Katsumi wrote:

Name: Black II Kuro
Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai | Custom Weapon Alteration
Description: The replicated item will appear matt black in color. When fighting in dim areas (dusk, night, blacked out rooms, etc) it becomes difficult to for an opponent to gauge the exact dimensions of the weapon. Characters without keen perception will have their evasiveness SC reduced by one rank when facing this alteration. (Characters with keen perception are unaffected by this jutsu.)
Chakra Cost: + 3 (one time cost)

Take out anything in the jutsu that mentions the decreasing of the evasiveness SC. As you cant really reduce the skills of another person in this manner. Anyone can find and dodge a technique or weapon, there just needs to be a reasonable and realistic way of doing it.

Katsumi wrote:

Name: Transparent II Tōmeina
Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai | Custom Weapon Alternation
Description: The replicated item is completely transparent. This is not to be confused with invisibility; the item can still be seen because it reflects light in a similar fashion to glass.  When fighting in well-lit areas (daylight or well-lit rooms) it becomes difficult for opponents to gauge the exact dimension of the weapon. Characters without keen perception will have their evasiveness SC reduced by one rank when facing this alteration. (Characters with keen perception are unaffected by this jutsu.)
Chakra Cost: + 3 (one time cost)

Wouldn't if you had this one approved it would technically have the same effect as the first technique? If you make a "transparent" weapon in dark areas it would serve for the same purpose as the "Black II Kuro" technique. This technique basically could work through the day as well as the dark areas. I guess you can take out the first technique and simply provide a little more description on this one. You will also save some AF

But if you still wish to make them separate then I have the same comment for this one just like the other regarding the evasiveness.

Also the chakra cost for C rank techniques are as follow. (5-9) Edit the chakra cost to that range. (Same with the first technique)

Katsumi wrote:

Name: False Eye Technique II Nise no Doujutsu
Rank: D
Type: Eijutus
Description: After forming the boar handsel Sora concentrates chakra behind his retinas. This causes the cells to generating a tapetum lucidum. It takes half a post for the tapetum lucidum to fully form. As a result he is able to see in very low light (night, caves, etc) with the same visual acuity as if it were midday. It is not the chakra that cause this ability but rather the cells that are generated. As a result it’s a one-time cost to activate and last indefinitely provided chakra is supplied to keep the cells alive.  Direct light will not harm Sora's eyes to any greater extent than normal, however, it will cause his eyes to glow luminescent silver potentially giving away his location.
Chakra Cost: 5 activation, 1 per post.

Fix the chakra cost. I am assuming it will affect if you are exposed to any strong lighting? If not then please add it. And have a 1 post downtime before you regain your vision back.

Chakra Cost Chart Per Rank:

One last thing, since you said you actually need to use chakra to keep your weapons that you create built or constructed you need to add an unkeep cost per post for the techniques regarding your KKG. As every technique regarding the built of weapons nad handling them in the future will require a cost to keep maintained if you desire to hold onto them if you prefer the use the weapon in another situation.(This makes it more than a "one time thing" therefore it should require an unkeep cost to maintain the weapons created.