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Ryozan
Age : 30 Posts : 21
| Subject: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Tue 19 Jul 2011, 11:57 pm | |
| Ama, Ryozan.THE INFO. Name: Ryozan Ama Nickname: Shadow Age: 14 Gender: male Appearance: Ryozan wears his hair down to his shoulders in a very shaggy and messy mannor. His eyes are constantly hid behind his hair when they are able to be seen they are blue almost saphire. He is about 5'10 in height and is slender yet muscular in build. He is often found wearing a black coat and long black pants or shorts that ct off at his knees. He wears chainmail under his coat he tends to keep his coat some what unzipped where one could see his chainmail.
Ryozans coat is completely black, it is also ripped up on the bottom of the jacket showing its age. He has a small scar over his right eye from what seems to be a cut from a bladed weapon possibly a kunai or shuriken. When it suits him he may comb over his hair and tie it back in a small ponytail but he perfers his hair being wild and unruly. He sometimes wears a white shirt under his coat and over his chainmail and puts on some dog tags with his name on them and lets them hang from his neck.
Personality: Ryozan is very tenacious, he loves to fight and cause trouble. His overconfidence in his own capabilities is his strength. When he finds someone whom is stronger he pushes himself to excell past them in order to acheive greater heights. He can be kind when it suits him but it doesnt happen very often, if he is nice to you he respects you. He has a twisted way of thinking he belives that letting an opponent live is worthless. He seems to think that if an opponent survives they will eventually cross your path again and this time they will finish you.
He usually is rather quiet unless angered which is easy to do. He is very cruel in his ways of battle. He uses dual swords passed down to him by his late father and he is very skilled in their use. He is called shadow because of his swordmanships great speed. His speed with his swords are hard to match. Not impossible but hard to match. He leaves no room for errors if he can help it, the downside to his way of fighting if you know the weakness to his dual sword style it is easy to counter.
He cares little about the affairs of Konohagakure he only cares about his own strength. He has an amazing amount of pride if he thinks you are insulting him he does not care who you are he attack with all of his power.
Clan: N/A Nindō: "Mercy is a hindrance"
THE NINJA. Origin: Konohagakure Affiliation: Konohagakure Rank: Genin Specialties: Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities: Katon (Fire), Fuuton (Wind) Combat Style: He perfers the indirect style of combat. Attacking from the shadows he tries to strike down his opponents or atleast wound them so as to not use much of his chakra incase he needs it. He uses Katon and Fuuton style jutsu. The Fuuton jutsu is used to increase the power of the Katon style jutsu. The wind from the Fuuton ninjutsu causes the flames from the Katon style jutsu to increase in size and in power.
When forced into close quaters combat he uses a special dual sword style taught by his fatgher. He trained since he was around six years old to master this special style. Now he uses it to take out all his opponents. He has not yet mastered it enough to combine Ninjutsu with the blades but it is enough to push back his opponents. He rarely uses Fuuton jutsu outside of increasing his flames but on occasion if the situation demands it he will. Special Characteristics:
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[spoiler]Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
THE BACKGROUND. History: In the beginning Ryozan was just as normal as all the other kids at the academy, until the day his father died. His father was everything to him he learned to battle with dual sword handed style under his father. He returned home to nothing and no one when he tried to find out where everybody was Ryozan was informed that his beloved father was taken out on a mission. It was heart breaking to him, some beleive he never truely got over that loss. Ryozan grew bitter and cold some people have even called him cruel. He concentrated on his training practicing the dual sword style of close combat his father handed down to him.
He went to the academy for his final test after about two years of study. He was regarded as extremely skilled and possibly a genious in the art of combat. He trained his speed especially to be able to do more damage with his blades. He trains once a day when not on a mission to perfect his speed and his sword strikes. He hopes that sooner or later he can train himself to be able to unleash ninjutsu through the blades of his swords but currently he is unable to do so. He was once found by some people from his class in the middle of his training session they were extremely surprised at the way he trains with heavy weights attached to his legs and tree climbing exercises to increase his overall speed. Now at days as a Genin he has become fast and strong due to his rigorous training and he is ready for a powerful opponent to show himself. Roleplay Sample:
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Ryu stood in the front of a large group of his fellow shinobi, and clan members. This was the day that he would watch the love of his life walk down the aisle to become husband and wife. Rin, despite her distaste for Melody, decided to be a brides maid. As the music started playing for the bride to walk down the aisle, Ryu was amazed when he saw Melody walk down the aisle, she was beautiful. She looks wonderful Ryu thought to himself as Melody stepped up beside him, taking her place for the wedding to begin. After saying their vows, the two were forever joined as husband and wife. When everything was said and done, Rin was the first of the Ukiku to come up to Ryu. "Well, it would seem that you're happy, and I'd like to give you my blessing as head of the clan," Ryu smiled a cocky grin and replied, "Thanks for keeping your opinions to your self today Rin, that really means something to me...at least you respect one of my wishes Rin quickly became angry and began yelling at Ryu. Though Ryu knew that he would regret doing what he was about to do, he turned and walked away from Rin while she was ranting. Leaving Rin standing in the church looking like a complete idiot. Ryu laughed to himself as he watched Rin. As soon as Rin noticed that they were walking away from them, she started running after them, and Ryu laughed aloud and started running away from her.
Though Rin was close to Ryu, she still gave him a hard time, and Ryu gave Rin an even harder time. Ryu was constantly making Rin mad when they were around eachother and playing jokes on her. Too bad Rin had animalistic senses and avoided his pranks most of the time. The two were constantly picking on each other, almost as if they were kids. until the day that he found out about Rin becoming a missing ninja. He felt sick to his stomach and he legs felt like wet noodles. He couldn't understand why she would leave the clan behind, leave her village behind. Then finally, he was told about her assault on the Hokage. He understood why she left, but not why she had attacked the Hokage. Nothing seemed right, Ryu sat in his room that night, staring out the window at the night sky thinking about what he had been told. Why, why would she attack him? he asked himself over and over, until he finally remembered what she had told him once before.
"I found love once, too bad that love didn't think that he could find the real me...everyone in the village knows him now, the Hokage, Mitsu was my love..." That's why...Hokage- sama must have found someone different, Rin was still holding on and couldn't take it...it must have broke her heart... he thought as she watch as shooting star fall in the sky.
THE ARSENAL. Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.
Academy Jutsu
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
Katon
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Name: Endan - Fireball Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: This technique is executed by the user gathering oil in their mouth which is created by chakra, spitting it out, and igniting it. This technique simply shoots a flame bullet at the enemy. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball. Chakra Cost: 8
Fuuton
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Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame. Chakra Cost: 9
Name: Kamaitachi - Cutting Whirlwind Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: This technique requires a fan or wind-inducing weapon. By freely manipulating the gale brought forth by her or his fan/wind-inducing weapon, the many air currents collide and create vacuums pockets. The person enveloped by this gale is assaulted by countless invisible blades, carving up their body. Also, the strong wind power will blow away all incoming projectile weapons and will even make the opponent unable to stay on their feet. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: The user will generate a whirling vortex of wind which he or she can send snaking towards his or her target. This wind can be used to help cause an explosive blaze when used with certain fire and earth techniques. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness. Chakra Cost: 5
Other Jutsu
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Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent. Chakra Cost: Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4) Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9)
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Kage Senbon no Jutsu - Shadow Senbon Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 1om) Element: N/A Description: This technique seems to be a variation of the Shadow Shuriken Technique, replacing shuriken with senbon. The user throws at the same time a senbon with a bell attached, and another one without it, so that the opponent will only react to the sound of the bell and won´t notice the other senbon. However, if the opponent recognises the trick behind it, this technique is easy to evade. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A Description: It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fūma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency. The trick is to somehow draw the enemy's attention towards the upper shuriken. Then, to deal with the path of the lower shuriken. If the enemy notices both shuriken, the technique ends up losing all of its efficiency. Chakra Cost: 3
Weaponry Name: Dual Dragon Blades Rank: C Type: Swords Appearance: Quantity: 2 Storage: The sheaths are at all times strapped to his back. Special Abilities: These swords have no specific ability except that they are customly made to be used by Ryozan only no one else can use these swords if they are to be taken then small spikes will come out of the hilt forcing the person to drop the blades. This happens because Ryozan has it pressure measured if someone grabs the swords too hard or too light the booby trap will go off. It took alot of training his grip to get the swords just right scars can be found on his hands where the booby trap was set off against him.
Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Last edited by Ryozan on Thu 21 Jul 2011, 8:43 pm; edited 5 times in total |
| | | Ryozan
Age : 30 Posts : 21
| Subject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 3:47 am | |
| Is there anything I need to edit? |
| | | Cookie Monster
Age : 29 Posts : 4301
| Subject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 4:15 am | |
| Hello Ryozan, your character is looking great so far but before it's acceptable there's just a couple of things that need tweaking.
Please include a given rank for your character, I've noticed you placed 'Konoha Genin' for affiliation so I'm assuming it was a small mistake you missed. You've only given nine techniques and you are in fact allowed to have fifteen to start with. I believe you cannot have your swords include infused chakra I'm afraid, as only Craftsmen are able to make such weapons and you do not match their requirements.
If you just get these fixed up, I'll be able to help with the approval, thanks. |
| | | Ryozan
Age : 30 Posts : 21
| Subject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 8:33 pm | |
| Ok edited, I beleive thats what you were looking for if I misunderstood or didnt edit something right please let me know. |
| | | Cookie Monster
Age : 29 Posts : 4301
| Subject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 8:39 pm | |
| All appears fine now apart from one small error, you've listed two Genjutsu techniques when you do not specialize in it. Please remove these and I'll be able to give my approval.
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| | | Ryozan
Age : 30 Posts : 21
| Subject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 8:43 pm | |
| Edited to your specifications if theres anything else let me know and ill fix it. |
| | | Cookie Monster
Age : 29 Posts : 4301
| Subject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Thu 21 Jul 2011, 8:50 pm | |
| You have thirteen out of fifteen techniques right now, however, after a talk in the chatbox I find it acceptable that you do not wish to fill up to the maximum amount of techniques, thus my approval is given.
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| | | John
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| Subject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Sat 23 Jul 2011, 2:06 am | |
| I don't see any mistakes, so 2/2 approved. Have fun. |
| | | Adam
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| Subject: Re: Ama, Ryozan [Konoha Genin] Sun 25 Sep 2011, 12:56 pm | |
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