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Hitei[Denial]
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| Subject: Kyosei, Hoshi [WiP] Mon 08 Sep 2014, 4:03 pm | |
| Kyosei, Hoshi.THE INFO. Name: Hoshi Kyosei
Nickname: Sadachi's White Dwarf: A name used in mocking by those Kyosei aware of his existence and significance. Hoshi means 'star', a name chosen in anticipation of his potential for greatness, due entirely to his outstanding pedigree. Hoshi's most striking features are his remarkably short stature and pure white hair. A combination of these features, in reference to the complete failure Hoshi turned out to be, created his nickname. 'White Dwarf', a prefix for a star that is also known scientifically as a 'Degenerate Dwarf', is, by the account's of those who coined this name, very fitting for the immense disappointment that Hoshi turned out to be. Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance: Hoshi tends to stand out from the crowd, if one can spot him. His most evident feature is his remarkably short height. Standing at 4’3” Hoshi could easily be called a ‘dwarf’ or ‘midget’. This short height, however, is not due to the traditional growth defect known as ‘dwarfism’. Rather, Hoshi suffers from ‘Osteogenesis Imperfecta’ or ‘Brittle Bones Disease’. This is, in most ways, an even worse condition, Hoshi’s bones break with incredible ease. To a degree, Hoshi’s body had adjusted to the condition, with his bones healing at an outstanding rate. Secondary effects of this disease are evident in Hoshi’s reduced muscular tone, especially when compared to other Shinobi. Hoshi possesses a muscular structure only slightly better than that of an average civilian. This is due to the reduced amount of training caused by his easily broken bones, and further accentuated by the nature of his Kekkei Genkai.
In terms of facial features, Hoshi would, more or less, possess the typical qualities of his clan’s noble families, if it weren’t for his albinism. The albino Hoshi has striking, pure white hair, which he generally allows to grow as long as possible without being considered ridiculous. All of Hoshi’s hair is white, including facial hair and eyebrows. Hoshi also possesses the typical, light red eyes of an albino, with his sclera being tainted a very faint, light blue from his Brittle Bones Disease. While the white hair is beyond his control, Hoshi uses a special pair of contact lenses to make his eyes appear brown and hide the blue tinge in his sclera. Albino features aside, Hoshi’s facial features are well defined and make him seem rather more mature than he actually is. This feature is typical of his clan’s noble families.
In terms of clothing, Hoshi maintains the clan tradition of shunning casual clothing. Instead, Hoshi always wears a functional combat outfit. At its most simple, Hoshi’s outfit consists a simple, brown pair of pants and shirt. On the torso are thin metallic plates fastened with leather belts and hugging very close to his body. While these plates break very easy and serve no function as armour, they help to secure Hoshi’s bones from impacts during strenuous activity. Hoshi also wears thick leather boots that fit over his entire lower legs. Finally, Hoshi wears a simple, red bandana, tied around his neck, which he has a habit of pulling up to cover his mouth.
Forehead Protector: Worn around Hoshi's left arm as a sort of wrist guard.
Personality:
Unconfident: Hoshi's entire personality is underpinned by a distinct unease and uncertainty. In most situations he will often be lost in thought in the process of trying to figure out what to do. Even when Hoshi does decide on a course of action, he usually tends to be unsure as to whether or not it was the correct thing to do.
This is due, in part, to a very polarized and unique viewpoint he has that is almost beyond his comprehension. A particular set of very powerful experiences have caused Hoshi to jump to unique conclusions about the nature of life. These beliefs are, in a way, beyond him, in that they have been founded without the necessary experience. Hoshi's realm of experience is very narrow, making him immature in a way. As such, his beliefs often fail to be consistently applied to most situations.
Due to his unique beliefs causing internal conflict on the correct course of action, Hoshi is forced to constantly second guess himself. Because of this he has developed a deep lack of confidence.
Stubborn: In almost polar opposition to his under confidence, Hoshi is particularly stubborn on some matters. In terms of his core beliefs and ideals, Hoshi adamantly refuses to change himself. Because of this, logical scrutinization of his beliefs often fall on deaf ears.
At a time, this stubbornness might have been a powerful determination. However, the trauma that Hoshi has suffered twisted this determination into his bitter stubbornness. The confidence and optimism that are characteristic of determination have been mostly removed from Hoshi. They were replaced with cold, unrelenting willpower that acts as a fundamental force in Hoshi’s personality.
It is this unyielding stubbornness that keeps Hoshi alive. Amongst his fierce adherence to his beliefs is his powerful urge to survive. This survival instinct is the main mechanism through which Hoshi is capable of surviving the unique circumstances created by his Kekkei Genkai.
Independent: Hoshi’s primary ideal is one of independence. Hoshi will, in general, refuse to get help from others. He defines this as despising the idea of relying on others at their burden. Hoshi has a powerful belief that he must sustain himself by his own strength alone, and that those who rely on others are simply parasites. This self-reliance is particularly focused towards his Kekkei Genkai, which he adamantly refuses to use as he fears growing dependent on it and sees it as strength that is not his own.
The source of this resolve to maintain strict independence is the most evident result of the most traumatic event in Hoshi’s life. During a 3 month period, Hoshi was immobilized and on the brink of death. Due to particular circumstances, his survival required the sacrifice of 33 people. Hoshi, who at the time had developed the ideal that all people had a right to survive, saw this as a complete violation of that ideal. It was through this situation that Hoshi developed the belief that all forms of relying on others is, by nature, parasitic. This belief further developed into his stark refusal to receive help.
Bitter: Hoshi’s outlook on the world is dominated by a distinct bitterness. A result from the trauma and unfair circumstances he has gone through. He will often take a pessimistic or cynical approach to situations, and has a habit for dark humour and offensive jokes. He often comes across as disrespectful to his superiors, and uncaring to his peers. Hoshi also has a tendency for petty arguments and holding grudges.
33 lives: Hoshi’s only ambition is to atone for the 33 lives that were sacrificed for his life. He believes that, until he has made up for the 33 lives he took by saving 33 lives, he will be unworthy of living his own life. This objective is solid and unyielding, Hoshi is entirely devoted to it. It is through this goal that Hoshi avoids the immense feeling of guilt that should have come from such a large breach of his ideals of independence.
The number currently stands at 33, for each life Hoshi saves, it will be reduced by one. For each life Hoshi undeservingly takes, it will be increased by one. Hoshi defines an undeserving life taken as a life being taken for his own benefit without him doing anything to deserve it, such as fighting for it.
Clan: The Kyosei Clan
Nindō: "I refuse to live my life as nothing but a parasite. I will prosper and thrive by my own strength alone".
THE NINJA. Origin: Sadachi Island (The Minor Nations)
Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Specialities: Weaponry/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Wind/Lightning
Combat Style:
The best way to simply describe Hoshi's combat style would be, desperate yet cautious, chaotic yet graceful. When fighting other ninja Hoshi's various defects put him at a severe disadvantage, often forcing him to use unorthodox means of attack and exploit every weakness and opportunity to it's fullest.
Due to Hoshi's bone defects, even a glancing hit from other ninja could end the battle if Hoshi is not prepared. If Hoshi were to receive a straight punch without any sort of preparation, it would likely break all bones in the area of contact and fracture many others. It's not just enemy attacks that could break Hoshi's bones though. Generally any rapid acceleration or deceleration can fracture or break his bones. In other words, great care must be taken in dodging. The strain placed on the bones both when leaping away from an attack, and landing from said leap, have the potential to break Hoshi's bones.
Over the years Hoshi has developed his own countermeasures to this condition. First would be learning to utilize his small stature and light weight. An opponent of Hoshi's size is rare in the ninja world, and consequentially, most opponents have a hard time adjusting to the quirks of fighting a dwarf. In most cases, excessive dodging is not needed for Hoshi to evade an attack. His small frame means that he can often simply move slightly to dodge an incoming attack. Secondly, and most importantly, Hoshi has created a unique ninjutsu to soften impacts on his bones. 'Hone Makura' or 'Bone Pillow' allows Hoshi to cushion his bones from the strain of moving quickly. Thirdly, over the years Hoshi has fine tuned his own movements to reduce damage to his bones. This is most evidently seen through Hoshi's fluid, almost graceful movement, avoiding sharp changes of speed and direction. Hoshi will tend to allow himself to roll upon landing from a leap, even a small one. He changes direction most commonly by allowing himself to pivot on the balls of his feet in a circular motion. With necessary care taken into his motions, along with his Bone Pillow jutsu, Hoshi can greatly reduce the risk to his bones when evading enemy attacks.
Hoshi's other debilitating condition is that his chakra system is, in a way, limited. The condition has never been professionally, medically observed, meaning that it is not well understood. However, it's effects are obvious. It seems as if Hoshi's chakra system has a limit to how much can pass through it at once. While this limit can, too some extent, be broken, it results in immense pain for Hoshi, eventually forcing him to pass out. At the moment Hoshi has no way around this disadvantage. It severely limits the amount of jutsu he can perform at once, especially when he is using Bone Pillow.
While Hoshi does adamantly refuse to use his Kekkei Genkai, it is conceivable that a situation could compel him to make an exception. The Kyokey, the most evident component of the Kyosei's Kekkei Genkai, is an appendage grown out of the body and detached to be used as a weapon. The exact shape of this weapon greatly varies from person to person, in Hoshi's case it takes the form of a spear. The spear is both light weight and durable, and can be used to great effect by Hoshi, using his small size and agility to dart around the opponent searching for an opportunity to impale them. The more subtle component of Hoshi's Kekkei Genkai is his Kyokai. The Kyokai is a symbiotic organism that is responsible for the creation of the Kyokey. In Hoshi's case the Kyokai has become independent, or, 'vagrant'. This means that it is capable of exercising it's own predatory instinct over Hoshi. In battle, if Hoshi uses his Kyokey the connection between him and his Kyokai improves. In general this makes Hoshi significantly more ruthless, and imbues him with a primal, fighting instinct.
Special Characteristics:
- Physical:
Name: Miniature Rank: C Type: Physical Prerequisites: User must be relatively small (< 5 feet) Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: User cannot possess any endurance or strength based special characteristics. Description: The user has been born with a naturally small size. A user of this SC has become accustomed to using their small frame to their advantage. The ninja now finds themselves dodging easier and moving quicker, as well as being capable of fitting into small spaces and moving around without much noise.
- Social:
Name: Special Chakra Aura Rank: C Type: Social Based Prerequisites: Some manner of natural quality that makes the user unique compared to other ninja. Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: It is true that many people have vibrant, stunning personalities, and these personalities can give them equally stunning, colourful Chakra. However, in some cases unique, natural qualities can create an even more unique kind of Chakra aura. These qualities can range from unique genetics that alter an auras appearance, to natural defects in the Chakra system that can make the aura appear strange an uneven. Qualities: In Hoshi's natural state his Chakra aura consists of thin, soft red lines. These lines radiate outwards from Hoshi at varying lengths, and are few and far between. When Hoshi uses his Kyokey, this aura is overpowered by a new aura. The new aura is thick, and pure black, flowing around Hoshi's body at a vigorous pace.
- Afflictions:
Name: Brittle Bones Disease Rank: A Range: Personal Description: The ninja that possesses this affliction suffers from Osteogenesis Imperfecta, or Brittle Bones Disease. While the effects of this affliction are many and can vary from case to case, the most obvious effects are common to all. The afflicted ninja will find that their bones break with remarkable ease, and that a reduced bone strength has resulted in them being physically limited in how large they can grow. Long-Term Effects: In the long term the afflicted ninja will be incapable of growing beyond 5 feet tall at the very most. And in most cases a limit to training intensities means that they are incapable of building significant muscle mass. Word Count Requirement: 1600 words
Name: Chakra system limits Rank: C Range: Personal Description: The afflicted ninja has been born with a defect Chakra system. This defect limits the amount of chakra that can be used at once. In a single post, if the afflicted ninja uses more than 5 CP, they will begin to feel significant discomfort. Beyond 10 CP and they will begin to suffer immense pain. If 15 CP or more is used in a single post then the afflicted ninja will pass out in pain. The user will, unless they receive assistance, naturally awake 2 posts later. Word Count Requirement: 600 words
Name: Vagrant Kyokai Rank: S Range: Personal Description: An affliction only available to those possessing the Kekkei Genkai of the Kyosei. A Kyokai is a symbiotic organism that lives inside the host. The natural state of a Kyokai is that of a vicious predator, and due to the mental link between a Kyokai and it's host, combined with the Kyokai's immense, singular willpower, this can be extremely harmful to the host. Fortunately, in most cases the natural instinct of a Kyokai is suppressed through various means.
In the case of the afflicted ninja, these means have failed, and the Kyokai has become that which is known as a vagrant. In this state the ninja is under nearly constant mental assault by the Kyokai. With due focus and experience, this mental assault can be tuned out. However, if the ninja breaks their focus for too long, they can become susceptible to visual and auditory hallucinations, severe headaches, feelings of immense dread, and other mental afflictions until their focus is regained. These mental assaults are for the purpose of breaking the users will.
If the user looses their will to live and surrenders to the Kyokai, their conciousness is dissolved and the Kyokai assumes control of the hosts body. If this happens, the Kyokai will slowly begin to reconstruct the host body into a more efficient killing tool (using similar methods to that which it uses to construct the Kyokey) . At the same time, the Kyokai will mercilessly hunt and attempt to kill any nearby humans. A host who has surrendered to the Kyokai will operate at their current rank for the duration of the thread, if allowed to survive, they will be considered one rank higher (unless S rank) and will hunt and kill until stopped. Once the users conciousness has dissolved they are by all means dead with no chance of recovery.
Long-Term Effects: If the afflicted ninja survives with a vagrant Kyokai, it is unlikely for them to remain mentally sound. The need for constant focus at the threat of severe mental torture can have any number of effects on the users psyche. It is unlikely for this effect to be a positive one Word Count Requirement: 2000 words
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| Subject: Re: Kyosei, Hoshi [WiP] Wed 10 Sep 2014, 2:59 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Kyosei, Hoshi [WiP] Sun 09 Nov 2014, 9:13 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Kyosei, Hoshi [WiP] Fri 14 Nov 2014, 6:08 am | |
| It is now, I think, sorry for the absence |
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| Are you still working on this application? |
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