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DAOSUMI, ZILVA.

THE INFO.

Name: Daosumi, Zilva
Nickname:
- Tarok, Zilva
- The Silver Phantom
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance:


Daosumi, Zilva [B-Rank Nukenin]  4605923386_28ee014d49_o

"Its not the strong who are great, its the great who are strong!"

Standing at 5'4 feet, Zilva is a picture perfect young girl. When compared to other girls in the academy she was always recognized as the ‘cutest’ or ‘prettiest’ one. All throughout her academy days she had to deal with rejecting a boy everyday, she never once said yes. Although Zilva has an eye friendly outer appearance, she has a battle harden soul. Her outward appearance is exactly the opposite of how she acts. Most would assume that being a Kunochi, she would be a medical or support ninja. However, Zilva prefers close combat and is a talented inventor. It is true that she takes good care of her body and always makes sure she looks good in public, but she cares more about her weapons and hard work.

Zilva has somewhat short silvery hair that doesn’t even reach her shoulders. Not a lot of people have silver hair so Zilva considers herself a ‘rare’ human being. This pride in her hair shows on how she cares for her hair too. It is always conditioned and has a very sleek shine with small traces of glitter that Zilva also puts in it. Unlike some ninja, Zilva wears her headband in the appropriate place, her head. She uses it as head protection but more importantly she considers it a fashion accessory due to the way it holds her hair up and makes it hang over her face. Zilva’s olive green eyes are big and have an unearthly sheen on them even before she does any cosmetic changes with them (She often wears contacts which make this shine on her eyes much more noticeable.). Her mouth an nose are in perfect symmetry with each other and are both relatively small. One article of make up that Zilva never wears is lip stick, she believes that the natural pink color of her lips is much better looking than anything artificial. Zilva, being slightly egotistical, thinks that she has the most beautiful smile in the world and often uses it along with other cute gestures to get her way. Although Zilva has a cute face, she often covers it with her metal tiger mask that she made herself.

Clothes wise, Zilva is also unique as compared to other ninja. Zilva changes clothes when not on a on a mission, but one thing she never leaves at home is he long pink scarf. She has had it ever since she was a child and refuses to part ways with it, she has even turned it into somewhat of a weapon. Zilva’s mission and ninja meeting clothes has two layers. The first layer is a spandex suit that is both breathable and slimming. It allows Zilva’s body to be more streamline which in turn makes her able to maneuver and move faster. The second layer of clothing is a form fitting shirt over her torso area. This shirt has three latches with a pink line through them. The shirt is sleeveless and stops before the shoulder with more pink bands. The shirt goes down the waist and then ends at two points. Some other things that Zilva wears on her mission clothes are the two pink metal bands around her thighs, the elbow and wrist guards on her right arm, her falchion sheath on her waist, and her armored boots.

After going rogue and leaving her village, Zilva got a tattoo in the middle of her chest of a pink heart. Although she didn't feel remorseful for leaving the village, she did feel bad for leaving her family. The heart was to serve as a reminder about her family lest she forget about them in all of the chaos that had now become her life. On the tattoo she placed a seal that looks like a rose that contained a palm sized family photo that was taken only a couple of days before the incident that changed her life forever.

Being part of the Daosumi clan, Zilva has her own style of glyphs. Her glyphs are very jagged and don't have any pictures or symbolism, making them even more confusing to others. Another part of her appearance that comes from her clan is the seal on her tongue that looks like a closed mouth. Daosumi have these seals to stop them from talking about the clan and Zilva pretends it is just a tattoo to avoid any suspicion about it.

Picture of Glyphs:
Spoiler:

Personality:

Zilva is what most people would consider a ‘tom-boy’ in some ways. Despite her appearance, she enjoys things like fighting, getting dirty, and insulting others. She also has the bad habit of cursing which her mother has told her to correct multiple times which leads to her constant state of being grounded. Zilva can be very disrespectful if she isn’t respected first or if she just doesn’t like a person for any reason. Most of the time she curses is at senseis or elders who treat her like a child or talk to her in a rude tone. Zilva is a woman of action and always suggests the most straightforward and dangerous way of completing a mission when it is discussed.

Even though Zilva acts like a hardcore person who isn’t afraid of anything, she actually has a lot of phobias and things that make her mad or scared. In fact, she has what doctors call OCD, or obsessive compulsive disorder. Most people with obsessive compulsive disorder try to make things tidy and symmetrical, Zilva’s problem is the exact opposite of that. Zilva hates when things are neat and organized and takes care to make sure everything including her clothing do not mirror themselves. Her problem is so bad that even if someone else is wearing something symmetrical she’ll go up to them and arrange their clothing herself without any warning. Above all things, Zilva is afraid of leeches or leech like creatures (worms, caterpillars, etc.). Upon seeing one she can’t hold back her fear and lets out a loud squeal that some have compared to raking a chalk board.

A lot of ninja from villages have had a lot of suffering or loss in their life, Zilva is a rare exception to this. In fact, the only traumatic experience she has ever had is her clan training. Besides that, her life has been a luxurious one. Zilva's parents are very rich so they live in a mansion in the richer sector of the village. There she has her own room and almost anything she wants. Zilva has five brothers, three of which who are much older than her. Unlike Zilva, he brothers have chosen the path of being a worker instead of a ninja. The only problem with Zilva's family is her father, who dis-approves of her life choices. For an unknown reason , he hates ninja and believes that a young women should become a medic or do a support job on the battle field. Fueds with her father usually ended up with Zilva being kick out for the night in which case she slept at the theater.

During her genin days Zilva went on a MISSION that changed her taste in literature. Ever since then she has always been an avid reader of the romance genre. She always spends her free time with her nose in one of these books and keeps a collection of them sealed in her scarf. Zilva is more embarrassed than ashamed of these books and therefore goes out of her way just to hide them from other people, even those she could consider 'friends'. The only person she ever even discusses these books with is Jou, her pet ferret.

Zilva doesn’t want to grow up to be a strong ninja like others. Most young ninja aspire to be strong and able to protect their village even if it means giving their lives. Zilva on the other hand, only wishes for fame. Loyalty takes a backseat to her own self interest which makes her a highly unstable comrade. She never really acted upon that until the incident that happened while she was out on a mission. She was betrayed by her friend and left out of the village, forever marked as a traitor. This led to a paranoia about who to accept as friend and foe. After leaving the village, Zilva realized that now she could be whatever she wanted to be. She dropped everything she had ever learned about the ninja code or honor and became a 'Soldier of Fortune', working for the highest bidder. This created a cold and calculated side of Zilva that she showed on her jobs. Her cold nature is especially shown when she is alone. Instead of being talkative like she normally acts she is silent and contemplative. A series of small jobs put her name in the bingo book but Zilva is just waiting for her big break that will lead her to the ultimate level of infamy. Though Zilva is now considered a criminal, she still hasn't killed anyone ever since the incident. She was framed for all of the murders during the incident and has refused to kill ever since. Instead she users her custom tranquilizer darts to immobilize targets. This looks especially odd in the bingo book when her estimated body count is zero.

Clan: Daosumi Clan.
Nindō: "It's not about how strong you are, it's how strong you're known to be."

THE NINJA.

Birthed and Branded


Long ago in a small village near the coast in lightning country, there was a group of Daosumi clan members. Actually, the whole village was a clan of Daosumi ninja. They had gone there in order to establish an order of Daosumi members by request of the current Raikage. The Raikage wanted a Daosumi member in every clan to make sure no rebellion was being planned. For this mission, the Daosumi clan was paid handsomely. As the years went by, the Raikage grew more and more impatient with the Daosumi; he had hoped for them to of extracted some information but the truth was there was no information to extract, everything was peaceful. After 10 years of being told nothing was going on, the Raikage banished the Daosumi from Lightning Country. Most of them left, but some of them stayed behind and became normal civilians of the hidden village in order to hide themselves.

One group of Daosumi started life as poor beggars but eventually rose to the top of the social ladder in the village. They used the last name Tarok to hide their real last names and ended up living peacefully in a large mansion. When the new Raikage came into power and lifted the ban on the Daosumi clan, the Tarok family thanked them but still decided to stay under their alias and be normal citizens. They had many kids, three boys, then a girl, then two more boys. Mr. Turok was pleased with all of the sons he had and was proud of her daughter as well. This daughter was named Zilva Daosumi.

When she was born she had to follow the same procedure the others had to; she was brought home and had the Daosumi seal applied to her tongue. It was a quick ritual and Zilva grew in a life of luxury.

Affiliation: 'Soldier of Fortune'
Rank: B-Rank
Specialties: Fuuinjutsu, Weaponry [Exotic, Ranged]
Elemental Affinities: Raiton, Katon
Combat Style: Zilva has adopted a style that isn't very well known by ninja, attack. The way Zilva fights relies on her unrelenting assault to weaken the enemy down or strike them down.
Special Characteristics:

Name: Improved Speed
Rank: C
Type: Physical Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.

Name: Improved Strength
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The first level in the art of strength accessible to those who have undergone intensive training in increasing their raw power. The possessor of this talent has an increased strength of 20% which makes them slightly stronger. They can lift larger objects such as large rocks and toss them considerable distances. They can also now naturally deliver more powerful physical blows that can cause agonizing damage to targets.

~Has Scoleciphiobia

Pet

Name: Jou [Emotion]
Nickname: Love, 'My Love', Boyfriend
Age: 3
Species: Ferret
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Personality: Jou is a very affectionate creature and Zilva is extremely connected to him. She considers him her only friend in the world and often shares her secrets with him. Although Zilva named him, she almost never calls him Jou. She usually refers to him as Love, My Love, or sometimes even her boyfriend.

THE BACKGROUND.

On the Trail of Dreams


Zilva was an outspoken child. Instead of going to the ninja academy, she had been going to regular school even since she could talk. She was also involved in a lot of other activities around the village like acrobatics and the theater. She was especially known for her work in the theater and quickly became a renowned actor. Every day she would sit in her large backyard in a tree and study. Zilva's life eventually became the same thing repeated over and over again, like walking in a rut every day.

One day, Zilva was sitting in her tree reading a book of ninja weaponry with sash tied around he forehead. She was actually studying being a ninja against her Fathers whims. As she was quietly reading, a young academy student burst through the bushes and hit his head on Zilva's tree. "OW!" The boy exclaimed as he took a few steps back. " What are you doing on my property?" Zilva asked the boy as she somersaulted and back flipped down onto the grass. " Woah, that was amazing! None of the kunochi at the academy can do that!" The boy said at the sight of Zilva's flip. "Really?" Zilva replied, shocked at what the boy said. "Yeah, you should come to the academy sometime and show those other kunochi whos boss. Besides, your pretty cute..." the boy said with a blush starting to form on his face. "Just get off my property." Zilva responded with a sigh and a shake of her head.

That night at dinner Zilva decided to ask her parents if she could join the ninja academy instead of just regular school. Once this was mentioned, everything went silent and all eyes were on Zilva's father. Without saying a word, Zilva's father stood up, slowly walked over to Zilva, and slapped her. "Being a ninja is too dangerous for a girl like you! Be grateful for what you have and forget about it." He said in a stern voice once he had sat back down. " Yes Father..." Zilva said. The rest of the dinner went on as normal and Zilva went to her room before dessert. Surprisingly, her personal guard were stationed outside of her room ordered to escort her around for a few days.

The next morning Zilva was getting dressed for school like any other morning when there was a knock on her window. It was the same boy from before except this time he was actually standing on the vertical wall. " What do you want?" Zilva asked as she was slipping on her shirt. It took the boy a few seconds to get over seeing Zilva getting dressed before he could say anything. Once he had recovered he chuckled and ask if Zilva was going to the academy today. " I can't... my father said no and he assigned personal guards to follow me around." Zilva sighed. " Your nimble and you can outrun those armored guards. Just run off when the time is right. Meet me in the playground at the academy once you get there, I want to ask you something..." The boy said as he walked back down the wall and ran off.

As Zilva was walking to school with the guards on both sides of her, she began to starting to formulate an escape plan. When there was a tree hanging over the path, Zilva leaped into it and ran off towards the academy. When she got there, she saw the boy sitting at a bench at the playground waving. Zilva ran over and sat down with a smile on her face, " I made it!" She giggled. The boy's face lit up red and he began to shake. Eventually, he let the words " Will you go out with me?" escape his lips. For a second, Zilva was surprised. She had never been asked out before and she didn't know how to react. The boy misread this as a yes and started to lean in for a kiss. " Screw off!" Zilva yelled as she slammed her fist into the boys face. The boy fell over and began to yelled loudly. The rest of the academy came into the yard to see what was going on and saw Zilva standing over the boy with her foot on his chest. "Ummm, I'd like to enroll." She said.

When Zilva got home that day her father was standing at the door with his arms crossed. He administered another slap to Zilva before turning and leaving. That was the last time he has looked Zilva straight in the eyes. Zilva's siblings and mother were indifferent to Zilva going to school and decided to let her stay.

Zilva's academy days were some of the funnest days of her life. She rejected every boy that confronted her and she refused to take the kunochi classes and instead stayed with the male students during most of the school day. She was ostracized by the girls at the academy because they thought that she thought she was 'too good for them' due to fer financial status. The only friends Zilva had in the academy were all boys and every one of them were only her friend until they tried to make a move. After they were rejected they simply ignored her. Zilva never lingered on these events and she never even tried to make any friends, they just flocked to her.

While Zilva was walking to school one day, she heard a voice in calling her from the bushes. When she turned to see who it was she saw Ikaz, the boy that told her to go to the academy in the first place. Ikaz was beckoning for Zilva to follow him to the playground of the academy. Zilva followed and sat at the same table that had sat at before. " What is wrong with you?" Ikaz asked Zilva as soon as she sat down. " What do you want?" Zilva asked. " You don't have any friends! What is wrong with you! Can't you at least hang out with the girls after school or something?" Ikaz asked Zilva in a stern voice. " B-But... I thought you were my friend..." Zilva said, opening her eyes wide and shedding a few tears. " I-I-I-I am!" Ikaz replied with a bright red face. " Well then there you have it. I have a friend." Zilva said as she stood up and started to laugh. " Wait! No fair! That was a trick!" Ikaz screamed in protest. " Oh well, see you in class buddy." Zilva giggled as she walked into the building.

Everyone was in class and it was about to start when Ikaz walked in and saw two empty seats; one next to Zilva and one next to one of his guy friends. Ikaz took a step towards his guy friend and Zilva made a loud cough while pointing to the seat next to her. With a sigh, Ikaz sadly scuttled over to the seat next to Zilva and sat down. As soon as he sat the entire class broke into chatter that Zilva couldn't hear. By the end of class, all of the students assumed Zilva and Ikaz were dating. The next day at school, Ikaz was walking towards the seat next to Zilva again when he noticed that Zilva wasn't there. Instead, Zilva was with the friend Ikaz couldn't sit with the day before. With a sigh, Ikaz sat by himself.

This pattern of switching seating continued everyday until Zilva repeated the cycle and sat next to Ikaz again. Ikaz looked over at Zilva with a puzzled expression and asked, " What is all this cycling about?". " Well, I decided what I want to do when I grow up." Zilva replied with a smirk. "What is it...?" Ikaz asked once more. " I want to be Raikage!" Zilva said. When Zilva said she wanted to be Raikage, she really meant she wanted to be a famous ninja. Saying Raikage was only a cover up for Zilva's goal.

On graduation day, every child and parents were at the academy except for Zilva's dad; her dad refused to attend. Zilva got her headband and tied it around her head. Looking around she saw everyone in her class conversing about what their going to do when they get assigned to their teams. Everyone was talking to someone, except Zilva. However, before she could leave she was stopped by Ikaz and asked if she would try to be on the same team as him. There was a long pause before Zilva responded in which Ikaz started twitching. " Nah, see ya around!" Zilva laughed as she shoved Ikaz away and ran home to get some sleep and begin her genin life the next day.

A Rose by Any Other Name

Zilva had been a genin for quite some time and she was actually becoming a well respected and known ninja. Her team was actually rated the best of all the Kumo genin teams, even included the older genin teams. One day, Zilva was sent on a special mission to make up for her missing of the Chuunin Exam. The mission was simple, go to Konoha in order to boost the relationship between the two villages. The Raikage chose Zilva because she had found out about the Daosumi clan and their loyalty to previous Raikage and resumed the pact between them. She was sent along with a another team that was to escort her. When she met the team she found that her friend Ikaz was part of it. When they met at the gate to leave for Konoha, Ikaz wouldn't even look at Zilva let alone talk to her. Little did she know that he had a terrible plan in store for her.

The trip there was nothing out of the ordinary. The Jounin leader was silent and didn't say much and the other two team members besides Ikaz wouldn't stop talking to Zilva. They were curious as to her mission and her current relationship status, mostly the later. Occasionally Ikaz would spare Zilva a glance but whenever she tried to look at him he would just turn away or move faster.

It was a couple of days until they finally arrived in Konoha and they stayed the night at a luxurious hotel for the night before Zilva went to talk to the council. That night, Zilva was walking around down the hall to get a drink when she saw Ikaz standing on the balcony gazing off into the stars. Seeing this as a chance to figure out what was up with him, Zilva walked towards the balcony and put her hand on his shoulder and spun him around. " Hey you! Whats wrong with you? I haven't seen you in so long and you just completely ignore me?" Zilva said in an annoyed tone. " Wha-? When did you get here? I mean... I just don't want to see you okay." Ikaz responded quickly. Zilva could tell he was lying, he wouldn't even look her in the face when he spoke and instead seemed to be looking at something in the distance. " Really...? I'm not buying it. Did I do something wrong?" Zilva asked. At this point Ikaz's startled smile turned into a large frown. His usually innocent face turned into an icon of rage. " Did you do anything wrong? What haven't you done wrong?! You prance around like your the best and you ignore anyone who tries to get close to you! You're so damn stuck up and I'm so sick of it!" Ikaz blurted out in a fit of rage. Although slightly taken aback by this, Zilva still had a response to it. Before Ikaz could finish the last word, Zilva slapped him and stomped off with her middle finger up towards him. " Wait, Zilva! Kiss me, right here, right now!" Ikaz yelled while holding his sore face. Zilva knew that Ikaz was stupid, but these words just didn't seem right, even from him. " What the fuck is wrong with you! Obviously while I've been working hard you've been spending your time becoming the biggest jackass pervert in all of Kumo! Drop dead you fucking bastard!" Zilva screamed before stomping back to her room.

The next morning, Zilva found a letter on her door that read:
Letter wrote:
Dear, Zilva

I am sorry for last night and I want to make it up to you. Meet me at Muyarama's Tea Hut for breakfast, I'll pay for everything.

Love, Ikaz

After crumbling the letter up due to the "Love" part of it, Zilva decided to accept his invitation. After getting dressed she set out for the tea place. It was located on the outskirts of Konoha, which was a weird location for just a casual gathering. What she didn't expect that morning was an event that would change her entire life. When she arrived she could already tell something was wrong. There was no noise, no smells, no nothing. It was like the place had been deserted. An eerie silence loomed but Zilva still continued towards the building. She stepped inside and felt something sticky on her shoe. "Damn people can't even clean up their own messes!" She said as she looked down to see what she was stepping in. There, right under her foot, was a pool of blood. Zilva cringed at the sight of it but allowed her eyes to follow it as it spanned across the entire restaurant with bodies in it serving as islands. " W-w-hat happened here...?" Zilva asked herself silently as she continued to walk towards the front of the restaurant. " I did." A voice said from the door. All the hairs on Zilva's back stood up and she turned around to see who was there. By the time her eyes were at the door, the figure had already moved to be in front of her. As she turned back around she felt an unfamiliar feeling on her face. There was a warm feeling in her lips that was only there for a brief second before it pulled away. During this time she had instinctively closed her eyes, not seeing who it was that dared to do such a thing to her. Opening her eyes answered most of her questions, but not enough to satisfy her. It was Ikaz, he had been the voice at the door, he had been the murderer. Jumping backwards in order to get away from the perverted fiend that she used to call a comrade, Zilva felt a tear trickle down her face. " Why did you do this?! What is all of this!" Zilva screamed at him. She wanted answers, she wanted justifications, things were moving so fast and mer mind was racing to keep up with reality.

" Why did I do this? Well, let me answer that question with another question. Why did you do this? I love you." Was all Ikaz said before he disappeared into a puff of smoke. ' A clone?! What does he mean I did this?!' Zilva thought frantically as she looked around. "Over here! The kid said it happened over here!" A voice yelled from outside. Before Zilva could react there was a squad of ninja in the doorway, one of them was Ikaz. " There she is! She did this! I tried to stop her but she is a maniac!" Ikaz told the squad that was with him. " No...! No! I didn't do this! I didn't do this!" Zilva squealed, hoping someone would listen. Her testimony fell upon deaf ears and the ninja charged into the store after her. In a huff Zilva ran through the back door of the building and ran. She ran faster and further than she had ever ran before. Zilva just wanted to get away, away from everything that had just happened. She ran all the way to the coast before stopping and realized that she had lost her pursuers. At the moment she felt as if her life was over. She would now be a criminal and her family would be disgraced all because of something she didn't do. Zilva sat overlooking the ocean for a couple of hours before she stood up and slowly began walking away. As far as she was concerned, her life was over. She had nowhere to turn. No friends, only enemies. From then on it would be a solitary and lonely life until the day she can prove her innocence...


Roleplay Sample:

Zilva wrote:

The day had come, the day Zilva was finally recognized for her greatness and had been requested for a secret mission. Zilva knew that she was destined for greatness and that if she kept doing missions and becoming popular with the village ninja that she would be in the spotlight eventually. This was what Zilva liked to call her personal manifest destiny, that she would one day be world renowned ninja. In fact, that was what really kept Zilva on her ninja path. It was her nindo, her ninja way. The one problem with this nindo was that it wasn't one that could be openly announced. Those who lust for fame find that their loyalty lies with the highest bidder.

With a large yawn, Zilva woke up to another day in her quest to be beloved. Still in the middle of yawning, Zilva began to rub her soft silky hands against her shining olive eyes as if telling them that it's time to wake up. " Today is going to be a great day!" Zilva exclaimed as she leaped out of bed and landed in front of her dresser. After looking at herself in the mirror for a few seconds, Zilva dashed into her closet and changed from her pajamas to her mission outfit. Then she walked across the room, stopping to check herself in the mirror again, and went over to the door. Next to the door was a large bag that contained all of the supplies she would be needing that Zilva had packed the night before in an attempt to be on ready and on time for her big mission. Grabbing the bag Zilva walked out her bedroom door and went through the manor and out the front. Once she was at the walk in front of her house, Zilva accelerated down the street and towards the gates of Kumo.

Zilva made it to the gates in record time and was confronted by her comrade for the mission. Zilva had been on solo missions, team missions, and a mission with a chuunin, but she had never been on a mission with just her and a jounin. A feeling of pride filled Zilva for a few seconds and she introduced herself. " My name is Tarok, Zilva. I'm a weapon a fuinjutsu user and your teammate for this mission." Zilva said to Jax. Zilva had read the information she was given on Jax and found that although there were some things she liked about him, most of his traits were undesirable. After a closer examination of Jax from head to toe, Zilva sighed. " Would you mind putting a shirt on?" She asked with a huff.

THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu


Academy Jutsu
Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] N/A
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1
 
[b]Name:[/b] Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] N/A
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1

[b]Name:[/b] Explosion Tag: Activate
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1

[b]Name:[/b] Kawarimi no Jutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description: [/b]This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1

[b]Name:[/b] Henge no Jutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Element[/b]: N/A
[b]Description:[/b] This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1

[b]Name:[/b] Bunshin no Jutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type: [/b]Ninjutsu
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1

[b]Name:[/b] Nawanuke no Jutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type: [/b]Ninjutsu
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1

[b]Name: [/b]Genjutsu Kai
[b]Rank: [/b]E-S
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1

[b]Name:[/b] Shunshin no Jutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] D-S
[b]Type: [/b]Ninjutsu
[b]Element: [/b]N/A
[b]Description:[/b] This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1

[b]Name:[/b] Reverse Substitution
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] -
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] After using substitution, Zilva is able to use Reverse Substitution in order to reverse the effect of substitution shortly after performing it. This means that if Zilva were to use substitution to substitute for a log, there would be a brief window after this substitution that she could use reverse substitution. Reverse Substitution puts Zilva back in her original place and does not count towards the limited amount of times you are able to substitute in a topic.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1

[b]Name:[/b] Oiroke no Jutsu - Sexy Technique
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The Sexy Technique is simply a Transformation Techniqueused to transform the user into a beautiful, nude woman, or a woman in a bathing suit. This technique is normally used to titillate and knock unconscious perverted adults.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 2

[b]Name:[/b] Oiroke no Jutsu • Onna no Ko Doushi - Sexy Technique • Girl Companions
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The user first creates a shadow clone. The user and the clone then transform into two completely naked and voluptuous young women who will press their bodies together seductively.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 3

Weapon Jutsu

Code:



[b]Name:[/b] Kage Senbon no Jutsu - Shadow Senbon Technique
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Weaponry
[b]Range:[/b]  Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 1om)
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] This technique seems to be a variation of the Shadow Shuriken Technique, replacing shuriken with senbon. The user throws at the same time a senbon with a bell attached, and another one without it, so that the opponent will only react to the sound of the bell and won´t notice the other senbon. However, if the opponent recognises the trick behind it, this technique is easy to evade.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 3

[b]Name:[/b] Tiger Crush
[b]Type:[/b] Weaponry
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] With her Tiger Jaws equipped, Zilva dashes towards an opponent with the stabbing end of one of the claws while holding the claw end of the other one back. When she gets close enough, Zilva slashes with the stabbing end and strikes upwards with the claw end in the other hand.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 2

[b]Name:[/b] Adrenaline Attack
[b]Type:[/b] Weaponry
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] Using any bladed weapon, Zilva lets out a furious yell and begins to stab violently at a target. This attack causes Zilva to let out a flurry of attacks in front of her that are stronger than regular attacks and they are quicker. Another bonus of this jutsu is that there are multiple strikes in it that all attack a different area in front of Zilva.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 3

[b]Name:[/b] Hitei Mushou - Flying Nail Mist Pierce
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Weaponry
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
[b]Element:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b] After forming the needed handseal, the user will emit a flying mist of small nails from his or her mouth. These small nails can travel towards his or her opponent at quite a distance.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 7

[b]Name:[/b] Senbon Shower
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Weaponry
[b]Range:[/b] Mid (5m - 10m)
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] After throwing a special umbrella that has been equipped with springs into the air, it will release a hailing "shower" of senbon. It cannot be dodged by moving away since the needles cover a wide area in all directions, controlled by chakra. Although the needles were said to be able to pierce a five millimeter thick steel sheet, they can still be blocked by a powerful enough shield. They can also be dipped in poison to increase lethality.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 8

[b]Name:[/b] Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Weaponry
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m)
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning", ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summonable ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics. A large number of ninja tools can be stored within the sealing marks, which can make the efficiency of this technique last longer.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 13

[b]Name:[/b] Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu - Cherry Blossom Snow Storm Technnique
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Weaponry
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The user will hurl kunai with pouches attached at her or his target. When they impact the pouches explode, releasing small explosive notes. Due to the large number of kunai thrown, a shower of notes will rain down on her/his target. She/he will then throw one final kunai with an active explosive note at her/his target. It will begin to burn, and by igniting the falling smaller notes it will cause a gigantic explosion.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 13

Fuuinjutsu
Code:


[b]Name:[/b] Sealing Art: Jutsu Seal
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type: [/b]Fuinjutsu
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description: [/b]Sealing Art: Jutsu Seal is a sealing jutsu that actual seals a jutsu into another seal so that it can be used as soon as that seal is release. However, this seal can not just seal a jutsu in of itself. The sealed jutsu must be attached to something else in the seal, this means that the sealed jutsu must be weaponry jutsu or some jutsu that can be used on a weapon. The chakra cost of the sealed jutsu is used during the sealing and is not taken from Zilva’s chakra pool during the unsealing. When the weapon is unsealed, the jutsu automatically activates along with it being unsealed.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1+Cost of Jutsu

[b]Name:[/b] Rapid Seal: Auto Seal
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Fuinjutsu/Weaponry
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] Rapid Seal: Auto Seal is a jutsu that allows Zilva to actually move a seal from one place and add a ‘contact’ release on it. This means that if Zilva were to move a weapon seal from her scarf to her wrist, it would immediately release when her wrist is about to be hit. This acts a defensive seal since Zilva can predict where the enemy will be attacking and then put a sealed weapon on that spot.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 2

[b]Name: [/b]Trap Seal: Weighted Seal
[b]Rank:[/b] D-A
[b]Type:[/b] Fuinjutsu
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] Trap Seal: Weighted Seal is a tricky and useful seal that can render an enemy immobile if used correctly. When the jutsu is used, a seal is made on Zilva’s palm or foot. When the seal comes into contact with any foreign object (Anything besides Zilva and her items) it attaches and activates. The activated seal immediately gains a considerable amount of weight that changes depending on the rank the seal is used. This wrecks the targets balance and speed depending on where it is placed.
D-Rank: 20 lbs
C-Rank: 50 lbs
B-Rank: 100 lbs
A-Rank: 200 lbs
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1+2x [x=each rank up]

[b]Name:[/b] Tranquilizer Seal
[b]Type:[/b] Fuuinjutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Element:[/b] Raiton
[b]Description:[/b] Tranquilizer Seals are a type of seal that Zilva made in order to immobilize her opponents without killed them. These seals, when attached to a target, prevent chakra from restoring by blocking the chakra system. When used while the enemy is out of chakra it prevents them from re-gaining it and therefore keeps them from doing anything. This seal only lasts 5 hours before it expires.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 5


[b]Name:[/b] Energy Fence
[b]Type:[/b] Fuuinjutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] C-S
[b]Element:[/b] Raiton
[b]Description:[/b] After placing this seal, a layer of raiton chakra starts to create a wall of electricity that varies in size depending on rank. This wall causes electrical burns and pain if it is passed through and completely stops projectiles. The wall is not invisible, but it is somewhat difficult to see without giving it a few looks. The wall is characterized by the static that pulsates from the seal. The wall can be destroyed by something that would attract the lightning away or if the seal is destroyed. At  C-rank, the wall is 5x5 feet and it increases by 5x5 every rank it goes up with the exception of S-rank which is 50x50.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 2+2x [x=each rank up]

[b]Name:[/b] Energy Explosion
[b]Type:[/b] Fuuinjutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] C-S
[b]Element:[/b] Raiton/Katon
[b]Description:[/b] When this seal is placed on an object it can only be activated by Zilva. When activated, the seal simply explodes with fire and then shoots off electrical discharge to shock anyone around the explosion. The explosion starts at 5 feet in radius at C-rank and increases by 4 feet per rank except S-rank which is 25 feet. The electrical discharge goes 2 feet farther than the explosion for any rank.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 3+1x [x=each rank up]

[b]Name:[/b] Seal of Binding
[b]Type:[/b] Fuuinjutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] The seal of binding is a difficult seal to pull off but a very effective one non the less. The seal has two ways of being used. The first way is to actually make contact with an opponent and place the seal on them manually. The second way is to place the seal and get the target to make contact with it. If the target does, the seal is transfered onto them. The seal stays on the target until it is activated. When it is activated, the target is binded in place and is unable to move for a post.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 3

[b]Name:[/b] Sealing Palm
[b]Type:[/b] Fuuinjutsu
[b]Rank:[/b] D-S
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] Sealing Palm is an odd fuuinjutsu that is actually used to seal an opponents weapon into the users palm in order to render it useless. This is done by Zilva making the seal on her hand and then making contact with the target weapon. This seals the weapon like any other weapon would be sealed. This must be used at the rank of the target weapon.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 3+2x [x=every rank up]


[b]Name:[/b] Rapid Seal: Array of Weapons
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Fuinjutsu/Weaponry
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] Using this justsu Zilva is able to unseal multiple weapons all consecutively in order to attack with them without letting up. When the jutsu is used, Zilva whirls her scarf around her and then unseals one weapon. While she attacks with the first weapon she can unseal a second and then another without going back and releasing another seal. This is done by setting a ‘timer’ on the seal and then it releasing when the time is up. Using foresight, this jutsu can give the appearance of spontaneous unsealing without the users interference. The amount of weapons that can be unsealed increases with rank, starting at 3 for C-rank and then increasing by 1 every letter rank. If a weapon is in a set, the weapon counts as 1 unseal.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 3+2x [x=every rank up]

[b]Name:[/b] Gofuu Kekkai - Five Seal Barrier
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Fuuinjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] The five "kin" (prohibition) seals act together to form a barrier. To remove the barrier, all five tags must be removed at the same moment. They don't all have to be lumped together; being able to be at least a good hundred meters apart
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 8

Weapons

Low Rank


Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents:
10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch,
Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2
blank small scrolls.

Pocket Mirror x1


Name: Custom Senbon
Rank: D
Type: Ranged
Appearance: -
Quantity: 50 Each (Not counting in other weapons.)
Storage: Seal [Left Forearm]
Special Abilities:
Spoiler:

Name: Kunai Swords
Rank: D
Type: Ranged
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Quantity: 20
Storage:
Special Abilities: Kunai swords are originally the size of an average kunai until they are expanded to a full sized sword (2 feet of blade and 1 foot of handle). The kunai can be thrown and then expanded in mid throw to create surprise attacks.

Name: Whip
Rank: D
Type: Exotic
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Quantity: 4
Storage: Seal [Scarf]
Special Abilities: Being a whip, this weapon can actually break the sound barrier when used and makes a loud crack. This is a very difficult weapon to dodge without warning or distance between the user. These whips are 6 feet long each.

Name: Chain Whip
Rank: D
Type: Exotic
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Zilva's chain whips have spikes on them to allow them to grip things better.
Quantity: 2
Storage: Seal [Scarf]
Special Abilities: Chain Whips are short weapons that are not only used for offense, but are also used to grab opponents weapons with ease. Chain whips are 3 feet long.

Name: Tora Ago [Tiger Jaw]
Rank: D
Type: Exotic
Appearance:
Spoiler:
(The only difference in the weapons appearance is that it isn't rusted and is instead a polished silver color.)
Quantity: 1 Set (2)
Storage: Seal [Knuckles]
Special Abilities: These weapons act as an extension of Zilva's fists and increase her deadliness in hand to hand combat while not reducing her speed.

Name: Suisei Isei [Comet Power]
Rank: D
Type: Exotic
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Quantity: 2
Storage: Seal [Thumbs]
Special Abilities: Rope hammers(meteor hammers, flying hammer, dragons fist) are a mix between a flail and a whip. When used, they move almost as fast as a whip in one direction and then slam into a target and are drawn back. The lines on the hammers is wrapped around Zilva's arms when used and is 15 feet long. The actual hammer has only a 1 inch radius. The downfall of this weapon is that the farther it goes, the more momentum it looses and the longer it takes to bring it back.

Name: Seishou Kugi [Energy Nail]
Rank: D
Type: Exotic
Appearance:
Spoiler:
(Blade is 20 inches long) Zilva's are a lustrous silver color and have her glyphs written all over them.
Quantity: 1 Set (2)
Storage: Seal [Scarf]
Special Abilities: There is a button that allows the Katar to be launch out of its holder at a considerable speed. This is especially helpful for surprise attacks in close combat.

Name: Seishou Ken [Energy Blade]
Rank: D
Type: Exotic
Appearance:
Spoiler:
The blade on these weapons are 1.5 feet long.
Quantity: 1 Set (2)
Storage: Seal [Scarf]
Special Abilities: N/A

Name: Family Kilij [Name Unknown]
Rank: D
Type: Exotic
Appearance:
Spoiler:
The blade is very slender and is 2 feet long.
Quantity: 1 Set (2)
Storage: Scabbard
Special Abilities: Zilva's family heirloom, given to her after graduating the academy. Although it has little to no use in combat, she still keeps it around her waist at all times to honor her family.

Name: Wire Bracer
Rank: D
Type: Exotic
Appearance: A metal bracer that extends onto Zilva's knuckles that she can draw wire from to use as a weapon.
Quantity: 1
Storage: Worn on right wrist
Special Abilities: The Wire Bracer allows Zilva to send wires out at high speeds to attach to objects or to launch attacks. The bracer shoots out the wire from her knuckles and from there she is able to manipulate them with her fingers. The bracer has 100 feet of wire rolled up inside of it.

Name: Koukon Tora [Dusk Tiger]
Rank: D
Type: -
Appearance: -
Quantity: 1 Set (2)
Storage: Shoulder/Face
Special Abilities: Koukon Tora is the mask that Zilva almost always has on her. It was given to her after her special clan training and she has kept and modified it ever since. The mask right now has an air filter like a gas mask and a voice changer built into it. It also doubles as a shoulder plate when not needed to cover her face.

Name: Seal Scarf
Rank: -
Type: -
Appearance: -
Quantity: 1 Set (2)
Storage: Around neck.
Special Abilities: Zilva's Sealed Scarf (Her pink scarf) is essentially a weapon storage scroll. Using her clan ability, Zilva has sealed all of her weapons excluding her gauntlet into the scarf and can pull them out whenever necessary. In addition, the scarf is also flame retardant.
[/spoiler]


C-Rank


Name: Ketatamashii Ame [Piercing Rain]
Rank: C
Type: Exotic
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Ketatamashii Ame was built to look like a sword when not opened in order to fool enemies.
Quantity: 1
Storage: Seal (Scarf)
Special Abilities: Ketatamashii Ame is made of metal instead of silk or other material. This makes it able to block attacks and be used as a weapon. When thrown into the air, the umbrella opens and starts to rain down 100 senbon in a 15 ft. radius around it. This attack can be amplified by activating the homing seals Zilva places on all of the senbon in the umbrella. This umbrella has enough senbon loaded into it to be used twice per topic.

B-Rank

Name: Nigiri Toride [Grip Fortress]
Rank: B
Type: Exotic
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Quantity: 1
Storage: Seal [Left Forearm]
Special Abilities: Nigiri Toride is pretty much Zilva's 'multi-tool'. It has numerous functions that are listed below. Everytime Zilva ranks up or thinks of new attachments she simply adds them onto this weapon instead of making a new one. These attachments/functions are listed below:
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Done with everything except the clan. I'm currently having that re-worked. The rest of this app is ready for checking though Razz
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Clan is now ready for checking in clan section. Lets do this!
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PostSubject: Re: Daosumi, Zilva [B-Rank Nukenin] Daosumi, Zilva [B-Rank Nukenin]  EmptySat 28 May 2011, 9:45 am

I apologize for the wait. Razz
Now, let's see...

• All shinobi must start off with C-Ranked special characteristics, regardless of rank.

• Your custom weaponry techniques need a chakra cost. I realize they don't really use chakra, it's really just more of a physical energy cost I'm asking you to put down.

Zilva wrote:
Name: Tranquilizer Seal
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: Tranquilizer Seals are a type of seal that Zilva made in order to immobilize her opponents without killed them. These seals, when attached to a target, prevent chakra from restoring by blocking the chakra system. When used while the enemy is out of chakra it prevents them from re-gaining it and therefore keeps them from doing anything. This seal only lasts 5 hours before it expires.
Chakra Cost: 5

Would you please put a post count instead of actual time? Does the 5 hours equal 10 posts or 'til the end of the topic or... What?



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-Changed S.C's

-Gave all the weapon jutsu a cost

-For the Tranq. Seal, it is meant to be used at the end of a battle because it prevents them from regaining chakra to immobilize them which would only work if they're exhausted. But, if I still need to put a post counter I will.
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One last thing.

Zilva wrote:
Skilled Performer

Along with being taught acrobatics, Zilva has also been taught the ways of the theater. In fact, she has been practicing theater longer than acrobatics. She takes part in plays in Kumo and is actually somewhat of a star for her acting in the big shows. This becomes a helpful ninja skill when she needs to lie or charm someone to do her will. Whenever she acts it is almost impossible to tell if she is telling the truth or just a lie. Zilva has gotten so used to this art, that not even her heartbeat rate changes when lying.

This is just like the special characteristic "Lie Detection", except it's just the opposite- being able to lie at an exceptional level rather than detect lies at an exceptional level. Because of that, I'm afraid this could really pass off as a C-Rank special characteristic, which would make you be starting off with 3 special characteristics. I'm going to have to ask that you remove one of them.
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Hmm, I guess it is. All right, removed it.
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Could you put my clan on my app since I can't reach it now that it's approved? Or you can move it back and I'll do it Smile
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Sure thing. I went ahead and edited it in there. Smile

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