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Lue
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| Subject: Yuki, Luwaru [C-rank Nukenin] Tue 09 Aug 2011, 10:32 pm | |
| Yuki, LuwaruTHE INFO. Name: Luwaru Yuki Nickname: Lue Age: 13 Gender: Male Appearance: A well tended-to formal suit is worn by Luwaru, quite unfitting on him actually. His blazer is usually unbuttoned, revealing his silver vest, crimson tie and a white dress shirt. He also sports some black, worn-out dress shoes. Lue stands at 5'4 and he has messy and unkempt silver hair reaching down almost to his shoulders. His hair is dangling down in front of his face, almost abstracting his view and anyone else's view at his eyes. His skin is unusually pale and his hands are dug into his pockets more often than not. A barely visible crossed-out Konohagakure headband is seen hanging out of his back right pocket within his pants. Two crossing leather straps are on his body holding two giant shurikens on his back. A backpack is usually held in his hands. Personality: Luwaru appears aggressive and cocky to others. These others would describe him as a madman, speaking formally, yet brutally. Luwaru himself thinks he is the living relic of what everyone ought to be. When speaking about the villages, he usually implies things into his phrases, that there is no 'true' society. He speaks often about the demons of each village and their evil acts. Some people might even consider him to be a vigilante, trying to make the world right in his own unehtical methods. Although he keeps to himself most of the time, he likes to brag about himself and tease others often. He doesn't exactly react the same way people do. He would barely show emotions most times. All he really seems to want is to bring despair to people around him now. Clan: Yuki Nindō: "A basic annihilation of all authority, resurrecting a true society."
THE NINJA. Origin: Konohagakure Affiliation: N/A (Lone) Rank: C-rank Nukenin, former Konohagakure Genin Specialties: 1. Ninjutsu | 2. Taijutsu Elemental Affinities: Suiton (Water) | Fuuton (Wind) Combat Style: Quick, accurate and agile moves. He enjoys staying back in a battle and sending projectiles lazily. If enemies get within 10 meters of him, he would probably begin to use his ninjutsu, forming a gust of wind to push the enemy of away. He doesn't want anybody getting too close since he is still unreliable with taijutsu, but is willing to learn. Special Characteristics:
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Name: Chakra Capacity Name: Increased Chakra Capacity Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: Through extensive meditation and physical training the ninja's chakra capacity increases by 20CP.
Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
THE BACKGROUND. History: Born in Konohagakure to peddlers as his parents. His parents went on frequent travels between the Kirigakure and Konohagakure but had stopped when Luwaru was born. He attended a ninja academy where things were simple for him, he excelled in the class in most training sessions. His father personally trained him in his clan's justsu. Others considered him unique at that age, he was the only one with roots from the Mist village. The students heard stories of the duels held at the Mist village, all to the death. That's why they usually avoided him, leaving him alone for the most part. This is when Luwaru started to feel that he really isn't in the right place, that he just doesn't belong. At the academy's graduation ceremony, Luwaru was awarded his headband. The others celebrated with family on behalf of their 'honor', but Lue just shoved the headband into his pocket and moved on back home.
His squad was assembled and a Sensei was appointed to lead it. Lue couldn't even handle being commanded by Chuunin, let alone Jounin. He didn't seem much toaquiring the headband and becoming a Genin, he just thought it brought more work and new equipment. He thought of his Sensei as an abusive idiot with power. He believed he didn't need training and that it would come naturally to someone like him. When Lue decided to actually tell the Sensei what he thought of him, he was ordered to be beat down by his squad members. During the beating, he cried pleads of running from the village and settling in the wilderness. After the beating, his Sensei chuckled heartily at Lue's previous words and that was when Lue said he would never pledge his allegiance to Konohagakure. That same night, he ran from the village, taking clothing and Ryo from his parents, just enough buy a last meal at the local ramen shop.
Outside the village already, he continues on, instead climbing a tree to get a final and aerial view of the village he hopes never to see again. He turns back with a wide smirk, dimples appearing on his cheeks as he skips off towards the wilderness. Carrying only his Genin attire and equipment, and a backpack for his extra clothing, he decides to stop at a nearby tree, briefly thinking about what he has lost in his escape. He thinks only one thing, nothing... Roleplay Sample: Luwaru steps back, kicking up dirt with his foot as a tall and masculine figure appears in the shade of the trees. Lue brushes at his jaw momentarily before tossing his backpack aside to the trunk of the tree. He spreads his arms, looking the figure down. His blazer begins to spread and his sides are revealed, giving a glimpse of a pouch on Lue's waist. Lue reaches to it and tugs at it, pulling it off his side. He proceeds to open it, and the figure begins to walk closer. A visible bottle appears in the figure's hand, he holds it at his hip, sipping it occasionally. Lue reaches inside his pouch, gripping onto the kunai inside and pulling it out to hold it at his side. The man drunkily makes his way to the boy now, a cloak draped over him, and a wide grin on his face displaying his yellowed teeth. Lue frowns, obviously showing disgust to the man's look. The drunk belches loudly, chuckling after. Luwaru begins to twirl the kunai's handle around, reverting it into a reverse grip in his palm. The man pushes the cloak away from his side as well, revealing a shuriken pouch as he reaches inside it. Lue shakes his head briefly and extends his arm quickly, flinging the kunai upwards. The man keeps his hand inside the pouch, distracted by the projectile, he scurries back a few steps. Lue takes a couple of steps forwards, performing a series of hand signs. A gust of wind is blown towards the still aerial kunai, the wind changes the direction of the kunai, sending it downwards towards the drunkard with additional speed from the wind. The drunk's eyes widen, he turns back and begins to sprint away, only to have the kunai stop him in his path. He freezes, gasping silently to himself. The boy begins to walk towards the man's back, reaching back towards his pouch to withdraw two additional kunai. The man slowly glimpses back, shutting his eyes as he catches a glimpse of the kunai in the boy's hands. Lue proceeds to spin both kunai by their ends in his hands, stopping suddenly and attempting to impale one of the spikes into the man's back. The drunk gasps once more loudly before collapsing onto his knees and then eventually to faceplant the ground. Luwaru steps onto the man's back, using it as support as he grasps the kunai and pulls at it. The kunai comes out with a few tugs, blood visible on the tip. With a sigh, he crouches down next to the corpse and wipes the blood off on the man's clothes before pulling himself back up and wandering away.
THE ARSENAL. Weapons
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Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Academy Justu
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1
Code: Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1
Code: Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1
Code: Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1
Code: Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1
Code: Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4
Code: Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3
Code: Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
Suiton Ninjutsu
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Code: Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant. Chakra Cost: 8
Code: Name: Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This jutsu creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil. Chakra Cost: 5
Code: Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his/her gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well. Chakra Cost: 7
Code: Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state. Chakra Cost: 5
Code: Name: Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: A jutsu that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsu. Chakra Cost: 8
Code: Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby. Chakra Cost: 9
Code: Name: Water Release: Water Drowning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles. Chakra Cost: 5
Fuuton Ninjutsu
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Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame. Chakra Cost: 9
Code: Name: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: The user will generate a whirling vortex of wind which he or she can send snaking towards his or her target. This wind can be used to help cause an explosive blaze when used with certain fire and earth techniques. Chakra Cost: 8
Code: Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness. Chakra Cost: 5
Taijutsu
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Name: Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Dai Senkou - Leaf Great Light Rotation Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will spin his or her opponent away. This technique can certainly cause a head ache. Chakra Cost: 8
Yuki Clan Ninjutsu
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Name: Hyōton Enchou | Ice Dome Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Clan: Yuki Description: Hyōton Enchou is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. The user can quickly create an ice dome around their allies and themselves to act as a defense. It is strong enough to withstand the assault of many exploding tags at once, remaining almost undamaged. Chakra Cost: 6CP
Name: Hyōton Disuku | Ice Disk Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Clan: Yuki Description: Hyōton Disuku is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. This jutsu turns the moisture particles in the air into an ice disk. They can be hurled with tremendous force at a target and are hard to dodge because of their transparency. They can also be strung together to spy on areas. They can also be used defensively, creating highly durable shields or disks to stand on to hover in the air. Chakra Cost: 5CP
Name: Hyōton Tsubame Fubuki | Swallow Snow Storm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Hyōton (Ice Release) Clan: Yuki Description: yōton Tsubame Fubuki is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. This jutsu creates a cluster of ice needles in the shape of miniature swallows, which the user then throws at the opponent. These needles can change direction in midair and will maim the opponent with their sharp wings. Chakra Cost: 5CP
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| | | Cookie Monster
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| Subject: Re: Yuki, Luwaru [C-rank Nukenin] Tue 09 Aug 2011, 11:04 pm | |
| Hello Lue, before this can be accepted there are just a few things that need to be sorted out first. I've noticed that you have different surnames listed on your character application, so can you make it clear to what your name actually is please. Also if you're going to join the Yuki clan, then you need to make sure that you're including it in the 'Clan' section, along with a link to said clan. Lastly, please either include Weaponry in your Specialty and get rid of one of the others or get rid of the Giant Shuriken please. Members without weaponry should only be using assigned kits.
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| | | Lue
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| Subject: Re: Yuki, Luwaru [C-rank Nukenin] Tue 09 Aug 2011, 11:15 pm | |
| - Suijin wrote:
Hello Lue, before this can be accepted there are just a few things that need to be sorted out first. I've noticed that you have different surnames listed on your character application, so can you make it clear to what your name actually is please. Also if you're going to join the Yuki clan, then you need to make sure that you're including it in the 'Clan' section, along with a link to said clan. Lastly, please either include Weaponry in your Specialty and get rid of one of the others or get rid of the Giant Shuriken please. Members without weaponry should only be using assigned kits.
Sorry about that, I renovated my application many times and during my last change to my name I guess forgot to edit the rest to fit it. I fixed everything, I didn't know about that not being allowed. |
| | | Cookie Monster
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| Subject: Re: Yuki, Luwaru [C-rank Nukenin] Tue 09 Aug 2011, 11:23 pm | |
| It all looks good now, thanks for making the edits.
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| Subject: Re: Yuki, Luwaru [C-rank Nukenin] Wed 10 Aug 2011, 3:41 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Yuki, Luwaru [C-rank Nukenin] Mon 09 Jan 2012, 3:21 am | |
| Archived.
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