The Genjutsu Galore

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Name: The Execution
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Single Target
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: The Execution is a Genjutsu that forces the opponent to see a vision, in which he is unable to stop the User from killing him. The Genjutsu is activated through direct eye contact. Although the target will not be damaged by the Jutsu, he is liable to feel fear or anxiety, as the fight continues. He is likely to experience initial shock at the idea of dying and will be desperate to avoid such.
Chakra Cost: 6

Name: The Hundred Sword Display
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Single Target
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: The Hundred Sword Display is a Genjutsu that forces the opponent to see a vision, in which the User summons One Hundred Swords, which launch at the target, impaling him in multiple places. Unlike the Execution Technique, although the Genjutsu is also activated through direct eye contact, it also requires the User to perform hand-seals beforehand. What the Genjutsu does, is force the Opponent to literally see and eventually feel a hundred swords pierce his flesh, without the ability to stop such from happening. The Illusion is therefore almost instant, in regards to how quickly it lasts. However it is 'lasting' that is important. The Genjutsu causes temporary pain, that the brain stimulates in response to the vision. On top of that, the opponent is inclined and will feel anxious and scared of the User, and will be desperate to avoid death. Especially, if the User is wielding a Sword. As such, although one may say that the Genjutsu doesn't have much of an effect, it is a very subtle psychological-based attack.
Chakra Cost: 13

Name: The Thousand Sword Display
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Single Target
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: The Thousand Sword Display is a Genjutsu that forces the opponent to see a vision, in which the User summons One Thousand Swords, which launch at the target, shredding his body to tiny pieces. Like the Hundred Sword Display Technique, the Genjutsu is activated through direct eye contact and also requires the User to perform hand-seals beforehand. What the Genjutsu does, is force the Opponent to literally see and eventually feel a thousand swords pierce his flesh, without the ability to stop such from happening. The Illusion is therefore almost instant, in regards to how quickly it lasts. The opponent will become subject to continuous pain, that the brain stimulates in response to the vision. This pain will feel realistic, as if the body had just indeed experienced what the brain had imagined; this effect lasts for three turns. Additionally, the opponent suffers from great anxiety and fear, as well as a feeling of uneasiness and discomfort. This is due to the brain's stimulation, having a lasting effect on the body, which to the opponent, feels different and awkward. As such, although one may say that the Genjutsu doesn't have much effect, it is a very subtle psychological-based attack. It's also impossible to escape it, since the Illusion takes place over mere seconds and the resulting effects are caused independently, by the target's brain.
Chakra Cost: 20

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Name: Shadow Ambush Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Description: This unique technique designed by Kurisu himself, is often put to use when the Target feels safe and confident that the Nara won't be able to reach him. The technique is unlike any other Clan Jutsu, as it does not require Kurisu to make contact with the Shadow that he is planning to use. Instead, the Jounin will gather Chakra in his hand and then place his palm down on the ground, releasing waves of it, which radiate away from the User in a circular motion of a radius of 5 metres. In that very radius, every shadow present upon the ground becomes agitated and momentarily falls under the control of the Jounin. Thus initially, the Nara will command all of the shadows to shoot out from the ground. These, attain sharp qualities, meaning to pierce through the Target's body, lodging themselves shallowly, but painfully in his flesh. After this technique hits someone, it can then be directly transformed back into the Shadow Imitation Technique or alternatively, to the Shadow Capture Technique.
Chakra Cost: 20CP

Name: Shadow Capture Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Description: This unique technique designed by Kurisu himself, is used to strongly restrict movement, allowing the Jounin to stop stronger opponents and restrict them further more, than any other Nara Technique. This Jutsu works through Kurisu joining his own shadow (or a shadow that he controls) with the Opponent's. When he does that, the Nara causes the Shadow to disperse into singular long segments, that assault the Target, wrapping around his body in a chaotic manner, that ultimately reduces his moving capabilities drastically. As the shadows begin to trap the Target, any shadow which comes into contact with the one Kurisu controls - shadows present on the body for example - are also willed into action. This technique must last at least two turns, before Shadow Execution can be used. On the first turn, 14 CP can be used to break away. On the second, it costs 18 CP.
Chakra Cost: 14CP (Additional 3CP Per Post)

Name: Shadow Execution Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Description: This unique technique designed by Kurisu himself, is used to dispose of a Target, which has been affected by the Shadow Capture Technique. After the Jounin has joined his own shadow (or a shadow that he controls) with the Opponent's, and after he restricts movement, by wrapping said Shadow around the body, Kurisu will go through a string of seals. Through this, the Nara will release Chakra to the Shadows, agitating the darkness and allowing the restrictions to slacken slightly, as individual forms peel away to form extremely sharp, individual points. Then these Shadows plunge into the body, piercing through flesh continuously, overwhelming the Target's body with pain and damage, caused from multiple sides. Eventually, this Technique sheds enough blood to kill off the one affected by it. Only after two turns of being affected by the Shadow Capture Technique, can this Jutsu be used. This Jutsu kills the opponent on the third turn, if he fails to break away.
Shadow Execution ultimately lasts for three turns:
1st - Deals minor damage. Costs 20 CP to break.
2nd - Deals major damage. Costs 30 CP to break. The opponent will die 15 turns later, if he is not treated quickly.
3rd - Kills the opponent.
Chakra Cost: 20CP (Additional 5CP Per Post)

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Name: Lightning Style: The Gift of Birds
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Raiton
Description: The User will gather Chakra at his hand, forming little chick-like forms on his palm created purely out of Electricity. Upon throwing them towards a Target, these chicks expand into large bird forms, as big as a human head. They fly in a mostly straight line, though they can twist and turn at least 45 degrees to the left or the right, if necessary. When the Target comes into contact with them, they explode with radiance and electricity, shocking the opponent and causing minor burns, but also weak paralysis to the Body Parts affected. A maximum of 5 birds can be created.
Chakra Cost: 6CP (2CP per Bird)

Name: Lightning Style: The Gift of Blades
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Raiton
Description: The User will gather Chakra at his hands, clasping them together and moving them apart slowly, to reveal a large Orb, which is made purely out of Lightning. From it, the User will fire large, rod-like lightning shapes, resembling the look and properties of a Blade. Upon contact, the Blade will proceed to pierce through flesh, and cause shock as well as weak paralysis. The orb can move therefore the trajectories of the blades' change, though their flight is always a straight line. They are also stronger the closer the target. 5 Blades can be released at a time, every 30 seconds. Hypothetically, the User can release as many Blades as his Chakra Pool allows, though doing so would be costly as the Chakra Costs cannot be reduced via SCs.
Chakra Cost: 12 (3CP per Blade)

Name: Lightning Style: The Gift of Dragon
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Raiton
Description: The User will gather Chakra at his hands, clasping them together and moving them apart slowly, to reveal a large lightning form that begins to take shape quickly, under the User's watchful eyes. With a thunderous blast of sound, the Lightning form explodes in a radiant, powerful wave of electricity, revealing a Dragon-like shape that is twice the size of a human and three times the width. Capable of flight, or at least the appearance of such (since in truth, the shape is an intricate manipulation of Raiton), the User will order the shape to attack his Opponent. Due to the form's size, it can be difficult to avoid contact with the beast and upon said contact, the opponent will be seriously injured, feeling a powerful electric shock travel through the body, spreading a temporarily paralysis, that doubles Chakra costs on any Jutsu the Opponent performs, for the next three turns. This can be a repeated effect, as the Dragon remains intact upon contacting the target. However its rendered static for three turns, before it can move again, due to the need to recharge. Alternatively, the Dragon can explode in a powerful electrical release.
The explosion takes place in a 10 meter radius:
2.5 meter radius: Stops the Opponent's heart. A Medic or Medical Jutsu must be used on the target in the next 5 turns, or he/she will die.
5 meter radius: Causes serious burns. The target experiences an enormous electric shock which temporarily damages or paralyses muscles. As a result, the Opponent's Chakra costs are doubled for the next 4 turns.
7.5 meter radius: Causes strong burns. The target experiences a powerful electric shock which temporarily damages or paralyses muscles. As a result, the Opponent's Chakra costs are doubled for the next 2 turns.
10 meter radius: Causes substantial burns. The target experiences a sharp electric shock, which temporarily damages or paralyses muscles. As a result, the Opponent's Chakra costs are doubled for the next turn.
Chakra Cost: 24 (3CP to maintain the form) (8CP to recharge)

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Bumps. It's been a month laddos D:

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

Could post it in the Application Checking Topic.

Anyway, Tagged.

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The Hundred Sword Display, The Thousand Sword Display
Is the target able to avoid the illusionary swords in the said Genjutsu, or do they find themselves unable of moving and thus evading? In addition, how can someone perceive being under a Genjutsu and through what way can they break through?

Shadow Ambush Technique
I am afraid that you need to lessen the chakra wave radius and set a limit to how many shadows can be monitored. Otherwise, having every shadow around you in a 10 meter radius under your control can be proven overpowered and maybe claimed an S Rank. My opinion.

Shadow Execution Technique
If the said target ends up in this condition, then how exactly can they break away?

Lightning Style: The Gift of Birds
Can the flying birds change direction while in mid air, or can they only be thrown towards the opponent? How many can be thrown at a time? Like, is it one or more for each hand at a time?

Lightning Style: The Gift of Blades
Set a limit as to how many blades can be thrown. Infinitively throwing blades is too much, even if the chakra pool is not big enough to be used extensively. Also, state the frequency of the trown blades. I mean, can 10 blades be thrown in 5 seconds? Can one than one swords be thrown at a time?

Please take care of the issues I mentioned.

By the way, your techniques are awesome man. The Genjutsu Galore 287405

Keep it up.

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The Genjutsu in this topic should be changed to the new template provided by the Genjutsu Guide.

Code:: [b]Name:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Type:[/b]
[b]Medium:[/b]
[b]Range:[/b]
[b]Element:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b]
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b]

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So you just add Medium to your Genjutsu and you're fine. And maybe add some more staff that the description asks for in the new System.

Quote :

Description: The description should detail several things, and must always have these things. If they are not found in the description, you will be asked to edit them in.

How the Genjutsu is initiated. Usually done by hand seals, although can be performed by a focus, if the Genjutsu Range is a focus.
How many people it can effect at a maximum. Applies to Multi-target, Focus, and Area of Effect. After all, it would be impossible to juggle sustaining fifty people in a complex Genjutsu.
What the Genjutsu does. Should also detail what the Genjutsu looks like, what it tries to mimic and everything else to deal with the Genjutsu. Since most Genjutsu affect sight, the appearance of the Genjutsu is important.
Duration and Kai Release. Genjutsu may not last forever, and must have a maximum post duration. Else one could Gen-rape the afflicted for eternity. If there is a Duration, than the Genjutsu must have a maintaining fee in chakra. ie. 2CP per post. As for Kai Release, this is applicable for wide range Area of Effect Genjutsu more so than others. It entails if the Genjutsu is easier to break out of than others, and if it is, than how much chakra would be required in Kai to release it.

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For Shadow Ambush, if I changed the Radius to 5 and the Rank to A, would it be fine as it is?

Edited the Rest.

Also added Gift of Dragon.

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Quote :: For Shadow Ambush, if I changed the Radius to 5 and the Rank to A, would it be fine as it is?

That would be fine. But this entails extra chakra cost.

Lightning Style: The Gift of Dragon:
This can be approved but don't overdo it and be careful using it. It's very powerful.

On the whole, all Approved for Training.

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Blocking approval on the "Gift of Dragon" technique

That's basically just a mimic of Kirin, which is on our limited list as you well know Chris, with some minor edits to make it seem different. However on the whole, it's just another form of Kirin. Making it hard to dodge and making it have the potential to explode is basically what makes Kirin so powerful and this is what you've done with your Dragon, yet, you've made it even stronger by adding different forms of attack, forcing the opponents chakra cost to double and even allowing it to stay active on the battlefield after attacking. Way too overpowered. For now, consider this technique denied.

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Wasn't thinking about Kirin, but that's fine. And changed Shadow Ambush to A rank, with a 5 Meter Radius and 20 CP cost.

Thanks guys, I will see what I can do training wise.

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Activity Check
Has training been conducted for any of these jutsus?

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No I'm lazy/busy. D: I will get around to it soon.

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Name: Symbol - Peace
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Area of Effect
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: An original technique of the Jounin, 'Symbol - Peace' is a Genjutsu that affects a fairly large radius around the caster. By making a specific hand seal, the user will release a wave of Chakra, that stimulates the brains of others in a very detailed manner. Targeting emotions the Genjutsu will incline those affected, to feel more peaceful, their worries pushed away by a tranquility and silence that this Jutsu provides. As such, this Illusion is often cast among allies, prone to arguing or fighting with each other. If used often enough on the same target, it may cause a permanent change in Personality.
Chakra Cost: 11 + 2 Upkeep

Name: Symbol - Anger
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Area of Effect
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: An original technique of the Jounin, 'Symbol - Anger' is a Genjutsu that affects a fairly large radius around the caster. By making a specific hand seal, the user will release a wave of Chakra, that stimulates the brains of others in a very detailed manner. Targeting emotions, the Genjutsu will incline those affected to feel more angry, their worries, fears and stresses agitated and augmented, so that the targets will feel the need to release their steam. This Illusion is often used upon calm and calculating enemies, with the objective of making them act rashly, and thus become easier prey. On persons who fight using anger, this will only make them more vicious and harder to deal with. If used often enough on the same target, it may cause a permanent change in Personality.
Chakra Cost: 12 + 2 Upkeep

Name: Symbol - Confidence
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Area of Effect
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: An original technique of the Jounin, 'Symbol - Confidence' is a Genjutsu that affects a fairly large radius around the caster. By making a specific hand seal, the user will release a wave of Chakra, that stimulates the brains of others in a very detailed manner. Targeting emotions, the Genjutsu will incline those affected to feel braver, more confident in themselves or/and in their abilities. Those targeted are more likely to voice their thoughts and also, become more social as a result of the Illusion. Thus, this Genjutsu is mostly used among allies. If used often enough on the same target, it may cause a permanent change in Personality.
Chakra Cost: 10 + 2 Upkeep

Name: Symbol - Betrayal
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Area of Effect
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: An original technique of the Jounin, 'Symbol - Betrayal' is a Genjutsu that affects a fairly large radius around the caster. By making a specific hand seal, the user will release a wave of Chakra, that stimulates the brains of others in a very detailed manner. Targeting emotions, the Genjutsu will incline those affected to become more sly and devious, suddenly seeking independence or personal freedom. This may lead an individual to betraying their allies or in the least, caring less about said allies. For example, one affected by this Technique may not alert their ally of an incoming attack. As an Area of Effect technique, multiple targets can be affected - they will all become more prone to stabbing each other in the back, without the help of the Jounin. This technique is much stronger, if the person already harbors devious and traitorous desires. If used often enough on the same target, it may cause a permanent change in Personality.
Chakra Cost: 13 + 2 Upkeep

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