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PostSubject: Corleone Sebastian Inuzuka IV Tue 07 Feb 2012, 11:04 pm

Inuzuka IV, Corleone Sebastian.


Name: Corleone Sebastian Inuzuka IV
Nickname: Sabure
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Corleone is a very healthy guy for his age. He has an impressive little build with a six-pack though it isn't that well defined. His legs and arms are slightly bigger in terms of thickness for someone his age showing the signs of his work ethic to get stronger. His hands are a little big for someone his age though it is only slightly and the palms are rough and firm from working so much. His feet however, a size 9 which is just under average, are very hard and a little rough from moving around and being on them so much. His calf muscle is very hard and solid, all in all giving this young boy a better than some men twice his age. He has several small cuts and scraps on his body, remnants of his childhood days and his hard training. He has a birthmark of the clan symbol on his arm which astounded many of his clan as he was the first and only to be born with such a distinct mark. His hair is neck length though Corleone keeps it in a wild unkempt manner. His hair color is a dark grey that looks almost black, though upon closer inspection one can see the gray color. He stands about 5'9 and weighs close to 155lbs, which includes his clothing, and his skin tone is slightly tanned , not so much that he is a light bronze but enough for some to see he spends some of his time outside. He has very relaxed garnet colored eyes, and very few smile or frown marks as he doesn't do much of either very often. His eyes are usually half closed giving people the impression he is tired, though this just how is eyes are naturally shaped.

Corleone dresses how he wants as he prefers his own style over anything else. Mostly he can be found wearing blue jean pants, some may even have designs on them. A black T-shirt particularly a plain one and the length of the shirt will always go past his waist line. Over this he will wear a blue jacket with the sleeves rolled up, the jacket itself is thin and is more closer to being a long sleeve button up shirt than a jacket. The collar of the jacket has fur on it that Sebastian would willing tell anyone is the fur from a wolf. Lastly his shoes always matches his undershirt which are black.

When on business he will always dress to impress as he prefers his black leather jacket with a length that goes past the waistline to just over the back area of the knee. On the back of the leather jacket it is split at the end making the tail of the jacket split in two so that moving around in it is easier. He wears his jacket over his all black formal button up shirt that he has tucked into his pants. He wears stripped suit pants that fit comfortably on his body to the point if needed he could fight in them. His shoes are leather matching the leather jacket. He wears a leather belt to make sure his pants doesn't sag. On occasion he will wear black leather gloves though its only on occasion. And he wears black paten leather dress shoes. He may also be prone to wear a hat though its not all the time.

Sabure is a man that if gifted with knowing how to say just the right things to get what he wants. This is especially applies to when he speaks to the opposite gender, as he is quite the smooth talker. Being that sweeping woman off their feet is one of his favorite past times he may sometimes even lose focus of his true goals, though these occurrences are far and few between. He is often times the life of any party or celebration he goes to and can get along with just about anyone he meets. When it comes to business, he is naturally talented at working his plans into the heads of people, by any means to make sure he gets what he wants. One might believe that Sabure just enjoys enjoys hearing himself talk though this might not be far from truth he never spouts random nonsense unless he is simply teasing someone. He is a man who wants alot and in his mind it takes a certain "gift of gab" to get anywhere in life.

Sabure has a thirst for knowledge that is matched only by his lust for money, fame, and woman. He is a firm believer in the whole "a mind is a terrible thing to waste" concept. So he will usually study thoroughly about certain things that may hold value in the future. This could be ranging from island geography or urban legends that may surround certain islands. Because he is always looking to make more money he feels such knowledge is necessary so that he may actually have a general idea of what he is looking for. This may also come into play, which go hand and hand with his charismatic ways, when he needs to pump people for information. Because of his natural way with words he can easily get information from people, even if it means putting together key parts of what a person is saying just to get an understanding. This in mind he will rarely jump into any altercation if he can, he would rather pick the brains of people to determine if he should even bother fighting them.

Narcissist and Natural Swag
Sabure's number one fan is Sabure. The man loves himself almost as much as he loves making more money. He believes himself to be a visionary unlike other people these days. He already feels he is the epitome of the greatness and isn't shy in the least to admit it. To him the world is his stage and he plays the role of the leading man. Which may lead many to believe he might be a fame junkie, and though this may not be far from true his desire for more power and money out weigh his desire for fame. Simply put the man's ego is off the charts and it is quite obvious by the way he carries himself that he is extremely confident in all he does. He does somewhat care what others think in this aspect as he feels all should see him as he wants to be seen. As a result he will often make decisions that would never conflict with his "reputation" as he would state, making him an unpredictable man as no one can truly guess what he has going on in his head.

Money is always the motivation for Sabure to move forward. To him money is power, and this power grants its master the possibility to do anything. This in mind, he is always plotting on how he can acquire more of it as fast as possible. He isn't above double-crossing others to acquire money either and will smile in your face as he does it. Only in the most severe cases, like for example his life being on the line, will he ever abandon money. Though he never openly shows his affection for it as any good thief will know that secrecy is apart of diplomacy as well.

Callous and Ambitious
Bellow Sabure's outgoing exterior lies his true nature. He is a man who cares little for others, with possibly his on close family as the only exception. Because he is such a driven individual he will always do whatever he can to see that he gets what he needs. He feels that the best way to kill someone is to take everything from them, though he is cold he wont always resort to killing though he isn't above brutal beatings. Because of the fact he demands respect he is prone to be aggressive if he feels disrespected. And the fact he rarely shows his true intentions, its always hard to tell if he is angered though people who are around him long enough might notice when he is angered. His signs usually revolve around scratching his head, giving a wide grin, or cracks his neck.

Clan: Inuzuka Clan
Nindō: "Live as if you were going to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were going to live forever."


Origin: Konohagakure no Sato
Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Taijutsu // Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Doton // Katon
Combat Style: Sebastian is a very unique type of fighter. No matter where he is everything is a potential means for him to land an unorthodox attack. He uses his surroundings, jumping from wall to wall even using the ceiling if chance presents his self. He calls this style "Sabure Style Taijutsu" and has a numerous taijutsu techniques that revolve around this. This same style is used by his wolf, Cerberus, making them a deadly combination in any fight.
Special Characteristics:
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Name: Evasiveness
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: None.
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and dodging basic forms of physical attacks by reading an enemies movement.



Birth - Early Childhood
Corleone Sebastian Inuzuka IV
Corleone was the product of an assassin and his target. His mother was the daughter of the clan leader who held great prestige in the more political aspect of Konohagakure. His father was an assassin hired by another jealous clansman who wanted to make his rival pay for an incident that had caused him great embarrassment. The assassin had manage to not only capture and kidnap the daughter, but even went so far as to kill Corleone's grandfather in the process. After the escape with the daughter, the assassin eventually fell for the woman's fiery spirit and commanding attitude. Despite his several attempts she continued to resist his charm that had conquered so many hearts in his past. This, however, only fueled the assassin's want for the woman until she to started to find herself getting more attracted to the assassin. They eventually fell deep in love with one another and their lust would result in the birth of Corleone. The last name Inuzuka came from his mother while the name Corleone was given to him by his father who claimed it was the name of his father. Their happiness would be short lived as it was soon found out that Corleone's father was killer of his mother's father. His father was captured by a team of shinobi who brought the man back to be sentenced to death, while his mother was sentenced for assisting the assassin as the scene of the two having a family incriminated her as well. Both were sentenced to death by way of lethal injection. Corleone, being that he had no other known family or rather none were willing to accept him as family, was sent to a orphanage of sorts. This particular place took in infants and trained them to be the perfect warrior or shinobi, it would be here that Corleone would spend the majority of his childhood.

Corleone's development began very early as soon as he was able to walk he was forced to train. The person in charge who Corleone dubbed, Doc, was very strict on all the kids. She was especially strict on Corleone as she hated everything about the boy from his cavalier attitude to his handsome looks even at a young age. Corleone assumed she hated all things that made her look bad which meant that she pretty much hated the world. Because of his habit of always saying whats on his mind he would often state how ugly the woman was every time she started to annoy him. His talking got him into alot of trouble and the cuts and bruises on his body were a sign of it. Despite this, however, it didn't deter his attitude toward the woman. Rather it taught him to expect a reaction from the things he say, at this point he was 8 years old. Once he was 10 he was recommended to the Ninja Academy by several other instructors despite Doc's protest. It took another full year before Corleone would be admitted into the Academy, which he himself was completely fine with.

Academy - Genin
Half Man, Half Amazing
Corleone's time in the academy proved to be quite an eventful one as he made everyday an enjoyable one. Though he clowned around in class and often gave his instructors a headache, he was considered an excellent student as he took to all his lessons well. He particularly out-shined his fellow classmates when it came to his taijutsu as few could even stand on par with him in this particular area. His skills went so far that during his academy days he was being taught by a taijutsu specialist so that his knowledge of taijutsu could be increased until he graduated from academy. Corleone spent only two years in academy before he graduated from the academy and promoted to Genin. From here he went on to do his own personal training while taking on missions so that he could afford a cheap apartment so that he didn't have to depend on Doc's Orphanage as a place to reside.

Not long after, Corleone did some reading and found about more on his own family heritage in Konoha. He saw this as a chance to make a even better name for himself if he earned the attention from the current clan leader. He took it upon himself to go to the Inuzuka's clan housing area so that he could meet with the leader face to face. In his mind there was no way the leader would turn him away, and if he tried Corleone simply would press the matter. Luckily, Corleone ran into the leader and his large escort as they exited the clan's area. Corleone wasted no time as he landed in front of the group taking a knee as he did so, "I, Corleone Sebastian Inuzuka IV, pledge my life to the clan if you will allow it," he said as he looked the leader in the eyes. He wasn't sure the response he would get but even if it was no he still would follow the leader. "Your reasons," the leader would say plainly. Corleone only smiled as he responded,"Power, Fame, Respect," Corleone said as he stood up. The leader didn't respond further and simply walked past along with his entourage. "I didn't hear a no," Corleone said as he followed not far behind the group, the fact no one spoke against only confirmed that Corleone had gotten the leader's attention even if only slightly.

After they all made their way back, Bastian was granted the chance to choose his partner as a Inuzuka. However, the choice would get put out of his hands when one particular puppy approached him while the others simple crowded around their mother. The puppy approached Corleone as he squatted down so that he could see the puppy more closely. It was as if the two felt an instant connection, because the puppy would give a low growl that sounded more like a whine and Corleone would simply smile. He had gave the puppy a few pats on the head before he named it, Cerberus. He left the puppy with the rest of the litter, but he knew that with this partner he would be able to do great things. Now the young man had a home and a new view of where he wanted to go with his life. With his partner and his own strength he intended to take the world by storm with his own two hands.
Roleplay Sample:
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Academy Jutsu
Kawarimi no Jutsu
Henge no Jutsu
Bunshin no Jutsu
Nawanuke no Jutsu
Genjutsu Kai
Shunshin no Jutsu
Kinobori no Waza
Suimen Hokou no Waza
Ayatsuito no Jutsu
Bikou Ninjutsu

Jutsu Descriptions (In Order):
Clan Jutsu
Jūjin Bunshin
Shikyaku no Jutsu

Jutsu Description (In Order):
Custom Taijutsu
Sabure Cyclone
Persistent Beast
Rising Tackle
Burning Knuckle

Jutsu Descriptions (In Order):

Canon Taijutsu
Leaf Whirlwind
Leaf Violent Wind

Jutsu Description (In Order):

Doton Jutsu
Dochuu Senkou
Retsudo Tenshou
Moguragakure no Jutsu

Jutsu Description (In Order):


Character Claim: Noctis Lucis Caelum
Source: Final Fantasy XIII-2
Image URL: http://images.wikia.com/finalfantasy/images/f/f0/Noctis-render.png

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PostSubject: Re: Corleone Sebastian Inuzuka IV Mon 13 Feb 2012, 7:05 pm

Is this Completed?
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PostSubject: Re: Corleone Sebastian Inuzuka IV Mon 13 Feb 2012, 7:40 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Corleone Sebastian Inuzuka IV Mon 13 Feb 2012, 9:38 pm

Well hello there, Sebastian!

I will be attending to your application first, so let's begin.

Overall, in your application I noticed quite a few spelling, grammatical, and punctuation issues. I would suggest that when you post here, that you write it in a Word Document or something resembling it so that we may avoid an issue like that, again.

Moving forward;

You must re-edit your template so that it fits perfectly with the one that is provided by US, this includes removing the musical accompaniment I get every single time I open this application. It's scaring me away.

In your Appearance, the second paragraph, you reference to a 'Sebastian.' Please alter accordingly.

SeBastian wrote:
Name: Burning Knuckle
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Element: Katon
Description: Focusing his chakra into his entire hand, Sabure is able to deliver a fiery punch that does enough damage to easily smash a boulder. The hands will be slightly engulfed in fire and upon contact the enemy struck will sever burns comparable to if they touched an hot iron.
Chakra Cost: 7

At C - Rank, that is far too much power in a technique. Please alter.

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PostSubject: Re: Corleone Sebastian Inuzuka IV Mon 13 Feb 2012, 10:21 pm

Thank you!

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PostSubject: Re: Corleone Sebastian Inuzuka IV Tue 14 Feb 2012, 6:25 am

Approved 2/2

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