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Hateshini , Keiro

THE INFO.

Name: Hateshini, Keiro
Nickname:
  • Kei: A once used name by an very old friend. He doesn't go by this name anymore or as often as it was. The last time Keiro had actually heard this was one of the children he knew during his last few days in Konoha before his arrest


  • Konoha's Lightning Blade: Former. He was growing in the world of the shinobi as he rose in the ranks slowly but his skills made him stand out exponentially. His skills had had combined the raw power of his Taijutsu mixed in with his elemental affinity lightning. He was skilled and was on his way towards the next level in rank. Perhaps his reasoning for not becoming a jounin soon after he turned eighteen was due to the fact of his lack of motivation at the time.

Age: 24
Gender: Male
Appearance:
    Physiology :His body is his temple. This is perhaps one of his defining aspects of his whole being. Taijutsu has truly been a major influence in Keiro’s life so his body shows the uses of his body being kept up as a ‘temple’. He presents himself with a well defined body. He is not lanky in the slightest nor is he heavyset in muscle. He has the perfect balance of what most martial artist aim for. He has the lean features of what a lanky man has yet has the strength and capacity of what a very heavy set man has. This perfect mixture gives him a man that stays true to his diet and his teachings in martial arts. That is to say that he’s developed a very well toned body where he has a very powerful upper body and lower body without sacrificing the loss or gain of mass. His true asset, however, is his abdomens.

    A martial artist, weightlifter, athlete or even shinobi have a tendency of understanding and hold true to the basics of fundamentals of their particular art only forgetting that there is more to it than just the fundamentals. Keiro, at 5'11, understood long ago, even before his father or his other teachers had said that the body main point of balance is the abdomens. One can have the strongest arms, legs, back, calves and shoulders but with the weakest abdomen, that man will fall. There was no if’s, ands or buts about it. If Keiro where to show one his abdomen, they would see the definition of his ab. They appear to be showy that one would see in perhaps a movie or a bodybuilder’s competition. One can see the sharp edges of the oblique muscles, the “V” that one obtains when one has low levels of body fat.

    He has short, almost matted brown hair that is spiked at all edges. It does have a tendency (whenever wet) to spike up and it gives him a more of an excited, almost dazed and crazy. He has the eyes for it seeing they are a mystifying blue color. People have always wondered how his eyes could be so blue. They didn't have the light blue color that makes people sway over but rather a harsh blue color, a deep blue that almost resembles the deep waters of the ocean. It has a tranquil effect most of the time whenever he has a gentle smile or a sad look to him. This look can change entirely the moment his anger rises. He doesn't get upset much but his eyes almost appear to get darker and darker in blue tone. Some think that his eyes turn black but this cannot be concluded. Because of these traits that he wields, no one can deny that he isn't handsome. Many women, younger and older, have seen what his eyes can do to lure them over to him. His smile is charming, his looks are undeniably charming like his father but he has the mindset and body like a martial artist


    Style of Clothing: He's does put much of a conscious effort when he walks out of the room and into the public. He is not color blind, nor is he in it for the style but he surprisingly has good taste in clothing and doesn't mind wearing it regardless of the day or type of weather it is. It's truly about the mood. He didn't wear his clothes or anything that was extremely eccentric that would make people turn him off but rather wear it because he was careful in how he approached people and deduces what to wear and why he's wearing it

    It is perhaps his deduction and reasoning that determines what he wears. The deduction comes from the type of event he is going to. A group of friends would come up to him because maybe he found out that one friend has an almost increasing love for red and one for purple and he would simply mix these two colors color to get a good blend. Perhaps he would wear a cologne that would initially be a girl's favorite scent because it brings simple memories of the time in the past with his father. When he dressed, he dressed for a reason and not because of his feelings or others. In most cases, if he is not deducing anything or when he use to hang out with his closest of friends, he would wear a mostly relax attire only fitting himself a tank top, an unbutton shirt and loose athletic shorts or pants. He wasn't dressed to impressed anyone when it came to very close family and friends and he didn't need any deduction to know what they like and didn't like after living with them for most of his life.

    When he was Chunin ready to become Jounin, his shinobi attire was essentially a the usual a black shirt that went under his vest with the typical attire of pants and miscellaneous things that came along with it. He wasn't all that fond of the suit and later, before his arrest, his attire was one that matched ideally for the location and time of day. In most days, if the mission was in the morning, he would wear camouflage that suited the morning and he would wear camouflage that would suit the night. If it was something of a diplomatic thing, he would simply wear the chunin outfit only because it was the outfit that most people recognize as a symbol of Konoha. Again, this was a matter of simple deduction of wearing the attire for certain things.

    Now that he is a former shinobi from Konohagakure and escaped prison, he has found his way to be wearing his prisoners clothes and whatever it is that make him disappear. It has been a year since he's escape and right now his clothing changes with the customs of the people, the region and definitely the village.


Forehead Protector: In a satchel bag.
Originally, when Keiro was a loyal shinobi in Konohagakure, his headband was placed around his left arm. This had no particular meaning as to why he placed it around his arm but he felt that putting around his waist (being a taijutsu user and all) was too silly and putting it around his forehead was beyond ridiculous as there was no need for exemplify his status as a Konoha shinobi. He did, however, found use in his protector as a means of a weapon. He would wrap the cloth part tight around his hand while the metal plating would be in front of his knuckles creating a makeshift 'brass knuckles'. This was situational whenever he wanted to break something that could potentially harm his hand or if he wanted to give himself an edge in punching an opponent. Whenever it was mandatory, he would place it around his head but immediately remove it afterwords. This happened a lot in his teenage years being a small rebel without a cause.

After his arrest, his title, forehead protector and all his belongings had been confiscated from him. He had not seen his Konoha protector after that. He wouldn't want to wear it after that however as he sees wearing the symbol of Konoha as one still having loyalties to the village. Even if he had gotten it back, he would've thrown it away as the memory of the village hating him is still etched in him.

During his stay in Amegakure, certain events allowed him to find and carry a Kusagakure headband which he carries his satchel. He keeps his reasons of carrying it in there for a few reasons. As previously mention, it was situational to break something that could cut him but one reason he carries it is if he had (God forbid) loses a piece of information that could potentially cause an arrest, he can use a clever ruse to say that he was on a mission for Kusagakure. If anyone was to question as to why he carries it, he says that it was a memento from his father and carries it around for memory sake. Another reason is that he goes under the guise of a international businessman who has graduated and is now looking for a good opportunity to start a business and putting on the Kusagakure headband would just raise question to his story.

As time progresses and his plans begin to 'connect' sort of speak, he'll eventually try and get back a Konoha head protector and a Kumo head protector. In his future, he had plans on using those head protectors as a means of starting 'chaos'.

Personality: What is interesting about Keiro's personality isn't the fact that he can be funny at times or silent at times, it's the fact that he doesn't have a "tick" personality. One might call this type of persona of the random due to the fact that Keiro is probably more along the lines of someone who is extremely chaotic or extremely docile. It could be concluded that Keiro doesnt suffer from bi-polar but he isn't ever mad at anyone nor does he get depressed. IF we could categorize his personality, it's the fact that is quite sarcastic, laisidasical and very free of worries. He doesn't mind bouncing off the job for helping a few kids gather money or helping elderly. That's the most information about his tick persona that is known about him. He is quite a mystery in honesty

One thing that might seem like a turnoff to others but it's the fact that he can sometimes play stupid yet other times he probably one who is intelligent but lacks motivation. When he feels like hiding it, he'll play the stupid card, maybe do something to get away from the attention that he has some type of intelligence rolling within him. If he doesn't want to say anything intellectual, he'll be quiet and stay away from conversations and debates as such. He thinks of it as "too much of a hassle" and "it can get boring really quick". He does have a remarkable keen on things some people actually missed. There are certain things that bother him whenever there is something that is out of place and he can connect events that would normally occur maybe a second or two later just by simple calculation and deduction.

It is said that he can be happy-go-lucky but in that very state, he is also extremely destructive and chaotic when he wishes. As it was already stated, he doesn't get mad, he doesn't get depressed but he'll destroy things that will probably do harm to him in the near future. He likes doing that by performing destructive and powerful acts of chaos just so it wont bother him in the near future. He rarely does this however due to the fact that there appears to be nothing that bothers him. Things slide off him very well making him one of the most calm-headed people in Konoha and possibly other countries. If his situation would've been better (you know, the part where he wasn't accused of murdering three leaders and his father) he could've be a likely candidate for the Hokage position if anything were to happen to the current Hokage but of course he would've turn that down.

He has an odd tendency of smiling when a situation doesn't follow suit of the typical norm. In most cases, his smiles can be heart-felt but at the saem time there is only sarcasm in there. Even with that smile, he can show a good amount of disrespect towards people. His face, appearing hateful and unresolved is underneath a very sweet and very gentle towards nature. He does care about the world and everyone that inhabits it. He loves such things as a gentle breeze of the October sky, the soft rain peddling down in the spring, the sounds of cicadas on July summer night, he feels a certain type of harmony among these peaceful ideals. Those that threaten such disorder usually faces his wrath.

He doesn't necessarily like doing work. When he isn't practicing martial arts, he'll sleep around and hang about all over Konoha or around fire country. This gives him a lazy persona at first glance but he has sense of immediency when the time is right, a code following very close to Bushido. When battle is all, It is said in battle that the hollowness of his eyes intimidate such of the fiercess opponents. One has stated "It's like his eyes were God's eyes of judgement as he stared down at the scared earth. You first think it's sadness then mercy. You feel every emotion within those eyes and that's the most intimidating thing to look at" He draws probably a blank face, it's hard to tell due to there being very few who actually lived to tell the tale. This one was a man who died just a few minutes after getting attack by Keiro.

With that in mind, it is assumed that the word 'mercy' is not in his vocabulary. He has two types of mercy which involves death, of course, and a type of slow and tormented mental death that involves either removing something that was precious to the opponent. That way they'll remember such foolishness in engaging this being. Some have called him a demon


His relationship with people....is interesting. He can sound polite but underneath it is sarcasm. Some has described him as a person who could grab your throat and not think twice about, all with a coy smile and relentless blank face that has more than enough to kill you without him even squeezing your throat. Others has described his his voice something that is perhaps bored of life, the storm of internal depression deepens as he lives the life of a sad existence. Many have said that he sounds pretty cold and cruel, blissfully talking the amount of a harsh blizzard. Most of the time he sometimes sound exhausted or bored of things, almost as if life itself is quite boring but he enjoys talking like that to irritate someone who is of a serious nature. When someone is probably goofy, he'll act the opposite and be an asshole and serious. He does this out of the fun of probably irritating them. Those who have a higher status than him and that he respects (The kages for example) he'll tolerate them. He'll act a bit kinder in his talking. In his most neutral and probably relax form of speech, he sounds very calm and pleasant to hear.


Clan: N/A
Nindō: “If the world wants to be deceived, let it be deceived. Easier to move in the shadows. ”



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THE NINJA.

Origin: Born: Lightning Country; Raised: Konohagakure
Affiliation: None
Rank: B-Rank Nukenin
Specialties: Taijutsu: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Raiton; Katon
Combat Style: One that adapts to everything: This methodology could be the fault of the first few masters Keiro have taught him. His father, in one case, decided it be best for the young man to learn not only the best skills of one martial art but take the very foundations of many styles and use that to create his own. He has the natural talent of ‘monkey see, monkey do’, looking at a martial arts, figuring out the basics and incorporate it into his fighting style. The style, once in combat, is used more and more as a way of seeing inside the mind of the opponent. He can get the feel of the opponents next move by looking at the little things the person will do next. It would best to say that he is good at anticipation. For example, when one looks into the eyes of the opponent, they are missing out on the subtleties a person is doing below the eyes: A small twitch of the figure, a little twist of the waist determining whether one is going left, right, straight or backward. Even the placement of one’s feet can determine where one will go. Just like a game of strategy, one must make and create moves on the spot and not let anything slip by him.

His skills revolve around Taijutsu and Ninjutsu. His preferred style is really close up and personal with the person but he learned early in his life that close range can have it's ups and downs. He uses Ninjutsu as a way to test out the waters, to see how their his opponents react or how they would respond at first. If the situation calls for a Taijutsu to test out the waters, so be it but his first reactions in situations to use Ninjutsu. His Taijutsu revolves around killing strikes, more align towards killing someone silently without the use of chakra so that he may leave something behind (for instance chakra residue). He can deliver powerful blows to the body that is specialized in brute, outer force damage or go more precised and do internal, structure damage to the body. He may not be a medical shinobi and can go deep in skill but he has a very good understanding of the anatomy and physiology of the body knowing what their bodies can and cannot do and therefore has a good estimation on certain weaknesses of the body.
Special Characteristics:
Strength
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Speed
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Endurance
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
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Roleplay Sample: excerpt from my fanfic

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THE ARSENAL.

Kit
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Academy Jutsus
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Taijutsu
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Raiton Ninjutsu
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Katon Ninjutsu
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Non-Elemental Ninjutsu
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FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Yoochun / Lightning Tiger
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Name: Swiftness
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: With the taijutsu spec and a speed SC added, a user can use this technique. Focusing on chakra control, in a side to side or front to back motion (Linear), the user can move roughly 5m on whatever the original point. This is done by using chakra control training to concentrate chakra to the legs and feet for this movement. The idea behind swiftness is more for placement. Think of in the game of chess where placing the knight in a position to put the king in check or to take another power piece off the board. Swiftness allows the user to move around the area with precision. What it goes for in precision, it falls off in attacking. Because of the amount of control it surmounts to, the user is unable to attack during this movement.

Though this technique can be used multiple times in most cases, excessive use can be noticeable on the chakra and end up slowing down the user. Should be used rarely and only when needed, even then in short bursts. This moment is quick, and can cause the users image to somewhat blur, but not entirely. Those with a taijutsu dominant can use this for an extended time, as long as they have the chakra to do so. It should also be noted that this technique is not invisible movement and anyone can clearly see the user moving.
As we have the SC, and the additional speed burst is similar to the Body Flicker Technique, I am going to suggest we remove this one as we do not mix additional boosts onto the Special Characteristics.

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[b]Name:[/b] Konoha Kaiganshou - Leaf Demolishing Rock
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m)
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] After bracing his or her forearm, the user will launch themself towards his or her opponent and deliver a powerful elbow thrust. This can send the target flying back a good several feet.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 10
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[b]Name:[/b] Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m)
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. This move is used before preforming "Omote Renge - Front Lotus" or "Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo".
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 4
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[b]Name:[/b] Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b]  Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original. Because the chakra of each clone is evenly distributed, the user and each clone will contain the same amount of chakra after deducting the initial chakra cost. All remaining chakra on the clone after it is dispersed is refunded to the user. Clones automatically disperse if their chakra supply hits zero, but are not influenced by the 10 chakra minimum for survival.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 15 (Per clone)

These are the new jutsu from the updated encyclopedia.


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Name: Shockwave
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid
Element: Raiton
Description: The user concentrates there chakra into the hands. Once the user claps the hands together, the chakra releases a small shockwave towards the opponents. This is a type of jutsu that can be used to stun a large wave of enemies. It's potency doesn't come from the amount of damage it causes. When one comes in contact with the shockwave, they receive the tantalizing sting of a mild inducing taser volt. Literally like the title states, the jutsu releases a wave that shocks a multitude of people rather than one person.
Chakra Cost:
Missing a distance, as well as a Chakra Cost.

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Name: Bureijinguhitto - Blazing Hit
Rank: D
Type: Nin / Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m)
Element: Katon
Description: Bureijinguhitto is a ninjutsu and taijutsu combination utilizing the fire element. By charging a small amount of chakra to the dominant fist, the user is able to ignite their hand so that it's enveloped in a glove of fire. By delivering a punch to their opponent, the user is able to add on a burning effect to the location that has been hit. The fire will only be visible on the top of the hand, covering the top of the fingers, knuckles and hand.
Chakra Cost: 3
What is the severity of the burn?

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Name: Honoo Ha - Flaming Leaves
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
Element: Katon
Description: Honoo Ha is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After performing the required handseals, the user will be able to launch out three oak tree shaped leaves made up of fire from their mouth. It takes a triangle formation, one fire leaf at the front and two following behind it. The leaves are capable of burning the opponent and their clothing, however, the user must ensure that they are within ten metres of the opponent. For once the fire leaves pass this limit, they will simply fade away.
Missing a Chakra Cost.

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Name: Shōmei Heirō - Illuminating Halo
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
Element: Katon
Description: Shōmei Heirō is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After performing the required handseals, the user is able to call forth a ring of fire above their head. This halo - like ring has the same circumference as the users head and is also able to light up a ten metre radius around the user. It's often called a golden ring, due to the perfect ring having golden - yellow flames occupying it. At the centre of the ring an oak tree leaf made of fire is found, it's used for a sequence attack.
Missing a chakra cost. If this is around the user, then they're in the center, so does that mean they are essentially standing on fire? o.O You do realize they'll be burning too, right? You'll also have to give this a recharge cost if you're using it in unison with the following technique.

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Name: Gōruden Ikari no Ha - Golden Leaves of Fury
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
Element: Katon
Description: Gōruden Ikari no Ha is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After having the Illuminating Halo active the user is able to perform the sequence attack in case of danger arising. In order to do so, the golden oak tree leaf made up of fire, will rise up from the centre of the halo and begin to launch seven copies of itself towards the users opponent. No handseals need to be performed, a simple point towards the target is enough for the fire leaves to be directed. If hit, the target will be met with minor burns on the skin and possibly have their clothes set alight. Once the technique has been performed, the golden leaf will settle back into the centre of the halo where it must recharge for two posts.
Chakra Cost: 5
What are the sizes of the leaves? When it comes to this jutsu, you can only use no seals if you have the SC, therefore, may you please alter?

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Name: Konoha no Hōkō - Konoha's Roar
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m), Far (10m+)
Element: Katon
Description: Konoha no Hōkō is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After performing the required handseals, the user will be able to launch out a lions head made up of fire at their opponent. Only one head can be shot out at a time and a maximum of three per post, the head also takes the appearance of a lions with it's mouth open, giving it an intimidating effect. If hit, the target could be met with severe burns and their clothes set alight.
Chakra Cost: 12
How far is their range before they dissipate? You will need additional Chakra Costs for each lion's head shot out per post. i.e. +5 Chakra per additional lion

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Name: Hi no Ishi - Will of Fire
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0 - 5m)
Element: -
Description: Hi no Ishi is a ninjutsu technique utilizing no element. Performing the tiger hand seal alone, the user is able to concentrate a large amount of chakra within them, to then release it outwards into a shock wave of chakra. The burst of chakra will go out towards a five metre radius before it finally begins to fade away. Anyone caught within the blast will be pushed out by the chakra and thrown out of the five metre radius. It's also a technique that can be used to deflect incoming projectiles from all angles. Once the technique has been performed, the user must wait for another two posts before it can be used again, the technique can also not distinguish between friend and foe.
Chakra Cost: 15
This is essentially a fuuton element technique that you have cleverly phrased. I will have to ask you to remove it for me.

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PostSubject: Re: Hateshini, Keiro [B-rank Nukenin] Hateshini, Keiro [B-rank Nukenin] EmptyFri 20 Apr 2012, 11:56 am

The jutsus you listed

-Hi no Ishi - Will of Fire
-Konoha no Hōkō - Konoha's Roar
-Gōruden Ikari no Ha - Golden Leaves of Fury
-Shōmei Heirō - Illuminating Halo
-Bureijinguhitto - Blazing Hit

were under the categories of the canon jutsu. I didn't think much of them at the time seeing that I was copying and pasting them and they looked interesting in terms of what they do. Seeing that these are apart of the US canon and you, as an admin, questioned them makes me very worried as the rper so I decided to remove them all together.

The canon jutsu that were re-worked, however, not in question, were edited

And the Swiftness jutsu has been removed.
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A Blind Watcher wrote:
The jutsus you listed

-Hi no Ishi - Will of Fire
-Konoha no Hōkō - Konoha's Roar
-Gōruden Ikari no Ha - Golden Leaves of Fury
-Shōmei Heirō - Illuminating Halo
-Bureijinguhitto - Blazing Hit
Just to bump in here, you're right Watcher, all of these techniques are approved and belong to the Konohagakure Specific Techniques. Becky's just putting herself on work overload again and must have forgotten that they're actually approved techniques.
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DARI~! D<


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[b]Name:[/b] Honoo Ha - Flaming Leaves
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
[b]Element:[/b] Katon
[b]Description:[/b] Honoo Ha is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After performing the required handseals, the user will be able to launch out three oak tree shaped leaves made up of fire from their mouth. It takes a triangle formation, one fire leaf at the front and two following behind it. The leaves are capable of burning the opponent and their clothing, however, the user must ensure that they are within ten metres of the opponent. For once the fire leaves pass this limit, they will simply fade away.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 4
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[b]Name:[/b] Shōmei Heirō - Illuminating Halo
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
[b]Element:[/b] Katon
[b]Description:[/b] Shōmei Heirō is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After performing the required handseals, the user is able to call forth a ring of fire above their head. This halo - like ring has the same circumference as the users head and is also able to light up a ten metre radius around the user. It's often called a golden ring, due to the perfect ring having golden - yellow flames occupying it. At the centre of the ring an oak tree leaf made of fire is found, it's used for a sequence attack.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 7
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[b]Name:[/b] Gōruden Ikari no Ha - Golden Leaves of Fury
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
[b]Element:[/b] Katon
[b]Description:[/b] Gōruden Ikari no Ha is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After having the Illuminating Halo active the user is able to perform the sequence attack in case of danger arising. In order to do so, the golden oak tree leaf made up of fire, will rise up from the centre of the halo and begin to launch seven copies of itself towards the users opponent. After preforming the tiger seal, one can direct the leaves by a simple point of the finger. If hit, the target will be met with minor burns on the skin and possibly have their clothes set alight. Once the technique has been performed, the golden leaf will settle back into the centre of the halo where it must recharge for two posts.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 5 + 2 for recharge
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Bureijinguhitto - Blazing Hit
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Nin / Taijutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m)
[b]Element:[/b] Katon
[b]Description:[/b] Bureijinguhitto is a ninjutsu and taijutsu combination utilizing the fire element. By charging a small amount of chakra to the dominant fist, the user is able to ignite their hand so that it's enveloped in a glove of fire. By delivering a punch to their opponent, the user is able to add on a burning effect equivalent to that of a scalding tea kettle to the location that has been hit. The fire will only be visible on the top of the hand, covering the top of the fingers, knuckles and hand.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 3
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Konoha no Hōkō - Konoha's Roar
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m)
[b]Element:[/b] Katon
[b]Description:[/b] Konoha no Hōkō is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After performing the required handseals, the user will be able to launch out a lions head made up of fire at their opponent. Only one head can be shot out at a time and a maximum of three per post, the head also takes the appearance of a lions with it's mouth open, giving it an intimidating effect. If hit, the target could be met with severe burns and their clothes set alight.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 12 + 3 per head after the initial

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Thank you kindly for that.

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Thank you for a lovely application.

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PostSubject: Re: Hateshini, Keiro [B-rank Nukenin] Hateshini, Keiro [B-rank Nukenin] EmptySat 21 Apr 2012, 4:14 am

Surprisingly, I only have tiny little nitpicks to deal with.

Quote :
Shockwave
Please elaborate how long the stunning in this jutsu lasts. Also, does it shock wave out in a circle; or in a straight line?

Oh, and you may add an additional Kit if you'd like. Maybe a regular Chuunin Kit? Like I said, just a few small nitpicks. I would have relayed this message to you through Becky via Skype, but alas you were not online at the time. Apologies for holding up the app.
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PostSubject: Re: Hateshini, Keiro [B-rank Nukenin] Hateshini, Keiro [B-rank Nukenin] EmptySat 21 Apr 2012, 4:36 am

Not a problem good sir.

For the Shockwave technique, it's a straight line. I saw it in my head as a straight line and not really as an circle. I suppose it could be a circle but I prefer it to be linear. The effect is a momentary stun so a post? I hope that maybe of some help. I edited this in.

As terms for the kit, to make it a bit more difficult for my character, I only wanted him to have a kunai kit seeing that he would naturally scourge around the dead bodies of his captors and find kunai. Having the chunin kit makes it feel as though I'm still in a village so that is why I withhold against giving him that particular kit.
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PostSubject: Re: Hateshini, Keiro [B-rank Nukenin] Hateshini, Keiro [B-rank Nukenin] EmptySat 21 Apr 2012, 4:55 am

@ Shockwave; M'kay. I was just confused; since shock waves (like those in explosions) can create either a circular pulse or a wave-like pules. Twas my only confusion.

@ Kits; Fair enough. Without further stalling:

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