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Name: Grimoire Kessho
Nickname:
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance: Grimoire stands at a height of 5’5 without his shoes, often judge to have very stunning looks and a body to kill for, dark tone blonde hair and purple tips of his bangs ranging from layers of different lengths from the back front and sides. His side bangs are considered the longest of his hair style ranging close to covering his neck entirely, his front ones are mid length normally covering his eyes when un-styled but pushed to side when styled, the back length is the shortest of the angles, naturally spiking upward away from his skull. His skin is a mid-dark tan, slightly healthier even tint then pale pink. No discoloration or scars or ache, smooth texture feels though out his body’s skin.
His eyes range from a light lavender to dark metallic purple depending on the light that is mirrored off from his irises. His eye size is slightly larger than normal human with a good, strong jaw and high cheek bones giving him the male model-esque structure. Grimoire has semi thin eye brows that matches his natural blond hair color giving him somewhat of a feminine look. With the frame work of his ectomorph body type, one would describe that his muscular was that of a cross between a swimmer and a gymnasts, his entire body is lean and tone, with well defined (but not bulky) muscles of medium mass. It may not be strange but strange to others but the one odd attribute of is body type would be hiss broad shoulders.
What sets apart Grimoire’s body from other normal athletic types is the noticeable leanness of his physique and slight broadness of their shoulders. One could often be fooled by this because of the broadness of his shoulders and expect his body to be well in tuned with it but the illusion stops there when Grimoire reveals more of his body. His general demeanor is that of sometimes absent minded, glaring eyes into what seems like empty space at times with his body shifting in motion frequently or playing with his body, not one to stand still really as he tends to wonder with his eyes thinking outside his current reality and simply dreaming off into whatever fantasy world, playing fully dancing. However upon being forced to leave his blissful state, the boy can at often stare down with the best of them with a look of determination and focused. In times of dire need his claim almost air head appearance to be one as cold as ice. His teeth are as snow white due to intensive dental care with the two canine teeth sharpened to fangs like measures for his own self enjoyment and nice effect for Halloween.
Clothing: His clothing entirely tends from the same type of clothing, a black and white tight black top shirt hanging from his shoulder and stopping just under then bottom of his pecs slightly over his upper abs, leaving his lower mid and lower torso entirely exposed, colored patterned with greenish yellow and cerulean blue with a black bow in the front connecting to his lighter shoulder pads tied together with his families emblem on the center of the ribbons. He wears low cut black and silver cargo pants under his waist line, with its ties hanging freely to the wind, sliver outlines from the knee area that go jagged giving a wild feel to it. The pants end just after the knee leaving the rest of his legs from the mid-calf down exposed. His shoes are simple black boots. He also wears two black leather gloves; right hand is fingerless while left hand is not finally he wears his own symbol from his child hood. One sliver earning on his right side. Not much coverage underneath his pants though as he finds undergarments constricting though his fixed pants provides enough support to prevent those uncomfortable movements for guys.
Accessories: Grimoire wears a single gold loop earring on his right ear lobe at its center and his a single shining re-in forced sliver amulet hanging tightly around his neck as a choker, the center piece is that of a heart shaped amethyst crystal the size of his Adam’s apple with bat wings to each of the sides of it that is as. His head band is wore on his waist facing his left hip on an angel, still holding the unscratched symbol as he hasn't had the drive to marking himself a traitor.
Extra: Wearing a thin coat of black lip stick with simple makeup as with naturally thick eye liner underneath his eyes while dipping his pointed finger nails in ebony nail polish with both and under coat and top coat for shine.
Personality: Grimoire is extremely flirtatious and has an extreme lustful attitude towards all manner of life, often losing himself and thoughts in the lust of worldly pleasures and the company of other bodies rather than be alive or dead. Looking on at anymore to be his next big score or simply expressing himself in the vaguer manner, he simply enjoys his own physical form as he plays with every muscle and curve that he worked so hard to achieve. He is quite vain about his appearance and cherished it most above all else in this life, losing friends, family or the rest of his reality means nothing unless there is something to fro him to gaze upon. Perhaps it is this sort of obsession that has increased his passion into the medical world as the very study the human body is a type of candy that intoxicates his wildest dreams into the deepest sensual arc of his limits. It is this simple factor that drives him to understand more on the human body which can be a good thing for him but upon others it may be something to fear as it could well go into sadism later in the future.
Kindness, generosity and honour mean little to this slightly sadistic boy, unless it somehow manages to benefit him well for his needs. Because of his chameleon ways he can simply adapt his personality and mannerism to whatever would trick others into doing his bidding. This is a part of his nature of being also an actor in the world of life. He simply does not keep a basic personality that most children his age does but rather keeps using different personas for his own personal desires. Grimoire may keep this persona in the long run as this isn’t just a sign of immaturity but rather a sign of further sadism and manipulation.
He keeps this illusion as a cover; a mask over the true nature of his true ‘tick’ personality. Deep down, the boy is a broken version of the kind hearten person that he once was, painfully masking himself in the paint of vanity where slowly he loses the sense of humanity that he was given. He was once simply the kind-hearted child that was obedient towards his elders. One would have never seen him to become an over-sexualized teenager.
It is best to describe Grimoire a bit more on his manipulation He is also known to be quite manipulative to all other he sees worthy, often using charm on those who are extremely weak willed and the stronger one’s will is to his charm the more of a challenge he seeks. Even amongst himself there is an overwhelming sensation that he needs to fill in order to feel alive to which is to his own wordily pleasure of the physical body, the thrill of driving down a nail of sensuality into his victims and the ecstasy of his own beauty. Often the young man will consistently showcase himself off only to remind himself of his own illusion; a creature who is a walking coma where he can't seem understand that those around him are not figments of his imagination but actually living beings. Because of Grim's condition, he doesn't truly understand that his actions effects other people so he playfully enjoys himself to the chaos that come with reckless thoughts though at the same time carefully making sure that his favourite fantasy, such as friends, lovers of the night and strong foes don't shatter too soon, allowing him to play with them later with some form as mercy or the idea of "Unnecessary killing". However if this phantoms prove too troublesome to deal with or may cause his dreams issues that Grim won't hesitate to personally remove them from his reality.
Clan: Kessho
Nindō: “Lets have some fun”
THE NINJA.
Origin: Born in Kumo
Affiliation: None
Rank: C rank Nukenin
Specialties: Medical, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Raiton, Donton
Combat Style: Grimorie is a combatant medic who utilizes his medical and his clan's techniques, to kill or keep his enemies at bay at a distance. His style is, out of the group he is with, the most flexible. With Shōton, Grimorie uses large scale techs to change the battlefield that would favor him or his teammates more, freely using a kind of sources to amplify and overwhelm his foes before they get the chance to get close to him. He can use his shoton as means of defense by shielding his allies from physical and some chakra-based harm and can use his attacks offensively where it can not only be used against single based targets but multiple targets as well.
Tactic wise he tries to keep the attacks confusing to which the opponent would need to be on their toes. This manner is more so based off of impulse rather than trained patterns, which make him an unpredictable fighter even to his partners when fighting alongside him. Sometimes he’ll have to switch to the medic persona where he needs to sit on the sidelines and watch as the group do what they do best, in a world were Tai jutsu seems to be the new tread of fighters Grims's Stamina isn't one to be on the better side of his abilities. Taking a lot of hits would harm himself and his beloved beauty so at all cost does this man try to avoid damage in some shape or form rather than blocking it himself.
Special Characteristics:
Advanced Chakra Control
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Name: Advanced Chakra Control.
Rank: D-S
Type: Chakra Based.
Physical Requirements: Must specialize in Medical Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, and must not have an Increased Chakra Capacity or Bijuu.
Training Requirements: 700.
Description: An exceptional attribution that one is innately born with and further invokes during the course of their training. Chakra Control is key to preserving your stamina which will increase your vitality and enable you to use techniques to it's fullest capacity. It is essential for nearly all specialties of Ninjutsu but is heavily coveted in the areas of Medical Ninjutsu and Genjutsu which require good chakra in order to perform their techniques proficiently. Those with Advanced Chakra Control however are able to take it to the next step and preserve more noticeable chakra from their standard pool. Depending on the rank of the technique, a small quantity of chakra is preserved within the body when executed the Jutsu, which ultimately lowers the cost of your techniques. Furthermore because your Chakra Control is so flawless and exceptional, your Surface Walking and Water Walking techniques no longer cost chakra because you can now perform them effortlessly. This technique does not lower the cost chakra points going towards maintaining a jutsu, only creating them. D - 1 cp reduced.
C - 2 cp reduced.
B - 4 cp reduced.
A - 8 cp reduced.
S - 12 cp reduced.
Clan Prodigy
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Name: Clan Prodigy
Rank: C
Type: Chakra Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a innate talent for the manipulation of clan based techniques and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the the clans abilities has become so considerable that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy by the clan elders. Because of this, the user's clan based attacks are 20% more destructive with their increased power and size.
Evasion- Spoiler:
Name: Evasiveness
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: None.
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and dodging basic forms of physical attacks by reading an enemies movement.
THE BACKGROUND.
History:
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Childhood Arc:
Grimoire and his family held normality to their lives during the first three years of his birth, living within village of Kumo where his family was well known thanks to their flower shop and medicine shop. Often it was mistake for them for one of the more noble branches of the clan due to them being scattered throughout the area. However they were like for the most part a black sheep of the family, often different and consider strange to the main public eye and looked away from if it was not important to asked something of them. They were still part of the family but just that if seemed like they weren’t there at all most of the time. This was not an issues with Grimoire and two parents. His father remarried a local girl that wasn’t that kind to the boy but they were Married and living together after Grimoire’s mother died giving birth to him and no one really paid much attention to it ,Grimoire how disliked his new step mother intensity for not only replacing his own memories of whom his father belonged to but also to the unkind treatment that he got from the witch.
A dream leading him become a ninja like his late mother, a medical officer known to save the lives of those that dishearten her for her husband and despite the gifted powers of his blood Grimoire would work just as hard as everyone else, not wanting any kind of special treatment or to be looked down upon. As such he discussed it with his father and which that give him a personal record utterly different from his actually birth, though a few pulled strings and other measures he was given an different identify and sent off away from all he knew into a different academy to train while under the goose of a different identity.
Academy Arc:
It was a gruelling start for Grimoire but it all evened out once he learned how to adapted to much of the changes from being treated from strangers now to people he trusted with his education. Much of the time he spent there was training, friends were already made and groups were formed at a much younger age so Grimoire was a bit of an outcast, he talked to many people and considered them audience’s and play mates but not many as close friends. He was confident about himself. He got the hang of things at the age of 10 and from then on tried to work on his social skills a little more then his ninja training. Didn’t come easy at all, overly blunt with people that just met him, often trying too hard to become friends with people that only wanted nothing to do with him. And of course the love note here and there which Grimoire had no interesting in from the ladies childish affections, which at that age all took personal offense to. But a few setbacks and detentions he managed to find himself a close nit of friends that were just different, fun and friendly to him for him. They were really a smart bunch aside from Grimoire getting the10th highest grades out of the thrity of them also a better ninjustus as well.
Though a social laid back person that didn’t mind taking second in command and being ordered around. He of course focus on a lot of the book work but soon deeply went into focusing on his body as the age of puberty, changing all over and building mass like never before as well as getting tired of began picked on for being a wimp he trained long and hard to get physical stronger, he was always talented with chakra control and learned soon how to use it to his advantage. Graduation came to him at the age of 13, ranking 10th out of his age class Grimoire and his family was proud of him. Proudly wearing his head band on the top of his head tied under his hair.
Genin Arc:
Grimoire ranked as a genin now spends much of his time working on perfecting his own skills and talents being that of an outside village and improving everything that was taught to him. Much of the time the boy spent what time he could afford on smaller class E missions for just the money and for the time it allowed him to just stay near the village where his studies continued for himself, part time also working late nights with the adults in the hospital were his medical prowess bloomed further and stronger soon finding a suitable medical nin to train him and his ever demanding attention. It was fun for the most part where he and his new buddy tended to spends whole days just talking or training for what was to become Grimoire’s career. Often times he thought about giving up the ninja life and just become a doctor to fully devote his time the craft.
But his elders knew better then to allow this boy to waste such drive by not having him on the flied as a nin, persistence won over the youth as Grimoire after much time forgot the idea of no longer having his fun as a tool of the state. Soon enough Grimoire was physical ready able to learn medical based justu, surprisingly enough the boy picked up the different style of justu very quickly, taking days for learning simple exercise that would normally take mouths to learn by himself with nothing more then a scroll and dead matter. Grimoire was fully aware of the fact his progress was more advance then it should have been, something his teacher foolish made the mistaking of making by praising him so much. As the result Grimoire drive was fuelled to near insanity as his life style changed from being a average kid trying to find himself in common society to that of an obsessive workaholic shutting himself in by his own abilities.
Genin to Nuknin arc
As he worked at the hospital many times over with the doctors teaching him their ways Grimoire came to a certain conclusion that had welled up inside of him as a thought that bloomed into a idea and there after an obsession, A case which happened so recently was a wounded nin appearing before their village gates while Grimoire and his boss were strolling around the front on their way to a small town for ingredients, once there the doctor found the injured man near the brink of death. Grimoire the sadistic child that he was wanted to keep the man’s body for study and experimentation as any other blood driven nin should have done in that day and age. However do something ungodly reason the doctor patched the bastard up and prevented his student from such cruel desires, calling them monstrous. It was a strange choice to allow a solider from a enemy village but passing it a mere gesture the young nin paid it little mind as the foreign person left in smiles. IT was only when Grimoire and his teacher reached the nearby town that they heard of a murder involving person reassembled closely to the one that they had patched up. The town’s morals and social code were destine to stop any person from achieve true perfection. To his own art that was the greatest betrayal to his promise, There seemed little he could do however with the issues of being able to learn how to be actually do what he wants, A person could only take their studies so far alone. Grimoire had to find a way as his home village was slowly infesting his own choices to something else.
The Chance to learn of such outside methods to his madness came in the form of a strange yet enticing adult that he found in the back ally wrapped in bloody coat and stains lying near lifeless on that paved cement, He was near death to the point of his body being useless for study soon enough, Grimoire repaired the sleeping idiot just enough for him to live through the pain, however that was underestimation of great calibers considering the training Grimoire had gone through, the stranger soon was able to move and speak freely before leaving the area escaping. Grimoire simply amazed fact this person could move so easily with those wounds chose to follow such a stranger into whatever locations he was heading. The two argued a few times along the way asking why the medic as so edger to follow a utter stranger so far, the boy only replied with a smile and arrogant behavior that if he didn’t take him away from his village he screamed he was being kidnapped to which the stranger just ignored him and allowed the genin to follow him. Eventually learning they were both ninja he agreed to teach Grim in exchange for hunting chicken. Strange request yes but it was an decent escaped into a different type of advantage for the medical child, a chance to see the rest of the world while still learning how to become a ninja, though was it worth it leaving behind such goods like a home, friends and family? Well it didn’t matter now as they were a good ways away from kumo and the dawn broke on the eve of the new day in his life.
Roleplay Sample:
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The sun was setting over Oliver Town as the figure emerged from one of many back alleys onto market street gradually making his way down the hill into tram common, taking in the familiar and the new. As per usual the figure was cloaked, keeping to the shadowed side of the street as silently she walked into the common, squinting. The sun may have been disappearing but it was still bright, even behind the dark shades that were perched on his nose, hidden from view from the shadow of her hood. Things didn't seem to have changed too much in recent years, the market stalls and shops were still here although in process of being packed up and away in the dieing light of the sun. Citizens she recognised, older now. No one in particular merely fleeting glimpses of people he had acquainted in his youth while living here. That he knew, however recent times, years passed he had lost, broken memories of people, places and conflicts long past. Ironic, how he had gained the ones he had sought years ago and lost the years he had sought them in.
The pale complexioned man had changed unlike the world around his. Bruising around his eyes indicating a lack of sleep, thinner and with less muscle tone to his then before. A pair of scars sitting under her bottom lip, pocketed and the causation gently chewing on the said lip as the man found himself leaning against a nearby wall, watching the stalls close, the busy common gently receding with the sun. Still there he stood, one boot planted on the wall behind his and his arms crossed over the chest trying to remember the people he had forgotten and their actions here. The demon like child remembered the house he had owned here, remembered its purpose for jobs, payment and moments peace in the chaos of his old life. Owned but long since lived, the Jungle had been his home, there he had resided to eat, to sleep and various other routines between jobs and presumably the battles she kept seeing flashes of in his head. Tall buildings, small armies, explosions and lots of blood. The number 0 came to mind but no face or name came in association.
Only after the moon rose and with it a disturbing screech did he shift. Elongated ears flickered beneath their cover, pin-pointing the sound to have come from the edge of the town bordering the woods. And so a fingerless gloved hand slipped from the dark sleeves, removing the shades from their perch and pocketing them, revealing the grey cat like eyes to the still, clear night where the full moon gave light to the faint silver streaks now present in his midnight obsidian hair. Silently the man walked towards the focal point of the sound, hidden amongst the dark of the night, so the citizens still paid no attention to he as Mira wandered through the streets and out through the gap in the wall to the woods beyond where the mysterious noise had come from.
THE ARSENAL.
Academy Jutsus
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them.
Chakra Cost: Equivalent to the cost of the opposing jutsu +2
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Shōton Jutsus
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Name: Kesshō Hari | Crystal Needles
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Shōton (Crystal Release)
Description: Ransu Kesshō is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. This jutsu allows the user to creates long, sharp, and pointed bright pink and white crystals that shoot at the target at extremely high speeds with pinpoint accuracy.
Chakra Cost: 3CP
Name: Kesshō no Yoroi | Crystal Armour
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Shōton (Crystal Release)
Description: Kesshō no Yoroi is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. This technique allows the Kesho member to cover their skin with a thin sheet of crystal, protecting themselves from blunt attacks. This armour can also aid the member to perform stronger physical attacks.
Chakra Cost: 5CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Kesshō Chōeki-ha | Crystal Imprisonment Wave
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Shōton (Crystal Release)
Description: Kesshō Chōeki-ha is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. The user sends out a wave of chakra that encases small objects such as bugs or weapons in crystal, halting them whilst airborne and making them fall to the grown and shatter.
Chakra Cost: 5CP
Name: Kesshō toge o Seichō Sa Seru | Growing Crystal Thorn
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Shōton (Crystal Release)
Description: Kesshō toge o Seichō Sa Seru is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. The user creates growing thorn-like crystals that continuously grow towards the opponent's direction.
Chakra Cost: 5CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Suishō Rō | Jade Crystal Prison
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Shōton (Crystal Release)
Description: Suishō Rō is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. The user summons crystalizes the space around a target completely encase a single target in crystal. If a person was so unlucky to be encased in the crystal then they will have quite a hard time breaking free from it, if the crystal itself was broken and a person was encased within it, then that segment of crystal would be destroyed allowing the victim to have free movement where they were once trapped.
Chakra Cost: 8CP
Name: Suishō Tō | Jade Crystal Blade
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Shōton (Crystal Release)
Description: Suishō Tō is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. With this technique the user can quickly form a blade made of crystal on their arm, and use it in a manner reminiscent of a Tantō. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed.
Chakra Cost: 3CP
Name: Maguilty Rite
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Medium (0m - 10m)
Element: Shōton (Crystal Release)/ Eijutsu
Description: One of Grimoire’s own created jutsu, this creates several crystal shards that form around the user before firing at the target that he desires, if hit upon contact with a target’s flesh it will cut like any bladed projectile however with medical infused chakra to the shards intend to attack the nerve receptors that rely pain through out there senses and heighten it by 10%, making all other damage infected on them much more painfully for 2 posts. Each shard is the size of a kunai and has the same strength, the number he can create is the number as chakra used.
Costs the User: C (5) | Creates 5
Costs the User: B (10) | Creates 10
Costs the User: A (20) | Creates 20
Costs the User: S (35) | Creates 30
Name: Omiwatari | The God's Crossing
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Shōton (Crystal Release)
Description: Omiwatari is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. The user places their hand on a surface, creating a long stream of sharp crystals to bind and pierce a target.
Chakra Cost: 8CP
Non-Elemental
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Name: Oiroke no Jutsu • Otoko no Ko Doushi - Sexy Technique • Guy Companions
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: After first creating a shadow clone, the user and the clone then transform into two completely naked and seductive young men in a suggestive embrace. This technique is normally used to titillate and knock unconscious perverted adults.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Execution by kiss
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu acts very similar to that Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu where the user is able to drain the physical and spiritual energy out of their foes by simply embracing them with a kiss, so long as they kiss in active the user will continue to drain chakra each post.
Chakra Cost:
Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (3)
Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (7)
Costs the User: A (20) | Takes From Target: B (13)
Costs the User: S (35) | Takes From Target: A (23)
Medical
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Name: Shousen no Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique
Rank: C-A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Shousen Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the higher the medical ninja's rank is the quicker they are able to heal more critical and serious injuries. Injuries of equal rank may be healed in 1 post, and completely restored in 2. If choosing to heal a wound higher than the rank of the Shousen used, it requires 2 extra post per rank. Thus C-rank Shousen healing an A-rank wound would require 5 posts to fully heal, while a B-rank wound would require 3 posts for instance. If healing a lower-ranked wound with a higher-ranked Shousen, the wound is fully healed in one post as opposed to two.
Chakra Cost: C: 8CP (2 per post), B: 12CP (4 per post), A: 20CP (6 per post)
Name: Itamidome no Jutsu [Painkilling Technique]
Rank: D.
Type: Eijutsu.
Range: Close (0m – 5m).
Element: None.
Description: A simple technique, used mostly for medical procedures, this numbs the pain to a localised area of the body. The user forms a simple seal and touches the designated area with index and middle finger. An area of about 30cm in diameter is affected by total numbness, lasting up to three posts. This only dulls pain and doesn't affect the ability to control the affected area with nervous system signals. As such, it cannot really be used offensively.
Chakra Cost: 2.
Name:Joukei no Kaibōgaku [Anatomical Sight]
Rank: D-C.
Type: Eijutsu.
Range: Close (0m – 5m).
Element: None.
Description: Studies physical injury, then at C can study foreign bodies, toxins etc. The user forms a double seal and touches the target. As long as they remain in contact with the body, at D-rank they can see all physical injuries and analyse the best way to treat them, at C-rank they can pick up on nervous system damage, specific aspects of toxins and other foreign bodies in the system. With this knowledge they can apply the appropriate healing technique or fashion an antidote without needing a sample of the toxin to be treated.
Chakra Cost: 3-5.
Name: Gekaiken [Surgical Blade]
Rank: C.
Type: Eijutsu.
Range: Close (0m – 5m).
Element: None.
Description: Forming a short set of seals, the user can envelope a portion of a limb in pale blue chakra, much like the Chakra no Mesu. The effect is somewhat similar too, although the Gekaiken is more simplistic and less immediately deadly. The chakra-augmented hand (or foot) deals cutting damage but does not penetrate in the same way the Chakra no Mesu does. The damage is external, or rather, surface deep. It is able to cut through stone though, and certainly through flesh. This also happens to be the technique that most medical nin use to cut through a patient when performing surgery.
NB: Missing an arm, Uriko has learned to apply combative Eijutsu with her feet as well. This does sacrifice precision somewhat, thus is not appropriate for surgerical means.
Chakra Cost: 6 (plus an additional 1 per post).
Name: Bachi no Wanyūdō [Wheel Monk's Punishment]
Rank: C.
Type: Eijutsu.
Range: Short (0-5m), Mid (5-10m), Long (10m+).
Element: None.
Description: While a relatively simple area-of-effect jutsu, this technique is nonetheless quite potent. Once activated, anyone within fifteen metres radius of the user is affected by a piercing aura, produced in a vaguely similar manner to cutting Eijutsu. Wounds caused within the last twelve hours are brought to the surface and opened, causing real, significant distress and pain to those touched by the technique. As long as the user is close enough to a target, this pain will be constant until the techniques runs out or the user ends it. For example, if a target has been recently slashed across the chest by a blade but has received basic first aid to seal the injury, once under this jutsu's influence the wound re-opens and causes fresh pain equal to the original. Fresh wounds remain at the peak level of pain caused. However, once out of range the wounds return to the state they were in before being affected (this can even be a fully healed state), which means no additional lasting damage is caused at all. Furthermore, there actually have to have been injuries caused in the previous twelve hours to even have use for this technique, often meaning the user needs to physically hurt the target first or it is useless. A couple of short handseals are required to activate and to deactivate. Lasts for up to four posts.
Chakra Cost: 6 (plus an additional 1 per post).Cost:[/b] C: 8CP (2 per post), B: 12CP (4 per post), A: 20CP (6 per post)
Items
- Spoiler:
Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
FACE CLAIM.
Character Claim: Alexander
Source: Kazuo
Image URL: Alexander
Last edited by Daemon on Tue 24 Apr 2012, 6:37 pm; edited 10 times in total |
|  | | Otibot
Posts : 115
| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Sat 21 Apr 2012, 10:27 pm | |
| | C-ranks start with one kit(not a B-rank one either) and 15 techniques. You have well over twenty. |
| | | | Daemon
Posts : 20
| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Sun 22 Apr 2012, 6:37 am | |
| my bad
Edited out to 15 tecs and only one kit |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
Posts : 1209
| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Sun 22 Apr 2012, 6:08 pm | |
| Uh, hello! ^_^
Just something I noticed. If I were you I would re-read your profile and make it more readable. Currently it is very difficult read. I can't really sit down and point out every mistake and I'm not going to be a stickler but it just seems that this was typed up very quickly and so perhaps a lot of stuff slipped through. Just re-read it and edit it a bit.
The other thing, make your personality a little longer. I don't want to give you a limit at this point but I would say try to flesh out your character a little more.
Just do these few things first before I start looking at it on a deeper level. Thank you ^^ |
| | | | Daemon
Posts : 20
| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Sun 22 Apr 2012, 8:06 pm | |
| | I'm sorry but I don't really understand what you are getting at since i did read through it already when it took me a few days to get it up and to the current level of my English it answer's to your template. What is it you want me to fix? grammer, content, order of stuff etc? i'm not sure |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
Posts : 1209
| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Sun 22 Apr 2012, 8:50 pm | |
| Sorry for being unclear. Basically the grammar of all your sections, appearance, personality, combat style, and history. If you could just double check it, maybe read it through a few times. I am finding quite a bit of errors in terms of punctuation, sentence structure, some misspelled and misused words.
Your personality should be a bit longer. If you could expound on it a bit more that would be lovely. What are his likes, his dislikes, his hobbies, his feelings toward battle, his feelings toward people. I know you touched on some of these but if you could possible just give us a bit more?
Thank you ^_^ |
| | | | Daemon
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| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Sun 22 Apr 2012, 9:40 pm | |
| | I did fix and expound a little on the appearance and personality to the best of my abilities. English isn't my first language. As terms of history, I do not see why I should add more to a C-rank nukenin application. Don't get me wrong, history is what makes up the character to what he/she today but I rather explain more about myself through role-playing than through the application process. It just seems like a waste. |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
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| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Sun 22 Apr 2012, 10:58 pm | |
| Alright it looks like you actually went through and looked it over and expounded on your personality, which is good. The effort is there and that's good. I understand english isn't your first language. As I said it isn't my intention to be a stickler. That being said, let's work on your jutsu first then come back to the writing aspect, shall we?
Maguilty Rite:
- You say the needles are formed around the target. How far from the target? Are we ever going to see a situation where you form the needles so close to the target that they have no time to react? A distance around the target would be good.
-Are the needles formed on one plane, or is it a type of situation where they can appear ANYWHERE around the target?
-Take out the debilitation for two posts. The pain a target feels is subjective. If you are attributing pain to a target being debilitated it doesn't work.
-How fast do the needles travel towards the target?
Execution by Kiss:
-I don't understand why you have to make a new chakra draining ability when we have one on the site.
-Take out the part about draining someone's soul.
-Take out the part about tasting their chakra affinity.
Henge Ryōseirui [Amphibian Transformation]:
-I fail to see how this is a medical jutsu as it has no medical implications. This seems to be more of a summon associated jutsu if you had a contract with fish or something. Remove it or get an Admin to look at it.
Those are the things I see so far that pop out at me. Right now It's late so if I missed something I do apologize.
Now for the writing. I don't want to give an english lesson as I think it is insulting to you and I really don't want you to be insulted. But what might help for someone like you who is not so fluent with the language is to keep your sentences shorter. For instance:
Grimoire stands at a height of 5’5 without his shoes, often judge to have very stunning looks and a body to kill for, dark tone blonde hair and purple tips of his bangs ranging from layers of different lengths from the back front and sides.
could be written like
Grimoire stands at a height of 5 feet and 5 inches without his shoes. He is often judged to have very stunning looks and a body to kill for. He has dark tone blonde hair with purple tips on his bangs that hang at different lengths from the back, front, and sides.
I kept it mostly the same in this instance, I just took out a lot of your commas. I know that many people write their sentences using commas and such to make their writing flow better. For someone like you though, I would argue that you should keep your sentences shorter and to the point and use punctuations and try to use proper tense on words. I know it's hard though so I'm not going to be too fussy, it's just some advice.
I really do appreciate the effort though! ^_^ Thank you.
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| | | | Daemon
Posts : 20
| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Sun 22 Apr 2012, 11:29 pm | |
| 1) for the Maguilty - Quote :
- this creates several crystal shards that form around the user before firing at the target that he desires
it doesn't form around the target it forms around me first before firing it like Kesshō Har tec. And they can form anywhere around me like few feet away from my body, guessing thats aright since I'm basing this off one of the other approved jutsu in the Encyclopedia so however fast the normal crystal needles are fired. Edited the rest out. The part of the two posts is how long the effect last meaning how long the pain is heightened.
2) And i Wanted a different kind of chakra absorption ability that fits better with my character's arch type, and may i ask why the tasting affinity and soul stealing needs to be removed?
3) And i'll remove Amphibian Transformation though i thought it was a cannon one from the couple of old medics i was looking into but may have been a custom. added Suishō Tō | Jade Crystal Blade in its place
Also word keeps putting the comas back saying their sentence fragments if i use periods |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
Posts : 1209
| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Mon 23 Apr 2012, 11:15 am | |
| First off let me apologize for misreading the jutsu. I was tired when i was looking at the app so I know I screwed up there. Don't worry about the grammar. It seems you've done all you can do at this point. I'll stop bugging you about it. Sorry for the trouble.
The only issue left is your chakra absorption technique. I can understand you wanting to be unique, so that's not a problem. I just wanted to bring it to your attention that we do have an absorption technique already but if you prefer this then I have no problem with it. As for the tasting affinity and soul stealing. The reason to remove them is that I did happen to bring this jutsu up with one of my superiors and they said for me to tell you to remove it.
While I don't have particularly too much problem with chakra affinity tasing I do have a problem with the soul sucking as any jutsu that deals with the soul, is more or less a forbidden jutsu in the manga. So I currently won't let the jutsu through with the soul sucking ability unless you can find an admin to agree with you. I'm fine with chakra affinity tasting personally but I was told by an admin that it makes no since as chakra really shouldn't have a taste...
If you really want these aspects of the jutsu in there my advice is to PM an admin. Most likely the cost of using this jutsu will be increased as it is almost exactly like the one on the site but you have given it extra abilities as well. Take care of that issue and you will have my approval. Sorry for the hassle ^_^ |
| | | | Daemon
Posts : 20
| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Tue 24 Apr 2012, 9:21 am | |
| | so got ride of the soul drain and taste aspect |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
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| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Tue 24 Apr 2012, 11:11 am | |
| Alright then, I can't seem to find anything else wrong.
Approved 1/2 |
| | | | Cookie Monster
Age : 29
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| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Tue 24 Apr 2012, 3:16 pm | |
| A couple of edits need to be made before you can have my approval; - Head Protector; you need to mention where you keep your Head Protector, though you are a nukenin, you would have still been awarded with one and thus you'll need to mention where you keep it. Whether it features the typical strike across the symbol of the village is up to you.
- Age; firstly, your age states 12 but you state in your History that you became a Genin at the age of 13. Secondly, this can be negotiated, but I find it highly unrealistic that you're a twelve / thirteen year old sadistic nukenin, considering we see in the canon that fresh Genin are typically aged twelve. I'd like you to increase your age please or less emphasis on the sadism.
- Execution by Kiss; I have no issue with you having an alteration of the Chakra Kyuun technique, however, due to the way you're extracting chakra, you should technically drain the victims chakra at a lower rate. Since the Kyuun version involves using the hands, you'd be able to cover a larger surface area in order to drain chakra, whereas using your lips will make it a smaller surface area to drain from. Thus, the numbers for draining per post need reducing.
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| | | | Daemon
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| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Tue 24 Apr 2012, 6:40 pm | |
| 1) pleased head gear on the hip in appearance section
2) changed age back to 13, must have forgot t match them sorry. And you never wanted to hurt someone and enjoy hurting them during that age  lol alright reduced the sadistic persona
3) reduced the draining amounts
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| | | | Cookie Monster
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| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Tue 24 Apr 2012, 9:01 pm | |
|
Thanks for making the edits.
Character Approved!
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| | | | Cookie Monster
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| | Subject: Re: Kessho, Grimoire [C - Rank Nukenin] Mon 11 Jun 2012, 6:46 pm | |
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