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PostSubject: Chiyo Chiyo EmptyFri 10 Jun 2011, 4:36 am


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Sachi, Chiyo

THE INFO.

Name:Chiyo Nagataka Sachi
Nickname: CSN
Age:17
Gender:Male
Appearance:A 6"5 dark skinned man although he is not as tall as others his presents him self in an powerful way he has grey hair that lies sholder lengeth he wears gloves which cover his most prized possesion his hands, his brown scarf is usually wrapped around his neck the white shirt has been made of a high quality of slik easy to clean off most likey when stained with blood. His shoes are old wooden sandals although he would rather go barefoot, his pants are also white many people remark if you had a White fedora you would be extremly nice looking. Most people belive at this statment Chiyo blushes but his cheeks are naturally rosy much to his dismay. His Dark Brown Arms seem to have come from someone else as they are at least 3 shades a darker brown than the rest of him, Only a small portion of his back is not sun burned this is because he sleeps in the sun and usually moves in the night


Personality:A secretly happy person he enjoys eating moci ice cream even though it doesnt excatly agree with him he doesnt really hate contact with other people but he does chose when he does if he wants to avoid it he will do everything in his power to avoid it although some would suggest he needs it because of his speech pattern, He talks like a computer or maybe a scientist from north korea. even though he talks like this to intimadate people because he has a large inferiority complex and feels that everyone is against him and since he is a Missing Ninja this is sometimes true.
Clan:N/A
Nindō:Doom can only be controlled not prevented

THE NINJA.

Origin:Konoha
Affiliation:Nukenin
Rank:C ranked
Specialties: Main:Medical Sub:Weaponry
Elemental Affinities:Suiton/Raiton
Combat Style:Stay close to the opponet to use his nerve jutsus on them his range consists of a 2m diameter signature jutsu is Nerve Disruptor

Special Characteristics:
Name: Advanced Stealth
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: A skill gained by ninja who have begun to specialize in the art of stealth. The ninja becomes very light and quick on their feet. Their movements no longer create sound and they now gain a natural skill for hiding and camouflage.

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Age 1~~~ A Small child born on August 31 with 2 doctor parents most people think being a doctor was a good job but Chiyo thought different but
All that the boy could remember was long nights alone with various babysitters early mornings hearing "Lara We have to go 3 New Patients from a Mision" cold alone unloved but this set the path for his destiny as a great medical user nine years later he went to work with his parents but then he came to it and it was.

Age 10~~~~The evil realization that i was destined to become a doctor like my mother and my Father a position i hated forced to work on living human beings to "Save" their lives even though most died on the operating table my mother and father belived that you could never start too soon and at age 13 i became an assistant nurse in the ER i had a horrible reality shock i had, My mother told me to do somthing unthinkable we had just stablized the man but then my evil bannshee of a mother demanded that i hand her a new experimental salve that was to be put into open wounds that could potentionally instantly close them without a question it failed the mans condition not only worsened it was fatal the man died. This situation however was not as nearly as dire to me as it was to my parents and the other doctor "Good job Jim" and "Maybe the Next one" Then my mother sat next to me and said perhaps the next one Horrified i slaped the women across her face my father rushed to her aid Screaming "WHats your problem" I went insane they honestly belived what they did was the right thing In the name of medical ninjutsu and the like. But i Knew now and i sought out to leave i packed my things and moved away to a smaller county within the Fire Nation I became the youngest practicing doctor in that place but then a college of my told me about new study that world renown doctors were talking about The Central Nervous System Theory i thought it was a respectable study but then i witnessed it in motion it was August 31 My 17th Birthday.



17~~~The Central Nervous System or CSN as i call it is a vital part of a human's life although it does play a vital role it has been Suggested by top-notch Scientific Researchers of the subject that the human body could live not function mind you but breathe be aware of the surrounding by the nerves disconected being save those leading from the brain to the heart.

I put my entire life into Medical Ninjutsu to find someway to revers the effects of such damage the victim regaruded in my notes as the Damned have almost always sucumbed to the painful process giving into the sweet embrace of death Then once i had lot a 9 yearold boy i realized my hands covered in the young mans blood i came to a Realization i should not be doing this painful surgeries on The Damned but the once who inflict such pain upon others

I began to study the practice enveloped myself in it and mastered better than those who had created it i abducted severeral doctors and attempted the process it failed on 6 of the 7 doctors but the one who remained rehabilitated and to my suprise attempted to end my life

I Quickly took down the almost healed man and ended his sick life permantly the noise however from my .....Battle cry as you may call it alerted my neighbors they called the police and myself being young enough to fit through small openings escaped

I Painstakingly realized that the neighbors had retrived a left behind notebook of mind and they were horrifyed at whaat i had done them themselves having a daughter who was struck by the doctors evil experiments DIsgusted i permantly left the small countie of no interest to the 5 great nations

I came to the realization that my practice of reversing the Destruction of the CNS was not praised but spited by the very people of whom i was trying to save i became an traveler although wrongfully branded a Missing ninja by the law enforcement officers i continue my research seeking out those who use medical ninjutsu to wrong the innocent i have adapted the name Chiyo Nagataka Sachi

Roleplay Sample
"Wakey wakey Anna... Upsy daisy now..."

The young Anna's eyelids twitched from the irritation of being woken up, she didn't much like being forced awake by anyone, and much preffered to wake up on her own accord. She rarely got her way though, and was always woken up like this, Anna always tried to ignore it though; pushing the voice to the back of her mind.

"Aw, poor little Anna, trying to fight me again? You know you can't win, you would have by now if you could... Now come on, up you get, you've got to take your medication."

The female could feel the annoyance at it growing in her stomach, and she drew in a deep breath and opened her eyes. The last thing she wanted was to get angry, she always had to keep a neutral mood on her, or a happy one. She hadn't lost control in a few days now, and she could feel he was restless to do something. Anna wasn't going to let that happen though, she was in control.

"Oh, you think so do you? You're up, aren't you? You're awake, just like I told you to do."

Anna ignored him again, as much as she wanted to retort a reply, as much as he baited her for a reply, she gritted her teeth and ignored him, pushing her bed clothes off of her and slipping out of bed.

"Yes, that's right Anna, get up, and go and get changed, then go and have your medication to try and silence me. Not that it works, you know that, don't you, Anna?"

She hadn't spoken to him in a day or two, and she could feel his amusement at trying to piss her off so he could resume control. But Anna was stronger than that, he wasn't going to let him take over today. She hated having to fight a constant battle she hated having-

"Yes Anna! You hate it, don't you? Think about how much you hate it! Hate, Anna, hate it so much!"

"Shut up!" Anna finally demanded, taking a deep breath and trying to calm herself. She looked over to the mirror at herself, one of her eyes seemed to be darker than the other, "Not today, Red." She had named the voice "Red", no real reason other then it being a nice short name. She smiled maliciously at herself, and smiled as she felt his presence shift and dull down.

THE ARSENAL.
Weapons

Name: Kakkou (Retractable Wrist Blade)
Rank: C
Type: Primary/Melee
Quantity: 2
Description: As its name implies, the user equips these retractable wrist blades so that the attach to their forearm without risking exposure. These blades can spring forth when needed to surprise any opponent fought in hand to hand combat.

Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.

Name: Gou
Rank: C
Type: Primary/Melee
Quantity: 2
Description: Commonly referred to as 'hook swords', they are used in pairs for full effectiveness. The blade of the weapon is straight about about two to three feet before a sharp, square hook ends at the tip. This can be used for slashing, hooking an weapon from an enemy, or even their appendage.





Jutsu

Name:Nerve Disruption
Rank:C-B
Type:Medical
Range:0m Must be physical contact
Element:Raiton
Description:Upon Physical Skin to skin contact the user Can Focus both his Raiton energy and Suiton chakra he can disrupt the electrical connection from the brain to the selected nerve this technique is also a medical ninjutsu that can disconect the nerves on the top of skin which dulls the pain of the target this variation is usually used on allies The Disconnection of brain waves last around 30 minutes (5posts)
Cranked Version Sub Description- This is the weakest version of the technique which requires 4to5 hits to the same spot to compleatly disconnect the electro wave from the brain to the targeted area
B-Ranked Sub Description-This is the enhanced version of the Disruption technique it only requries 2to3 hits to the same spot to disconect the brain waves to the targeted spot
Chakra Cost: C ranked-9 Perpost-6

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive.
Chakra Cost: 1


Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 3


Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 3



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PostSubject: Re: Chiyo Chiyo EmptySun 12 Jun 2011, 8:09 am

* You could use a bit more on personality and appearance. It could be explained a lot more than just what you've put there.

* You might wanna fix up the loose tags you put there. Such as the [spoiler] tag, and the [img] tags at the bottom of the page.

* You can only have 1 C-Ranked Special Characteristic at your rank, so choose the one you would prefer and get rid of the other.
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PostSubject: Re: Chiyo Chiyo EmptySat 25 Jun 2011, 12:51 am

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PostSubject: Re: Chiyo Chiyo EmptyFri 15 Jul 2011, 6:10 pm

You do not have Ninjutsu as a specialty, so please remove your elemental affinities.
Also, please remove your Raiton jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Chiyo Chiyo EmptyWed 10 Aug 2011, 6:31 pm


Archived.
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