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| Kaguya, Takumi
THE INFO.
Name: Kaguya, Takumi Nickname:—none-- Age: 22 Gender:Male Appearance:
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Much like many in his clan he is a well built person being very fit and in shape. He is rather muscular in a slim kind of way that give great detail to his muscle tone. Standing at a height of six feet five inches he is considered tall by most having long lanky arms with great stretch reach. He face is narrow with a petite nose resting between his light blue eyes. Common to other members of his clan he shares the mark of white hair and pale white skin symbolizing him to be a member of the Kaguya Clan. His outer wear is rather very simple consisting of black kimono that is open showing his chest and stomach area. At his waist is a rope that acts as a belt holding his clothing together as well as his ninja pouch. His Haori is long and loss stretching down to his feet and usually flutters when the wind blows, like the rest of his upper wear it is also sleeveless. He also wears to leather gloves that stretch two-thirds the way up his forearm and have their fingers cut off at the knuckles to make better use of certain jutstu. Strangely he has the numbers 69 tattooed onto his upper stomach for all to see. The meaning of these numbers are truly unknown, however it is considered that it may be a symbol that makes it easy to identify him as not many would host such a strange bodily feature. Bellow this said tattoo if a large scare that curves around his bellybutton. One the back of his Haori the kajin 無法者 can be noted (outlaw).
Personality:
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Kaguya, Takumi can be regarded to an anti-social outcast who’s only thrill in life is the heat of a battle. Being born of the Kaguya Clan Takumi is a ruthless killer and often seeks battle just to fulfill his everlasting need for the adrenaline rush he gets during the time of a fight. He cares not who his opponent is as long as he gets to engage in battle his lust for fighting is fulfilled. Often he will throw his own life away just to get this rush seeing every chance for battle as a honorable opportunity. Although, he has a lust for battle that is common to a heroin addict searching for that next fix he is not a cold hearted person. He would rather have a fight to the death, but he does not prey on the weak of body or mind. ,meaning he does not stoop so low as to kill children and people who have no talent as shinobi nor does he wish to fight an opponent who is scared to fight back. Truly he just wonders around in search of that perfect fight where his opponent shares the same values as he does in a fight to the death.
One may not be able to tell by a first glance, but Takumi is actually a man of value. He holds his moral believes to the highest standard following such things as death before dishonor, preying on the weak is no honor, if you are going to do something give it your best and then some, a person’s will is their greatest asset no matter in what form that will may be, never surrender never retreat, and the greatest honor to be achieved in one’s life is death on the battle field.
Takumi seems to show an encrazed stature about him in battle having an evil smile and laugh. He also seems to thrive off of pain noting it lets him know he is alive. To many he may seem to be mentally unstable, but that is just an opinion of the person. This state could be due to the idea of being able to fulfill what he lives for like how a person shows great emotions when accomplishing a giant task in life… it is just Takumi shows his emotions differently as to not lead to what he would consider weakness. He also always has an arrogant and rude being to himself using these acts to provoke fights. One could say he is an instigator that will do nearly anything to assure he will partake in battle. This is why he choice the life of a rogue it allows for him to fight anyone with no restrictions of a higher power.
The man does host a softer side usually showing respect and morning for the dead. He does not take any life for granted even though he is of a killer intent. After killing an opponent he usually tries to pay honor to their life in some way and give thanks for the opportunity to have faced them. One could say he is of complex emotions in his own way which may once again refer to him being mentally unstable in some way.
Although, he loves the heat of battle and can very easily be persuaded into a fight he is not an angry person. It actually takes quite a lot to rub him the wrong way as to cause him to feel anger or harsh feelings towards a person. His is clam even in his wild state of being. There seems to be one act that does push some button within him though as he dislikes those who prey on the weak or take advantage of the less fortunate. He could perhaps even be noted time from time aiding those who he sees as lower then himself showing once more he does have a kind heart somewhere within him.
Clan: Kaguya Clan Nindō: Take advantage of life's every little moment for it may be your last.
THE NINJA. Origin: Kirigakure Affiliation: –none-- Rank: C-rank Nukenin Specialties: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities: Suiton, Doton Combat Style:
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Straight forward, down and dirty, mono y mono, close combat is what he prefers taking advantage of his Clans special techniques and his own physical features. However, he will adjust to his opponent if needed finding it to be a hassle though. Takumi is just an in your face kind of guy. He mainly uses his speed to close in on an opponent a keep a high pace close range combat style as he uses the gift of his Clan's Special Skills. Ninjutsu is manly used when he is forced to retreat from close rang combat or when he is in need of something fresh and unsuspected in the fight. Special Characteristics:
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Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
THE BACKGROUND. History:
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The Beginning Kaguya, Takumi as the result of a forbidden marriage was brought into the world by a dishonored member of the Kaguya Clan and a Kirigakure Chuunin. The two forbidden lover’s marriage was keep a secret to the village out of fear to what would happen is the village knew the bloodline traits of the Kaguya were running through the village and thus so was the existence of Takumi himself. Sensing that their secrets may become discovered within the village Takumi’s parents fled to relocate themselves in a small rural town just off the outskirt of the Fire Nation. Of course these actions led to his mother becoming a Missing-Nin. As a baby Takumi resembled his Kaguya Bloodline sharing the same features as his father with a pale skin tone and solid white hair. However, he was never given the Clan’s markings on the forehead in hope the world would not relies he was of the bloodline. Child Hood Most of his early life was spent on the road or better put the run. His family never could find the luxury of settling down due to both his parents for the most part being wanted people. Therefore, even at a early age Takumi experienced battle to the fullest as his mother and father often had to fight their way through one place to another being tracked by the Hunter-Nin of Kiri and assassins from the Kaguya clan itself. It was during these times that young Takumi developed his love for fighting. It had become a way of life to him, the only way he knew, and feeding his Clan’s fabled killer instincts. His parents knew that the boy would live a life of constant battle and struggle and thus started to train him in the ways of the Shinobi at a very early age also attempting to teach him moral lessons in hope he would not fulfill his bloodline traits as a ruthless killer. Teenage Years Over the years of constant battle and his parents training he became adapt in the arts of taijutsu and ninjutsu. Being older now Takumi found himself usually fight on his parents behalf earning him a small place in the Bingo Books as a C-Ranked Missing-Nin. Although, he had never been a Shinobi of The Hidden Mist Village the idea of capturing a person on the loss with Takumi’s bloodline was very well one of the reasons he became hunted himself. As he grew his name become known little by little as a runaway to Kiri and mildly dangerous to the Shinobi World. It was during this period in his life Takumi lost his parents who were finally killed by those that had been tracking them for so many years. Takumi found himself all alone in the world for he had never known anything other than his beloved father and mother being by his side. Soon becoming lost in the world Takumi searched for a purpose in life finding no place he fitted into, he just did not relate to the rest of the world and missed the days of excitement he spent with his small family. Unlike his parents who were much more revered as criminals then he was Takumi did not get to enjoy the constant battling that had keep him entertained for so many years. Therefore, he set a new goal for himself if he was to live the life style he once did he would have to make his name known worldwide as a Rogue. Takumi set out to cause chaos bring disorder to the world so that it would reward him with once again the life style he yearned for. It seemed that fighting brought him back to the days spent with his parents giving him a sort of inner peace and he wanted to do nothing more than to die in battle much like they had done. 20+ Takumi has spent the last few years wondering from land to land in an attempt to spread his name throughout the Nations in hopes of one day becoming the most wanted man in all of history. He recently created codes of honors he follows during this path finding that his parents would not have wanted their son to be a ruthless killer. He seeks to fight and nothing more hoping that gaining a higher standard in the Bingo Books will grant him a high bounty and make him more wanted among the Nations leading to more fights for the wondering Nukenin.
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THE ARSENAL. Acadmeny Justu:
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: Equivalent to the cost of the opposing jutsu +2
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
Non-Elemental Ninjutsu:
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Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent. Chakra Cost: Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4) Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9) Costs the User: A (20) | Takes From Target: B (15) Costs the User: S (35) | Takes From Target: A (25)
Suiton:
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Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu- Hiding in Mist Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: All Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This displacement technique is a speciality of the ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth,[2] then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his/her gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This jutsu creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil. Chakra Cost: 5
Clan Jutsu:
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Name: Tsubaki no Mai | Dance of the Camellia Rank: D Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Clan: Kaguya Description: Tsubaki no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user performs this jutsu by modifying the humerus (upper arm bone) of either their right or left arm to create a short, hilt-less bone sword. Since they can increase and compress the density of their bones, they can make the sword harder than steel. The user then uses the sword to fight; their style uses quick cuts and thrusts to disable opponents quickly. They is extremely proficient with this sword and can, not only deflect shuriken, but also dispatch a large number of Shadow Clones with this technique. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru | Dance of the Clematis: Vine Rank: D Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Clan: Kaguya Description: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user can modify and pull out their own spinal column to use as a flexible chain staff, regrowing a new spine to replace the removed one. The protrusions on the vertebrae are modified to make them stronger and sharper. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Karamatsu no Mai | Dance of the Larch Rank: C Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Clan: Kaguya Description: Karamatsu no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user uses this jutsu to create a mass of razor-sharp bone spikes all over their body. These spines appear to be branches off their pre-existing skeletal structure rather than completely new bones. The user is even able to grow these bones at an extremely rapid rate so they can stab an opponent even as they are growing. They can even use them to block or trap an opponent's strikes. In addition to being an unwelcome surprise for opponents, it makes them basically untouchable at close range. If an opponent would start to get close to them, they would start to spin rapidly slashing the foe in multiple areas of their body. Chakra Cost: 6CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Teshi Sendan | Drilling Finger Bullets Rank: C Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Clan: Kaguya Description: Teshi Sendani is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. Hardened bones from the fingertips are shot at the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. A direct hit will excavate skin, flesh, and bone. Since the bones regenerate after release, this technique can be used in succession. Chakra Cost: 5CP
Weapons:
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Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Takumi [C-rank Nukenin] (Complete) Sat 31 Dec 2011, 4:36 pm | |
| Sorry for the wait on getting your app checked! ---
Please add more detail into your Appearance section.
Add a little more into Personality to deepen it a little.
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Other than that, things are looking good~ |
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Takumi [C-rank Nukenin] (Complete) Fri 06 Jan 2012, 9:13 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Takumi [C-rank Nukenin] (Complete) Sat 07 Jan 2012, 8:17 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Takumi [C-rank Nukenin] (Complete) Sat 07 Jan 2012, 10:06 pm | |
| Add a little bit more to your combat style. I would ask you to make it at least a paragraph (four sentences) in length. Then you can have my approval. |
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Takumi [C-rank Nukenin] (Complete) Sun 08 Jan 2012, 8:45 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Takumi [C-rank Nukenin] (Complete) Sun 08 Jan 2012, 2:38 pm | |
| You've only listed Suiton as one of your two elements, you're still able to include another element if you so wish. Assuming you do not wish to include a second element, then I see no other issue with this application and gains my approval. If you would like to include a second element, simply PM a Staff member and we'll be happy to edit one in for you.
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