Jutsu

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Name: Rēzā no Sora - Sky of Lasers
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10m+)
Element: Tōton
Description: A highly dangerous jutsu that uses Toton release to create levitating lenses of ice that can focus the sun's light into destructive beams of heat. This jutsu can create either eight, four, two, or one of these lenses, with varying levels of power and range depending on a number of factors. Being that the beams are merely concentrated heat, they work much like Katon jutsu in terms of damage and weaknesses.
Damage: 8 Discs; 1st degree burns after brief exposure, with worsening burns from prolonged exposure. 4 Discs: 2nd degree burns even after brief exposure, worse with prolonged contact. 2 Discs: 3rd degree burns, combust most materiels immediately. 1 Disc: Capable of vaporizing small bodies of water, burn through bone, cause structural heat damage to most metals and outright melt smaller portions of said metal.
Size: 8 Discs; 1 foot wide each, beams as thick as arm. 4 Discs; 2 feet wide each, beams as thick as thigh. 2 Discs: 4 feet wide each, beams as thick as both legs. 1 Disc; 8 feet wide, beam as thick as torso. (Technically speaking, each beam is actually rather small, but the heat generated by them causes burning long before the target is actually within the beam, hence their "practical" thicknesses.)
Damage(Cont): For every two beams focused on one spot, their damage increases by one rank. Two C-rank beams = one B-rank beam, and so on.
Range: The "standard" range for this jutsu is that the discs float 20m above the user, within a circle of 10m (User at the center). Within that circle, each disc can be angled to afflict a target anywhere within 15m of said disc. For every five meters each disc rises, the beams can reach five meters farther, but go down one rank in damage. Ie, a one-foot disc would, at 25m, be able to fire a D-rank beam at any target within 20m of the disc.
Duration: Due to the intense heat focused through them, each disc can only operate its beam for a certain amount of time before melting. The duration maxes at three posts; (activation), (combat post), (combat post).
Speed: Much like a puppeteer experiences lag the more puppets they attempt to control, so to does each disc slow down depending on the number of discs the user controls. Eight discs; average C-rank speed. Four discs; Average B-rank speed. Two discs: Average A-rank speed. One disc; average S-rank speed.
Transportation: In theory, the discs can be used as platforms for a shinobi to stand on, be carried around on, or jump off of. However, should a shinobi attempt to travel on them, the speed of whatever disc or discs they perch upon will be cut in half, and the disc(s) they ride upon will be able to rise no more than 20m.
Chakra Cost: 35 (9)

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I'm so out of energy for this.

You will edit it to do Katon equivalent burning damage or you will be denied. Focused Sun beams do NOT explode.

Age : 37 Posts : 2201

Quote :: The discs can turn, move, and angle themselves so as to better their aim and chances of hitting, making them very hard to dodge, even from the faster shinobi.

- First of all, you can't legitimately have

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even from the faster shinobi.

in there. We don't allow speculations, and what you are basically saying is that unless someone has the speed SC they are fucked. Let's leave it more to the people themselves than assuming things.

- Second of all, add in there that there is a limitation to how much the discs can be angled or moved around; because let's face it, at some point of the angling or moving around they will stop being able to catch the direct pathway of the sun-rays. They'd have to be right above the user, and in the favoured angle from the sun to be able to catch the victim. So a certain "the discs can catch a target that is standing in the X meter distance to the side" formula is needed.
I also want you to separate this huge text into at least two paragraphs. >( *whips*
The more discs you use at the same time, the slower the movement. With the logic of how a puppeteer can be distracted by many puppets, and then moves faster when controlling a single puppet.
The lasers do burn damage, not explosions. I agree with Travis on that.

Katon damage; 8 discs C rank, 4 discs B rank, 2 discs A rank and 1 disc S rank as I'm sure was already stated.
It lasts the initialization, then two posts, before the concentrated heat melts the ice discs and they must be reformed

Age : 29 Posts : 1688

You can archive this until/if I want it again.

Edit: Hurr durr, I can just do it. Archived.