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PostSubject: Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] EmptyMon 11 Jul 2011, 5:30 pm

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Amaki Sukihara.

THE INFO.

Name: Amaki Sukihara
Nickname:Amaki
Age:13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Amaki is 5'1 and weighs 98 lbs. Amaki has long brown hair that normally covers her right eye. Amaki has got bandages on her legs because she accidently burnt herself while practicing ninjutsu. She wears her forehead protector on top of her datejime ( the strap thing). She doesn't wear shoes, she only wears long blue socks. She has a yellow datejime to hold her short blue kimono together. Amaki has green eyes and thin brown eyebrows. She has a small nose and a small mouth. Her skin is clear of blemishes except for the burns on her legs. She takes her weapon with her in her datejime on her back. The picture up the top pretty much explains the rest. She wears the same thing during fights and when she isn't in a fight or on a mission except sometimes in different colours.

Personality: Amaki is an excited and often times spontaneous person. Most of the time she's happy. She normally forgives people it just takes a little time. Amaki is energetic except normally after a fight when she just wants to sleep on the ground. Amaki is fine at working with a team but might sometimes prefer working by herself. She is normally suspicious about new people.Amaki likes almost every type of animal except she doesn't like tigers. She loves giant lollipops and has one at her house, (even poorly edited one's).

She likes to believe that anything bad is always someone else's fault. Amaki tries to hide her sadness but is normally bad at it. When Amaki is angry she she isolates herself in somewhere like a park. . When she's happy she like to be with friends. She loves to laugh, make jokes, and say weird things. Amaki is most comfortable with friends when they're getting along.
Clan: N/A
Nindō: Forget injuries, not kindness.

THE NINJA.

Origin: Konoha
Affiliation: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Specialties:Main: Weaponry/Main: Exotic Sub:Kenjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities:Fire/Wind (she doesn't know it yet though)
Combat Style: When she is fighting she is normally a bit cautious and defensive. She normally likes to fight in close quarters but can still attack from a distance if need be. Sometimes she might decide to try a new fighting style. Amaki doesn't like hand to hand combat, and if anybody tries it she'll take out her weapon.
Special Characteristics:Speed
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Childhood Arc:
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Academy Arc:
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Genin Arc:
Nothing so far.

Roleplay Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.
Weapons/Items
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Academy Jutsu:
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Katon Jutsu:
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Weaponry Jutsu:
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PostSubject: Re: Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 15 Jul 2011, 5:00 pm

Completion Bump~
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PostSubject: Re: Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 15 Jul 2011, 6:22 pm

Please remove your weaponry jutsu; you do not have permission from the rightful owner to use them.
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PostSubject: Re: Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] EmptySat 16 Jul 2011, 4:44 am

Done~
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PostSubject: Re: Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] EmptySat 16 Jul 2011, 10:11 am

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She also has 15 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 6 Senbon, 5 exploding notes, 1 exploding pouch and 100m of wire.
Their is a template for this...the genin kits fits you.
http://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/t3781-ninja-kits

-For all of you canon Katon jutsu go here: http://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/t3130-open-katon-ninjutsu copy and paste them for the forum already has them for you...You may want to do it because reading over yours it seems you are cheating yourself.



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Done~
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PostSubject: Re: Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] EmptySun 17 Jul 2011, 7:33 am

Are you sure you don't want a second element? Your allowed another, and it would give you a better advantage than you would have now.

Other than this I see no other problems except detail in things like appearance and personality. I would appreciate it if you fleshed those out more, but I won't deny you if you don't.
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Edited~
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PostSubject: Re: Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] Sukihara, Amaki [Konoha Genin] EmptySun 17 Jul 2011, 9:21 am

On second though, I've looked over your appearance and personality, and it really just won't do. Please add more detail to each of them. Add another paragraph or make the existing ones more detailed. I want to see some depth to your character. Right now it just looks rather shallow.
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Archived.
Due to inactivity.

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