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Seiichi no Orochi
Descendant of the White Snake Sage



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Name: Seiichi (Seiichi no Orochi ショ)
Title: King of the Ryuchi Caverns
Nickname: Great White Terror (Daishiseru れる か)
 
Rank: S rank
Appearance: Seiichi is the oldest of the Hakuja Sennin's sons and daughters, meaning he was the one that has gained control as acting leader over the Ryuchi caverns, leading beside the Hakuja Sennin, who acts as it's spiritual leader. Being white in appearance, he looks completely different from his two youngest brothers, Murasakou and Reikan, having more in common with Shakreido. His massive white scales are as close as they get to armor, being as hard as steel while they also weigh a lot. The sheer size of the protruding scales along his back allow him to cut through the earth when it burrows, easily plowing through trees and buildings in the process. Beneath the protruding scales are small glands that can emit Seiichi's deadly poison. The tip of his tail appears to be like a barbed spear or whip, which are also two of the ways in which he can use it. The thick bony scales on it's head prove just how dense they are, having completely merged with it's skeletal structure and achieving a great density and durability because of it. Having several horn like protrusions on the side of his head that are shaped like some sort of jagged crown, his teeth are also part of his skeletal structure. Inside his mouth, he still has several retractable fangs that can be used to poison larger targets, but are otherwise not used and remain hidden inside his jaws. Finally, he has a blue marking on his forehead that stands as his personal symbol, something all other animals in the Shinobi world know of. With a length of 30.48 meters (100ft), Seiichi is the biggest and most powerful of all the inhabitants of the Ryuchi caverns. 

Personality: 
Leader: As the leader of the Ryuchi caverns, Seiichi knows every single thing that goes on within his territory. It is through these means that he originally came into contact with Yoroi, the newest Sage disciple. Having full control over everything that goes on within the caverns, the only person who can overrule him is his father, the great white snake sage. Through his many years of leadership, he has learned the importance of obedience to orders from one's superiors. As such, he does not question the orders given to him by Yoroi when the two are in combat. Despite that, he may still try to give Yoroi orders when he deems it to be required, for if there is one thing he truly hates, it is losing a fight.  
Headstrong: Whether this is a result of being the oldest son and brother in the family or because he is the designated leader of the caverns and other serpents, Seiichi is an incredibly headstrong creature that does not look kindly on losing or people giving up. Being what would could call a Fearless Leader, the large creature is not afraid of heading a fight that some might believe to be hopeless. Whether the enemy is a single target, an army or just one massive beast, Seiichi is not afraid of any man or beast, facing them all down with the exact same attitude, the attitude of a winner. His impressive attitude and physical strength make him into a highly dangerous adversary and ally in battle.
Calculating: When in battle, the great white serpent is always watching his enemies, as well as his allies, constantly taking mental notes of the things he sees. He uses these to figure out someone's attack pattern, trying to figure out their strengths and weaknesses and working with that information. Allowing him to better work alongside his allies and make it easier to lay some pain on his enemies, this quality is something Yoroi values greatly. Knowing that two minds are capable of figuring out more than just the one, it is always useful to have Seiichi in a combat situation. 

Contract Type: Personal Summon
Species: Great Snake
Specialty: 
Main: Medical
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Fire
Summons Jutsu:


Academy Jutsu:

Taijutsu:

Medical:

Fire Ninjutsu:

Poison:


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Captain Konoha
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PostSubject: Re: Seiichi no Orochi [Finished] Seiichi no Orochi [Finished] EmptySat 04 Jan 2014, 10:24 pm

This big guy is finished and ready to be checked.
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PostSubject: Re: Seiichi no Orochi [Finished] Seiichi no Orochi [Finished] EmptyMon 06 Jan 2014, 4:39 pm

Before I dig deep into this, I want to name three little issues (also buying some time since my internet is being a cunt as per usual, and I don't want to start modding the jutsu hardcore when you gotta get rid of a few of them and change ranks anyway).

- You don't specify how big he is.
- You have 19 jutsu but can only have 18.
- You have 5 A rank jutsu but can have only 3.
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Captain Konoha
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PostSubject: Re: Seiichi no Orochi [Finished] Seiichi no Orochi [Finished] EmptyTue 07 Jan 2014, 12:09 am

-Specified size.
-Had the same jutsu 3 times by accident.
-Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Seiichi no Orochi [Finished] Seiichi no Orochi [Finished] EmptySun 09 Nov 2014, 9:30 pm

Do you still want this looked over?
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