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| Subject: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Sun 16 Oct 2011, 6:55 pm | |
| Kamaze , Tadao .THE INFO. Name:Kamaze, Tadao Nickname:Dreaded Ace Age:16 Gender:Male Appearance: Long silver hair, often tied back in a ponytail. Is scarred over and blind in his left eye. Has a very slim and athletic physique. Tadao, mostly likes to wear his headband on his neak, recalling his former village. Even thought he is non-associated with any village at the moment.He wears tattered clothing usually, to give a sort of dreadfull bad look. Underneath the tattered clothing would be a long sleeve skin tight shirt. But he does like to wear non-tattered clothing to. His favorite thing to wear, is battle armor. He loves armor. Whenever he's not wearing long sleeves hes wearing his bandages wrapped around his arms. His forearms are pretty banged up scars and sorts all over them. He also wears a belt, with a holster attached and a couple compartments. Sometimes he wears black gloves made of leather, that have alot of grip on them.
Everyday Outfit(s): Looks like he has slept rough (which is often the case) and near always wears his torn and rough white coat atop scraps of clothing and armor he‘s scavenged. His arms are heavily bandaged and bare beneath them many still fresh cuts as he uses his own blood for many jutsu’s. A very rare headvisor with the (Insert Name here ) symbol hangs around his neck(The symbol means something very secure and passionate, which is why I will not address exactly what it means..to be revealed in ic.]
Personality: Has an air of mystery about him, is mostly serious, aloof and seemingly detached, appearing cold and emotionless to others, but has a quiet childlike curiosity and a desire to know how things work and see sights for himself. He is very distrustful of people. Privately he is tortured mentally by his sadistic burdens and a dark sickness that has been slowly killing him since he made the Deal. He likes to spread fear in peoples eyes mostly. Just so that once his presence is felt, they will show respect. Because though his years he had learned that civilians just don't approach people they fear, and disrespect them.
An aggressive person for sure, he wants to get what he wants now. He demands it, but sometimes if he has that much respect for the person, he'll ask nicely. Only then if he doesn't does he either attack or let them be. But likely to attack. He is also great at keeping his emotions bundled up inside of him. He doesn't let them out. Only on rare occasions do you see him burst. All and all he can be rather nice to you, if you play your cards right... Good Habit(s): Disciplined, patient, entirely self sufficient, honest and respectful to innocents and kind-hearted people.
Bad Habit(s): Violent disdain toward authority, distrusts strangers, shinobi in particular. Smokes.
Like(s): Kindness, innocence, puzzles, rain and nature.
Dislike(s): Close-mindedness, authority and drunkards. Clan:Uzumaki Nindō: “To free my soul and see the groundwork for future generations of our Konogakure to live in Hell. Nothing else matters.”[
THE NINJA. Origin:Konohagakure Affiliation:None Rank:C- ranked Specialties:Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu. Elemental Affinities:Lightning, Earth Combat Style:
Strength(s): Well versed in relatively unknown forbidden jutsu’s, making him unpredictable in combat. Strategic mind, disciplined and patient, always has a pre-planned exit strategy up his sleeve.
Weakness(es): Is a loner so has no-one to serve as a distraction or protect him while performing his more powerful jutsu’s, which require time to prepare. If he has planned for a fight he is extremely deadly but if he is surprise attacked and not given time to perform jutsu’s he is limited to his Taijutsu which is fair weak compared to a Jounin ranked ninja.
Special Characteristics:Chakra Based
THE BACKGROUND. History:
Beginnings
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[Note: Born with blindness in his left eye.]Kamaze, Tadao ..The Dreaded Ace....lived and born in Konohagakure all of his life. His mother was raped, thus brought the coming of him into the world once she was pregnent. He was a mistake he never forgot that, once he was told so as a young man. During his childhood, he was raised rather fair. He ate well, was housed and was loved and cared for by his mom. For his father he would never meet. In his childhood he looked up to the likes of shinobi and wanted to be just like them someday. He wanted his chance, he wanted a shot at fame and glory Just like every child, they dream to be something bigger than they are. But not knowing the dangers of being in such a position or the responsiblities.Tadao, was a ordinary child. A child, ever so foolish, of how cruel the world can be. His mother, always tried to teach her child to be respectful. As he grew older, that became more apprent, and he developed a sense of Respect for all the elders and adults. Soon it came the time to enroll in the academy. He was excited and so was his mother as she signed him up and he was enlisted to go the next morning. That morning he ate a good breakfast, and went out to the academy. He sat in the desks, and looked at all the kids around him who where all learning the same thing. He acceled as a student. He was a overachiver. He always strived for more...Perfect, wasn't enough. He learned things like 'Clone Jutsu' at a accelerated pace. The flow of chakra came easy for him, as he had always felt some sort of sensation serging though him, even at an early age. He wasn't as good at taijutsu, and often would get beat, at the dojo. But he rallyed and pulled though it, and kept trying. A try hard....Soon his academy years ended, and he would soon be walking across the stage as Valavictorian of his class. His mother was proud of him. But that meant he had to make a speech, and he hated speeches. He had now became a genin, and was assigned a squad.
Deal - Spoiler:
"There was noway for him to know, it would end like this...only if we could see into the future?" Being a genin brought pride upond him, he was finally a ranked shinobi in the village and respected amongst the likes of his kind 'Genin'.Though he was still in some sense the 'Freshmen' of his group, he still felt high like he could do anything. Going on missions and making some cash from it, working for villagers. Him and his mother lived pretty good. Seeing as Tadao brought her dinner, usually Ramen, their favorite. To the house after he where done working. He had also learnt, many techniques from his Master. He respected his Sensei so much, that he called him Master, not sensei, but Master. The sensei was wise, and would teach his pupil anything they wanted to know. His favorite technique he learned from him though will remain to be the Body flicker technique. One evening he was coming home and stopped to get ramen as usual at the vender. As he arrived him, he dropped the bowl in place. He hesitated, and in about 20 seconds he started to sprint into the house. The shocking sight was true. His mother was dead. The man behind it gone. Trails of blood everywhere on the walls and everywhere. Tadao let out a screem and started to cry. He was angry. He cryed everything out, wasn't seen with his sensei for the next couple weeks. He eventually grew emotionless. But varnuvable to feelings about his mom. Than the true culprit revealed himself. A demon, one with horns. He entered Tadao's head was he was asleep. The demon stood behind a gate, holding his mother clintched in his teeth. Tadao screemed and tried to cut the games down with no avail he stopped and stared at the beast. The beast said something "Leave..this village. Leave it all behind, only then will you be closer to the one you lost. Then we will make a deal. For your mother." with that he woke up and got out of bed grabbing everything he could he left the village in a hurry. Never to be seen again by Konoha. His Sensei sent a search party to look for him, but never found him. Out in the woods, the demon showed his true form. A hidious beast with large nostrols and horns."Your mother is safe. But I want one thing done, if you want his back. I want Konohagakure destoryed!" Tadao replied with " Never!" the demon smirked as from the ground came his mother and sculled "Help me!" Tadao felt bad. The demon, then started ripping her apart limb by limb right in front of him, in the most cruel way the blood getting all over him . "Now will you do what I said?" Tadao clinched his teeth "Yes, I will...as long as my mother is brought back to life." the demon dissappeared and Tadao lived out in the wilderness for the next couple years training.
Tourist
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Over the next couple years, he grew to his current state. He had such hatred built up inside of him. But he wanted to see more of the world. So over the course of the years he went to Waterfall, Sunagakure, Kumogakure, Otogakure, and Yukigakure. By going to those places he was tought, many things by many people there. Eventually he grew a reputation for doing sinister things, He'd killed some people, he went to some bars, and burnt them to the ground, he grew a reputation so he'd me more known as a bad person. Soon Konohagakure put out a warrant for his arrest, which he faked, and escaped and got the money. But what he wanted to do remained somewhat a secret, some knew of it, and hushed their mouths if they knew what he was going to do. They where afraid of him he was a sinister criminal who cared for others. But at the same time didn't. But all the people he had killed, he respected them. From books and libraries located in the villages he has read many things. Such as about Bijuu's and basic medical remedies. He enjoyed learning about the wars..and how they where caused. He loved learning.[/b]
Roleplay Sample:- Spoiler:
Ace a very witting fellow grew rather bored , most of his documentations and paper work where already finished . He had yet to complete his latest project Labeled "Let War Begin " in his journal . The book of a great ninja , recorded events ever since Ace's birth . Ace decided that he would now put forth the effort to make his village stronger . The Up coming chuunin exams is what he looked upond , he decided to assemble all of his Genin in order to train them at once . He grew rather tired of the lack of events around the world daily. Tough he loved war , he felt as if it is not the time to start war because his Economy was flourishing . Also the Citizen's moral and faith in the new Kazekage where becoming indefinant. Ace resided to think that during this time , he should take it and try to become allies with neighboring states. He where in a rather good mood . He came down from his Kage Mansion and into a traning dojo , where he would wait patiently for his students. But while waiting he took the time to Spar , taijutsu only with one of his jounin. The Kazekage would punch and kick him usually overpowering the jounin in every way , shape , and form. The Kazekage was rather skilled in Taijutsu , but that wasn't his strong point.His strong point was Ninjutsu , The ablity to use chakra to do stuff that he normally couldn't. Ace hadn't even took a hit he would just repeatitly over power the jounin , Ace smirked "You need to get stronger..Thats our only chance , I cant risk having weak ninja running about thinking that they are needed. I wil easilly dispose of the week if I have to. So , im deranking you to Chuunin. Enjoy Because you whon't be jounin anytime soon until you become stronger." Ace turned his back ,some people around him thought he was being kinda harsh . Ace decided to go change his cloths to his battle gear , withen moments he went back to his mansion and got a new set of cloths . Wearing A Anbu Black Ops mask , and A Jounin Vest . With a symbol that represented Kage on the back of it. His Long flowing hair going down to about the center of his back . He was rather happy and quickly went back to the dojo as he awaited his students. He drew bored once again , The area had a few training log's , some targets for target practice . A medical booth for any major wounds , and it also had a pool for water based jutsu. The Facility also had some grassy plains for Anything , to hang out , train , spar , ect. Ace would sit down in a chair and order some Ramen from the counter . The Person noticing it was the kage got a quick order of Vegetable Ramem cooked up nice and hot. Ace grabbed a fork , and dove it into his bowl . When in twirled the noodles up on his fork then quickly eating them . He repeated the process till it was all gone then placed the dish on the counter.
Alright , ive grew tired of waiting . When are they coming ? Are they coming at all? Or do I have to go kill some genin for them to notice?Or better yet murder their families. Well , im rather impaitent so if they dont hurry up I will leave. He thought to himself while he where sitting . He was bored yet again , nothing for him to do but sit and watch. Every now and then he would see a jounin ranked ninja fight in front of them to prove their worth , and not one of them impressed him. He knew that ninja these days wheren't being trained like they used to. With no mercy , but now the ninja world has to much Sympathy . You have to worry about people getting killed or what not , Hell you even have to worry about the elite ninja getting killed . But their was just to much acceptance and Smiling , and Laughter , and not enough blood , gore and violance . Ace's smirk quickly vanished as he looked out at the people before him rather dissappointed. Rather angry that his current ninja sucked . Now he had to look forward to strangthining them . Though Sunagakure has some of the best Millitary forces in the world . His regualar ninja sucked . He woud have to work on improving that in the near future . But he musn't forget the task at hand , to prepare these Genin for the time of their life. To make sure that a Sunagakure Team wins the Chuunin exams , by a land slide . Enough to give him bragging rights for training them. The reason the Kazekage would train genin is because , he really didn't have much else to do in his busy schedule. He had completed his paperwork , His worries has been illuminated. He had very little todo. So thisis why he had decided to do the task at hand. He needed to make his ninja stronger ,and to guarntee that he would have to Make sure that every ninja that came out of Sunagakure have natrual talent. Then Ace had thought , he had completly forgot about the Past Kazekage , the guy who had put Sunagakure into this situation. Being so lazy and not helping the village at all. What was his name ? Amechi or something? He remembered his fast paced death , the way he died was rather quick. But it would seem since then Sunagakure has adjusted. Ace pulled out his journal and a black ink pen , he began to write about his thoughts and his life thus far , most of it was prior knowlage. He had all kinds of Documentations in the book . Some contained the secrets for Hidden Jutsu that only he knew. Clan secerts, Family Secrets , all kinds . Thats why he never let anyone get hold of his book. A biography about his life. He put it away and noticed that no one had showed up yet and got up from his seat and stood their waiting.
THE ARSENAL. Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.
Jutsus - Spoiler:
Canon Element: Lightning Name: Kangekiha - Inspiration Wave Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: The user will first create a protective wall of water (must be done with a water technique, it is not included with just this technique). They will then form the needed hand seal and emit a bolt of electricity into the water which will increase its defensive effectiveness and stun any targets who attempt to pass through. Chakra Cost: 6 Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20) Fuuinjutsu:Clan and Nonclan Name: Shikoku Fuuin - Finger Engraving Seal Rank: C Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user concentrates chakra into their finger and using the heat from that can apply writing on whatever they want. This allows them to write on the skin of animals, iron plates, or a wide range of things. Must be delicate with chakra control when using this technique. If used on flesh; will scar. Chakra Cost: 6 - Quote :
- Name: Chakura Kusari | Chakra Chains
Rank: C-S Type: Blloodline Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Description: Chakura Kusari is a technique used by members of the Uzumaki Clan. The clan member using their 'special chakra' can release indestructible chakra chains from their palms which they can freely control with their hand gestures. These blue angelic cords are very versatile being capable of binding, throwing, whipping, grappling and performing various other maneuvers the user may see fit. The number of chains an Uzumaki can product is in proportion to their skill. Since the chains are essentially a more disciplined form of the user's chakra, they do not drain chakra as a result. A C-Ranked Uzumaki is able to create three chains, B-Ranked six chains and A/S-Ranked Uzumaki is able create ten chakra chains. Chakra Cost: N/A Uzumaki's Clan's Fūinjutsu [quote] Name: Shin no Fūin | Truth Seal Rank: D Type: Fūinjutsu Range: - Description: Shin no Fūin is a technique used by members of the Uzumaki clan. This technique requires the user to have chakra chains released for it utilizes their ability to summon seals upon contact. The user commands their chakra chains to touch their target, for when that happens a seal will be instantly placed upon their body. This seal appears on the targets tongue where it stays for its duration. Anyone on bears this seal will speak only the truth and answer any question asked to them. Thus this technique is an advanced form of interrogation. Chakra Cost: 4CP Name: Tenketsu Obarodo no Fūin: Chakra Point Overload Seal Rank: C Type: Fūinjutsu Range: - Description: Tenketsu Obarodo no Fūinl is a technique used by members of the Uzumaki Clan. This technique requires the user to have chakra chains released for it utilizes their ability to summon seals upon contact. The user commands their chakra chains to touch their target, for when that happens a seal will be instantly placed upon their body. This seal over drives the users tenketsu point with excessive amounts of their own chakra. As a result, any technique the target performs will drain twice as much chakra as it normally would. Like all fuinjutsu, the user must sacrifice chakra to keep the seal active. Chakra Cost: 7CP (Additional 3CP Per Post) Earth Name: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground. Chakra Cost: 5 Code: Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it. Chakra Cost: 9 Name: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized. Chakra Cost: 4 Non-Elemental Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1 Code: Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1 Code: Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1 Code: Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 Code: Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1 Code: Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4 Code: Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3 Code: Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3 Body Flicker Technique.
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| | | Emperor of Rock
Age : 32 Posts : 869
| Subject: Re: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Mon 17 Oct 2011, 12:12 am | |
| First of all fix all your coding. Not everything needs to be bold. Also remove the color from the usual text and leave it black. You can color the title and sub titles, just don't make it yellow, it's hard to see.
You can have only 2 specialties, and since you're an Uzumaki you can have Fuuinjutsu and one more. Also choose one special characteristic from the Special Characteristic topic. Oh, almost forgot. You can't be a B rank (Chunnin) without permission from an admin. So change to genin and remove every B rank jutsu. |
| | | Ace2
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| Subject: Re: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Mon 17 Oct 2011, 12:44 am | |
| fixed. |
| | | Ashin
Age : 30 Posts : 356
| Subject: Re: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Mon 17 Oct 2011, 3:06 am | |
| Part of your application is still bolded, please fix that. Your personality should be about two paragraphs in length as well. Also, for the sake of those who might be reading this in the future, please spoiler both your history and your RP sample. Once those things are done you should be ready for approval. |
| | | Ace2
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| Subject: Re: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Mon 17 Oct 2011, 4:36 am | |
| Bump. |
| | | Chris
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| Subject: Re: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Mon 17 Oct 2011, 7:07 pm | |
| The coding on the Jutsu bothers me so please fix that. Sometimes it seems you have tried to quote certain techniques and from time, there are bits and pieces out of place. Also please put Jutsu in to visible, reasonable categories, not all of them packed together like that.
Secondly, please look through the first half of your Application and fix all the space issues eg. 'Name:Kamaze, Tadao' needs a space between the Name and the category. |
| | | Ace2
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| Subject: Re: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Wed 26 Oct 2011, 2:46 am | |
| bump. |
| | | Ashin
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| Subject: Re: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Wed 26 Oct 2011, 3:05 am | |
| Approval 1/2 |
| | | Ace2
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| Subject: Re: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Wed 02 Nov 2011, 4:26 am | |
| What is that suppose to mean? |
| | | Emperor of Rock
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| Subject: Re: Kamaze, Tadao [Done.] Wed 02 Nov 2011, 10:11 am | |
| Approved 2/2 |
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