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Akuma
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| Subject: Uchiha Tetsuke [Konoha Genin] Tue 14 Feb 2012, 1:00 pm | |
| UCHIHA, TETSUKE.THE INFO. Name: Uchiha Tetsuke Nickname: N/A Age: 14 Gender: Male Appearance: Testsuke is a slightly taller young man than some of his peers of the same age, being at about five feet, seven inches tall, or 178 centimeters. He is slightly thin, but pretty lean, his body not having very much fat, and only a small amount of muscle on it. Overall, Tetsuke is a very dark looking person, wearing mostly all black, or a dark red color. His hair is jet black, much like the rest of his clan members, and is relatively long. He ties it back into a ponytail, with only a few spiky strands showing in front of his face, which is enough to usually shield the light from his eyes, so it is difficult to see his eyes sometimes. As we progress down his head, it goes to his eyes, which are a slightly darker purple color. His skin is very fair and soft looking, and his face is sort of feminine, with a pointed chin, but rounded face. His eyebrows are very thin, his eyes are slanted, making him appear sinister. His eyes have a sense of coldness to them, but they are still very vibrant and filled with life.
As we go down, he has pretty small shoulders, unlike a lot of men, who have broad shoulders. You can barely make out his ab muscles, and the outline of his ribs, as he is fairly thin. His upper body is covered in fishnet over a light grey undershirt. Over that is a long black cloak, which has a deep red inside. The cloak has a hood on it, flows down to the back of the knees in length, although the bottom seems a bit ripped, as well as the sleeves of the cloak being fairly short. His pants are fairly simple, as they are just black ninja pants. He wears black ninja shoes as well, with the toes not exposed.
Personality: Tetsuke is a very cold person outwardly, and to get anything other than a cold shoulder or monotone from him, you have to be a fairly good friend. He is a cold, calculating individual, and this makes him appear almost inhuman to those he meets and speaks with. He is very direct in his words most of the time, but in certain situations, he might fancy up his sentences a bit. He dis-likes normal, one on one fights, as this is a false interpretation of the ninja world. The ninja world is full of deceit, trickery, and traps. He dislikes things such as pride, simply because pride was labeled a sin for a reason, and people don't need pride. Confidence is a completely different aspect, and he believes in himself, he simply knows his limits and when to cut his losses. He is very smart, constantly thinking of new ways to win, new ways to confuse and entrap his opponents, and of course, new ways to progress through the ranks of the village.
One thing that he doesn't understand though, is girls, simply because he's never really found them attractive. He's going through puberty, and of course, he's finding them attractive now, and girls flirting with him is one of the only things that would get a reaction out of him. He doesn't care about the mindless swooning over him that goes on, simply because he is an attractive Uchiha, but genuine flirting confuses him, and could even get a blush from him. He respects his higher ups and most of his elders, minus the ones that are only genin. He has a fierce competitive urge with other genin, and coupled with the Uchiha name to remain the best, this puts a lot of fire into him, even though he's as cold as ice. Clan: Uchiha Nindō: The true way of the ninja is the way that can secure your survival, at any cost. there is no such thing as a "dirty" trick, simply a different type of tactic.
THE NINJA. Origin: Konoha Affiliation: Konoha Rank: Genin Specialties: Main: Genjutsu Secondary: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities: Main: Katon Secondary: Doton Combat Style: Tetsuke is a fighter that likes to read the enemy first, baiting out certain moves, to learn how to counter someone. He mostly like to end a fight in one or two moves, simply because he values the way of the true ninja. He enjoys traps, sneak attacks, and setting up traps to catch his opponents. This is usually achieved through a genjutsu to shield his true actions, while he sets up a trap that will spell doom for his opponent. Special Characteristics:
- Advanced Chakra Control:
Name: Advanced Chakra Control. Rank: D-S. Type: Chakra Based. Physical Requirements: Must specialize in Medical Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, and must not have an Increased Chakra Capacity or Bijuu. Training Requirements: 700. Description: An exceptional attribution that one is innately born with and further invokes during the course of their training. Chakra Control is key to preserving your stamina which will increase your vitality and enable you to use techniques to it's fullest capacity. It is essential for nearly all specialties of Ninjutsu but is heavily coveted in the areas of Medical Ninjutsu and Genjutsu which require good chakra in order to perform their techniques proficiently. Those with Advanced Chakra Control however are able to take it to the next step and preserve more noticeable chakra from their standard pool. Depending on the rank of the technique, a small quantity of chakra is preserved within the body when executed the Jutsu, which ultimately lowers the cost of your techniques. Furthermore because your Chakra Control is so flawless and exceptional, your Surface Walking and Water Walking techniques no longer cost chakra because you can now perform them effortlessly. D - 1 cp reduced. C - 2 cp reduced. B - 4 cp reduced. A - 8 cp reduced. S - 12 cp reduced.
- Yin Release:
Name: Yin Release. Rank: D-S. Type: Chakra Based. Physical Requirements: Must have Genjutsu specialty. Training Requirements: 700. Description: Genjutsu is a notably skillful specialization that requires great intelligence and chakra control in order to perform. Those who have attained this special characteristic have met those criteria which has allowed them to take their illusions to the next plane. Genjutsu fittingly falls under the broad category of Yin Release and it has been revealed that those with superior talent in Genjutsu likewise have greater mastery in Yin Release. This type of mastery allows them to more accurately manipulate the victim's chakra flow to their brain and stimulate more powerful illusions, making you're illusions more realistic and bypassing a persons perception. Because of your more powerful illusions, it now takes double the chakra cost to perform a Kai Release than it normally would for targets.
THE BACKGROUND. History: Birth Arc: Tetsuke was born into a relatively normal Uchiha family, which of course meant that he was raised to constantly strive perfection, and be ready for battle at any time. Although, when he was a child, he was nurtured with love and care from his mother, his father being busy as a member of the Anbu Black Ops, so of course he was away most of the time, and when he was there, his father was either busy with reports, or simply didn't talk about what he did, because of the secretive nature of the Anbu. As he grew a bit older, he was trained by his uncle in the art of his Katon jutsu, mastering it very young, much like the other members of his clan. Tetsuke was different, however, and he didn't like to fight. Fighting usually dictated that there was a chance for both parties to win, and he didn't let that happen. He was the Uchiha that strived perfection of his own type.
Academy Arc: The ninja academy was a bit boring, and unmemorable, as his favorite memories were trying to rush home as fast as he could, so that he could learn ninjutsu techniques from his uncle, and genjutsu techniques from his mother. He favored genjutsu, simply because his mother was the main role model for him in his life, and that was her main ninja focus. As he learned, his chakra control became more refined, and he was getting the hang of ninja techniques extremely quickly. He graduated the academy top of his class at the time, and became a genin.
Genin Arc: As a genin, Tetsuke kept a pretty low profile for an Uchiha prodigy, even though he usually had a swarm of women hounding after him for a while. He usually kept to the Uchiha complex, studying the scripts, techniques, and other things, as well as training with his mother. His uncle had been fairly busy, so he couldn't learn very many new Katon jutsu, so he was left with either genjutsu, or learning Doton jutsu, after he figured out his other elemental affinity.
Roleplay Sample:
- Spoiler:
Yuudai was jumping through the forest, making sure to judge the distance between him and the branches, so that he wouldn't take a branch to the ribs, or something else of the sort of injury. He wasn't as good at judging distance as Lloyd most likely, as he was a weaponry user, and Yuudai was not. He could throw shuriken and kunai very accurately, as long as it was within his range, but after about ten to fifteen meters, he would start to rapidly drop off in accuracy. As he was jumping, he looked through the forest. The greenery was amazing, and it was even more amazing as Yuudai loved nature in its entirety. He loved everything about it, the colors, the breeze, the sounds of the forest, and of course, the animals. He noticed a few animals, such as a small hedgehog, eating some fruit or something that fell from the tropical trees or bushes around the area.
As he was leaping through, he heard a whistle from behind him, and he stopped, making sure that it was his team mate first, before committing to a full stop. He hopped to stop exactly on a thick branch, and he looked at Lloyd, and he saw that he pointed somewhere. Yuudai had been glancing back every now and then, making sure that the two had constant contact with each other. If they were lost, they would simply find their way back, of course after the mission was completed. Yuudai's gaze shifted to where the finger was pointed, and there was a rather large pool of water in the forest, perfect to resupply, and of course, for animals to gather and get a drink. He made sure to look around it slightly at first, because even if this was a great spot to see animals, they might not be the only creatures looking for them in the forest. Where there were prey, there were predators, and he wanted to see either of them.
As he looked about, and saw a particular spot in the trees, slightly below them, that would give a perfect vantage point. He was very quiet, so he quickly used the tree climbing technique to go lower, and now he was at a low angle to the lake. They would need to capture the creature to study it most likely, even if it were to simply stay at the water for a while. As Yuudai got down lower in the tree, he caused two of his threads to come out of his back, and wrap around the tree, and puncture them into the tree. He was making sure to not use any chakra in which that he didn't need to. So, he was simply stuck to the tree now, but he could come undone at a moment's notice. He then became as still as he could, and simply watched, and waited for anything to come their way.
THE ARSENAL. Jutsu
- Academy Techs:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
- Genjutsu:
Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Single-Target Range: Line of Sight Element: - Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. If the target sees these leaves, the Gen jutsu will be cast. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion. Chakra Cost:4 (1 per post)
Name: Demonic Illusion - Wire Trap Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Medium: Trigger Range: Close (0 - 5m) Element: N/A Description: After the user forms the needed hand signs, wires will come from the ground and appear to wrap up the target. These wires don't provide much of a resistance, meaning it doesn't feel like they are tied tight, but the sudden trick of being tied up can easily cause some distraction. Lasts 2 posts, and costs 4CP + 2 for the kai to dispel. Chakra Cost: 4 (Chakra Cost Per Post: 1)
Name: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical Range: Far (0m - 30m) Element: - Description: After the user forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his or her target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety. The fireball cannot reach further than 30m. Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Raven Escape Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Optical - Ravens Range: Close (0 - 5m) Element: N/A Description: If the user comes under attack, she or he can use this technique to cover her or his escape. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can cause themselves to appear to burst into a flurry of ravens, which will circle the target/s, preventing vision while the user hides or escapes. Lasts 3 posts, and costs 9CP to kai. Chakra Cost: 7 (Chakra Cost Per Post: 2)
Name: Demonic Illusion - False Ghost Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Single Target Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5 - 10m) Element: N/A Description: After the user forms the needed hand signs, he will appear to stop in place, taking a very cocky stance. If the opponent were to launch an attack, it would be dodged, even if it would be strange to do so while standing in the same place. The image of the user doesn't move from the spot, simply dodges techniques, and hides the original's actions, as long as they aren't hostile. As soon as the user does something hostile towards the enemy, the illusion will break. Lasts 3 posts, and can be dispelled with 7CP plus the 2 for Kai Chakra Cost: 8 (Chakra Cost Per Post: 4)
Name: Demonic Illusion - Grind Clock Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Medium: Single Target Range: Close (0 - 5m), Mid (5 - 10m) Element: N/A Description: After the user forms the needed hand signs, one enemy will start to hear a ticking, such as a clock, as well as a slight grinding noise. The ticking and grinding noises will get louder and louder over a post count, and by the 4th post, the enemy can no longer hear anything except the grinding noise and ticking. This can easily drive someone temporarily insane, or in the least, mask the user's sound and distract a person. Lasts 6 posts, and costs 10CP to kai Chakra Cost: 8 (Chakra Cost Per Post: 3)
- Katon Jutsu:
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Chakra Cost: 5 (2 per post)
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Book Burning Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: After the needed hand signs, the user gathers katon chakra in their hands, and then throws it towards the opponent. The wave of katon chakra specifically targets highly flammable objects on the person, and burns them to a crisp. This jutsu was made to burn all of the paper bombs on someone's person, but can burn other things as well. When the paper bombs burn, they are simply burnt, not triggered to explode. The katon chakra takes the form of a red wave of energy, and can be dodged, although because of the large spread, is difficult to do so. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Grape Shot Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: The user will perform one hand sign, and then expel a sporadic shotgun of Katon chakra into their opponent. This is a very close range jutsu, needing the opponent to be within 1 meter, but also almost impossible to dodge. A shotgun of paintball sized fireballs will pelt the target, causing burns and contact welts onto the opponent. Chakra Cost: 4
- Doton Jutsu:
Name: Ankle Trap Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: After a small series of hand signs, the user will channel chakra into the ground. Then, they can cause three angled triangles of earth to suddenly jut up out of the ground, snaring the foot of an enemy. This could break an ankle should the enemy trip and fall, or could give moderate cuts to them if they try to yank their foot out with force. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Pit Trap Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: After a small series of hand signs, the user will channel chakra through their feet into the ground. A small section of earth will be turned into a thick mud like substance that is extremely difficult to get out of. The section of earth is around 6 feet across, and doesn't change visually until something steps in/on it to trigger it. This will only sink the victim to their neck, and after that, they will be unable to move. Chakra Cost: 5
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha Tetsuke [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Feb 2012, 1:14 am | |
| Hey there! Overall, this has been a very well done application and I can't find any huge issues to address. It was a wonderful read.
- Quote :
- Name: Book Burning
Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: After the needed hand signs, the user gathers katon chakra in their hands, and then throws it towards the opponent. The wave of katon chakra specifically targets highly flammable objects on the person, and burns them to a crisp. This jutsu was made to burn all of the paper bombs on someone's person, but can burn other things as well. The katon chakra takes the form of a red wave of energy, and can be dodged, although because of the large spread, is difficult to do so. Chakra Cost: 5 Just for some clarification, when it burns through these paper bombs, do they explode, or simply diminish? |
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha Tetsuke [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Feb 2012, 1:32 am | |
| added in the description, they are simply burnt, not detonated |
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha Tetsuke [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Feb 2012, 3:49 am | |
| Alrighty, I can't find anything else wrong with this app! (:
Thanks for the clarification, Jeff!
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha Tetsuke [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Feb 2012, 4:48 am | |
| Regarding Grape Shot, could you please define exactly what very close range is? Is it to the point where you're practically touching your target or simply within a meter or two?
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha Tetsuke [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Feb 2012, 8:45 am | |
| edited to say within 1 meter |
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| Subject: Re: Uchiha Tetsuke [Konoha Genin] Thu 16 Feb 2012, 8:51 am | |
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