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| ![Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Naruto_OC_Hayashi_Enkai_by_magni-1](https://2img.net/h/i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk226/overton61/Naruto_OC_Hayashi_Enkai_by_magni-1.jpg) SENJU, KAZUKI.THE INFO.
Name: Senju, Kazuki
Nickname:
Age: 15
Gender: Male (M)
Appearance:
Kazuki is a thin, long-faced child from Konohagakure with short round ears, big baby-blue eyes, a small pointy nose, and a sharp smile. The shade of blue in his eyes is rather "cute" as one might put it, and makes him seem as if he was a little older than how old he really is. His hair is a light baby-blue color (a rather off trait for someone who hails from the Senju clan), which is kept in a rather messy fashion and which is spiky and comes down to the middle of his neck. Kazuki likes it this way, as it makes him look cool in his opinion. Kazuki also always wears a laid-back expression, which makes some people to believe that he is irresponsible and lazy, but he does not mind this to the slightest. Kazuki has a lean body, standing at 5 ft. 8 in. and weighing a total of 137 pounds. He is not muscular, it appears that he doesn't have any muscle at all in fact. This is because he does not rely on strength, but rather he relies on speed during battle. One of the most interesting things about his body is a scar that starts at the center of his stomach and ends at the far right side of his stomach. Kazuki received this rather intriguing scar from a fight with his drunk and abusive father. He does not like to show people this particular mark, as it brings back many memories of his cruel past, but the people who have seen it think it looks cool, but out of character for someone like Kazuki. It is also safe to say that Kazuki is a very attractive individual.
His usual everyday attire consists of a white tank-top, a high-collared short-sleeved sea blue coat which he always wears open at the torso and the neck. He wears dark pants as well, which are cut off a little bit below his knee cap by bandages that go down to his ankles under dark-colored ninja sandals. He also wears a dark blue necklace that looks similar to the Hyuga clan symbol. He also wears a dark blue forehead protector around his forehead to shield his eyes from his bangs. When in more relaxed situations, Kazuki tends to wear a baggy white T-shirt with the Senju clan symbol plastered onto the back of it, black pants cut off at the ankle by bandages that go down to his ankles under dark-colored ninja sandals. He also wears the same necklace as mentioned in his other attire.
Forehead Protector: Dark blue, worn around his forehead
Personality:
When he was a kid, Kazuki could have been characterized as shy, thoughtful, serene, kind, and very polite, as noted from him always addressing people with the proper honorifics. He was also very gentle, a trait that his father had viewed as a flaw, and disliked competing and fighting. He was shown to be incredibly empathetic, and, because of his upbringing, can identify people's emotions relatively easily. Back in his childhood, because of his father's drunkenness and harsh feeling towards him and his mother not ever even sparing a glance at him let alone a word, Kazuki had become very timid and lacked self-confidence. However, he was a very hard worker as he continuously strove to change himself for the better, though initially this lack of self-confidence would hinder his wants and would usually leave him in tears and alone.
By the time that Kazuki had graduated from the Shinobi Academy, he had rid himself of his soft spoken, empathetic attitude and replaced it with on that now wields bravery, confidence, and courage. Kazuki can now also be described as kind, respectful, and outgoing. However, he can be very serious when the situation calls for it. When Kazuki is in battle or on a mission, his personality changes and he becomes brave, confident, serious, and rather thoughtful of the situation at hand. He never underestimates his opponents and always fights at his best, because if he does not he is not living up to his own expectations about his fighting and underestimating his opponents can land him into trouble quickly. He had also developed a strong love for his village.
Kazuki had also developed a passion for reading and cloud watching, which makes some people to think of him as lazy and carefree. He had developed his passion for reading during his time in the Shinobi Academy. Because of his father's abuse during his time at the academy, Kazuki did not interact that much and did not have many friends if any for his first year there. He turned to books, thinking that he could build a mental bond with the people in the books that he read. It was these books that gave Kazuki the confidence to make friends and stick up to his father. He had developed his liking for cloud watching after a long training session during his days in the academy. He had been training for two whole days and collapsed from exhaustion. He stared into the clouds, imagining that he was up in the sky along with the carefree clouds. He loved that feeling, and now he watches the clouds to rejoice on this feeling
Clan: The Senju Clan
Nindō: "If you don’t like your destiny, don’t accept it. Instead, have the courage to change it the way you want it to be…!"
THE NINJA.
Origin: The Fire Country
Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin (C-Rank)
Specialities: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities: Doton (Earth), Suiton (Water)
Combat Style:
Kazuki prefers to keep his distance from his opponent and analyze as much as he can before he can choose whether to use Ninjutsu or Taijutsu. Kazuki prefers to use ninjutsu in battle because he is much more proficient at using it. He has trained much more with elemental ninjutsu than he actually has trained his Taijutsu, although his Taijutsu is not bad at all. Naturally, Kazuki is a mid-long range fighter because of his Ninjutsu, so he usually uses his Taijutsu against close range fighters for defense and to keep his opponents away from him in battle. Because he is still new to the Senju's Kekkei Genkai, he is still experimenting with the manipulation of Mokuton, which he still needs to train in. The only reason he uses Mokuton is for a quick, weak defense and offense, but the most important usage of his Mokuton is yet to come, he will use it to aid in analyzing his opponents. Kazuki wishes to become become more versatile with his Ninjutsu techniques because with his gift, he can give "life" and he wishes to become better. As for weaknesses, Kazuki considers his own fighting style to be a great disadvantage during a time when the battlefield consists of no trees or water, that is the time when he has nothing to rely on except his taijutsu. Also, since he is only a C ranked shinobi, his chakra capacity and knowledge of jutsu is still at a low, thus making combat a very risky thing.
Special Characteristics:
- Physical:
Name: [Tier I] Enhanced Speed
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them.
Description: After training relentlessly in cardiovascular and high speed movement, shinobi are able to greatly increase their overall stamina and movement speed. Those talented with this speed are capable of running with speed half a man greater than their peers and even last a bit longer during extraneous activities without becoming exhausted. This boost in speed is usually enough to quickly catch escaping targets or outrun most regular citizens.
- Social:
Name: Chakra Aura
Rank: C
Type: Social Based
Prerequisites: - Has a happy and carefree life
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: Many people have vibrant, stunning personalities. Others can be colder than a Yuki's heart. Whatever the case, these people have personalities of such extremes, it even influences their chakra. While giving it no particularly special features, morbid individuals may find their chakra to carry a blackened tinge, carefree and happy ones may be surprised to find they emit a yellow glow, and those who are quick to anger might find a red surprise reminiscent of a Bijuu host.
Color: - Yellow (Happy and Carefree)
THE BACKGROUND.
History:
- Childhood:
Kazuki was born into the Senju clan, who are famous for their use of Mokuten jutsu and their raw strength. His father was a renowned protector of Konoha who would do just about anything for the sake of the village's safety and his mother was a prostitute who had settled down and married Kazuki's father a few years before Kazuki's birth. In hopes of passing on his love and care for the village, Kazuki's father and his wife conceived a healthy baby boy to take on his will. This boy was named Kazuki by his father, who was in tears of joy when Kazuki was born. By the age of four, Kazuki's father started to teach him ninjutsu and their clans mokuten jutsu. Kazuki learned fairly quickly and he was even able to hold his own against his father for quite some time (about six to eight hours as some remember it). His mother however, barely even looked or talked to him. Kazuki believed this to be because his mother did not want him (as this would eventually be true), and this got to him and it gradually lowered his performance during training.
When Kazuki was six years old, his mother found out that she had contracted an STD during her time as a prostitute, and soon died right next to Kazuki and her husband. Her last words to Kazuki were "You were... A mistake." This sent Kazuki over the edge and he nearly committed suicide, but he was stopped by his father. Shortly there after, Kazuki's father picked up drinking to relieve the pain of his wife's untimely death. This made him abusive and careless. Kazuki was now being beaten on a regular basis by his father (who would normally forget everything that happened during his time being drunk) and being isolated from the kids of the village, who were told to avoid him because of the bruises and scars that were left on his body by his father. The things that Kazuki was going through in life made him lower his self-confidence and he also became timid and rather shy, but none of these things stopped him from continuing his quest to keep his father's Will of Fire going, and he soon started training at the Shinobi Academy at the age of 10.
- Academy:
When Kazuki first started learning at the Shinobi Academy, he was teased a lot and beat up for not having anyone who cared for him and loved him. This lowered his self-confidence even more. One day after training however, his father attacked him with a broken beer bottle. Knowing that if he did not do anything he would die, Kazuki broke away from his father's grip after getting severely cut along his lower abdomen, and went all out on him. This attack landed the both of them in the hospital, and Kazuki's father soon stopped drinking and rebuilt the relationship that he once had with his son long ago.
Also during his time at the Shinobi Academy, Kazuki took up a passion for reading and cloud watching, which made some people to think of him as lazy and carefree. He had developed his passion for reading during his time at the Academy when his father was abusing him. Reading was a trait found in few of the people in his class. He took to reading because he thought that he could build a mental bond with the people in the books that he read, and this soon gave him the confidence that he needed to actually make some friends. He had developed his liking for cloud watching after a long few days of training. He had been training for two whole days and collapsed from exhaustion. He stared into the clouds, imagining that he was up in the sky along with the carefree clouds. He loved that feeling, and now he watches the clouds to rejoice on this feeling. Three years of training went by fast for Kazuki though, and he was pretty much the smartest in his class. He got the best grades in all of his classes and had gained self confidence and bravery. He had also became really happy. In only what seemed like a short time, Kazuki was graduating at the top of his class.
Roleplay Sample:
- Roleplay Sample:
The early morning sun rose over the peaks of the mountains looming over Konohagakure. The air was chill and the mist hung high from the ground. The Fire Country was showing the early signs of Autumn, which was one of Yoruma, Ryuga's favorite seasons. Leaning up from his slumber, he stretched before throwing his legs over the edge of his bed and slipping on his favorite pair of black pants and sandals. His uncle and him were going to do some early morning training, and he was ready. He had been waiting to start his new training since before he started attending the Academy, since his uncle gave him his Katana, which he proudly nicknamed Kira, three long years ago. Throwing on a black tank top and placing his katana in the sash that he wore around his waist to double as a belt and weapon holster, he heard a sharp knock on the front door. 'Who the hell can that be?' He thought, annoyed. He walked to the door and opened it slightly, ready to slam it back in the person's face if they seemed unimportant to him. But he opened it completly. The person was a courier ninja, a deliveryman. "Special delivery for Yoruma, Ryuga." The person said, holding out a letter.
"That's me." Ryuga replied, snatching the letter out of the deliveryman's hand and handing him 10 yen for his services before slamming the door in his face. Turing to go into the kitchen, he looked at the letter. It was rather formal looking and had the head of the council's signature on it and a red Konoha symbol underneath it. 'What could the council want with me?' He asked himself as he opened the envelope. Reading the letter aloud, he said. "Dear Mr. Yoruma, Ryuga, within this envelope you will find the necessary items to help you carry on your first mission. You are to find one of the villager's fiance, who had mysteriously disappeared two days ago, and bring him back to the village. The man was on a small white boat with a yellow stripe across it and can be seen wearing grey overalls and a blue hat with an orange star on it. It is most important that this man gets back to the village alive and not in a body bag. We wish you good luck on your first mission. Signed, The Konoha Council." Digging through the envelope again, he found a map of the river ways all throughout the Fire Country and a pass to use the boat transportation services that ran in the Country. 'Seems simple enough.' He thought, placing the contents of the envelope back into it and placing it in his back pocket. Walking back into his bedroom, he threw on a white T-shirt over his tank top and wrote a letter to his uncle stating that he would be out for his mission. Stepping out into the cold morning, Ryuga took a deep breath, taking in the coldness of the air around him. He let out a rare smile before jumping up onto the roof of his uncle's house and making his way along the rooftops above the misty streets below.
THE ARSENAL.
- Academy Jutsu:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Genjutsu
Range: N/A
Medium: Optical
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others.
Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: N/A
Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread.
Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu.
Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed.
Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
- Clan Jutsu:
Name: Mokuton: Henge | Wood Release: Transformation
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m)
Element: Mokuton (Wood Release)
Description: Mokuton: Henge is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan. This jutsu is just like any other Transformation Technique. The user performs the necessary hand seals, then wood emerges and covers his entire body and a puff of smoke or chakra covers up the transformation. Once the jutsu is done, the transformation is complete. It acts more like a costume than a transformation, as the user is able to leave it behind if necessary. This transformation is able to withstand a reasonable amount of damage before dispersing.
Chakra Cost: 3CP
Name: Mokuton: Gosunkugi Enjin | Wood Release: Wood Spike Ring
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Mokuton (Wood Release)
Description: Mokuton: Gosunkugi Enjin is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan. In order for this technique to work the user must have their target surrounded in wood. The user forms spikes on their wood which surrounds their target in a spiked rings, preventing them from making sudden movements or even performing a substitution escape mechanic.
Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Mokuton: Semaijurin no Jutsu | Wood Release: Small Forest Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Mokuton (Wood Release)
Description: Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan.A technique that changes one's own arm into big trees. Using chakra, the tissues are transformed into trees at the cellular level. Then, by activating the trees, stimulating them to grow rapidly, they lengthen at high speed and fork into many branches. It is possible to capture the enemy with these branches and at the same time, these branches, though not sharp, are still capable of performing ranged blunt damage. Though a powerful technique, it's not capable of destroying a solid surface very easily, and is a beginner's version of Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu
Chakra Cost: 8CP (2 per post)
Name: Mokuton: Shichūrō no Jutsu | Wood Release: Four Pillars Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Element: Mokuton (Wood Release)
Description: Mokuton: Shichūrō no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Senju clan. This technique lets the user summon a tree around their opponent to bind them. The user changes chakra into timber under the ground and makes it grow rapidly, while forming it into a wooden prison. The size of the prison is five meters in each side, making it capable of containing multiple individuals if used in one spot. The timber itself is treated with a chakra coating, making its destruction extremely difficult. During war, it has the great ability to detain prisoners, but it can also be used as a disciplinary measure for quarreling subordinates.
Chakra Cost: 8CP
- Doton:
Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth.
Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)
Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.
Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Gansetsukon - Rock Spear
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to take a small chunk of rock and turn it into the shape of a staff. The user can then use it as a weapon or throw it at their opponent. Because it is made of thin stone, it is very brittle.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Doryuusou - Earthen Rising Spears
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes are brittle, and can be broken with a strong blow or tough defense.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.
Chakra Cost: 9
- Suiton:
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: In order to use this technique, the user must first be on top of water (lake, sea, etc). Then, after preforming the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below. This can possibly drown the opponent.
Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post)
Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant.
Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: A jutsu that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsu of equal rank and below.
Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Water Release: Water Drowning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles.
Chakra Cost: 5 (1 per post)
- Taijutsu:
Name: Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Senpuu - Leaf Whirlwind
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark.
Chakra Cost: 4
Equipment:
- Kits:
Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].
FACE CLAIM.
Character Claim: Enkai Hayashi
Source: www.giaonline.com
Image URL: https://2img.net/h/i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk226/overton61/Naruto_OC_Hayashi_Enkai_by_magni-1.jpg
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|  | | mtnpepsi1
Age : 26
Posts : 57
| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Thu 02 Jan 2014, 1:29 am | |
| | Bump |
| | | | MsMoney
Age : 37
Posts : 2201
| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Thu 02 Jan 2014, 2:05 am | |
| Everything looks neat and tidy. Even if it's not the longest written descriptions I feel as if they cover the basics for me.
1/2 approved.
(Just a last note that wont affect my approval at all, are you sure you don't want to start with a social SC?) |
| | | | mtnpepsi1
Age : 26
Posts : 57
| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Thu 02 Jan 2014, 3:42 am | |
| - MsMoney wrote:
(Just a last note that wont affect my approval at all, are you sure you don't want to start with a social SC?)
I have an SC, the Enhanced Speed SC. |
| | | | MsMoney
Age : 37
Posts : 2201
| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Thu 02 Jan 2014, 5:05 am | |
| That would be a normal battle/physical SC yes, but there is the option of having Social SC's as well if you look at the SC rules.
Also, I got confused just now and didn't think about it earlier but you have a green color currently. Your Uzumaki character got archived in November and then it shows like you have the character Yoruma Ryuga under the name of redninjaguy? At that he's currently active? I am mostly confused because that character application is written under the redninjaguy name while the account for that character is written by this name. |
| | | | MsMoney
Age : 37
Posts : 2201
| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Fri 03 Jan 2014, 8:13 am | |
| | Issue resolved, my 1/2 approval still stands. |
| | | | Aaron
Age : 27
Posts : 2538
| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Fri 03 Jan 2014, 5:21 pm | |
| - Try to make your combat style longer. At least 250 words, so I know you've included adequate detail.
- To reiterate Heida's question, are you sure you don't want to start with a Social SC or an Affliction? You will have to train for them if you do not take this opportunity to get one before your character's approval.
- Is my computer messing up, or is the Taijutsu and Equipment field showing up beneath your Face Claim? If so, please move it to the other Jutsu fields. If not, just ignore this, it's probably my computer, haha. Overall, very nice app, well done.
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| | | | mtnpepsi1
Age : 26
Posts : 57
| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Sat 04 Jan 2014, 3:14 am | |
| - Aaron wrote:
- Is my computer messing up, or is the Taijutsu and Equipment field showing up beneath your Face Claim? If so, please move it to the other Jutsu fields. If not, just ignore this, it's probably my computer, haha. Overall, very nice app, well done.
It does the same thing on my computer, it just puts everything in the wrong places. Idk why, but it does. |
| | | | mtnpepsi1
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Sat 04 Jan 2014, 4:23 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Sat 04 Jan 2014, 3:27 pm | |
| | Don't bump your topics within a day of a moderator replying to them, thank you. |
| | | | Aaron
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Sat 04 Jan 2014, 5:19 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Senju, Kazuki [Konoha Genin] Tue 22 Jul 2014, 3:51 am | |
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