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Age : 32 Posts : 1912

Name: Toutaku no Mai (Dance of the Woodpecker)
Rank: B rank
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Self
Element: Katon
Description: Named after the woodpecker, this technique uses a piston like attack to break enemy defenses. By hardening the bones in the right hand and forming edged protrusions and plates on his knuckles and the back of his hand and forearm, Yoroi will protect himself from inflicting damage upon himself. Then, several sturdy vents of bone will form from his elbow, allowing Yoroi to store up and erupt fire chakra from these vents, adding a large amount of blunt force and speed to his punch. This can add as much as 19% strength to Yoroi's punch. This technique requires two post to store more fire chakra to be sent through the vents.
Chakra Cost: 12cp (3cp per post)

Name: Kahouki no Mai (Dance of the Raging Comet)
Rank: A rank
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Self
Element: Katon
Description: A more advanced form of Toutaku no Mai, this jutsu does not merely focus on punching. By forming multiple vents along the length of his spine and shoulder-blades, Yoroi can store and release fire chakra to send himself flying into a desired direction. Allowing him to make quick jumps of roughly ten meters at a time, the momentum gained by this attack can add up to 20% strength to his Taijutsu attacks. Though used primarily to rapidly close distances and attack, it is a very useful means of dodging attacks. All jumps are linear and cannot be used as a means of zigzagging. Choice of moving up ten meters or moving forward ten meters with a maximum height of 2 meters. This technique requires two posts to store more fire chakra to be sent through the vents if it is to be used a second time.
Chakra Cost: 20cp (5cp per post)

Name: Gatsunata (Bare Boned Cleaver)
Rank: A rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/a
Element: Raiton (Vibration)
Description: An advanced version of Hone Buki, this bone sword is a lot more potent than it's predecessor. Pushing itself out of Yoroi's wrist, a long, thin blade of bone will form until it completely pushes itself into the outside world. Taking the shape of a Chõkuto, a Katana that lacks a guard, meaning the white sword is used entirely for offensive purposes. With vibrating chakra coursing through the blade, it's offensive power can slice through defenses of it's level, being particularly strong against Doton, yet still weak against Fuuton. The blade is 80cm long with a 15cm handle, making it functional as both a one handed or a two handed weapon, allowing Yoroi to choose between the two.
Chakra Cost: 20cp (5cp per post)

Name: Ryuugyaku (Current Reversal)
Rank: E-S rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Element: Raiton
Requirement: Raiton Prodigy/Master
Description: This advanced lightning ninjutsu allows Yoroi to create a field of chakra around himself that will defend him from an incoming lightning technique. This technique proceeds to alter the flow of chakra, allowing Yoroi to stack half the power of this blocked lightning technique onto one of his own at Prodigy. At this stage, passing and converting chakra through the body can be very painful and eventually numbing. At Master, the full brunt of the technique will be stacked upon one of Yoroi's lightning Ninjutsu. Because the user is no longer restricted by most weaknesses a basic user encounters, only the passing of an S ranked technique can truly hurt upon redirecting. If the opponent has the same SC, this jutsu will only block the attack, doing nothing else. This stack will remain for one post, meaning it has to be used in the first post after or during the assimilation.
Chakra Cost: Cost of jutsu + 4

Age : 37 Posts : 2201

Name: Kahouki no Mai (Dance of the Raging Comet)

- This is a pretty powerful technique, I'd prefer it if the cool-down was two posts instead of one. Perhaps also have the strength increase at 20% since the extra strength is only gained by this momentum. Also how high can he jump? I also assume he can only move forward with this, seeing that the vents are at his spine and shoulder blades?

Age : 32 Posts : 1912

MsMoney wrote:

Name: Kahouki no Mai (Dance of the Raging Comet)

- This is a pretty powerful technique, I'd prefer it if the cool-down was two posts instead of one. Perhaps also have the strength increase at 20% since the extra strength is only gained by this momentum. Also how high can he jump? I also assume he can only move forward with this, seeing that the vents are at his spine and shoulder blades?

-Fixed cooldown to 2 posts
-Dropped boost to 20%
-Fixed height
-Forward or straight up into the air, yes

Age : 37 Posts : 2201

This looks fine to me, so approved.

Will be added when you have enough funds x)

Age : 32 Posts : 1912

This can be archived, I don't need it any time soon, so I would rather this to be archived for a later time.

Age : 37 Posts : 2201

Archived due to user request.