Yuki, Kirito [Kumogakure/Genin]

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Yuki, Kirito.

THE INFO.

Name: Yuki, Kirito
Nickname: Black Swordsman
Age: Eleven Years Old
Gender: Male
Appearance: Kirito consisted of black pants with a black belt that had a large silver buckle, a black V-necked shirt that was worn underneath a black trench-coat with gray lining going down the sleeves and black boots with silver plates to protect his shins. He has a silver plate worn on his coat, which was on his left side, and a pair of black fingerless gloves. He wears a strap, that goes over his right shoulder and under it to wrap around his left side, that holds at first just his Elucidator and then his Dark Repulser as well. Kirito it's 5,7 feet tall and weights 125 lbs he had a build body for a young kid because of his swordsmanship training. He is light skin teenager and his eyes are black like his attire. He has two tattoos, one half sleeve and a back tattoo this tattoo on his back is a tribal of two dragons, and his sleeves is made up of several skulls, and black glove that cover his hand tattoo and other one in the opponent hand so they would look good.
Some times he wears sewn pale blue short-sleeved shirt with a V-shaped cut on the chest which was tied with a light brown cord along with trousers and hand-sewn leather shoes.He wears the standard gray uniform, like all first years and non-elite swordsmen do. In the second year of the academy, after he becomes one of the elite swordsmen in the academy and is allowed to choose a color for his uniform, he wears a pitch black uniform.

Forehead Protector: His headband is black like his attire and wears it around his waist like a belt, almost leaning side ways.

Personality: Kirito is someone who is not good with words, as said by Jounins and other Genins, and can be quite direct. This is due to him not having many friends and closing others off because of his love for Swordsmen Ship. As such, he can come off as a rude person to others, such as annoying people. Sometimes, he actually seems to enjoy angering and teasing people as well. Also, from time to time, Kirito can be quite overconfident thinking he can do things others can not.

He is almost always a calm and collected character, rarely showing any signs of distress. He has shown different moods throughout his life; at times being rather cheerful, while being gloomy at others. When in a battle, he becomes incredibly fierce and aggressive. Sometimes, his fierceness is up to the point where he loses control of himself and is even unable to recall what he had done. However, Kirito is actually a kind person who is just misunderstood. Despite what anyone says, he refused to abandon another ninja in trouble. He also comforts others who are scared or down such as Kids.

Kirito is also a very emotional person and lets his emotions control him from time to time. The deaths of Sachi and His Friend had haunted him until his now. Sachi's death in particular had a huge effect on his personality and motives, making him very distant from others for a while. This worries his friends and allies as Kirito is someone who would let guilt ruin his life if not comforted. Kirito temporarily loses his will to live when Asuna's was killed by Heathcliff. He also tries to hide his abilities, not wanting unneeded attention.

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Nindō: "Both my blades will Guide me to understand the true meaning of a true Swordsman"

THE NINJA.

Origin: The Snow Country
Affiliation: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Specialities: Primary: Ninjutsu
Secondary: Weaponry (Primary: Close) (Secondary: Far)
Elemental Affinities: Suiton/Fuuton/Hyōton
Combat Style: Kirito always start a battle using his Swords both Dark Repulser and Elucidator to take control of the battle as he very talented at Weaponry he uses all he can to his advantage. After that he goes to fist combat even if he isn't any good taijutsu he always tries to improve and keep the battle a bit more interesting than just going for the kill in the start of the match. After that process Kirito goes to his ninjutsu attack using his ice release the inquest to finish the job or weak the opponent to another level this gives Kirito the advantage at any given time unless the opponent is high rank or very talented at fighting to keep up with Kirito.

After the fight is done is Kirito has won the battle he would turn his back to the opponent as he would slightly look back at him and tell him to work on his fighting style and if loading Kirito would fall to his knees and look down at the ground as he would wonder what went wrong.
Special Characteristics:
Social Base

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Combat

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THE BACKGROUND.

History: Pre-History

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Academy

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Genin

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Roleplay Sample:

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THE ARSENAL.

Weapon/Items:

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Hyōto Techniques:

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Suiton Techniques:

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Name: Ninpou; Mizu Hari - Water Needles
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m~10m)
Village: Kirigakure
Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. This jutsu does not require hand seals in order to activate. After activation, the user will cause the materialization of up to eight senbon needles made from water that is sourced from the environment or a nearby source of water. These senbon can be thrown as senbon, and share the exact same weight, and length to senbon, as well as sharpness. These senbon, however, are unable to withstand temperatures that normal metal could withstand, and thus are evaporated when struck by fire ninjutsu of the C rank or higher, due to the heat of flame.
Chakra Cost: 3

Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
Element: -
Village: Kirigakure
Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. After forming the needed hand seal, the user will place their hand over their head and cause a large amount of mist to gather. This mist is extremely difficult to see through from someone not of Kirigakure, who are used to looking through heavy mists, and are more able to do combat while within said mist. The jutsu involves kneading chakra into the mist, allowing the user to create extremely thick or thin levels of mist. Those with doujutsu or chakra sensing techniques are also able to see through this thick mist but without any aid, then you'll be blind within the mist. A C-Rank Fuuton Jutsu can dispel the mists.
Chakra Cost: 4 (2CP)

Name: Ninpou; Fugu Tate - Puffer Fish Shield
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Village: Kirigakure
Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will cause a fast acting shield of water to be drawn and created from a nearby water source; if there is enough moisture in the air, they will be able to complete it with that alone. The shield can defend numerous people and is very durable. The shield takes the form of a sphere that wraps around those it is protecting. Because of the shield's form, it divvies the weight and force of incoming attacks along the whole surface, thus making it extremely durable. Piercing jutsu are strong against this jutsu, as long as they are of the same rank or higher than this defensive ninjutsu. More blunt forces are highly ineffective. Taijutsu attacks are rendered almost completely useless, unless they are used at a B rank level, and focus their attack to one area, like a piercing attack, such as a punch or kick. Earth ninjutsu are able to break through this shield at the D rank due to elemental weaknesses and strengths.
Chakra Cost: 7

Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: In order to use this technique, the user must first be on top of water (lake, sea, etc). Then, after preforming the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below. This can possibly drown the opponent.
Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post)

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can travel no further than 10 meters from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert back into its natural water state.
Chakra Cost: 7
Restrictions:

No weapons, armor, or equipment can be replicated to have above C-rank quality.
Replicated explosive notes, explosive kunai, explosive senbon, and exploding pouches are inert and cannot be set off.

Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a solid bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Chakra Cost: 9 (2 per post)

Name: Water Release: Water Drowning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles.
Chakra Cost: 5 (1 per post)

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FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Kirito
Source: Sword Art Online
Image URL: http://swordartonline.wikia.com/

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To start, you have weaponry as one of your specialties. Yet, you did not specify what two ranges you specialize in. You can chose one as your dominant and one as your recessive with the former gives you access to jutsu to your rank while the latter will be a rank lower. So in the case of having Kenjutsu techniques, your Dominant range would be Close. It is up to you to choose which one can be your recessive.

Upon applying, you can only have one combat special characteristic and one social characteristic. Choose which one you want to start off with then apply for the second SC later.

You can also add in "Hyouton" to your elements because you are applying for the Yuki clan.

Please add a bit more detail to your combat style. Try to aim for at least 150 words if you can.

Judging from the character appearance, you're using Kirito from Sword Art Online. Sword Art Online would be the source. You'll also need to link where you got the image as well.

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Please expand appearance to at least 250 words. Add things such as his physical features as well. Facial features, eye color, height, weight.

Also have a minimum of 250 to personality. be creative with this part. Possibly describe what kind of situations he shows his different moods, or why he has them. Also possibly going a little more in depth in the things you have already stated.

Also, you are only allowed one combat and on Social SC on your application and you currently have 2 combats. please change one two a Social Sc.

Could you please also separate the jutsu by element/specialty? Such as Suiton in one spoiler and Fuuton in another as you did with the Hyoton. You also currently have 12 jutsu, you could add 3 more if you wish

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Alright I have more than 250 for Personality and Appearnce so that shouldn't be a problem no more and I fixed my Sc so that shouldn't be a problem neither or my tech inquest they are all sepereated to there own list so I should just be ready for approval

Age : 93 Posts : 369

Everything looks good besides the Special Characteristics. Let me explain it more thoroughly. As a starting Genin, you are allowed one combat sc and one social. The following categories fall under combat:
Physical Based
Chakra Based
Mental Based
SKill Based

You can select one of the SC from these categories. After you are approved, you can go on to train two more. Refer Here for more info.

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Age : 31 Posts : 1900

Copy and paste the Academy Jutsu into your app. Add them into a spoiler. Here. These techniques are "free" in the sense that they do not count towards your allowed 15 so there is no need to delete any techniques while you're at it.
You're allowed to add more D/C Weapons and Equipment. Are you sure you do not wish to? There are various tools and such in the Encyclopedia.
Finally, add the basic Genin kit (or one of the other c-rank kits) found here. This includes your kunai, shuriken, etc.

I'll give you a 1/2 approval once you do (unless someone gets to it first)