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Clan Name: Sankariki
Location: Kirigakure no Sato
Signature Traits: Most members of this clan have spiky deep black hair. It is very rare that someone of this clan have a different hair color. Also, another common trait in members of the that most of their eyes are completely black. However, it some cases its known that this is not true. Also, all members of the clan have muscular bodies, they are built better than most ninja. Most wear weighted armor, throughout everyday life. The most commonly seen ones have dual shoulder guards and some form of skirt armor or crotch guard. Matching boots, are standard issue, as is a pair of white gloves or fingerless wrist guards. Standard armor has large shoulder plates, but some simply have reinforced shoulder straps. Many also have skirt armor or plate shielding the groin.

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Fighting Style
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[b]Name:[/b] Mahkotsu | Mach Fist Style
[b]Clan:[/b] Sankariki
[b]Emphasis:[/b] The Mahkotsu emphasizes speed, by using their advanced chakra release. They are able to force their taijutsu attacks, making them much faster, and in turn adding much more force to their attacks. They look to break bones, and render their opponents unable to move their bodies.
[b]Requirements:[/b] Must be a Member of the Sankariki Clan
[b]Description:[/b]
The Sankariki's form of hand to hand combat. By using this fighting style, the users attacks are much faster and stronger than ever before, meaning its a more difficult fighting style to learn. The speed and strength of the fighting style comes from the users ability to emit chakra from their body. The user can select a part of their body to push forward or even move back. This means that if the user is skilled enough, they can push themselves further to avoid close ranged attacks. The users spend most of their time fighting in the air, so a lot of their attacks are hitting their opponents in the air, and slamming them back down. Users of the fighting style are taught to hit weaker, vitally, bones and break them.

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Resistance to a small amount of taijutsu attacks. (5% more than normal ninja)
Much more physically strong than most ninja (About 5% stronger than a normal ninja)

Kekkei Genkai:
The Kekkei Genkai of the Sankariki gives the clan member the ability to permeate chakra from their sweat glands and coat their skin, as well as their hair. The clan members have the ability to release this chakra at a very devastating force, which allows them to do things a great deal of things that no normal ninja can hope to achieve. Since the clan have the ability to release the chakra as they choose, this allows them to hide their true power, making it hard for tracking ninja to know who they really are, and easily sneaking without people knowing it, because they will give off the power of a weak genin.

Also, the coat provides a protective coating around the user s skin, which makes it harder for opponents to attack them with their own taijutsu. The can take 5% more damage than a normal ninja of their rank. This protective coating can also slightly heal the user, thanks to innate spiritual energy, allowing them to recover very quickly, while developing inhuman stamina. The healing only allows small things, such as cuts, or tore skin. This Stamina allows the clan member to endure all kinds of intense training. However, this places an ordinate drain on the clan members reserves over the course of the day, requiring them to eat a lot, otherwise the user could feel sick and tired.

The last and the most powerful of the clan's abilities is the power known as Kinkami (meaning Gold Hair). Like the Uchiha clan's sharingan, there are three levels to this ability. Also, like the sharingan, the Kinkami, only comes up in certain users. The users tend to go through an extreme emotion of rage, and in some cases sadness. The three levels are merely just a percentage of power release. The force of the power makes the user Strength, speed, and Endurance increase by different levels each time they release. There are only three releases to the Kinkami. Also, in each form, the hair of the user glows a very golden color, and increases in length each time. However, this ability comes at a great chakra cost. The form can only be achieved if the user has become very strong. (about high level Chunin)

Clan Jutsu:

Name: Flight
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: This gives the user the ability of propel themselves in the air. The user has to push off of something to propel themselves in the air, and the smaller and lighter the substances, the harder it is to fly. As this being a hard act to preform, it takes much practice and patience to get mastery of this. It stands at a C ranked jutsu, and only costs that much, but as it take much time, the ability to use the jutsu is easier to use at higher ranks. A C ranked ninja, can only use the jutsu may only hover above the ground for a short time. They may also decrease there falling speeds slightly, near the ground. At B rank the user is able to go above the ground, and move at half their movement speed. Anything higher than ten feet makes them clumsy in the air. At A rank the user is much more trained, and is able to reach heights above the trees, and is able to move at normal movement speed. They have more aerial maneuver, but have somewhat difficulty quickly changing direction. At S rank the user is mastered the art, and may fly with great ease, only having slight trouble changing direction in the air. They are able to move at double their movement speed.
Chakra Cost: 5 plus 2 per post.

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Name: Healing Ability
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: Fire
Description: The user releases the katon element, around a selected area, using their sweat glands as the area of releases, then burns the area around the user that is wounded. This is a somewhat painful process, but it speeds up the healing process. This process is similar to cauterization, where it burns the tissue to stop blood loss. This also mitigates damage, making it less serve, and allowing the user of the jutsu to return to battle much quicker. Smaller cuts are healed within one post. Large cuts cannot be fully healed, but the jutsu can be used to speed up the process.
Chakra Cost: 15 and 4 Cp per post

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Name: Kinkami Level One
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: The users tend to go through an extreme emotion of rage, and in some cases sadness. The three levels are merely just a percentage of power release. The force of the power makes the user Strength, Speed, and Endurance is increased by 15% of their standard form. There are only three releases to the Kinkami. Also, in each form, the hair of the user glows a very golden color, and increases in length each time. However, this ability comes at a great chakra cost. The form can only be achieved if the user has become very strong.
Chakra Cost: 13 plus 4 per post

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Name: Kinkami Level Two
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: The users tend to go through an extreme emotion of rage, and in some cases sadness. The three levels are merely just a percentage of power release. The force of the power makes the user Strength, speed, and Endurance increase by 30% of their standard form. There are only three releases to the Kinkami. Also, in each form, the hair of the user glows a very golden color, and increases in length each time. However, this ability comes at a great chakra cost. The form can only be achieved if the user has become very strong. To use this form the user must first use Kinkami Level one.
Chakra Cost: 20 plus 6 per post

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Name: Kinkami Level Three
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: The users tend to go through an extreme emotion of rage, and in some cases sadness. The three levels are merely just a percentage of power release. The force of the power makes the user Strength, speed, and Endurance increase by 50% of their standard form. here are only three releases to the Kinkami. Also, in each form, the hair of the user glows a very golden color, and increases in length each time, in this form the hair is down to their rears. However, this ability comes at a great chakra cost. The form can only be achieved if the user has become very strong. To use this form the user must first use Kinkami Level Two.
Chakra Cost: 35 plus 9 per post

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Name: Chihoko
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: Chihoko is a taijutsu technique that involves its user moving their arms fast enough that they seemingly have four of them, allowing them to attack and defend their self much more efficiently. This is done by using the same concept with the flying, but focusing the chakra in the arms. No Extra arms added.
Chakra Cost: 6

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Name: Solar Flare
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid
Element: N/A
Description: Using the same concept as Kinkami, the user makes a a light around themselves, and everyone looking at the user, in a ten meter radius is blinded for one post. The user is not affected by this.
Chakra Cost: 4

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Name:Chakra Blast
Rank: C rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid
Element: Any
Description: The user permeates their chakra element from their palm, and forms a small ball in one or both hands, after making the proper handseals. This ball can be fired off at an enemy. Any of the basic five elements can be used with this jutsu. This does not allow the user to mix elements. Six blasts can be used each time the handsigns are made. Chakra is consumed per blast.
Chakra Cost: 5
Effect on Opponent, if hit.
Fire: Struck area is slightly burnt.
Wind: Struck area is slightly scratched.
Water: Small bruises on area.
Lightning: Struck area is slightly burnt.
Earth: Small bruises on area.

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Name:Chakra wave
Rank: B rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Element: Any
Description: The user puts their palms together and permeates their chakra element from their palms, and forms a small wave both hands. This wave can be fired off at an enemy. Any of the basic five elements can be used with this jutsu. This does not allow the user to mix elements. These can be fired very fast, but with handseals. One wave can be made, after making the handseals.
Chakra Cost: 12
Effect on Opponent, if hit.
Fire: Struck area is very burnt, causing second degree burns around the area that is hit.
Wind: If an area is struck on the target, the user will have several cuts on the area.
Water: large bruises on area.
Lightning: Area that is hit, the area struck becomes very stiff and hard to use for one post.
Earth: Large bruises on area.

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Name: Rushing attack
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: Using the several pores the user has access to the user will force chakra through through a selected area, and increase their speed slightly for just a few moments (One post). This allows the users attacks to be more forceful, and also is effective in dodging attacks if they are coming towards them.
Chakra Cost: 7

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History: The Sankariki clan came to be before any of the five villages were founded. At the time, no one had heard of them, because they were weaker compared to most shinobi, though they did have a huge ego, at the time. The Sankariki started out wanting to become very strong and power, like many of the race today. They battled in wars with shinobi, and started to gain respect, and also fear. In battle, most of the ninja from this clan were merciless, and took no prisoners. Also, seeing as they were obsessed with becoming strong, they were fairly easy shinobi to train, because they started training a lot younger than most shinobi did. During times of war, they worked from hire, taking out clans, before they could become any stronger. Soon, they began to face some of the stronger clan, such as the Uchiha, but the groups that went to fight them, were wiped out. They were very small in numbers before the villages were created, and soon went into hiding.

Soon, the Sankariki came out of hiding from many years of training and growing in numbers. They soon migrated to the village hidden in the mist. They weren't very trusted at the time, so they worked underground for the Mizukage. Not being trusted made it hard for the clan to get around and grow like they wanted to, so they had to start taking odd jobs and doing the dirty work that no one wanted to do. By doing so, they gained trust in the village, little by little. Around this time, the clan began to develop their abilities. While in the Mist village the first member of the clan obtained the jutsu flight. This was a very rare ability for any ninja to posses, and it gave the Sankariki the upper hand they desperately needed. The Sankariki were ready to start really getting their name out as a shinobi clan.

It was at this time, war broke out between many villages, and the Sankariki were more than happy to take part in. Previous wars killed many of their clan off, but now they were really showing the true strength of their clan. It was about this time a legend came about where a certain clan member was seen with Golden hair. This man was very powerful, and could take many ninja down that were of high rank. However, his ability overwhelmed him and he was killed because of it. After the death of the legendary Golden haired Sankariki, many of the clan began trying to use his technique to gain power, however, the man never taught anyone the secret, so it took them many years to perfect it. It took so long many of the clan members began to think it was a myth, thus splitting the guild into to parts.

The wars may had been over for the villages, but they were just starting in the Sankariki clan. In this civil war many people died, because they did not know when to stop. Each side fought with all they had, and it had seemed the side that did not believe in the Golden Haired warrior, was winning. Simply because they were more focused on what they already knew and becoming better in that area. While the Golden Haired believers tired becoming Golden Haired themselves. The Golden haired believers were growing short in numbers, and had to think of a way to become as strong as the man before them. It wasn't until one man, the current leader of clan now, lost his parents in battle and obtained the power known as Kinkami. Soon after this man obtained the power, the war soon ended with both sides joying once again.

After the war many people of the clan learned how to obtain the Kinkami, and also developed new and powerful abilities. The man who obtained Kinkami first become leader of the clan, because of his power. Since this time the Sankariki took their place outside of the mist village, and began growing in massive numbers. Soon, the clan's leader had a son, and went by the name of Ikou. This is the current point and time of the clan, they are now strong, and have the same mind set of fighting since they began.

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[b]Clan Jutsu:[/b]

[b]Name:[/b] Flight
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b]Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] This gives the user the ability of propel themselves in the air. The user has to push off of something to propel themselves in the air, and the smaller and lighter the substances, the harder it is to fly. As this being a hard act to preform, it takes much practice and patience to get mastery of this. It stands at a C ranked jutsu, and only costs that much, but as it take much time, the ability to use the jutsu is easier to use at higher ranks. A C ranked ninja, can only use the jutsu may only hover above the ground for a short time. They may also decrease there falling speeds slightly, near the ground. At B rank the user is able to go above the ground, and move at half their movement speed. Anything higher than ten feet makes them clumsy in the air. At A rank the user is much more trained, and is able to reach heights above the trees, and is able to move at normal movement speed. They have more aerial maneuver, but have somewhat difficulty quickly changing direction. At S rank the user is mastered the art, and may fly with great ease, only having slight trouble changing direction in the air. They are able to move at double their movement speed.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 5 plus 2 per post.

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[b]Name:[/b] Healing Ability
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Element:[/b] Fire
[b]Description:[/b] Making a protective coating that can slightly heal the user, This coating burns the area around the user that is wounded. This is a somewhat painful process, but it speeds up the healing process. This process is similar to cauterization, where it burns the tissue to stop blood loss. This also mitigates damage, making it less serve, and allowing the user of the jutsu to return to battle much quicker. Smaller cuts are healed within one post
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 15 and  4 Cp per post

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[b]Name:[/b] Kinkami Level One
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The users tend to go through an extreme emotion of rage, and in some cases sadness. The three levels are merely just a percentage of power release. The force of the power makes the user Strength, Speed, and Endurance is increased by 15% of their standard form. There are only three releases to the Kinkami. Also, in each form, the hair of the user glows a very golden color, and increases in length each time. However, this ability comes at a great chakra cost. The form can only be achieved if the user has become very strong.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 13 plus 4 per post

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[b]Name:[/b] Kinkami Level Two
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The users tend to go through an extreme emotion of rage, and in some cases sadness. The three levels are merely just a percentage of power release. The force of the power makes the user Strength, speed, and Endurance increase by 30% of their standard form.  There are only three releases to the Kinkami. Also, in each form, the hair of the user glows a very golden color, and increases in length each time. However, this ability comes at a great chakra cost. The form can only be achieved if the user has become very strong.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 20 plus 6 per post

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[b]Name:[/b] Kinkami Level Three
[b]Rank:[/b] S
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The users tend to go through an extreme emotion of rage, and in some cases sadness. The three levels are merely just a percentage of power release. The force of the power makes the user Strength, speed, and Endurance increase by 50% of their standard form. here are only three releases to the Kinkami. Also, in each form, the hair of the user glows a very golden color, and increases in length each time, in this form the hair is down to their rears. However, this ability comes at a great chakra cost. The form can only be achieved if the user has become very strong.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 35 plus 9 per post

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[b]Name:[/b] Chihoko
[b]Rank:[/b]  C
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] Chihoko is a taijutsu technique that involves its user moving their arms fast enough that they seemingly have four of them, allowing them to attack and defend their self much more efficiently. This is done by using the same concept with the flying, but focusing the chakra in the arms. No Extra arms added.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 6

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[b]Name:[/b] Solar Flare
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] Using the same concept as Kinkami, the user makes a a light around themselves, and everyone looking at the user, in a ten meter radius is blinded for one post. The user is not affected by this.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 4

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[b]Name:[/b]Chakra Blast
[b]Rank:[/b] C rank
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Element:[/b] Any
[b]Description:[/b] The user permeates their chakra element from their palm, and forms a small ball in one or both hands, after making the proper handseals. This ball can be fired off at an enemy. Any of the basic five elements can be used with this jutsu. This does not allow the user to mix elements. Six blasts can be used each time the handsigns are made. Chakra is consumed per blast.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 5
Effect on Opponent, if hit.
Fire: Struck area is slightly burnt.
Wind: Struck area is slightly scratched.
Water: Small bruises on area.
Lightning: Struck area is slightly burnt.
Earth: Small bruises on area.

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[b]Name:[/b]Chakra wave
[b]Rank:[/b] B rank
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Element:[/b] Any
[b]Description:[/b] The user puts their palms together and permeates their chakra element from their palms, and forms a small wave both hands. This wave can be fired off at an enemy. Any of the basic five elements can be used with this jutsu. This does not allow the user to mix elements. These can be fired very fast, but with handseals. One wave can be made, after making the handseals.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 12
Effect on Opponent, if hit.
Fire: Struck area is very burnt, causing second degree burns around the area that is hit.
Wind: If an area is struck on the target, the user will have several cuts on the area.
Water: large bruises on area.
Lightning: Area that is hit, the area struck becomes very stiff and hard to use for one post.
Earth: Large bruises on area.

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[b]Name:[/b] Rushing attack
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] Using the several pores the user has access to the user will force chakra through through a selected area, and increase their speed slightly for just a few moments (One post). This allows the users attacks to be more forceful, and also is effective in dodging attacks if they are coming towards them.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 7

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Quote :
Name:Chakra Blast
Rank: C rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Element: Any
Description: The user permeates their chakra element from their palm, and forms a small ball in one or both hands. This ball can be fired off at an enemy. Any of the basic five elements can be used with this jutsu. This does not allow the user to mix elements. These can be fired very fast, and multiple times, without handsigns.
Chakra Cost: 5

You realize that at C rank that would be 5 CP per blast shot off, right? Same with Chakra Wave.

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Name: Chihoko
Rank: D - C
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: Chihoko is a taijutsu technique that involves its user moving their arms fast enough that they seemingly have four(D) to eight(C) of them, allowing them to attack and defend their self much more efficiently. This is done by using the same concept with the flying, but focusing the chakra in the arms.
Chakra Cost: 3(D) 6(C)

I understand that moving your arms really fast would make you better at defending, but it doesn't matter if you look like you have 8 arms, because you still only have 2.

Level One Kinkami needs to have more than 2 CP drain per post, I suggest 4
Level Two Kinkami needs to be at least 5 or 6
Level Three Kinkami needs to be at least 9
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PostSubject: Re: Sankariki Clan [Advanced Chakra Release] Sankariki Clan [Advanced Chakra Release] EmptyWed 30 Mar 2011, 1:24 am

I realize cp will be taken per blast.

I know we have 2 arms, They're just moving really fast, I get that.


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Kinkami level three is still only 6
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Theres nothing that I can find....

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This ready for modding?
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Yes, I think it is.
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This is being modded and edited through PM. Smile
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Let's try to get this approved again, shall we?

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Approved 1/2

Last edited by Ame on Wed 27 Mar 2013, 2:58 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Updating)
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Things:
  • You have a clan fighting style, please put it in a style template. The Hyuuga have a style template in their application, for reference and example. Please make that change if you wish to make this style official.
  • I am fine with your clan offering a strength boost, but can you also decrease it to 5%, like the endurance against taijutsu attacks, please? Thanks.
  • Name: Healing Ability -- This needs to be Eijutsu, seeing as you're healing yourself. That would not be ninjutsu. Also, please specify how much you're able to heal yourself and over what duration of time. For example, tiny cuts and bruises would be healed in a single post, while slightly more wounded areas, such as a shuriken stab would take a full two posts to heal; the healing ability should not go far beyond that, since you're also getting a stamina upgrade to continue fighting, yeah?
  • Name: Kinkami Level One -- A B rank that grants 60% bonus, altogether? Nope. Decrease that, please. That sounds more like an A rank package of boosts.
  • Name: Kinkami Level Two -- Also decrease this a bit. You're offering a 90% bonus from a mere A rank jutsu. That puts your FAR above most players in combat and give you a HUGE advantage. Also, do these Kinkami level boosts stack? If so, they'll need to be dropped in their power further.
  • Name: Kinkami Level Three -- Can you guess what I am going to say? Needs to be reduced, especially if these stack their abilities. 150% bonus from one jutsu is insane. Please reduce that.
  • Name: Chihoko -- Take out the D rank option, since speed of that level is beyond D rank, and make the C rank option only move as fast as to make it look like four arms are being created.
  • Name:Chakra wave -- "Very burnt?" Please specify. 2nd degree burns? That's the most I'd allow for a B rank. What is "very scratched?" Please give more insight to that, thanks.
  • Name: Rushing attack -- The jutsu description here is very vague and does not really cover a lot. Can you please re write it to more easily explain what this jutsu is doing. As it is, it says something about choosing a part of the body and then a blast of chakra and then something about avoiding other attacks, etc, etc... please clarify this jutsu. Thanks.
  • P.S: Remember to make the edits to the coded jutsu at the bottom of the app as well Smile

    EDIT: Talked with Kyle about the Kinkami jutsu, and we came to the mutual agreement that they're fine. So don't worry about them. Pls do the rest, kthnxbai.
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Everything but the Healing ability is finished. Also the things we talked about in Skype has been changed.

I edited the Healing ability to work for ninjutsu.
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Approved: 2/2
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Unapproved for edits that need to be made.
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Reapproved bitches!
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Archived.
Due to flying being an exclusive trait to the Seven Tails.
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