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PostSubject: Jutsu part 1 Jutsu part 1 EmptySun 29 Apr 2012, 9:49 pm

Name: Alarm Seal
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Long (0-15m)
Element: N/A
Description: This seal is specifically designed to detect the presence of anyone trying to enter the area the seal has created. Once a chakra level high enough to be a genin crosses the boundry (or higher as applicable), the alarm bursts out into high, shrill noises until the creator deactivates it. Normally, the sudden burst of sound, which is loudest at the barrier's edge, will cause anyone trying to sneak it to lose stability from the sheer noise.
Chakra Cost: 9 CP + an additional 5 CP to allow the seal to continue its effect if the team decides to sleep during the activation. (This allows Leon to sleep as well without being drained of chakra while sleeping).

Name: Multiplication Seal
Rank: C-A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Long (0-15m)
Element: N/A
Description: By placing this seal on an object, one would expect the object to just multiply when activated. However, Leon has tweaked this seal specifically for use on his ranged weaponry. This seal is used in conjunction with the version 2 seal, which allows Leon to multiple his arrows, kunai, etc. once the ranged weaponry has reached a distance approximately 10 meters from the version 2 seal, which is on Leons hand, the chakra from the seals activation will cause somewhat of a Kage Bunshin effect, multiplying whatever ranged weapon was used by 1-5. (Example: Leon puts this seal on two arrows and fires them at the same time at C-Rank. Once the arrows reach 10 meters, there are now 4 arrows flying towards the target. 1 arrow plus a multiplaction of 1, meaning there will be one more copies of the arrow.)

At C-Rank: 1 extra projectile
At B-rank: 3 extra projectiles
At A-rank: 5 extra projectiles
Chakra Cost:
C-Rank: 6 CP
B-Rank: 15 CP
A-rank: 25 CP

Name: Multiplication Seal part 2
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Long (0-15m)
Element: N/A
Description: This seal is used in conjunction with the above seal to help the ranged weaponry multiply. It has no active effects, it is merely used by the version 1 seal to judge distance so that it can activate itself. The chakra cost on this seal is only for the initial application of the seal, or any other time it needs to be applied, should that be required.
Chakra Cost: 4 Cp


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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu part 1 Jutsu part 1 EmptyMon 30 Apr 2012, 3:32 am


    Alarm Seal: Just have the wording changed a bit at the end please, losing stability I'm a bit skeptical on. People would have the natural reaction of being startled and panicked, thus giving you a timing advantage, but making them lose balance is kind of pushing it a tad.

    Multiplication Seal: Honestly I'm a tad confused by the effect of this technique. If I'm reading it correctly, then it should be Ninjutsu if anything. For an example the Shuriken Kage Bunshin technique would be ideal for this situation, it'd obviously have to lowered in the amounts it can create in fact we might have the technique on the site... but still, you'd be able to effectively control the timing of when you use the technique as well.
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Caranore
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu part 1 Jutsu part 1 EmptyMon 30 Apr 2012, 3:43 am

Well, if they are right on the edge, its like having a shrill loud whistle in your ear. High pitched sounds of that magnitude would affect the ear drum which by association affects a persons stability.

Multiplication seal: It functions like the Shuriken Kage Bunshin, but I wanted it specifically for arrows. Its... well, insulting for one to call arrows shuriken, 2: kage Bunshin techniques, last I was aware, were Konoha specific, meaning I wouldnt be able to learn that technique (let alone its B-Rank) without going to Konoha. This is a Genin Fuuinjutsu users attempt at mimicking a technique theyve heard of, but never seen nor experienced.

The seal uses the extra chakra to create imitations, essentially shadow clones, of the arrows. The 10 meters distance split is just a little downside, not being able to control when they split.
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu part 1 Jutsu part 1 EmptyMon 30 Apr 2012, 4:47 am

Several things. The kage bunshin shuriken technique that allows you to summon multiple shadow clones of shuriken is available to everyone; and is A-rank. Though you can't summon as many at once, it should be at least B-rank because these arrows have substance, and can potentially screw someone over. Second; Kage Bunshin is also available for everyone. Multiple Shadow Clones are Konoha specific in the Canon, but basic Kage Bunshin have been used by non-Konoha members as well. Even if I am in fact mistaken, on this site everyone can have shadow clones provided they're B-rank and specialize in Ninjutsu. Regardless; you'll have to up the arrow bunshin to B-rank anyway; since they are weakened version of the A-rank shadow clone shuriken. C-rank on its own would also be fairly over powered; as you're essentially stabbing someone with 4 arrows, and making it 4 times more difficult to avoid the attack.

Also, sheerly for clarification; state that it's a multiple of 4. It just makes it easier to understand, as multiples of three are 3,6,9,12,15, etc. You're going by multiples of 4.
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu part 1 Jutsu part 1 EmptyMon 30 Apr 2012, 6:30 am

Thanks for the changes~

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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu part 1 Jutsu part 1 EmptyFri 15 Jun 2012, 4:02 pm


Archived.
Due to archived character.
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