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PostSubject: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyTue 23 Feb 2010, 12:41 am

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KIRI'S PUBLIC ENEMY

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Basic Information

Name: Meikiri, Sho
Secondary Title: ---
Age: Sixteen [16]
Gender: Male

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Physical Appearance

The brown haired boy is a 5'9 tall and 122lbs shinobi, with intentions to all brighten up a mood, even it causes him to offend someone. Sho's dark green eyes, give him that rough demeanor in his perspective and even attracts the ladies also by his view point. Below his left eye, he carries a two piece scar across his upper part of the cheek. You may say this is his birth mark. Sho's overall expression you might analysis is that he may have a "fuck the world" attitude upon his facial features.

It's for that reason, his past childhood and early teen-life was such a world of war and insanity. On a daily basis the adult age boy, wears a widen collar jacket in which he always wears even indoors. The two open finger-less black gloves, Sho wears was an item he received during his brief journey to the Fire Country from a small open market. On the palm side of the gloves, is red fishnet looking fabric. It's purpose is that is a sticky kind of material to grip hard surfaces for people who are worldwide explores.

Overall it's a fancy kind of gloves for mountain climbing type of folks. Around his waist is a "click it" style of belt. The belts bares the boy's weapon pouch behind his waist. An eye noticing clothing feature about Sho, is his black medium length sandals. They were useful during his previous time in the Water Country since the area was such a muddy, watery location.




Personality

Although normally laid-back and calm, Sho can be a bit of an ass at times while at others he is just a vulgar type adolescent. Always having a comeback, Sho can counter any insults thrown at him in a childishly blunt manner. Usually, he insults a person’s appearance rather than their personality. He is a very loud and energetic teen, always ready for a fight or start trouble. He finds it quite amusing when others are distressed, since he sees life in a general a complete joke.

When it comes to normal communication, Sho is often the one to answer any questions that come to mind and is very imprudent about it. He can keep the pace with an intellectual discussion and can follow a more carefree ones with ease with a brief amount of sarcasm behind it. During interactions between someone or other individuals, Sho frequently tries to infuriate folks. His motive is simply to capture the priceless moment of their boiling point. Mainly, he finds it comical when others deceive him as an asshole because of his impolite and rude behavior towards life.

A secret Sho keeps to himself and behind closed walls, is that he carries an incurable symptom. A sleep disorder. This is a trait he shares that was pasted down by generations on his dad's side. The terrible symptom causes extreme insomnia, visions of battles and death haunts the poor young man's nightmares. These are thought to be deep subconscious visions he witnesses upon birth. A natural born warrior, confident of his own abilities and aware of his weaknesses. He's always in the search of becoming stronger and knows there's always something you can learn from accoutering or meeting new people.



Catch Phrase(s) :

- "I've been called worse things by better people"
- "Dummy"


Clan Information

Clan Name: Meikiri
Clan Location: Kirigakure no Sato

Clan Traits:

Mist Demons: Meikiri clan members are accustomed to the presence of mist and thus have learned to rely much less on their site and much more on their other senses, causing them to be able to sense opponents in mist as though they had a sixth sense. Opponents and objects in natural mist can be easily noted, and movements can be detected from up to 300 yards.

Mist Pores: Meikiri clan members are able to increase their own strength exponentially when they are inside of mist, either natural or their own, absorbing some of the mist into their body and using it to strengthen their muscle tissues. This enables clan members to wield large weapons with ease and thus makes them all the more intimidating.

The user receives a 1% increase in strength per foot of mist absorbed, thus a 100ft area could be absorbed to double the strength of the Meikiri, but leaving them with much less must for techniques. The mist may be expelled at any time after it is taken in.


Shark Sense: Due to their affinity with not only mist, but also blood, the Meikiri clan is capable of tracking down ninja by the scent of their blood alone. They have a sense comparable to a canines in this regard, able to easily hear, smell, and track blood. By tasting the blood, the Meikiri member can also 'taste' their current chakra levels and health through the chakra stored in the discarded cells. These are very general and consist of either 'full', 'mediary', 'near empty', or 'empty'. This is based on when the wound was inflicted and is thus not accurate if the time difference is too great.

Kekkei Genkai:

Mist Element: An advanced form of Suiton that relies on utilizing it in a partially gaseous form, thus giving it unique traits that make it different from normal Suiton jutsu. Mist does not share its parent element's weakness, instead beating Katon and being beaten by Fuuton. This is due to its gaseous form which is damaged or destroyed by winds of various strengths.

The Mist Element may either be used in one of two manners. It may be used from the Suiton element, where it must be changed from water to mist, allowing versatility by changing form. Or by directly creating and controlling mist. The clan utilizes both manners and puts them to equal effective use.

Mist Element jutsu, by default, do not require handsigns but instead require a sufficient quantity of mist to be utilized for their usage. This is not marked in the template and is instead assumed to be equivalent to the default for its rank. If otherwise, it is noted in the jutsu.

D Rank: 3ft
C Rank: 5ft
B Rank: 8ft
A Rank: 10ft
S Rank: 15ft

Jutsu do not 'consume' mist, as in the mist does not loss its size because it is used in a jutsu. These amounts represent how much is needed, and once the jutsu is complete and disperse, the mist it used is gained back for other jutsu. The chakra cost remains, however.


Blood Mist: In addition to being able to create mist from water, the Meikiri clan can also create mist from their own blood or the blood of others. This ability is the most common way the clan members obtain their mist, sense regular mist is not as dense as their own blood and is thus not suitable for most combat situations. Meikiri clan members usually store their blood in a container to make into mist when they need to combat an opponent.

Blood mist smells heavily, and thus can be used to track opponents by the clans sensual powers simply by walking through the mist. Blood mist is also a startling shade of dark red, which makes it apparent that the mist is far from the norm.

A clan member may drain away at their own stamina in order to create this blood mist, taking away 10% of their energy for every 5ft of mist they create in combat like this. Thus they usually have mist prepared, or use other sources, because it is far from cheap to create mist from their own blood and body.



Secret Clan Jutsu

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Name: Mist Expulsion
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user is able to create mist from seemingly thin air by condensing the water molecules into it and creating mist out of them. Naturally, this jutsu does not function where there is no water in the air and thus is very dependent on location. Unlike with the standard mist creating jutsu, this is second nature to a clan member and is much more effective.

This jutsu can create 15ft of mist, even in an arid location like Suna, 25ft in a tolerable atmosphere like Konoha, and 50ft in a very suitable environment such as Kiri. This jutsu, in of itself, does not consume very much chakra because it is so basic for the clan members to use.


Name: Kiri Bunshin (Mist Clone)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user manipulates mist, causing it to swirl together into a clone made of solid, dense, mist. This type of clone can easily be combined with Soulless Clone, indeed this was its initial purpose of creation, but it has since been adapted. This jutsu creates three clones per use, each one substantial and able to inflict harm on opponents. They have a hardness similar to thickened water and thus can be easily broken apart with a sharp blow, lethal damage dispelling them into a burst of mist.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Weapon)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user causes mist to solidify around their hand and become a usable weapon of a time the user is proficient with or can use. This a favorite of the clan and weapons created like this can be broken into mist in partial amounts, aiding with hitting opponents, and can retain a hardness similar to metal when solid. The jutsu sees heavy employment and is thus known by most, if not all, clan members.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Wall)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user manipulates mist, causing it to sweep in front of them if their is limited mist, or to rapidly solidify if surrounded by mist, forming a thick wall of solid mist. The mist blocks attacks of a rank equal to its own but shatters into streams of mist if attacked by a higher ranked jutsu. Higher ranked weapons also cause it to disperse.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Bullet)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: This jutsu does not require mist, rather, it creates it. The user inhales, performs a series of handsigns, and then spits out a solid sphere of mist to strike an opponent with great force. If they should dodge the attack, the bullet disperses into a 5ft diameter area of mist. If it hits, it disperses into a 3ft diameter area, losing some of its substance with the impact.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Dew)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user causes the mist around them to develop small dew drops of water within itself. These droplets of water form a string of dew that goes where the user desires it to go upon creation. Raiton jutsu, being naturally drawn to liquids, are forced to travel along it if they contact the line, making it useful for rendering lethal Raiton jutsu ineffective.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Claws)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user spreads out their fingers and mist forms around them, becoming a pair of solid claws that take their appearance as directed by the user upon the use of the jutsu. The claws can be strengthened beyond their normal strength by absorbing more mist. For every 10ft of mist added to the claws, they increase an effective rank, making these claws more deadly than the average jutsu.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Mirage)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user infuses their chakra into the surrounding mist, enabling the mist to serve as a focus point for Genjutsu. At the time of use the user may send out chakra for up to three Genjutsu of any rank lower than the user's own rank. The mist will then hold this, able to inflict the Genjutsu on those within it, or those who contact it, at will. This jutsu consumes chakra, as do the Genjutsu being used, thus making it an effective but expensive jutsu.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Sudden Formation)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user claps their hands together and causes the mist around them to become solid water for an instant, inflicting damage on those within it, excluding the user, like they had just hit water and whatever speed they were traveling. If the opponent was using Shushin or Kawarmi, the impact can cause the pores to bleed out or knock them unconscious if they are incredibly speedy.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Dragon)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user causes a funnel of mist to solidify into a dragon face creature that emerges and flies towards an opponent, striking them with great force that can shatter B Rank defenses in its way and knock opponents back 25ft if hit head on, along with breaking some bones. The dragon does not disperse upon impact, instead returning to its initial mist cloud and then dispersing.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Returning Scythe)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user gathers up mist into their mouth, inhaling it and then spitting out a 5ft long projectile resembling a curved guillotine blade. The edge of this projectile is razor sharp, designed to slice through opponents, and even kevlar armor, with ease. The jutsu, if it misses, will sweep back at even greater speed than the first shot, using the momentum of the turn to catch opponents off guard and cut them in half.

Name: - (Reaper's Cloth)
Type: Kinjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user causes mist to swarm around them, covering their body and causing them to be dressed in a cloak of mist. They have a mask of mist that resembles a grinning skull and gain a large scythe. This jutsu is a forbidden jutsu that gives the user a fraction of the Reaper's power, giving them the ability to cleave through an opponent with their scythe, slaying them if the hit a lethal spot, and not leaving a scratch. The victims of this jutsu appear to have died of heart attacks.

The created scythe varies from user to user but is always less than 8ft long and with a screaming skull at its top. The blade can be jagged, curved, etc. but it still always has a scythe blade. The robes can also differ in appearance, though the changes here can be just about anything and have no real effect on the jutsu itself.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Invasion)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user causes the mist in an area to form into hands that grab the opponents face, forcefully opening up their lips, and then allowing mist to stream inside of their bodies. The mist, once inside, becomes a liquid and weighs an opponent down heavily. The mist then returns to a mist form, expanding inside of the opponents body, which due to the lack of space, causing the unfortunate victim to explode. The mist can be forced out of the body through cutting the body, allowing the mist to seep out, or otherwise providing an exit route, thus preventing the explosion.

Name: Kiri - (Mist Pressure)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: The user causes their mist to solidify into a thicker form, halving the total mist but making the created mist thick enough to slow down the speed of all those in it by half, along with slowing down handsigns to the point that only a single jutsu can be used per post. The mist, in this form, is treated as two ranks higher when used for other Mist jutsu due to the increased density.

Name: Hageshii Ame (Bloody Rain)
Type: Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Suiton (Mist)
Description: This jutsu can only be used with blood mist. The user causes the blood mist in an area to rise up into the air and then reform into water, forming millions of solid water senbon that then rain down on an opponent in an area equal to the area of mist used. The technique, due to its aerial nature and potential range, is nearly impossible to dodge, making defending against it the only truly viable option.


History

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A clan developed through experimentation by former Mizukages to create a clan suitable to succeeded them as the perfect Mist Village Ninja. The clan resides in an underground society of sorts, being house within the Mizukage's home in an underground cavern where they train constantly.

Ninja with excellent potential are allowed to the surface world, sometimes trained by the Mizukage himself to be his/her successor. Some of the clan members have escape, fleeing to remote ends of the earth, some scattering as far as Hidden Moon, others to obscure places like Suna where their abilities are nearly worthless.

The clan was created through experimentation by Kiri scientists, until they came upon a specimen that suited their desires. They breed this specimen until their were enough of their breed to thrive on their own. Only pure blooded clan members possess the clan's KKG. The test specimens, after being successful created and being perfected, were ordered to kill their creators, ensuring no other village would every learn of the Mist's horrific experimentation.

The Mizukage expressed immense interest in a few of the subjects, gradually teaching them how to use their blood abilities for many more jutsu than mere mist control. The clan owes its lethal abilities to the Mizukages before them and as such, take great pride in their village. Most of them are very defensive of their home village, fighting till death. Clan members outside of the Mist are just as defensive, although sometimes their abilities cannot be used as easily, and they often carry around water to compensate for the lack of natural water in some areas.

In the recent era, the clan has become a common source of soldiers for the current wars, thus causing the clan to be released from its captivity in order to breed more clan member and integrate into society so that the clan members could become more common place, and thus less frightening, to the citizens and ninja who would fight alongside them later on in their lives.


Clan Details: Open


Rank Information

Rank: Genin
Village Affiliation: Kirigakure


Special Information

Character Specialty
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity

Main:
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Suiton (Water)

Sub:
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Raiton (Lighting)

Special Characteristics:

Quick Thinker
Sho's brain is trained to be exercised regularly to develop cognitive
skills like rapid response. He would occasionally read experience non-fiction
narratives and identify extremely hard brain teasers in local newspapers, preform
excessive math problems, and even long crosswords puzzles.


Light Sleeper
Sho is a very light sleeper. Any noise at all will instantly awaken him to a state of full alert. Sho Meikiri, is no easier to sneak up on while asleep than he is when he is awake.


Skill Information

Jutsu Template:

Non-Elemental Release ~
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Water Elemental Release ~
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Lighting Elemental Release ~
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Taijutsu (Body Techniques) ~
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Mist Elemental Release (Meikiri Clan Techniques) ~
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Weapon Template:

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Name: Hip Pouch
Quantity: 2 x
Rank: D-S
Appearance:
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Special Abilities/Characteristics: Contains basic shinobi weapons and tools. (Kunias x 15, Senbons x 15, Shurikens x 20, Blank Scrolls x 2, Paper Bombs x 10, Metal Wire-50 yards.)
Origin: Required as a rookie, Genin.


Item Template:

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Background Information


" Pre-Academy Arc "

Sho never had an easy childhood, his father divorced his mother when he was still a young child, even though he tried his hardest all he knew is that his mother and father loved each other and all of a sudden didn’t any more. His father passed away shortly after the divorce from unknown circumstances, his mother also went missing the same night of his fathers death leaving and orphaned child, many of the villagers suspected that his mother was the killer of her ex husband. He grew up resentful of his parents. He engrossed himself in his training never caring too much for anything else; he surpassed many of his classmates and made many enemies amongst them. Sho was always getting in fights with many of the local children of his village and as well created enemies with few of the more powerful ninjas around him. The higher respected elders of the Kumogakure, decided to send him away to cause less trouble. So they were willing to send Sho all the way to the Mist Village's Ninja Academy in order for him to learn to control and restrain his little childish acts and behavior.

" Academy Arc "

He went to the academy. There, he learned Ninjutsu and basic Taijutsu. He learned chakra control. He learned to control his thoughts. Every day he learned something new and compulsively trained to better it. He dared not use it against the people he loved the dearest, because he knew that he wasn't ready for the humorous gilt and stress he would've bared himself with. He breezed through the academy with the mindset of never stopping.

The most memorable day was his first. He was serenaded during his time in classroom. He stayed away from human contact, human voices. If someone approached, he dodged out of their way as if his life depended on it. His sensei noticed this behavior. At the end of the day, when everybody was leaving, Sho stayed behind to let all others go ahead of him. As he started to leave, his sensei called him over to his desk. He stayed a safe distance from the desk.

Sho's teacher/sensei discussed Sho's personal issues with him and told him plenty of healthy and save advice to get over this weird stress that took tooled of him. Minutes later after their deep discussion, something came out of Sho's forlorn mouth that would only happen during a blue moon. "Thank you sir." As Sho left the classroom, he felt a sensation that was awkward to him. Compassion. This gave him the boast and confident he needed to succeed in his young life was a shinobi.

" Genin Arc "

The months and blood, sweat and tears at last paid off Sho's debt of proving himself that anything was possible, as long as you put hard work into it. The same old same old stuff that you would've expected as new Genin, occurred for Sho's rookie shinobi years. Lame-ass missions, having to kiss the Mizukage's ass, his Jounin sensei being down right arrogant towards him and his rookie teammates, and the list of BS continues to grow being a little Genin. But, that's life...right? Overcoming the downfalls and dejected days, was something he trained his growing mind to trounce. When there was a closed door in Sho's journey, there was always a new fresh delivered door waiting on entrance way for him. Busting his little behind in training, creating new enemies, trying to verify his important existence, and proving the naysayers wrong all these aspects came up showing they were appropriate for Sho in the long-run. Them troublesome years, were just a blind fold over Sho's deceiving eyes, and he looked over the blind fold showing that his was, a splendid ninja after all.

Presently, Sho just remains a patient shinobi waiting for his chance to prove himself towards the world and hopefully become granted with the respectful title as Chuunin

To Be Prolonged. . . . .



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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyTue 23 Feb 2010, 3:45 am

Is your clan already approved?
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 5:27 am

Yes, the Clan is approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 6:18 am

Well the new clan is, the previous one was what I was questioning but you seem to have changed it to one of my creations. Please note that the '-' are because I was too lazy to put in the Japanese for the words, thats not the actual name of the techniques...

Cant have a C Rank weapon, so remove that.

Military Ration pills, no chakra regain and I'll approve of it.

I'm going to have to ask where you obtained Water Breathing Jutsu, depending on your answer I may or may not have to stop checking this application because that jutsu belongs to me, that wording is my own, and my name is not on it which is plagiarism and the last person who did that is currently residing somewhere in oblivion for fear of me. Where did you get it? Why isn't my name on it?
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 6:51 am

I thought Genins were allowed to wield 'C rank weapons' , no?

About the pills, could I at least decrease the posts duration to '2 posts' instead of '5 posts', hm?

Honestly, I got the jutsu from Ingoo. My mistake, I didn't state your name for your own property. =/
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 7:18 am

No, not without Weaponry.

The chakra gain is the problem, you shouldn't be regaining chakra from simple pills, they would have to be more highly ranked and more accurately described to do such a thing and the current pill doesn't cut it.

As for the jutsu I would forgive the mistake but you lied to me initially about where the technique came from in order to avoid me, thus I want to see it removed from this application in its entirety.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 6:26 pm

Also you have stolen a good slew of Todd's jutsu. Your on a role kid! Stealing from Staff!

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Name: Raiton: Lightning Flash Orb
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Description: This is a simple lightning technique which is very useful. The user will gather lightning chakra in their hand into a small orb. They will then release it into the air above the opponent. When it explodes it creates a flash of intense light, making it near on impossible for the target to see. This can be used as a distraction or an escape tool. The flash lasts for a single post.

Name: Raiton: Charge Volt Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Description: This is a very simple but handy raiton based technique. After a single handseal the user will charge-up raiton chakra within their body. This charge-up takes a single post and when the time requirement is complete this technique can be performed. The following turn, if a raiton based technique is used due to the charged raiton chakra within the users body, that raiton technique will do twice the damage then it normally would.

Name: Raiton: Raikyuu - Lightning Ball
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: The user will form a sphere-like shape of electricity chakra into their palms, the size of a regular baseball. The user will hurl the electrified sphere at their targeted opponent and once it hits their user's designated target, the electrified sphere will burst among the opponent's body causing minor burns marks on the skin layer. The ball of electric chakra will so far, before the sphere will automatically defect and burst on it's on will. It's recommended for a shinobi to preform this jutsu on a close ranged target. (Range: 1-5 meters)

Name: Raiton: Overload
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Description: Through the use of this technique, the user radiates their chakra through the air around them, overloading and disrupting any electronic equipment around them. With enough focused chakra output, the user can also make electronic devices explode. The technique can be focused or spread over an area in order to block out communication lines, radio frequencies, etc.

Name: Raiton: Static Rain Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Description: A simple technique that, if used while the target is directly exposed to rain, significantly wet, or immersed in water, will cause all lightning jutsu to zero in on the target. This is instant and also offers a 25% increase in damage if combined with any water.
-Those Lightning are his.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 8:02 pm

I swear to FSM...

Get out of my clan too while you're at it Kanochi, I hate plagarizing little runts...
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 8:25 pm

Updated.

(Who's Kanochi?, I am not someone called 'Kanochi')

(Also I don't wanna be expelled from the clan, is there any other way?)
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 8:55 pm

Says the one who doesn't even offer an explanation as to how those jutsu of someone else's wound up on their application and just assumes removing them will gloss everything over in a nice coat. Why were Todd's jutsu on your application?
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 9:12 pm

I needed Raiton type jutus for the app, so I assumed I could barrow some of Todd's jutsu since they were so well defined and explained. My fault.

Also, I PM'd Todd about asking, if I could to use 'Raiton: Overload' and 'Raiton: Static Rain Technique' on this app.

Just in case if Todd doesn't allow me to use his own jutsu, I deleted all the Jutsus belonging to "Todd" and you, "Hage".
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 9:15 pm

We just had a discussion about plagiarism and you assume you can 'borrow' jutsu from somebody else? That makes no sense at all and depending on what Todd thinks of this we'll go from there.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 9:29 pm

Alrighty then.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 11:06 pm

Ah, Kanochi, do we really have to go through this? It takes one simple look at IPs. So don't deny it.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 11:27 pm

Travis, I honestly promise you that I am not 'Kanochi' or whoever that is.
I'm not saying you have to believe me, but I'm just stating what 'I' know.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySun 28 Feb 2010, 1:49 am

I have allowed you to borrow those two jutsu that you PMed me about. I am sure that this was an honest mistake, and be weary in the future, that you have to ask permission to borrow someones unique techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyWed 03 Mar 2010, 12:09 am

It's been 4 days. lol ( 200 views! :O )

Bump.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyWed 03 Mar 2010, 2:45 am

Average human punch is 300 PSI
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyWed 03 Mar 2010, 3:43 am

Updated. lol
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyWed 03 Mar 2010, 4:22 am

Did Rich give his consent to allow you to be in his clan still?
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyWed 03 Mar 2010, 4:26 am

No, but I'll give it now to save time. As bothersome as it is, its more bothersome to get complaints so the clan is fine provided it is used properly. Improper use will lead to a post on this app for unapproval.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyWed 03 Mar 2010, 3:22 pm

Yes, sir. :3

lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyThu 04 Mar 2010, 12:00 am

No Mist jutsu?
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptySat 06 Mar 2010, 8:42 am

So you know no KKG jutsu?
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PostSubject: Re: Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] Meikiri, Sho [Kirigakure Genin] EmptyTue 09 Mar 2010, 12:11 am

My mistake, I added the kekkei genkai jutsus.
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