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| ![South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] 539px-Ichigo_Kurosaki_Bankai_Reigai](https://2img.net/h/images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110808084031/betterbleachfanfiction/images/thumb/0/02/Ichigo_Kurosaki_Bankai_Reigai.jpg/539px-Ichigo_Kurosaki_Bankai_Reigai.jpg) South, Chyrl.THE INFO.
Name: South, Chyrl
Nickname:
-Bumblebee
-September[Business Name]
Age: 16.
Gender: Male.
Appearance:
South’s overall look fails to be unique to the common eye of his environment. His appearance is overall, plain. While one might peg him for above average looks, they really don’t play a heavy role in the large scheme of things, so South doesn’t bother with looking his best. The most apparent feature of this would be his long, shaggy unkempt hair. Despite being one of the few who obsessively trains out in the sunlight, he has failed to gather a tan beyond a shade lighter then olive. His height is a decent length of 5’11”, being fairly tall for his age and lacking any real vertical difficulties. Keeping him above the height of many of his male counterparts, in terms of biological maturity. His body type is a decent cut above the rest, having fully specialised himself in the arts of the body, he now bears the marks of intense physical conditioning. Despite this, he has a lighter weight then many might expect, sitting at a trivial 69 Kilograms. His broad shoulders make him appear to be slightly more muscular then he actually is. His body bears several scars from various fights; the locations of the more fierce ones are those on his ribs, whence he learned the dangers of a scythe. A circular band of formerly damaged tissue around his shoulder shows the impact of a blunt weapon nearly removing that arm. On his left bicep there is the mark of a blade’s bite, ironically the same one that he now wields.
If one were to try and define the shade of his hair, it would be rather easy. A simple pick of above average length and strawberry blonde. While blondes are universally known, having strawberry blonde hair is something of a difference, and thus makes him more then a little recognisable in a crowd. Despite it’s current length, South has more often then not, had it short- only recently keeping it long because of increased notoriety among the minor nations, preventing him from getting it cut. And lacking the skills to do it himself, so he simply went with the ‘emo’ archtype, and allowed it to grow not bothering to keep it out of his eyes.
South's eyes are a brown, a brown that is plain, simple, yet at the same time: shallow. His woeful eyes tend not to reveal a lot about what he's thinking. He plays this as one of his strong points and often uses it as a distraction for opponents who are used to reading their opponents via softening and tightening of the eyes, and skin around them.
As for fashion South has slightly gothic tastes in clothing, usually wearing a black outfit of some sort, or at the very least- based in grey colours. When on duty as a Nuke-nin he often wears a mask, an ornament in the appearance of what could best be described as a menacing skull. There are two thick vertical maroon stripes, each on one half of the mask, that are interrupted by the eye-holes and the jaw. A jaw that seems to have missed whatever dental appointments that one might have originally been created for it, now the teeth are highly extended and thrust through where the lips should ordinarily sit.
These teeth are inordinately thin. To compliment this outfit he extends upon the original dark costume with a long-sleeved, ankle-length black coat with a crimson internal lining. Suffice to say, when fully decked out in complete regalia, South strikes a reasonably imposing figure upon those who he faces, and those who he fights with. It is actually the contrast between, black, white and his mask that has earned him the nickname Bumblebee, something that he despises.
Forehead Protector: Back of neck.
Personality:
The the world is a game; which is an excuse used by more than one soul to explain away precisely -why- they find the ideas of mundane thought to be alternately boring and hysterical or hypocritical and backwards, but it is again applied to South. Take a mind gifted with a proper intellect and give it room to grow, and then introduce to it the lure that all of reality could be understood and controlled-one only had to study it from the proper angle. This mind would belong to a young boy born in the shadow of the towers of others. Yet nobody is born with ideas in their heads, therefore; watching the growth of ideas of others allows one to cite from an introspective viewing point.
And so is born the methods of rationalism. For those who have defined the rules of the game, or more accurately, the guidelines upon which the game can be played for reliable and accurate results. A double six, so to speak. There are twelve rules. Twelve methods of rationality that must be obeyed, ‘lest you loose your path. They are born through the experiences that one goes through as they mature, from the casual back and forth nature of a babies relationship with his mother or caregiver. Which grows into the regulation that will provided that child with the regulation required. But what happens if a child grows up without the back and forth of a mother to child? Some become violent and rough, commended for their bravery, but not lauded for their reasoning. South is one such child who grew up without that guideline. So he made his own. The twelve methods of rationality, to keep himself in check and to help him understand the world around him. If not for his heritage, he might have failed on this path. But with the natural inclination of demonic nobility running in his veins, it allowed him to move past the mundaneness of emotional attachment, and develop his own free-standing image. Or images as the term might better be applied here. Twelve filters that allowed the young child to survive a dangerous world. And thus, without further ado, here are the images themselves:
The first lesson is curiosity. The vow that is made to pursue the truth in any form it may take, to scurry under the cloak of darkness and brandish it's iron rod. If but the knowledge you seek will be revealed it is well worth the effort expended.
The second virtue is relinquishment.
Do not flinch from experiences that might destroy your beliefs. The thought you cannot think controls you more than thoughts you speak aloud. Submit yourself to ordeals and test yourself in fire. Have confidence in what you hold dear and submit it time and time again to renew that confidence. Simply because what can be destroyed by the truth, should be. Ignorance in any form is weakness, this rule is often applied in addition to the lesson of curiosity.
The third lesson is lightness.
Let the winds of evidence blow you about as though you are a leaf, with no direction of your own. Beware lest you fight a rearguard retreat against the evidence, grudgingly conceding each foot of ground only when forced. This is important to be applied in fights, no such images like bravery will prevent Kirin from leaving a battle he has no hope of winning. The previous two rules are applied in conjunction with this one as well, literally functioning as the master board in terms of 'truth'.
The fourth guideline is evenness.
One who wishes to believe says, “Does the evidence permit me to believe?” One who wishes to disbelieve asks, “Does the evidence force me to believe?” Beware lest you place huge burdens of proof only on propositions you dislike, and then defend yourself by saying: “But it is good to be skeptical or cynical." You should be neither, nothing but a butterfly that only questions what he wishes to believe and why he believes it. Accusations should be internal, not external.
The fifth teaching is argument.
Those who wish to fail must first prevent their friends from helping them. Those who smile wisely and say: “I will not argue” remove themselves from help, and withdraw from the communal effort. In argument strive for exact honesty, for the sake of others and also yourself: The part of yourself that distorts what you say to others also distorts your own thoughts. Similarly, turning the other cheek to those who deserve no second blow also follows under it's jurisdiction.
The sixth virtue is empiricism.
The roots of knowledge are in observation and its fruit is prediction. What tree grows without roots? What tree spreads it’s diversity us without fruit? Do not keep all your eggs in the same basket. Spread your knowledge and diversify. It is all very well to spread your roots, but it is far more practical to begin a empire with you at it's head, and too dedicate your subordinates to gather information in different areas as you delve ever deeper.
The seventh attribute is simplicity.
Perfection is achieved not when there is nothing left to add, but when there is nothing left to take away. Simplicity is virtuous in belief, design, planning, and justification.
When you profess a huge belief with many details, each additional detail is another chance for the belief to be wrong. Some might say that a plan should have no more then three hinge factors, others say that planning is overrated, and act on the moment. But in truth, there is no easy way about it. Change your methods to challenge the situation.
The eighth image is humility.
To be humble is to take specific actions in anticipation of your own errors, to for see your own fallibility and then do nothing about it is not humble; it is boasting of your modesty, and professing your carelessness to the world. For those who also know this lesson, they will seek you out for they can see past the façade, and peer into the circles in which you walk.
The ninth virtue is perfectionism.
The more errors you correct in yourself, the more you notice. As your mind becomes more silent, you hear more noise. Becoming one who finds the errors in others work and then fixes them. When you notice an error in yourself, this signals your readiness to seek advancement to the next level. If you tolerate the error rather than correcting it, you will not advance to the next level and you will not gain the skill to notice new errors. No one is perfect, but it is certainly a goal to aim for. Striving to walk among the stars will see you fly high even if you fall short.
The tenth virtue is precision.
One comes and says: The quantity is between 1 and 100. Another says: the quantity is between 40 and 50. If the quantity is 42 they are both correct, but the second prediction was more useful and exposed itself to a stricter test. It contains a narrower margin for error and consequently; guesswork.
What is true of one apple may not be true of another apple; thus more can be said about a single apple than about all the apples in the world. The narrowest statements slice deepest, the cutting edge of the blade. Stereotyping a single thing leads to ignorance of exceptions, which will lead to the inevitable loss of life. Simply because the exceptions are those that will stick out like sore thumbs.
The eleventh virtue is scholarship.
Study many sciences and absorb their power as your own. Each field that you consume makes you larger. If you swallow enough sciences the gaps between them will diminish and your knowledge will become a unified whole, you will begin to see the inter-linking spaces between each Art as it’s own language. The more you know, the more connections you will be able to see, the more bridges you can construct.
Before these eleven virtues is a virtue which is nameless.
“The primary thing when you take a sword in your hands is your intention to cut the enemy, whatever the means. Whenever you parry, hit, spring, strike or touch the enemy’s cutting sword, you must cut the enemy in the same movement. It is essential to attain this. If you think only of hitting, springing, striking or touching the enemy, you will not be able actually to cut him. More than anything, you must be thinking of carrying your movement through to cutting him."
Clan: -
Nindō: "Nothing must stand in the way of victory
THE NINJA.
Origin: Kaminari no Kuni
Affiliation: -
Rank: C-Rank Nukenin
Specialties:
-Weaponry{(Dom)Swords|(Sub)Ranged}
-Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities:
-Raiton
-Fuuton
Combat Style:
As one might expect from someone who carried around a sword, and has no discomfort at all about showing off what is obvious- a heavily toned body, South typically plays his cards close to his heart until he is within a better range of attack. Using a sword in combination with Taijutsu can be a little disconcerting; for both user and victim, but what is usually achieved is that South has two spheres of attack available to him. That relatively close to his body and that which his sword can reach, he refrains from using Ninjutsu at all, and is unlikely to ever use Academy Techniques despite being taught them. For dealing with those who might attempt to avoid his sword by getting closer to his body, South has a relatively simple method of convincing them it is a bad place to stay. Borrowing several motions from the Muay Thai styles, South will lash out with his knees and elbows in an attempt to stun them and open up the opportunity for an easy kill. When at a range, South is more leisurely with his attempts. Simply put, South is far more comfortable with them at a range. This is where he can utilise the environment for easier kills and just enjoy the experience that much more. He backs up his swordplay with a very basic, rudimentary knowledge of the body, not the names, not the function, but he knows his way around the body in the same way a butcher does. How to cut someone to best make them bleed, how to sever ligaments to still limbs. All this is known and used by South during the art of combat.
Special Characteristics:
Demonic Essence
- Spoiler:
Name: Demonic Essence.
Rank: C.
Type: Miscellaneous Based.
Physical Requirements: Must be a Nukenin.
Training Requirements: 500.
Description: Only the foulest ninja known to man were known to possess such a characteristic that harbors to their cruel natures. The person whose soul has turned hollow with darkness now holds a demonic presence inside of them, literally making them a monster. They lose all sense of fear and are mentally unstable, and because of that they are now immune to mind reading abilities. In the general ninja world, those with a Demonic Essence strike absolute fear into casualties who sees them, petrifying them in place or making them flee. Furthermore the person now has a uncontrollable desire to kill. For each person that they kill within a thread whether it's an actual member or a NPC, they are refunded 10CP for that post.
THE BACKGROUND.
History:- Spoiler:
Where to begin with this preamble of a history? I suppose I shall initiate by describing the events that happened before the birth of September, as they are incredibly relevant to how South will act and carry himself in later life:
Unlike most infants, when South was born and when he had his first Birthday are extraordinarily stretched, and once again we must return to the period of history before South's Birth to truly understand the extremities of his time within the womb.
He wasn’t noticeable when his soon-to-be parents set off for the war. And for the first few months of that delicate period, instead of the noise of conversation, and the other comforts that allow a baby to grow happily and undisturbed, where void for little South.
But as he slowly was able to be seen to the naked eye, his Mother -Serena, who was a dedicated Med Nin- attempted to spirit the pair away from the Battlefield, unfortunately for them, they where behind enemy lines and had no way of returning Home.
So the most obvious thing to do would be to abort the mission they’d been assigned and make a break for their own Territory.
However for it to work, a diversion was needed, and how to go about this save the sacrifice of one of his parents? September’s Farther –Bruna-, who gave September the skill as a combat based Shinobi.
After some planning by the two of them, and capturing one of the wandering enemy Shinobi, they disguised him to look like Bruna, before using the Dead Soul Technique to control him and create the needed diversion before the two and a quarter to escape.
The Head Quarters of the Cloud Forces, didn’t take kindly to their Mission being aborted, although the diversion that South’s parents created for him left the Enemy unsure of their position, unfortunately, this spying Mission ultimately resulted in one of the sparks that would light the flame of an even greater skirmish, and thus September's birthday is on the verge of one of the more terse periods available.
How long the attrition went for isn’t important, while most children born around the same date grew up during the war, and contributed when they graduated from the Academy, however, South never reached his Birthday, not until a good eighty years later, to explain this we converge on the next part of our story:
The Birth of South wasn’t the easiest of procedures, indeed, the labour lasted for a long time indeed. 84 Hours of pushing wasn’t easy on the Mother or the baby, both of whom where very stubborn in their efforts.
And yet again as fate would have it; disaster struck with her cruel blade once again, giving a deceive slash to South and his Mother, and in the later hours after the birth was completed, the Village was probed. And South was a casualty. Again, this pushed him off the path of ever being normal, and enjoying the warmth of a family. From the tender age of a few hours old, he knew the emotion of rage, hate and the mortal pain. And anything else that correlates to the utter destruction of a fellow human being. He was far too young to do anything about it at the time, and indeed to too, was injured. Nothing could be done about such a desire with the present state of being frozen in stasis. A decision that was made to stall for time, for more powerful treatments to become available. But it never came, South lay dormant in his stasis for over fifty years, when he finally emerged his entire world had changed and his parents lay long dead. Slain while attempting to find a more able Medic to heal him.
Frozen as he was his body wouldn’t need to breath or in general function; he clung to life on a thread, but even that life was a half one. So was there really anything to loose by simply stopping trying to stay alive? During his time in the womb, he had heard the sounds of war, of people being struck down but rising up again. He had been bred for it in the most literal sense of all.
And there he was, kept alive by Medical Ninjutsu, bound to life by the power of another. And here he would remain, for a long time. His body was preserved to prevent it from rotting, to keep the cells healthy through his extended animation he had multiple Fuinjutsu placed upon him. And like this he slept, long beyond the way and any others who might have been his class-mates, friends or lovers.
His recent awakening is a cause of mystery and wonder, and for the most part, no one knows how he came to, some believe it is a demon- something that festered within his heart when damaged by the enemy operatives.
Roleplay Sample:- Spoiler:
Yes, they were getting somewhere. Just not without the usual byplay that typically bounded between them. They each had their quirks, and these could sometimes grate against the others sensibilities or lack thereof for the two of them. Denebola would only be reluctant to play upon the current system if she had invested interest in the outcome of this scenario. Mentally shrugging, Taimat listed out the possible reasons in his head. She could be wanting personal power from this being. That was the most likely motivation for her involvement. Perhaps her own country in a new world? A small guarantee is better then none after all. Some might say that Taimat was nit-picking, she had admitted just as much. So why bother to assess whether or not she was telling the truth? Denebola lied more then she spoke truths. What could she get from lying to him? Hmm. Perhaps he needed to read between the lines a little more. Having his degree of knowledge about her character and frame of mind, Taimat knew that she wouldn't be happy being second best. While there was some measure of truth in her words, this book wouldn't be the illustrations seal that they were chasing. Unfortunately she had also just admitted to it. Without too much ulterior prompting.
Of course, the only real bone he had to pick with her was calling their minds simple. It really was a fairly grevious insult to the power of evolution. Within the human brain their are some thousand billion neurons, each of these has some hundred thousand dendrites. The end result was that there were many more pathways for a thought to go then there area stars in the universe. Some estimates put it into the trillions, but Taimat didn't feel the urge to bring it up, instead settled for sending her a slightly pained look at the comment. It really wasn't that their brains were simple. It was more that they lacked the appropriate knowledge.
"How much are you prepared to stake on that book?" It was a calm question, meaning exactly what it sounded like. How far was she prepared to go to gain an advantage over this demon? While she had certainly made a pact, he didn't recall there being stakes involved. If his memory failed him, this was as good as way as any to find out if she altered the memories in any way. There was a secondary way to check the records: to change the perspective of the pensive from third to first person. Modern pensives didn't posses that particular function anymore. Some rubbish about the viewers not being able to handle the shift. Politicians. Killjoys the lot of them.
What did catch his interest was the confirmation of the fact that Danka's parental figures were former Ravenclaws. That did catch his interest. The likelihood that the two of them had some idea of Danka's little tenant grew and the probability that they had placed it inside of him lessened. However... "That still doesn't tell me what I want to know. It can be assumed his Guardians weren't the ones to induce Danka with the demon. It may still have gotten in via Native American Magic however." Taimat sighed slightly. Not in exasperation, but in wariness of the situation they had got themselves into. They needed to fight fire with fire. Only for the purposes of dealing with the demon or shifting his anchor to a more European view point. Not host, anchor.what would be useful would be to get some background on Danka. And what was his last name? Mecha? Mancha? Something along those lines.
When Denebola sat on the throne a small grin worked is way across his face with almost no resistance. She truly could be amusing sometimes. What Taimat felt was interesting from her next statement was the origin of the being she had communicated with, however brief. And he had to agree, but according to some of her previous words..."You said that these beings have been trying to reach our dimensional plane for a couple of millennia," Taimat asked this with a duo of raised eyebrows for emphasis. "So wouldn't it become redundant to pin a nationality on it beyond the home country of it's host?"
It was however, her next tirade that caught him off guard. France? That was a little far from America wasn't it? It certainly made sense with the biblical allusions to a demonic aspect, but overall that bided well for their endeavors, typically the French used the same Latin words that all -or most- european countries tended to use. So maybe an adventure into the unknowns of American Magic could be avoided. Actually, now that Taimat thought about it, the nature of the seal itself was definitely in question with regards to the type of magic in doubt. So how did it function, was it tied to an object or an action that refreshed the integrity of the barrier. Most of the higher class wards should be able to perform like that. If they didn't Taimst would be upset.
FACE CLAIM.
Character Claim: Ichigo Kurosaki
Source: Bleach
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| THE ARSENAL.
Academy Ninjutsu
- Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Genjutsu
Range: N/A
Medium: Optical
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others.
Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: N/A
Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread.
Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu.
Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Weaponry Ninjutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The properties of the wire also allows the user to guide fire down it with any number of Katon Jutsu.
Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Kage Senbon no Jutsu - Shadow Senbon Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 1om)
Element: N/A
Description: This technique seems to be a variation of the Shadow Shuriken Technique, replacing shuriken with senbon. The user throws at the same time a senbon with a distracting item attached to it, and another one without it, so that the opponent will only react to the more obvious projectile and won´t notice the other senbon. However, if the opponent recognises the trick behind it, this technique is easy to evade.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Range: Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: N/A
Description: It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fūma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency. The trick is to somehow draw the enemy's attention towards the upper shuriken. Then, to deal with the path of the lower shuriken. If the enemy notices both shuriken, the technique ends up losing all of its efficiency.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Gyorai Shin - Torpedo Needle
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Removing nails from his or her pocket, the user will throw them into the air and then plant them tip first into the earth. Using his or her chakra the nails will travel into the ground. Then at his or her discretion, he or she can fire the nails from the ground through the feet of his or her target to nail them in place. He or she can then fire the remaining nails from the ground to cut his target to pieces.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Hitei Mushou - Flying Nail Mist Pierce
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element:
Description: After forming the needed handseal, the user will emit a flying mist of small nails from his or her mouth. These small nails can travel towards his or her opponent at quite a distance and are capable of dealing minor puncture wounds.
Chakra Cost: 7
- Custom Kenjutsu:
Name: Invisible Air
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Fuuton
Description:
Applying the use of chakra control, it allows the individual to coat their sword in a layer of this, not channel it through the blade, but apply it like a coat of paint, not effectively doing anything aside from sitting a few centimetres above the surface of the blade, and hiding it from unassisted view. If someone were to look at it with chakra sensitive vision, it would be lit up rather visibly. For those without it, they can see the occasional shifts in the formation of the chakra, as the Fuuton natured chakra that was channelled into it follows it's natural inclinations and escapes, the user has to supply more chakra to prevent the technique from falling apart. While the overall effect is not total invisibility, it can keep the opponent guessing the dimensions of the blade, and thus keep them off balance without knowing the range of the weapon.
The physical manifestation of the technique could have been classified as a 'sheath of wind' which distorts the refraction of light and renders what is inside completely invisible by scattering the pathway of light. This illuminates the swirling wind creating the appearance of something remotely similar to a swirling slow typhoon in slow motion.
Chakra Cost: 7 [1 Upkeep]
Name: Returning Blade
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description:
For those that enjoy using thrown weapons, this technique is one that will allow a second chance at scoring a hit. When a weapon is thrown with a certain amount of spin, they can inject the motion of the weapon with chakra, generating a small film around it. After it has gone a certain distance(no more then five meters) they can recall it by snapping their fingers, which causes the rotation of the weapon to reverse and the blade to return to the location of where the user snapped his/her fingers.
Chakra Cost: 5
Taijutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kurotchishotto - Crotch Shot
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m)
Element: -
Description: Kurotchishotto is a humiliating taijutsu technique. By appearing in front of the opponent, the user will charge a small amount of chakra towards their dominant leg. Performing an upward kick at the opponents crotch area, they will be able to force them up into the air by a metre where a second attack could take place. If the victim was a male, a great deal of pain will be dealt after the kick has been made.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. This move is used before preforming "Omote Renge - Front Lotus" or "Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo".
Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Dynamic • Action (Dainamikku • Akushon)
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user flips towards the opponent and attacks with a series of punches and kicks.
Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Konoha Dai Senkou - Leaf Great Light Rotation
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will spin his or her opponent away. This technique can certainly cause a head ache.
Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user first uses the "Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance" to manuever his/her opponent in a vulnerable aerial position. While shadowing his/her opponent, the user will attempt to strike them from a vulnerable angle. If he/she is unable to make a clean strike, he/she will strike anyway as a feint, to draw his/her target's attention and defense to one area. The user can then strike the undefended area and begin knocking them downwards towards the ground. As the enemy falls back to the earth, the user will deftly rotate his/her body around to deliver a full force kick to their chest.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Konoha Raiken - Leaf Thunder Fist
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user will spin to gain momentum and then lay a powerful strike into his or her opponent via punch.
Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Konoha Shoufuu - Leaf Rising Wind
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This jump uses the entire body as a spring by amassing power in the legs before kicking upwards. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky.
Chakra Cost: 5
- Custom Taijutsu:
TBA
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Kit(s)
- Spoiler:
Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Weaponry[Swords]
- Spoiler:
Name: Nodachi
Rank: C
Type: Primary/Melee
Quantity: 1
Description: Known as a 'Field sword', the Nodachi is a large sword which can be wielded with either one or two hands. It is basically a larger version of a katana. Compared to the katana, the Nodachi is more difficult to wield due to its size and weight, but - like any weapon - could be extremely deadly if the warrior wielding it was skilled. The length of the nodachi's hilt varied between twelve to thirteen inches (30 to 33 centimeters). Its cutting capability and range exceeded that of a katana, due to its weight and size. Nodachi's length can reach the 1.50 meters.
Last edited by Tabris on Wed 27 Jun 2012, 7:14 am; edited 8 times in total |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
Posts : 1209
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Thu 21 Jun 2012, 7:57 pm | |
| | Hey I know you are trying to be stylish and I respect that but for the sake of ease of the staff and for the sake of keeping things relatively neat and uniform I would like you to change it back to the original format with the proper headings. Thank you. |
| | | | Iruel
Age : 26
Posts : 106
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Fri 22 Jun 2012, 3:51 am | |
| | Restotred. |
| | | | Cookie Monster
Age : 29
Posts : 4301
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Fri 22 Jun 2012, 12:25 pm | |
| - Title; the title of the topic needs to include your characters rank, such as 'South, Chryl [Kumo Genin]' or 'South, Chryl [C - Rank Nukenin]'. Right now, I'm at a lost as to which you are.
- Appearance; a bit more detail could be placed into this area, such as your characters height as an example. Honestly your first paragraph doesn't really give any descriptive detail on what Chryl looks like. So please do add more to this area, talk about clothing, physique or even scars if any. Also, you've mentioned that your character to be a Nukenin, yet your rank and affiliation states a Genin of Kumogakure. One of the two will need editing, because you can't be both I'm afraid.
- Affiliation; as stated in Appearance, you can't be both a Nukenin and a Genin, so this may need changing depending on your decision.
- Rank; see above.
- Combat Style; actual detail needs to be placed into this area, you've offered very little insight into how your character would usually go about a fight I'm afraid. I'll quote what the guide recommends to include, hopefully you'll get the gist of it.
- Paragraphs; each paragraph should include a line break to make it easier to read, right now it appears to be a large wall of text within your History. Please include a line break after each paragraph.
- Quote :
- Combat Style: How does your character like to fight? Hit and run tactics, a fearless tank on the battlefield or do you lurk in the shadows and kill silently. There are many different tactics and here is where you can write a brief description of the combat style in which encapsulates your character. This in some regards can be seen as a characters 'Combat Nindō'. Include such things as your strengths/weaknesses, the range in which your character likes to fight, any martial or other styles they have learn't, and your 'trump card' or otherwise known as 'Signature Jutsu'.
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| | | | Iruel
Age : 26
Posts : 106
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Sat 23 Jun 2012, 11:44 am | |
| | KK |
| | | | Iruel
Age : 26
Posts : 106
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Mon 25 Jun 2012, 3:53 am | |
| | 3 day bump? |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
Posts : 1209
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Mon 25 Jun 2012, 7:39 am | |
| I just read through your app. First of all for future reference if any of your work has gone unchecked for 2 days you can post here. Do not bump the app with requests to be checked. The only time you are to bump this app is if you are confirming that you made the changes asked of you.
Now for the app itself.
I want you to go into your personality and insert line breaks between the different "rules" you put down.
I want you to put somewhere on the app up at the top that "September" is his name because when I was reading the history I got confused for a moment wondering who this "September" was until I realized you were talking about your character.
I'm confused. Where your parents originally part of the sand village?
In your specialty selection you have chosen weaponry and have listed swords and ranged weapons as your two weapons of choice. Please indicate which one of these is your main and which one is your sub as the rank of weapons you can use from each category is dependant on this.
For your combat style and special characteristics you have the two bolded titles mashed together so that your combat style paragraph appears under your special characteristics title and your actual SC doesn't have a title over it. Fix this please.
You have 2 slots left for jutsu if you wish to use them. Be advised that once you are approved you will have to pay for all your jutsu so it is recommended that you take this time to get as many jutsu as you can.
Please make these changes and I will recheck the application. Thank you. |
| | | | Iruel
Age : 26
Posts : 106
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Mon 25 Jun 2012, 8:41 am | |
| Done.
I've added in two customs, they are in the Custom Weaponry Section. |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
Posts : 1209
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Mon 25 Jun 2012, 11:17 pm | |
| Alright then, everything looks good, just a question about invisible air. How does it make one misjudge the distance? Is it a genjutsu or something? Does it somehow distort the view? I'm a bit confused on the mechanics of the jutsu...
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- Name: Invisible Air
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description:
Chakra in it's natural state is invisible, so applying this rather basic concept to the use of Kenjutsu, it allows the individual to coat their sword in a layer of this, not channel it through the blade, but apply it like a coat of paint, not effectively doing anything aside from sitting a few centimetres above the surface of the blade, and hiding it from unassisted view. If someone were to look at it with chakra sensitive vision, it would be lit up rather visibly. For those without it, they can see the occasional shifts in the formation of the chakra, causing it to appear like a Futon Technique. What it does disguise is the shape, and the length of the blade. This can cause opponents to misjudge the distance and thus reach of the blade.
Chakra Cost: 5, [2 Upkeep]
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| | | | Iruel
Age : 26
Posts : 106
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Tue 26 Jun 2012, 1:57 am | |
| Dodging what you can't see could be considered to be difficult. You don't know the weight of the blade, it's width if it has any special features or not. Hooks for example. It will also protect South's identity. Here is a picture of the tech to give you an idea. clickie!
This is kinda going by the assumption that Chakra is invisible to the naked eye...I know it is described as yellow in the manga, but we don't see it when it is expelled from the body. |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
Posts : 1209
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Tue 26 Jun 2012, 6:59 am | |
| That's all well and good but in your description you go on to state that chakra is invisible. So if it is invisible and you coat your blade with it then why would anyone have difficulties in judging distance?
I know that dodging something you can't see or see clearly is difficult. That wasn't my issue. My issue was that you don't really explain how this technique goes about disguising the shape and legnth of the blade. As this isn't a genjutsu I can only assume you are somehow effecting external factors such as light and such. So I ask that you please explain how someone would find it difficult to judge the blade's shape and such. From your above post you seem to be hinting at this technique covering your blade in chakra and creating just a mass of chakra around the blade so that it is concealed from view. If that's the case then please state it more clearly in the jutsu.
Once we clear this up I'm ready to give you my approval as everything else looks fine to me. ^^ |
| | | | Keos
Age : 29
Posts : 1585
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Tue 26 Jun 2012, 8:30 pm | |
| I know you have yet to finish the already existing edits and make the clarifications, but I have my two points to add.
Invisible Air: First of all, after reading the description itself this technique cannot be deemed a D Rank. Please change rank to C. The chakra cost needed to be performed should be changed to 7, with one additional per post upkeep. However, you state that the weapon is covered with pure chakra, which is invisible. The nature of chakra that manifests outside the body is usually visible, taking the colour of blue, as explained in the series. Even if the chakra was indeed invisible, something that would happen to be valid for only your character, then the opponent would not be able to see the chakra itself, thus actually seeing the weapon. In order to conceal the appearance of your sword you might want to cover it with Fuuton chakra in a slow spinning fashion that affects the view of it, making it turn into a blurred image, but not completely disappear. This means that if you want to follow my case, you'll have to change one of your Elements to Fuuton - Wind Release. That doesn't look like a problem to me as you don't use Ninjutsu.
Face Claim: Change the source from Google Images to "Bleach". We don't ask for the source of the image, but that of the character you claim. |
| | | | Iruel
Age : 26
Posts : 106
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Wed 27 Jun 2012, 3:14 am | |
| | Right, completed/done. |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
Posts : 1209
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Wed 27 Jun 2012, 6:47 am | |
| | So just for clarification. If you and I are battling and you use this "Invisible Air" technique. What am I going to be seeing exactly? The description is still sounding kind of vague. Tell me what's going on. Walk me through this. |
| | | | Iruel
Age : 26
Posts : 106
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Wed 27 Jun 2012, 7:21 am | |
| - Quote :
- The physical manifestation of the technique could have been classified as a 'sheath of wind' which distorts the refraction of light and renders what is inside completely invisible by scattering the pathway of light. This illuminates the swirling wind creating the appearance of something remotely similar to a swirling slow typhoon in slow motion.
How's that look? |
| | | | Kite
Age : 34
Posts : 1209
| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Wed 27 Jun 2012, 3:48 pm | |
| Looks fine then.
Approved
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| | Subject: Re: South, Chryl [C-Rank Nukenin] Mon 09 Jul 2012, 9:30 pm | |
| | Archived due to character death |
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