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| Subject: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Mon 27 Jun 2011, 1:58 am | |
| KAGUYA ASAMITHE INFO Name: Kaguya Asami Nickname: M Age: 15 Gender: Female
Appearance: Asami stands in the height of about 5'5 ft and has a quite pale complexion. Her weight is 143 lbs, while her body is awlays in shape. Her white hair reach down, little above her waist. She usually leaves her hair loose but the hairstyle may have alternations depending on the specific occasion. Geisha hairstyles are generally in her likes for the formal events. Her eyes reflect green shade, while her lips are thin and smooth. Most of the times her makeup features a natural base with red lipstick and red and black accents around the eyes and eyebrows. Asami's wardrobe is comprised of a set of kimonos, yukata and furisodes, straight-lined robes worn so that the hem falls to the ankle, with attached collars and long, wide sleeves. The garments are wrapped around the body, always with the left side over the right and secured by a sash, which is tied at the back. Her clothes are generally worn with traditional footwear, such as zōri or geta, and split-toe socks.
Personality: Asami deals with things according to how she feels about them, or how they fit into her value system. Additionally, she takes things in via her five senses in a literal, concrete fashion. Asami lives in the world of sensation possibilities. She is keenly in tune with the way things look, taste, sound, feel and smell. She has a strong aesthetic appreciation for art, and is an artist in some form, as she unusually gifted at creating and composing things which will strongly affect the senses. She has a strong set of values, which she strives to consistently meet in her life. She needs to feel as if she is living her life in accordance with what she feels is right, and will rebel against anything which conflicts with that goal. She is likely to choose jobs and tasks which allow her the freedom of working towards the realization of her value-oriented personal goals. Asami tends to be quiet and reserved, and difficult to get to know well. She holds back her ideas and opinions except from those who she is closest to. She is likely to be kind, gentle and sensitive in her dealings with others. She is interested in contributing to people's sense of well-being and happiness, and will put a great deal of effort and energy into tasks which she believes in.
Asami has a strong affinity for aesthetics and beauty. She is an animal lover, and has a true appreciation for the beauties of nature. She is original and independent, and needs to have personal space. She values people who take the time to understand her, and who support her in pursuing her goals in her own, unique way. People who don't know her well may see her unique way of life as a sign of carefree light-heartedness, but Asami actually takes life very seriously, constantly gathering specific information and shifting it through her mind, in search for clarification and underlying meaning. Asami is an action-oriented individual. She is a "doer", and is usually uncomfortable with theorizing concepts and ideas, unless she sees a practical application. She learns best in a "hands-on" environment, and consequently may become easily bored with the traditional teaching methods, which emphasize abstract thinking. She does not like impersonal analysis, and is uncomfortable with the idea of making decisions based strictly on logic.
Asami is extremely perceptive and aware of others. She constantly gathers specific information about people, and seeks to discover what it means. She is usually penetratingly accurate in her perceptions of others. Asami is warm and sympathetic. She genuinely cares about people, and is strongly service-oriented in her desire to please. She has an unusually deep well of caring for those who are close to her, and is likely to show her love through actions, rather than words. She has no desire to lead or control others, just as she has no desire to be led or controlled by others. She needs space and time alone to evaluate the circumstances of their life against their values, and is likely to respect other people's needs for the same. Asami is likely to not give herself enough credit for the things which she does extremely well. Her strong values can lead her to be intensely perfectionist, and cause her to judge herself with unnecessary harshness.
M: Asami's Twisted Self In spite of her huge efforts, Asami cannot completely erase the memories of her past, thus letting her twisted personality take over, commonly in moments of crisis and chaos. Asami as "M", is a wholly different person. She wears a twisted grin on her face and has her eyes ridiculously wide open. When M takes over Asami, she acts as a bloodthirsty psycho. M is quite sadistic and enjoys making people hurt and suffer. She usually doesn't take things seriously and even under a life-and-death situation she might face everything as if it was a game. She lets out a laughter every sinlge time she attacks her oppenents and finds pleasure in humiliating them.
Should M get hurt, she would taste her blood and burst out in an insane laughing-crying girl. Asami tries to repel her own desires and impulses towards pleasurable instincts. Such desires, impulses, wishes, fantasies or feelings can be represented in the mind as thoughts, images and memories. The repression is caused when an external force puts itself in contrast with the desire, threatening to cause suffering if the desire is satisfied, thereby posing a conflict for the Asami. M takes over, acts and behaves depending on Asami's repressions. Asami's will, manages to let Asami retrieve her consciousness, after defeating M in a spiritual fight in someplace that somehow represents Asami's inner world, in which M is chained and completely restricted from any movement.
Clan: Kaguya
Nindō:- First, comes the tear. Then, comes the storm.
- You have all the weapons you need. Now fight.
THE NINJA Origin: Water Country Affiliation: Kumo Rank: Genin (C-Rank) Specialties: Weaponry (Main: Swords; Sub: Polearms) Taijutsu Elemental Affinities: Fuuton (Wind Release) Raiton (Lightning Release)
Combat Style: Asami's combat skills are mainly lying under her weaponry skills and her clan's techniques. She is not the type of the reckless offensive fighter. She is patient enough in every single fight and doesn't rush. She is rather gentle and respects her opponent under most circumstances. She moves in a quick and soft fashion in order get close to her opponent. Asami doesn't make unnecessary moves in her fights, thus saving up energy. Her weapons are used and adapted by her as if they were extensions of her own body. Her fast and focused attacks are no effort for her at all, after years of practise. Asami dislikes blunt attacks and people who don't respect their weapons or opponent. Her strategies are almost always offensive, but that sometimes may be proved to be negative. Her weaknesses regarding her defenses would be large scale attacks that cannot be stopped or intercepted through her weapons. Asami is not the person that could easily be deceived by words. She is concentrated on her opponent without taking seriously big talk and insulting words. Her main objective in a battle is to defeat the ones that pose a threat against herself, or against other people. She is really close to her weapons and fights with them as if they were living creatures. On contrast to that, she doesn't care about her produced bones or her clothes being ruined.
Fighting Style: Name: Tonboyashi - Dragonfly Palm Rank: - Type: Taijutsu Description: Tonboyashi is a fighting style focusing on the action and result interrelation. The user uses both arms and legs, but the legs act as distrators. The user starts with kick-based attacks, keeping their arms loose or kept in front of their chest. After convincing the opponent that the fighting style is based on the legs, thus making them concentrate on their opponent's legs, the technique suddenly alters with the user veering his style to hand-based. Confusing the opponent they can easily land a first hit in the upper body. The technique goes on with fast paced attacks that target weak points of the body, such as armpit, elbow, groin, throat, etc. After landing several low-pressure hits on the opponent they can easily slow them down and weaken their strength in the hit parts, respectively. This fighting style intends to render the opponent weaker and slower after little effort.
Special Characteristics:
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Name: Evasiveness Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: None. Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and dodging basic forms of physical attacks by reading an enemies movement.
Name: Improved Endurance Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of endurance accessible to those who have undergone intensive training. The possessor of this talent has an increased endurance of 20% which makes them slightly tougher. They can withstand greater damage that could otherwise stun them in pain, and continue fighting.
Name: Clan Prodigy Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks are 20% more destructive with their increased power and size.
THE BACKGROUND History:
The Tear Another dramatic story began for a little child named Asami. The little girl was brought up in a rich and wealthy family. Her life was full of formality and discipline. Sharing a large, luxurious mansion with the rest of the family members, Asami fell by the wayside after her twin brothers were brought to life. In the age of eight, her ordeals started. Asami was no longer able to draw the attention or ask for help from her parents. That was due to the fact that her parents believed she wasn't able to fulfill their ambitions, as she was born a girl. As a result, they completely focused on the twins, plus naming them after their ancestors. Asami used to have swordsmanship classes with the rest of the family's children, until the boys were able to take up, too. Her father forced her to drop out of the lessons and made her a slave in the house. In stead of having all the comforts her wealth would offer her, she was now responsible for the hygiene of the mansion and supervising everything her two brothers did. Asami was able to go through that and comprehend her possition. At least until the time her father started treating her as a stranger. He would punish her corporally after every mistake she did. Her mother was trying to ignore these facts because she wouldn't do anything against her bacchanal husband. But all these problems were not enough to stop Asami. She continued training skipping school and most of the discipline lessons. But the day her father would find out was to come.
The Storm About five years had passed since the day Asami's father discovered her actions. Asami would now pass many of her ours locked inside her room without any nutritional diet. Her brothers had become adept at swordsmanship and Asami was used by their teacher as a practicing opponent in complete secretiveness in order to let her train. Everything came to an end the night Asami's father gone astray, killing his wife after believing she was poisoning him; the same happened to everyone in his way, including his servants, his brother, even his twin sons. The older servant of the family died out in Asami's hands and the view of her whole family murdered was enough to pull the trigger. Asami could not bear the loss and started screaming, running through the flames in the great hall of the mansion. Her father was burning her room while shouting searching for her. Asami took her father's sword and found him stabbing her pillows. As she walked towards him, tears were running through her tired face. She stabbed him from behind letting an horde of blood splatter across the room, on her clothes and face. He managed to speak some final words out: "Asami, I couldn't love you as much as I wanted to, I am sorry..." . Asami licked her lips and tasted the red wine. Her father's corpse was laying down on the floor forming a red pool by his side. "My name is M" she uttered. Her whole world had ended that night.
The Sun The sign of the ninja academy beamed under the scorching sun. It was the day of the Academy students' graduation and everyone was at last given the title of a Genin. Asami walked out of the building. Nobody was there to congratulate her, but she pretended she didn't care about that. All of the freshmen were filled with happiness shaking hands with their relatives. "Would you like to join us to the graduation party, Asami?" a girl's voice passed through Asami's ears. "Of course I will." Asami answered wearing an almost real smile on her lips and followed the pink haired classmate of hers. She shed a tear and dropped her father's handkerchief in the river. The cherry tress were shouting out in blooming flowers as the girls were crossing the bridge looking towards a new future.
Role-Play Sample: Hayato was in his paper form, flying above The Land Of Grass using his paper wings. Hills and forests he was watching while beeing carried by the noon winds. Some birds started coming closer. He was now flying between a flock of several birds, unknown to him. He used his paper to form origami birds, which he controled with ease, despite the strong wind blowing them away. After a while, he streched his wings to glide and after losing some height, he was now flying right above the large forest trees. The different kinds of animals were scared every time they saw Hayato's figure flying above them. Animals running, birds flying and the winds blowing Hayato's paper like dust, made Hayato feel an unexplainable happiness.
Hayato suddenly felt chakra, coming from the forest. "Looks like i'm not the only one wasting my time here." Hayato thought to himself. He was curious and turned his whole body into paper and formed every single sheet of paper into paper planes to approach faster. Making quick movements, he was in position in no time. By the time he was there, trying to understand what's going on, one strange, non-human like figure got away. He compressed his paper on the trees making him undetectable, then waited to see how things involve and after a couple of minutes sent some paper butterflies closer.
Hayato's compressed face detected someone coming closer. "That girl rings you a bell or what?" Hayato said to himself trying to remember who that girl was. She carefully got closer at the other guy, then started talking to him. Hayato couldn't hear what they were talking about. It was obvious that it was the first time they met, as Hayato saw the man bowing in front of that girl. "So it's just a simple coincidence to find these gyus here. Well then..." Hayato whispered sending the butterflies even closer to spy them, using his Spying technique. He knew that the unknown man, had already noticed, but that didn't matter at all.
After that, Hayato's body ran down as paper sheets onto the ground, compressing himself between the tall grass. His head was detectable, but not obvious. He started crawling in that way towards them, in a blinding speed. In fact, the butterflies he sent, were actually explosive tags, already in a square formation in case someone of those two tried to attack him. He crawled silently right behind the unknown girl. Then all of a sudden, the paper went all up in an instant and started forming into his body right behind her. "Hello, plain walkers." Hayato said in a sarcastic way and a grin on his face, still in paper form with paper sheets dancing in the air around them. He couldn't help but be curious to see what that mysterious girl's face looked like.
FACE CLAIM Character Claim: Unknown Character & Flandre Scarlet. Source: Pixiv Fantasia & Tohou. Image URL: Asami & M.
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Tue 09 Aug 2011, 10:27 pm | |
| THE ARSENAL
ACADEMY JUTSU - Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
HIDDEN CLAN JUTSU - Spoiler:
Name: Akuin - Corpsebone Rooting Rank: D Type: Kekkei Genkai Range: Close (0m - 5m) Clan: Kaguya Element: N/A Description: Although basic, this jutsu is the commencement of the Kaguya's bone manipulation to a hardness that will serve them for their own greater good. Once sensing they are loosing by balance by extreme measures, such as strong wind currents or even blasts of energy, they will allow their bones to pierce their feet and into the ground, branching off underground in a form of hyper-growth based on the rooting of strong tree. Bones can burry up to 1 meter deep plus 1 more each time retrained. Burial occurs in most surfaces, as long as they are not viscous or loose enough that bracing down wouldn't matter. From this point they shall remain until they choose to move on. Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per additional post)
Name: Hone Tsume - Bone Claws Rank: D Type: Kekkei Genkai Range: Close (0m - 5m) Clan: Kaguya Element: N/A Description: Using the power their blood has granted them, the Kaguya can cause their knuckles to push forward, outward from the hand and sharpening, working as a kind of claw-like weapon. This can also be done from the fingertips, allowing the bones within the finger to extend outward as opposed to the knuckle. Excellent for quick, slashing attacks. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Boro Ningyō no Mai - Dance of the Ragdoll Rank: C Type: Kekkei Genkai Range: Close (0m - 5m) Clan: Kaguya Element: N/A Description: By focusing their chakra along the joints in question, the Kaguya clan member will be able to change his/her joints to their pleasing. This can be as simple as becoming double jointed, or even improving their range of motion by whatever means so. Doing so allows them to move about strangely, make strikes from angles and directions once thought impossible, or even evade an attack that would normally be a direct hit. However, in doing this, they make their bones more prone to dislocation when they are hit. Chakra Cost: 9 (2 per additional post)
Name: Tsubaki no Mai - Dance of the Camellia Rank: D Type: Kekkei Genkai Range: Close (0m - 5m) Clan: Kaguya Element: N/A Description: Tsubaki no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user performs this jutsu by modifying the humerus (upper arm bone) of either their right or left arm to create a short, hilt-less bone sword. Since they can increase and compress the density of their bones, they can make the sword harder than steel. The user then uses the sword to fight; their style uses quick cuts and thrusts to disable opponents quickly. They is extremely proficient with this sword and can, not only deflect shuriken, but also dispatch a large number of Shadow Clones with this technique. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru - Dance of the Clematis: Vine Rank: D Type: Kekkei Genkai Range: Close (0m - 5m) Clan: Kaguya Element: N/A Description: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user can modify and pull out their own spinal column to use as a flexible chain staff, regrowing a new spine to replace the removed one. The protrusions on the vertebrae are modified to make them stronger and sharper. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Karamatsu no Mai - Dance of the Larch Rank: C Type: Kekkei Genkai Range: Close (0m - 5m) Clan: Kaguya Element: N/A Description: Karamatsu no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user uses this jutsu to create a mass of razor-sharp bone spikes all over their body. These spines appear to be branches off their pre-existing skeletal structure rather than completely new bones. The user is even able to grow these bones at an extremely rapid rate so they can stab an opponent even as they are growing. They can even use them to block or trap an opponent's strikes. In addition to being an unwelcome surprise for opponents, it makes them basically untouchable at close range. If an opponent would start to get close to them, they would start to spin rapidly slashing the foe in multiple areas of their body. Chakra Cost: 6 (Additional 2 Per Post)
Name: Teshi Sendan - Drilling Finger Bullets Rank: C Type: Kekkei Genkai Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Clan: Kaguya Element: N/A Description: Teshi Sendani is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. Hardened bones from the fingertips are shot at the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. A direct hit will excavate skin, flesh, and bone. Since the bones regenerate after release, this technique can be used in succession. Chakra Cost: 5
WEAPONRY JUTSU - Spoiler:
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A Description: It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fūma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency. The trick is to somehow draw the enemy's attention towards the upper shuriken. Then, to deal with the path of the lower shuriken. If the enemy notices both shuriken, the technique ends up losing all of its efficiency. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Iruka no Ken - Dolphin Blades Rank: C Type: Kenjutsu Range: Mid (5m - 10m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: N/A Description: This technique can only be performed by using two swords. The user takes a straight stance and stretches out their hands forming a line from tip to tip of the two swords. The turning of one leg gives a push and the user beggins to spin in high speed, turnig his deadly swords around him. Keeping up with the spinning fashion, the user forms a right angle with his waist and takes a jump every 4 steps. The attack ends with the swords flying towards the enemy if the user didn't land a hit. This technique can be rather reckless, due to the high speed and lack of complete view of the enemy. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Kame no Shīrudo - Turtle Shield Rank: C Type: Kenjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user stands in a normal stance with both his swords, or his single staff drawn, and then using his aim and agility he is able to deflect many different small to medium size thrown projectiles such as kunai and shuriken, even able to send some of them spinning off into the direction of the thrower. He can repel all projectiles and small objects targeted at him in a 180 degree angle due to his sheer speed he can move and twist his blades at. He needs to have both of his weapons. The vast majority of shinobi opt to use jutsu rather than throw projectiles, rendering this technique useful in only a few situations. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Vision's Step Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: When attacked by an overhead strike/slash the user will use his maneuverability to quickly step diagonally forward around the target, whilst causing the attack to slide down his weapon's edge rendering the user unharmed and placing him at the back of his enemy ready to then slash down the enemy's spine with his weapon. The user has to be attacked by an overhead attack and needs two weapons. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Blades of the Gate Rank: C Type: Kenjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user quickly reacts with his opponents attack so he can block the attack with clever force, as the opponent's attack comes towards him, the user slashes the attack with his swords in a scissor like manner catching the attack between the blades strongly. The user then can continue with the flow of the scissor motion and crack or even shatter weapons caught as he slices through the flat of the blades with cleverly applied force, if a fist or foot were caught he would easily slice through the joints in the bone taking the said body part clean off. Cannot cut through any weapon that is empowered with chakra. Requires the user to be equally good with their aim as well as being agile, and using two weapons. Chakra Cost: 6
FUUINJUTSU - Spoiler:
Name: Chozou no Jutsu (Storage Technique) Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened. Chakra Cost: 2CP
KUMOGAKURE SPECIFIC TECHNIQUES - Spoiler:
Name: Rakurai - Lightning Strike Rank: D Type: Nin - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: Raiton Description: Rakurai is a ninjutsu and taijutsu mixture utilizing the lightning element. After gathering chakra to the fist, the user is able to create multiple sparks of electricity to form around the top of their hand for it then to alter into a source of lightning. This lightning is to enhance the pain when delivering a punch and also numbs the area of attack for an entire post. If someone was so unlucky to be hit by this technique, then they would suffer from first degree burns and also the pain from the resulting punch. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Modoru Kikkā - Back Kicker Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: - Description: Modoru Kikkā is a taijutsu technique. Once the user has gathered enough chakra to their feet, they will try to maneuver themselves behind their opponent so that they can deliver a chakra - enhanced kick to the back. A normal kick would be damaging enough but to have chakra reinforcing it will result in more pain. If a direct hit is made, they'll be able to force their opponent down onto their knees or flat onto their face. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Raitoningu no Kengen - Lightning Manifestation Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m), Far (10m+) Element: Raiton Description: Raitoningu no Kengen is a weaponry technique utilizing the lightning element. Using their lightning affinity, the Kumogakure shinobi is able to enhance any weapon they possess and coat it with lightning chakra to give it a more powerful hit. The lightning will be able to numb the area where the weapon strikes and also cause minor burns. Any weapon can be enhanced by this attack, Kunai, Shuriken, Blades or even Arrows. The technique can only be used on weapons though, once the weapon has struck something the lightning will fade away. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Rariatto - Lariat Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: - Description: Rariatto is a taijutsu technique. After gathering enough chakra within their entire body, the user will be able to gain a sudden burst in strength and speed. The user will straighten their dominant arm so that they can form a greater attack. Then using their speed the user will rush towards their target and ram into their upper chest with their strengthened arm, forcing the opponent to the ground. Chakra Cost: 8[/code]
WEAPONS, EQUIPMENT - Spoiler:
Name: Halberd Rank: D Type: Main -Primary/Melee Quantity: 1 Description: The halberd is a two-handed pole weapon. The five to six foot long weapon consists of an axe blade topped with a spike mounted on a long shaft. Finally, a hook or thorn can be found on the back side of the axe blade for grappling. Carried sealed inside a scroll. Name: Ninjato Rank: D Type: Primary/Melee Quantity: 1 Description: Short and straight, this blade takes a similar form of a katana, but without the curvature in the blade. With the blade measuring no more than three feet, and a square guard on top, this weapon has been popularized by many ninja, especially the ANBU, hence the name. Carried sealed inside a scroll. Name: Katana Rank: D Type: Primary/Melee Quantity: 2 Description: Commonly refereed to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance. It has a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability. Both katanas are sealed each inside a scroll. Name: Shakujō - Pilgrim's Staff Rank: C Type: Primary/Melee Quantity: 1 Description: A pilgrim's staff or sistrum. It is a 6 feet long staff. The shakujō consists of a red wooden pole topped with a sharp steel finial with two sections, each with three rings, for a total of six rings, which represent the Six States of Existence. The shakujō has become a formidable weapon in the hands of Asami. It can be used as a staff to block and parry attacks and the metal rings at the tip can be slammed into an opponent's face to momentarily blind him. At the very tip of the steel finial is a sharp, spear-like point which can be used to attack weak points of the body. The bottom end of the staff has a metal butt which can be used to thrust and hit an opponent. An opponent's weapon can also be easily deflected. Asami carries the Shakujō with her either as a walking stick or held by a sash at her back. Battle Demonstration Video: CLICK ME Name: Gas Mask Rank: D Type: Accessory Quantity: 1 Contents: A mask put on over the face to protect the wearer from inhaling "airborne pollutants" and toxic gases. The mask forms a sealed cover over the nose, mouth, eyes, and other vulnerable soft tissues of the face. This mask filters out air pollutants and gases. Also provides as a good face protector. Moderately Durable. Carried into a small pouch. Name: Small Pouch Rank: D Type: Accessory/Supplementary Quantity: 1 Description: A small black pouch custom made for fitting small items. This pouch has an overlapping encasement to keep such object held within without problem. It is a bit larger than ones hand and is portable by clipping on to one hip. Contents: Gas Mask, two blank small scrolls, pens, money. Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 3 Smoke Bombs, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Last edited by Scale on Sat 31 Mar 2012, 5:24 pm; edited 14 times in total |
| | | John
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Wed 07 Sep 2011, 4:25 am | |
| Activity check -- are you still working on this character? |
| | | John
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Mon 12 Sep 2011, 10:47 pm | |
| Archived |
| | | Adam
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 04 Feb 2012, 1:04 pm | |
| Unarchived due to user request. |
| | | Keos
Age : 28 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Mon 06 Feb 2012, 1:13 am | |
| The character application is finished and ready for the staff to moderate. |
| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Wed 08 Feb 2012, 12:26 pm | |
| In your appearance you mention average female height and weight. Could you please specify more exact figures? It helps your fellow RPers with their descriptiveness
In regards to Asami 'defeating M in a spiritual fight' in order to repress this alternate personality, how would it work if it were to occur in the middle of a combat situation or even a normal social RP? The problem I have with dual personalities like this is that when it comes to repressing them, it tends to result in a post that acts as a narrative involving only one person which really doesn't give the other people involved in the topic much to work with RP-wise. - Quote :
- Asami can even use a sword by holding it in mouth, or even behind a knee.
This level of proficiency is a little too advanced and is currently being integrated into a special characteristic. Please remove it. - Quote :
- Kame no Shīrudo - Turtle Shield
Rank: C Type: Kenjutsu Sub-type: Defensive Description: The user stands in a normal stance with both his swords, or his single staff drawn, and then using his aim and agility he is able to deflect many different small to medium size thrown projectiles such as kunai and shuriken, even able to send some of them spinning off into the direction of the thrower. He can repel all projectiles and small objects targeted at him in a 360 degree angle due to his sheer speed he can move and twist his blades at. He needs to have both of his weapons. The vast majority of shinobi opt to use jutsu rather than throw projectiles, rendering this technique useful in only a few situations. Chakra Cost: 8 The defensive power of this technique is a little too powerful for a C Rank especially since it manages to accomplish almost the same thing as the Hyuuga's Hakkeshou Kaiten through sheer speed. Either limit the defensive radius to 180 degrees in front of the user or remove it please. Also, could you please alter your other custom techniques so that they fit the site's Jutsu template please?
In regards to the number of weapons you carry, how exactly is a 15 year old girl capable of maintaining an arsenal of a pair of 3 feet long ninjato, two 3 feet long katanas, a halberd and a staff along with her other shinobi equipemnt all on her person? Are they sealed in scrolls? If so, please specify in their descriptions.
Apart from these issues, the application is fine from what I can tell
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| | | Keos
Age : 28 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Wed 08 Feb 2012, 1:32 pm | |
| - Shinji wrote:
- In your appearance you mention average female height and weight. Could you please specify more exact figures? It helps your fellow RPers with their descriptiveness
- Specified height and weight.
- Shinji wrote:
- In regards to Asami 'defeating M in a spiritual fight' in order to repress this alternate personality, how would it work if it were to occur in the middle of a combat situation or even a normal social RP? The problem I have with dual personalities like this is that when it comes to repressing them, it tends to result in a post that acts as a narrative involving only one person which really doesn't give the other people involved in the topic much to work with RP-wise.
- The only thing I can do about it is to ensure you I won't follow what others do and continue the flow of roleplaying, while taking care of the inner world issue.
- Shinji wrote:
- This level of proficiency is a little too advanced and is currently being integrated into a special characteristic. Please remove it.
- Shinji wrote:
- The defensive power of this technique is a little too powerful for a C Rank especially since it manages to accomplish almost the same thing as the Hyuuga's Hakkeshou Kaiten through sheer speed. Either limit the defensive radius to 180 degrees in front of the user or remove it please. Also, could you please alter your other custom techniques so that they fit the site's Jutsu template please?
- Turned the radius to 180 degrees.
- Altered the custom jutsu templates.
- Shinji wrote:
- In regards to the number of weapons you carry, how exactly is a 15 year old girl capable of maintaining an arsenal of a pair of 3 feet long ninjato, two 3 feet long katanas, a halberd and a staff along with her other shinobi equipemnt all on her person? Are they sealed in scrolls? If so, please specify in their descriptions.
- Edited. Most of the weapons are carried in scrolls and the katanas will be sealed in scrolls whenever my character carries the custom staff with her.
Overall Update: I have gone through your points and took care of all issues. Is there anything else I have to alter in the application? |
| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Thu 09 Feb 2012, 4:08 pm | |
| You've only got two scrolls within your Genin kit so you'll have to specify which weapons are sealed and which are carried. Bear in mind that your character is a 15 year old girl so the weight and size of what you're carrying should still be realistic.
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| | | Keos
Age : 28 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Thu 09 Feb 2012, 4:14 pm | |
| Would it be alright if I just created a small bag to carry scrolls? Like a small scroll kit?
Or am I restricted by the Kit rule: " You shall have only one Kit at C rank " ? |
| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Thu 09 Feb 2012, 4:23 pm | |
| Sorry, the rules limit you to one multi-item kit.
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| | | Keos
Age : 28 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Thu 09 Feb 2012, 4:25 pm | |
| Okay, then I just get rid of something.
Thanks for your time.
- Update: Removed the halberd and specified the scrolls in which the pair of katanas and the ninjato are sealed. As for the custom staff, it is carried by the character herself seathed in a sash.
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| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Thu 09 Feb 2012, 4:33 pm | |
| Edit so that only one of the katanas is sealed within a scroll.
Other than that, Approved, 1/2
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| | | Keos
Age : 28 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Thu 09 Feb 2012, 4:36 pm | |
| Can I add one more small-sized scroll inside the Kit? |
| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 11 Feb 2012, 7:56 am | |
| Nope, sorry, the numbers in the kits are set in stone.
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| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 11 Feb 2012, 8:30 am | |
| Hey there, just to begin, may you please use the template that is supplied by US?
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| | | Keos
Age : 28 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 11 Feb 2012, 2:17 pm | |
| - ♥ B. wrote:
- Hey there, just to begin, may you please use the template that is supplied by US?
- Well, it is actually the template. I just changed the color and size of some of the titles. I cannot see what's wrong with that.
- Shinji wrote:
- Nope, sorry, the numbers in the kits are set in stone.
- Removed Ninjato and used one scroll for each katana.
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| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 11 Feb 2012, 5:35 pm | |
| We have the template set up a specific way for a reason - so everyone's applications look the same. Please alter it back to the original look, if you will. This isn't just you, this rule applies to everyone. |
| | | Keos
Age : 28 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 11 Feb 2012, 5:54 pm | |
| - ♥ B. wrote:
- We have the template set up a specific way for a reason - so everyone's applications look the same. Please alter it back to the original look, if you will. This isn't just you, this rule applies to everyone.
- I will change the look back. But have in mind that tons of applications were approved after having an altered look. I know you are trying to make things better by being more strict with the rules, but I don't believe your ways are fair enough.
- Update: I changed the look back to the original, but still have some extra things in the application, in my way, as there is no specific template instruction (ex. Fighting Style, Character's second personality, etc). Does everything look fine now?
- Update: Edited the custom pouch, adding two small scrolls. Thus, I am able add to my application and to carry one Ninjato and one Halberd inside these scrolls.
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| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Mon 13 Feb 2012, 1:54 am | |
| Thank you, I appreciate your co-operation.
Overall, you have a wonderfully, well-written application with few spelling errors. Your history was probably the most enjoyable aspect of your application, and I liked how you spun the classic "father/daughter issues" into something that has a more realistic ending.
After the alterations to the template, I have no other qualms with this application;
Welcome to the US Role-playing Community, and just in time for the Valentine's Sweepstakes!
Please Enjoy.
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| | | Enzo
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 31 Mar 2012, 5:18 pm | |
| Unapproved due to user request and weaponry over-ranking. |
| | | Keos
Age : 28 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 31 Mar 2012, 5:26 pm | |
| Edited accordingly. |
| | | Enzo
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 31 Mar 2012, 5:29 pm | |
| [1/2] Re-Approved |
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Asami [Kumo Genin] Sat 31 Mar 2012, 5:49 pm | |
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