Lesada, Aki [Suna Genin]

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Basic Information:

Name:
Lesada Aki
Secondary Title:
N/A
Age: 13

Gender: Male

Physical Appearance:
Lesada, Aki [Suna Genin] Eiyuu__Closer_Look_by_mazjojo

Lesada, Aki [Suna Genin] Black_Operation_by_mazjojo

Aki stands at a height of 5’7 weighing at 177 pounds of pure muscle mass, without his shoes, dark tone blue hair and yellow tips of his bangs ranging from layers of different lengths from the back front and sides. His side bangs considered the longest of his hair style ranging close to covering his neck entirely, his front ones are mid length normally covering his eyes when unstyled but pushed to side when styled, the back length is the less naturally spiking upward away from his skull. His skin is a light fair white, slightly healthier darker tint then pale pink. No discoloration or scars or ache, smooth texture feel though out his body. His eyes range from an orange to dark gold yellow depending on the light that is mirrored off his from his irises, eye size larger then normal, good strong jaw and high check bones give him the male model structure. His clothing entirely tends from the same type of clothing, a very tight black top shirt hanging from his shoulder and stopping just under then bottom of his pecs slightly over his upper abs, leaving his lower mid and lower torso entirely exposed, a mid length coat that he wears openly that hangs down his sides to about his groan area, cooled patterned with greenish yellow and cerulean blue with a black bow in the front connecting to his lighter shoulder pads tied together with his families emblem on the center of the ribbons. He wears low cut black corgo pants under his waist line, with its ties hanging freely to the wind, sliver outlines from the knee area. The pants end just after the knee leaving the rest of his legs from the mid calf down exposed. His shoes are simple black boots. He also wears two black leather gloves, right hand is fingerless while left hand is not finally he wears his own symbol from his child hood.

Personality:
Aki tends to be a outgoing confidant person that often speaks his mind if he believes that it holds a valid point he needs to get across, he can keep his thoughts to himself and will do so if he does not know the person he is around. When with friends or people he cares about Aki is far more friendly, open, humours and easy going so long as they are not in the middle of something of important. On missions and serious matters which Aki has a role to play in his becomes as unforgiving as ice, only concern himself with the matter best fitted for the missions and if need be he will not bring forth emotional until the mission is complete, even though his hearts aches from his emotions that he can only masked. Deep down Aki is a very caring person and sweet heart to everyone one even though his training has been in placed to make himself a tool worthy of his nation. Though medical based and very logical in terms of battle Aki tends to go along with his emotional choices rather than logical, seems rather conflicting with his training he tries to portraits but that is how most of his choices end up in the end, might be a little head strong and stubborn to do what is right but he will do anything he can to complete the mission at the least amount of sacrifice. He can get overly excited and tense when it comes to training, chakra control is essential for his profession. He is also very determined to finish anything that his starts and often that leads him to have a strong will of his own. also being able to talk to anyone he is able to get along as well as advise people well

Catch Phrase:
N/A

Clan Information:

Clan Name: Koori (Haku's Clan/ All Ice Jutsu)

Clan Location: Kiri
suna

Clan Traits:
The Bloodline limit of the Koori clan is purely elemental. This meaning that they are one of the few ninja in the world that on top of the regular elements that all ninja have an opportunity of access to, they can also access a singular advanced element. All members of this clan have the basic elements of wind and water. They can combine the properties and fundamentals of both to create the ice element. This is done by the wind chakras adding a chilled factor to the water chakras, causing it become an over all colder chakra. When exuded from the body, its heat level is to low to be liquefied water, and instead takes the form of solid ice.

All of their clan jutsu focus around this singular concept of creating and manipulating ice. A user is capable of taking pre-existing bodies of water, large or small, and manipulating them into ice, as well as pre-existing ice formations and using them for their techniques. This ice is generally very durable and difficult to break, taking an excessive amount of physical damage for most techniques, and is also, in contradiction to naturally occurring ice, displays a resistance to fire, though is not purely immune to it its melting effects.

Kekkei Genkai:

Secret Clan Jutsu:

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History:

The Koori clan are The Mist Villages second most well known clan as its co-founder and unique ability to manipulate and create the ice element. In the time before the great villages were constructed they were one of the lesser clans for hire but they were still well known all the same and held a certain level of respect and honor. Unlike the accursed Kaguya clan they are actually quite peaceful by nature though quite deadly in battle. Despite there grand foothold in the society of Kiri, they at one point, just like the Kaguya were persecuted by the normal villagers for there arcane abilities which were beyond what normal shinobi could do. There faith in the village never wavered though, and unlike the Kaguya, they never struck back against there critics.

When the Kaguya rebellion came to pass, they led the resistance to the struggle and were the main cause for the ending of the feud. As a result of this they single handedly brought their village closer together and ended the persecution, the two clans gaining more respect and stature then ever before amongst their home. For many years they have served as the primary protectors of the village and its most well known family name.

Clan Details:
open, controls ice

Rank Information:

Rank: Genin
Village Affiliation:
suna

Special Information:

Character Speciality:

Main: Medical Jutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main:Water
Sub: Wind

Special Characteristics:

Muscle Bulk/Chakra enhanced strength:
Aki's not only genetically 'enhanced' to be super strong from his mother's medical alterations and permanent; he has also gone through vigorous training to hone his strength. This muscular mass does make Aki much stronger then normal ninja of his magnitude, but it also makes him travel much slower. This doesn't effect his dexterity, only his movement speed. It is also thanks to his chakra control and exact timing of how to use it properly that makes Aki so much stronger physical.

Dreamer
The character has a strange and uncontrollable oracular ability which manifests in dreams. This talent may be attributed to latent psychic abilities, a weird reaction to opiates, or another cause altogether. Whatever the case, from time to time, the character dreams of the near future, catching glimpses of events before they occur. These events always relate to the character or those closest to him. The character is only able to glean snippets from his dreams. These' visions are heavily symbolic and vague; the future is never spelled out. (Note; SMALL SNIPPETS. NOT A PSYCHIC)

Model good looks
The character is in excellent physical shape. He heals quickly and is seldom ill, soft healthy skin, nails and hair. His appearance also is quite stunning and jaw dropping handsome, always to match his excellent physique. He looks only gets better with age.

Photographic Memory
The character remembers everything he sees and hears with absolute clarity. To represent this extraordinary gift, the player controlling the character should take copious notes throughout play to represent his character's memory.

Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:

Ice jutsu that i can use right now (will be add more once i rank up)

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Medical

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Basic justsu

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Water

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Wind

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Non elemental jutsu

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Aki wrote:: Muscle Bulk:
Akiis not only genetically 'enhanced' to be super strong; he has also gone through vigorous training to hone his strength. This muscular mass does make Aki much stronger then normal ninja of his magnitude, but it also makes him travel much slower. This doesn't effect his dexterity, only his movement speed.

Lord Letter Z wrote:: Muscle Bulk:
Kakougan is not only genetically 'enhanced' to be super strong; he has also gone through vigorous training to hone his strength. This muscular mass does make Kakougan much stronger then normal ninja of his magnitude, but it also makes him travel much slower. This doesn't effect his dexterity, only his movement speed. Kakougan's strength is also drastically increased simply because he has master the art of chakra fists.

Um, what?

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Quote :: [08:40:18] Aki : hiya so i got a question for ya
[08:40:38] Aki : can i get premssion to use one of your traits?
[08:41:15] Aki : i must have over looked the list and saw your app when i was going though examples and got tthem mixed up
[08:41:30] Z : It depends really, if your my student it would make sense that you would be trained similarly, if not then I don't think it would make sense =P
[08:41:57] Çγαηide Çαηdγ : Z, have you ever played Dragon Age?
[08:42:10] Z : nope o.o
[08:42:13] Aki : well could you train me then?
[08:42:21] Aki : i'm joining suna as well
[08:42:38] Z : Ok, you can be one of my students
[08:42:45] Z : we have the same specs so that should work well
[08:42:57] Aki : sweet XD thanks

got permission now

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Aight, though you'll have to modify it because you're not inhuman as Z's character is.

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Background Information

History:

Childhood Arc:
Aki and his family held a normality to their lives during the first three years of his birth, living within village of kiri where his family was well known thanks to their blood line. Often it was mistake for them for one of the more noble branches of the clan due to them being scattered throughout the area. However they were like for the most part a black sheep of the family, often different and consider strange to the main public eye and looked away from if it was not important to asked something of them. They were still part of the family but just that if seemed like they weren’t there at all most of the time. This was not an issues with Aki and two parents, both of them men and one of them Aki’s father. They were Married and living together after Aki’s mother died giving birth to him and no one really paid much attention to it and Aki didn’t really find the difference when he went over from his house to another. The prospect of having a female and a male parent didn’t seem at all different from both of the roles being played by a man. In fact Aki felt must more at ease around everyone because of it, sure he was teased about it and sometimes pity against, especially during a moment in where Aki kissed one of his friend’s check and it was a guy. A nearby teacher ran up to the boy and brutal hit him several times before the other staff restrained the man. After which Aki never understood why it was so wrong to live the way he did with his beloved parents but there was no hatred towards anyone, only a clear vision of what he knew was right. From then on Aki knew for sure that he should never hide himself as a person and his sexuality was his own. Despite being told it was thanks to his upbringing or that it was a mental disease or some crap like that Aki embraced himself freely and found the confidence to become whatever he wished. That dream lead to him become a ninja like his late mother, a medical officer known to save the lives of those that dishearten her for her husband and despite the gifted powers of his blood Aki would work just as hard as everyone else, not wanting any kind of special treatment or to be looked down upon. As such he discussed it with his dad and father and which that give him a personal record utterly different from his actually birth, though a few pulled strings and other measures he was given an different identify and sent off away from all he knew into a allied village to train. This lead Aki at the age of 8 to suna where he arrived a little late to start off in the academy but quickly caught up to his right class age.

Academy Arc:
It was a gruelling start for Aki but it all evened out once he learned how to adapted to much of the changes from being treated from strangers now to people he trusted with his education. Much of the time he spent there was training, friends were already made and groups were formed at a much younger age so Aki was a bit of an outcaste, he talked to many people and considered them audience’s and play mates but not many as close friends. He was confident about himself but it was still awkward being from a different village with different jutsa’s taught to him and different ways of doings things. He got the hang of things at the age of 10 and from then on tried to work on his social skills a little more then his ninja training. Didn’t come easy at all, overly blunt with people that just met him, often trying too hard to become friends with people that only wanted nothing to do with him. And of course the love note here and there which Aki had no interesting in from the ladies, which at that age all took personal offence to. But a few setbacks and detentions he managed to find himself a close nit of friends that were just different, fun and friendly to him for him. They were really a smart bunch aside from Aki getting the highest grades out of the seven of them also a better ninjustus as well. Though a social laid back person that didn’t mind taking second in command and being ordered around. He of course focus on a lot of the book work but soon deeply went into focusing on his body as the age of puberty, changing all over and building mass like never before as well as getting tired of began picked on for being a wimp he trained long and hard to get physical stronger, he was always talented with chakra control and learned soon how to use it to his advantage. Graduation came to him at the age of 13, ranking 10th out of his age class Aki and his foster guardian was proud of him. Proudly wearing his head band on the top of his head tied under his hair.

Genin Arc:
Aki ranked as a genin now spends much of his time working on perfecting his own skills and talents being that of an outside village and improving everything that was taught to him. Much of his superior hesitation to put him in a squad just yet was the fact that his blood line over ice would be difficult to be evened out with the rest of their own genin that only mastered techniques of their own village. Though Aki knows that he will be call up upon like anyone else in his home and thus awaits for people to rely on him with his unusual powers and medical talents and Aki will be ready for when that happens.

Role-Play Sample:
Aki curled his eyes into a focus as the smoke from his attacks lifted and showed only the impacts of the surrounded area and less of the blood that he wanted, this man was not one he had seen before and now he was no longer even within aki’s frontal sights, the last sound that he was able to hear himself before the shock waves of the blast erupted in his ear was nothing but the crackling of water. However that was soon remedied as man appeared behind the Espada again and drew his blade to the neck area, this man happened to have a odd affinity for coming up behind the time traveler and which Aki was starting to feel a little uncomfortable how often its been happening as of late...but any case back onto his battle instincts and away from personal space complex, the Esapda was relived not to have his neck slit right then and there. Sou was quick to point out his intention of no longer holding anything against Aki once again, before actually showing the ranked second with yet another transformation that rose such a insane amount of spiritual pressure that Aki broke his sweat just being so close in proximity, it was strong before that Aki required a staggering amount of force to stand before and in front of the Vizand, now it was just outrages how much stronger it was growing. Of course this meant the ancient curse of the flower activated once again the moment sou was done with his power up to punish him for his advancement with countless petals of a painfully intend, trying to encircle him and cut him to shreds. Course while that was occurring Aki had sondio away right after getting up close and personal with his enemy and that suggestive whisper in the ear.

It was colder in the room, a little darker too from what he could tell from the light, the temperature just rapidly decreasing as the precipitation from Aki's face frozen into ice crystals that strange off his flash, a quite breath he could visible see and a eerie sound of his shaking from the lack of heat. Ice was the cause, the bitter enemy of all nature, plants and flowers that Aki ruled over. This would be rather troublesome, hell this was just plain unfair to fight against one with every type of advantage against him. But as a ranked solider, the Esapda had little choice to back down, it was his duty to fulfill and defeat this person or at the very least weaken him enough for the next should he fall. Sou soon was covered in his own power, swirling winds of ice that engulfed his body which Aki mimicked and unleashed his own power up. “Chilling flames that engulf the entire world, Pitch dark flower set into bloom!” he whispered to the fallen hollows as his body rose in a vortex of greenery, soon blooming red and violet as his whole body appearance changed to that of a humanoid flower, cherry flowing hair and a red and purple garb that rode down to his knee caps, the thorns of his tentacles now reaching past his feet that stood in mid air. Aki was at his best to fight this head on. First up was a spiraling sou himself that came on with some kind of shield that Aki tried to fire three rounds of bala at, only to notice that the shield deflected them all off and then the warrior coming in with a incoming blade, defense would be the best ideal now. Aki picked up his arm and waved it with the arrival of another technique, one that produced a large crystal in front of himself that solidify from solid Reitu and knocked back the incoming blade into a angle that sliced though Aki’s left forearm partially but still preventing a direct blow to him, Aki’s quenched in the blood but then shatter his frontal shield and threw its razor shards like daggers at sou’s body. From which then Esapda realized the pack of wolfs descended on his path. Frowning the boy prepared his whips and reading his thorn tentacles that glowed a ghastly violet.

“ Bring it on” he spooked as his rope like limbs lashed violently from his singular position, his thorns landing few blows on the ice pack which inflected a viral poison to them, weakened them all the further in terms of stats, one wolf came to a poor range and was utterly coiled into their thorny grasp before Aki threw the ice dogie away like a piece of meat. Each time a poisoned tentacle landed a single cut the Aki’s curse of rose caged and tried to damage those poor incarnations of ice. Aki’s was of course without flaws himself, catching the wrong end of their fangs as three times the side of his neck and the chest area on his body was torn and cut up that leaked out crimson juice but was still able to infected plenty of his own.

Sousuke was not far from backing down just yet, no this man then fired off several types of kido and using the strange mirrors of his powers to travel without falter and faster then the human eye could see. Of course this was a battle flied was one that Aki felt most at home with, most of his own powers derived from similar nature as a shinigmai’s kido so he had a common ground to fight with here. Inhaling and slowly pushing his chest up Aki paused, glowing in the color of his the supernatural force which soon manifested into a massive gale of black rose petals that swirled in a countless swarm of beauty and magic all within a mile radius of the Espada, the kido attacks being lessen in the level of power that Aki’s technique would soon all evaporate into a flurry of harmless rose petals rending them ineffective and negated for this round of their contest once caught in the winds of nature. Which Aki managed to avoid the mystical end of his foe’s attacks and devastating the Sousuke’s sword effect and breaking the static mirrors around him, further freeing the room of the accursed blizzard as it stopped with aki’s power. Even Sousuke’s clone, mask and sword powers would be turned off for this round if they were caught in this massive sealing/weakling effect. But Aki would not merely go in the defense, time was now clear for him to attack, after his gale subsided the Espada snapped his fingers and produced the same arrows of purple energy, this time however pointing them all across the room where some of his early hits weakened the structure of that building, which now grew worse as his powers over timed heightened the decay. Each arrow formed and hit the damaged spots which all crumbled from the added impact and started the chain of reactions. The internal structure which both fighters were in began to shake and break apart, leaving its massive stone weight falling in stone fragments all around them. It would not end there as Aki unleashed yet another explosion of graviton in front of the former shinigami before charging up the proceedings of his next attack, forming a solid orb of frozen time the 2nd fired off the massive of matter At Sou, at such speed would be difficult to evade but still possible and if it were to hit it would hit hard with physical might. Finally it was time to unleash the beast in a manner of speaking, Aki took in a heavily breath and like a dragon released a massive blast of pink fire that was embedded with explosive petals befitting the name of black rose flare at sou, a torrent of spiritual power towards the target. From which ended his first assault in such a form, soon though jumping back a greater distance and producing three orbs of acidity orbs in front of the lord of nature for later use along side his body producing a deadly scent of posies matter within a 12 meter radius of his blooming darkness.

And done

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Nice app work on the whole Aki. Keep up the good work

Quote :: Muscle Bulk/Chakra enhanced strength:
Aki's not only genetically 'enhanced' to be super strong from his mother's medical alterations and permanent; he has also gone through vigorous training to hone his strength. This muscular mass does make Aki much stronger then normal ninja of his magnitude, but it also makes him travel much slower. This doesn't effect his dexterity, only his movement speed. It is also thanks to his chakra control and exact timing of how to use it properly that makes Aki so much stronger physical.

Please state by what factor his strength is increased. I am a little amiss why you need this since you not a tai/wep users and medics can already increase the strength very dramatically in a Tsunade like fashion. Strength is really important as Ninjutsu user. Also increased chakra = poorer chakra control, not something a medic usually wants

Quote :: Chakra specialized
Aki is able to control his chakra with such talent that he is able to mold it and manifest his justu's using only one hand, allowing his other hand to defend or use a different justu at the same time with their strength still the same. however this only applies to ones of a single element, his ice jutsu's must still use both hands in order to use the water and wind elements. Aki is also much better at chakra energy based attacks then most.

Please remove. While I am not unhappy with it as a special characteristic I find it very unlikely a genin would possess the requisite skill to do as mentioned. Reapply for it when you eventually get a Jounin update and it may be allowed

Quote :: Suno- Fure-ku Sankaku [Snow Flake Sensation]
Rank: D
Element: Ice
Requirements: None.
Description: After forming a few handseals and concentrating chakra, the user spins around their axis once or twice inducing the water vapor in the atmosphere to freeze and turn into snow flakes. As a result, the user gets an aura of continuously regenerating snow that puzzles the opponent, or give the user charm and even allow the user to disappear out of sight if fast movement is performed. This jutsu would be only draining for a student to keep for a long while.

Add a post limit for how long it lasts

Quote :: Hyouton: Kowareyasui Koori [Ice Release: Fragile Ice]
Rank: D
Element: Ice
Requirements: Target standing on frozen surface of a water body.
Description: The user flashes through quick handseals and then places their palms on the frozen surface of a lake or a pond. Afterwards, the user manipulates the ice to melt most of it making it very fragile to stand on. As a result, any movement by the target or any slight impact to the ice will shatter it to pieces and cause whoever standing on it to sink into the frigid water.

Pond is fine for a d rank, a lake is not given the scale of what you need to do. Change the Jutsu to Rank: D-C and make it a D ranks for a pond and C rank for medium sized lakes or smaller

Quote :: Yuki no Te [Snow Hand]
Rank: C
Element: Ice
Requirements: Snow.
Description: The user's handseals for this jutsu allows him to use his chakra to form a hand from the surrounding white snow in front of him. The hand is quite large, perhaps as big as the user themselves, and it will imitate the user's dominant hand's movements by the inch. Also, this jutsu is quite draining to keep the hand formed and solid.

What precisely is the drain involved

Quote :: Name: Suiton: Rokujou [Water Release: Poseidon’s Anger]
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: After performing the set of handseals, all water sources nearby begin to ripple and progressively get worse until they begin making violent waves, vicious currents or both. This jutsu is not an attack as such but makes moving about in water (such as Suimen or Swimming) almost impossible because of the effects.

While it doesn’t seem powerful all water sources could be a lot of water and thus involved large scale manipulation. Up to C rank or scale it appropriately

Quote :: Suiton: Kihou [Water Release: Air Bubble]
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Requirements: None.
Description: After a single handseal is made, user can carry a bubble the size of his hand, meaning he can carry air for a gasper or himself. Which is used once the person breathes in on it, however, it leaves the hand unable to use handseals. Two bubbles can be carried if the user wises to it.

Increase to D rank

Quote :: Kirigakure no Jutsu [Hidden Mist Technique]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Requirements: None.
Description: A ninjutsu technique that covers the area surrounding the user completely in mist. Once used, there's practically no visibility within the area of this jutsu for both the user and their enemy. This is a perfect situation for someone who trains in the art of silent killing

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Please remove as it is a village (Kiri) secret technique

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Thank you for the complement ^_^

Quote :: Please state by what factor his strength is increased. I am a little amiss why you need this since you not a tai/wep users and medics can already increase the strength very dramatically in a Tsunade like fashion. Strength is really important as Ninjutsu user. Also increased chakra = poorer chakra control, not something a medic usually wants

Was just stating that he is stronger physical for his age like an alternating increase the number of slow twitch and fast fibres that forms his mass so he gains more mass from and the rest of his power comes from his chakra control. , not really sure where the increase chakra came in.

Quote :: Please remove. While I am not unhappy with it as a special characteristic I find it very unlikely a genin would possess the requisite skill to do as mentioned. Reapply for it when you eventually get a Jounin update and it may be allowed

Removed

Quote :: Add a post limit for how long it lasts

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Quote :: Pond is fine for a d rank, a lake is not given the scale of what you need to do. Change the Jutsu to Rank: D-C and make it a D ranks for a pond and C rank for medium sized lakes or smaller

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Quote :: What precisely is the drain involved

Chakra like, so it be the same as using a C rank tech each time i maintain the form

Quote :: While it doesn’t seem powerful all water sources could be a lot of water and thus involved large scale manipulation. Up to C rank or scale it appropriately

C ranked changed

Quote :: Increase to D rank

Done

Quote :: Please remove as it is a village (Kiri) secret technique

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