Takoru Himasaku - Complete

Posts : 118

Basic Information:

Name:
Takoru Himasaku
Secondary Title:
Not necessarily a title, but given his repeated use of drugs, many people refer to persons of his kind as "Druggies" He is often refered to as "Tak" (Ta-k)
Age:
15
Gender:
Male
Physical Appearance:

Tak is a double-take at first sight. He has a sickly appearance with palely white skin. Eyes usually blood-shot and red around the eyes. Like someone who hasn't blinked enough or gotten enough sleep. His hair is black and short, just long enough to cover his ears. His body is not that physically fit. He has a lanky body yet is surprisingly strong, he does not work-out or have very much "tone" to his muscled areas, but he is fit enough to make a stealthy escape. He is quite flexible and agile while not as physically strong.

His dress follows in close suit of his appearance. He wears an odd assortment of rag-tag gear that he has picked up here and there. Normally he wears a long sleeved hooded jacket without a zipper. it has a white front and black sleeves and back, the hood is also black. He wears general gym-shorts for trousers, which fall to just below his knee, they are a bit loose which makes them even longer. He wears simple sneakers for kicks. He also has a large assortment of black straps around his body which he uses to hold various objects for his own personal use. (generally drugs).

Personality:
A typical Punk. The Kid likes things his way and doesn't like being told otherwise. He is authoritative and aggressive, he tells people how it is. He likes to think of himself as a bad-ass and usually gets into more trouble then its worth. Most times he is calm and chilled but his temper is short and likely to spark out if someone insults him or any of his friends. At times, he can be a little flaky and irresponsible. But for the important things, he pulls it together. He believes he has the whole world under his spell, and he can influence almost everyone he knows. He is manipulative in a manner but not extremely mean, he might say something to make a person trust him because he wants to be their friend, not to kill them later. Hes likely to get into a lot of trouble, but his kind of trouble is fun. He is somewhat comical in a sarcastic way.

He is lively and unpredictable most of the time. He is swift in thought and quick on his feet. He doesn't usually think things through and that usually ends up biting him in the butt later on. He can rarely resist his urges to do something that will draw attention to him, most times it is for his own self-accomplishment, he likes to get into trouble then blame it on others, adding to the own personal comedy. He is usually kind and supportive of people unless they are total jerks to him, in which he usually holds grudges. People who are jerks to him, he returns the favor.

Despite all this effort to make himself look better, he is really a destroyed soul on the inside as many ambiguous teens are. He doesn't sleep well at night which makes him crabby at times and is usually depressed but can put on a mask to avoid people questioning his motives. He feels alone in the world, even when with true friends, not the one's he bribed with comedy.

Quotes:
"Never show anyone your tricks. They'll beg you and they'll flatter you for the secret, but as soon as you give it up... you'll be nothing to them."
"The secret impresses no one. The trick you use it for is everything."
"Now you're looking for the secret. But you won't find it because of course, you're not really looking. You don't really want to work it out. You want to be fooled."

Catch Phrases:
(Generally after someone has caught him doing something illegal) "Abracadabra!"

Rank Information:

Rank:
Genin
Village Affiliation:
Konoha

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main: Weaponry
Main: Exotic
Sub: Swords (Daggers?)
Sub: Medical Jutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: -
Sub: -
Special Characteristics:
Criminal Record
The character has been convicted of a crime and has spent time in prison. The police know the character on sight, and he May be rounded up from time to time and questioned about various crimes. Most legitimate employers who discover his secret will not retain his services. Most police, ANBU or other branch will not take a character's sarcasm or any sort of Bull**** that has a record.

Melancholy
The character suffers from protracted bouts of depression and may appear sullen and morose for days or weeks a time, in the past the character has been driven to desperate acts by loneliness or failed love affairs. Melancholy may be further intensified through alcohol or drug addiction.

Excellent Liar Trait
The character is extremely good at Lying, no one can read him even with the use of special mind probing jutsu or lie detectors. This unique trait is extremely useful. The only way to uproot a lie created is to prove it wrong; and even then the character may simply play the lie even more.

Addiction:
You are plagued with addictions. In a vain attempt to escape misery, you discovered dependence. Addiction itself is particularly abhorrent to Ninja, who view all loss of self-control as a dire weakness. Despite this cultural bias, some addictions are more socially acceptable than others.
-Current Situation: You partake in your would-be addiction regularly, but not overly frequently. You show no overt signs of dependence or addiction, but if you are denied access to your favored vice, you become short-tempered and irritable.
Addicted to: Drugs, Mainly Cocaine.

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Skill Information:

Jutsu:

Name: Freerunning
Rank: D
Type: Basic Skill
Element: N/A
Description:Utilizing a characters superior acrobatic and balance, he is able to do some pretty neat stuff. Some basics of this once this jutsu is activated is extreme percision, able to jump from something to another something without falling, another is his ability to balance on the thinnist of objects, more would be balance on his hands instead of his feet, basic acrobatics as well like back flips, front flips, hand springs and jumps, all combined is what gives this jutsu its valued ability.

Name: Fast Aim
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description:The user is well attuned to using his weapon and can draw and aim his weapon in one smooth motion, instead of drawing an arrow and then taking aim. The aim is just as percise as it would be if he was to take careful aim.

Name: Long Shot
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The user is apt at firing his weapon at ranges that exceed his weapons natural range, this at times can break the bow if done incorrectly, cannot be used with Fast Aim.

Name: Night Fighter
Rank: C
Type: Basic Skill
Element: N/A
Description: The user is well trained at fighting at night and does not suffer eye-sight penalties and can see as well as a trained eye can in night as he could in day.

Name: Snap-Reaction
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: This holds an action in pre-empt of his next post, allowing him to make a shot well before his opponent attacks. Must be used before the post he intends to use it on. An example of this would be placing an arrow on the string and drawing it half-back.

Name: Trick-Shot
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The user fires his bow with extra pull, allowing it to ignore cover such as a bush that a ninja is hiding in.

Name: Riposte
Rank: E
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description:Immediately after the character has been attacked and missed by a melee attack, he may make one attack targeting the failed attacker that uses a weapon in his hand covered by this skill. This attack is in addition to his normal actions. A character may also make a Riposte attack after a successful parry but not after a successful dodge. A character that has been grappled cannot make Riposte attacks.

Name: Two-Weapon fighting
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description:The Character can fight with a weapon covered by this skill in his off hand. In other words, he can hold a weapon in each hand effectively.

Name: Feather Strike
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description:The character's finesse with weapon is such that he can do severe damage with the lightest of touch, meaning that if the character has just barely touched the opponent, it can still produce a severe gash.

Name: Force Reflexes
Rank: E
Type: Basic Skill
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja is able to parry projectile weapons.

Name: Disarm
Type: Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: The character has become skilled in disarming combatants. After succeeding in hitting or grappling an opponents arm, he may disarm him quickly. This skill requires careful aim if being used with a ranged weapon and cannot be used with fast-aim. If used with a close-hand weapon, it requires the same accuracy and cannot use it with Fast-draw.

Name: Fast-Draw
Type: Weaponry
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: The Ninja has become apt in drawing his weapon in a rapid fashion. This allows him to react quicker then most when using a side-arm weapon such as a kunai, knife or senbon. A large weapon cannot be used with this skill.

Name: Fokkusu No Hansha (Fox Reflexes)
Rank: C-S
Use With: Dagger Type Weaponry.
Element: N/A
Description:
Fokkusu no Hansha (FH) is known widely for its purely flexiblity in combat. It is used mainly as a reflective style, meaning it is used for counter-attacks and defensive techniques.It is well known that most street thieves use it for a quick get-away. It uses concentrated bursts of speeds at vital points in time working best with Wind and Lightning style Ninja and worst with Earth and Water style ninja. Its stance is one foot placed in front of the other, main arm or most profound hand placed in front of the face, with weapon flipped so the blade is coming out from beneath the pinky, held a good distance from their body. The other hand is placed low near their hip, weapon held in the same fashion. Right foot if your right handed or left foot if your left handed is pointed forward and placed forward in the stance, while the opposite foot is placed with inner foot bent inward. The back foot is used as a spring to fly counter-attacks at the opponent, while the front foot is used as a trick style, normally keeps position unless preforming a faint.

Name: Mouse Flees Snake
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: N/A
Description: The user waits for the opponent to attack, then using his front hand parrys the attack away in his profound direction, (right if righthanded) as they do this they push their back foot off to be in front of the other foot, then bring the same hand around behind them to stab the opponent in the back or thigh.

Name: Snake Strikes Stone
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: N/A
Description: This technique begins when the opponent makes a horizontal slash at the user. The user ducks and stabs the opponent in the foot, then in one quick motion brings the blade up their leg and across their chest, to do large amounts of damage.

Name: Cub defeats the Pride
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: N/A
Description: The user waits for the opponent to attack, then using his front hand parrys the opponents attack away in his unprofound direction, (Left if righthanded.) as they do this they bring their elbow up and strike the opponent in the solar-plex, then push them away.

Name: Fox Catches the Rabbit
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: N/A
Description: The user flips their weapon to a normal holding method. When the opponent attacks them in a vertical slash, they block it and push it in their profound direction and kick them in the crotch. Then in one agile movement pull their weapon away in the opposite direction right into the opponents neck.

Name: Frog Ripples the Pond
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: N/A
Description: The user blocks a vertical slash using their forward hand and parrys it in their profound direction and towards them, so that the opponent goes forward. Meanwhile he brings his back foot in front of his front foot and catches the opponent in his profound arm by the neck in a headlock.

Name: Jackrabbit Catches the Fox
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: N/A
Description: This can be used with or without a weapon. The user waits for an attack and when an attack occurs, jumps backwards only just enough to dodge it. Keeping their back foot as a spring they reflect the attack normally going for the head or tackling them.

Name: Fox Climbs the Mountain
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: N/A
Description: This can be used with or without a weapon. The user waits for an attack, when it occurs they duck and sidestep in their profound direction, spinning as they do so. As their spin finishes they slash in a diagonal path from their left to right if Right handed. To slash the opponents chest.

Name: Kingfisher flashes over the Pond
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: N/A
Description: The user parry's a weapon using their right hand towards their left going upwards with it. The using their other arm they grab the opponents arm that was parried and bend them forward into a submission grip, allowing for a multitude of things to occur.

Name: Ferret Rides the Ox
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: N/A
Description: The user sidesteps an opponents downward slash. Then using their back foot spring forward grabbing the opponents non-weapon arm and pull it backwards then stabs the opponent in the back of the neck.

Weapons:

Name: Sucsamad(s)
Quantity: 20
Rank: C
Appearance: A small blade with a slanted tip. The blades length reaches to about 3 inches, while the handle is 1 and a half inch. It is a silvery color, and each handle has a different color, this gives them a sort of double-take effect while flying in the air together. The illusion depending on the person can make them throw up or become dizzy, though for some persons it does nothing. There is a small gem on the end of each handle each color is different for each gem. Can be used as throwing or regular melee combat.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: These are throwing knives, specially designed to have better aerodynamicy in the air then regular kunai. They spin end over end while in flight, which increases their damage and speed. (10% faster then normal Kunai). These can also be embued with the wind property allowing them to curve at a 45 degree angle while in flight. It takes a minimum of 5 meters to turn 45 degrees, they cannot alter their path however just turn 45 degrees left or right a single time. They also have a unique ability which if the knife misses its target they return to the user, however he can only catch 2 so if more then 2 miss, they land at his feet.
Origin: Stole from previous owner, then killed the owner after the owner attempted to kill him for stealing them.

Items

Name: Gause
Rank: E
Type: Medicinal
Natural Abilities: A spongy material that can be used to absorb large amounts of blood.

Name: Medical Tape
Rank: E
Type: Medicinal
Natural Abilities: A tape which sticks to the skin easily.

Name: Syringes (x5)
Rank: D
Type: Medicinal
Natural Abilities: Used to inject drugs or other substances into a body.

Name: Medical Tools
Rank: C
Type: Medicinal
Natural Abilities: A set of medical tools which are used to heal patients.
Bandaging: Wraps wounds to stop bleeding
Scapel: A tool used for cutting flesh
Forceps: Useful in cutting tendons then holding them shut.

Alchemical Items

Name of Substance
Rank: Its Rank, from E to S.
Quantity: How many do you have Currently?
Formulation: What form is it? A liquid? Pill? Drug? Injected? Ingested? Topical?
Substance Type: What exactly is it? A drug? a special Solute?
Appearance: What it look like? (The actual item)
Production: How long does it take to make this? (Real time, i.e. 1 hour)
Reaction Time: How fast does it react? (post time) or instantaneous
Duration: How long does it last? (post time)
Effect: What does it do?

Description of Quanitity's
Jars = 10 Liters.
Bottle = .5 Liter - Generally a single Dose. Or 20 Doses
Vile = .2 Liter - 10 Doses
Pill = 1 Dose
Tube = 3 Doses
Brick = 100 Doses, (generally drug related)

Alchemists Fire
Rank: C
Quantity: 1 Bottle.
Formulation: Topical (bottle)
Substance Type: Alchemical Solution
Appearance: Brilliant Green Liquid.
Production: 30 Minutes.
Reaction Time: Instantaneous.
Duration: 7-10 Posts Unless put out.
Effect: Held in a glass tube, when the chemical comes in contact with air it ignites into a bright blue flame, this is generally done by throwing the bottle at the target.

ALS2 (X)
Rank: E
Quantity: 5 Jars
Formulation: Varies
Substance Type: Alchemical Solution
Appearance: Pale Silvery Blue Liquid.
Production: 2 Hours
Reaction Time: None
Duration: None
Effect: A solution which can hold body parts in pristine condition. Normally used when creating artificial life. This solution has no side effects.

Angel
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 Vile
Formulation: Ingested or Injected.
Substance Type: Alchemical Solution
Appearance: Tiny Glossy Black pill or Dense Vicious Black liquid.
Production: 2 Hours
Reaction Time: Instantaneous
Duration: 10 Posts
Effect: Stops the Progression of the Infection for 1 hour. After that the infection resumes its course.

Chloroform
Rank: C
Quantity: 0 Bottles.
Formulation: Inhaled
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: Faint odor with pleasant smell and taste.
Production: 12 Hours
Reaction Time: 10-15 Seconds
Duration: Varies with Dosage.
Effect: An Anesthetic drug which can be used to knock out a patient. A known Carcinogen.

Clarity
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 Vile
Formulation: Ingested or Injected
Substance Type: Alchemical Solution
Appearance: Sickly Yellow pill or a Cloudy yellow solution smelling of ammonia.
Production: 1 Hour
Reaction Time: Instantaneous
Duration: Instantaneous
Effect: With a wash of nausa, rapidly flushes the system of all known Toxins, narcotics and drugs. Creates a foul smelling sweat upon ingestion.

Ether
Rank: C
Quantity: 0 Bottles
Formulation: Ingested or Injected
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: Clear Liquid or Capsule.
Production: 4 Hours
Reaction Time: anywhere from 10 seconds to 2 minutes. (1 Post)
Duration: 100-200 Posts if Necessary.
Effect: A powerful anesthetic drug which knocks the user out for a lengthy period of time.

Hyde
Rank: C
Quantity: 0 Bottles
Formulation: Ingested
Substance Type: Alchemical Solution
Appearance: Thick Green/Grey Liquid with a musty odor and horrid taste.
Production: 12 Hours
Reaction Time: 3-5 Posts
Duration: 10-20 Posts
Effect: Changes the user into a more physically built person. Increases their size and strength by 2, and increases their blood flow. They tend to have fits of anger while in this state. Does not suffer from wounds unless they are incapacitating. The user forgets whatever happens during this state, except maybe for a flash here or there. After complete the user painfully returns to human form and is knocked out. Highly Illegal

Jacks Blessing
Rank: D
Quantity: 5 Doses
Formulation: Ingested
Substance Type: Herb
Appearance: Black Spotted plant
Production: None
Reaction Time: 2 Posts
Duration: 20 Posts
Effect: Heightens the users senses significantly, the faintest sound can be heard. Smells can be followed like a dog, small movements are picked up, popular among ANBU members.

Maidens Heart
Rank: C
Quantity: 1 Tube
Formulation: Ingested
Substance Type: Herb
Appearance: A Fat round tuber which is tinted slightly red in color, about the size of a child's fist.
Production: None
Reaction Time: 3 Posts
Duration: 30 Posts
Effect: Increases the users stamina allowing them to ignore fatigue and most wounds for longer periods of time. Reduces the time needed to heal wounds regularly for the human body.

Masque
Rank: E
Quantity: 3 Pills
Formulation: Ingested
Substance Type:Alchemical Solution
Appearance: A small pill of no particular color which turns to liquid in the mouth.
Production: 6 Hours
Reaction Time: 4-8 Posts
Duration: 10-12 Posts
Effect: A Localized mutagen, which renders the users face unrecognizable. Not into a mutant but just changes their face structure so that no one could tell who they are.

Orepheom
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 Vile
Formulation: Ingested or Injected
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: Milky liquid with taste of butterscotch
Production: 4 Hours
Reaction Time: 5 Posts
Duration: 20-30 Posts
Effect: A drug used to induce hallucinations, used within religious cults and can be used as tributes to cults. These visions are normally of the future, after seeing the visions the character will be knocked out for a short period of time.

Ravenger
Rank: C
Quantity: 1 tube
Formulation: Injected
Substance Type: Alchemical Solution
Appearance: Pale Blue Odorless Liquid
Production: 48 Hours
Reaction Time: Instantaneous
Duration: 10 Posts
Effect: Causes the target to fall to the ground and begin rapid mutation. Bones spur out of the body and limbs twist while their body is left in silent horror. After the 10 Posts or the antidote is given, the target is fine and has no damage done.

Stitch
Rank: C
Quantity: 1 Vile
Formulation: Injected
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: Brown liquid with bitter odor
Production: 6 Hours
Reaction Time: Instantaneous
Duration: 10-12 posts
Effect: A powerful healing drug which rapidly stabilizes a patient. This also increases the bodies natural recovery. Can only be given once a day to heal a person. (Real Time)

Truth Seeker
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 tube
Formulation: Ingested or Injected
Substance Type: Alchemical Solution
Appearance: Pale yellow liquid that almost glows in the dark
Production: 8 Hours
Reaction Time: 1-5 Posts
Duration: 1-5 Topics. (Entire Topics)
Effect: Troth Seeker is a powerful cognitive enhancer that drastically increases the clarity and speed of thought. Increases the users Intelligence and Academic abilities significantly while in use.

Vitriolic Shell
Rank: C
Quantity: 0 Bottles
Formulation: Topical
Substance Type: Alchemical Solution
Appearance: Clear Liquid.
Production: 12 Hours
Reaction Time: Instantaneous
Duration: 16 Seconds or 4 Posts
Effect: Holds a corrosive acid which will burn through most substances with ease, including human flesh. Also good for cutting chain link fences and the like.

Watcher
Rank: C
Quantity: 0 Viles
Formulation: Ingested
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: Distilled Liquor, pale green in Color.
Production: 1 Week
Reaction Time: 2 Posts
Duration: 30 Combat Posts
Effect: A distillate of Jacks Blessing, this can be used to heighten the senses for a period of time. However after the effect of the senses wears off, the user suffers a painful headache for 3 Posts.

Wercher
Rank: C
Quantity: 0 Viles
Formulation: Injected or Ingested
Substance Type: Pill
Appearance: Pale pink liquid with a rustic taste.
Production: 48 Hours
Reaction Time: 2 Posts
Duration: Permanent
Effect: The resulting drug causes massive systemic Hemorraging resulting in blood sweats- and bleeding from the orifices of the body.

Addictive Drugs:
Rules: If a character uses Addictive drugs more then 2 times (in RP) in 1 Week (real time). They will become addicted to it. They must consume the drug once a week and it can only be gotten from players who have the drug. (Who are me right now.) You may not recieve the drug from an NPC. If you fail to get your intake in, you will suffer from withdrawl.
Rules on Withdrawl; A character going through withdrawl cannot sleep for long periods of time. They are nauseous constantly, they get cold sweats, chills, shiver and faint. They may fall asleep randomly then wake right back up. They usually become irritable and extremely angry.

Cocaine
Rank: C
Quantity: 2 Pills
Formulation: Inhaled or Ingested
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: White Powder
Production: 24 hours
Reaction Time: 3 Minutes
Duration: 10-15 Posts
Effect: A Central nervous system stimulant, induces a sense of euphoria and is used as anesthetic.

Opium
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 Half Brick
Formulation: Ingested or Inhaled
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: Dark colored waxy resin usually in the form of a pill or brick.
Production: 72 Hours
Reaction Time: 1 Post when Smoked, 5 Posts when Eaten
Duration: 24 Hours (real time)
Effect: A first time user will find that this drug causes extreme nausea while more regular users will find no ill effects. A character who uses this drug will become lethargic for a period of time. Their senses and perception will seriously decrease as will their ability to think clearly.

Morphine
Rank: D
Quantity: 1 tube
Formulation: Injected
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: A viscious liquid which is clear.
Production: 8 Hours
Reaction Time: Instantaneous
Duration: 25 Posts
Effect: An extremely powerful painkiller used by doctors. Also alters mood and induces sleep. People who use Morphine repeatedly or too much will suffer hallucinations, nightmares if asleep and generally become insomniacs. When used people complain about dizziness, itching, chills, shallow breathing, fainting, and swelling of the extremities.

Heroin
Rank: C
Quantity: 3 Pills
Formulation: Inhaled
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: A white powder
Production: 16 hours
Reaction Time: 2 Posts
Duration: 25 Posts
Effect: It is a sedative and causes less nausea then Opium or Morphine. The character who uses this will usually become really euphoric then go "off the nod" or repeatedly fall asleep then wake up.

Laudaneum
Rank: C
Quantity: 1 Tube
Formulation: Ingested
Substance Type: Drug
Appearance: A pale brownish liquid with a bitter taste and an acrid odor.
Production: 8 hours
Reaction Time: 2 Posts
Duration: 25 Posts
Effect: Used to relieve pain and surpress coughs, it is widely known as a "Cure all." It can cure from colds to fevers. However is powerfully addictive. Once a character consumes it. There is a 75% chance that he will become addicted on the first try. The second try they are always addicted.

Posts : 118

History:

Childhood:
Tobuken and Hirizu, were of an odd couple, Hirizu's parents did not approve of Tobuken as a husband, but Hirizu happened to like Tobuken, so they left Konoha, where their parents lived and fled to the Town under the Sun, a small outlying village near the border of Suna's territory. They were married there, in a sort of Romeo and Juliet manner. They lived there and stayed in hiding changing their last name to Manin to avoid being caught by their parents. They had a son, Takoru they named it. He grew up in the Village of the Sun, and when it was time for him to head to the Academy, he left. Though his father and mother recognized the way he walked, talked and looked like them, they dyed his hair a starch violet white color. They changed the way he dressed to a more formal way, and made him talk to everyone like they were a superior. After that, he was off to the academy.

He had to travel by horse drawn carriage on a supply wagon, it was the only way out of the village under the Sun, and the only way in, since nothing of value was found in the village under the sun. And so he had to travel on the back of a wagon, feet dangling below him with a bit of money and food on his back to pay for an apartment while he was residing in Konoha.

Academy:
His Academy days were normal, he started his days in Konoha by laying out the city, exploring everywhere so he knew where to go if he needed food, missions, etc. And exploring was something he enjoyed. After he was situated which took maybe a week or so, he joined the Academy, and was instructed that classes would begin a month and so from the day he visited. In the meantime, he spent what time he could watching ninja, reading books, or doing any other kind of thing that would teach him about being a ninja before actually becoming one.

Soon enough, the Academy started, he dearly missed his parents and his fellow villagers but he decided it was best he just stay in Konoha, doing what he could. He would have no knowledge if his parents were alive, dead or gone. It ate him up inside, but he lived with it. He trained hard, it was one of the few things he could keep himself occupied with, he was not one to stick to one thing, he liked doing many other things, and in the new environment of Konoha he had so many things to do. But that was slowly changing, he was becoming more secluded and more isolated, preferring to be with himself then with others, by the time the Academy was over, he was on the verge of becoming a mute.

Genin:
Takoru has only recently gained the rank of Genin but already has developed many skills and feats that could prove him as a potential adversary. His shy and quiet nature makes him hard to get to know, but Takoru knows he cannot succeed in this world alone and intends to make many friends.

Role-Play Sample:

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And there I was frozen, standin in my backyard.

Face to face, eye to eye, starin at the last star.

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"You must hear this sir. Its madness!" The advisor standing before Crim said. He shook his head in disbelief. "She's speaking of you! of you Good sir, of the future, the past? I don't know. But its involving you." The advisor continued, his words hasty and relentless. "If i go, will you leave me alone?" Crim responded. "Yes, Yes, I promise." He said nodding repeatedly. Crim stood up, not changing clothing at all and began walking, "Lets go then." He said reluctantly. The advisor lit up like a light-bulb, "Oh thank the gods, It will be worth it, I promise!" Crim shook his head and stepped out into the street. He was dressed plainly, he always did. And never traveled with a guard, as a way of telling the people how safe his village was. Guards were around but they never surrounded him or such, so that people could approach him. There were downsides of course, several folks would approach and ask for his blessings or for help. He had to disregard them though, if he gave one a blessing, he must give all. So he continued on his way.

When they finally arrived at the hospital, people appeared to have been waiting for him to come. They quickly ushered him away from most of the standard rooms for patients. They entered a small room with a single woman and a nurse. The woman was hooked up to many tubes, feeding IV's and various medicines into her body, her hair was virtually gone. She obviously was quite sick. Her eyes were open but her entire body motionless. "Shes been like this for a couple days, we have to give her eye-drops or she'll start screaming" The doctor said, he was old and frail, his hair grey and lips sucking on the smoke of a cigarette. "i don't know what to do with her, apparently she talks about you." he said blowing some more smoke. The nurse gave him a glance but he did nothing.

"Ask her something" The advisor urged Crim. He sighed and made his way over to the woman, intrigued and confused at the same time. "Can't pull her out of the comatose like state either. She seems to be recovering though. So we're letting her be." Crim nodded as he finally made it to the woman, stood beside her. "Then shall the maidens rejoice of the dance... Structural integrity of bone 7 restored... Functional..." At this point her finger moved. "It was broken." The doctor said with a stunned look on his face."The children of the one reborn shall find their own country... End of line... Increase the output to 50 percent... is inevitable, leading to information bleed... Bone sync fault stands uncorrected... No ceremonies are necessary." The woman continued. "All she is speaking is gibberish. I'm leaving." Crim said but before he could leave it spoke again. "But you are the spark of God's Fire." She said, Crim looked over his shoulder. "You will know enmity, bitterness, the wrenching agony of the one splintering into the many. And then you will join the promised land, gathered on the wings of the angel - - not an end, but a beginning." Crim stopped, "What!?" He said, completely confused. "You are the harbinger of death, Koyumo, Crim. You will lead them all to their end. End of Line." Crim stood shocked as the woman suddenly froze and her eyes sputtered and her body relaxed itself.

"I told you it would be worth it.." the advisor said sorrowfully. Crim glared at him. He paced for a moment, "But what does that mean..." he thought aloud. The woman spoke no more. "Looks like she's done for the day, you can leave now" The doctor said as he injected her again. Crim stood in the door outside the hospital.

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I should've known, walked all the way home

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bump.

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Le bump.

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BUMP?

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Each Arc needs to have 2 paragraphs.

Except for that, from my point of view, everything seems fine, except for all of those drugs.

Since I am not a expert of that area, I will ask somebody else to check that for me.

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If this app is still active, I would happily go over the drugs and medical aspect of it.

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