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Unkalos
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PostSubject: Adashi Clan [Bakuton] Adashi Clan [Bakuton] EmptyMon 22 Dec 2014, 7:25 am

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Clan Name: The Adashi Clan (爆発 Bakuhatsu)
Location: Any.
Signature Traits:
All Members have the mark of there clan some where around there body. Also have have two symbols of explosion in the palm.
Kekkei Genkai:
Explosion Release (爆遁, Bakuton) is an advanced chakra nature created by simultaneously mixing of both, Raiton (Lightning release) and Katon (Fire Release) nature elements. By combining the hazardous and unstable properties of both fire and lightning, the wielder is capable of spawning powerful explosions, that can range from micro-cellular, to macro-nuclear levels. Due to level of monstrosity that it can potentially bring, Bakuton has been noted as being one of the most powerful advanced natures in existence. The Explosion Corp. ranked the Adashi a top-tier clan due to their mastery in the use of the Bakuton nature type despite the few other clans that wielded it. Their uses for it include "charging" objects and people with explosive chakra, shaping their Bakuton chakra in a variety of fashions, and even absorbing the force of other explosions to prevent damage to oneself. Depending on the training of the Adashi clansmen, Bakuton can be applied to a number of specializations to amplify their lethality considerably, with the most common being Taijutsu or Weaponry. This can potentially give rise to an unmatched explosive fighting style that can literally annihilate an enemy with a single punch. Before explosion, the appearance of Bakuton chakra is usually stunning white color, which migrates itself to the surface of the charged object, whether it be a fist, or a weapon. Elite users of the Bakuton art were said to be so powerful, that they were capable of destroying entire villages with higher-end techniques.
History: The Adashi clan were known to be one of the oldest clans in the shinobi world, existing in the late times of the Uchiha and Senju. They were founded by two brothers, both whom possessed the kekkei genkai which allowed them to access the Bakuton element by mixing both their earth and fire chakra types. The brothers lived on Mt. Iyashi which was located near the great mountains of Iwagakure. They resided in a small temple inside the mountain area where they trained intensely to perfect their Ninjutsu. Eventually both boys matured, and left the mountains to embark in a long journey across the villagers to fulfill their thirst of adventure. When reaching the lands of Konoha, they discovered a large clan whom they found much in common with, the Echiha clan. The Adashi brothers grew along with the Echiha, forming the now larger Adashi clan. Both clans existing in a cordial relationship, and they helped each other in whatever battles they encountered. The Echiha aided the Adashi clan in their training, which is how the Adashi became such talented ninja that they are today. During a last battle, the Raishi clan smashed with the Mushiki clan who allied with the Zenju. It was an epic battle of two clans that both possessed advanced element Kekkei Genkai, which ended in many members of both sides being killed. After the war, the Raishi left the Uchiha and fled back to Iwagakure to stabilize their war engulfed life and find some peace in its stone walls. Many elders of the clan possess memories of the battles and prepare the young for the, "Day of Reckoning" which is a conspiracy theory that the Echiha and Benju will once again fight in a epic battle where they will aid the Echiha once again.

After the war, the founders of Iwagakure saw potential in the Adashi clan and devised an alliance with them in hopes of wielding their power. They formed an organization of ANBU operatives called the Explosion Corp., which specialized in explosions and mass destruction. It didn't take long for the Explosion Corp. to become highly feared throughout the neighboring countries. By this time, the Adashi clan had branched into a few other small clans that specialized in their own use of explosions, with the main branch still being the most elite. In recent years, upon the destruction of Konoha, and the recent war, some members of the Adashi clan have migrated to other villages for their own personal needs. Some being spies for Iwagakure, while others taking this opportunity to leave the village once and for all.
Clan Jutsu:
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PostSubject: Re: Adashi Clan [Bakuton] Adashi Clan [Bakuton] EmptyTue 23 Dec 2014, 8:19 am

First off, please do not bump your app. If there are no replies to an application after 48 hours, you can post here, but otherwise, you need to be patient.

General: Due to the nature of this clan, if it is to be approved, it will be up to administration to approve people (and deny) people for this clan.

Additionally, after reading over the jutsu, Trey and I have agreed that the Bakuton techniques should be limited to straightforward explosions: from the body, or through charging objects. For this reason, techniques like Discharge Bolts and Giga Ball cannot be approved as they are.

Also, we do have damage ratings for explosions that scale according to the damage of exploding tags. Thus, it would be appreciated if you could reflect the damage done by the techniques in these terms. You do need to be more mindful of the damage for each rank of the technique, as though explosion release is meant to be strong, some of the things I've seen here should be bumped up in rank.

Signature Traits: Everything you have here should be listed under kekkei Genkai.  The signature traits section is for things like the Uchiha's black hair, the Inuzuka fangs, etc.

Kekkei Genkai: See above.

Denka [Explosion Release: Charge]: First, I'd have to require touch to be used for this technique. Ranged charging is too much. Second, you mention requiring more chakra for this depending on the objects charged. I'd recommend turning it into a scaling technique and dictating which types of objects can be used at each rank, thus the chakra cost would vary for each level or use. Also specify how long the charge lasts / how long it takes for the object to detonate.

Kyūshū [Explosion Release: Absorption]: This should have a reduced range. More along the lines of contact range.

Jiraiken [Explosion Release: Landmine Fist]: Since an explosion inplies that force goes in all directions, you cannot single out one direction for this. While it would be acceptable to focus the force of the explosion in a single direction, there would still be force moving outward. Thus a small recoil

Hōden boruto [Explosion Release: Discharge Bolts]: See General.

Giga Bōru [Explosion Release: Giga Ball]: See General.

Senbon Sempuku [Explosion Release: Senbon Ambush]: See General.

Bakuton: Nagare [Explosion Release: Explosion Stream]: The explosion requires some sort of noticeable build up, and 15m seems to be a rather large range for something of this magnitude. It should rightfully be A-rank.

Bunshin no Bakudan [Explosion Release: Exploding Clones]: There's an encyclopedia tech for exploding clones, and though it would be fine to have a Bakuton version, which would ultimately have a stronger explosive force, the amount of clones for this technique is much too excessive. For all clone techniques, aside from the encyclopedia version, the costs are per clone, and this technique will not be an exception. Additionally, if you're going to give it different ranks, the jutsu's rank itself should be listed as scaling (C-A).

Doragon Kobushi [Explosion Release: Dragon Fists]: The range on this technique should be immediate, have a cost per post, and due to the power of it, should be S-rank.

Genzai [Explosion Release: Explosion Current]: This should be an S-rank technique, and even though you could probably get away with being immune to the smaller explosions, something on this large of a scale would have an effect on the user. This should really be a last resort technique, and the after-effects should affect that.
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PostSubject: Re: Adashi Clan [Bakuton] Adashi Clan [Bakuton] EmptyWed 31 Dec 2014, 10:17 pm

Whenever you make changes, please specify the changes you make, and your reasoning if you want to keep anything. This will help to clarify things and lets me know you've looked at everything I've listed.
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PostSubject: Re: Adashi Clan [Bakuton] Adashi Clan [Bakuton] EmptyTue 13 Jan 2015, 11:41 pm

K everything fixed and read
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PostSubject: Re: Adashi Clan [Bakuton] Adashi Clan [Bakuton] EmptyWed 14 Jan 2015, 11:23 pm

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