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| Subject: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 07 May 2012, 9:31 am | |
| Kesshō, Tsumi.THE INFO. Name: Tsumi Kesshō
Age: 22 Gender: Male Appearance: Tsumi weighs in at 120 pounds, standing at an even 6 feet. Tsumi has never bothered to smooth down his white hair, and as a result, it sticks out in many places. Tsumi's hair is mostly short, but two strands in front go down to his mouth. Some infant beard hair grows upon Tsumi’s chin, but he has never noticed. Tsumi has a rather scrawny build and, much to his dismay, can’t seem to gain weight, no matter how much he eats. The item around his neck is a necklace, which his sister made for him. She told him to only open it when she dies, and he has kept this promise nicely.
On his chest is a metal vest, which offers minor protection to Tsumi. Now, Tsumi's vest is made of steel, using very small chain links in some places, so that the wearer can still move comfortably and easily. On his legs are his pants, which are also plated with metal. In fact, his pants are made of three layers: Cotton on the inside, for easy mobility; Leather on the outside, for minor protection; And Overlapping plates on his lower legs, for shielding. Tsumi never leaves the house without his metal gloves (he likes metal about as much as he likes swords).
His eyes are dichromatic; One of them having the trademark dark eyes, and the other being a focused grey. However, they grey eye changes color, depending on his mood. Naturally, Tsumi's hair is, in fact, Dark blue. However, he has long since dyed it, though, occasionally, a few blue streaks can be seen sticking out.
Forehead Protector: Tsumi's forehead protector is tied around his right forearm.
Personality: Tsumi is a rather strange individual. He is very sarcastic, while kind at the same time. Tsumi has a very strong sense of right and wrong, and intervenes into the simplest of conflicts. Tsumi does not understand his own mortality, and would gladly sacrifice himself for a good cause. He is a naturally brave soul, with one exception, GIRLS. Cannot talk to anything female, and usually gets a bit nervous when a girl talks to him. He knows nothing about romance so, when the topic is brought up, he becomes quiet.
Tsumi can usually withstand a girl’s presence once he gets to know them enough. Very sentimental about his life, but doesn’t really like to talk about it. Tsumi finds new motivation every time someone shows that they have genuine faith in him. Tsumi enjoys being social and talking to others. Tsumi doesn’t work well in a group he doesn’t know, but easily coordinates once he actually knows them. A clear head is the key to any win, and that’s exactly what Tsumi tells himself during every fight.
Tsumi cannot stand anything more than injustice. In fact, he's a pretty mellow fellow, though one of several things that will set him off is wrong-doing. Tsumi is...somewhat naive, and almost always seen with a big, cheesy smile on his face. Tsumi has an unquenchable appetite, which he is usually able to keep under control, though when he's hungry enough.... chaos ensues.
Although he refuses to admit it, Tsumi is, in fact, a masochist. During battle, even if he takes a brutal hit, he will usually go right on smiling, until restrained, or knocked out. When asked about it, he'll generally try to avoid answering, as he also hates lying.
Tsumi isn't quite 'all there'. A second consciousness has begun talking to him, on the inside of his head. This alternate personality tends to criticize Tsumi's actions, though he does tend to be helpful in a pinch.
Clan: Kesshō
Nindō: “WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE"
THE NINJA. Origin: Tsuki No Kuni (Exact location unknown) Affiliation: Kirigakure Rank: C Specialties: First: Weaponry (Main: Close; Sub: Mid) Second: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: First: Raiton (Lightning)
Second: Doton (Earth)
Third (clan:( Shōton (Crystal Release)
Combat Style: Tsumi chooses to fight honorably, not using any tactics he labels as “cheap”, such as Genjutsu, or Jutsu he sees as too powerful. Always fighting fairly, Tsumi will try to even the odds against any foe, regardless of experience. Tsumi will generally avoid pointless battles, but always intervenes, when he sees someone in trouble, or justice not being observed. Tsumi favors close-range combat, due to his love of swordplay. Tsumi will usually uses Omiwarti (The god's crossing) as his trump card. When all else fails, those crystal needles will be his last resort. Tsumi loves being in high places during a battle. Tsumi usually gains the upper hand when fighting on places like rooftops, however, he absolutely despises the cold. Anywhere cold enough will severaly dampen Tsumi's focus.
Special Characteristics:
- Speed:
Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
- One-Handed Hand Signs:
Name: One-Handed Hand Signs Rank: C Type: Mental Physical Requirements: Must Specialize in Ninjutsu. Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.
- Improved Acrobatics:
Name: [Tier I] Improved Acrobatics Rank: C Type: Physical Prerequisites: - Training: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Restrictions: Amongst the Speed, Endurance, Strength, and Acrobatics SCs, members may only possess two of them, unless they possess both Weaponry and Taijutsu as their Primary and Secondary Specialties. If one possess Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Primary specialty, with one other specialty, and acquire Weaponry or Taijutsu as a Sub-Specialty, they may possess up to any three of them. Description: The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and twists than their peers.
- Affliction:
Name: Fragmented Personality Rank: D-A Range: Personal Description: The user's personality has split (usually due to a prior traumatic event), and now exhibits the ability to control the user's body (and a frequent desire to control the user's body...). Long-Term Effects: At a lower rank (D-C), the effects will be mild. The user will hear the opposing personality/ies whenever they wish to talk on the inside of his/her head, as if it were one of their own thoughts, but in a different voice. The user will also be able to let his/her different personalities take control of their body. The opposing personalities physical abilities must match that of the user (no growing muscles, suddenly becoming faster, etc.), however, their approach to a situation may differ, though their knowledge is shared- neither can gather knowledge that the other would have no way of knowing. Oftentimes, when the second personality takes effect, the user's voice will change, due to a change in chakra distribution throughout the body.
Not long after (high B-rank, low A-rank), the user will lose the ability to choose which personality is dominant, becoming prone to sudden outbursts. Finally, at a high rank (High A), the user will lose control of a portion of their body, equal to how many personalities they host (One with two personalities would lose control of half their body, one with three would lose control of two-thirds, etc.). The other personalities gain permanent control of this 'lost territory'. To regain control, one must take part in an internal battle (as in, an actual battle, taking place in the mind of the user). Should the user lose this battle, their personality will be submerged under that of the personality they lost to- effectively, their personality will be erased. Chakra Cost: None.
THE BACKGROUND. History:
- Prologue:
Long ago, a small portion of each Nation broke away from their homes to travel away from the world. All of these villagers happened to be war veterans, or skilled warriors with only one goal in mind: To raise their children away from the violence, cruelty, and anguish that the endless wars of the world contained. To this end, this group of elite fighters travelled deep into the wilderness, past where legends and rumors say to never venture. Eventually, they came to a location where one could not hear the suffering screams of those who chose to fight, and slowly built up a planet to support their children. Of course, no village they could find had achieved the peace they longed for, so they instead chose to forge their own. This Village came to be known as "The Village of Peace".
Several generations later, these ideals had been forgotten, and replaced with the worshipping of a god of war. The children of the village were taught to slaughter anyone they did not trust, and did so without remorse. This “god” was actually a group of three ancient demons: Zo, the demon of sight, Kyn, the demon of power, and Rei, the demon of Wisdom. This group of demons was named “The dark trinity”. Each demon passed a single technique into the hands of the village of peace. These techniques became known as the “Blackheart” fighting style , as it was said that your heart had to be blacker than the darkest shadow to even think of studying these forbidden techniques. In fact, the Blackheart Techniques were so amazingly strong, that the use of a blackheart technique took a third of one’s soul, as payment.
- Before the Academy:
Birth-
It's a boy Mrs. Kesshō. Muchina Kesshō lay on a hospital bed, crying from the sheer agony of giving birth (which will NOT be described in detail).Medical ninja rushed to her side to see that she was ok, and had not been harmed. It’s a boy, you say? Yes, ma’am. One very pale… The doctor put his ear to the newborn’s chest. …suffocating child. The doctor then realized the severity of his statement, and called the medical ninja over. The head medical ninja calmly walked over, and touched a few of the baby’s chest-related pressure points.
Within a few seconds, the baby spat up the fluids that had lodged in its throat, and handed the baby to Muchina. "I shall name you……..Tsumi. You shall be known as Tsumi Kesshō. The doctor stared at her, eyes wide. "B-but that means SIN! Are you seriously willing to name your own child SIN?! Muchina turned, and looked at the doctor with sad eyes. Yes. He was my sin, my mistake. Should have been a girl, stupid child. The doctor pulled the head medical ninja to the side. Expect this one in again soon, and order a watch on that baby.
Tsumi Kessho, Age 5
“I’m home!” chimed an overjoyed Muchina, who danced into the house, carrying what looked like a ball of cloth. and guess what I brought? Tsumi walked up to his dancing mother, and looked straight up at her. What did you bring home, mommy? Muchina ignored him, and danced into the master bedroom. We got a daughter? Tsumi’s dad said, excitedly. Yep! Now we’re a whole family. Me, you, and our daughter, Shinrai. Tsumi was used to it, by now. Sometimes, It was almost as if he wasn’t there at all. Tsumi walked out of the house, and went exploring.
Tsumi came back to the house at about 1:00 AM. Oh, hello. Muchina nodded to him as she walked to her bedroom, totally oblivious to his late arrival. The next day, he thought of a plan. While washing the dishes, he threw a plate down, and stomped on it with all his might. TSUMI! Why did you break this plate? So you would know I exist. Yes, yes. That was VERY naughty of you. Don’t do it again.
The next day, he did the same thing. You broke another plate. We’re going to run out of those, you know. his mom said, before walking away. Tsumi repeated this day after day, until they finally ran out of plates. Why did you break all the plates? his mom said, as interested as ever. Tsumi did not respond with words, now was time for action. Tsumi did what he deemed necessary which, in this case, was delivering a punch to his mother’s face. Muchina was dumbfounded. Y-you just hit me! How DARE you!? Tsumi stared into her eyes, meeting them with his own empty pupils. I see… After that day, Tsumi was able to improve relations with his parents, and at last, was happy.
- Present Day:
1,000 Years After The Discovery Of The Blackheart Jutsu“Wake up, Tsumi!” a small, squeaky voice said, before poking his cheek. “Amy…” Tsumi’s mother, Emyli said. “You know that this month is his hibernation cycle…” said his dad, wryly. “Awww…LAST month was his hibernation cycle!” said Amy. “EVERY month is his hibernation cycle” said Emyli, laughing. It was true, Tsumi loved sleeping. In fact, he slept so often, that many had stated he had managed to hibernate, such as an animal. “He’s awake! He’s awake!” shouted Amy, eager to feed her brother a breakfast she had personally prepared. Tsumi rolled off his bed, and opened his eyes. Above him he saw the sun, in all its glory. Except….he didn’t remember the sun being so flat. Tsumi then became fully coherent, and realized that this “Sun” was in fact an omelet falling towards his face. Tsumi reacted by opening his mouth, and catching the omelet between his teeth. Amy laughed, and said “Nice catch. Know what day it is?” Tsumi thought for a moment, before saying “Well you made me breakfast, mom is actually here, dad actually got out of the shop, for once …….is it worshipping day, already?” Emyli laughed, “No, silly. It’s your birthday!” Tsumi yawned “That explains why I’m up before lunch.” Everyone laughed, except Tsumi’s dad, who merely decided to kick him. “Your fourteen now. That means that today is your manhood ceremony! Get up, or we’ll just substitute you with a rock. I doubt many will tell the difference.” Tsumi got up, and ran out the door, nervous about the ceremony, and excited about the after party. “Tsumi Kessho, child whose name was given to him by the Dark Trinity, choose your profession.” Tsumi thought, allowing a tense silence to descend upon the crowd who watched. After what seemed like an eternity, he spoke. “I want to be a warrior.“ The elder spoke “You are hereby accepted into the academy of…“ His words were cut short, as at that moment, a stranger had walked into town, and had stabbed a small child. As the child screamed, the stranger spoke over him, his voice booming across the village where Tsumi lived. “You have three days.” The stranger said, ominously. “Three days before I take what is mine. Any who flee will be killed, any who remain…..will be killed painfully.” after which, he turned, and walked away. The village elder sat down, and began to elaborate on this man’s words. “Long ago, the village was attacked by a man, who carried only a small sword. The village was burnt to the ground, and only two children survived.” Tsumi stared “So….what did they do about it?” he asked. The elder responded “good question, Tsumi. Nobody knows for sure, but what I heard was a man tried to fight back, and was brushed aside like a flea.” Tsumi looked at the ground in dismay “So what do WE do about it?” The village elder shrugged. “What CAN we do? Tsumi, you should go home. Enjoy the time with your family, while you still can.” Tsumi stood up with determination in his eyes “I’ll be in the ancestor’s forest.” He said, before running off to the forest, that all were forbidden to enter, for good reason. This Forest was inhabited by the lingering regret of every soul that passed through it, and not all regret was passive. In many cases, people touched with the regrets would kill their families, before committing suicide. Not everything in this forest was evil, however. Some regrets were of not passing on knowledge, or the like. Now, most people can’t see regrets, but, for those who can, regrets look like large teardrops, containing the face of who created it. Tsumi looked for the face of a man whose regrets he had stumbled upon many times, a blacksmith named Kurcet. Tsumi had seen so many of Kurcet’s regrets, that after looking into one, he could sometimes communicate with him. This time, he found a regret that seemed bigger than the others (the bigger a regret was, the more it plagued that person). This regret was about 16 feet tall and 12 feet wide. Tsumi stuck his head into the tear drop, and, when he took it out, he was shocked beyond belief. Tsumi watched Kurcet exchange his soul for a sword, which carried the hope of the world upon it. When Tsumi returned to the village, he hurried to tell the elder of his findings. He burst into the elder’s house, both eager and nervous, only to find the elder had taken his own life, in his pitiful fear of what lay ahead. Tsumi fell to his knees, and actually cried for what seemed like an eternity. Tsumi finally picked himself up, looking for the sun overhead to check the time. The sun was rising. “Only two days left” Tsumi said, before passing out on the floor. When he next woke up, the sun was close to setting. Tsumi walked out of the elder’s house, and back into the forest of regret. “KURCET!” he shouted repeatedly. “Where are you?!” Kurcet responded “Child, what could you possibly need at a time like this? Go spend time with your family, while you still can.” Tsumi simply replied “Where’s the sword you made for that warrior?” Kurcet looked Tsumi in the eye, and said “That sword was meant for killing the stranger.” To which Tsumi replied “I know. That’s why I want it.” Kurcet was taken aback. “You can’t kill him! He’s invincible!” Tsumi smiled, not in a happy way, but in a vampire way. “No, it’s not that he was too strong, it’s that the LAST moron behind your sword got cocky, and paid the price. I won’t fail, I swear.” Kurcet sighed. “Very well. It’s in the chamber of the Dark Trinity. If you can survive whatever they have in store, I’m sure you’ll come out just fine. The chamber is behind the elder’s house.” Tsumi walked away from the forest, and into the chamber of the dark trinity. Inside, there were voices everywhere, as if the whole world was speaking at once, all trying to call for help, while being strangled. He continued deeper into the chamber, clutching his ears to dampen the horrific screams, until finding three Altars, inside a giant room. On the first altar, on the left side of the room, was engraved “Zo”, On the second altar, just ahead of where Tsumi was standing, was engraved “Kyn”, and on the final altar, on the right side of the room, was engraved “Rei”. Tsumi spoke their names “Zo. Kyn. Rei. Please, if you can hear me, please help me.” The Dark trinity themselves acknowledged his plea. The three altars burst into flame, all at once. Instead of demons, however, he saw three humans, each in a black cloak, with their hoods up. They spoke “WHO DISTURBS OUR SLUMBER?! Oh. It’s YOU.” Tsumi became confused. “I’ve never met any of you in my life. And why are your hoods up?” Zo chuckled “He can see us now. Little Z has grown up.” Tsumi looked to see any sign of deception from her. He found none. “M-My name is Tsumi Kessho. Not Z.” it was Kyn who spoke this time, “Defeat that stranger, and we will tell you more, little Z.” Tsumi nodded, before remembering what he had come to ask for. “I need the Stained Soul.” All three laughed. “The Stained Soul? The blade that the old blacksmith traded his soul for? Very well.” The ground began to shake, and a large rock, in the shape of a mirror detached itself from the ground, and floated in front of Tsumi. “But on one condition. Should you fail, your soul belongs to us.” Tsumi touched his hand to the rock that was floating in front of him. “Deal.” On the flat surface of the rock appeared the words “Let this deal be sworn with blood from both parties” The dark trinity now stood on the other side of the mirror-rock. They all put their hands on it, and a sharp, needle-shaped point cut into each person’s hand. Judging by the grimaces on the faces of the dark trinity, it had been a very long time since they had suffered pain. The mirror then shattered, leaving only the Stained Soul in its place. “Go, little hero.” Said Rei, fondly. Tsumi spent most of the time before the stranger came back training. Tsumi spent the last hour sleeping, and when the time came to fight, he was nowhere near rested. Tsumi met the stranger in front of the village, sword in hand. The stranger said to him “You wish to fight? Very well, but loss of life will be your own accountability.” Tsumi smirked “Especially yours.” The stranger drew his katana, which grew to twice its length, and a horizontal blade now sat between the middle and the top, forming a cross. “Well, at, least it’s not on fire.” Said Tsumi, as the blade caught fire. Tsumi took a moment to admire The Stained Soul. Tsumi sighed in annoyance. “Let’s see what the Stained Soul is capable of…” The stained soul had a variety of effects on Tsumi. 1, it gave him enough motivation to realize that he could indeed beat this guy. 2, It discolored one of his eyes, making it a complete negative image of the other. Tsumi swung his blade in an overhead slash, which was blocked, and parried the stranger’s attack. The stranger smirked. “looks like you’re not completely incompetent, like the last one” Tsumi landed an uppercut. “I’d like to think so.” The stranger, not to be defeated by such a young warrior, decided to step it up a notch. “Blackheart technique: Draconic Sword!” Shouted the stranger, confidently. The stranger’s sword melded into a large, living dragon, which coiled around the entire village, and breathed a stream of flame into the center. Tsumi, in a focused rage, was now entirely determined annihilate this stranger. Tsumi jumped right into the dragon’s mouth, and as soon as he was sucked into the digestive tract, he began to destroy the dragon. Now, the dragon’s digestive tract moves anything inside it slowly backwards. Tsumi held his sword straight up, and began spinning head-over-heels, which effectively formed a poor man’s buzz-saw. This cut the dragon in half, due to it’s own digestive tract. Due to sheer momentum, however, Tsumi also managed to severely wound the stranger. The stranger laughed, which caused the blood to splatter on the ground in large pools. "You haven't won yet. Not by a longshot!" said the stranger, fully immersed in, and loving, the feeling of battle. Tsumi replied by cutting off the stranger's right hand (as lucky as Tsumi was, the stranger was left-handed). The stranger was smiling, now. He trembled, in what seemed to be pure hatred, combined with absolute bliss. "So, it's true. Z has returned." Tsumi ran his blade through the stranger's stomach "I don't know why people call me that, but i do know one thing. MY NAME IS TSUMI KESSHO." he said, before ripping the blade straight upwards, effectively cutting the stranger in half. Tsumi ran into the burning village, determined to save anyone and everyone he could find. Everyone he found, however, had already abandoned themselves to the flames. He searched and searched, before one person, the only one so far still coherent, told him that his family had taken refuge in the forest of Ancestors. Tsumi, now afraid for the lives of his family, ran into the forest. Dodging regrets here and there, he called for his family. "AMY! MOM! DAD!" he shouted. "Tsumi...." said Amy, from behind him, sounding more like a zombie, and less like his sister. "Tsumi..." Said his mom, also talking slowly. "Tsumi...." Said Tsumi's dad, also slowly (not too different from the way he talked, actually...). Tsumi turned, and saw each one holding serrated knives. They walked toward him, slowly and ominously. Emyli threw her knife directly at Tsumi's head, before rushing at him, hands in a position to choke. Tsumi's reaction was automatic, he didn't react as fast as his hands did. He looked down, and saw his own sword through the heart of his mother. He pulled out the sword, and his mother continued to rush at him. He then made a sudden realization: This was not his family, not anymore. He completely dismembered his family, limb by agonizing limb, and walked slowly toward the Dark Trinity's Chamber, which lay on the outskirts of the village. Later, back in the Blackheart's cave...“Why did you call me Z? That’s not my name.” said Tsumi, to which Kyn replied “Not in this life. Let me tell you a little story. In a different universe, you were regarded as a hero. That hero’s name was Z; however, that hero was ALSO a man reborn. The very original went by the name of Project Z. Project Z’s soul was cut into 26 pieces, with each piece being put into a separate being. Each individual Project was supposed to develop their skills as much as they could, and then, once they had reached their full potential, their portion of the soul was put into a super powerful being, known as CHAOS. The rest of that story, however, is for another time. The SECOND Z created the blackheart fighting style, and, as his final act of heroism, used all three to save the girl he loved. However, during his dying minutes, he found out a horrible truth. Project Z’s soul was doom to cross different realities, all the while doomed to fail. Anyway, Z created us so that the blackheart jutsu would not be misused, but he himself had to abide by the rules. We, as thanks for bringing us into existence, put him back together, moved him to a different universe, and renamed him Tsumi. You are Tsumi, the sin who will break the chain of failure. That mark that you wear on your chest is the mark of Xyn. Xyn is the process in which the soul is broken up and mended, and always leaves a mark. The mark usually ends up as a scar, unless it happened on a large scale, or more than once. Now, BOTH of those instances happened to you, and thus, your crystal mark was created.” Tsumi looked surprised. “Thanks for everything. I had better be going…” Zo stopped him “You still owe us your soul, boy. The village and its inhabitants were burned to the ground.” Tsumi smiled “No, I don’t. Our bargain was for me to defeat the stranger, not to save the village.” The dark trinity all laughed as hard as they could. “Well done child, come back if you need any help.” Tsumi nodded “thanks.” Kyn spoke “oh, and by the way, don’t come back.” "It'll be better if he doesn't know." They all thought, disappearing. For, you see, these individuals who had established themselves as demonic gods were neither divine nor demonic. In fact, these were three survivors of the original settlers of the Village Of Peace, who had managed to preserve themselves using a complex string of Edo Tensei and various other summoning jutsu. In fact, It was only a very simple Genjutsu that allowed them to appear as anything divine at all.
Roleplay Sample:
- RP Sample:
Tsumi, Age 9- That’s 30 straight wins! Wow, Oheina, you just can’t be beat!” A crowd of kids gathered around a girl, who looked to be about 8 years old. This girl flicked her hair out of her face, in an over-clichéd fashion. Well, of course. How many of YOU pipsqueaks can beat ME? After all, I’m ten years old. Mommy says I’m a big girl, now. Oheina surveyed her crowd, looking quite pleased with herself. She then caught sight of two boys in a tree, who weren’t paying any attention to her. Oheina was quite miffed at this, and went to go gather the lost sheep. I mean, come ON. What could be BETTER than paying attention to HER? Hey, you boys in the tree! One of the boys, a rather shy one, became quiet. The other one, Tsumi, jumped down from the tree.
”What is it?” They hadn’t even been paying attention! How RUDE! ”What do you MEAN ‘what is it’? Grab the bamboo sword, and fight me!” ”Hmm…..nah.” ”What?!?!? Why won’t you fight me!?!” ”There’s no reason to. It won’t make either of us stronger, and we aren’t enemies.” ”Well….were enemies now! Now, come fight me!” ”Hmm….nah. bye, now!” Tsumi turned to leave. ”Then I’ll just have to beat up your friend!” Tsumi whipped back around.
Give me the sword. Oheina laughed triumphantly, threw him the bamboo sword, and took an offensive stance. Tsumi, not versed at all in swordplay, took a stance he HOPED was defensive. Oheina lunged at him, wildly swinging her sword. Now, Tsumi new for a FACT that this was not swordplay (or, at least, he HOPED not). Tsumi blocked, and went for a horizontal slash. Oheina, her childish arrogance overtaking, attempted to backflip out of the way of Tsumi’s slash, and instead found herself lying on her back. She attempted a desperate stab at Tsumi, which was easily deflected from such a poor angle. Tsumi disarmed her, and walked away, stopping only to talk to his friend, and to say ”You can hurt me, but never, EVER, hurt my friends.”
FACE CLAIM. Character Claim: Vaan, FFXII Source: Drawn Image URL: https://servimg.com/view/17185580/103
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| THE ARSENAL.
- Academy Jutsu:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1CP to seal; 1CP to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
- Kesshō Clan Jutsu:
Name: Kesshō Hari | Crystal Needles Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Shōton (Crystal Release) Description: Ransu Kesshō is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. This jutsu allows the user to create a large and sharp spear-like rod attached to her wrist, which she can use to impale her target. This technique is shown capable of blowing through rock and steel. Chakra Cost: 3CP
Name: Suishō Tō | Jade Crystal Blade Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Shōton (Crystal Release) Description: Suishō Tō is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. With this technique the user can quickly form a blade made of crystal on their arm, and use it in a manner reminiscent of a Tantō. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed, though this consumes an additional 3CP. Chakra Cost: 3CP
Name: Kesshō no Yoroi | Crystal Armour Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Shōton (Crystal Release) Description: Kesshō no Yoroi is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. This technique allows the Kesho member to cover their skin with a thin sheet of crystal, protecting themselves from blunt attacks. This armour can also aid the member to perform stronger physical attacks, but will break when struck by a decent C-rank technique. Chakra Cost: 5CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Kesshō Chōeki-ha | Crystal Imprisonment Wave Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Shōton (Crystal Release) Description: Kesshō Chōeki-ha is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. The user sends out a wave of chakra that encases small objects such as bugs or weapons in crystal, halting them whilst airborne and making them fall to the grown and shatter. Object must be no larger than a Kunai. Chakra Cost: 5CP
Name: Kesshō toge o Seichō Sa Seru | Growing Crystal Thorn Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Shōton (Crystal Release) Description: Kesshō toge o Seichō Sa Seru is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. The user creates growing thorn-like crystals from the ground that continuously grow towards the opponent's direction. Chakra Cost: 5CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Suishō Rō | Jade Crystal Prison Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Shōton (Crystal Release) Description: Suishō Rō is a technique used by the members of the Kessho clan. The user summons crystalizes the space around a target completely encase a single target in crystal. If a person was so unlucky to be encased in the crystal then they will have quite a hard time breaking free from it, if the crystal itself was broken and a person was encased within it, then that segment of crystal would be destroyed allowing the victim to have free movement where they were once trapped. Chakra Cost: 8CP
Name: Omiwatari | The God's Crossing Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Shōton (Crystal Release) Description: Omiwatari is a technique used by the members of the Kesshō clan. The user places their hand on a surface, creating a long stream of sharp crystals to bind and pierce a target. Chakra Cost: 8CP
- Raiton Ninjutsu:
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)
Name: Kangekiha - Inspiration Wave Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: The user will first create a protective wall of water (must be done with a water technique, it is not included with just this technique). They will then form the needed hand seal and emit a bolt of electricity into the water which will increase its defensive effectiveness and stun any targets who attempt to pass through. The electricity only affects the water for the post it is used, and the stunning effect only lasts as long as the user is making contact with the water. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Hiraishin - Sparking Electric Needle Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: After coming into physical contact with the opponent, the user raises their arm into the air, generating a powerful bolt of electricity which will travel through their body into the body of the opponent. Chakra Cost: 10
- Doton Ninjutsu:
Name: Eriko No Kabe | Walls of Jericho Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: After performing the needed hand-seals, the user strikes the ground with their hand (or a weapon, if need be), causing a box of solid rock to rise from the ground, protecting the user from all sides. One of the walls will rise a bit higher than the others, separating into two halves, and forming the roof of the box. If the user removes their hand/weapon from the ground, the walls will return to the ground instantly. Also, should the user use a weapon to create the box, they may move around, or use other Jutsu, as long as the weapon stays in the ground. You must continue to pay the chakra cost for keeping the walls up, should you use a weapon to summon the walls. The chakra must continue to be paid until the weapon is withdrawn. Chakra Cost: 6 CP [1 Per turn]
Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)
- Non-Elemental Ninjutsu:
Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent. Chakra Cost: Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4) Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9) Costs the User: A (20) | Takes From Target: B (15) Costs the User: S (35) | Takes From Target: A (25)
Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals and objects to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows them to summon different size and skill levels of creature. Signing this contract also allows the animal to reverse summon the human ninja to their location. Chakra Cost: 5 (C Rank Summon), 10 (B), 15 (A), 20 (S)
Name: Hari Jigoku - Hell Needles Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: N/A Description: This technique first requires you to preform the other technique known as Hari Jizou (Underworld Guardian Spikes). After that is done, the user may then launch a torrent of hardened hair in the form of needles towards his or her target. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Gentoushin no Jutsu - Lit Apparition Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A Description: Gentoushin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the user and an individual(s) to gather at one location, even while members are in different parts of the world. By forming the needed handseal, an astral form of their being will appear at the desired location. While in the spirit form, the member’s voice will sound deep and distorted. Chakra Cost: 14 + 2 for each additional member after the first three (2 per post regardless of member quantity)
- Weapon-Based Jutsu:
Name: Youji - Toothpick Rank: E Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: N/A Description: Though the toothpick looks like it might be a quirk of user’s, it actually functions as a weapon in battle. Similar to a senbon, the user can spit the toothpick at his/her opponents to injure them. He/she can also spit it at incoming projectiles to knock them away. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Gyorai Shin- Torpedo Needle Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Removing nails from his or her pocket, the user will throw them into the air and then plant them tip first into the earth. Using his or her chakra the nails will travel into the ground. Then at his or her discretion, he or she can fire the nails from the ground through the feet of his or her target to nail them in place. He or she can then fire the remaining nails from the ground to cut his target to pieces. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Hitei Mushou - Flying Nail Mist Pierce Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Description: After forming the needed handseal, the user will emit a flying mist of small nails from his or her mouth. These small nails can travel towards his or her opponent at quite a distance and are capable of dealing minor puncture wounds. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Senbon Shower Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Mid (5m - 10m) Element: N/A Description: After throwing a special umbrella that has been equipped with springs into the air, it will release a hailing "shower" of senbon. It cannot be dodged by moving away since the needles cover a wide area in all directions, controlled by chakra. While numerous, the senbon can be easily deflected or blocked and are only capable of inflicting minor cuts and puncture wounds. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Ninpou; Kiri Suramu - Mist Slam Rank: C Type: Weaponry Element: -- Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m~10m), Far (10m+) Village: Kirigakure Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. This jutsu requires no hand seals. After activation, the user will rush towards the target and make a giant swing with massive power in order to try and cleave them in half. This swing will be powerful enough to crush rock, depending on the size and momentum of the sword. Instead of using hand seals, the user will gather chakra within their arms before use. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Ninpou; Hayauchi - Quick Draw Rank: B Type: Weaponry Element: -- Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Village: Kirigakure Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. This jutsu is taught to the sword wielding shinobi of the mist. This can only be used in conjunction with a katana, or a sword that has similar qualities and size to a katana. This allows the user to draw their sword, turning it into a fierce, fast, and deadly slash, and then skillfully placing the katana back into the scabbard. The slash is known to be extremely fast, moving at three times the speed of a normal slash. What is more, this is highly effective against shinobi, seeing as it can be, and often is used, to stop a ninja's hand seals before completion, due to its speed. Chakra Cost: 10
- Inventory:
Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Quantity: 1 Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1]. --------------- Name: Katana Rank: C Type: Primary/Melee Quantity: 1 Description: Commonly refereed to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance. It has a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability. -------------- Name: Hookblade Rank: C Type: Concealable/Melee Appearance: A Retractable blade, attached to one's wrist, that extends about 6 inches from the wrist. However, unlike the generic Retractable wrist-blade, this one comes with a hook close to the end (far enough away that poking still hurts, though), that helps with grabbing and climbing various objects. Quantity: 1 Storage: One unsheathes the Hookblade by arching their hand backwards. This pulls on a ring (Worn with the Hookblade), which pulls on a small mechanism, which releases a spring, that pushes the hookblade out...forcefully. Now, a second string is attached the the back of the mechanism, so that when the user stops pulling with their ring, the blade will sheath. -------------- Name: Ear-Piece Mic Radio Rank: C Type: Main -Primary/Accessory Quantity: 3 Description: The short range radio is capable of keeping ninja in contact up to 10 miles. The radio can accept multiple frequencies and is activated to talk by pushing a button on the neck attachment, making it simple to use even in the most dire of situations. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes. -------------- Name: Breathing Apparatus Rank: C - A Rank Type: Supplementary | Air Filter Quantity: One [1] Description: With this accessory, the Shinobi is able to breathe underwater for short periods of time. The apparatus appears as a very small silver tube with two small pieces attache. The first is a set of small tubes that go into the nostrils and the second is a small mouth piece. The rank of the item determines the amount of time a user can spend underwater before needing to resurface and recharge the device. It takes a whole set of turns in order for the apparatus to recharge after usage, the duration of recharge is equal to the duration of use, therefore 2 post recharge for C rank usage and so on. Additionally, the filter is designed to keep out aerial objects that may harm the user, such as airborne toxins and micro-fragments, equal to the rank of the apparatus. C| 2 Posts B| 4 Posts A| 6 Posts
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| | | Brett
Age : 29 Posts : 614
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Fri 11 May 2012, 3:55 am | |
| - Brett wrote:
- Okay, so since nobody else has managed to make their way to your character, I'm just going to give you a few pointers..
1.) Make sure your character template is exact. That means no [center] tags and make sure you have all the correct headings and what not.
2.) Please fix your character photo up top, it is currently broken. 3.) Your character name is Buredo, Tsumi- your clan name is Kessho. Therefore, your character's name would be Kessho, Tsumi.
4.) Your personality and appearance are the same two paragraphs, you will need to fix that.
5.) As a weaponry specialist, you are allowed two types of weapons to be proficient with. That list is can be found here, and more specifically defined here.
6.) As a Kessho user, the clan utilizes Doton (Earth) and Raiton (Lightning) to create Shōton (Crystal). Therefore, the only two affinities you may have while being part of the Kessho clan are Doton and Raiton.
7.) You will need to expand your combat style by a little bit. At the very least, you should answer all of the questions asked in the character template.
8.) This is completely up to you, but the first Special Characteristic is free, you may want to think about taking one (if it is C rank at the highest). You can find the list of special characteristics with definitions here.
9.) Your history really only explains one event, it is highly unlikely that only one event has occurred in your character's fifteen years of life. You will need to expand on your history. Perhaps putting it in Arcs would help. 10.) All academy jutsus are free and do not count toward your total start-up 15 jutsus that are allotted. You are free to add more, or leave it as is.
11.) Lastly, you may want to consider picking up a ninja kit, you are allowed one C-ranked ninja kit as a genin.
As a suggestion, looking at already approved characters may help you determine how things should look when all is done.
2 major things that I still find wrong with the application.
1.) You need to change your weapon sub to exotic, not chains. 2.) Select an actual ninja kit. They can be found in the Encyclopedia.
-Also, since you're proficient with swords and exotic weapons.. why not actually get a sword and put that as part of your arsenal? |
| | | Tsumi Buredo
Age : 26 Posts : 260
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Fri 11 May 2012, 4:10 am | |
| Fixed accordingly. Would i be able to pick up a secondary, or just the Katana for now? |
| | | Brett
Age : 29 Posts : 614
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Fri 11 May 2012, 4:27 am | |
| If you have chains, write that into a weapon template please, and put it in your arsenal. |
| | | Tsumi Buredo
Age : 26 Posts : 260
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Fri 11 May 2012, 4:31 am | |
| Done. Thanks for taking the time to look my app over :3 |
| | | Brett
Age : 29 Posts : 614
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Fri 11 May 2012, 4:52 am | |
| Approved [1/2] |
| | | Tsumi Buredo
Age : 26 Posts : 260
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 14 May 2012, 11:36 pm | |
| Bumping for second approval. |
| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Tue 15 May 2012, 7:12 am | |
| Approved 2/2
Welcome to Kumogakure.
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| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Tue 08 Jan 2013, 10:39 pm | |
| Archived. Due to Inactivity. |
| | | TwinnyKitty
Age : 30 Posts : 471
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 14 Jan 2013, 5:19 am | |
| Un-archived. Due to user request. |
| | | Tsumi Buredo
Age : 26 Posts : 260
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 14 Jan 2013, 5:21 am | |
| Gonna need approvals again! :3 |
| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Tue 15 Jan 2013, 5:13 pm | |
| Hallo there! A few things I need to mention;
- I feel a tad bit conflicted about your character's appearance. In the clan description, it says;
- Quote :
- Although not much is known about the Kessho clan, members tend to have dark blue hair and dark eyes. As a uniform they wear a wool collared green or blue robe over a fishnet shirt with their clan symbol on their back. They also have been known to wear a rope around their waste tied into a bow in their back.
So I am willing to compromise a bit here with you, as even if we are very strict when it comes to the clans; then in the clan it does say that not much is known about the members. I would prefer if you would have his physical appearance according to what I just quoted, but I am going to be more lenient about his uniform and that part can be skipped.
- As you are applying for a clan, I want to see more work done. Add more to the appearance and personality. In appearance you don't mention his eyes or facial features, and in his personality you could add a few more things of his likes and dislikes. What really ticks him off? Etc.
- In origin you write your character's birthplace.
- When it comes to weaponry (in the specialties area) we ask that you write;
First: Weaponry (main: close/ sub: mid) or (long/close) depending on what weapons you intend to use. (the spoiler you made isn't needed)
- I am sorry to say, but I have to deny your history. As we do not have any Gods or Demons on this site.
- You have only 7 jutsu, but can start with 15. I would advice having something more than just your clan's jutsu. But it's not something mandatory.
- You have to begin with a specific Genin kit, the one below. When you have been approved you can make your own custom one.
- Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Genin Kit [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Quantity:[/b] 1 [b]Contents:[/b] 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].
- You can only have one C rank weapon, and that's the one he will have as his main weapon.
- Quote :
- With the current system you choose two types of weapons and you then specialize in these types of weaponry. One is your main and the other your sub. Your main can be used up to your own rank, your sub may be used up to 1 rank below your rank, always being at least D Rank.
- You are missing the FC section.
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| | | Tsumi Buredo
Age : 26 Posts : 260
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Wed 16 Jan 2013, 2:39 am | |
| Ok, think i fixed everything |
| | | Tsumi Buredo
Age : 26 Posts : 260
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Wed 16 Jan 2013, 7:22 am | |
| Also,
[21:19:57] Mors Atra : There's nothing that says you can't start with 2 c-rank weapons.
Is this true? O: |
| | | Kiseki
Posts : 1216
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Wed 16 Jan 2013, 8:18 am | |
| You can start with a maximum of two C-ranks if you have weaponry. Don't double post. Just edit previous post to say your new message. And stop bumping. |
| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Wed 16 Jan 2013, 1:18 pm | |
| - Quote :
- - Weaponry users on US are combined with Kenjutsu, though you can still have 'Kenjutsu'. With the current system you choose two types of weapons and you then specialize in these types of weaponry. One is your main and the other your sub. Your main can be used up to your own rank, your sub may be used up to 1 rank below your rank, always being at least D Rank. Other than your two chosen, you're treated as a normal ninja.
You may pick from the following categories:
Long Range: Shuriken, Bows, Bombs, Launchers, etc. Mid Range: Chains, Fans, Sound-based Weapons, Nodachi, etc. Close Range: Bats, Blades, Fists, Axes, Whips, etc. - Quote :
- In terms of Weaponry, there is a limit as to how many weapons your character is able to possess in regards to your character's ranking. They are as followed:
In terms of Weaponry, there is a limit as to how many weapons your character is able to possess in regards to your character's ranking. They are as followed:
Nin. Rank C-rank E-Wep ∞ D-Wep 15 C-Wep 2 B-Wep A-Wep S-Wep
I apologize for not being more specific, as you -can- have 2 if they are within the same range/both in the main group. And you can only have 2 of C rank weapons. So either you have to have the two hookswords, or the katana and a hooksword.
This is though stated in the systems and rules. |
| | | Tsumi Buredo
Age : 26 Posts : 260
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Wed 16 Jan 2013, 10:00 pm | |
| OHHH, ok. I've read through some of the systems, though i had assumed it meant 2 TYPES of weapon, in whatever quantity. My bad :3 |
| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Thu 17 Jan 2013, 11:41 am | |
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- I feel a bit iffy about the whole "hair turning white" due to a voice appearing in his head. Plus it is not mentioned (not that I could see) in his history. So, perhaps it would do better to just say that he dyes his hair?
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- Quote :
- Origin: The Village of Peace
Is that an actual village in Naruto?
- In my last post, I told you that demons were forbidden on here. And so are Gods. And thus your history must be changed, and your character cannot possess that Blackheart technique.
- As the hookblade is a custom made weapon, please use the template below; (also, fix the plural words).
- Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] [b]Rank:[/b] [b]Type:[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] [b]Quantity:[/b] [b]Storage:[/b] [b]Special Abilities:[/b]
- You have 14 jutsu of 15, just wanted to remind you that E ranks do not count towards the list.
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| | | Tsumi Buredo
Age : 26 Posts : 260
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Fri 18 Jan 2013, 2:00 am | |
| In regards to changing the history, i added a paragraph on the end, stating:
- Quote :
"It'll be better if he doesn't know." They all thought, disappearing. For, you see, these individuals who had established themselves as demonic gods were neither divine nor demonic. In fact, these were three survivors of the original settlers of the Village Of Peace, who had managed to preserve themselves using a complex string of Edo Tensei and various other summoning jutsu. In fact, It was only a very simple Genjutsu that allowed them to appear as anything divine at all.
- Changed my origin to Tsuki No Kuni.
- Tsumi never knew, nor will he ever know the blackheart techniques. It was for story purposes only.
- Put the Hookblade into the correct format.
- Changed my appearance, regarding hair. He dyes it now :3
- Added another Jutsu, totalling 15.
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| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| | | | lifeanddeath
Age : 31 Posts : 1490
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Sat 19 Jan 2013, 2:37 pm | |
| (2/2) Approved
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| | | Anna
Age : 31 Posts : 1900
| Subject: Re: Kessho, Tsumi [Kiri Genin] Sun 09 Nov 2014, 4:40 am | |
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