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| ![Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Yagura](https://2img.net/h/4.bp.blogspot.com/-Zmi1iKO_Aqg/TvBGQwecaMI/AAAAAAAABYY/vtyM7T5zqCU/s1600/Yagura.png) Ichizoku, RikimaruTHE INFO.
Name:Ichizoku, Rikimaru
Nickname:The Animal, Demon of the hidden Leaf, Lord of Ice
Age:15
Gender:Male
Appearance:Rikimaru is a Teenage male with a young, child-like face and body structure, a head of messy, light-grey hair, pink pupiless eyes and what seems to be a stitch-like scar running from under his left eye, all the way down his cheek. He is small in stature and wears a grey, sleeveless shirt with a Konohagakure forehead protector attached to the front, short-sleeved mesh armour over which he also wears a green poncho along with a turquoise sash around his waist, paired with a green apron over his pants. He wears a pair of brown boots, and on his back he carries a very large sword.
Despite his small stature Rikimaru has large, strong arms. They are very muscular just like his legs. This allows him to wield his very large sword that is attached to his back with relative ease. Despite the stitch-like scar running down his face his skin is very smooth and is spotless. He is rather pale and has Jagged teeth.
Forehead Protector:Stitched onto his shirt.
Personality:Rikimaru is emotionally withdrawn, silent and is consumed by a voice is his head. Obviously Rikimaru is schizophrenic. He finds pleasure, and eventually a reason to live, in annihilating the shinobi around him - and, by extension, anyone who threatened his existence. Rikimaru's lust for blood is great. Rikimaru's insomnia, forced upon him by the fear that the voice in his head would kill him should he fall asleep only furthered this emotional instability and desire to kill. Rikimaru is a sociopath who believes that fighting for something is pointless, and the only reasons to fight are to survive and to show who is stronger and in his opinions who deserves to die.
Rikimaru is a very aggressive person. He is also reckless, often jumping into fights for no actual reason and simply because he can and he believes he can beat anyone. This arrogance is a key part of his personality as it is the reason for his reckless aggression. Rikimaru is obviously also cold and cruel, killing in cold blood and torturing his victims by his method of kill. Blood-loss. He is also ambitious, believing he can become the kage of Konoha if he becomes strong enough and at the expense of every shinobi's life who stood in his path.
Rikimaru's reputation for cruelty and ruthlessness began at the age of 5 when he was entered into the Konoha academy, he slaughtered every single person in the academy proctors included and allowed to all bleed to death as he merely laughed at their screams and suffering. This earned him the name 'Demon of the Hidden Leaf'.
Rikimaru is a very animalistic person. Mainly due to the fact that the voice in his head is very animalistic and often tells him to 'release the beast'. Whenever Rikimaru gives in his strikes become much less standard and he just starts relentlessly and mercilessly slashing to kill. In this state of mind Rikimaru kills anything in site, animals and shinobi, friend or foe.
Clan:Yuki
Nindō:
"Fear me, or I'll rip you to shreds."
"You're Pathetic."
"Feel my blade"
THE NINJA.
Origin:Kirigakure
Affiliation:Konohagakure no Sato
Rank:Genin
Specialties:
Main:Ninjutsu
Secondary:Weaponry: Kenjutsu & Polearms
Elemental Affinities:
Main:Suiton
Secondary:Fuuton
TiertaryHyoton
Combat Style:
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The way Rikimaru wields his swords is very different to most shinobi. He wields them in a rather lazy manner and acts as if he cannot even hold his sword. He will swing and just allow it to drop, giving it more force than any swing could give it. If need be, he can however wield his swords to great effect, with fluid movements and swift strike cutting his foes open several hundred times, this is prefered method of killing, blood loss, Rikimaru is a very sick genin and does not mind.
He wields his polearms at range mainly, choosing to throw them and only wield them if they approach, in this way he can keep them around 5 metres away from him where they cannot reach and where he can slash them to shreds. He is a very skilled weaponry user favouring them over his jutsu.
Despite favouring his weapons he does use his jutsu, they are powerful and are only used at long range where his weapons cannot reach. His clan jutsu are used least so that he does not reveal his secret abilities, the ice element. He does this so that should his opponent live his opponent is still clueless for their second battle.
Special Characteristics:- Spoiler:
Name: Improved Speed
Rank: C
Type: Physical Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
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| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Sun 22 Jul 2012, 2:02 am | |
| THE BACKGROUND.
History:
The Birth of a Demon
Rikimaru was born at a very dangerous time. A civil war had just finished in the village of Konoha and their was still bad taste and hatred towards the clans. It was rainy, still many dark clouds filled the sky of the village. Thunder and lightning could be heard throughout the village, it was an odd day. Weather was never normally this bad in Konoha it was almost always sunny and bright in the middle of the day, yet on this day it was very dark and the weather was atrocious. There haden't been a birth in the village for a while now due to the war and Rikimaru was the only person to have been born for at least 6 months.
Rikimaru's mother was a good woman, she did her work around the house and made sure that everything worked as it should, she was the perfect house wife. Rikimaru's father was a rich person and had found a nice bit of luck in finding his mother. His father didn't like that she did the work and wanted to hire someone to do it for them but she was adamant that she should do it. However due to her falling pregnant she did give in to hiring someone for the duration.
On this day, the 10th October the maid had the day off. Rikimaru was due to be born on this day and his mother was expecting. The doctors came around to the house and prepared for the birth at home. The house was very clean and their was no worry of the mother getting ill so no one objected. Rikimaru's mother laid in bed, holding the hand of her husband as the medical ninja prepared.
It was over in an instant, Rikimaru shot out. BOOM! Thunder had just struck roughly a mile away, yet Rikimaru did not cry. They believed he was dead until the reflex tests. He was not dead and was alive and good, just silent. As the doctor passed him to his mother a purple chakra cloak eminated form Rikimaru and formed a demon head. This was very baffling and everyone dismissed it, nothing was said as they all thought they were seeing things.
The Making of a Killer Rikimaru started training at the age of 2. He was a quick learner and already had a very good body. At the age of 3 he was very fast, agile and strong. Being able to utilize the academy jutsu already and already being able to channel his chakra through the water and wind, even ice - his hidden ability, or kekkei genkai. At the age of 4 He was progressing rapidly. Training day in and day out tiring himself out after several hours of training each day. He was definitely faster and stronger than everyone his age. Rikimaru's parents thought he was ready for the academy however personality wise he was seen as unstable.
From birth to the age of 4 and a half Rikimaru was very, very silent. He did not share his thought nor did he ever speak. Only when spoken to did he ever say anything and his answers were often short and to the point. Psychologically he was thought to be a little behind, as a result they held off on the academy saying they would give it a go next year.
No one could tell what he was thinking or if he was having troubles. His mental state couldn't be checked unless he spoke to a specialist and that was unlikely as he never spoke and putting someone at that age in that situation was unorthodox and unheard of. Unfortunately for his family it was believed he had developed schizophrenia, this meant he heard voices in his head which told him to do things and communicated with him, or at least tried to. This is because he randomly flew into fits of rage and trashed anything and everything around him.
It was obvious something was wrong. Especially when he came home with several rabbits he had killed all drained of blood, by his work they had bled to death. Rikimaru seemed so happy with himself. When asked why he said the voice in his head told him to, suspicion confirmed. Rikimaru had a sick voice in his head that told him to do things. It was clear that he was training under word of this 'voice' as he pushed so hard to become strong so that he could wreck everything.
For a suspected 3 years no this voice had gone to work on Rikimaru's emotional state. He was 5 and was an insomniac unable to sleep because he believed this voice would kill him and a sociopath saying the week should die, and they will suffer at his hands. His parents believed the academy would help him so at the age of 5, him being ready he was entered into the Academy. He had already learned the jutsu so this should be easy.
The Incident For six months Rikimaru had been attending classes at the academy and the genin exams had come around. Everyone in Rikimaru's class was around 8 years older than him and all were expecting to pass. The teachers were iffy with Rikimaru because he never did any work, nor did he pay attention. He just stared into space and talked to the voices in his head. He was an outsider, the other kids didn't like him. What happened at his birth with his chakra had eventually gone around.
Rikimaru was no feared. He was not liked due to his age and the fact he was seen as weird for speaking to himself. They also believed that he was different due to him being so young. Still, he was allowed to take the exams as all shinobi in the academy were entitled to. Rikimaru was last, he was last due to his age and the fact that they thought he should be given a bit more time to calm his nerves.
In the secluded area where he was to perform the jutsu he snapped. He was able to utilize one of his clan jutsu to shoot very sharp needles, so he did at the proctors. It happened all so quickly, they had no time to react. Before they knew it they had been cut and slashed at by so many of these needles within moments they were unconscious due to blood-loss.
Upon leaving the room the slaughter happened. Every single shinobi in that room was cut and slashed with kunai he had stolen from the proctors and by his ice needles. Within the space of ten minutes the room fell silent. The screams, the moaning and the crying all faded away, leaving nothing but an emptiness of sound.
Rikimaru stood in the centre of the room and laughed. Covered in blood, holding a kunai in his right hand. He laughed.
Parents came to pick up their children on time. Fifteen minutes after the time they should of been finished the parents marched through the halls and into the room. They all stood in absolute horror as they realized the floor could not be seen. it was only a pool of blood. Bodies were everywhere and Rikimaru just stood there in the middle of the room, his sharp jagged teeth showing and he was smiling. This five year old had just laid waste to the proctors and his class mates, and he stood, laughing.
Screams of horror filled the room and parents realized this boy had just wasted them and by the amount of blood they had all died due to a lack of blood, in pain and agony. At this point chakra surrounded him again in the form of a demon head, just like at his birth. Rikimaru had indeed passed and was a ninja but he wasn't going to be one for long. He was destined to go to a mental hospital.
Parents had branded him the 'Demon of the Hidden Leaf' and the shinobi world knew about this kid. The 5 year old that slayed two special Jounin, eight other students and stood in the room smiling and laughing. This demon head then formed around his body. When question why he did it, he simply said the "The voices told me to."
The Caged Animal
Rikimaru was sent to a Psychiatric hospital to be treated for his schizophrenia so that he no longer gives in to the voice, so that he could begin to sleep at night and become emotionally stable. This would hopefully turn this genius into a good member of society one that could possible lead konoha one day. The incident was forbidden to talk about. Anyone who did was put into jail.
For five years, at the age of ten the doctors finally thought they were getting somewhere. They believed they were breaking through Rikimaru and were actually getting into the mind of this ten year old. They hoped that soon he would be able to be released.
For once in his life Rikimaru was seen as happy. He was laughing and trying to make jokes with the doctors. He played and thought like a regular ten year old. He was going to be released but the Doctors thought they should wait a bit and do more work, this was because Rikimaru still had his outburst where he would just destroy everything. They were less frequent now and didn't happen for as long as they used to, but the fact they were there worried people.
Three more years later and Rikimaru finally seemed normal. The voices in his head seemed silenced and he seemed to interact and behave normally. He was released on the fourteenth of July aged 13. Rikimaru quickly settled in and his parents were happy. They tried to make up for the lost years and treated him very well giving him his favourite foods daily.
The Beast Reborn Aged fourteen and Rikimaru seemed to have a great life. He had been placed into a genin team and had already completed nine C-ranked mission and two D-ranked missions. He began training daily again and his outbursts were non-existent. He worked so hard and he was excelling. He was easily the best genin there and outshone even a few chuunin.
The chuunin exams were coming up and Rikimaru and his team, team 1, were preparing to go on a B-ranked mission along with another chuunin as a five man cell. On this mission they were expected to protect a client who would come under attack. Everything was going well for the team and they seemed confident they could do it with no casualties.
The mission was going well, they had defeated only two people who tried to attack their client and no one was injured. They were on the last stretch when and ambush hit them. Five ninja arrived who were atleast chuunin level with atleast one jounin level ninja. After ten minutes of fighting the team was tired except for the sensei, the chuunin was fine but wasn't considered a part of their team. One foe had already fallen. Another ten minutes, no casualties and two were down.
Suddenly, the ninja decided it was all or nothing. They launched an attack that went off almost flawlessly. The only problem was one of Rikimaru's team members took the death shot protecting the client. Rikimaru's best friend had just bit the dust. The ninja still were able to fight, and Rikimaru was pissed. He was sent into a rage. Sheer reckless aggression overcame him not even the jounin could stop him from acting.
The beast inside Rikimaru was back, and it was back with a vengeance after ten years of being silenced. Rikimaru raged and made the final three ninja bite the dust with as much agony as possible. They suffered immense amounts of pain, they even fell unconscious due to the pain before succumbing to the blood-loss. The other three members of his team were shocked.
His sensei realised this was the 'Demon of the Hidden Leaf' being reborn. He knew that Rikimaru was back to his old ways of being a sadistic, animistic sociopath, with a hunger for blood. Still, the mission was complete and they headed back. The sensei did not say how Rikimaru switched and that he may need more mental help he just ignored it and hoped it was just this once upon seeing a comrade die.
Rikimaru quickly became a monster again however. The voice returned and his want to inflict pain on everything was back. However, being older he was able to restrain his want to kill more so that he did not get sent back to the hospital. He could no longer sleep once again for the same fear of being killed by the voices.
Roleplay Sample:- Spoiler:
Klown was at his friends house for the night as he was having a sleep over with a few people his age, Klown hoped girls would be there so maybe he can finally get a girl friend but you never know. Zetsumei realized the time was nearly 6 o'clock and that it would be getting dark so he put on his light lavender, loose-fitting, long-sleeved, zip-up shirt, black pants cut off around mid-calf, bandages wrapped around his ankles, traditional shinobi sandals, and a purple, rope-like belt tied in an inverted bow around his waist, he put this on as it was light for training and fighting in. Klown swiftly left his friends apartment leaving a note saying gone to train be back at 21:15.
Klown knew exactly where the best spot for training was and he knew he had 3 hours of good long training to get through, Klown was at his calmest as he was about to do the thing he loves to do, train! Klown took a shortcut around the ramen shop to get to the park. No one should be in the part as it was dark so the conditions were perfect. Klown then started to listen and focus his mind to everything around him so he could be mentally and physically attuned for his training session. Klown started to close his eyes as he was on the outside of the park and focus his mind else where.
Klown could hear the whistle of the wind scrapping through the trees that would make some cringe for it was not a pleasant sound, however Zetsumei seemed to like it alot. He hear the birds tweet as they told there children to go sleep or eat other then that there was a bitter and eerie silence that was usually on horror films right before a character dies.
Zetsumei could feel the wind brush through his over gelled spiky hair and through the gaps in his fingers, it was soothing. He feld the warm yet cool wind whip his face softly. This was the kind of conditions Zetsumei wanted but hardly ever happened as it was usually boiling hot. Zetsumei continued to walk towards his destination in the perfect frame of mind he was in, he then opened his eyes.
Zetsumei saw the deep, crimson sky through the gaps in the trees as the number of trees grew as he went deeper into the park. The grass was a luscious green and obviously well looked after. The trees had every single leaf on them and were massive. Zetsumei liked the park the setting was beautiful and definitely had great targets to train with. Zetsumei swiftly grabbed for a kunai and threw it through the tree branches to kill an annoying bird, which he hit. He then turned to look natural as if it wasn't him and when he looked up he saw his chuunin exam buddy knock into a stronger looking shinobi and begin to fall.
Suddenly, Zetsumei began to taste this shinobis masses amount of chakra which made him rapidly turn from a slow walk to a sprint to see if Aaron was alright and if the other shinobi would bother him. As Klown was running he yelled "Akimaru!" he quickly arrived beside Akimaru and was relieved to hear the shinobi say sorry and didn't want to harm him, and at that instant Aaron was helped up by a hand from the ground and Akimaru was upright again. Klown then began to speak "Hey Akimaru, ain't seen seen you since the chuunin exams a while back how have you progressed?"
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| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Sun 22 Jul 2012, 2:02 am | |
| THE ARSENAL.
Jutsu
Academy Jutsu
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Genjutsu
Range: N/A
Medium: Optical
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others.
Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: N/A
Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread.
Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu.
Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed.
Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
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Yuki Clan Jutsu
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Name: Hyōton Enchou | Ice Dome
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Element: Hyōton (Ice Release)
Clan: Yuki
Description: Hyōton Enchou is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. The user can quickly create an ice dome around their allies and themselves to act as a defense. It is strong enough to withstand the assault of many exploding tags at once, remaining almost undamaged.
Chakra Cost: 6CP
Name: Hyōton Disuku | Ice Disk
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Hyōton (Ice Release)
Clan: Yuki
Description: Hyōton Disuku is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. This jutsu turns the moisture particles in the air into an ice disk. They can be hurled with tremendous force at a target and are hard to dodge because of their transparency. They can also be strung together to spy on areas. They can also be used defensively by being used as a shield to deflect attacks below C-rank and basic thrown weapons.
Chakra Cost: 5CP (per disk)
Name: Hyōton Tsubame Fubuki | Swallow Snow Storm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Hyōton (Ice Release)
Clan: Yuki
Description: yōton Tsubame Fubuki is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Yuki clan. This jutsu creates a cluster of ice needles in the shape of miniature swallows, which the user then throws at the opponent. These needles can change direction up to 3 times in midair and will maim the opponent with their sharp wings.
Chakra Cost: 5CP (per 3 needles)
Fuuton Jutsu
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Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: The user will generate a whirling vortex of wind which he or she can send snaking towards his or her target. This wind can be used to help cause an explosive blaze when used with certain fire and earth techniques.
Chakra Cost: 7 (2 per post)
Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.
Chakra Cost: 9
Suiton Jutsu
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Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant.
Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This jutsu creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his/her gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target, but none utilizing chakra. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel further than 10 meters from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: A jutsu that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsu of equal rank and below.
Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Suiben - Water Whip
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The ninja will create a whip of water which can strike and bind an opponent. The user can also funnel lightning chakra to shock anyone wrapped in it. Can only affect one target at a time.
Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a solid bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Chakra Cost: 9 (2 per post)
Name: Water Release: Water Drowning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles.
Chakra Cost: 5 (1 per post)
Name: Hiding in Mist Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Long (10+)
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This displacement technique is a speciality of the ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth,[2] then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Chakra Cost: 6
Items & Weapons
Items
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Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Name: Gourd
Rank: C
Type: Main -Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 1
Description: This is a varied item which the user can create being shaped and colored to their own preference. These items usually hang at the shinobi's back, and provide ample storage room for certain elements advantageous to the user that are otherwise unavailable to the area. From sand and water to much, much more, this accessories provides a wide variety of uses.
Name: Medium Scroll - on waist
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: -
Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a medium scroll will measure up to thirty centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching one metre.
Storage:Gourd
Name: Small Scroll
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: -
Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a small scroll will measure up to fifteen centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching fifty centimetres.
Storage:Spear
Weapons
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Name: Nodachi
Rank: C
Type: Primary/Melee
Quantity: 1
Description: Known as a 'Field sword', the Nodachi is a large sword which can be wielded with either one or two hands. It is basically a larger version of a katana. Compared to the katana, the Nodachi is more difficult to wield due to its size and weight, but - like any weapon - could be extremely deadly if the warrior wielding it was skilled. The length of the nodachi's hilt varied between twelve to thirteen inches (30 to 33 centimeters). Its cutting capability and range exceeded that of a katana, due to its weight and size. Nodachi's length can reach the 1.50 meters.
Name: Spear
Rank: D
Type: Main -Primary/Melee
Quantity: 1
Description: A spear is a pole weapon consisting of a shaft, usually of wood, with a pointed head. The head may be simply the sharpened end of the shaft itself, as is the case with bamboo spears, or it may be made of a more durable material fastened to the shaft.
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| | | | The Joker
Age : 27
Posts : 332
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 5:06 am | |
| FACE CLAIM.
Character Claim:Yagura
Source:Naruto
Image URL:http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-Zmi1iKO_Aqg/TvBGQwecaMI/AAAAAAAABYY/vtyM7T5zqCU/s1600/Yagura.png
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| | | | Kiseki
Posts : 1216
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 5:09 am | |
| | Um...I'm going to Deny this because you ripped off Zabuza's character completely. Fix this or it will be denied. Also Zabuza is far too old to be a 15 year old genin might wanna fix that. |
| | | | The Joker
Age : 27
Posts : 332
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 7:54 am | |
| | Edited, changed the appearance and the picture to that of a 14/15 year old Yagura. |
| | | | Keos
Age : 29
Posts : 1585
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 2:25 pm | |
| You surpass the 15 Jutsu limit for a Genin by one. Please remove one technique. |
| | | | The Joker
Age : 27
Posts : 332
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 4:27 pm | |
| | Edited. Removed great exploding current. |
| | | | Keos
Age : 29
Posts : 1585
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 5:05 pm | |
| Your Gear constists of: a Nodachi, placed on his back, a Spear sealed inside a Medium Scroll and a Gourd sealed in a medium scroll as well. I can see that you only possess one Small and one Medium Scroll. So to make things clear, instead of stating the storage next to the name, fill in the section named Storage in your scrolls, stating what is sealed within each one. Have the Gourd sealed in your Medium scroll, and the spear in the Small one. Sealing an item together with a weapon in the same scroll is not allowed. |
| | | | The Joker
Age : 27
Posts : 332
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 5:37 pm | |
| Okay, thats me trying to rush things cos I said to Adam i'd have this done quickly :p first char in like a year and a half XD
Edited |
| | | | Keos
Age : 29
Posts : 1585
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 6:09 pm | |
| Alright, one last thing. The Source of your Face Claim is Naruto, not Google. Edit that in and I can give you my approval. |
| | | | The Joker
Age : 27
Posts : 332
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 6:15 pm | |
| Done
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| | | | Keos
Age : 29
Posts : 1585
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 7:00 pm | |
|
Thank you for your work.
Approved 1/2
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| | | | The Joker
Age : 27
Posts : 332
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 7:00 pm | |
| | thank you |
| | | | Kiseki
Posts : 1216
| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Mon 23 Jul 2012, 7:44 pm | |
| Sorry about earlier man. Didn't mean to come off rude. Overall the app looks fine. Can't see anything else wrong with it.
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| | Subject: Re: Ichizoku, Rikimaru [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Nov 2012, 2:03 pm | |
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