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Susanoo, UtsuTHE INFO.
Name: Koi Kabayashi Utsu Susanoo
Nickname: Raika (Flash of Lightning/Lightning Flash)
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Appearance: With one quick glance, one would think Utsu was a normal looking man. Beards always seem out of place on his face. Though, in that one quick glance, a young lady would note his good looks. He is a muscular young man, who has a tall but not monstrous height of 6 feet 2 inches. Long blonde reaches down the sides of his face, but not down to his shoulders.
Eyes that are bright blue and inviting, act as false advertisers to his true nature. Although, at times they do reflect his personality, looking dim and emotionless. Usually on cloudy days they seem like this. There are two marks on his body that may seem not so out of place against his tan complexion. On his right hand there is what seems to be a kanji tattoo which reads simply, "cloak." And on his left hand there is a simple kanji tattoo which reads, "reserve." Their is on other of course, but that is usually hidden by clothing. Oh the inside of his right forearm it says, "Onigo", a tattoo dedicated to his former pupil.
He can be seen in a simple attire at times. When out and about, acting casual, he tends to wear short sleeved shirts and khaki pants or sometimes on those warm spring and summer days. This outfit is usually complemented by tan sandals with two inch blocks at the bottom. His former headband, loud and proud, sits on its high throne of Onisu's forehead. Either that, or the tan Kumogakure headband is wrapped around his shoulder. Like most missing-nin he put a cross through the symbol, but yet he always has the village close to his heart and doesn't like tucking it away. The only times he may do that is when he visits a major hidden village.
The outfit he wears for colder occasions consists of a black long sleeved shirt, checkered jeans, and green high top sneakers. Over top of his shirt he wears a zip up silver and red flannel sweat shirt. His casual styles always seem to be good to fit the environment, but sometimes not always good for battles. While ready for battle, he dawns a dark red long sleeved shirt, his custom made shoes, and black pants. Over top of his shirt, is a tan Kumogakure jonin vest. Of course though, there is one piece of clothing he can definitely not leave out, and that is his black Shantakai cloak. It is black on the outside and has the normal apearance of a regular Shantakai cloak. He tends to keep it open, holding the front together by clipping two edges and having a piece of string in the middle. Through all these outfits, he always keeps a sword strapped to his side, and has his ninja tools on hand.
He has been gone from his village for 10 years. His picture is in the bingo book, and he usually tends to have his Shantakai cloak at all times. Unless the weather did not suit wearing a cloak. Someone recognizing him would be easy, though he doesn't care if they recognize him, considering he is confident in his abilities enough that he thinks he can take on anyone who stands in his way.
Personality: Like most people, his attitude tends to very from day to day. Sometimes he is saddened by something that reminds him of his past life and the loved ones he lost. Sometimes by the loved ones that he had abandoned in the time that they needed him the most. His mind is always racing with thoughts of his past, it sometimes clouds his judgement, though his judgement now a days needs a little break.
While in his hidden village, and out of it before the death of his pupil, Koi had always been a strong person. The name Koi suits him just as his parents thought it would. This is what gave him jonin at a young age, this is what also gave him the nickname in the war. He was never a calm type, always trying to reach higher status, always trying to get better in his abilities. He only got calmer starting to teach Onigo, though even then it was a way to help out the boy, and it also let him flaunt his own skills and harness them. He usually tended to think for himself, although on missions he did seem to be calm and strategic; though he still always put his mission before team mates.
As soon as he made a new name for himself, literally, he has been a way different person. Instead of being all about himself, he works for a bigger goal in memory of his pupil. He also works for a bigger goal with the organization, which let's him hone his skills through more experience than training. A determined young man is what he is, blood stained hands and soul always haunts him, though he kills in the hopes his goal would be fulfilled. Anyone who stands in his way act like speed bumps that may slow him down, but he will run them over and keep on driving. Although his soul is dark at times, he still is a joyful person. Finding jokes out of almost everything. Being care free at times doesn't help build a good reputation with his peers, though he still acts that way.
This positive attitude goes away a bit during battles. He is always cold and calculating while fighting, but still tends to make jokes. Truly, he is a funny guy, but his antics at times can get on people nerves. In battle, he finds a good joke or two wouldn't hurt anybody; battles are the most fun when done between friends. The truth of the matter is, although his past is haunted, as is his present; he doesn't let it all get to him. His kindness and funniness prevails, but as said earlier, if a person he feels doesn't deserve death, get's in the way of his cause; they are as good as dead.
Clan: Kobayashi
Nindō: "To get stronger, no matter what stands in my way."
THE NINJA.
Origin: Kumogakure
Affiliation: Shantakai
Rank: S
Specialties: Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Lightning, Water, Storm
Combat Style: Uses speed and endurance to fight at close range. Uses chakra compacity and jutsu to fight at mid-long range.
Special Characteristics:
Physical:
- Spoiler:
Name: Improved Speed
Rank: C
Type: Physical Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
Name: One-Handed Seals
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.
Name: Improved Endurance
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The first level in the art of endurance accessible to those who have undergone intensive training. The possessor of this talent has an increased endurance of 20% which makes them slightly tougher. They can withstand greater damage that could otherwise stun them in pain, and continue fighting.
Chakra:
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Name: Increased Chakra Capacity
Rank: C
Type: Chakra Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.
Mental:
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THE BACKGROUND.
History:The Boy Born With Teeth:- Spoiler:
It was a cloudy day, storm clouds were low in the air, sending down bolts of ferocious lightning any chance it got. Rain down poured, flooding the streets, starting to drain but yet the continuous water from the sky made the level constant. A doctor with a bag in his right hand, an umbrella in his left, moved speedily in fear that a lightning bolt would strike the metal in the handle and kill him. Although he knew this was highly unlikely to happen, he had always been a whack job when it came to so many things that could hurt him in this world. It didn't help he was a doctor and knew from first hand the things you have to worry about truly, are things you never would suspect. He knocked on the door, only a second later to be confronted by the boy who told him to hurry to this address.
"Hello there.." were the only words he could mouth before the 11 year old boy grabbed his hand and pulled him inside.
Simultaneously the boy spoke quickly but with clarity, "Come this way to the bedroom!" The man dropped the umbrella, he attempted to reach to fix it but he was already being rushed and that was impossible. They went through the house like a maze until finally they arrived at the bedroom. A girl was standing outside, probably 5 years old. The boy stayed with her in the hallway, while the man walked into the room.
"Took you long enough." A man grunted. This man was a shinobi of the village, he was an okay ninja but he was more talk than action.
"Sorry, sorry." The man said, no more words so the man would stop talking.
"You should be, now get to work." The father of the women who seemed calm, but let go a few sound hear and there about the pain she was experiencing.
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Some time had passed, the women was fine, this was her third child after all. The doctor had snipped the chord, cleaned the baby slightly, and wrapped him in a towel. Looking at the boy, he hoped that he would live to be a kind and gentle boy, unlike his father. The doctor spoke while gathering his tools. "Anything else I can do?"
With a quick reply, the man said; "No, thanks for coming." The doctor shrugged and walked out the door, passing the two kids. "You can probably go in now." Remembering the way through the house he started making his way to the door.
"What are you going to name him?" The father said. He named the other two children, he thought his wifed deserved to name their last child.
She looked at the boy, tan skin, not a darker brown like his father's. He had thin golden hair in small little streaks on the top of his head. The boy's eyes were closed, but his mouth was wide opening screaming but starting to settle down. Noting the small baby teeth that jutted out from his gums, she decided on a name. "Onigo." The two children walked in to see their younger brother who was now calm as could be.
The man reached for the door knob, about to turn it before realizing he almost forgot his umbrella. Reaching for the half closed and damp item on the carpet. He opened it up fully, while in the house still. "Oh damn, opening an umbrella in the house is bad luck." Thinking for a second between comments. "Well, I highly doubt anything bad will happen to the family after such a beautiful baby was born." No one was around to hear him. The doctor opened the door, and walked out into the pouring rain, in fear again of the storm. Although the storm was a good sign for the future of any Kobayashi born during one; the good luck wasn't passed on to the rest. Though, if he knew the curse he brought on the family, the storm was the least he would feel bad about.
Entrance To Hell:- Spoiler:
The sun was shining, the day was beautiful, for most people in his position, they would be rejoicing at the happy occasion that was happening today. Don't get him wrong, Onigo was very happy, happy thoughts raced through his head as he walked the way to the Ninja Academy. But, there was one thing that bothered him; and that was his father truly had no care for Onigo's first day. Onigo was in the shadow of his older siblings, his older brother the most, but his sister was a caster as well.
His father only wanted to put his boy in the academy to let others teach him the basics; yet, simultaneously he would be working Onigo three times as hard. Yes, he had to take time to train his older siblings, but yet his brother was a chuunin, and his sister had just become a genin. They were both full blown shinobi, Onigo was 7 years old and had only learned at best how to throw a kunai from his brother. They arrived at the academy, his father dropped him off, and he was all set to prove himself. Though yet he found it wasn't what others wanted him to prove, not that he had skills himself, but that he could achieve the same skills of his brother and sister. He could never compare to them, even if he was a good shinobi his teachers were still unimpressed until he achieved the level that Soujiro had.
His academy years were eventful, being trained at home by his father until he was black and blue. One time he even broke his arm during a training exercise. With a newly applied cast to his right arm, he attempted to greet a new person who moved into their house and into their lives. He was somehow their cousin, and had to stay with us. Onigo thought it weird how he was related to the family, yet he was so pale. Onigo was light compared to his father, but still was not pale or white, more so tanned. Although, he liked the boy and found him to fit into the family good. Playing games with his siblings and Masashi always acted as a break from the harsh training of his father. Though, his brother and sister seemed to have less and less time to play with him. His brother nearing jonin rank, his sister just joining a team.
Moving Up, But Feeling Down:- Spoiler:
When Onigo was 9, he had experienced a horrible loss. His brother was 20 at the time, had gone on a mission with his sister. Onigo was still awed by the task of going on a mission, never being on one in his life considering he was still an academy student. Though, to them it was routine. He had full confidence in his brother's and sister's abilities so he didn't think twice about it. Only saying a simple good bye to his brother before he left on the mission; not knowing that would be his last good bye. When his sister came home, she had nothing but bad news. Onigo cried and cried, doing it on his own time so his father didn't sense his weakness even though his father cried as well. At the funeral, Onigo thought of all his brother had done for him. His brother was more so a father figure to Onigo than a brother. Acting more fatherly than his own dad. His father dealt with death in an odd way, always looking for someone to blame. Onigo realized what happened and came to peace with his brother's death.
His father chose to blame his sister, though at times took his anger out while training them, especially Onigo. He was 10, just passed the academy, and he wanted to train him in kenjutsu and lightning and water ninjutsu. Onigo always seemed to have trouble with it, and his father persecuted him for that. His sister was apart of a new team, she was now chuunin, and was paired with his cousin and another boy. This other boy started to become closer to his sister, and due to that; closer to Onigo. He acted as almost his new older brother. Although he was only 11, he had no doubt this would be the man he wanted to marry his sister. He always seemed to be so nice to everyone he met, including Onigo's father.
Reaching New Heights:- Spoiler:
One day while Onigo had just came back from a team meeting in the late afternoon, he found his father drinking. "Father you shouldn't be drinking that much alcohol.
"Shut up boy." His father slurred, putting down his bottle and getting up from his chair. "You must respect your father." Getting up to reach for Onigo.
"Dad your drunk." His father than started to attack Onigo, more ferociously than ever before. Onigo saw one last blow coming before he was knocked to the floor, out cold. He didn't defend himself, or lay a hand on his father, because of course he was his dad and he thought this was the way fathers treated their misbehaving children.
His head throbbing he woke up later to his father on the ground decapitated, his sister with a bloody sword in her hand, and her mother sobbing. He instantly knew what happened. His father tried to attack his sister, his sister defended herself, and a battle begun. He noted the destruction in the house. Onigo cried at his father's lifeless body. He knew his father may have deserved this, but it was his dad and he loved him. This was surely one of the worst nights of Onigo's life.
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A week passed, things were not back to normal at all yet. His father's funeral was two days before, this time he didn't spare an ounce of water for his father. If he wanted him to be tough about loved ones dieing, he would be equally tough for his father. His sister was interrogated and almost placed in jail, though Onigo acted as a witness that she was only protecting him like she always had done.
After a month or two, his sister became a jonin. It was something to celebrate, Onigo thought, though his sister seemed to be saddened by her upping in rank. Although she was happy in some aspects, it was more so sadness. Onigo soon went into the chuunin exams with his team mates and surprisingly passed on his first try.
Leaving Life In The Past- Spoiler:
With his new spiffy chuunin vest, Onigo felt like he accomplished a goal by himself for the first time in his life, but yet it still wasn't his decision or motive to enter into the chuunin exam. There was also the thought that his sister was still a rank above him and his brother was as well before he died. Onigo was still in there shadow, not yet being greater than them in any way or manner. This kind of annoyed Onigo, but yet, he attempted not to care about what other people thought of his skills, he knew that one day he would surpass his whole clan.
Thoughts of his father and brother haunted his dreams every night, especially a dream of his father coming back from the dead to seek revenge on his son and daughter. Life was never going to go back to normal, he lived in a broken household; his mother who just never had the same beautiful smile she had before her brother died. When her husband died, she seemed to never smile at all. His sister drifted farther and farther away from Onigo. She was busy on missions and even Masashi had very little for Onigo. He seemed to get into a depression at the age of thirteen. He had a more dark attitude, his innocence and humor never showed any more, and he tended to split himself off from the pack.
He was now a chuunin, and didn't even have his past teammates to lean on. Although he could of still ran into them from time to time, his sister's actions made it so that even they didn't want to be in communication with Onigo. He was a very solitary 13 year old boy, and had no idea what to do. No one was leading him anymore, and he had to decide for himself what to do about it.
After forming ideas in his head for a long time, his nightmares going away momentarily to be filled in with thoughts of leaving the village entirely. This idea was so beautiful to him, it meant leaving his trouble times behind. His sister was a strong girl, plus she had Kenshin and Masashi, if he left she wouldn't really care. His mother although would be sad, but even she seemed to pay less attention to Onigo, finding hobbies to fill the hole in her heart. She had many friends, most of them consoling her about her demon children and the death of her true love.
He applied for a single person mission, a simple body guard job for a small fishing village in a far away land. This would be the perfect time for him to pull off his plan. He did this without truly thinking much about it, just he knew this was a plan he had to put into action. So as he was three miles from the village, on an empty road, he did the first step. He took off his chuunin vest and threw it on the ground. Looking at it, it kind of saddened him; though it had to be done. He cut his own palm with the kunai. Doing so made the kunai tipped with blood. He applied his hand to the vest so that it would soak up the blood from his hand, until he finally bandaged it. He stabbed the kunai through the vest through the blood stained part, and walked off. This was the first time he put a plan into action, and thought totally by himself. A smile was on his face, he had faked his own death, one that people wouldn't really investigate further considering he was just a chuunin who obviously wasn't paying attention and was ambushed.
Rebirth:- Spoiler:
After his plan was completed, he realized he had not thought it all the way through. As we walked through back trails, just in case no one saw him, and walked to the smallest village he could find and sought refuge, he found himself asking, "What now?". The thing was he didn't know, though he started to put another plan for his new life together. The first thing he did was changed his identity. He now went under the name Onisu Susanoo. Susanoo after the storm god, hoping that would be a goal, to surpass his siblings so much that he would achieve the position as one of the most powerful Kobayashi to walk the face of the earth.
The name Onisu was a play on his original name, Onigo. Onigo meant child with teeth, being told his name was because when he was born on a stormy spring night on May 22nd, that he was born with teeth. Onisu meant demon child, which was exactly how those may have picture him and his sister, although Onigo had done nothing. It also was name that he thought fit, considering without people really knowing, he was a criminal; a missing ninja. The other change to his looks, was now a new style that reflected his freedom. His clothes were now more stylish and colorful. The last true thing he did that changed his appearance was, died his clan's signature blonde hair, black. Now, no one on first glance would recognize him.
This new persona was one that he liked, over the years he had built himself up as a shinobi. Training day in and day out, but some days taking a break and just relaxing. Short hair he had most of his life, was now long. He grew taller, more handsome. He had to go through his teen years with practically no friends and no parents. He had to decide where to go on his own, moving from small village to village. He even lived in Kusa at one time, working in a ramen shop. He found it was a good job, but yet being around all those ninja made him wish to leave.
As his reputation and power grew, so did people attempting to challenge him. With a name like god of storms, or demon child; people wanted to put a noob like Onisu back into his place. Though, he never lost a battle; and at times even killed people who challenged him. Some missing-ninja he found a nuisance and he eliminated to help out small villages, in exchange for money, food, and a warm place to sleep at night. He never stayed long, but now when he moved he never had to save money up for food, or new clothing; he always had enough. Onisu was now 16, and a mercenary in some aspects. He wondered at times if he was more powerful than his brother yet, and what he thought of Onigo as he looked down at his brother's actions from heaven. Onisu had heard no information of his past life, he heard things of his sister and cousin in bits and pieces at times; which always appealed to him. Though, he knew very little of their lives.
Met, Matched, and Taught:- Spoiler:
This is where the story of the main character comes into play. The truth is, to understand this man; you must understand his pupil. Without prior knowledge of Onigo, you would be lost as to why the man who only cared for himself would want to help out a boy who would have been just fine on his own, maybe even doing the same things as Koi without even knowing him. Utsu was born of a pratically all shinobi family. He was of the main branch of the Kobayashi in Kumogakure, and was trained to be powerful. By age 10 he had down B rank jutsu, although he wasn't a prodigy. They were all taught advanced jutsu at low ages, just because they were always pushed to be more powerful in each generation.
Koi loved the power, it made him what he was. He lived for it, maybe that was the reason why he became a jonin at 11. Countless training brought him to be a well respected jonin in the village, his success rate on missions was phenomenal, never losing a single person nor failing a single mission. Handling S rank missions by the time was 15, was what brought him into being trained as a commander of the task force of Kumo. Considering it was a solid military village, there was a sort of like ANBU that would handle positions in times of war or an event that effected the village.
His parents were proud of him, though, he had no other siblings besides an older brother he had barely ever talked to. His brother being 10 years older than him, and acting as a spy for Kumo since Koi was born. They were proud of him for obvious reasons, but he was also their only child they were still raising. When the war started to break out when Koi was 16, he was told to lead a division to go help fight the Shantakai. He was able to fight them with his division, even was able to kill one of them himself. Yet, the few Shantakai they were fighting were more powerful than his task force, this is where he suffered his first casualties in a mission. The Shantakai were driven back in this accounter, and the mission was a success, but yet Koi was not proud, he had lost men. It wasn't that he cared for the men, it was that he cared for his reputation. His power should be enough to handle anything that came his way, but yet it wasn't in this instance.
After this battle, and throughout other battles he was known as Raika. His speed and ability with lightning style is what gave him this name. Sometimes people called him the Flash, yet he preferred Raika if he had to choose. His parents fought in the war and the thing that probably the main reason he left the village, was his parents death. The funeral was done even during the chaos, his brother didn't even attend which angered Koi. Because of all that was going on, Koi just left the village, not turning back once. The man power was down so only few came to hunt him, yet he killed all of them.
He had wandered throughout the ninja world, honing his skills, learning all that he could. When he turned 23, he had heard rumors of another ninja that had storm release. He called himself Onisu Susanoo, though he knew of course that must have been a cover name. Kobayashi was most definitely the boy's true name. So of course he sought him, and fought him. The boy was a match for Koi for the start of the battle, though after a minute or two Koi had the boy's face in the dirt. The boy asked Koi to train him, and of course he did.
Power On The Horizon:- Spoiler:
His life continued like this for a year, the boy grew in power, and reputation under Koi's training. Though this got the boy put in the bingo books of hidden villages for being affiliated with Koi, a known criminal. When the boy was 17, he was equivalent to a Kage, in power, in chakra amount, in speed, et cetera. Koi became close friends with this boy, the boy one day told him how he considered Koi a father figure.
Koi was now 25, at this time he now had closed to 10 houses all over the world, he bought them just in case he wanted to vacation, yet at times every day was a vacation for him. Instead of being cold and calculating, he was more carefree, yet only by a little. He never really started to show his true powers until this age, practicing at an abandoned village with his greatest techniques. Refining them and mastering them. This village was one damaged in a war that happened when Koi was 16. The boy Onisu didn't really remember much of it, Iwagakure being a powerful village that didn't get as bad hit as the rest. He was very fortunate in growing up at this time, accept for all the hardships he faced family wise.
One day the boy had wandered off on errands while Koi was napping throughout the day, once he woke up, not finding the boy there in the home he went to investigate. He soon found the boy's body in an alleyway. He had been attacked without knowing the people were there. Koi was in shock at how he let yet another person die, but this time it was more personal. Koi tracked down these thugs, tortured them, and killed them. There last words were, "please stop" though the last words they heard were, "did you stop attacking my pupil and let him live?" The answer to that, was the groups' last breath. This event drastically changed Koi's attitude towards life. He used the boy's made up last name to honor him, now making it his last name. Changing his first name to show how he will avenge the boy, tattooing his name on his wrist so that he would never forget. He buried the boy on the outskirts of Kusagakure, marking the grave with the boy's original name, Onigo Kobayashi. Utsu now had a vendetta, it was against all who stood in his way, his pupil's goal was now his. To become a god among shinobi.
A year after the boy's death, while he was training in the abandoned village, his most powerful jutsu was tested. A man had noticed the events of the giant storm technique, and presented him with an offer.This man was from Shantakai, and organization Utsu had fought against only 10 years ago. This group of powerful shinobi tried to bring down the empire, and almost succeeded. This man said he liked Utsu's skills, and had heard word of him. Asking if he would like to join the organization, he said of course. Though this was not yet good enough. He had to go back to base, being confronted by 4 others and told to show off all his skills, while they sent random attacks at him. This battle left him tired and chakra exhausted, but yet his large chakra capacity still had enough for a final attack if he wanted. Though, the leader placed a hand on his shoulder and told him he could relax now. The two words that made Utsu smile and relax soon followed, "Your in."
A month later he had turned 26 and was starting to settle in. During the next couple of months, they had been bonding, showing each other their abilities, and practicing these in battle situations. This really got them stronger as a whole. They finally put this to the test when they kidnapped a jinchuriki, and took their first bijuu. After this, Utsu smiled yet again, he was now confident in his abilities and finally felt that he was at home again since his student died.
Roleplay Sample: - Spoiler:
Awakening. An awakening out of a vague and mysterious dream. Tidbits here and there flooded his cooling mind. Sweat dripped down his face, the salty water hit his mouth and he sat up and brushed his face and then pushed his hand through his unorganized, bed head of hair. He sighed to himself and pulled the sheet off of his body. Rotating his body, he hung off the side of the bed. His toes touched the cold bamboo floor. It was smooth as the gentle waves that rang true in the mornings tide. Although, he was far from any ocean. Hell, Okaeshi was in the middle of the former fire country. There would be no other thoughts, then that of his former homeland.
He looked at the floor and gently placed his hands on the bed, rising from his king sized bed and pushed off putting all his weight on his feet. He brought himself forward across the newly sanded and stained floor. This house, like all the other buildings in Tengakure, was new. He bought a simple house. Overall the only thing in the house that was big was his bed. Though that is to make sure he rested well. But he usually had nightmares, like they say there aint no rest for the wicked.
He went through his morning routines, showering, teeth brushing, dressing, and eating. Okaeshi as he did this had thoughts racing through his head. Truly he wasn't a wicked person, though there was still things in his life that haunted him. When the soul is tainted it is hard to cleanse it. Love always beats hate, though lonely as he was the sadness and hate thrived. This added to another reason he had a small house, no one to share it with.
Walking out of the door, he had little food in his stomach besides a protein bar and water. This would keep him active and hydrated, without feeling nauseated after too much activity. He shut the door behind him, and walked along the stone path, exiting a gate. He sailed over the newly paved road and looked around him. This was a new village indeed. A modern more homey version of Konoha, a place he always tended to visit as an escape from kiri once in a while. Even the wicked need their vacations.
He looked around, noticing some familiar stores. From merchants who flocked back to the re birthing village. The town seemed to be populated almost immediately, when he got here people were already starting to gather. Although, there was some places unfinished, Okaeshi new it was already going to be prosperous. The village will feel never ending with possibilities.
Arriving to his destination, he noted how long the walk seemed to feel, but looking up at the sky it had taken just a short 10 minutes. Okaeshi memorized the map before hand, thinking it was a smart thing to do. The place he would be heading for was the event. The event was something he had signed up for as a way to increase his rank in the village. It composed of shinobi from the village who signed up to compete in tasks that didn't truly have much to do with rank as much as intelligence and combat skills. Other than those simple things he knew very little.
Walking up to the metal box that would be his examination room, guards greeted him. They wrapped his hands in front of him in barbed wire, Okaeshi wanted to protest but he knew he didn't have a choice. It stung as drops of blood formed where the points poked him. Though mind over pain surely kicked as him as he soon ignored it once he was brought into the room. It was dark, nearly pitch black, he could only see a meter ahead of him. The box was roughly 5 meters by 5 meters. He judged it earlier on the first glance. As soon as he walked in he kicked in his ph sensing ability. Noting that there were 3 other people in there so far. He also marked the edges of the box in his mind, and found an unoccupied corner in the far left corner of the room. He put his back against the corners facing out. He he could attack all who tried to reach him. As he walked to the corner he had made no sound so no one would hear where he went.
His passive clan ability allowed him to keep tabs on everyone, he didn't want to be the one to make the first move though. That was never the smart thing to do. He had to be patient and be a smart hunter, letting his prey find him...
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| THE ARSENAL.
Basic Jutsu:
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Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original. 30 CP per clone.
Chakra Cost: 15
Name: Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user lures the target in, using a Shadow Clone as bait. The target, acting according to the principle of "attack to bring down the enemy," falls victim to a powerful explosion. If one can see through the body of the Shadow Clone, it is possible to evade the blast. However, by wrapping it up in trick after trick, the target will be guided into the technique for sure. The size of the explosion is considerably large.
Chakra Cost: 20
Name: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu - Camouflage Concealment Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja with the ability to see chakra.
Chakra Cost: 22
Name: Sanjuu Rashoumon - Triple Rashoumon
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: These gates serve the same function as the standard Rashōmon Gate, but with triple the defence. Each gate has a specific duty: the first red gate takes the attack head-on, the second green gate reduces the power of the attack, and the third blue gate disperses the pressure. As powerful as these gates are, they are not invincible however. Two people are required to summon it, however, should one user simply use both hands; the summoning will succeed.
Chakra Cost: 24
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them.
Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Refreshing Clone
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: The user can create normal bunshins, though these bunshins are capable of using their own chakra to recreate themselves. Doing so deletes their previous self, and creates a new clone. Once this is done information from the previous clone is relayed back to the user of the jutsu. This is used for gathering intel without using your own body.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Laughter of Loki
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The user causes their voice to rebound off every available surface in an enclosed area, making it difficult to locate the location of the voice. This jutsu does not function in an area that is open.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Zetsushi Nensan - Tongue Tooth Sticky Acid
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: N/A
Description: A highly concentrated acidic paste is suddenly released from the mouth. The acid boasts such high density and concentration it dilutes even stone, vaporizing it. There are no prerequisite moves to do before this jutsu's activation. Thanks to this, the user can easily strike quickly and catch an enemy off-guard with the attack.
Chakra Cost: 25
Fuuinjutsu:
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Name: Gofuu Kekkai - Five Seal Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: N/A
Description: The five "kin" (prohibition) seals act together to form a barrier. To remove the barrier, all five tags must be removed at the same moment. They don't all have to be lumped together; being able to be at least a good hundred meters apart
Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Fuuka Houin - Fire Sealing Method
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Fuuka Houin is a Fuuinjutsu technique that allows the ninja to seal away a nearby fire. After unrolling a scroll to hold the fire, the ninja writes the needed sealing incantation onto the scroll. Then by forming the needed handseals, a vapor will emanate from the scroll to encompass the fire and take it back to the scroll for sealing.
Chakra Cost: 15
Name: Danzou's Sealing Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: After touching the skin of his or her target with the palm of his or her hand, the user will secretly place a seal on their body. This seal can then be activated a short time later. When activated, the seal will expand to spread over the target's body and bind them in place. With them bound, the user can attack at leisure. The seal can be overcome with a powerful enough chakra, though.
Chakra Cost: 20
Name: Gogyou Fuuin - Five Elements Seal
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user forms an elemental seal on each of his/her fingers, one for each of the following five "elements": water, metal, earth, fire and wood. This jutsu produces a powerful seal that is used to block or disturb the flow of chakra in a target. Once the seal is completed, the target will become unconscious and unable to fight for a short time.
Chakra Cost: 23
Name: Gogyou Kaiin - Five Elements Unseal
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user forms an elemental unseal on each of his fingers, one for each of the follwoing five "elements": water, metal, earth, fire and wood. This jutsu is used to remove seals of up to equal power, like the Five Elements Seal.
Chakra Cost: 23
Name: Cloak
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: This seal is used to essentially absorb any residual chakra that is leaked from the user’s body and hide any and all chakra signatures from any dojutsu or ability of sensing chakra. The seal will also resend the absorbed chakra into the chakra systen at the cost of a E-rank amount of chakra every three post’s. Its only ability is making them invisible to any type of sensing or chakra seeing abilites. Any chakra formed outside the body will not be hidden. Takes D-Rank amount of chakra per post active.
Chakra Cost: 4 per post
Name: Shishi Heikou - Lion Closing Roar
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This sealing technique completely blocks the target's chakra with a sealing formula drawn on the ground or a wall. This is done by closing all the chakra points of the person caught in the middle. To successfully seal the target, one has to get them exactly inside the sealing formula. This requires great accuracy and is very difficult. Various methods can be used to make this easier. For instance, one can prepare a puppet or a ninja tool with the sealing.
Chakra Cost: 23
Name: Lightning Seals
Rank: C-S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Range of Jutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: This justu is not a single jutsu, but used in conjunction with fuuinjutsu. The user is able to do the needed hand seals for the fuuinjutsu of their choice, plus three more; than quickly they use lightning chakra to carve seals into the ground or wherever they need it. This allows the user the ability not to have to hand draw the seals, and to make them appear quickly.
Chakra Cost: Additional 6CP Per Seal
Name: Fuuinjutsu Tracking Seal
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 2 minor countries away, 1 major country away
Description: The user basically uses a few hand signs, and than touches an opponent. When he touches the opponent, it leaves an invisible seal on them, that seeps into their skin and cannot be removed. This seal gives the user the ability to track the opponent for as long as the person is alive, and also is dead. The seal goes into the opponents palm, so if the opponent chops off their hand, the user can only track that hand. The user is able to track the opponent by using another 8 chakra points after it is applied, to form symbols on his hand or on paper that states the latitude and longitude of the opponent. The location lasts for 1 post, so the user must use extra chakra the next to keep it active.
Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Barrier
Rank: C-S
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: 1 meter radius
Range: Self
Description: The user does the needed hand signs and a seal forms below the user. This seal creates almost a dome around the user, but tight to their skin. This is a shield that protects against jutsu and attacks equal to the rank of the fuuinjutsu. The size of the seal on the ground has a meter radius. The user may move freely while maintaining the shield, but must stay within the circle. The user may choose to protect anyone else that steps inside the circle. The duration of this jutsu disperses after one attack.
Chakra Cost S-35, A-25, B-15, C-10
Name: Reverse Four Symbols Sealing
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: S
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is a sealing jutsu that is placed over their body, setting it to activate upon their death. The seal must be placed on the user's body a post before they activate it. The jutsu releases four symbols from the user's body that then forms a large, black sphere around him. Anything caught inside the sphere's area is then drawn in and sealed within the corpse. This jutsu has a range of 15 meters around the user, and when it is activated, the opponent has little chance of escaping.
Chakra Cost: Remaining Chakra
Name: Hachi Sumi Oni Shīru | Eight Corner Demon Seal
Rank: S
Type: Fūinjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Description: Hachi Sumi Oni Shīru holds it's ranking as being one of the most powerful sealing techniques in existence, with only a few shinobi in legend capable of performing it. The complexity of this seal is seemingly unfathomable to the human mind, as it incorporates eight divine seals and transmuting them into a single formation. This technique was designed solely for the purpose of sealing a bijuu into that of a host, which is highly dangerous and both obvious reasons and for the amount of chakra necessary to create the seal. This sealing technique is prepared by placing eight seals on a surface around a space, creating a perfect circle. Depending on the village one descended from, extra garments and accessories may be placed around the seal. When all is in place, the two most important elements are integrated, the host and the bijuu. The host takes their place in the center of the circle where they must remain still during the process. The bijuu must be within a close proximity of the ritual as well. Once all is prepared, the user forms a string of hand seals while repeating ancient kanji. While doing so the eight seals around the user glows with radiant blue chakra, and they being to unravel and move towards the host. The seals cover the host in their markings which then forms a single seal on a specific place on their body. The bijuu is forcefully sucked into the seal in a gaseous effect, each piece of its massive body sucking into the seal like a vortex. Upon the final kanji spoken by the user, the bijuu will be completely consumed and the technique is finished. The now "Jinchuriki" becomes unconscious during this ordeal, and they now host a bijuu.
Chakra Cost: 35CP
Name: Hachi Sumi Oni Kaifū | Eight Corner Demon Unseal
Rank: S
Type: Fūinjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Description: Hachi Sumi Oni Kaifū is one of the only fuinjutsu technique capable of unsealing the powerful Eight Corner Demon Seal. Like its counterpart it is difficult to perform and requires precise concentration in order to utilize. The user draws a large divine seal upon a surface which takes hours to create if by hand. On the outside of the seal, the user draws eight additional seals equally around the large seal with a candle lit on each end. The jinchuriki will be placed in the center of the large seal. The user forms a hand-seal and speaks a long string of kanji which causes the eight candles to blaze fiercly as an indication that the ritual began. After hours of quoting kanji, the seal on the hosts body begins to unravel and the chakra of their bijuu oozes through. The chakra continues to pour out while decaying the jinchuriki's body, until they are finally released into the physical world once more, destroying the body of the host.
Chakra Cost: 35CP
Ninjutsu;
Lightning Style:
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Name: Shichuu Shibari - Four Pillar Binding
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 4 meters
Element: Raiton
Description: Raiton • Shichuu Shibari is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. To utilize this technique, the user member will form the needed hand seal. Four large earthen pillars will rise to surround the target summon. Lightning will then be unleashed to stun the target and hold them their unless someone from the outside destroys the pillars or uses an equal in rank wind technique.
Chakra Cost: 35
Name: Kangekiha - Inspiration Wave
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: The user will first create a protective wall of water (must be done with a water technique, it is not included with just this technique). They will then form the needed hand seal and emit a bolt of electricity into the water which will increase its defensive effectiveness and stun any targets who attempt to pass through. After this it is done, the opponent is paralyzed for 2 posts.
Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock.
Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)
Name: Hiraishin - Sparking Electric Needle
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: After coming into physical contact with the opponent, the user raises their arm into the air, generating a powerful bolt of electricity which will travel through their body into the body of the opponent. This is capable of paralyzing the opponent for three posts.
Chakra Cost: 10
Name: Gian - False Darkness
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: The user emits lightning in the shape of a spear from his/her mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock, meaning it has a high killing potential. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
Chakra Cost: 15
Name: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Lightning Element Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.
Chakra Cost: 20
Name: Limelight - Raimuraito
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: Limelight is a lightning-based technique that is used when all four users are placed in the cardinal directions. They will then join their lightning-chakra in the form of four connecting streams that shoot high into the sky above the target area. It will then create a lightning blast powerful enough to turn everything into ash within the area. The jutsu requires all four ninja to activate, if one of the users is taken out, the technique will fail. Though, Onisu has found a way to do it with shadow clones. Though it requires him to use 140 as oppose too 35, plus the amount for shadow clones.
Chakra Cost: 35
Name: Fire Starter
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (1-10m)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: The user does the needed hand signs to shoot a spark from his finger to a piece of wood. This ignites the wood and allows him to use it as a torch or something else.
Chakra Cost: 7
Clan:
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Name: Ikazuchi Kumo Naitekishuuha - Thunder Cloud Inner Wave
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0-10m), Mid (10-20m)
Element: Ranton [Storm Release]
Description: The shinobi uses Storm Release to generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around him, creating an offensive and defensive ward. He can then uses these clouds to fire powerful blasts of lightning at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter; effectively preventing his enemies from getting close.
Chakra Cost: 10 + 5 per extra post
Name: Reizaa Saakasu - (Laser Circus) Diligent Crushing Chain Torment Element
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid (10-20m), Long (20+)
Element: Ranton [Storm Release]
Description: The user uses his Storm Release to create several bright beams of electricity that shoot at his enemy. A halo of bright energy spreads from the shinobi's hands as he uses this technique. The beams are able to alter their direction after being shot and cause quite a bit of damage upon impact(eq. to 5 explosive tags per beam). The number of beams produced is dependent on the chakra used.
Chakra Cost: 20 - up to 6 beams; 25 - up to 10 beams
Water:
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Name: Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This jutsu creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his/her gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: A jutsu that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsu.
Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel water from his/her gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water.
Chakra Cost: 12
Name: Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. The user will form the needed hand seals and then place his/her hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his/her fingers to attack his/her opponent who is in the water below.
Chakra Cost: 15
Name: Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications.
Chakra Cost: 13
Name: Suihashu - Water Wave Hand
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The user raises his hand into the air and emits a continuous jet of water to strike the enemy and disrupt his attacks. Due to the nature of water, this technique works especially well against smoke-based attacks.
Chakra Cost: 12
Name: Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.
Chakra Cost: 10
Name: Suikoudan no Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Chakra Cost: 10
Name: Suitenhoufutsu - Sky and Water Convergence
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes water to rise from the ground and surround the target. The user can then use this water to drown their target or as a medium to call forth their fish summons (Requires summoning contract with fish). Because the ninja uses groundwater to create the jutsu, if he/she is in a rocky area, he/she will have difficulty utilizing this technique.
Chakra Cost: 13
Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.
Chakra Cost: 23
Name: Daikoudan no Jutsu - Great Shark Missile Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: After preforming the needed hand seals, the user creates a gigantic shark out of water, and thrusts both hands forward, sending it to attack the opponent. The shark is capable of absorbing the chakra of it’s opponents, which causes it to increase in size. This means that the more powerful the opponent is, the larger and more powerful Daikoudan will be when it impacts.
Chakra Cost: 25
Name: Mizu Kamikiri - Rising Water Cutter
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This jutsu will create a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock. However, it can easily be avoided by jumping upwards.
Chakra Cost: 20
Name: Senjikizame - Thousand Sharks Eating
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The user will form the needed hand seals and then place their hand to the surface of the water. One thousand sharks made of water will emerge to create a wall formation, raining down to attack the opponent.
Chakra Cost: 25
Name: Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:5-25m
Element: Water
Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target. The use of this also allows a lightning style user to shock the mist.
Chakra Cost: 6
Weapons:
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Name: Katana Appearance: It is a two foot long blade, with a 1 foot long handle. The blade is sharp on one side all the way to the tip, the other side flat. The handle is wrapped in a tight black water proof fabric that is wrapped diaganolly up the handle. Rank: C Special Abilities: The sword is made out of high quality steel so does not rust, keeps sharp, and also is able to withstand the hits from kunai and shuriken. B rank weapons may do damage to the sword, and A rank weapons can break the sword in half. It is very sharp and can cut through some soft metals, wood, and through all layers of skin down to the muscle to leave a deep gash that could lead to bleeding to death, or could be at risk to getting infected. Although it only works with a good hit, if just a skim of someone it only leaves cuts deep enough to bleed and sting, though not for someone to bleed to death. A;so the flat side of the sword if hit with it hard enough can sprain someones bone, if hit lightly it can only bruise. Name: Shantakai Cloak Appearance: ![Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Shanta13](https://i.servimg.com/u/f77/16/17/14/47/shanta13.jpg) Rank: C Special Abilities:The cloak doesn't really have many abilities, besides for it being water proof, and having a heating and cooling system that runs on chakra built in. Name: Advanced Footwear Appearance: All of his normal footwear have this added feature, so it depends on what he is wearing that day. Rank: C Special Abilities: These shoes allow the user's foot steps to be quiet considering they are padded at the bottom, though if the user were to step on a branch or something that would make its own sound, of course the user can be heard. Also if they rub against something they are able to make a sound. The shoes are also non conductive, so if electricity would to be ran under their feet, unless they were touching it with another body part, they would not be shocked.
Other Weapons:
5x Scrolls
15x Kunai
20x Exploding Tags
40x Senbon
20 Meters Of Ninja Wire
10x Shuriken
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Thu 31 Mar 2011, 11:38 am | |
| You may add another Special Characteristic to start if you like. [S ranks may start with 4]
All jutsu referring to one handed hand-signs need to be edited as you do not have the One-Handed Seals Special Characteristic.
Night Vision Technique: Focusing chakra to the eyes would not just straight increase your vision. You need to explain how the chakra amplifies the eyesight and to do so, strays dangerously close to medical techniques, which you do not have the specialty for. Additionally, this will need a chakra upkeep per post active. However, even if it is explain, this is closely tied to what some doujutsus can do.
Refreshing Clone: This description makes it difficult to understand the purpose and usage of this technique.
Zetsushi Nensan - Tongue Tooth Sticky Acid:Firstly, how would this jutsu not injure the user? Secondly, I believe acid is a style of techniques utilized by the Rokubi. And even still, it is beyond the usage of normal Shinobi without a clan/KKG. So this one is denied.
Cloak:Needs a per-post upkeep.
Lightning Seals:This does not need to be C-S rank, it is fairly low rank in concept, but should cost a base amount+the amount of the technique used. For example: Fire Sealing Method used with this technique would cost a 15cc base amount+ an additional amount of chakra for this technique.
Reserve: I will need other staff member's opinion on a seal that stores chakra, but it is my opinion that the numbers will need to be reduced.
Fuuinjutsu Tracking Seal:A range and describe how the seal allows the user to track the wearer of the seal.
Silent Killing Technique:S rank and an OP technique, denied unless weakened and greatly edited.
Barrier:Define the range of the circle, A C-S technique would cost varying amounts of chakra depending on the rank used. How many attacks can the barrier defend against?
Hachi Sumi Oni Shīru | Eight Corner Demon Seal: and Hachi Sumi Oni Kaifū | Eight Corner Demon Unseal:--Need another staff member's opinion, preferably Admin.
Contract Seal - Keiyaku Fūin:Summoners do not inherently control their summons in most case. They sign a contract with the summons/species, which allows the user to summon them as allies into combat. The summoner has no control over the actions of the average summon, as the case with Naruto and Gamabunta. Therefore the concept of this seal is void and as such, the only way to break the bond between summon and summoner would be to destroy the contract itself.
Reverse Four Symbols SealingCanon, but in my opinion this would have to be set on the user in the same thread it is used, before death. Other staff are welcome to share other viewpoints.
Shichuu Shibari - Four Pillar Binding Not sure, but I believe this technique would also require an earth affinity.
Cero: Vastly OP and poorly explained. Thus denied unless severely edited and explained better.
Storm God Technique- Susanoo no Jutsu: This isn't truly storm element; storm element is for all intents and purposes, lasers. Not manipulation of clouds, rain and other weather based characteristics. This incorporates the effects of Ukojizai no Jutsu - Fierce Raining at Will which is banned to my knowledge. Ten posts is an exceedingly long time for a technique to last, in addition it would cost a certain amount of chakra cost per post. Lastly, there is no suitably explained way that this technique could make you be 100 meters in the air. --Denied without vast edits.
Mist-Water Conversion Technique: Needs a range of area in which the user can convert mist to water, explaining the range per rank specifically as well as a chakra cost per rank. [If the range varies per rank, the chakra cost would to.
Water Breathing Jutsu:This is debatable whether or not this a suiton technique, as stated in the description it breaks down the water molecules. Molecular manipulation, at best, is a clan technique.
Weapons: - Quote :
- B Rank Weapons or Higher - Can only be used by individuals with specialty in weaponry or puppetry (restricted to puppet weapons only)
Just a personal opinion, that is a large amount of explosive tags for one person to carry |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Thu 31 Mar 2011, 10:09 pm | |
| I will edit I just want to clear some things up.
You may add another Special Characteristic to start if you like. [S ranks may start with 4]
I know but the others I wish to add are B rank.
All jutsu referring to one handed hand-signs need to be edited as you do not have the One-Handed Seals Special Characteristic.
Sorry I copy pasted those jutsu from another site and forgot to edit that out, will do.
Night Vision Technique: Focusing chakra to the eyes would not just straight increase your vision. You need to explain how the chakra amplifies the eyesight and to do so, strays dangerously close to medical techniques, which you do not have the specialty for. Additionally, this will need a chakra upkeep per post active. However, even if it is explain, this is closely tied to what some doujutsus can do.
No problem, I will erase.
Refreshing Clone: This description makes it difficult to understand the purpose and usage of this technique.
I will rephrase, I wrote up this jutsu like 8 months ago. 
Zetsushi Nensan - Tongue Tooth Sticky Acid:Firstly, how would this jutsu not injure the user? Secondly, I believe acid is a style of techniques utilized by the Rokubi. And even still, it is beyond the usage of normal Shinobi without a clan/KKG. So this one is denied.
I got this from the jutsu encyclopedia, but if you want me to delete it I will.
Cloak:Needs a per-post upkeep.
No problem, will do.
Lightning Seals:This does not need to be C-S rank, it is fairly low rank in concept, but should cost a base amount+the amount of the technique used. For example: Fire Sealing Method used with this technique would cost a 15cc base amount+ an additional amount of chakra for this technique.
I explained it so that it is C-S meaning it will work with any fuuinjutsu, and at the bottom for chakra usage that is how much is needed for the seals. It explains in the description that, that it is used in conjunction with another fuuinjutsu.
Reserve: I will need other staff member's opinion on a seal that stores chakra, but it is my opinion that the numbers will need to be reduced.
No problem on reducing, though after you ask another staff member if I can even have it.
Fuuinjutsu Tracking Seal:A range and describe how the seal allows the user to track the wearer of the seal.
No problem.
Silent Killing Technique:S rank and an OP technique, denied unless weakened and greatly edited.
xD No problem, I made edit this or just delete it.
Barrier:Define the range of the circle, A C-S technique would cost varying amounts of chakra depending on the rank used. How many attacks can the barrier defend against?
I made it so the range is the same, 3 meters in width. Though, you apply how much chakra you want for it to defend against the rank attack that is being used against you. This is a one shot deal so I will edit that in.
Hachi Sumi Oni Shīru | Eight Corner Demon Seal: and Hachi Sumi Oni Kaifū | Eight Corner Demon Unseal:--Need another staff member's opinion, preferably Admin.
I got this from the bijuu guide. It stated you need these sealing jutsu to seal and unseal bijuu.
Contract Seal - Keiyaku Fūin:Summoners do not inherently control their summons in most case. They sign a contract with the summons/species, which allows the user to summon them as allies into combat. The summoner has no control over the actions of the average summon, as the case with Naruto and Gamabunta. Therefore the concept of this seal is void and as such, the only way to break the bond between summon and summoner would be to destroy the contract itself.
Well this is more so if a summon wants to use reverse summoning, or the person is controlling a creature such as how Madara controlled the kyuubi. I might just delete this.
Reverse Four Symbols SealingCanon, but in my opinion this would have to be set on the user in the same thread it is used, before death. Other staff are welcome to share other viewpoints.
No problem, should I make it you must set it during the post before it's use, or a post before it's use?
Shichuu Shibari - Four Pillar Binding Not sure, but I believe this technique would also require an earth affinity.
Well the pillars are summoned like rashoumon.
Cero: Vastly OP and poorly explained. Thus denied unless severely edited and explained better.
xD No problem editing, I just liked ulquiorra's cero and wanted to see if it could get approved.
Storm God Technique- Susanoo no Jutsu: This isn't truly storm element; storm element is for all intents and purposes, lasers. Not manipulation of clouds, rain and other weather based characteristics. This incorporates the effects of Ukojizai no Jutsu - Fierce Raining at Will which is banned to my knowledge. Ten posts is an exceedingly long time for a technique to last, in addition it would cost a certain amount of chakra cost per post. Lastly, there is no suitably explained way that this technique could make you be 100 meters in the air. --Denied without vast edits.
Yeah I don't need to be floating in the sky, that can be removed. Also will do certain amount of chakra per post. Also - Quote :
- This Storm chakra can take multiple different forms with different traits. These traits can range from becoming a laser-like beam to forming dark electrical clouds.
for this clan it states you can use it in cloud form. And I didn't see that raining was banned, though if there are storm clouds with suiton chakra I thought it would be able to rain. I will ask an admin if raining is banned.
Mist-Water Conversion Technique: Needs a range of area in which the user can convert mist to water, explaining the range per rank specifically as well as a chakra cost per rank. [If the range varies per rank, the chakra cost would to.
No problem.
Water Breathing Jutsu:This is debatable whether or not this a suiton technique, as stated in the description it breaks down the water molecules. Molecular manipulation, at best, is a clan technique.
Ok no problem, I will delete.
Weapons: - Quote :
- B Rank Weapons or Higher - Can only be used by individuals with specialty in weaponry or puppetry (restricted to puppet weapons only)
Ok no problem I will edit.
Just a personal opinion, that is a large amount of explosive tags for one person to carry
Well considering the side of the tags, they are thin as paper almost, and having two pouches I wouldn't think 40 was that much, though I will edit of course. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Thu 31 Mar 2011, 11:26 pm | |
| -At the moment, the fierce raining at will technique is upon the (banned list). It will be discussed among the limited jutsu and because that is the case, members should not place the jutsu or any variations of the jutsu seeing that prior to 2.5 it was still considered "banned".
-As regarding the bijuu capture and release, I wouldn't think an eighteen year old (even of prodigy calibur) would have that technique in there beginning arsenal. To make it fair, it'll be taught to you if that is all right with you seeing that you are more align as a recent recruit than a seasoned member. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Thu 31 Mar 2011, 11:38 pm | |
| Deleted the raining aspect of it.
Deleted both mate.  |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Thu 31 Mar 2011, 11:40 pm | |
| | All right. I'll let Adam check (or any other admin) |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Fri 01 Apr 2011, 1:14 am | |
| | 2/2 Approval. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 02 Apr 2011, 12:45 am | |
| Unapproved. I just REALIZED something.
The rule states that a character of S-rank calibur should at least be in their late twenties.
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 02 Apr 2011, 1:08 am | |
| | Eh. That completely screws up my character then. >.< I was gonna make him young, that was certain. The age I was thinking was 24-23, though realizing an opportunity to have in-rp family which I have not yet had since I began roleplaying, was too much to pass up. Jess stated she had an older brother figure already so I made a younger one that was below here age of 21. 18 I thought was a fitting choice considering that wasn't too young. Most people in the manga were jonin at about 15, so three years after that it isn't that crazy to think you can become S rank. Sasuke went from genin to matching kages in two years. As oppose to my character who got from chuunin to S in 4 years. I would really wish to keep this age, considering if I change it to late 20's my history is completely screwed up. Maybe if 19 is better, sure, though if not I am going to have to make a completely different character. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 02 Apr 2011, 1:18 am | |
| You can't compare the use of manga and the use of rping. Again, this is base off of the manga of Naruto but we don't exactly follow it to the t.
You also can't put the concepts of "Well Sasuke was at this level at this age". We have to remember that Sasuke is a main character in the manga. Same with other jounin who have the skill and knowledge to rank up. A mangaka can do whatever he pleases with what he has created because he has a lot more leeway with it. He isn't bounded by the rules of rping. This goes the same with authors and writers of different genres.
Because of the guidelines, you'll have to change the age of your character. I'm sure you and Eclipse can work something up. If not, I'm sorry. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Thu 07 Apr 2011, 5:23 am | |
| Four Pillar Binding is B-Rank, due to the necessity of atleast 2 elements. Secondly the description is wrong. Since it is a canon technique, refer to leafninja or naruto wikia for the correct description.
Susanoo is also a canon jutsu, specifically for Uchiha and the Sharingan. Youll need to change the name. Also, the scope of this technique is highly unreasonable, given you are also controlling where the lightning falls down on the ground, which requires a much higher concentration and manipulation ability than you have. At least you would need Clan Prodigy and Master, as well as Raiton Master, as well as Monstrous Chakra Capacity. And probably sensor as well seen as how you will somehow use this lightning to detect life force.
Plus, even if you dont aim directly as people, you still will kill most of them due to the sheer amount of voltage that would be placed across the village
Reserve Seal: Completely Denied. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Thu 07 Apr 2011, 5:42 am | |
| | First off I am going to train chakra sensor, but I couldnt have it cause it is B rank. Also, one of the lightning bolts tells me all that is on the ground, I dont need to sense where the buildings are. Also I have no problem adding clan prodigy. Also I understand I need a lot of chakra, that is why I am not gonna attempt to use this until I get the massive chakra SC. Though I thought Susanoo wasn't on this site? Also having a similar named technique should be fine considering it is supposed to be named after the storm god, these jutsu will be in no way confused if there is a MS Susanoo on this site. As for damage, I have I think a B rank jutsu that shoots out storm release blasts that are equal to 5 exploding tags each. I think shooting them from the sky isn't that big of a deal, at least this one can't be aimed at a person. Plus the fact it takes up so much chakra is a good factor. Maybe if I change it to that my character has to stay still or the jutsu is void? |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 09 Apr 2011, 4:55 am | |
| You dont seem to understand the sheer area between yourself and the sky itself, let alone the size of an average village. if you wanted to cover the size of Konoha, you would need to spend nearly all of your chakra capacity to fill the entire sky and fire once. Just one time, and then you will be out of chakra. That is the extent of the technique you are try to make right now. It wouldnt last you one post.
Secondly, Susanoo is a canon jutsu. regardless of whether its here or not, the name will need to be changed.
Cloak: You cannot hide from the Byakugan completely, because it sees your chakra system in general. It is physically impossible without stopping your chakra flow completely, and then they would see a dead body, so you really cant hide from them anyways.
Fuuinjutsu Tracking Seal: I want you to read this yourself, and tell me that it makes any sense what so ever near the latter half of the description. Also, fix your range as well, because the countries are in multiple sizes and your range description is confusing.
Reserve: Denied. Period.
Black Out: Denied unless you cant go and actually explain the jutsu. "Applies a seal to the opponent and then they black out 2 posts later" is nowhere near a good enough description for an S-Rank fuuinjutsu.
For most of your fuuinjutsu that are custom, you dont seem to understand how seals and fuuinjutsu actually work. Id suggest reading the canon and some of Hughs to get an idea on how fuuinjutsu operates then try again. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 09 Apr 2011, 6:14 am | |
| Deleted I see how it is a bad jutsu. Also if you read it I didn't say in the sky, I said over the village. I didn't say how high though which was my mistake. Also, considering an S rank's chakra is suppose to be a crazy amount and a forbidden jutsu, I thought creating clouds that created clouds wasn't that far fetched. Also, the lightning and storm bolts come from the chakra in the clouds, once that is used up there is no more, to keep it going you must give up an A rank's chakra each of your posts. So after like two posts you already used like 60 cp. I would up the amount but I really don't want to bother with that.
Actually for the cloak, in the manga there was a seal on the container that held sasuke. The fuuinjutsu placed on it made it so the byakugan could not see through it. So I wouldn't think it is that far fetched to block the user's chakra from being seen or sensed.
I will edit the range, though this seal is completely possible. A seal is placed on someone which acts as a marker. Using chakra they can find out where there marker is located, via coordinates appearing on their palm. I know this isn't the anime or manga so making references isn't what I am doing to try to show this is possible; I am just showing how fuuinjutsu was used and that this concept has some sense. Though, just by placing a seal but more so having slight control over naruto through the necklace, Yamato was capable of seeing the number of tails that had formed on his palm. This is explained good, I meant the range to be unlimited though saying it is limited to an adjacent country isn't bad. I see what you mean though, like a minor as opposed to a major. I will edit that after this is cleared up.
Reserved removed.
I made this a year ago and fixed it quickly, my explanation is more I admit to that. Basically the seal cuts off oxygen supply to the brain to have that effect. Though, I deleted it considering it can be argued that it is medical. Another reason I didn't get to technical.
I know how seals work, I am just very poor at expressing what I wish to put forward. Sorry.
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 09 Apr 2011, 7:13 am | |
| To clarify, the sealing method that the Sound Four used on Sasuke was specifically for the Cursed Seal. Both were B-rank and the target could not move. To be fairly honesty, you can use the A-rank ninjutsu to conceal yourself without the hassle of such a weakness.
Note: Just because the way you worded it., for Barrier, regardless of the jutsu use, the barrier must dissipate after one post.
The Tracking Seal: Very convuluted and difficult to follow correctly. I understand what you want but it's very confusing i.e "The user tracks the user" |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 09 Apr 2011, 7:29 am | |
| Well it was a seal used with conjunction with the jutsu. I dont think the seal required a curse mark ability, he just drew blood on paper and applied it. Also I don't know what you are stating, what do you wish for me to do?
Yeah, the chakra of the seal doesn't last that long so that is how I meant to word it.
Changed that part, I didn't realize I did that. Also added in the range with the countries. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 09 Apr 2011, 7:38 am | |
| Barrier Ninjutsu
Seal
The jutsu doesnt allow the Byakugan to see through because it is a barrier ninjutsu, the seals are just there to keep the dark chakra from the cursed seal contained. Your best bet is to use the following, which unless you have a barrier ninjutsu like the Sound Four did, you will still be seen by the Byakugan.
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[b]Name:[/b] Meisai Gakure no Jutsu - Camouflage Concealment Technique
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja with the ability to see chakra.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 22
This is a seal Caranore developed to do the same thing you are trying to do, and is much more simplistic. Of course if you want to use it you will need to ask him.
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Name: Meimei Seal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: This seal is used to essentially absorb any residual chakra that is leaked from the user’s body and hide any and all chakra signatures from any dojutsu or ability of sensing chakra. The seal will also resend the absorbed chakra into the chakra systen at the cost of a E-rank amount of chakra every three post’s. Its only ability is making them invisible to any type of sensing or chakra seeing abilites. Any chakra formed outside the body will not be hidden. Takes D-Rank amount of chakra per post active.
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 09 Apr 2011, 7:48 am | |
| Mine is a barrier jutsu, the seal is on the hand and forms a barrier around the whole body that is how it blocks chakra from being seen. Also okay I will ask cara. I thought if I made it that low of chakra cost like he did it wouldn't be approved, that is why I made it more complex. Don't really know how things go here yet. xD
Though I already have the invisibility jutsu, If I had cara's would that allow me to be undetectable almost besides for my sound? Or would the chakra used for the jutsu to make me invisible not be blocked? |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 09 Apr 2011, 8:17 am | |
| | They can both be used in ties with each other. Cara's jutsu hides the residial chakra. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Sat 09 Apr 2011, 8:36 am | |
| | Smexy, I asked his permission I will wait till whenever I get back online to make my final edits. |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Mon 11 Apr 2011, 12:49 am | |
| | 1/2 approved |
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| | Subject: Re: Susanoo, Utsu [Shantakai] Mon 11 Apr 2011, 1:45 am | |
| | 2/2 approved. |
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