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Captain Konoha
Age : 32 Posts : 1912
| Subject: Bargaining. Tue 07 Oct 2014, 2:35 pm | |
| Because the Elementalist is a dead-end for Yoroi as he can never advance it beyond what it is now, I decided to switch it with another SC, this one:
- Medical Chief:
Name: Experienced Medic Nin Rank: B Type: Skill Based Prerequisites: Must Specialize in Eijutsu Training: A 1200 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: - Description: A trait possessed by medical ninja whose wishes to improve their healing ability with further Training and acquiring more knowledge in the medical field. After much Training the medical ninja becomes more experienced and gains greater knowledge in the art of eijutsu. The potency of their eijutsu control means that the cost of each Eijutsu technique is reduced by 20% (rounded up), as well as allowing them to heal at a quicker rate and more efficiently. They gain a skill which allows them to identify a persons illness from a general observation which makes them good in determining what parts of the body must be healed to ensure patient survivability. From continuous knowledge in poisons and pathogens the medic also can instantly identify and create medicine for B-Rank Poisons with proper supplies.
Name: Medical Chief Rank: A Type: Skill Based Prerequisites: Must have Experienced Medical Nin Training: A 2000 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: - Description: An ability acquired to highly experienced medical ninja whose power in healing could be considered legendary. Through intensive Training and studying the medical ninja has attained near superhuman knowledge of the medical field which includes but not limited to; anatomy, biology, chemistry and toxicology. With their now flawless chakra control and vast knowledge of Eijutsu, the cost of each Eijutsu technique is reduced by 40% (rounded up), as well as allowing them to rapidly heal wounds and heal through injuries others would deem impossible. They can identify injuries a person possesses from a single glance and can treat them accordingly. From their knowledge of poisons the medical ninja now has enough skill to create antidotes for virtually any poison given a sample and proper supplies.
Because I already wrote 1600 words for Elementalist, it would cool if I could write 1600 words to get A ranked Medical Chief.
2000 + 1200 = 3200 - 1600 = 1600 words
The math checks out~
If everything is Okay, this will be removed from the app.
Name: Elementalist Rank: A Type: Chakra Based Description: Elementalists are ninja that have chosen to become proficient with elemental ninjutsu. Through training and a natural talent in nature affinity elementalist ninja are able to access three elements instead of two. This allows for more powerful technique's and varied combinations keeping their opponents on their toes.
- Jutsu I will lose:
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)
Name: Chidori | One Thousand Birds Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: Raiton Description: After performing numerous hand seals, the user will proceed to draw their dominant arm out, and begin condensing large amounts of Raiton chakra into the hand. The high concentration of chakra will create a chirping sound reminiscent of a chorus of one thousand birds; exactly where the name of this jutsu was derived from. The chakra also glows white and blue with several electrical tendrils extending from it in a random pattern, reminiscent of a ball of electricity. After stabilizing this electrical charge, the user must then proceed to charge at high speeds toward the target, in hopes of landing a perfect hit on them. Because it is essentially a straight-line charge, the user may have a difficult time landing this technique from afar, but should it hit, it could potentially win the battle in sheer power. A single strike will also stun the target for a single post, allowing the user to execute a follow-up technique to ensure a clean assassination. The main flaw in this technique is; that though it is very powerful; it is fairly easy to avoid. So simple, that a ninja of equal rank could succeed. This technique requires the Flash Speed Special Characteristic. Chakra Cost: 35 [5 per post] Price Tag: 50 EXP + Administrative Approval & Training Topic.
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| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: Bargaining. Wed 08 Oct 2014, 9:02 pm | |
| You are most welcomed to change the SC's.
However I am afraid that seeing as you are opting yourself to change the SC's, and therefore dropping the Elementalist one, that we are not obliged to reduce the word count for training of the SC you'd like to focus on instead. Also, we do not believe you have the right to be refunded for techniques that you will be dropping along with the SC.
If the Elementalist SC was to be dropped from the site and you were therefore forced to change, we would of course be way more lenient towards this. However, that is not the fact.
If this is alright, then Medical Chief is approved for training and the changes to the app will be done after the training is done and the SC will be added to your application. |
| | | Captain Konoha
Age : 32 Posts : 1912
| Subject: Re: Bargaining. Thu 09 Oct 2014, 1:31 pm | |
| I opted to change the SC because since I got it, the SC changed. There used to be the chance for me to build it out to a Kekkei Tota or a Kekkei Genkai, though that changed the moment Zack got his Ice release and got people thinking "Should that guy really get a Hiden and a Kekkei Genkai?". I myself had Explosion release for a while, though that got taken away too. With the constant changing, I had been waiting around to see if there was more I could do with it, though that was not the case and it is basically a dead-end SC for me now.
Aside from that, there is also the fact that the Nerfs and the jutsu that were taken away were a good deal of my lightning jutsu and I am now stuck with two jutsu. Since the Nerfing has forced me to completely revise my character or accept the role of "Weakest Kage in History", I would think that people would be more inclined to some leniency on the matter as it was more or less forced and not as much a choice of sorts. |
| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: Bargaining. Thu 09 Oct 2014, 6:44 pm | |
| Tbh then Elementalist is still a viable SC, which has not been changed at all by the way, and therefore we don't see a reason for refunding these two techniques. Sorry about that, but that's how the verdict stands. |
| | | Hiruzen
Age : 32 Posts : 1178
| Subject: Re: Bargaining. Thu 09 Oct 2014, 11:26 pm | |
| Fine, just do it as it is now. There have been changes because there wasn't always the need for an Advanced Element in order to get a Kekkei Tota, that was added in later, so it has changed. The point behind me getting it had always been the eventual Kekkei Tota, though that became a dead-end. While the Elementalist hasn't changed, the prerequisites for KKT have, so saying nothing changed is just not true. In any case, I've lost enough to this fucking nerf and built up too much shit to let these constant dick-punches by staff set me back. Never mind the refunds and just approve the SC's please. |
| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: Bargaining. Fri 10 Oct 2014, 12:05 am | |
| - MsMoney wrote:
- Medical Chief is approved for training and the changes to the app will be done after the training is done and the SC will be added to your application.
If you weren't too busy worrying about how I am 'dick-punching' you, then you'd have noticed I already did approve of this training. So go ahead. |
| | | Hiruzen
Age : 32 Posts : 1178
| Subject: Re: Bargaining. Fri 10 Oct 2014, 12:08 am | |
| I wasn't talking about you, I was talking about the entirety, but thanks for approving. |
| | | lifeanddeath
Age : 31 Posts : 1490
| Subject: Re: Bargaining. Mon 08 Dec 2014, 11:30 pm | |
| Archived given the obvious new character. |
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