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Akki
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| Subject: Tetsuo,Akki [kumo genin] Thu 11 Dec 2014, 9:20 pm | |
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Tetsuo Akki
THE INFO. Name:Akki Irithena Tetsuo Nickname: Age:14 Gender:Female Appearance: Akki stands at just under 4ft and 3 inches. She has long blue hair that stretches all the way past he backside. Akki's eyes are a piercing blue or the right one is the left is a milky white stained with red due to being blind in that eye.
Akki is slim built with lean muscle. Some would say she is quite pretty or quite cute. Akki tends to dress rather skimpily wearing a low cut top and small shorts. She has sleevers covering her arms which are attached to a thin sleeveless cardigan. At times she will wear an eye patch over he blind eye to hide how it really looks.
When in one of her more self consious moods Akki tends to cover up alot more, Donning her eyepatch she couples i err Forehead Protector:Around her neck. Personality:Akki is an odd one at best, most of the time she is confident and somewhat crude and straight forward at other times however Akki draws into herself and looses all her confidence seeming like a different person.
This is mainly due to the fact that her disfigurement will sometimes bother her, she often covers it up with a crude way of acting but on those rare occasions her true self shows through, the scared little girl who hates how she looks and thinks she is worthless to herself and to anybody.
Akki trys not to get involved with anyone for to long a period, she is scared to know people incase they judge her, once again she acts rude around them. Akki is also a habitual smoker and drinker, even though she is only 14 it is her coping mechanism that and it gives her an air of dont mess with me or else, which helps push people. away. ONE thing that is apparent is that Akki has a short fuse and gets angry easily, she says things without first thinking and secretly feels bad about them afterwards. Clan: Nindō:Victory before failure.
THE NINJA. Origin:Kumo streets Affiliation:Kumo Rank:Genin Specialities:Ninjutus,Weaponry (exotic) Elemental Affinities:Water Combat Style: Akki is a close up and personal fighter prefering to be on the front lines and in the enemy's face, she is also more than willing to fight dirty necause there are no rules and no honour on the battefield.
Akki uses a combination of quick Jutsu and duel wield swords while in battle Special Characteristics:- Spoiler:
Code: Name: Street Smarts Rank: C Type: Social Based Prerequisites: - Training: A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: - Description: Being raised in a era of battle and war the ninja has sometimes faced instances where they must gain natural street smarts in order to survive in various situations. Those with this characteristic gains a natural ability of self-preservation which allows them to survive in nearly any society or community by any means necessary. They can hustle Ryo quicker than one could imagine and can hold their own in times of struggle. Ninja with street smarts tend to have a heightened sense of intuition, honor, and fear in their respective communities.
THE BACKGROUND. History: A birth should be a celebrated thing people should laugh and smile but not on this day, twins the Tetsuo's were told and twins they got but only one moved and had life the other wasn't properly formed, one twin had acted a parasite in the womb or so the med ninja said. The birthday of Akki Irithena Tetsuo was not a happy one it was full of sadness and as Akki would find out in years to come resentment.
Akki's parents did their usual parental duties but not out of love out of what became habit, deep down they hated Akki for what had happened, although not really her fault they needed something to blame and she seemed like the easy choice. Growing up wasn't the easiest thing, her parents ignored her at the best of times and she had to learn to fend for herself from an early age. Even as young as 5 years old Akki would almost have to provide for herself making simple meals and cleaning up for herself. Her parents didn't want to be seen with her and it was kept no secret what had happened to Akki's twin sister.
On birthdays as Akki grew up she was never celebrated but instead her sister was mourned. After a while at around 8 Akki withdrew into herself she didn't care anymore and knew no one wanted her. One day as she walked around Kumo she was stopped by a group of boys slightly older than her. Parasite they called her before setting upon her with fists and feet. Akki didn't scream and let it happen she would rather die than live this life anymore. A pain ripped through Akki's head and a warm feeling ran down her face her vision swan until everything went black.
Akki awoke to pain on the left side of her face. She opened her eyes but could only make out light blurs through the right eye. She could overhear the medical ninja talking, stabbed with a kunai they said and blinded were all Akki could make out before the intense pain caused her to black out once again. Akki was soon to find out that her blind eye was the least of her worries, thinking their daughter dead Akki's parents left village without a word leaving her alone. Upon hearing of this Akki fled the hospital even though she wasn't fully healed and readied herself for a life alone and on the streets.
A couple of years passed and Akki had turned to a life of crime, stealing to live and survive, she got in regular fights with other children Akki was now 10 and she wasn't the same little girl who had been in that hospital those 2 years ago, she had taken up smoking and drinking stolen cigarettes and alcohol to cope with he life, she was cold and mostly uncaring although in private she wept. Her hair had been dyed blue and her attitude towards people was not friendly. It was on a routine theft of a local grocers that she was busted by a jounin and dragged away kicking and screaming. It was then she was told she would either do something with her life enroll in the ninja academy or she would do time. Akki didn't want to be locked up so chose to enter the academy this also had a stipulation she would be watched over by the jounin. Akki reluctantly agreed.
As expected academy life wasn't easy everyone had heardbthe whispers about the one eyed girl, it didn't take long before kid started to pick on Akki sometimes she would fight back, sometimes she would run and hide and vanish for a few days coming back with her left eye covered. Akki stuck in though and got through somehow, sje picked up a knack for fighting with dual sword that she found lying about her jounin guardians house.
Finally after hard years,many black eyes and alot of shouting and crying Akki was made a genin, now the hard part began, having to work with others.
Roleplay Sample:The stare all she could feel was the stares, everyone always stared at her, the one day Akki didn't wear her eye patch and the village was bustling with people. She took a deep breath and dug around in the pouch around her waist, he withdrew a small pack of smoke, drew one and lit it. With the first inhale the world was easier to cope with. As she walked to glared at the people around her, she hated it here, hated being alone and disfigured. Mia the jounin she stayed with said she was never alone but if that was true why the stares and the sneers. Yes Akki had a reputation for being rough amd yes she liked to start a fight but deep down Akki just wanted peace and quiet time away from all the people time to herself.
Akki walked slowly looking at the ground, taking regular draws on her smoke, her other hand caressing the hip flash she carried around, she didn't need it right now but it was a comfort knowing it was there. Akki stopped outside a building and slipped her hand into one of her cat claws and detached it from the chord at her waist. She readied herself and lept on hand out stretched, with a thunk the claw embeded itself in the side of the building, Akki theb skillfully pulled herself up to the roof. Ontop she pull out her hip flask and lay back to stare at the sky. This was the peace she craved, this was they way it should be.
THE ARSENAL. Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.
JUTSU
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: his technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
Name:Shi no unten sha no jutsu:- Death driver Jutsu Rank: C Type:Taijutsu Element: None Range:5ft Description:Akki spins around with her right knuckles leading them then jumped forward letting the weight of her cats claws pull her forward if this move hits it can impale anyone who isn't experianced with fighting or can do bunt damage. Chakra cost: 5 [
Name:Shi no kyouda no Jutsu:- Death swipe Jutsu Rank:D Type:Taijutsu Element: N/A Range:1ft Description:Using both cats claws the user will swipe high and low at the opponent trying to catch the knees and and chest area. This move is used to cause bleeding and cutting damage. Chakra cost:2
Name:Shi no kyuushuu no jutsu:- Death pounce Jutsu Rank:C Type:Taijutsu Element:N/A Range:6ft Description:The user while crouch down and pounce on the opponent like a cat would with a mouse or bird driving the cats claws into the opponents chest then biting down on the neck with their teeth trying to tear a chunk from their opponent if used on a weaker opponent or a stunned one it can cause death, on any other type it will take a chunk out of them causing sever bleeding. Chakra cost:6
WEAPONRY
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Name:Neko ha hikisaku:-cat claws Rank: C-S (Depending on users capability and training Akki would be at C rank) Type:Exotic,Close combat hand weapons Appearance: The cat claws are melee weapons . The claws can be used for slicing,stabbing and grouging. While outside of combat they can be used for climbing. They are made for steel folded several times in the same style a Katana would be they are however slightly chunkier than a Katana. The claws are colourd red and gold with silver blades the tops of the blades are colored red. Quantity: 2X claws Storage:Hung on a chord from Akki's belt Special qualities: None
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| | | Reggie Bell-Bottom Jr.
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| Subject: Re: Tetsuo,Akki [kumo genin] Sat 13 Dec 2014, 1:23 am | |
| All righty! Let's get started.
- Origin should be your Country. So if she was raised in Kumogakure, it would be Lightning Country or KAMINARI NO KUNI.
- You have a choice of choosing two specs when it comes to weaponry. In this case, because of your cat claw, it would close range as your dominant. You can have a sub specialty of mid or long range being one rank lower.
- I going to say you're gonna have to add a bit more meat to your combat style and appearance. At least 250 in combat.
- You can have one combat special characteristic
- You can have up to fifteen jutsu. This doesn't count the academy student jutsu.
- -Also, we need to know the picture info.
Now, let's take a look at the current jutsu you have.
I'm going to state right now that all of your custom jutsu should be categorize as weaponry. As of now, you cannot possess Taijutsu.
- Akki wrote:
- Name:Shi no unten sha no jutsu:- Death driver Jutsu
Rank: C Type:Taijutsu Element: None Range:5ft Description:Akki spins around with her right knuckles leading them then jumped forward letting the weight of her cats claws pull her forward if this move hits it can impale anyone who isn't experianced with fighting or can do bunt damage. Chakra cost: 5 I'm confused. How is this doing blunt damage even if the opponent is experienced? The entirety of the 'cats claw' has the ability to slash and pierce (which under the description of the cat's claw, it is made similar to the katana so that's where my assumption is going to.) From the picture, it appears that the only blunt end is the back of the hand. I don't see how that's possible.
- Akki wrote:
- Name:Shi no kyouda no Jutsu:- Death swipe Jutsu
Rank:D Type:Taijutsu Element: N/A Range:1ft Description:Using both cats claws the user will swipe high and low at the opponent trying to catch the knees and and chest area. This move is used to cause bleeding and cutting damage. Chakra cost:2 You need to clarify how much damage you're causing. Right now, saying 'cause bleeding and cutting damage' is being vague and open ended. You'll need to calculate the type of damage a D-rank weaponry technique can do.
- Akki wrote:
- Name:Shi no kyuushuu no jutsu:- Death pounce Jutsu
Rank:C Type:Taijutsu Element:N/A Range:6ft Description:The user while crouch down and pounce on the opponent like a cat would with a mouse or bird driving the cats claws into the opponents chest then biting down on the neck with their teeth trying to tear a chunk from their opponent if used on a weaker opponent or a stunned one it can cause death, on any other type it will take a chunk out of them causing sever bleeding. Chakra cost:6 I almost couldn't understand what this technique could do. But because of the damage this ability can do, I'm going to raise this rank up to B-rank which, currently, you cannot posses. |
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