Weaponry Jutsu

Age : 33 Posts : 718

Name: Zoku Gaku - Thief Shock
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Range: 0m
Element: Raiton
Description: The name of this attack is a play on words when translated to english. The "shock" being mental rather than the electric one this technique provides. If anyone grabs the users weapon they can send a swift surge of raiton chakra through the weapon to shock them. This will not paralyze an opponents entire body, but the muscles in their hand will spasm and constrict the moment they are shocked. After the raiton the hand will be numb, but generally unharmed.
Chakra Cost: 3cp

Name: Namisen - Wave Flash
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Range: 0m-5m
Element: Raiton
Description: This weaponry technique can be performed with any weapon made of conductive material that possess a blade edge. The user builds raiton chakra and then condenses it along a sharpened weapon edge. This will cause the blade to shine brightly as arcs of electricity gather along the edge. The gathered charge will lash out from the blade edge in a two dimensional fan of lightning. This fan of lightning is a shocking attack meant to numb opponents while leaving minor burns.
Chakra Cost: 7cp

Name: Tsukamu Shio - Capturing Tide
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Range: 3m
Element: Suiton
Description: This weaponry technique can only be performed if there is an existing source of water and the weapon being used possesses a blunt edge as most single-edged weapons do. After passing the weapon through a water source a current follows the blunt edge. During the users next attack the current of water following the blunt edge of the weapon will reach out with 2 tendrils of water that can extend up to 3 meters. If these tendrils catch a target, the water currents will converge and pull the trajectory of the weapon itself into them. It is a technique created to help catch evasive targets with slower weapons but it is only good for one use before control over the water is lost. It should be noted that if the currents pull the weapon out of reach that the user is capable of then it is possible to disarm yourself by accident. If the user's weapon is removed from their grip the technique will end.
Chakra Cost: 7cp

Age : 37 Posts : 2201

Name: Zoku Gaku - Thief Shock: I'd like it if you changed this technique (seeing that it is only D rank) into the effects of minor shocking, leading to either/or minor cramping of the hand and numbness. (the opponent would not be 'stuck' to your weapon and there would be no burning or mentioning of Endurance SC).

Name: Namisen - Wave Flash: Please fix the range of this attack (go with the site's default setting of Close 0 - 5, Mid 5 - 10 or Long 10 +) You have to choose between having the sharpening of the weapon or the lightning based attack. Also, such a low rank Raiton technique should not be able to stun an opponent but rather numb the area struck, making it more difficult and awkward to move around and perform attacks.

Name: Tsukamu Shio - Capturing Tide: Fix the range here also please. Increase the Chakra cost and reduce it down to 2 tendrils. Also if the user looses hold of his weapon, the technique should end; please make a note of that.

Age : 33 Posts : 718

All changes made.

Age : 37 Posts : 2201

Name: Namisen - Wave Flash: Please remove the burning part as this is only a C rank jutsu.

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

Considering Mugen is leaving the site, this shit can probably be archived. Right?

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

Adam wrote:: Considering Mugen is leaving the site, this shit can probably be archived. Right?

I guess his character and everything related to his character is supposed to be archived.

Age : 37 Posts : 2201

Archived.