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Yuki, Ansoni

THE INFO.

Name: Yuki, Ansoni
Nickname: Anso, Yuza, Yukiza, "Captain"
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance: Ansoni is pretty shady. Most people generalize, saying that people that dress like him, and people that look like that are punks, troublemakers and up to no good. He finds this discriminatory and condescending, and generally incorrect, though they are right about HIM.

Perhaps the most distinguishing feature about his attire is his cloak. It is so long, it could literally wrap around a four hundred pound man about five times. It is cut and shredded in many places, some made by Ansoni, some made by tree branches, swords, and various other sharp and pointy objects. The cloak has an attached hood and leather straps. He ties down some of the shredded pieces of the cloak under the straps, below the hood, though a couple he let sway in the wind. At the fringes, it is cut very slightly. There is a small cut in his cloak, where only Ansoni can easily find, with leather reinforcement around it, where he slides his blade in, obviously the reinforcements are there so the blade doesn't rip the rest of his cloak. He also has leather shoulder pieces, which are attached to the cloak via straps and interlocking rings.

He wears a leather chest and stomach guard, with metallic rings as decoration. Under these, he wears a black tunic, which is tucked into a pair of gray slacks at the waist, which are held together by a black leather belt. In these slacks, there is a small leather plate, with an engraved image of an eagle. Two leather straps, which are extensions of his belt, connect together from a tie in a v formation just below the image. From this plate extends to small cloth straps with rings on the ends for whatever reason. He wears black fingerless gloves, originally made of polyester, but coated with a thick leather, a small gap in the leather, in which two small leather straps extend from the wrist, and create an X, and converges again at the middle finger knuckle.

As for physical looks, Ansoni stands about 5'9" and weighs about 175 pounds. He'd be lighter if it wasn't for all of his weight training, but he also could be a lot heavier if it weren't for his constant cardio training as well. But, he maintains a good balance between his types of training, and a good balance in nearly everything else, which allows him to be in peak physical shape.

He has short, sleek black hair, which is spiked in the front, but it is hidden by his hood and his cloak. His eyes are such a dark brown, to most people, they appear as being black, unless you were really looking at them, then you would be able to tell they are brown. His facial structure is slender, but rather short. He jaw is squared, and he has a rounded chin. He has a long nose bridge, but with smaller nostrils, and with a thin ACTUAL nose. His eyes are large when you can see them, but he tends to keep his head down when he walking and talking, but when training or when he is sparring, they are very visible, and they strike fear into the very core of the person he is fighting.

He has small shoulders, regardless of how much training he does, and he doesn't know why, but he is content with it anyway. His arms are thin, but extremely muscular, and he has toned triceps and biceps, and with strong forearms and wrists. His lower body is also very strong. Though it may not look it, his lower body is probably about as strong as a professional bodybuilder's. Because of this balanced strength between upper and lower body, he is able to throw projectiles extremely well.

Personality: Ansoni is very soft-spoken. He doesn't talk much, but it doesn't mean he is a loner. He loves to be around people, regardless of his feelings toward them, for he fears being lonely. Because of this irrational fear, he tends to be a little nosy, and be a bit hated. He tries to include himself where he doesn't belong, and because of his parents, he is often excluded from EVERYTHING. He is an outcast like no other.

Because of this constant exclusion, he isn't the most FRIENDLY person. Not that he's a complete and total asshole, but he doesn't like to be excluded, so he does tend to be a dick when people do that. But, considering that he does have a few friends, he tends not to be a dick, for the friends he does have, he feels is all he needs.

He also has impeccable self-control. He doesn't get ticked easily, even why people try extremely hard to do so. But because of this impeccable self control, he can make himself tick if he absolutely has to. He tends to keep himself mellow and calm, but sometimes it just can't be helped. Another bonus comes with this impeccable self-control, he tends to be more intelligent and have better work ethic, and will get things done more easily than most people would.

However, there is one aspect of his personality he does not control well whatsoever. This emotion is jealousy. He is a very envious person, and will strive to get what others have, and he's not afraid to steal to get it. Being a kleptomaniac goes along with his jealousy, for he has pulled off many robberies before in his lifetime, though only one was of any significance.

Otherwise, Ansoni is a pretty cool and chill guy. He will sit back and talk to you if you truly want to have a conversation with him, and he is fairly easy to talk to. He isn't very cynical or opinionated, more very laid-back and soft-spoken. But, he feels that if you don't wanna talk to him, fuck you.
Clan: Yuki Clan
Nindō: " May the frost be the only thing you feel."

THE NINJA.

Origin: Kirigakure no Sato
Affiliation: N/A
Rank: B Rank Nukenin
Specialties: Ninjutsu/ Weaponry
Elemental Affinities: Suiton (Water), Fuuton (Wind)
Combat Style: Ansoni tends to try to corner his opponent before attacking. He uses many distractions, and then goes on the offensive. He also enjoys the "Cat and Mouse" Tactic, for he loves to run around, challenging and wearing down his opponent.
Special Characteristics:
Chakra-Based


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Physical Based

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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Early Life


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The Long and Winding Road


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Renaissance


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Since...
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Roleplay Sample:

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THE ARSENAL.

Clan Jutsu



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Academy Jutsu


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Non-Elemental Jutsu


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Suiton Ninjutsu
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Fuuton Ninjutsu
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Weaponry Jutsu
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Basic Weaponry and Items
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Normal Weapons
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Special Weapons
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] EmptyWed 29 Jun 2011, 9:36 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] EmptyWed 29 Jun 2011, 9:38 am

-You'll need to place a nindo and a combat style.

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x50 Shuriken
x50 Kunai
x50 Senbon
x30 Exploding Tags
x20 ? (Similar to caltrops, can't remember official name)
x10 Wind Shuriken
x5 Poison Vials
x2 Pouches
x1 Sword Sheath

Keep in mind that you are carrying all of this so the weight will be bearing down on your body. This means that the amount you have applied for is illogical. Seeing that your character doesn't posess massive strength, nor does he have any other methods of carrying this amount by any other means (i.e Fuuinjutsu), it's hard for me to ignore this. You'll have to dramatically lower the amount.

-You have a B-rank weapon which, according to the systems and I quote

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B Rank Weapons or Higher - Can only be used by individuals with specialty in weaponry or puppetry (restricted to puppet weapons only)

The maximum your character can obtain is D-rank. Because of your specialties being Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, your weapon is denied.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] EmptyWed 29 Jun 2011, 10:07 am

All right. Will delete Taijutsu and make Weaponry a Specialty, and will Lower Equipment.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] EmptyWed 29 Jun 2011, 8:19 pm

Trickster Polymath wrote:
-You'll need to place a nindo and a combat style.

-You need to change the speciality from Ninjutsu/Taijutsu to Ninjutsu/Weaponry followed by different classes in weaponry.

-After evaluating your weapon, it appears that the effects acts like a poison. I say this because the immediate slash has the ability to lower speed stats of the entire body and not the area in which the user has slashed the opponent. Does the poison begin moving through the body, possibly freezing the bodily fluids inside? I don't know because it's very vague.

Even if that is the case, the effects itself far exceeds the capabilities your character can posess at the moment. Because of the poison effects, you must A) place it in a poison template with all of the effects and slots listed and B) Put the poison within reason of your charcter. Your character is B-rank and the level of poison you can have is of D-rank.

And this part of the weapon

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If struck by the blunt side of the sword, any target of lower rank is partially incapacitated for one post, unable to use ANY chakra. If of equal rank, all techniques take 3 more chakra points than normal. Of higher rank has no effect.


Like I said previously on the first part, this also acts like a poison. To affect the use chakra and initially affect the chakra system of the body itself (even with lower ranking) is of higher level than the user can posesses. Either edit accordingly to your rank or remove altogether.
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Sword removed completely. Added nindo and combat style.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] EmptyThu 30 Jun 2011, 6:54 am

- You basic weaponry can be located here...please choose the on of you Rank
https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/t3781-ninja-kits

-Being that you are not a weapon specialist I'm asking you to please erase your weaponry jutsu please..atleast everything over D-Rank

- Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique- PLease add a chakra reduction for each post after the first post

-Gama Daira Kage Ayatsuri no Jutsu - Toad Flat Shadow Control Technique- I see this as more of an advanced Nara technique and I don't like it because from your description it seems you are controlling your opponent....please erase

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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] EmptyThu 30 Jun 2011, 6:57 am

the jutsu are both canon, and are in the open canon jutsu. the second one is not listed as a Nara tech.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] Yuki, Ansoni [B-Rank Nukenin] EmptyThu 30 Jun 2011, 8:52 am

Tony and I have discussed his special weapon, now that he has weaponry as his off spec, and we have reached a system/concept that I believe will work.

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