Yazu [C-Rank Nukenin]

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Spoiler:

YAZU

THE INFO.

Name: Yazu
Nickname: N/A
Age: 22
Gender: Male

Appearance:
The clothes which this man has on him most of them time, they are presented in the picture above. Since there is not so much to add about them, a description of them would be skipped for now.

Anyways, under all those clothes, a quite handsome young man is hidden. His blond hair, his gentle and youthful skin, they make him into quite a charmer. Due to the fact that he is a shinobi, Alexander went through a whole bunch of training exercises and so his body was transformed, with muscles everywhere. But, under all those clothes, he doesn't look like much, he looks like some quite skinny man. Unless Alexander actually shows someone what is he capable off, most people will not take him seriously. Even so, a woman with an intuition would notice his charm and his good looks right away. But, the thing which is most appealing to the females are his eyes, his gentle blue eyes. At first they don't seem like much, but when a person looks at them, they get a feeling as if they can see into the soul of the young blond haired man. They can see when he is honest and when he is lying, simply because his eyes are indeed windows into his soul.

There is one more thing which is important for this part, concerning his appearance and expression in different situations. As you can see from the picture which was submitted with this application, Alexander seems to be a man who does not show emotions. But, he actually does, with different emotions his facial expression changes. Most of the time, he appears to be calm and relaxed, as if he has no care in the world. No matter if he is happy or sad, the expression on his face will aways stay calm and collected. But, when he gets enraged and filled with negative emotions, his pupil will widen, his fist will get tightened and his teeth will clench. On the other hand, when he is attempting to charm women, his eyes will narrow and his voice will gain a smoothing tone, while his touch will become gentle and smoothing. With that, all aspects of his appearance are covered.

Personality:
Yazu is a typical cool looking nice guy who pretends to be cold, but actually, always ends up showing his nice and loving side. He always acts cool and pretends to be a smart-ass, most of the time somehow hurting someone with his act. When that happens, for a moment, he stops with the act just so he could think a way to make the people who he hurt feel better. He does this secretly, without letting anyone know, not even the people who he hurt. Basically, this means that if Yazu actually hurts someone with his though guy act, he will secretly do something to make the people who he hurt feel better, even if he has to make himself look bad somehow. Anyways, he always tries to look cool and act cool, no matter what is the situation, keeping his cool is something that can help him in many situations, during his detective job or even during his free time.

His calm and relaxed attitude is actually something that, most people find to be quite interesting. For women, this kind of an attitude is actually quite attractive and that is why he is quite popular among them. Not only that, in a battle this kind of an attitude always saves his life. If a person always keeps their cool even in the worst case scenario, not panicking like most do, that allows them to think clearly and so they end up finding solutions which they would not have found if they panicked. Yazu can keep his cool and relaxed attitude even at a time when a person close to him is hurt or in danger, knowing how if he got mad or panicked, he could lose his own life and fail to save others. If someone close to him dies, well, even then he can keep his calmness. But, at times like that, if the one who caused the death of this person is close to him, then he sometimes might get a bit emotional. At the end, he can even then calm himself.

Revenge and retribution, those are some of the emotions which Yazu can’t deal with so easily. He can deal with them, but just not right away, a couple of minutes must pass for him to finally regain his calmness. In rare occasions he will let anger take over. Those two emotions are the ones which trouble him the most, he can easily overcome sadness and sorrow which come at a time when something terrible happens. By believing that with a new day, better times will come, Yazu overcomes most of the negative emotions which he sometimes feels. This is where his special trait comes into action. This young man is a person who lives every day as if it was his last, experiencing everything to the fullest, and that counts for good and bad things. You could say, that he is carefree and it suits him perfectly. Everything he does and everything that happens to him will probably be a result of his carefree attitude, which allows him to experience the true meaning of life.

Honest and fair Yazu is, never treating others unfairly. That is one of his personality traits which might or might not make a couple of his companions a bit mad. Not so many humans can understand this side of him and at sometimes people will even think that he is against them, if he makes a decision which does not suit them. This is something that will follow him around no matter how much how he looks at it, not everyone can have an explanation for why do they do something, so almost everyone believes that they are right when they do something. But, Yazu understands when he is right and when is he wrong, always trying to do the right thing, that’s who he is. Even with his calm attitude, he always does the right thing, so if someone is bullying someone else, Yazu will always help the person who is being bullied, not caring much who is the bully. He considers bullies as scum, strong creatures who always pick on those who are weaker than them, quite cowardly that is as well.

Clan: Kaguya Clan
Ninpō: Unknown

THE NINJA.

Origin: Unknown
Affiliation: N/A
Rank: C-Rank

Specialties:
Main: Taijutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities:
Main: Fuuton
Sub: Suiton

Combat Style: He doesn't have a fighting style, simple as that. That means, in a fight, he will not have some sort of a pattern for fighting. In each situation a different type of a battle strategy will be used, if the same situation repeats more than once he may not use that same tactics which he used before.

Special Characteristics:
Name: Advanced Stealth
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: A skill gained by ninja who have begun to specialize in the art of stealth. The ninja becomes very light and quick on their feet. Their movements no longer create sound and they now gain a natural skill for hiding and camouflage.

THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Childhood:
The day at which the life of this individual started, it is quite unknown. Due to some personal reasons his parents kept it a secret from everyone. It was possible since the young Mia Kaguya gave birth to Yazu in their house in the country and not in the hospital. This young eighteen year old girl and her nineteen year old foreign boyfriend were having sex without letting their parents know about it, until the moment their child was born. Some would find it hard to believe it, but it was possible, since two of them did not live with their parents, they lived alone on a small farm with some of their cousins. Only the two of them, their closest friends and these cousins knew about it, till the moment when they decided to get married. At that moment, they had to reveal the truth to their parents and to the rest of their family. Since, nine months before the birth of their son, Mia was under aged, they had to hide the actual date of Yazus birth so that nobody would find out. And so his date of birth was moved a couple of months forwards, two days after her birthday.

Yazu was born in a nice little family, which lived on a farm somewhere in the Land of the Spring. His mother was from that land while his father was from an unknown land, quite a mixture of genes did he have. From his father, he gained a natural talent for martial arts and his beautiful blue eyes. While from his mother, the young boy gained his blond hair and the color of her skin. His parents planned moving to the Hidden Spring village after their sons second birthday, they did not want to travel with him that far away while he was still a small child. On the other hand, the parents of his father, his grandparents, they did not like the fact that their grandson looked more like his mother rather than his father. You could say that they found it insulting. But, to Akiro, that was nothing to be ashamed of, he considered his parents to be old-fashioned and so he did not listened to a thing they said. The only reason why they decided to move to the Spring Village was because he got a job at the Spring Village Police. Mia was so proud of him and when they moved to Spring Village, they decided to have a traditional wedding there.

Quite a nice idea that ended up to be, every member of both of their families came, it was so joyful. The only ones who were not enjoying their times there were the father and mother of Akiro. Even at that time, they still held a grudge against their own son. After some time, this grudge started to affect their relationship and they slowly started to move away from each other. At the end, they stopped talking to each other. Even after his parents died, Akiro still resented it and so he never went to see their graves, not even once. To him, they died a long time ago. Sometimes he wished to go to their graves and visit them, but he could never forget the word which they used to describe his son, their grandson. That one memory caused a lot of pain to Akiro whenever something or someone reminded him of his now deceased parents. They died a year after the wedding, when little Yazu was three years old. Mia, she noticed how her husband changed a little bit, but she never said anything about it, deciding to leave him to solve it on his own.

Shinobi Arc:
As he was growing up, it was quite clear that the young Yazu was a bit different than the rest of the kids his age. He was quite talented when it came to ninja techniques, easily learning taijutsu and ninjutsu, both of his parents spent a lot of time teaching him different techniques using simple teaching methods. They never thought him how to write though, or read, since they wanted him to learn that in the Ninja Academy. Due to the fact that they lived in the countryside, a few miles away from the nearest ninja village, their son was able to grow in a healthy environment with lots of fresh air and with zero bad influence. Yazu learned all about the life in the village from his parents, and how different it was from the countryside. When he was five years old, he wanted to go visit the village and see it for himself. But, his parents did not allow it since he was too young. Well, that is at least what they told him. Truth to be told, they feared that he will find that life more appealing than the life at the countryside.

Even at early ages, the young Yazu learned all about moral in life and how to be fair to others. Since, he lived alone and far away from any civilization, the only influence he had came from his parents. His father was the only one who ever went to the city, he had a job and he was the one who did all the shopping. On the other hand, his mother was in charge of taking care of him and the house, which was quite large due to the fact that they were financed by her rich family. Indeed, Yazu had some quite rich grandparents, which actually cared about their grandson and their daughter, unlike his grandparents from his father side. Not to mention, they even like Akiro, even though he was not the type of man which they considered to be good for their only daughter. Yazus uncle, the brother of his other, he visited them every few months, bringing gifts to the young boy and teaching him some nice tricks.

Eventually, the young boy came to an age when it was time for him to start with Ninja Academy. His parents were so proud of him, every day his father would take him to the Ninja Academy before going to work. In the Academy, it was quite fun, he learned all sorts of things and he met new friends. Eventually, the time for the graduation exam came and the young Yazu knew that he was ready. The exam, it was not that hard, each student had to perform a technique of some kind in order to pass. The young Kaguy performed his Body Flicker technique perfectly passing with high scores. But after he had became a Genin, on a mission, he accidentally killed one of his teammates. That made him flee his village and his country, becoming a missing nin. And so he lived alone in some forgotten land, up until this very moment.

Role Play Sample:

Spoiler:

THE ARSENAL.

Academy Techniques and No-Element ones

Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent.
Chakra Cost:
Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4)
Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9)
Costs the User: A (20) | Takes From Target: B (15)
Costs the User: S (35) | Takes From Target: A (25)

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 3

Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 3

Clan Techniques

Name: Tsubaki no Mai | Dance of the Camellia
Rank: D
Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Clan: Kaguya
Description: Tsubaki no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user performs this jutsu by modifying the humerus (upper arm bone) of either their right or left arm to create a short, hilt-less bone sword. Since they can increase and compress the density of their bones, they can make the sword harder than steel. The user then uses the sword to fight; their style uses quick cuts and thrusts to disable opponents quickly. They is extremely proficient with this sword and can, not only deflect shuriken, but also dispatch a large number of Shadow Clones with this technique.
Chakra Cost: 4CP

Name: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru | Dance of the Clematis: Vine
Rank: D
Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Clan: Kaguya
Description: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user can modify and pull out their own spinal column to use as a flexible chain staff, regrowing a new spine to replace the removed one. The protrusions on the vertebrae are modified to make them stronger and sharper.
Chakra Cost: 4CP

Name: Karamatsu no Mai | Dance of the Larch
Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Clan: Kaguya
Description: Karamatsu no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user uses this jutsu to create a mass of razor-sharp bone spikes all over their body. These spines appear to be branches off their pre-existing skeletal structure rather than completely new bones. The user is even able to grow these bones at an extremely rapid rate so they can stab an opponent even as they are growing. They can even use them to block or trap an opponent's strikes. In addition to being an unwelcome surprise for opponents, it makes them basically untouchable at close range. If an opponent would start to get close to them, they would start to spin rapidly slashing the foe in multiple areas of their body.
Chakra Cost: 6CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)

Name: Teshi Sendan | Drilling Finger Bullets
Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Clan: Kaguya
Description: Teshi Sendani is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. Hardened bones from the fingertips are shot at the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. A direct hit will excavate skin, flesh, and bone. Since the bones regenerate after release, this technique can be used in succession.
Chakra Cost: 5CP

Water Element Techniques [Canon]

Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a technique where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his/her gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
Chakra Cost: 7

Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant.
Chakra Cost: 8

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
Chakra Cost: 5

Name: Takitsubo no Jutsu - Waterfall Basin Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Takitsubo no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals to create a large volume of water. The user can use this technique in conjunction with Earth Style Doryuu Jouheki. This allows them to form a large waterfall.
Chakra Cost: 8

Wind Element Techniques [Canon]

Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.
Chakra Cost: 9

Name: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: The user will generate a whirling vortex of wind which he or she can send snaking towards his or her target. This wind can be used to help cause an explosive blaze when used with certain fire and earth techniques.
Chakra Cost: 8

Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.
Chakra Cost: 5

Jutsu List:
E-Ranked: 5
D-Ranked: 6
C-Ranked: 9
Total: 20
[12 if you don't count the Academy ones.]

Equipment and Weapons:

Name: Suit
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Quantity: 1
Storage: Over his clothes.
Special Abilities: The only special thing about this suit is that it is self repairing. Meaning, whenever it gets damaged, it will produce new fibers which will cover the holes. This is quite useful for a Kaguya who has bones coming out of almost any part of his body. Anyways to repair itself it drains the users chakra, 5 points is needed for such a process.

Name: Bone Mask
Rank: C-S
Type: Defensive
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Quantity: 1
Storage: On his head.
Special Abilities: Since this is a mask made out of the bones of the user, who is a Kaguya, it can be hardened and chakra can be ran through it to make it harder. Of course, the hardness depends on the level of the user.
Chakra Cost:
C - 7
B - 11
A - 19
S - 27

Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents:
10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch,
Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2
blank small scrolls.

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

B-rank Nukenin isn't an available rank, please edit this to C-rank.

Posts : 107

Bummer, that will spoil my plan. Luckily, I found out about it before I started the background.

Btw, what about Chuunin? Are those open? Also, can you change my name to Yazu?

Posts : 107

Completed.

Age : 31 Posts : 381

Kensei wrote:

Name: Bone Mask
Rank: C-S
Type: Defensive
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Quantity: 1
Storage: On his head.
Special Abilities: Since this is a mask made out of the bones of the user, who is a Kaguya, it can be hardened and chakra can be ran through it to make it harder. Of course, the hardness depends on the level of the user. [/code]

This is the only problem I have. It says it uses chakra to harden it. In which case I would like to see a chakra cost here.

Otherwise, everything looks awesome. Once that is changed I'll give you my approval Very Happy

Posts : 107

Right, done, forgot about those things.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

If your suit repairs itself, it needs some sort of power source. Is it your chakra or something else?

Posts : 107

Never thought of that, edited. I added a 5 point CP cost, since it really isn't something special.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Looks Good to me:

APPROVED

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

Unapproved, remove Chakra Absorption and Body Flicker.

Posts : 107

I knew this would happen the moment I saw that Body Flicker topic.

Though, whats wrong with the other technique? It is on the Open No Element Ninjutsus list. o.o

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

A few more issues, add a combat style, if your style is random you describe that. Add an age, unknown isn't acceptable. Remove all the "codes" from your application.

Posts : 107

I had an approximate age, since he never kept counting. Is that acceptable?

Added a few sentences for the Fighting Style which he doesn't actually have.

The codes are there so that I can copy/paste stuff from my application into the topic where I am. You know how everyone has to state which technique they used at the end of the topic, well this makes it easier and more neat.

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

Complete Unpredictability isn't acceptable, please address my points above. Age is needed even if your character doesn't know, as for codes. It isn't that hard to code them yourselves when you need to add them to a topic, so please do it correctly on your application.

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Done.

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

Reapproved.

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

Archiving.