berserk in hopes to kill] and has come to realize his strengths and weakness in battle. That has led the young shinobi to take a different approach to fighting, forming two different types of fighting:
His main style of fighting that he uses compliments his dreams of one day becoming a Legendary Swordman. Rosuto prefers his battles to be head on, one-on-one, and close range. He believes that as a Swordsman, he should be able to defeat his opponents with his sword alone. With that idea, he mainly uses his Katana in various sword attacks [motions such as strikes, slashes, stabbing, etc.] and he spends most of his time training extensively in Kenjutsu, but he knows that, regardless of the training, its not enough. Therefore he tends to incorporates a great deal of hand-to-hand fighting [consisting mainly of punches and few to little kicks] as well when the sword seems to fail. Even though he doesn't train in Taijutsu specifically, he does train techniques in his Kaguya clan's bloodline, Shikotsumyaku. The Kekkei Genkai that allows users to manipulate bones throughout the body and perform various attacks that require speed, agility, and dexterity, all of which are traits that only capitalize on his close range fighting abilities. With that, he can create more swords and use them accordingly.
His secondary style of fighting tends to lean more towards Shinobi ideals and is only used when circumstances arise where he needs a little more than swords and hand-to-hand. As a Shinobi, especially one hailing from Kirigakure, failure is not an option and one is required to do everything in their power to make sure they don't. With that in mind, Rosuto is fairly trained in Ninjutsu [though not using it as often] and specializes in Kirigakure's secret techniques. Those techniques are mainly Suiton based and he uses them only in attempt to gain the upperhand before returning to his previous style. Also, seeing that he does have Kumogakure blood in his veins, he does have the capabilities of using some Raiton based Ninjutsu, but he only uses those as a final last resort as he feels that using it is a disgrace to the Mist Village. All together, Rosuto skills along with his determination to not fail makes him a worthy adversary to his opponents as his.
Special Characteristics: Physical Based:
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Name: Improved Strength Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of strength accessible to those who have undergone intensive training in increasing their raw power. The possessor of this talent has an increased strength of 20% which makes them slightly stronger. They can lift larger objects such as large rocks and toss them considerable distances. They can also now naturally deliver more powerful physical blows that can cause agonizing damage to targets. Chakra Based:
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N/A Mental Based:
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N/A Misc. Based:
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THE BACKGROUND. History: The Beginning:
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Rosuto Kaguya was born in the Hidden Mist to a small family consisting of only his mother [Akane Kaguya] and her husband [Yue Tsukino]. The shinobis had a strenuous relationship before his birth as his mother always suspected his father of cheating. Her reasoning was that his father would always go out on missions for long periods of time and one of the kunochi in his team had a "thing" for him and so did he for her. Amaya would never confront Yue for the fact that she loved him too much and felt that she would rather be hurt with him than without. Well that mindset she kept for years until she came home from a mission early and seen Yue and the other woman in their bed. She was heartbroken and in a fit of rage tried to kill the other woman, but she managed to escape. Yue managed to calm her down with his charm and whispering sweet nothings as he swore that he only cared for her and that Hana [the other woman] meant nothing to him. Akane would let the words keep her calm, but deep down she knew that her husband would continue to do her wrong.
Soon after that, Akane was sent on another mission to hunt down and kill a shinobi from the Kumogakure. For what reason she was never told, but it was clear the man had to die for the better sake of the village and since she had alot of built up anger, she was the best for the job. When she departed the village, she knew that Yue would cheat on her again, but she vowed to not let that interefere with her mission. After days of hunting down the man, she finally found him and was going to kill him until he did something that none of her shinobi experience prepared her for. He told her that he would be just fine with dying at her hand as she was the most beautiful kunochi he had ever laid his eyes on. At first she started to attack him, but it was clear he wasn't going to try to stop her. Akane stared the man over and (using her sensory abilities and her own opinion) decided he was alot better of a person than her husband and decided to not kill him. Instead she was overrun with emotions that she hadn't felt in such a long time that for once, she cheated on Yue. When it was time to go back to the village, she took the man's headband as proof she "killed" him and returned home.
9 months later, Akane was in the hospital delievering a child. Yue was estatic that this was going to be his first child, but when Rosuto was born, something wasn't right. He had his mother's white hair but his skin tone was darker than either of the two and his eyes were light blue. Yue became enraged at the thought that his wife had been cheating and he wanted to know who the real father was. After weeks of looking around the village, it was clear whoever it was wasn't from the village and this led him to tell the Mizukage that Akane had failed her mission and didn't kill the man but instead slept with him. Hearing this enraged the Mizukage as well and sent for Akane to be killed, but she already knew that this would happen. She had already put Rosuto in a little basket with a note and left him in a back alley before skipping out the town to go be with her Kumogakure lover. Yue and the other shinobi searched endlessly for the woman and did find her with her lover on the way to Kumogakure and a fight broke out. By the time the fight was over Yue, Akane, and a few ANBU members were dead and the one that survived was her lover who continued back on his way to his home village.
A few hours after leaving the baby behind, an old man that was walking home found the basket and read the note inside. It stated that whoever found this child needed to raise it as their own and never tell him that his parents left him. Thinking hard on it, the old man decided that he would take the kid home to live with him. This is how the story of the "Orphan of the Mist" begins.
The Kid Starts School:
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Some years passed by and the incident concerning Akane and Yue had died down as it was kept on a need to know basis among the higher ups. The child that was involved was presumed dead, but in all actuality, Rosuto [now 7 1/2 yrs old] was alive and well. The old man [Tatsuo] that saved him on that night had raised the young boy as if he were his own. He taught him values such as respect and loyalty and even taught him the basics on swords and how to make them as he himself was a retired blacksmith. His work during his glory days consisted of creating fine swords for magnificent shinobis and each weapon was a work of fine art. As Rosuto grew up, instead of getting bedtime stories, the old man told him about the legendary Seven Swordsmen of the Mist and the legendary blades that they each wielded. The young boy's favorite blade was Nuibaru and he would often dream about one day becoming a swordsman just so he could obtain the blade and use it. Tatsuo would find enjoyment in the his wild ambitions but his enjoyment would only grow as he would watch as the young boy began practicing making swords and then training with them. He would watch as with every sword he made his technique became better and with every time he trained his sword handling skills improved. It would only be a matter of time before the boy could handle a blade as well as a typical shinobi.
By the time Rosuto turned 9, he felt as if he had Kenjutsu down enough to hold his own against an opponent with his handmade Wakizashi and to test his theory out Tatsuo agreed to spar with him. Now it was clear that Tatsuo was a sword master himself and taught Rosuto everything that he currently knew, but he decided to go easy on the boy. Swing for swing the two went at it back and forth going on the attack and then going right back on the defensive until the boy began feeling tired. Sweating like crazy and looking as if he was going to pass out, Tatsuo decided it was time for them to stop, but Rosuto refused and asked how could he become the best swordsman if he simply quit? How could he join the Seven Swordsmen if he was only going to tire out and give up? This put a smile on the elderly man's face as he seen the boy start running at him once again delievering another set of impressive swings of his sword. The man continued to duck and dodge the attacks until he found an opening and delievered a pretty decent strike with the hilt of his cane to Rosuto chest knocking him out for the count. He went to pick him up and put him on his shoulder as he knew that the day would come soon enough for the kid to get his chance at becoming the best he could be. A few weeks after the intense spar between student and teacher, Tatsuo decided it would be best if he enrolled Rosuto into Kirigakure's Ninja Academy. At first the young boy was a little scared since he had never really left the house let alone be away from the old man.
Rosuto wasn't too sure how to feel as he seen all the different kids enter into the class. Some were short, some were tall, some were skinny, some were fat, but for the most part the entire class was lighter than himself and came in with their parents. This was a little odd to him and kind of struck home with him. All of the students had both their mother and father with them and all he had was an old man that he called his grampa. What was at first sadness in his heart turned to spite as he had started feeling as if the entire class was beneath him. As he continued to think to himself, the sensei came in a Chuunin named Daisuke. He looked quite tough and very intimidating as he had a scar that covered the entire left side of his face. The man began speaking on what was expected of them and that began the first day of class. Everyday afterwards was nothing but hardwork and intense training preparing the students for the life of a shinobi and everything that was expected of a Kirigakure shinobi.
A few months had passed since the Academy started and it was clear that it wasn't for everybody. Students were dropping out left and right because of how tough the courses were, but for the ones that were still in the program, they were showing great improvements. Rosuto's Kenjutsu skills only got more impressive as he began to do more than just random swings but use more precision and deliever more power in his strikes. He also began to show skill in Ninjutsu as he had started training for his Suiton chakra element as what most Kirigakure shinobi posessed. The first two jutsus he learned for his element were the basic techniques that Kirigakure was known for; Mist Clone technique and the Hidden Mist technique. He felt like he was getting closer to his dreams of becoming a Swordsman with the training he was recieving both from the Academy and at home with Tatsuo. During the days, he worked nonstop training his Suiton techniques while sparring with his classmates showing them his strength with a sword, more specifically his Wakizashi. During the nights, he trained even harder with his sword trying to develop better stances and fighting styles to utilize his greatest potential. The old man couldn't believe the progress the young boy was making at such a young age and was proud of the kid. He decided that since it was getting closer to his graduation that he would do something special for the boy as he knew something about the young boy that would indeed help him achieve his goals.
Something Special Alright:
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The week before graduation, Tatsuo took Rosuto to the outskirts of the village for a special kind of training. He knew that Rosuto was a Kaguya and therefore in his blood he had the physical prowess that would help him become even better than he could've possibly thought. The two began to spar as usual the only exception being they couldn't use their swords or any kind of technique. Basically it was hand-to-hand combat and the boy wasn't too sure why they would do something like that if he wanted to be a swordsman seeing to be that you needed a sword and not fists. The old man explained to him that there will be times that he wouldn't be able to use his sword and therefore he needed to use hand to hand combat. Feeling that Tatsuo knew what he was talking about, Rosuto didn't argue and the fighting began. As usual the boy thought he'd have the upper hand because of his age, but once again he was wrong. For an old man, Tatsuo was quite strong and delievered strong punches that would send him skidding back everytime a hit landed. To his surprise every punch felt harder and harder and he began to realize that the old man wasn't planning on going easy this go around.
The fight dragged on and Rosuto grew tired and began aching as he wasn't too sure how much more he could endure. It got to the point where he was kneeled down on the ground and he could barely look up to see the old man running at him. Tatsuo yelled to him to brace himself and right as he was going to land the finishing punch something unpredicatable happened. Rosuto had closed his eyes and winced under the pain as his entire body began to hurt but the pain wasn't what he expected from a simple punch. He opened his eyes and realized that his entire body was covered in bones protruding from his skin somewhat like a porcupine. The old man was standing back holding his hand that was bleeding but had a smile on his face. The reason being was he knew that if he beat the boy enough that he'd eventually tap into his inner strength and Kaguya blood. . . or die. Luckily his hypothesis was right and young boy discovered his ability. However the reaction wasn't the same for Rosuto as he was freaking out as he had no idea what had happened. Tatsuo went on to explain to him that they would work on it over time but in the meanwhile it was good to know that he carried on a bloodline that most thought was extinct. The kid nodded as he figured the old man did always have his reasons for doing things and after he calmed down, the bones retracted back into his body. The two decided that was enough training for one day and began there journey home.
Graduation from Student to Genin:
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The day of graduation had finally arrived and it was quite a grand day for the remaining students and their parents for what had started out as a class of 30 was now only 12. The village had once been known as the "Bloody Mist" because of the brutal way of how graduation was held but nowadays it was held with spars. Everyone would pass since they made it as far as they did, but it would help classify the Academy Students into their respective Genin teams. This did not matter to young Rosuto as he felt that he would not only win his sparring matches, but also prove to the spectators that he was the greatest the Academy had to offer. The instructor, Daisuke, spoke a little before the matches began as he said how proud he was of all the remaining students for their hard work and how he was glad to have them all. He talked a little more about some irrelevant things that the kids had no concern for and then he finally announced that the matches would begin and just like that everyone cheered.
Matches started and the young shinobi fought each other with the various techniques they learned. It was an impressive group of students as they all offered something different. Ninjutsu that Chuunin would use, Taijutsu that left holes in walls and craters in the floors, Genjutsu that ruined some kids heads, even a few others using their Puppetry and Medical skills were showing great skill. It was an amazing site that so many young ninjas were capable of such great feats and they all reigned from Kirigakure. Well as impressed as everyone else was with the matches, Rosuto acted as if he didn't care. He was ready to get his fight in so he could reveal his Kenjutsu skills that no one else in the Academy could compare to. Then the time came and his name was called. The moment he was waiting for. He rushed to the stage where he fought against some random kid that he didn't really pay attention to in class. Needless to say the fight was over fairly quickly since the other kid was only mediocre in Taijutsu and was in no way capable of holding his own against Rosuto. His fight was the last fight and after everyone's wounds were tended to, the actual graduation of handing out headbands began. The Kirigakure headband that all Kirigakure shinobi wore was a great honor to have and Rosuto was so happy he managed to become one. Just turning 11 a few days afterwards, he was a Genin but didn't even smile as he recieved his headband and tied it around his neck.
Graduation Aftermath:
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Months after passing the Genin Exam, Rosuto was still working hard at his training. He would start during the early mornings before the sun rised and continue on until the skies were pitch dark with only the moon providing his lighting. All he did was train and push himself to be even better. How could he rest from training when there was so much more for him to accomplish, especially with his newfound Kaguya abilities. Those abilities along with his kenjutsu would provide him the tools he needed to achieve his potential greatness. However, his grampa began to fear for the young boy. Often he would wonder how could one child be so driven to constantly train and work instead of enjoying his youth and making friends. Tatsuo suggested plenty of times for the boy to go out and make friends and even went as far as kicking him out the house so he had no choice, but that didn't stop him from training. Rosuto would still go find a secluded area away from people to hone his skills. He felt as he finished every training session that he grew closer to perfecting his fighting style.
One day during early spring, Tatsuo sent Rosuto on a simple trip to the store to buy some groceries which was nothing new for the boy. A simple trip that he would make often and he would use as his time to think of new ways to train. Well the old man decided to "interfere" somewhat by asking a friend of his to cross the boy's path. His friend knew the young boy for some time and thought that it would be nice if he had some kind of interaction with someone other than the Tatsuo and his training equipment. So as Rosuto exited the market, a younger lady [mid twenties] bumped into him causing him to drop a bag. Being the respectful kid he was, he apologized and began to pick up his groceries. The lady bent over and started helping him and tried starting a conversation with him. Not so much to her surprise, he didn't say too much and hurridly grabbed his things. He bid the woman good day and goodbye and continued on his way. By the time he got back home, the woman and Tatsuo were talking and laughing. Something he had only seen the old man do a few times prior. The old man introduced the two to each other properly as Rosuto earlier was in so much of a rush to even get her name. Reina. She owned a tattoo shop not too far away and had been good friends with the old man for quite some time. She explained to Rosuto that whenever he wanted to do something besides train and make swords that she was always looking for somebody to talk to. The young boy however was too shy and quiet to even think about going to see her, but sure enough one day he did. Ever since the first time, he started realizing that there is more than just fighting and training and he developed a sense of life and enjoying himself. Tatsuo began to see a bit more "life" in the boy besides the constant hardwork and bruising of his day to day regime.
Honestly he could say Rosuto never showed his happiness and it would be the first time he did see it once he, Reina, and the old man sat around and ate his favorite meal; ramen noodles with chicken. It was then that for the first time in his life, Rosuto truly thanked the old man for everything that he had done for him from teaching his about swords to helping him achieve his dreams to becoming more social. The unknowing orphan of the Mist had finally felt a sense happiness of family with his grampa, Tatsuo and aunt, Reina.
Roleplay Sample: [Its been awhile so bear with me on this okay]
The sun was setting and the night began to cover over the already heavy mist that surrounded the village. Most of the villagers by this time where making their way home and getting ready for bed, but in the midst of the forest near the outskirts of the village was a Genin that had no plans of resting any time soon despite the conditions. In a small clearing surrounded with dense trees and thick mist, one could spot out a young boy wearing all black delievering numerous punches to a tree then flipping backwards and then running back at it to deliever some kicks. The physical attacks continued onto the tree until the boy flipped back one final time and unsheathed a katana at his side. Holding it above his head, the boy wielding the long sword began performing various slashes and slices through the mist. The blade's swift movement upward and downward then directed side to side moving gracefully as could be mimiced as if it were cutting through an enemy. The kid quickly approached the tree once more and began delievering powerful cuts to the base. After seven maybe even eight well aimed and strong cuts, the tree began to chip and so the assault continued. Around the fifteenth possibly twentieth strike, as he had lost count, the blade got stuck in the thick trunk as the boy tried a piercing thrust. He attempted to wiggle it out, but since it was clear it wasn't making that effort, the boy rolled backwards as if to dodge an attack. Rolling up to his feet and holding his hands as if they were guns, the boy aimed his index fingers at the weakest part of the tree that he had worn down and whispered; "Teshi Sendan Drilling Finger Bullets"
In that moment the bones in the tip of his fingers hardened and pushed through his skin fairly quickly and shot off into the tree where he was aiming at. Soon after the first bullet was fired out of his right hand, another one quickly followed behind it shot off from the left hand. Three rounds were shot off after that with such precision that the boy could see a hole in the middle of the tree where he had been attacking it all night long. Running at the tree with decent speed, the boy jumped in midair as he clenched his fist tight and then followed through with a punch to the weakened area of the tree, directly on the hole. A loud cracking sound was made upon contact and the tree split as the upper half fell backwards disconnecting it from the base. The boy began grinning revealing his white, fang-like teeth in the moonlight as he made his way to his katana and tugged on it until he managed to pull it out the tree. He sheathed it back at his waist as he took a seat on the trunk and looked up to the sky.
"The moon is full tonight. . . That's good"
The boy's light blue eyes glistened along with a slight reflection coming from the Kirigakure headband hanging from his neck. He was tired from his day long training as he sat there and stared at the moon so high above, but he wouldn't admit it. Instead he began to think about his dreams his goals. How he wanted to be a swordsman unlike any other before him. How he wanted the respect of not only his village but the entire Ninja World. Oh how so many would laugh at him and his dreams, but he didn't care what they thought. They just didn't know that Rosuto Kaguya of Kirigakure was going to become the greatest and his name was going to go down in history. He closed his eyes as he exhaled deeply before putting his hands on his knees, prepping himself to stand up.
"Well it is getting late and I know Gramps is probably missing me right about now"
Standing to his feet, Rosuto tilted his head up to the moon once more before slowly making his way back to the village gates.
THE ARSENAL. Jutsus Basic:
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Kirigakure Specific
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Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m) Element: - Village: Kirigakure Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. After forming the needed hand seal, the user will place their hand over their head and cause a large amount of mist to gather. This mist is extremely difficult to see through from someone not of Kirigakure, who are used to looking through heavy mists, and are more able to do combat while within said mist. The jutsu involves kneading chakra into the mist, allowing the user to create extremely thick or thin levels of mist. Those with doujutsu or chakra sensing techniques are also able to see through this thick mist but without any aid, then you'll be blind within the mist. A C-Rank Fuuton Jutsu can dispel the mists. Chakra Cost: 4 (2CP)
Name: Ninpou; Kiri Bunshin - Mist Clone Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m~10m), Far (10m+) Village: Kirigakure Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. A variant of the water clone jutsu, the user will complete the needed hand seals in order to create up to five mist clones. These clones are, although technically solid, unable to attack or defend, or use jutsu. Should the clone come into contact with someone's attack, or try and attack themselves, they will simply disrupt into mist and then gradually reform. Any weapon attacks thrown by the mist clones will, although appearing real, only disperse into mist upon contact with their target; posing no physical threat. However, because they constantly reform, they are near impossible to get rid of, and offer a constant confusion factor. Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Ninpou; Hansha no Suiton - Reflection Of Water Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Village: Kirigakure Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. After the formation of the needed hand seals, the user will cause a thin layer of water to form over their eyes. This makes the user able to keep their eyes open without blinking, and thus see more clearly and constantly while under water; this can also be used to keep the eyes moist when in dry environments. While this jutsu is active, the water that covers their eyes will act as a magnifying glass of sorts; this also means that one can perceive lights as being brighter, and thus light based attacks will hurt more, while it will not change the attacks actual damage level (such as post count of blindness, etc). Chakra Cost: 2 (1 per post)
Name: Ninpou; Kiri Suramu - Mist Slam Rank: C Type: Weaponry Element: -- Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m~10m), Far (10m+) Village: Kirigakure Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. This jutsu requires no hand seals. After activation, the user will rush towards the target and make a giant swing with massive power in order to try and cleave them in half. This swing will be powerful enough to crush rock, depending on the size and momentum of the sword. Instead of using hand seals, the user will gather chakra within their arms before use. Chakra Cost: 6
Shikotsumyaku Jutsu:
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Name: Tsubaki no Mai | Dance of the Camellia Rank: D Type: Weaponry - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: - Description: Tsubaki no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user performs this jutsu by modifying the humerus (upper arm bone) of either their right or left arm to create a short, hilt-less bone sword. Since they can increase and compress the density of their bones, they can make the sword harder than steel. The user then uses the sword to fight; their style uses quick cuts and thrusts to disable opponents quickly. They is extremely proficient with this sword and can, not only deflect shuriken, but also dispatch a large number of Shadow Clones with this technique. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru | Dance of the Clematis: Vine Rank: D Type: Weaponry - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: - Description: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user can modify and pull out their own spinal column to use as a flexible chain staff, regrowing a new spine to replace the removed one. The protrusions on the vertebrae are modified to make them stronger and sharper. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Karamatsu no Mai | Dance of the Larch Rank: C Type: Weaponry - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: - Description: Karamatsu no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user uses this jutsu to create a mass of razor-sharp bone spikes all over their body. These spines appear to be branches off their pre-existing skeletal structure rather than completely new bones. The user is even able to grow these bones at an extremely rapid rate so they can stab an opponent even as they are growing. They can even use them to block or trap an opponent's strikes. In addition to being an unwelcome surprise for opponents, it makes them basically untouchable at close range. If an opponent would start to get close to them, they would start to spin rapidly slashing the foe in multiple areas of their body. Chakra Cost: 6CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Teshi Sendan | Drilling Finger Bullets Rank: C Type: Weaponry - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: - Description: Teshi Sendani is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. Hardened bones from the fingertips are shot at the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. A direct hit will excavate skin, flesh, and bone. Since the bones regenerate after release, this technique can be used in succession. Chakra Cost: 5CP per 5 fingers.
Weaponry:
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Name: Hitei Mushou - Flying Nail Mist Pierce Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Description: After forming the needed handseal, the user will emit a flying mist of small nails from his or her mouth. These small nails can travel towards his or her opponent at quite a distance and are capable of dealing minor puncture wounds. Chakra Cost: 7
Suiton
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Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his/her gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can travel no further than 10 meters from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert back into its natural water state. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a solid bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby. Chakra Cost: 9 (2 per post)
Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: In order to use this technique, the user must first be on top of water (lake, sea, etc). Then, after preforming the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below. This can possibly drown the opponent. Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post)
Raiton
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Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)
Ninja Tools Name: Katana Rank: C Type: Close Range - Long Blade Quantity: 1 Description: Commonly refereed to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance. It has a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability.
-------------------------- Name: Old Hunter Nin Mask Rank: D Type: Accessory Appearance: A white, porcelain mask bearing Kirigakure's symbol across the forehead. It has a green triangle on its lower half where the mouth would be, and small slits serving for eye-holes. Quantity: 1 Storage: Worn at most times, thus covering the face [If it's not worn, it's pulled back and rests on top of the head]
-------------------------- Name: Spear Rank: D Type: Medium Range - Polearm Quantity: 1 Description: A spear consisting of a metal shaft with a pointed head.
-------------------------- Name: Shuriken Kit Rank: C Quantity: 1 Contents: 48 Shuriken [24], 24 Smoke Pellets [8]
FACE CLAIM. Character Claim: Kushimaru Kuriarare Source: Naruto Shippuden Image URL: http://images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/19100000/Kushimaru-Kuriarare-naruto-shippuuden-19145358-502-1022.jpg
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 18 Aug 2013, 8:05 am | |
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- Appearance, Personality;
Not bad, but see if you can't pad them out a little more. Another paragraph each should do.
- Origin
Your origin is the country your character was born in, not the village they owe Allegiance to. In your case, I believe it would be Mizu no Kuni
- Specialties
Weaponry specializations work a little differently here on Ultimate Shinobi; they're divided into 3 ranges, Close, Mid, and Long. IF your character possesses Weaponry as a specialty, you choose two of these ranges; one "Main" range, and one "Sub" range. Whatever your "Main" ranged is, you will be able to wield weapons equal to your rank in. Whatever your "Sub" range is, you will be able to wield weapons up to one-rank under you in.
In your case, I believe you would want "Close" as your Main range, so feel free to pick either Mid or Long as your second.
- RP Sample
Good sample, just keep in mind this will be regarded as your "average" post, and thus it'll be expected of you to regularly post with similar length/quality.
- Jutsu
I'm afraid to say you can't have several of these jutsu. As a Weaponry and Taijutsu user, you can only possess Weaponry and Taijutsu techniques; none of those Ninjutsu.
Now, if what I think is going on is going on, allow me to elaborate; The Kaguya jutsu require either Weaponry or Taijutsu. It is not required that you have both in order to utilize the moves.
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| | | Rosuto
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 18 Aug 2013, 11:05 am | |
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- Appearance & Personality:
By far what took me the longest to stretch out, but I think I covered it
- Origin:
Fixed
- Specialities:
Fixed
- RP Samples:
I tend to go off of whatever other people post so what if they don't give me much to work with? And this is normally how my solo posts look.
- Jutsus:
Fixed and thank you for clearing that up for me ^^
I think I'm ready for another round |
| | | BK-201
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 18 Aug 2013, 11:28 am | |
| Round 2
- Appearance
Good show, though I'll give fair warning now, while I see no particular problem with it, you may be forced by another mod to edit your appearance into something more closely relating to your clan. Ie, you may have to opt for the green eyes instead of your current blue.
Also, unless I missed it entirely, I will have to insist that you do mention he has the Kaguya clan markings somewhere.
- Jutsu
You only have 9 jutsu, when you can have up to 15. I advise you take the chance to fill up those slots, as once you're approved, you won't be able to get any freebies.
- Weapons
As a C-rank ninja, you can possess up to 2 C-rank items, and 15 D-ranks. I advise that, at the very least, you grab a D-rank Mid-range weapon. Also, just some handy advice, I'd recommend trying to work that Mask into some sort of C-rank item. Maybe protects you from flash-bangs and smoke, that sort of thing.
You can find the template for custom weapons/items here.
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| | | Rosuto
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 18 Aug 2013, 12:42 pm | |
| Alright I think I got it now |
| | | BK-201
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 18 Aug 2013, 12:52 pm | |
| Approved 1/2 |
| | | Rosuto
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 18 Aug 2013, 5:41 pm | |
| Great ^^ |
| | | Chris
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 18 Aug 2013, 9:21 pm | |
| Hello~
You have a solid application here and BK has gone over most of the things. I do have two little nitpicks, however ^^
- Could you expand your combat style please? We normally require two short paragraphs or one that's longer than what you have :3
- Also, I'm not sure how a porcelain mask would allow you to see through smoke or protect you from a flashbang. Even if you don't see the flash of light, you're still quite heavily affected by the sound. I don't need to explain smoke. I would prefer if the mask was just an (Fashion) accessory, more so than a special item.
Otherwise, it's all great stuff. |
| | | Rosuto
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Sun 18 Aug 2013, 11:11 pm | |
| Fixed the Combat Style [hopefully to your standards and yes I was having a slightly hard time trying to figure out how to make it longer but its ok lol]
Fixed the Mask and made it a simple mask
Ok let's try this one more time because I think I got it |
| | | Chris
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 19 Aug 2013, 2:41 am | |
| I don't see any changes on the mask D: |
| | | Rosuto
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 19 Aug 2013, 8:31 am | |
| I'm soo sorry I thought I saved the changes before I posted but I fixed it now |
| | | Chris
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Mon 19 Aug 2013, 5:28 pm | |
| No worries.
Approved 2/2
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Rosuto [Kirigakure Genin] Thu 02 Jan 2014, 7:30 pm | |
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