Haretsu, Keikoma [Kusa Genin]

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Haretsu, Keikoma.

THE INFO.

Name: Haretsu, Keikoma

Nickname:

- The Iron Clay
- Keiko

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Appearance: Much like every member of the Haretsu clan, the young 15 year old Keiko has long blonde hair down to his shoulder. Though its usually wrapped up in some iron bands into a single pony tail coming down along his back. The boy has pale white skin almost to a point where he has no scratches or no flaw in his body. Overall the young man stands out to be about 5'11 in height and weighing about 158 pounds altogether with his clothes on.

Starting with his higher body part the young boy wear a long sleeve black shirt. With some white outlines at the end of the sleeves simply for fashion. Underneath that clothing he wears a short sleeve black shirt with a fish net protector underneath. He also wears long black cargo pants with several pouches all around the pants to carry extra clay in his pouches in case of needed. Above everything he wears black shades for a different look.

Without shirt the young Haretsu basically show his clan traits. Right across his chest a black seal is placed. Basically sealing the largest mouth he has in his body and when activated a tongue could be seen popping out.

Personality: Very descriptive of his surroundings. The young Haretsu clansmen has the ability to describe every aspect of a building or anything that is built and be able to tell how it was built the inside. The boy is very simply obsessed with architecture and his art of making clay as well as forming it into whatever desired. The young Haretsu is always smiling to everyone and is very friendly above all towards others.

Though the insults that people happen to make about his clay making profession get on his bad side and unleash the beast within the Haretsu member. The young boy is always joking around with his friends though get to a point where he knows when to stop the joking around. the young boy is actually planning to make a shop of his own when he grows and gets more experience of the clay style.

Keiko is very passionate about most things. One thing that he loves the most is his art with clay. Being part of a mainly clay using clan he grew up making his own art. Therefore he knows the very damage as well as sometimes tend to take the very same quotes of his ancestors. And always use "Mmm, or Huumph" at the end of his statements.

In battle his personality changes. He tends to move fast as well as act fast. He never likes to stay on one spot and always like to move around his opponent to confuse him. In battle is where his mind most shines. As he tends to show out his true intelligence to other people by performing his moves and actions better than everyone in the field. He likes to show his moves with style aside from all that, and every time he sets his mind on something he does it. Because he has slight more knowledge than most kids at his age, he can perform strategies or find the opponent weaknesses in matter of minutes. And by the middle of the match or before, it most likely that Keiko has found a weakness.

Clan: Haretsu

Ninpō: "You can't live life without seeing true art."

THE NINJA.

Origin: Iwagakure no Sato

Affiliation: Iwagakure no Sato

Rank: Genin

Specialties:

Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Genjutsu

Elemental Affinities:

Main: Doton [ Earth ]
Sub: Raiton [ Lightning ]

Combat Style: Long Ranged Attacks and explosion. Keiko is a very smart person and tends to keep his range from his opponents to find their weakness in matter of minutes. He takes very much interest on his style of combat using his clay bombs to attack his opponent from the skies above.

Special Characteristics:

Name: Clan Prodigy
Rank: C
Type: Chakra Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks are 20% more destructive with their increased power and size.

THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Past Arc:Keikoma was born in Iwagakure No Sato among a good loving family. Unlike other Haretsu he wasn’t raised together with the clan instead he was adopted by a family of civilian in Iwagakure. Though living with a civilian family it was clear that Keiko wasn’t normal. Though there really isn’t an explanation as to how Keiko got adopted by Iwa civilians there was still much to learn about his real clan and why he is adopted. Ever since he was adopted by the two young civilians Kirai and Takiku he has not live the normal life he was supposed to.
Though living with civilians, it didn’t stop the young Keiko to start loving the ninjas that battled for their village. Though small and only about 5 years old, he was already showing that he was going to be a ninja. Though small the young Keiko secretly watched other ninjas train around the village hoping that one day he would be just like him. And to start he began to copy every move that the other ninjas was doing on their training session. Unlike other kids he was special, and not only he was beginning to notice his powers were growing stronger as he trained himself secretly he began to notice that he could learn things faster than any other kid at his age.

At the age of 8 he was already at genin level though still training secretly from his parents. At one point he decided to enter the academy. At that point he also decided to tell his parents about his secret ninja life. At that point he was tired as he walked towards his house. Slowly he lifted his hand, at the same time leaving his sandals in the front door of the house, twisting the knob as he entered dashing into the house. -Thump- was all he heard before he landed face forward into the floor. “Mom…….dad….ugh” he said before he fell unconscious looking at the side of his body towards the hall of the house his mother crying.

A man next to Keiko smiling and another man who seemed to be a ninja in front of Keiko’s dad. “I told you Takiku…..to make sure the kid was raised well, and trained up to high standards. It’s time he took care of himself for once and become the kid he is supposed to be for your own wife’s sake.” The man said as he struck the sword he had on his hand through his ribcage. After that a slight scream came out of Keiko’s mouth, falling into deep unconsciousness. After a week or so he woke up in the hospital, waking up startled and agitated. Soon finding that both of his parents had gotten killed by the hands of unknown ninjas from another different place. He dint really took this as a problem; though he loved his parents he sucked it up and made this strength for him and hoping to find the killers of his parents. Soon he entered the academy at the age of 11, hoping to become as strong a she can before he can take anyone else.

Academy Arc: It was time to look for money and at the same time be on the academy. he had trouble entering the village Academy having no money and all it was just the worst thing. Somehow he managed to work for the elderly helping them in their stores with supplies and running around doing stuff for them. He knew he needed to find money, his mother had stopped for the simple fact that his father had somewhat enclosed her in the house with no permission to leave the house without asking him first. So Keiko took his time to either one being a thief or actually working for the money. he actually thought with actions and didn't even thought about what he was doing. He chose being a thief, for some time he managed to pull out some strings and get some money. Though slowly his parents began to notice he was hanging with the wrong people thus stealing from others. They knew that even if they wasn't wealthy they weren't gonna go that low of stealing someone else money. Just like those people did the Haretsu family had to work for it.

At that point he spent about four years being on the academy as well as stealing for his parents. Though he caught on to his parents way and stopped what he was doing and focused on his ninja life. Luckily he managed to get some money by doing missions. And, always bringing the money to the table for his parents to feed on. They were getting old and very weak as the years went on. Keiko was about 15 and working his way trough his whole life. While in his spare time he worked on his taijutsu as well as his basic ninja tools. Surely he was a Haretsu genius like most others and he managed to expertise in every aspect of his training. Soon later he was graduated and promoted to Genin level. A ninja though not yet a fully pledge ninja to go on hard missions. Though this meant more money for his pocket though this meant more work for himself.

Genin Arc: TBA

Roleplay Sample:
Two figures walking through the mist of Kirigakure. A large figure walking along a small figure to his right side. The large figure was actually part of the Yajuui clan named Batanga. The young Yajuui had literally almost to no clothes besides his long black pants. His body drastically pierced with black stitches easily showed the kind of person whom he was if they knew about the Yajuui clan. To his right side the small figure next to him a girl with only about 7 years of age, and yet not even part of the ninja life and was not really a threat to no one. The young girl had long red hair, and short limbs. And was actually the only person the Yajuui member spoke with.

"Shizei what do you plan on doing by following me around? I told you I'm a bad person to be around with." Batanga said with a worried face. Quite often he would be wandering aorund the village, and actually getting into fights with other fellow shinobi. Though not of hate, the fights were slightly violent and not for the eyes of a mere child to see.

The young girl simply nodded and looked up high to the young genin and smiled. "You're not a bad person. And aren't you my friend?" The innocent girl asked as she walked beside him. "I am you're friend, but even still. You know how the streets of Kirigakure are. And I don't want to risk anything happening to you anytime soon." Batanga said with a serious tone to his voice almost approaching his destination.

THE ARSENAL.

Non-Elemental/Academy Jutsu

Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent.
Chakra Cost:
Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4)
Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9)
Costs the User: A (20) | Takes From Target: B (15)
Costs the User: S (35) | Takes From Target: A (25)

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 3

Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 3

Doton Jutsu

Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.
Chakra Cost: 6

Name: Doryuusou - Earthen Rising Spears
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.
Chakra Cost: 7

Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.
Chakra Cost: 9

Raiton Jutsu

Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock.
Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)

Name: Kangekiha - Inspiration Wave
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: The user will first create a protective wall of water (must be done with a water technique, it is not included with just this technique). They will then form the needed hand seal and emit a bolt of electricity into the water which will increase its defensive effectiveness and stun any targets who attempt to pass through.
Chakra Cost: 6

Genjutsu

Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: N/A
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.
Chakra Cost: 6

Name: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: After the user forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his or her target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.
Chakra Cost: 8

Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: N/A
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.
Chakra Cost: 7

Clan Techniques

Name: C1: Nendo Supaidā | C1: Clay Spiders
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Description: C1: Nendo Supaidā is a basic form of explosive clay, that is created from a single palm mouth of the user. The user releases the clay figure from their palm mouth which resembles that of a small animal. In this variant the clay figure resembles a small spider in which the user simple throw at the target or even navigate them to crawl amongst a surface. Because of their small size they are typically undetectable. After forming a specific seal with their hands, the user can detonate the clay spiders and cause a explosion equal to a exploding tag, destroying their relative area. From a single use of this technique only three spider can be made, however this technique cannot be re-used until all three spiders are terminated.
Chakra Cost: 3CP

Name: C1: Nendo no Tori | C1: Clay Birds
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Description: C1: Nendo no Tori is a basic form of explosive clay, that is created from a single palm mouth of the user. The user releases the clay figure from their palm mouth which resembles that of a small animal. In this variant the clay figure resembles a bird which are used as a projectile bomb for ranged assaults because of their quick flying ability. After forming a specific seal with their hands, the user can detonate the clay birds and cause a explosion equal to a exploding tag, destroying their relative area. From a single use of this technique only two birds can be made, however this technique cannot be re-used until both birds are terminated.
Chakra Cost: 3CP

Name: C1: Nendo no Hebi | C1: Clay Snakes
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Description: C1: Nendo no Hebi is a basic form of explosive clay, that is created from a single palm mouth of the user. The user releases the clay figure from their palm mouth which resembles that of a small animal. In this variant the clay figure resembles a snake which is capable of moving underground or even binding a target. After forming a specific seal with their hands, the user can detonate the clay snake and cause a explosion equal to a exploding tag, destroying its relative area. From a single use of this technique only one snake can be made, however this technique cannot be re-used until the snake is terminated.
Chakra Cost: 3CP

Name: C1: Nendo no Sakana | C1: Clay Fish
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Description: C1: Nendo no Sakana is a basic form of explosive clay, that is created from a single palm mouth of the user. The user releases the clay figure from their palm mouth which resembles that of a small animal. In this variant the clay figure resembles a fish which is capable of swimming and maneuvering underwater. After forming a specific seal with their hands, the user can detonate the clay fishes and cause a explosion equal to a exploding tag, destroying their relative area. From a single use of this technique only three fish can be made, however this technique cannot be re-used until the fishes are terminated.
Chakra Cost: 4CP

Name: C1: Nendo no Ningen | C1: Clay Human
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Description: C1: Nendo no Ningen is a basic form of explosive clay, that is created from a single palm mouth of the user. The user releases the clay figure from their palm mouth which resembles that of a human. In this variant the clay figure resembles a humanoid which is capable of fighting and reforming themselves if damaged. After forming a specific seal with their hands, the user can detonate the clay humanoids and cause a explosion equal to a exploding tag, destroying their relative area. From a single use of this technique only three humanoids can be made, however this technique cannot be re-used until the humanoids are terminated.
Chakra Cost: 3CP

Age : 31 Posts : 1036

Completion Bump.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

You can't have those Crow techniques without the crow summon, which is being worked on, so please remove them. I'd like to see more in combat style, appearance and personality.

Age : 31 Posts : 1036

Yeah taken out. And added some more paragraphs onto the personality and a paragraph to the looks. It's only a genin, don't really think it would need like 5 paragraphs for looks.

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I Like the Application. I have to double check with this jutsu

Code:: Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent.
Chakra Cost:
Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4)
Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9)
Costs the User: A (20) | Takes From Target: B (15)
Costs the User: S (35) | Takes From Target: A (25)

With the staff. Other then That good work. I will give you my final word after I get an answer for the jutsu.

Note: For the second sentence under approval you have an age typo. You have '19' when your character's age is 15.

Age : 31 Posts : 1036

Oh thanks didn't catched that. I was actually making a Nukenin first, but i changed and forgot to edit that. lol Fixed anyways and okay.

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Its Legal.

1/2 Approved

Age : 31 Posts : 381

2/2 Approved. Don't forget to Face Claim!

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