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ABURAME, MOJIRISHU


THE INFO
Name: Aburame, Mojirishu
Nickname: Moji
Age: 15
Gender: Male

Appearance: Mojirishu Aburame is somewhat small for a boy of fourteen. A couple of inches shorter than other kids his age, Moji tops out at around 5'3" and weighs roughly 115 pounds. His pale skin contrasts heavily with his messy, black hair, which slightly covers his dark eyes. His dark hair is a decent medium length, completely covering his forehead and almost his ears. He typically wears his hair unkempt, figuring that it looks decent the way it is. Moji's face seems delicate or soft, having almost no angular form to it except for his chin, which is more angular than round. His dark eyes, almost a dark violet color sit evenly spaced slightly hidden by his bangs. Another soft feature for Moji is his nose. More of a button nose, it is small and somewhat rounded. Moji typically wears a smile on his face, however slight or full it may be.

Although Moji's face is soft, he is nowhere near being "soft" or pudgy; that would just make for a bad shinobi. Moji is fairly lean, with a low, but healthy, body mass index. Although he has not yet hit puberty and experienced the testosterone kick that his body would provide him with, Moji is fit and muscular. His muscles are well defined, but not large. Moji has no distinct markings on his body, except for a tattoo of his clan symbol on the back of his neck, usually hidden by his hair.

Despite the typical Aburame uniform, Moji likes to wear all black. His clothing consists of a black v-neck shirt worn underneath a black trench coat with a slight silver lining, long black pants held up by a black belt with a silver belt buckle, and black boots with silver plates on them, each plate bearing the mark of his village. On the left shoulder of his coat is Moji's forehead protector, which he had sown into his coat. Across his chest, Moji wears a black strap connected to another black strap going over his shoulder with a silver buckle. Moji also likes to wear black, fingerless gloves. He also dislikes wearing the traditional Aburame eyeware. He feels that they hinder his view, and prefers to keep his eyes slightly hidden by his hair.

Forehead Protector: Moji wears his forehead protector on sown into the left shoulder of his black trench coat.

Personality: Above everything else, Mojirishu Aburame values those close to him. Friendship is a sacred bond to Moji, who prefers the term "few close friends are better than many acquaintances". Even though he believes this, Moji is friendly with everyone who is friendly with him, and will most likely do anything for his friends. Moji feels the same way he does about friends about family, though he considers his close friends just like family. He puts them above everything else. Some may consider the fact that he would  most likely stick his neck out, or risk injury for his friends and family a weakness, but he does not view this as a weakness, but as his greatest strength.

Secondly, Mojiis true to his country. He was born in, and grew up in Kumogakure and thus remains extremely loyal to his country. He feels that things that his country asks him to do is for the betterment of the country and for humanity itself. He trusts his country and believes that his country would not have him do something wrong. He follows orders without question, believing that he would be doing no wrong, even if he was ordered to kill an enemy shinobi.

Even though Moji follows orders and appears to not have fun, he enjoys having fun and even making fun. Moji has a fairly laid-back attitude and has no problem finding the fun in everyday tasks. Moji enjoys his life as a shinobi and has a good time doing so, but he can also be serious when he needs to. When he is with friends, Moji laughs and occasionally pokes fun, being somewhat sarcastic, but not rude. Moji jokes around with those that he is close to, and even jokes around is stressful or awkward situations.

Because of his closeness with friends and his loyalty to his country, Moji is a trusting person of those close to him. He believes that good friends can be trusted, and he trusts those around him to watch out for him as he would watch out for them.

Moji is also quite capable of remaining calm it stressful situations. Sometimes he resorts to joking about the situation to lighten the mood. Moji, in most situations, remains calm and collected when facing danger. It takes quite a lot to anger Moji, except when it involves the well-being of his friends and family. The only times that others have seen Moji mad is when an enemy shinobi threatened one of his friends. Other than that, nobody has seen Moji loose his cool.

Likes: Insects, Fruit, Friends, Being Outdoors, Rain
Dislikes: Rude people, Pork, Steak, Being alone, Bad hygiene

Clan: Aburame

Nindō: "What must be done, must be done..."


THE NINJA
Origin: Land of Lightning
Affiliation: Kumogakure no Sato
Rank: Genin - C Rank
Specialities:

  • Ninjutsu
  • Taijutsu

Elemental Affinities:

  • Aburame, Mojirishu [Kumogakure Genin] 18px-Nature_Icon_Earth.svg Earth
  • Aburame, Mojirishu [Kumogakure Genin] 18px-Nature_Icon_Wind.svg Wind


Combat Style: Moji, being an Aburame relies heavily on his insects to fight with and for him. Utilizing the kikaichu, Moji can ward off unwanted opponents or directly attack them. With each attack from the insects, his opponents lose some of their chakra, thus giving him the upper hand and allowing him to quickly deplete his opponents chakra resources. Moji also uses his kikaichu to provide intel,  using them to track his target or even communicate with insects to find out information about his target. Moji's insects are a large part of his arsenal and allow him a wide variety of techniques.

Being skilled in both Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, Moji is capable of both close range combat and long range combat. His skill in taijutsu allows him to be dangerous in hand to hand combat, while using earth release to make his strikes more powerful and protect him. Utilizing wind release, Moji is capable of keeping his opponents at bay to allow him time to think about a way to engage his opponent or retreat. He can even use his wind release to give his thrown weapons more power and accuracy.

Moji typically waits for the other person to attack, while watching them closely. Depending on their range, Moji could begin by using throwing weapons powered by his wind techniques. If his opponents get too close without him being ready for them, he can use his wind techniques to push them back, or protect himself using the kikaichu or earth release. Once he is ready, Moji can fight hand to hand, using the kikaichu and earth release to power his strikes and protect him.

Special Characteristics:
Physical Based:
Chakra Based:
Social Based:


THE BACKGROUND
History:
- The Birth -
In a normal sized house in the heart of Kumogakure no Sato, Mojirishu Aburame was born as a second child to Skikiro and Tsumani Aburame. The strange thing about his parents is that his mother is of the Aburame clan, and his father was not of a well-known clan. Because of this, Shikiro and Tsumani agreed to raise their children as Aburame, since the Aburame clan was a better known clan throughout the shinobi world. Both parents of Mojirishu were shinobi, his mother being an intelligence operative and his father was a taijutsu master. Mojirishu's older brother, Anamo, was born three years prior to Moji's

- The Childhood -
Just days after Moji's birth, his parents introduced the kikaichu to his body through a ritual led by his mother, who used her kikaichu to populate Moji's tiny body. As Moji grew, the insects thrived within him, their population growing at the same rate that his body did. Moji grew up learning all the same things that normal babies do: how to walk and talk, how to run and socialize with other children; he even learned the things that growing shinobi do: the concepts of being a shinobi and things of that nature. Above all, Moji grew up learning about the kikaichu. He was taught what they were and why they populated his body. He learned how to use them, and the basics of how to control them. Moji was also introduced to the art of taijutsu, learning from his father when there was time. Throughout Moji's childhood, his parents proceeded to work for their village, although never at the same time. Moji's brother started the academy when Moji was three.

- The Academy -
When he entered the academy, Moji was not popular. He had friends going into the academy, but he did not keep a large quantity of friends. Moji preferred to keep only a few friends who were closer to him rather than keep a large number of friends who he barely knew. Because of this, Moji was not a popular shinobi, but he was not lonely. Early on in the academy, Moji developed a sense of caring for those close to him. As this sense of caring grew, Moji began to do just about anything for those he considered close to him, even taking the blame for a classroom prank that one of his friends pulled off.

Moji was neither top nor bottom of his class, though he did fall somewhere in the upper half, but this was only because he did not want to let those around him, specifically his parents, down. Moji's studies continued long after the school day ended, as he typically went home and trained with either his parents or his brother. These training sessions typically lasted well into the evenings, often pushing their dinner later than most other families in the area. At home, Moji preferred to train with his mother or his brother since they were both capable of the Aburame clan's secret jutsu. At school he was made to train in taijutsu and the basics of a shinobi's arsenal. To him it only made sense to train his special abilities outside the classroom.

Shortly after Moji's bother graduated from the academy, he was called out on a mission that appeared to be easier than it really was. During the mission, Anamo and his teammates were ambushed by shinobi who had no affiliation with any village. While the team was trying to fight off the assailants, one of Anamo's friends was put in direct danger. Instead of letting his friend take the hit, Moji's brother placed himself between her and the oncoming attack. Later in the village, at his funeral, Anamo was recognized with the honor of giving his life for the betterment of another shinobi. Moji saw the respect that his brother was given and vowed to honor his brother by being like him and protecting those that he cared about.

As Moji grew older, he began to notice his parents' commitment to the village. He soon learned that the village treated his parents very well, and that his parents would do just about anything for the village. The only thing keeping Moji's parents from doing anything for their village was their family; Moji learned this once when he was extremely sick. His mother was called out on a mission, but refused because she needed to watch him, scared that he would die if left alone for an extended period of time, and not wanting to lose another son. This mindset was soon imprinted on Moji who soon gained the same idea about the village, willing to do anything that they asked him to do.

- The Genin -
When the time came, Moji's graduating class was divided up into groups for their final exam. It was said that only about half of those who were given the opportunity to graduate would actually do so. Each team was assigned to a Jounin who would conduct the graduation trial. Moji's Jounin took him and the team to Kyousei Mountain, the great volcano, to attempt the exam. Unlike most other teams, who were each given the opportunity to graduate as a team, Moji's trail leader told them that only one of them would graduate. He explained to them that they would each draw a senbon, one of which had been broken to be shorter than the others. Whomever drew the short senbon would not fight in the first round; Moji pulled a long one. The only two reasons that Moji agreed to participate in this sort of exam: the first being that the only way to protect his village was to advance to genin, with the second reason being that the two he was supposed to fight were not close to him.

The first fight was a relatively simple one. Moji's opponent was made quick work with by using the kikaichu's spindle formation to strike the opponent repetitively, distracting him. Moji used this opportunity to use the double suicide decapitation technique to confine his opponent within the ground. The fight was over before even a minute had passed and Moji's opponent was disqualified, unable to graduate. The second fight was a bit more difficult, causing Moji to use much more of his arsenal. This fight took much longer, wearing both fighters down to the point of mere exhaustion. The only reason that Moji had won was because his kikaichu drained a good portion of his opponents chakra. The exam proctor congratulated Moji and left him on the top of the volcano to enjoy the view and rest.

Since then, Moji has been training and preparing for the day that his first mission will call him out into duty.

Roleplay Sample:
This is something I posted on another RP site
Spoiler:


THE ARSENAL
Jutsu:
Academy Jutsu:
Kumogakure Specific:
Aburame Clan Jutsu:
Earth Release:
Wind Release:
Taijutsu:

Weapons/Items:
Kits:

Scrolls:


FACE CLAIM
Character Claim: Kirito Kazuto
Source: Sword Art Online
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PostSubject: Re: Aburame, Mojirishu [Kumogakure Genin] Aburame, Mojirishu [Kumogakure Genin] EmptyWed 19 Feb 2014, 12:32 pm

  • Please expand your combat section to 250 at minimum.
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Edited, sir
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  • There are a number of spelling and grammatical errors around the app. Once these are done then I will see no reason not to approve you.
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Sorry about that. I think it's good now
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Alright approved ½.
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I noticed just a few minor things:

- Origin is supposed to be country not village.

- Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind: there is a broken code within this jutsu.

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Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Genin Kit
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Contents:[/b] 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].

This is the kit you are supposed to start with.
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Origin has been fixed
Broken code has been foxed
Kit has been changed
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2/2 approved.

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Archived due to inactivity and failure to complete the activity check..
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