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| Subject: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Thu 24 Mar 2011, 6:22 am | |
| UCHIHA, SUZUMI.◘ The road I walk is paved in gold to glorify my platinum soul ◘ ◘ I am the closest thing to god ◘ ◘ So worship me and never stop ◘THE INFO. Name: Uchiha, Suzumi (Pronounced; Sue Zoo Me). Nickname: - Quote :
- Suzu-Chan • A casual nickname used on her since she was a child. Those who do not know her personally should never call her by that.
Mistress of Malice • A nickname bestowed on her by the vast amount of challengers she has fought. Age: 26. Gender: Female. Appearance:
Most wouldn’t suspect Suzumi is an Uchiha. After all, she does not possess the usual black spiky hair or deep mysterious colored eyes. Nor does she bare the Uchiha symbol on any article of her clothing for those to see. Despite appearances, she is very much so an Uchiha. Hidden under her cyan colored eyes is the Sharingan just waiting to be activated. Layers of long hair in shades of turquoise and teal mask what was once short, spiky, black hair. Amazing what hair dye can do, neh? Usually tied up in pigtails or a single ponytail; three or four ornaments hang delicately to add a more traditional geisha vibe decoration. The only make up she tends to wear is some form of eye makeup. Standing at five feet and five inches, Suzumi’s skin resembles that of ivory. A single tattoo in the shape of a small lavender cloud resides on the left side (her right side) of her ribs. The scars she has are never longer than four inches. Both tattoo and scars are almost definitely covered up by clothing or bandages.
Their is little to no difference between Suzumi’s casual wear and professional wear. In fact, the only real difference is you won’t be seeing shoes nor her Shantakai robe being worn while off-duty. To see a dress or kimono on her is particularly rare; her usual attire being short-shorts and bikini tops. She would describe the materials of her clothing as stretchy and comfortable. The young woman’s shoes are low-heeled black boots that go up to her thigh and tie up on the side. Her wardrobe mostly contains black and grey, though Suzumi admits she likes just a bit of pink, as well. Moving off the basic stuff, the young woman tends to also wear arm warmers (though only one at a time for some odd reason). Then their is her acidic pink colored sash. It is capable of keeping a maximum of two swords/katana in place on her as well as three small scrolls. Suzumi has a vast amount of jewelry. She never wears an overbearing amount, however. Her headband is tied around like a necklace.
Personality:
Suzumi has the unhealthy mentality that she must be a goddess like figure or else she will be forgotten. Whether she is bad or whether she is good; she must be remembered and known. She cannot afford to be overlooked or ignored as she was when she was a child, thus the idea of being a goddess seems like a very good way to avoid this. Their are many types of goddesses, of course; some of war, some of life, and many more. What type Suzumi’s aiming for though is currently (and perhaps surprisingly) unknown. None the less, the young woman has the most undying dedication to reach that high status. So much, in fact, that it’s really quite admirable and perhaps inspiring. Of course, it is also incredibly narcissistic and troubling at times.
As another part of her ultimate goal, Suzumi could be classified with having monophobia; an abnormal fear of being alone. If she is alone no one can acknowledge her existence. Not being acknowledged is being forgotten. Being forgotten cannot be permitted. That’s how this young woman sees it as, anyways. Should someone begin to leave her or should she expect she is about to become alone, an immediate panic rushes through her. However, she attempts to mask her panicked state and any symptoms that come with it; never speaking of her phobia, either. The young woman isn’t even picky of who her company is. All in all, you could say she’s just one ambitious attention whore.
Family is a taboo subject with her. It triggers various memories from her childhood that can send her into a temporary downward spiral. Whether it be her sobbing or lashing out at you, it won’t be particularly pretty. Provoking her or taunting her upon the subject can cause her to easily snap. She will attack, if not physically than definitely verbally. It’s a delicate topic to say the least. Those who are not highly respected by her shouldn’t even attempt to address family matters or times from when she was a child. Not only must she respect you, but trust you, as well. Suzumi can put up a tough fight, too. She isn’t one to give up easily and trying to get her to stop can prove perhaps a bit difficult.
During the limited times she is not too preoccupied with finding a way to reach goddess status or keeping herself from becoming alone; Suzumi acts rather serene and relaxed. She does not shun socializing (of course) and doesn’t mind crowded or busy places. At times, she can be heard talking to herself in murmurs, but normally Suzumi talks to herself within her head. The young woman just so happens to enjoy fortune telling or anything similar (she’s ever so slightly superstitious), games involving cards, and jewelry. She dislikes cold weather and unpleasant fortune telling.
Clan: Uchiha. Ninpō:
- Quote :
“I won’t be ignored.”
“I am your goddess.”
THE NINJA. Origin: Konohagakure no Sato. Affiliation: Shantakai. Rank: S-Rank Missing Ninja. Specialties: Genjutsu; Weaponry (Swords/Katanas | Exotic). Elemental Affinities: Katon; Raiton. Combat Style: Suzumi is a close range fighter- if not due to majority of her genjutsu being of that range, then most definitely from her specialty in the art of swords. Being capable with weaponry, she is centered around speed more so than strength. She considers far range fighting a weakness. Special Characteristics:
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Name: Clan Prodigy. Rank: C. Type: Chakra Based. Physical Requirements: - Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks are 20% more destructive with their increased power and size.
Name: Improved Speed. Rank: C. Type: Physical Based. Physical Requirements: - Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
Name: Improved Perception. Rank: C. Type: Mental Based. Physical Requirements: - Description: The ninja trains their skill in perception and analyzing their environment to more distinct levels. Every physical motion is identified to the ninja whether its a movement in a leaf or change in temperature. This skill is handy when faced with genjutsu as it makes the user capable in identifying an illusion of C-Rank or lower. However although they can sense the genjutsu they must rely on other methods of breaking the spell.
Name: Street Smarts. Rank: C. Type: Miscellaneous Based. Physical Requirements: - Description: Being raised in a era of battle and war the ninja has sometimes faced instances where they must gain natural street smarts in order to survive in various situations. Those with this characteristic gains a natural ability of self-preservation which allows them to survive in nearly any society or community by any means necessary. They can hustle Ryo quicker than one could imagine and can hold their own in times of struggle. Ninja with street smarts tend to have a heightened sense of intuition, honor, and fear in their respective communities.
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Mon 04 Apr 2011, 8:18 am | |
| THE ARSENAL | PART I. ◘ I got, you want ◘ ◘ It's just, don't stop ◘ - Quote :
- Name: The Albino Blossom.
Rank: B. Type: Weapon, Katana. Appearance:
Quantity: 1. Storage: Tied at Suzumi’s wasit via sash. Special Abilities: • This katana is chakra conductive. Elemental or not, as long as it’s chakra, it can definitely be conducted into this weapon. This allows more efficient and deadly attacks. • Should anyone aside Suzumi attempt to use this weapon, the handle will induce a First-Degree (redness, pain, and minor swelling) burn upon their hand(s). - Quote :
- Name: The Double Dispenser.
Rank: B. Type: Weapon, Exotic. Appearance: This is a wrist-mounted device; the part worn around the wrist being a black cuff. On top of the cuff are two glass cylinders, side by side, no bigger than the cuff itself. Each have their own small nozzle which allow certain substances within them to be blown out in a more controlled manner. The first cylinder is empty; this one being used to pump the fire element into and then let out, similar to a flamethrower. The second cylinder is filled with dark purple smoke; it being similar to a smoke bomb, though pumped out in a more controlled manner. Quantity: 1. Storage: Mounted on Suzumi’s right wrist. Special Abilities: • This wrist-mounted device is chakra conductive. Elemental or not, as long as it’s chakra, it can definitely be conducted into this weapon. - Quote :
- Name: The Divine Locket.
Rank: B. Type: Genjutsu Enhancer/Supplementary Item. Appearance:
Quantity: 1. Storage: Worn on around Suzumi’s neck. Special Abilities: • This locket is capable of triggering certain genjutsu. By channeling a certain amount of chakra within this piece of jewelry, the jewels encrusted along it will shine considerably brighter and give off a faint red glow/aura. This can cause individuals to be entrapped within a genjutsu after making eye contact with it. • Should anyone aside Suzumi attempt to wear this locket, the ring will induce a First-Degree (redness, pain, and minor swelling) burn upon their neck. • Not a special ability per say, but this locket can be opened to reveal a clock. - Quote :
- Name: The Skull Queen Ring.
Rank: A. Type: Genjutsu Enhancer/Supplementary Item. Appearance:
Quantity: 1. Storage: Worn on Suzumi’s left index finger. Special Abilities: • This ring is capable of triggering certain genjutsu. By channeling a certain amount of chakra within this piece of jewelry, the jewels encrusted along it will shine considerably brighter and give off a faint black glow/aura. This can cause individuals to be entrapped within a genjutsu after making eye contact with it. • Similar to a flashlight, the decorative crown upon the skull’s head will illuminate. This is achieved by channeling a certain amount of chakra within this piece of jewelry. This can be particularly useful in dark areas and at night. • Should anyone aside Suzumi attempt to wear this ring, the ring will induce a First-Degree (redness, pain, and minor swelling) burn upon their finger. - Quote :
- Name: The Black Mamba.
Rank: S. Type: Weapon, Katana. Appearance:
Quantity: 1. Storage: Tied at Suzumi’s waist via sash. Special Abilities: • This katana is chakra conductive. Elemental or not, as long as it’s chakra, it can definitely be conducted into this weapon. This allows more efficient and deadly attacks. • Should anyone aside Suzumi attempt to use this weapon, the handle will induce a Second-Degree (redness, severe pain, and blisters) burn upon their hand(s). • The blade belonging to this weapon is unbreakable. • Due to the chakra reserves within this weapon; once per battle, Suzumi is capable of accessing said chakra reserves to restore her own chakra by 15CP.
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Mon 04 Apr 2011, 8:33 am | |
| THE ARSENAL | PART II. ◘ This is entertainment ◘ ◘ Lies are entertainment ◘ ◘ You are down on your knees ◘ ◘ Begging me for more ◘
- ◘ BASIC TECHNIQUES ◘:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
- ◘ CLAN TECHNIQUES ◘:
Name: Sharingan Activated: Three-Tomoe. Rank: - Type: Bloodline - Doujutsu. Requires: A/S-Ranked Uchiha. Description: The Three-Tomoe version of the Sharigan is the final version of the Sharingan and is accessible to elite Uchiha of A or S class in power and skill. Like all versions of the Sharingan, the user is able to see the flow of chakra whether it be internal or external. Such skills derived from his ability include being able to identify clones, detecting chakra barriers and genjutsu, and even telling if someone is placed under a genjutsu by detecting chakra irregularities. The Three-Tomoe form of the Sharingan grants the user both the One and Two Tomoe abilities which include perceiving things in slow motion and mimicking a opponents movements. In this form the user now gains a ability called 'Prediction' which allows them to predict the next movement of anymotion detected by their Sharingan. With this, they can essentially counteract attacks before they even happen. However their physical ability must allow them to do so accordingly, for their body may not be able to react in time. Another type pf power the Third-Tomoe grans them is more power in the art of genjutsu. The user is now able to put those who look into their Sharingan in a instant illusion if wished, either putting them in hypnotic, pain, parlaying state with a mere glance.
Name: Ridairekuto Kunai | Redirecting Kunai. Rank: D. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Requires: At least One-Tomoe. Description: Ridairekuto Kunai is a technique performed by members of the Uchiha clan. This technique is commonly used amongst weapon experts, but those who possess the Sharingan are able to utilize it with equal proficiency. This ability simply allows the user to redirect a kunai's digytjrection by ricocheting them off one another in either one or successive throws. From this the user is able to attack opponent(s) from nearly all angles and provide a series of surprise attacks. Chakra Cost: 3CP.
Name: Sōfūshasan no Tachi | Sharingan Windmill Triple Attack. Rank: C. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+). Requires: At least One-Tomoe. Description: Sōfūshasan no Tachi is a technique performed by members of the Uchiha clan. Using their Sharingan, the user hurls three Windmill Shuriken all of which have wire attached to them. While in the air the user can navigate shuriken to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them. Chakra Cost: 5CP.
Name: Sharingan Shaji | Sharingan Copying. Rank: E-S. Type: Doujutsu. Range: - Requires: At least Two-Tomoe. Description: Sharingan Shaji is a technique used by members of the Uchiha clan have have acquired at least Two-Tomoe in each of their Sharingan. This ability allows the user to copy a persons technique after seeing it once and perform it themselves. Any technique can be copied but it must be of equal rank or below of the user and cannot be bloodline based. Multiple techniques can be copied, but the copier is only able to repeat the technique solely in his/her thread. Thus the copied technique is not permanently gained by the user. Chakra Cost: Dependent on Copied Technique.
Name: Bijuu Tokuatsu Shiyou | Demon Suppression Method. Rank: B. Type: Doujutsu - Kinjutsu. Range: - Requires: At least three tomoe. Description: Bijuu Tokuatsu Shiyou is a technique used by members of the Uchiha clan who possess the final version of the Sharingan. This is a powerful ability performed by the user which is specifcially designed to counteract jinchuuriki. When a host unleashes the power of their bijuu (whether tailed form or full form) the user is able to instantly revert them back to their physical form and lock them within that state for the rest of the thread. Chakra Cost: 19CP.
Name: Magen: Kyō Tenchi-ten | Demonic Illusion: Mirror Heaven and Earth. Rank: E-S. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: - Requires: At least Three-Tomoe. Description: Magen: Kyō Tenchi-ten is a technique used by members of the Uchiha clan who have acquired the final version of the Sharingan. The user decrypts a genjutsu that has been applied onto them and casts back the technique with identical effects onto the opponent. It's a form of illusion reversal, but in order to instantly read through a technique and cast it in return, the Sharingan's power is necessary. Those of which have their genjutsu reversed on them suffer the same effects of the reversed technique. However the user must place equal amount of chakra into the technique in order to reverse it. Chakra Cost: Dependent on Reversed Technique.
Name: Magen: Toransu | Demonic Illusion: Hypnosis. Rank: B. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: - Requires: At least Three-Tomoe. Description: Magen: Toransu is a technique used by members of the Uchiha clan who have acquired the final version of the Sharingan. Using the Sharginan's ability, the user is able to put anyone who looks into the Sharingan eye in a genjutsu. This technique however is capable of hypnotizing a victim into doing what you wish. It requires the user to to keep constant eye contact with the target which they cannot help since they are under the Sharingan's thrall. Common things the user is gain from this technique is the ability to make the person perform suicide, or even tell confidential information. Only one person can be hypnotized at once. Chakra Cost: 15CP (Additional 3CP Per Post).
Name: Mugen: Nenshou Kamibodi | Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body. Rank: B. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: - Requires: At least Three-Tomoe. Description: Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body is a technique used by members of the Uchiha Clan have have acquired the final version of the Sharingan. Using the Sharginans ability, the user is able to put anyone who looks into their Sharingan eye into this genjutsu. The illusion traps the victim in a dark empty space where their body is made of paper that burns from toe to head while the user is watching. The technique will make it harder for the target to move properly. Chakra Cost: 15CP (Additional 3CP Per Post).
Name: Magen: Kasegui | Demonic Illusion: Shackling Stakes. Rank: B. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: - Requires: At least Three-Tomoe. Description: Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body is a technique used by members of the Uchiha Clan have have acquired the final version of the Sharingan. The opponent is caught in the illusionary world created by the user, and the victim will be tormented with the sensation of having spikes driven through their limbs, taking away their body's freedom. At the same time, the physical pain accompanying the illusion reveals the greatest use this technique has is primarily for torture. Chakra Cost: 15CP (Additional 3CP Per Post).
- ◘ GENJUTSU ◘:
Name: Hot Saliva. Rank: E. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: - Description: The user will spit on the target’s skin. The area that was spit on will briefly burn, similar to that of when a person’s finger were to ever so slightly touch a hot stove. The pain felt doesn’t last very long at all, so less in fact, that individuals caught within this genjutsu do not even need to break out of it. Most don’t even realize it is a genjutsu. The effects cannot exceed over one post. Chakra Cost: 2. Name: Bathroom Break. Rank: D. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: - Description: This technique begins after the target has been physically (skin to skin) touched by Suzumi. After doing so, the target will feel as if his or her bladder is becoming more and more full; the desire to urinate continuously growing. Lasts 3 posts. Chakra Cost: 3. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1) Name: Creeping Sickness. Rank: D. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has made the correct hand seals. The target will hear Suzumi go into a coughing fit and see a rather large amount of blood dripping from her eyes, nose, and mouth. They will also hear her groan in pain; whimpering pathetically and trembling violently. She will appear as if she’s about to pass out or even die. Chakra Cost: 4. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1) Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion. Chakra Cost: 3 Name: Shining Gems. Rank: D. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Element: - Description: This technique begins after the target has made eye contact with one of her pieces of jewelry. After doing so, the jewelry will seemingly begin to shine brighter and brighter; making it harder for individual(s) to focus on Suzumi and any movements she does for as long as she continues to wear the jewelry. Lasts 3 posts. Chakra Cost: 4. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1) Name: Witch’s Cat. Rank: D. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has made the correct hand seals. An all black cat will then emerge from behind the user’s legs. By meowing and purring, those who see the cat can be temporarily charmed and put at ease; not a care in the world. Suzumi can even use this cat to seek out a specific individual and attempt to lure them wherever she like. Chakra Cost: 4. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1) Name: Down The Rabbit Hole. Rank: C. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: - Element: - Description: Upon making eye contact with Suzumi’s Sharingan, the target(s) will be trapped within this genjutsu. The effects cause the colors within the area to seem considerably brighter and more vivid; visibly changing shades of colors, as well. This can cause a headache, dizziness, and slight nausea. Lasts 3 posts. Chakra Cost: 6. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 2) Name: Flower Petal Escape Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: If the user comes under attack, she or he can use this technique to cover her or his escape. After forming the needed hand seals, the user's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. These petals will confuse and distract her or his opponent while she or he escapes or hides. Chakra Cost: 7 Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object. Chakra Cost: 6 Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Range: Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over. Chakra Cost: 7 Name: Life Monitor. Rank: C. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has clapped once within the target’s earshot. After doing so, the target(s) cannot hear anything but their own breathing and heart beat. Lasts 3 posts. Chakra Cost: 6. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 2) Name: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: N/A Description: After the user forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his or her target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety. Chakra Cost: 8 Name: Succubus Transformation. Rank: C. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+). Element: - Description: This technique begins after the target(s) has made eye contact with one of her pieces of jewelry. The user’s breasts will appear to be much larger in size along with her hips; eyes glazed over with scarlet red lips. Resembling that of the curse seal activation, a faint alluring glow will spread over her skin, starting at her face and ending at her toes. Two dark brown curled horns will emerge from her head and two dark brown bat-like wings will expand from her back. This technique can attract or intimidate the target(s). Chakra Cost: 7. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 2) Name: Death’s Touch. Rank: B. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element:Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has physically (skin to skin) touched the target. The area that was touched will then appear as if it’s been cut. The skin around the cut will curl, loose color (turn greyish), and begin to rot away. Any other skin to skin contact will have the same effect for as long as the genjutsu is active. Lasts 3 posts. Chakra Cost: 13. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3) Name: Flower Petal Dissolve Rank: B Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: If the user becomes trapped in a Genjutsu or wants to appear to be trapped she or he can disperse into a shower of flower petals. With this technique these petals will fly around and consume her or his targets, dissolving their bodies away. Chakra Cost: 10 Name: Genjutsu Interrogation Technique Rank: B Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: To try and break the (captured) target’s will, the users puts them under a Genjutsu sensory spell. This is to make the target give as much information as possible. However, if the target has strong will, the technique will be useless. Chakra Cost: 13 Name: Heartthrob. Rank: B. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has made the correct hand seals. She then makes a squeezing motion with one of her hands, displayed for the target to see. Every squeezing motion the target sees causes an ache within the target’s chest as if it were some form of voodoo. Chakra Cost: 13. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3) Name: Magen • Jubaku Satsu - Demonic Illusion • Tree Binding Death Rank: B Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the user will disappear and approach her/his target. Once near her/his target, a tree will grow at their feet and its branches will bind them so they can no longer move. Once the illusion makes them believe they are captured, the user will appear from the tree itself and stab her/his target with a kunai. Chakra Cost: 12 Name: Raining Blood. Rank: B. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+). Element: - Description: The user will draw blood onto their hand from themselves (from a sharp bite, small cut, etc). After the target has seen the blood on the user’s hand, even just a glance, the genjutsu will activate. The skies will seemingly be clouded, similar to a rainstorm, and then begin to rain blood. It begins slow and then progresses to a faster pace. This technique is only effective outdoors. Chakra Cost: 14. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3) Name: Creeping Sickness | The Last Breath Rank: A. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has made the correct hand seals. The target will then feel the overwhelming urge to cough. They may attempt to suppress it, but once the first cough is made and let out, they are thrown into a violent coughing fit to the point of coughing up blood and perhaps even vomiting. Their eyes will also water up and begin to leak blood; a massive nosebleed occurring, too. Their body will feel difficult to keep stable and eventually begin to tremble. While this genjutsu will only exhaust ninja ranks B-S, if used against C-Ranked, they will most likely render unconscious. Chakra Cost: 23. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 5) Name: Cursed Heirloom Madness. Rank: A. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi’s target has made eye contact with one of her pieces of jewelry. Mere seconds later, it will appear that four walls of red velvet are surrounding and entrapping the target. The fifth wall falls atop the walls surrounding the target, working as a lid. Silver chains and strings of pink pearls (as large as Sasuke’s purple rope from Shippuden) will then emerge from the walls and attempt to strangle the target. This can either paralyze an opponent or cause breathing troubles for them. Chakra Cost: 22. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 5) Name: Intoxication. Rank: A. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has kissed the target or a body part belonging to the target. As she kisses the target, the target will feel as if they’re slipping into pure relaxation; no worry or care. Their body and mind feels at such a peace that they do not wish to even move. This causes their body to go limp. If used against a C-Ranked ninja, this technique can even lull them to an unconscious state. Chakra Cost: 23 (Chakra Cost Per Post: 5) Name: Kamira's Genjutsu Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: N/A Description: The user will cause the area around the target to be enveloped by darkness. Once inside the black space, the target will see grotesque figures said to be tortured criminals, the previous victims of the technique. These grotesqueries will reach out and grab a hold of the target. They will then be thrown into the void to the mercy of a spectral dragon. The horrifying oni can even extend from the targets own body to attack them. All aimed at transfixing the victim with fear and shock while user themself chokes and kills the target. Chakra Cost: 23 Name: Kokuangyou no Jutsu - Journey into Black Darkness Technique Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: N/A Description: Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat. Chakra Cost: 24 Name: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu - Temple of Nirvana Technique Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A Description: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place a large body of people into a unconscious state. The target can avoid the spell by forming and using the dispel skill. Chakra Cost: 25 Name: Reliving Hell. Rank: A. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: - Element: - Description: Upon making eye contact with Suzumi’s Sharingan, a single target will be trapped within this genjutsu. The effects cause the worst moment of the target’s life to reappear before them; the target being stuck right in the middle of it. Example being, should the worst moment of the target’s life were to have been their mother being brutally stabbed right in front of them, then they will see that. Down to the room, the temperature, the very detail of what clothing the mother was wearing will be reproduced to complete the nightmarish memory. While this is occurring, Suzumi is also taunting the target and making rather inappropriate remarks. Chakra Cost: 24 Name: Sinister Silhouettes. Rank: A. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+). Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has made the correct hand seals. A large mob of twenty-three silhouettes emerge from the ground in a circle around both the target and user. The silhouettes do not not look human by any means; having no face, no hair, or even individual toes and fingers to use. They are all black and seem almost as if they belong in a cartoon. Without another moments waste, they quickly gang up on the target and attack them. This can allow Suzumi to become lost within the mob and find a way to escape or hide from the area. Chakra Cost: 21. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 5) Name: Utakata - Ephemeral Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user will start this technique by using only one finger on his or her right hand. His or her target does not have to look into his or her eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, the user can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them. Chakra Cost: 22 Name: Alice Human Sacrifice. Rank: S. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+). Element: - Description: This technique begins after the target has made eye contact with Suzumi’s Sharingan or after she has made the necessary hand seals. It is activated within an instant and the target then sees a completely different world despite not having seen any progression that lead up to it. Their is three stages. - Quote :
STAGE ONE; THE FIRST ALICE: This is the first part of the genjutsu that the target sees. All their surroundings are black with the exception of a single red path that lays out before them; the path glowing lightly and essentially the best source of light from within the black void. The only other source of light (which is considerably more brighter than the path) is straight ahead at the very end of the path off in the distance. Large red rose bushes block majority of the path. Should the user attack or even touch the rose bushes, ten black silhouettes emerge and attack the target. If they escape and reach all the way at the end of the path, an open door takes them to stage two.
STAGE TWO; THE SECOND ALICE: This is the second part of the genjutsu that the target sees. After reaching the end of the path from stage one and crossing the open door, the surroundings of the target are a black room with a blue circular platform. The platform glows brightly and is the only source of light within the area. A happy man is singing in the center and appears harmless. He does not even acknowledge the target’s presence. A locked door lies behind him. As the man continues to sing, the same black silhouettes from before return and will attack the target. The door will not unlock unless the man is defeated (ceases to sing).
STAGE THREE; THE THIRD ALICE: This is the third part of the genjutsu that the target sees. After defeating the singing man and passing through the door, the surroundings of the target are a black room with a green staircase leading up. The staircase glows brightly and is the only source of light within the area. At the bottom of the staircase is a throne with a queen sitting in it. She politely addresses the target, “Are you alright, stranger?” with a petite angelic voice. Her body is beautiful. “I’m a queen, you know.” she will explain after only a mere second of her first speaking to the target. “The fairest of them all. B-But I can’t be forever.” she brings a hand to her own cheek. “My beauty..” she chokes back on tears. “My beauty!” she shrieks. And with that, her eyes turn black. Her skin rots and she bleeds from her nose. The same black silhouettes from before escape from her mouth and attack the target. If you escape and run up the staircase, two twins lunge out from the black depths and pulls you into falling off the stairs. The genjutsu ends here.
This genjutsu cannot be immediately Kai’d out of. The target may use Kai after a certain amount of posts depending on the rank. C-Ranked may do so after seven posts. B-Ranked may do so after five posts. A-Ranked may do so after four posts. S-Ranked may do so after three posts. Should the target specialize in genjutsu, the amount of posts before they may Kai decreases by two. All harm done to the target within the genjutsu does not effect them physically in the real world, only emotionally and mentally. Should the target pass out or die within the genjutsu, the illusion is released and the target is unconscious for the rest of the topic. The user may also not attack the target while this genjutsu is in effect. Chakra Cost: 39. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 9)
- ◘ WEAPONRY ◘:
Name: Pin Down. Rank: D. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: This technique requires at least two bladed weapons. Suzumi will aim the blades to pin down her opponent via stabbing the clothing surrounding a certain body part belonging to them. When pinning down the opponent with the blades, it is possible for the blade to cut the individual though not guaranteed. This is considerably easier to preform should the target be wearing loose clothing or something like a cloak. Chakra Cost: 3. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1) Name: Precise Cutting. Rank: D. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: - Description: The user utilizes all their focus into cutting a very precise location on the opponent’s body. Usually, it is (but not limited to) the throat, arms, or legs. While this may highly increase the chance of landing a single good cut on the target’s body, it is possible for the user to overlook their surroundings and possibly trip, misstep, etc. Chakra Cost: 3. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1) Name: Frantic Cutting. Rank: D. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: - Description: This technique is essentially the exact opposite of Precise Cutting. The user utilizes all their focus into cutting any location on the opponent’s body. While this may highly increase the chance of landing multiple cuts on the target’s body, they are usually not very large or deep. Chakra Cost: 3. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1) Name: Burning Blade. Rank: C-A Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: Katon (Fire). Description: The user utilizes the fire element into the blade of their weapon. Should the user’s blade come into contact with something, the area upon infliction will not only be cut but also suffer various possibilities depending on the rank. It is put into further detailed below. - Quote :
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• C-Ranked: The weakest out of the three. This fire is capable of burning clothing and rope. Should it come into contact with the target’s skin, it will produce a First-Degree burn. These burns will cause a redness within the area, pain, and minor swelling. The skin is dry, but will not leave a blister. • B-Ranked: This fire is capable of burning dry wood and plants. Should it come into contact with the target’s skin, it will produce a Second-Degree burn. These burns will cause redness, severe pain, and blisters. Can potentially leave minor scarring. • A-Ranked: The strongest out of the three. Should it come into contact with the target’s skin, it will produce a Third-Degree burn. These burns will appear dry and waxy white, leathery, brown, or charred. It may cause little pain, no pain, or even a numb feeling at first due to nerve damage. Will need professional treatment as soon as possible. Chakra Cost: • C-Ranked: 7. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 2) • B-Ranked: 13. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3) • A-Ranked: 23. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 5) Name: Flamethrower. Rank: C-B. Type: Weaponry. Range: • C-Ranked: Close (0m - 5m). • B-Ranked: Mid (5m - 10m). Element: Katon (Fire). Description: This jutsu requires Suzumi’s specially designed weapon known as the “The Double Dispenser”. After pumping the fire element into it, given the nature of the weapon, the fire will be released as a stream. Though it resembles Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique), the stream of fire that is emitted will not erupt into a large sphere of flames like said technique. This technique at C-Ranked can cause First-Degree burns (redness, pain, and minor swelling) while at B-Ranked can cause Second-Degree burns (redness, severe pain, and blisters). Chakra Cost: • C-Ranked: 7. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 2) • B-Ranked: 13. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3) Name: Front and Back. Rank: C. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: - Description: The technique requires at least one bladed weapon (preferably katana, swords, knives, etc). The user will make three swift cuts upon the target’s torso, quickly spin around the target, then make another three swift cuts upon the target’s back. Chakra Cost: 6. Name: Shock Slice. Rank: C-B. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: Raiton (Lightning). Description: The user utilizes the lightning element into the blade of their weapon. Should the user’s blade come into contact with someone, the area upon infliction will not only be cut but also suffer various possibilities depending on the rank. It is put into further detailed below. - Quote :
• C-Ranked: At this rank, the lightning is capable of causing either numb or tingling sensations within the area that was hit. Example being; should the target be cut in the lower arm, not only will the cut area be numb or tingling, the hand of that injured arm will be numb or tingling, too. Lasts for three posts. • B-Ranked: At this rank, the lightning is capable of causing temporary paralysis or difficulty in moving within the area that was hit. Example being; should the target be cut in the lower arm, the whole arm will render unusable or difficult to move. Lasts for three posts. Chakra Cost: • C-Ranked: 7. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 2) • B-Ranked: 13. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3) Name: Smoke Stream. Rank: C-B. Type: Weaponry. Range: • C-Ranked: Close (0m - 5m). • B-Ranked: Mid (5m - 10m). Element: - Description: This jutsu requires Suzumi’s specially designed weapon known as the “The Double Dispenser”. After pumping chakra into it, given the nature of the weapon, the chakra is used as a triggering device that then releases a stream of smoke. The smoke is a dark purple color and causes no special effects other than to make it harder for the target(s) to see their surroundings, as well as the user. It is essentially a smoke bomb but released as a stream and capable of covering more ground. Chakra Cost: • C-Ranked: 6. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 2) • B-Ranked: 12. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3) Name: Bloody Footing. Rank: B. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: - Description: This technique requires at least one bladed weapon (preferably katana, sword, knife, etc). The user will stab at one of the target’s foot, temporarily binding them in spot. The target then may choose to attack with another weapon or use this as a means to retreat. Chakra Cost: 12. Name: Shock Wave. Rank: B. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m). Element: Raiton (Lightning). Description: The user utilizes the lightning element into the blade of their weapon. After stabbing the weapon into the ground, a single large wave spreads over the surface and vanishes after reaching it’s range limit. The wave of lightning is capable of causing temporary paralysis in the legs for two posts. After that, they will have trouble moving properly for one post. Then, all effects will have worn off. Chakra Cost: 13. Name: Dance of Fire. Rank: A. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire). Description: The user utilizes the fire element into the blade of their weapon. Only once will the user spin in circle; weapon extended and having twirled rather quickly. This makes a ring of fire along the ground around the user. This can keep an opponent from escaping by entrapping them within the circle with the user. It can also be a way to keep an opponent from reaching the user should they be outside of the ring of fire. Coming into contact with the fire can cause Third-Degree burns. These burns will appear dry and waxy white, leathery, brown, or charred. It may cause little pain, no pain, or even a numb feeling at first due to nerve damage. Will need professional treatment as soon as possible. Chakra Cost: 23. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 5) Name: Shoulder Hook. Rank: A. Type: Weaponry. Range: Close (0m - 5m). Element: - Description: This techniques requires two bladed weapons (preferably katana, swords, knives, etc). The user will first sweep the target off their feet from behind with one of their legs. Once the target is falling backwards, the user jumps and comes crashing down onto the target with both bladed weapons stabbing at the target’s shoulders. Should this be successful, their will be a good amount of blood as well as pain for the target. In fact, the user may just have slight trouble pulling back the swords. Chakra Cost: 20.
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Mon 04 Apr 2011, 9:10 am | |
| THE BACKGROUND. ◘ I own the right ◘ ◘ To let go, destroy you ◘ ◘ This is my life ◘
History:
- ◘ SPITE | Birth Arc ◘:
Suzumi Uchiha was a mistake. A mistake created out of spite and anger. Had she been made out of tradition or love, she may have had a different life. But she hadn’t been made that way. She had been made when her mother, Miwa Orihara, chose to have an affair with Yohei Uchiha out of her desperate and greedy desire for passion and romance- something her husband would not give her. Yes, they would preform in romantic activities, but it all seemed out of obligation. Her husband, of all people, was no other than Mikado Uchiha. She had slept with her husband’s own brother out of frustration with her marriage. Being surrounded by a clan of strict elders and their traditions, the affair remained a secret. Neither individual believed they would have to worry about being found out, though. No one could have possibly caught them. It was all in the past. They could have possibly remained at such a content state in regards to the affair, but fate had other plans. Miwa became pregnant.
Mikado did not suspect foul play. In fact, neither had anyone else. Because despite Miwa’s personality- her nature- no one actually believed she would do something like have an affair. To them, she was all bark and no bite. Not knowing whether it was Mikado’s or Yohei’s child, she stressed day in and day out. She feared the consequences and what would become of her and her child. All she could do was wait. Nine long months of waiting and brutal anticipation. Then, finally, due date arrived. It was a cold night during the winter. A luminous moon filled the sky; stars twinkling, too. Suzumi had entered the world. With her mother cradling her affectionately, only one single thought echoed through Miwa’s mind.
Who was Suzumi’s father? The answer would seal her fate...
- ◘ ANALYZE | Rank-less Arc ◘:
Like any other child at her age- a mere toddler- she clung to her mother and followed wherever Miwa went. She also found herself intimidated of her so called father Mikado and often became extremely uncomfortable and self-concious around him. It didn't help that naturally his attitude was just so stoic and cold. Almost any conversation between Mikado and Suzumi was to discuss his plans he had for her; her enrolling into the ninja academy, her finding specialties and perfecting them, and other things alike. Whereas her father portrayed such a serious atmosphere, her uncle Yohei portrayed a much lighter and fluffy one. She was at a considerably more peaceful state in his presence and generally preferred being around him than her so called father. Unlike most of the Uchiha, if not all of them, Suzumi had inherited her mother's eye color; a cyan color- sometimes bright and sometimes dull. They were quite striking and people would comment fondly of them, especially her sweet uncle Yohei. However, just as many people liked them, other people disliked them- those people being actually just one person and that one person being Mikado. "They remind me of the tropicals. Can they intimidate an opponent if they resemble something so warm?" is what he would say. Comments of her weren't always about her eyes, though. In fact, he also made remarks usually involving something to do with her gender. "What a fragile looking body you have. Men could so easily break it." "You have a Uchiha's light skin color, but your mother's womanly softness to it. It doesn't look suiting on a person made to fight." "Your hair is black and spiky like many of us Uchiha. Why do you wear it in such girlish pigtails? It looks so silly and unprofessional." Because despite Mikado not outwardly admitting that he had wanted a son and not a daughter, other's could see it. That included Miwa and even Suzumi. This may have been the very reason the little Uchiha found it so difficult to be around Mikado along with all his remarks. Miwa did not approve of this and began to resent her husband for such behavior. For a little, she honestly hoped in the end that Yohei was her daughter's real father; that she would have some sort of sign to prove this. She, perhaps, should have been careful with what she wished for...
- ◘ CONFESSION | D-Rank to C-Rank Arc ◘:
Just as Mikado had planned, Suzumi was enrolled into the ninja academy as soon as she reached the fitting age. It was her first time in a building with so many children around her age. Despite being in a timid state; not really going out of her way to socialize, many would approach her. Often they would approach with questions, usually the subject being the Uchiha clan. Some would ask to see her Sharingan, which she of course did not have at the time and would have to deny them. Others would even ask if her father was a killer of hundreds, which she never had the answer to. Suzumi would always return home and receive even more questions but this time from Mikado rather than a group of children. He would ask her if she had improved., but she never knew exactly how to answer that question. Sometimes he would answer 'yes' other times 'no' and despite this, he always gave her a hard stare that could practically burn a hole through herself. Never was their any sort of praise attached.
While it was perfectly true that Miwa held distaste in her husbands behavior with her daughter, she didn't do anything particularly helpful about it. She never confronted Mikado of it nor reassured Suzumi. Guilt would not allow her. Thankfully, Yohei provided as a stand in and did what Miwa and Mikado would not. He would reassure, praise, and encourage the little Uchiha. As she grew, not only did she begin to look up to her Uncle, but she grew to show signs of stronger resemblance towards him rather than her supposed father. This did not go unnoticed by Miwa and the stress and paranoia was unlike any other. In an effort to prevent Mikado or any of the elders from noticing (assuming they hadn't already), she attempted to keep Yohei and Suzumi from interacting or even being within the same room- especially in front of others. This did not sit well with Yohei by any means who had also acknowledged the great resemblance between him and Suzumi.
Tension sparked between Yohei and Miwa; them arguing over the little Uchiha they had both created. Miwa feared the consequences of the others finding out, whereas Yohei no longer cared. He didn't believe his brother deserved Suzumi, especially with the way he treated her. The tension between the two slowly grew more noticeable and began to arouse curiosity within the elders as well as Mikado. When neither individuals would discuss it and even try to deny it, Mikado approached no other than Suzumi. It was true that she had realized something was going on between the two adults, especially when her mother seemed to have suddenly become so strict if it even remotely regarded Yohei. Reluctantly, she informed Mikado of the new prohibitions which only caused a bit more of a stir. Curiosity was no longer the only thing driving him and the elders to figure out what could possibly be the reason for the tension- now out of suspicion, as well.
However, further action would not be necessary from either Mikado or the elders. Instead, Yohei found himself doing something that would provoke much more. One day- having grown bitter and impatient over not seeing his daughter- he awaited outside of the ninja academy to walk Suzumi back home. As much as she was excited to her her supposed uncle and was greatly looking forward to walking home with him, she knew something unsettling was to come. They arrived at the Clan Headquarters hand in hand and Miwa immediately erupted at the sight. The stress and paranoia of the other Uchiha members and Mikado seeing them was overwhelming and she had finally just snapped. She had told him- warned him- and he hadn't listened. He had finally just done as he pleased. He didn't care like she did. As the argument escalated- them yelling over the little Uchiha-, Mikado eventually attempted to intervene while Suzumi stood by nervously.
For the first time in awhile, Mikado looked at his angered brother. He soon looked over at his seething wife. Then, finally, down to the flustered Suzumi. A silence fell between them all. Taking the opportunity, Miwa attempted to escort her daughter away from Yohei, which only added more fuel to the fire. In fact, it drove him to finally confess of his affair with Miwa and the fact that Suzumi just had to be his daughter (which was actually the truth). For an instance, the shock could clearly be seen on Mikado's face, but just as quickly as it had appeared- it disappeared and turned into that of fury, instead. A physical fight broke between the two men as Suzumi looked on in horror. Miwa had went crying to the elders. Whereas young Yohei was more attractive of the two brothers, Mikado held more power and because of this, Yohei sadly found himself overpowered by his older brother. Never had Suzumi been so conflicted with emotion; seeing the only family member she had ever really cared for so deeply being brutally beaten. In result, she found her Sharingan activating with her first tomoe. Just as soon as this happened, however, elders of the clan arrived and broke up the fight. Yohei was taken to the hospital over his injuries. Mikado then abandoned his wife; kicking out both her and her daughter. No one stopped him...
- ◘ BROKEN | C-Rank to B-Rank Arc ◘:
Miwa had no family. No siblings, no parents, no aunts, no uncles- nothing. She had nowhere to run to with her daughter. Their was no help for her and their wouldn't be, at least, for a very long time. With the money she had left, taken right before being thrown out, Miwa and Suzumi found shelter in a very small apartment. They could hardly look at each other, let alone speak to one another that night. The atmosphere was awkward and terrible. If it wouldn't have been for Suzumi's sobbing, it would have even been completely silent. The next morning seemed no different. Or the next day. And the day after that. Everyday she willed herself to see her mother who had opted to treating her daughter as if she weren't there. Many times Suzumi would beg and plead for her mother's acknowledgement, but to no avail. Miwa wouldn't answer, wouldn't scold, wouldn't anything.
When Suzumi would return home from the ninja academy (which she found almost as miserable as home due to the gossiping of her- most, sadly, being true), she would find her mother passed out from alcohol consumption. Some nights she would even find her mother with another man; having sold her body for money which only seemed to result into more nights of too much alcohol consumption. Suzumi was beginning to find that she was growing to resent her mother similar to how her mother once resented her husband. She yearned for the day to see Yohei, again- her real father. She didn't know where he was, she didn't even know if he was still alive. Either way, he had not found her or her mother. He hadn't shown up in the end to rescue them like in some sort of piece of fiction. Suzumi was beginning to loose hope and feeling broken, especially when she soon found that her mother was starting to continuously attempt suicide. So much, in fact, that the little Uchiha wouldn't show up at the Ninja Academy and spent nearly all day monitoring Miwa. Because, sadly, as much as she was finding herself resenting the woman, she simply could not allow her to die.
It wasn't until a full year later that something happened- something that would cause a massive shift in Suzumi's world. She had awoken and her mother was not there. Fearing the possibilities, the little Uchiha had searched all over for her. At the bar, at the store, at the hospital, and even at a brothel outside of Konohagakure no Sato's walls. She could not find her. Eventually, late at night, Miwa did return and for the first time in a very long time- Miwa spoke to Suzumi. Although, what she had to say was not pleasing at all and very shocking for her daughter. Her mother had gone crawling back to Mikado; begging and pleading only to surprisingly be taken back on one single condition- Suzumi was to be left behind. Miwa was a selfish woman, a spiteful one, too. She had always had her greedy streak, so why would it change now? The woman had accepted.
Suzumi cried for her mother to stay. She cried following her to the Uchiha Clan; grabbing, clinging, and clawing for Miwa. She cried as she watched her mother be embraced by the one man Suzumi detested the most and she continued to cry as Mikado kicked her off his home's front patio while on her knees as if she were a dog. Just as before, no one stopped him. Would anyone ever stop him? They turned their backs on her. She lost the apartment; becoming homeless. She would aimlessly roam the streets and panhandle, though only to be ignored majority of the time- if not completely. Some days she wouldn't eat and her body would grow weak. Other times she would cry until her eyes became red and swollen, so much that she couldn't even see correctly. Many times she would approach Mikado and Miwa with foolish hope. The former either kicking her away like a dog (once again) or the latter shooing her away as if she were an annoying fly. Whereas the elders did feel sorry for the girl, they respected Mikado's wishes and did not allow her on the Clan Headquarters; sending her off with food and very little money every now and then. In a sense, the little Uchiha was broken.
To say the least, Suzumi (herself) became her only company- her only companion. It was somewhere within the midst of all her conversations with herself that something struck her. It was the smallest of ideas and despite it's original size, it only grew from then on. She was tired with that she had (that being nothing, of course). Tired of the begging, pleading, and crying as if everyone else was some sort of god. Suzumi was to change- she liked that idea. She would change for her farther and wherever he was- dead or alive- she would see him and she would be something to be proud of. Yohei would look down at her and tell her she had done well. However, this required power. Suzumi began training immediately. This proved harder than she imagined- her body not used to the amount of practice she was aiming for. She couldn't even bring herself to properly activate her Sharingan for a good few days. However, once she finally did, she took baby steps and worked up. She trained alone, usually within a field or forest. She had never felt so determined before. It made her feel alive and within that feeling one could say she was almost felt some sort of happiness.
She continued to train daily, doing almost nothing but training. Eventually, children around her age- genin ranked- would spot her and even watch for a bit. You could only imagine the surprise Suzumi felt when they would address her and request if she wanted to train with them. In fact, sometimes she wouldn't answer and had convinced herself she was becoming that lonely to the point of seeing mere creations of her imagination. When she finally did begin to train with the others, it was evident that her skills were rapidly increasing and she was at an equal level with most of them, if not above their level. However, just as they would leave, all the feelings she hated would surface. Being alone most certainly didn't work for her and in the end it gave her that much more determination. Sometimes the children she spent time with practicing would ask about her family and well-being; her Sharingan (which they only knew about since she had used it during practices) and talents, too. It was just like the old times at the Academy. She never gave them an answer (she hadn't even told them her first name) and they took the hint not to ask. With the activation of two tomoe in both of Suzumi's Sharingan, it was becoming clear to the little Uchiha that she was well on her way...
- ◘ REBIRTH | B-Rank to A-Rank Arc ◘:
Suzumi was a striving kunoichi with one of the most renown kekkei genkai. However, ask anyone around her and she might as well not had existed. She had no sensei and no team mates. She did not wear a head band that proudly showed her ninja status and where she hailed from. She didn't go on missions to assist other's- Suzumi went on missions to assist herself. Beginning to feel herself grow in various capabilities , the little Uchiha basked in a new found confidence. Gaining power was not the first step of her plan. Gaining power was a step that was to be followed through out her plan. With that in mind, she set out to find out what had become of her father. She first checked the hospital- he wasn't there and he hadn't been there for a good few years. She then questioned various Jounin if they knew of his current condition. Luck was not on her side however,(had it ever really been on her side?) for neither of the Jounin seemed to even know of a Yohei Uchiha and if they did, they had only heard of mere rumors; some being about his death others of being that he had actually left the village. The information was not to be trusted.
Reluctantly, Suzumi came to realize she would need to find out from someone within her own clan. It would not be an elder and it most certainly wouldn't be out of Mikado or Miwa. Who would it be? Who was their to choose from? The little Uchiha decided she would find out after some much needed research. After all, she had stopped pleading and begging from them all a good year or two ago. She had been too determined to train. At the crack of dawn, she would rise and watch the Clan's Headquarters from afar. After many weeks of spying, Suzumi had settled on a prey. Her prey was a young Uchiha boy- probably around eleven- who was still in the ninja academy. Every day he would awaken and walk to school by himself- every night he would return by himself after roughly two hours of training. On the weekend, he would go the shrines and pray along with some family members; later, going to an onsen to peep on girls (which was very surprising for Suzumi given she knew how strict the Uchiha clan was and how traditions were always beaten to a pulp). However, that last little trait would certainly pay off in the end. Whether he was cousin, a second cousin- it didn't matter to her. She was his predator.
Suzumi, herself, approached the onsen as a patron. She knew the boy would be there in the exact spot he usually peeped at given the small crack within the wall. She wasn't the only patron, but that was to be expected. It didn't matter. She slyly pushed a girl next to her into the other girl, which surely caught the boy's attention. As he was too focused on the two girl's bodies mashed together, he hadn't noticed that Suzumi had snuck out and around the building to face him. She grabbed him from behind and then proceeded to threaten him; telling the boy that she would expose his perverted nature to his clan which would surely not go unpunished. The girl demanded to know of Yohei's condition and the boy- suspicious and hesitant- finally complied with an answer. Her father was dead. Her father was dead? Her father was dead. No matter how many times she said it in her head, she just couldn't compute it. She wasn't sad from the news. She was enraged and just so certain Mikado had to do with it. Suzumi then pressed the boy for Mikado's condition only to find that he had retired from his line of work as a shinobi and spent most of his time at his home. After angrily making it clear that if he were to tell anyone of her questioning that he would be in a "world full of hurt", she fled.
Suzumi was about to get very dangerous. The next part of her plan was to "beat the hell out of that wretched bastard" Mikado for what ever he had done to her father as well as for all the things he had done to her. Though, she couldn't just rush in and do it now (despite how badly see yearned for it). The little Uchiha needed time to develop and strengthen her abilities. She also needed money for equipment. Suzumi, in a sense, began to sell her body. Not in a sexual way like her mother had once before, but for fight. She would allow Genin, Chuunin, and even Jounin to challenge her- the reward for her being money and more experience (a few bruises and bloody body parts, too) should she come out victorious. The young Uchiha didn't always come out victorious, of course. Once or twice she was even hospitalized only for her to later sneak out once she decided she was back to better health. Months went by; fight after fight. Shinobi visiting from other countries would even take the time to challenge the "Mistress of Malice"- a name that she had been labeled with. With the activation of her third tomoe, Suzumi felt like a force to be reckon with. A force that would soon be unleashed upon Mikado Uchiha...
- ◘ POWER | A-Rank to S-Rank ◘:
After putting off a few old and new challengers wishing to fight her, Suzumi found herself the time and energy to confront her uncle. She had been watching the Clan's Headquarters nearly all day and by time sunset came, Miwa and Mikado returned from wherever they had been and settled for some tea within their estate. The young Uchiha didn't even have to look to know. After all, she had once grew up there. Mikado always drank tea within the kitchen after arriving home from god only knows where. She had known down to the very spot at the table that he chose to sit at; the closest to the window. With that in mind, she broke into their home; knocking her mother unconscious before then making her attack on her uncle. Though she may have landed the first blow on him, Suzumi knew that the fight would not have been that easy. After all, she hadn't trained for years without a reason (even if Mikado was now somewhat rusty).
It had started as a sword fight and it was to end as a sword fight. Many cuts riddled both of the Uchiha's bodies and when broken furniture and broken bits of walls were not enough- the battle was taken outside; behind the estate and headquarters and into the trees. Blood trickled, sweat lingered, and metal against metal echoed. The fight lasted for what felt like an eternity, but in the end- Suzumi was the victor. With a blade at her uncle's throat, she demanded to know of her father's death. He unwillingly gave the details that after Yohei's wounds had healed from the beating Mikado had unleashed on him, Suzumi's father had then attempted to murder Mikado in his sleep, though in the end, he (obviously) did not succeed. As punishment, Mikado had killed Yohei, even without the clan's permission. With that being said, her uncle's life was then ended. Satisfaction never felt so sweet.
Just as the bloodied up kunoichi returned to her old childhood home, Miwa had risen from her unconscious state and attempted to attack her own daughter on sight. This only resulted in Miwa's death- a quick death, but death none the less. Suzumi's main goal was complete. Her revenge was fulfilled. In that moment, staring down at her mother's lifeless body and stolen Hidden Leaf headband, she made a resolution. Never again would she be ignored and overlooked. Their would be no pleading or begging from her. That was the pathetic and sad child from long ago. No one was to be worshipped by her- she was to be worshipped by others. Everyone would flock under her whether it be out of love and adoration, or intimidation and fear. With that, the young woman fled.
Fleeing the notorious Konohagakure no Sato (with newly dyed hair and attire too), Suzumi had yet another goal already in mind. All she had to do was continue to be herself- the "Mistress of Malice"- and keep her reputation and power at it's highest. Because in the end, her abilities and reputation would surely get her into the Shantakai; an organization she had come to learn due to the fact that Konohgakure no Sato citizens were always speaking of a highly skilled shinobi by the name of Sakumo Aburame that had defected from Konoha for said organization. It had to have been fate when the very man himself- Sakumo Aburame- had found her and proceeded to recruit her (with mere persuasion) into Shantakai. With him and various other members of Shantakai, Suzumi had already gone as far as to assist in the sealing of a tailed beast; the Kyuubi. The road to power and fame was the life meant for her...
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It hadn't gone unnoticed; that being the pained expression the Aburame had bared as he had put his jacket on. However, the kunoichi had remained closed lip about it, or rather, she had been too busy in the middle of a sentence to question his well being. Miku had simply continued on. It wasn't that she was selfish or didn't care; she did, but stopping herself in the midst of a conversation was just incredibly hard for her. The medical ninja did make a mental note of the young man's current weakness, though. He properly adjusted the jacket, none the less. The young woman continued to watch as if he was a test subject; curious to know more. He continued to dress his hands with a pair of black gloves. She pursed her lips slightly in mild interest, not that it was actually all that interesting. Miku was just like that.
It was then he finally spoke, or rather, she allowed enough room for him to speak."Oh, goodie." she replied short and sweet as he pointed left; now both Kumogakure shinobi standing away from the table. The kunoichi then went to mimic Koden, approaching the edge of the sheltered area to also peer up at the grey skies. Momentarily silence emitted from her. The Aburame had began speaking once more as she inched closer and closer to join his side; already reaching a spot beside him before he finished his sentence. Miku peered above her and at the evidence of a storm. So long as they weren't completely soaked, it was just fine with her. She looked over and smiled warmly though a tad bit larger than her fellow Kumogakure shinobi; adding a small nod of her head, too. "Okay, ready then, Koden." she went on quickly after he finished speaking. The young man was the first to take a step out from underneath the covering; stepping into a light puddle while he was at it. Overall, he actually appeared rather relaxed. Like playing a duckling to a mother duck, Miku followed what Koden had done and stepped out into the uncovered open. She trailed somewhat behind him before emerging on his left. They walked in sync; feet hitting the ground and puddles at the same time.
The young woman rested her hands in front of her body, carelessly entwined, and her vibrant hair seemed to sway gently back and forth. It was peaceful. The so called tea house was a mere three streets down, not all that far away at all in her personal opinion. However, it still left plenty of time for either silence or conversation. Miku being the talker she was, began to formulate some idea of what to speak of. She did talk a lot, that was true, but she didn't want to stray onto random topics one by one. She at least wanted an idea of what to speak of. As if somehow the Aburame knew this, he turned to her and questioned her; starting up a conversation. "Oh, my shift was good. It's always a little bit tiring, but kinda almost tiring in a good way, ku ku ku ku." she laughed thinking of the Hospital. Really, her attention was only paid to either Koden or the direct path laid out in front of her. "No, not too many patients, either. Some are just more of a hassle than other's. You know, the cliche things like in books, movies, and cartoons? Afraid of needles, won't sit still, insisting they don't need certain treatment. You'd be surprised how many of the older patients throw such whiny fi--" she found herself cut short of speech; another voice not belonging to either the Aburame nor Tetsumi seeping into the air and into their ears. It had come out of nowhere, at least, Miku hadn't expect it. She was busy chatting. The other voice had come from another boy; white haired and taller than her.
The kunoichi blinked her emerald green eyes and was taken aback by the sudden introduction. "Well, hello there." she greeted with a small wave of her left hand."I'm Miku Tetsumi; Jounin. We've obviously never met... Aidan Kasui." she mused aloud, followed by one of her quirky grins. Miku could tell she was being examined. The medical ninja had done the same countless times, but it usually wasn't on such 'out of nowhere' occasions or at least, not as obvious. "We," the kunoichi wagged her finger at Koden and then herself, "were going to a tea house. We were on our way, but it would appear we were stopped, ku ku ku ku." she went on, then gesturing to the boy with her usual laugh.
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Fri 15 Apr 2011, 1:09 am | |
| Completed! Finally, haha.. My first Uchiha/S-Rank/Missing Ninja..! |
| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Fri 15 Apr 2011, 1:59 am | |
| Just so you know, you're allowed up to 5 SCs =]
"Should anyone aside Suzumi attempt to use this weapon, the handle will induce a First-Degree (redness, pain, and minor swelling) burn upon their hand(s)."
What causes this function, fuuinjutsu or something else?
How much chakra does it cost to fill the double dispensers fire chakra container, and how big is the flame produced?
For your locket- "Should anyone aside Suzumi attempt to wear this locket, the ring will induce a First-Degree (redness, pain, and minor swelling) burn upon their neck."
What gives it this effect?
Same question for your skull queen ring
What about the Black Mamba makes it S rank? does it have any other special abilities aside from being chakra conductive?
"Name: Izanagi. Rank: A. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m). Requires: At least Three-Tomoe. Description: Izanagi is a powerful technique used by members of the Uchiha Clan have have acquired the final version of the Sharingan. Izanagi is a genjutsu that is cast on the user instead of others. It is the most powerful amongst this type of genjutsu. When activated, the caster removes the boundaries between reality and illusion within their personal space. To a degree, this allows the user to control their own state of existence. It is normally only active for the briefest of moments. This technique is capable of turning injuries and even death inflicted upon the user into mere illusions. Whenever the user receives a fatal injury, he or she automatically fades away as though they were an illusion all along and then returns back to reality; physically real and unscathed. Chakra Cost: 22CP (Additional 3CP Per Post)."
Doesn't this cost a Sharingan per use? I'm not up to date on the manga, so correct me if I'm wrong.
" Name: Life Monitor. Rank: D. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has clapped once within the target’s earshot. After doing so, the target(s) cannot hear anything but their own breathing and heart beat. Lasts 3 posts. Chakra Cost: 3. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1)"
This essentially deafens, and should be above D rank because of that.
"Name: Alice Human Sacrifice. Rank: S. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+). Element: - Description: This technique begins after the target has made eye contact with Suzumi’s Sharingan or after she has made the necessary hand seals. It is activated within an instant and the target then sees a completely different world despite not having seen any progression that lead up to it. Their is three stages.
Quote: | STAGE ONE; THE FIRST ALICE: This is the first part of the genjutsu that the target sees. All their surroundings are black with the exception of a single red path that lays out before them; the path glowing lightly and essentially the best source of light from within the black void. The only other source of light (which is considerably more brighter than the path) is straight ahead at the very end of the path off in the distance. Large red rose bushes block majority of the path. Should the user attack or even touch the rose bushes, ten black silhouettes emerge and attack the target. If they escape and reach all the way at the end of the path, an open door takes them to stage two.
STAGE TWO; THE SECOND ALICE: This is the second part of the genjutsu that the target sees. After reaching the end of the path from stage one and crossing the open door, the surroundings of the target are a black room with a blue circular platform. The platform glows brightly and is the only source of light within the area. A happy man is singing in the center and appears harmless. He does not even acknowledge the target’s presence. A locked door lies behind him. As the man continues to sing, the same black silhouettes from before return and will attack the target. The door will not unlock unless the man is defeated (ceases to sing).
STAGE THREE; THE THIRD ALICE: This is the third part of the genjutsu that the target sees. After defeating the singing man and passing through the door, the surroundings of the target are a black room with a green staircase leading up. The staircase glows brightly and is the only source of light within the area. At the bottom of the staircase is a throne with a queen sitting in it. She politely addresses the target, “Are you alright, stranger?” with a petite angelic voice. Her body is beautiful. “I’m a queen, you know.” she will explain after only a mere second of her first speaking to the target. “The fairest of them all. B-But I can’t be forever.” she brings a hand to her own cheek. “My beauty..” she chokes back on tears. “My beauty!” she shrieks. And with that, her eyes turn black. Her skin rots and she bleeds from her nose. The same black silhouettes from before escape from her mouth and attack the target. If you escape and run up the staircase, two twins lunge out from the black depths and pulls you into falling off the stairs. The genjutsu ends here.
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This genjutsu cannot be immediately Kai’d out of. The target may use Kai after a certain amount of posts depending on the rank. C-Ranked may do so after seven posts. B-Ranked may do so after five posts. A-Ranked may do so after four posts. S-Ranked may do so after three posts. Should the target specialize in genjutsu, the amount of posts before they may Kai decreases by two. All harm done to the target within the genjutsu does not effect them physically in the real world, only emotionally and mentally. Should the target pass out or die within the genjutsu, the illusion is released and the target is unconscious for the rest of the topic. Chakra Cost: 39. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 9)"
I am okay with this, only under the condition that you are unable to attack the person under this genjutsu. otherwise, it would be way overpowered, as it is already borderline |
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Fri 15 Apr 2011, 2:56 am | |
| - Pattycakes wrote:
- Just so you know, you're allowed up to 5 SCs =]
• Really? But the starting limits for S-Rank say 4 at the max.
- Pattycakes wrote:
- How much chakra does it cost to fill the double dispensers fire chakra container, and how big is the flame produced?
• That is answered with the following technique-
- Spoiler:
Name: Flamethrower. Rank: C-B. Type: Weaponry. Range: • C-Ranked: Close (0m - 5m). • B-Ranked: Mid (5m - 10m). Element: Katon (Fire). Description: This jutsu requires Suzumi’s specially designed weapon known as the “The Double Dispenser”. After pumping the fire element into it, given the nature of the weapon, the fire will be released as a stream. Though it resembles Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique), the stream of fire that is emitted will not erupt into a large sphere of flames like said technique. This technique at C-Ranked can cause First-Degree burns (redness, pain, and minor swelling) while at B-Ranked can cause Second-Degree burns (redness, severe pain, and blisters). Chakra Cost: • C-Ranked: 7. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 2) • B-Ranked: 13. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3)
- Pattycakes wrote:
- What about the Black Mamba makes it S rank? does it have any other special abilities aside from being chakra conductive?
• My apologies, I was trying to make sure it wasn't too overpowered. I'm not used to making such high ranked items and such. Would making the blade be unbreakable be considered an S-Rank trait?
- Pattycakes wrote:
- "Name: Izanagi.
Rank: A. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m). Requires: At least Three-Tomoe. Description: Izanagi is a powerful technique used by members of the Uchiha Clan have have acquired the final version of the Sharingan. Izanagi is a genjutsu that is cast on the user instead of others. It is the most powerful amongst this type of genjutsu. When activated, the caster removes the boundaries between reality and illusion within their personal space. To a degree, this allows the user to control their own state of existence. It is normally only active for the briefest of moments. This technique is capable of turning injuries and even death inflicted upon the user into mere illusions. Whenever the user receives a fatal injury, he or she automatically fades away as though they were an illusion all along and then returns back to reality; physically real and unscathed. Chakra Cost: 22CP (Additional 3CP Per Post)."
Doesn't this cost a Sharingan per use? I'm not up to date on the manga, so correct me if I'm wrong. I had to actually research that because I've forgotten. It does however say that whatever eye using the Sharingan to cast Izanagi will become blind in exchange.
- Pattycakes wrote:
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Name: Life Monitor. Rank: D. Type: Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: - Description: This technique begins after Suzumi has clapped once within the target’s earshot. After doing so, the target(s) cannot hear anything but their own breathing and heart beat. Lasts 3 posts. Chakra Cost: 3. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1)"
This essentially deafens, and should be above D rank because of that. • Raised to C-Rank. Is that acceptable?
- Pattycakes wrote:
- "Name: Alice Human Sacrifice.
Rank: S. Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu. Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+). Element: - Description: This technique begins after the target has made eye contact with Suzumi’s Sharingan or after she has made the necessary hand seals. It is activated within an instant and the target then sees a completely different world despite not having seen any progression that lead up to it. Their is three stages.
Quote: | STAGE ONE; THE FIRST ALICE: This is the first part of the genjutsu that the target sees. All their surroundings are black with the exception of a single red path that lays out before them; the path glowing lightly and essentially the best source of light from within the black void. The only other source of light (which is considerably more brighter than the path) is straight ahead at the very end of the path off in the distance. Large red rose bushes block majority of the path. Should the user attack or even touch the rose bushes, ten black silhouettes emerge and attack the target. If they escape and reach all the way at the end of the path, an open door takes them to stage two.
STAGE TWO; THE SECOND ALICE: This is the second part of the genjutsu that the target sees. After reaching the end of the path from stage one and crossing the open door, the surroundings of the target are a black room with a blue circular platform. The platform glows brightly and is the only source of light within the area. A happy man is singing in the center and appears harmless. He does not even acknowledge the target’s presence. A locked door lies behind him. As the man continues to sing, the same black silhouettes from before return and will attack the target. The door will not unlock unless the man is defeated (ceases to sing).
STAGE THREE; THE THIRD ALICE: This is the third part of the genjutsu that the target sees. After defeating the singing man and passing through the door, the surroundings of the target are a black room with a green staircase leading up. The staircase glows brightly and is the only source of light within the area. At the bottom of the staircase is a throne with a queen sitting in it. She politely addresses the target, “Are you alright, stranger?” with a petite angelic voice. Her body is beautiful. “I’m a queen, you know.” she will explain after only a mere second of her first speaking to the target. “The fairest of them all. B-But I can’t be forever.” she brings a hand to her own cheek. “My beauty..” she chokes back on tears. “My beauty!” she shrieks. And with that, her eyes turn black. Her skin rots and she bleeds from her nose. The same black silhouettes from before escape from her mouth and attack the target. If you escape and run up the staircase, two twins lunge out from the black depths and pulls you into falling off the stairs. The genjutsu ends here.
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This genjutsu cannot be immediately Kai’d out of. The target may use Kai after a certain amount of posts depending on the rank. C-Ranked may do so after seven posts. B-Ranked may do so after five posts. A-Ranked may do so after four posts. S-Ranked may do so after three posts. Should the target specialize in genjutsu, the amount of posts before they may Kai decreases by two. All harm done to the target within the genjutsu does not effect them physically in the real world, only emotionally and mentally. Should the target pass out or die within the genjutsu, the illusion is released and the target is unconscious for the rest of the topic. Chakra Cost: 39. (Chakra Cost Per Post: 9)"
I am okay with this, only under the condition that you are unable to attack the person under this genjutsu. otherwise, it would be way overpowered, as it is already borderline
Understood.
• And to answer your questions about the burns the items leave, they are caused by a permanent reserve of Katon chakra Suzumi has left within them. If this is a problem, obviously let me know. |
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Fri 15 Apr 2011, 3:09 am | |
| everything looks good. Making unbreakable is acceptable, you could also add another neat feature, like an ability to replenish 15CP once per battle, or something along those lines. S rank weapons usually have intense abilities, such as The Samehada's ability to absorb chakra.
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Fri 15 Apr 2011, 3:17 am | |
| Edited. Thank you, Pat. |
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha, Suzumi. (Shantakai) Fri 15 Apr 2011, 3:35 am | |
| No problem =]
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