Tsugama Kiyamo ~completed~

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Basic Information:

Name: Tsugama Kiyamo
Secondary Title: Nup
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Physical Appearance:

Tsugama Kiyamo is small for her age. She is 4 foot 11 inches. Tsukama weighs around 52 kg. Tsugama has normal skin colour with a little tan. Tsugama has blueish green eyes. Tsugama has brown hair that is straight and longer than most boys but shorter than most girls. Tsugama doesn't any distingushing features, Tsugama normally wears a weighted blue kimono with black tights underneath and a normal t-shirt underneath as well. Tsugama has one sword that she normally carries around, along with a sword holder on her back. Tsugama also has a pouch to hold her small weapons like shuriken.
Personality:
Tsugama it pretty smart but not too smart. She listens to people completly for a while but after a few minutes she stops listening to them. Tsugama is normally happy and lively but can eaisally get annoyed if somebody says something bad about her or especially her dead parents. Tsugama is quite carefree. When Tsugama fights she doesn't take people seriously until she thinks that they are a hard opponent. Tsugama is a bit like a boy. Tsugama thinks highly of herself when she fights and also with some other things. Tsugama sometimes talks to her sword as if it was another human. In times of struggling during a fight the sword takes over and she can't control herself well.
Catch Phrase: N/A

Clan Information:

Clan Name: N/A

Rank Information:

Rank:
Genin
Village Affiliation:
Kumogakure

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main: Weaponry (-Main Kenjutsu -secondary Exotic Weapons)
Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: N/A
Sub: N/A
Special Characteristics:
Tsugama has weights on the inside of her kimono. Weighing 10 kg. She also has her sword which weighs 50kg. Her sword sometimes takes over and poseses her. which makes her stronger but cant think straight and could attach anybody.

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Skill Information:

Kenjutsu

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Taijutsu

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Academy Jutsu

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Weapons
Tsugama's Sword
Name: Kanima
Quantity: 1
Rank: d-s (d normally, when angry can be c-s)
Appearance: Tsugama Kiyamo ~completed~ O_DEMON-NINJA-KATANA-SWORD-STAINLESS-103702

Tsugama Kiyamo ~completed~ O_DEMON-NINJA-KATANA-SWORD-STAINLESS-103702

Kanima is 3 foot 11'.Kanima has seventeen dots on the handle. Kanima weighs 50KG. Kanima is silver with a black line all the way down the front. Kanima has a grey handle which has the seventeen dots. The first five dots are grey. The next five are orange and will become grey when Tsugama breaks them. The next five are red and the same will happen to them like the orange ones. The last two are black are the same will happen. Her first two will be grey and the next three will be yellow until she breaks them. They will fill up green when she gets angry. The circle on the handle is just silver and nothing on it. Kanima is white with some area's of black on it and the black line down the middle.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Kanima can possess Tsugama when she gets angry. When Tusgama is possessed she get stronger and better with a sword. When Tsugama gets possessed she also loses control over herself, and Kanima wants to kill anybody who comes close and makes Tsugama do it. The dots on the handle fill up when Tsugama gets angry. At academy Tsugama can fill up two holes. Genin five holes. Chunin 10 holes. Jounin 15 holes. Ambu seventeen holes. the more holes filled up the more Tsugama gets possessed. (she still has to break each seal except i won't break more than the level it could be.
Origin: Kanima was given to Tsugama when a rouge ninja attacked her families house. Tsugama couldn't lift it until she saw her parents dead, she then broke the seal on her sword and could lift it for a while. Tsugama then killed the rouge ninja being possessed.

Name: shinkatsu
Quantity: 1
Rank: d
Appearance:

Singly They are both 10 and a half inches. Together they are 1 foot 8 inches. They both have black circles near the blade. On the first on a has the Kanji symbol of 1 on it. The second one has the Kanji symbol for 2 on it. When they are together you couldn't tell that it could be split into two. The handle is gold with black string down it like a Katana. The blades are One longer blade with two small blades, sort of like sai. When separated the first one has one inch where it is smaller so that it can fit in the second one. The second one has a hole in the bottom one inch long so the first one can fit in.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: Is Normally double sided but can be split into two. Both sides lock in when she pushes it the first one into the second. but can be put into two if she pulls on both sides to make it detach.
Origin: When looking around after Tsugama's parents died she found this.

Items:
10 Shuriken
22 Kunai
10 explosion tags
100m Wire

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Background Information

History:
early years

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Academy years

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Genin arc

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Role-Play Sample:
kanima went into the training field at around 9.00 am. he was training on his skills like the konoha repuu. and his other techniques to perfect them to show his team mates. he had the piece of paper that read. Today you have each been assigned to a squad. Please meet me on field 13 at noon. he was training near the meeting area so he wouldn't be in a hurry when it was time.

kanima was still training in the training feild working of his taijutsu and chopping up some trees with his shikatsu. he was wearing his new hiddden sand village head protector. he had forgotten the real reason he came here. he had thought he was training here just to improve his skills. then he saw a kid go past him like he didnt see him. go into the area with a sign that read field 13. he took a break for a second and went to ask him what he was doing.

kanima followed the man into the area and saw him standing in the middle of the field. "um, what exactly are you doing here." he asked. kanima had completly forgotton about the note saying to meetin field 13.

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can somebody move this to completed apps to be checked

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• It would probably be best just to replace the word "Thrown Items" with "Ranged".

• A girl of 4'0 weighing 77lbs carrying around weights and a sword put together that equals just about 150lbs? That's quite a bit. Her speed would have to be dramatically cut down, make her taller and weigh more, or cut down the amount her weights are.

• Chakra conductive weapons are at least B-ranked.

• You could use a few taijutsu moves or weaponry moves in your application. Just a suggestion.

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Age : 32 Posts : 428

Hmm, well sorry but errr.....Konoha got closed due to inactivity.

So, could you please change your village?

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I'm no wepon/equipment specialist but i believe your character needs to have Exotic weponry as a skill to be able to use unique items such as the ones you have. If you need more information on this post you should message 'Z' he's better with equipment then i am.

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I agree with Commander, a sai would be an exotic weapon and you have ranged and swords as your two weapon categories.

BUT, since they are very basic and aren't made of any special material, you could just bump them down to D-rank.

P.S: Please post your sword on your app.

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i think im done

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Thanks for the info Z, okay apart from that your apps pretty shweeeet. I do have a question tho, you have Kenjutsu as a specialty, yet you know no Kenjutsu, jutsu? Do you want to add any before we begin the approving process?

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done ~

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That's all gurrrrd but you've accidently placed your Taijutsu inside your Kenjutsu, please seperate those, apart from that i think that's approvable now ^^

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done

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You're just missing these basic Academy jutsu.

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] N/A
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

[b]Name:[/b] Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] N/A
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

[b]Name:[/b] Explosion Tag: Activate
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

After adding those, you should be good.

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Done

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Approved.

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Archived due to User Inactivity.