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Yazu
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PostSubject: Beez - First Mission Completed Beez - First Mission Completed EmptyMon 13 Dec 2010, 2:25 pm
Character Name: Kaguya Beez
Rank: Genin
Village: Kiri
Mission Bulletin: The one in Kiri.
Mission Link: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/the-village-hidden-in-the-mist-kirigakure-no-sato-f155/unruly-vines-mission-p-t2554.htm#26774
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Aaron
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PostSubject: Re: Beez - First Mission Completed Beez - First Mission Completed EmptyMon 13 Dec 2010, 7:23 pm
Official Grading: 4/5 + 1/5 = 5/10.
Unofficial Grading: 17/20.
Comments: A few silly spelling mistakes, nothing major. It was very easy to read and the paragraphs were well put. The writing was quite interesting, albiet short. A nice D-Rank mission to read. Well done. If you do a higher ranked mission, I'd like to see you push boundaries with your writing. Wink

5 Mission Points awarded.
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