Yui, Sora [Konoha Genin] [3 Tails Jinchuriki]

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Yui, Sora

THE INFO.

Name: Sora, Yui
Nickname:
Age: 12
Gender: Female

Appearance:

Physical: Starting from the top, Sora has a full head of hair. It is long, straight, and not to thick. She takes a fair amount of pride in having her hair look as beautiful as it does. In all honestly it just kind of has that beautiful look to it with out doing anything. Her long, straight, and beautiful hair is a rather dark shade of mid-night blue with some tint of dark purple. Her dark beautiful hair is complemented not only by her light plum colored eyes but also by her smooth, fair, and very clear beautiful skin. In the night, under the moonlight she appeared rather beautiful for a girl who was only 12 years old. She looked older than 12, maybe 15 or 16? She took care of herself and so it was no surprise that her physical appearance is what it is.

Sora is of average height and build for her age. She stands approximately 5 feet flat and weighs 100 lbs. Usually people are taller in one part of their body than the other. The most common is being taller in the legs. Sora however is of equal height across the board so to speak. Meaning that her legs are not taller than her body and her body is not larger than her legs. Speaking of the upper body, Sora had rather long arms that were thin but muscle toned. In fact Sora was rather toned and had a pretty fair amount of muscle on her. Looking at her you wouldn't think she was just a girl. With the way she walked she carried herself well and looked like you would not want to mess with her even if she is just a young one.

Clothing: The clothing that Sora wears matches her favorite color which by the way is the color of her eyes. There is a scarf type material, it is actually very similar to a bandanna that is just wrapped around her neck loosely instead of on top of her head. It is tied in the back where her neck is. Sora wears a light plum colored kimono that is short in style. It shows a lot of her legs and only goes down maybe just shy of half way down her thighs. There is a white intricate design the flows up from the bottom of the kimono that Sora wears. If you're looking at the kimono the intricate design runs up on the left side, however it is really running up on the right side of the kimono. A sash, the same color as the kimono is wrapped across the middle of the kimono. This sash is what keeps it tied tightly from the outside. On the inside of the kimono there are of course little strings that keep it tied as well, just in case the sash on the outside comes undone or untied.

Moving to the long, skinny, and slightly muscluar arms of Sora. From her elbow down to her hand on her right arm she wears what seems like an arm guard of sorts. The color of this arm guard is the same color as her kimono. It is a lightly plum colored arm guard that is wrapped up by then leather straps that go all the way around it. The same type of arm guard can be found of Sora's left arm. It is the exact same color as the other arm guard and the kimono. It also is wrapped in the same thin leather strap as the other one. The only difference is that this leather strap extends to slightly above the elbow. It has no purpose for going that far, it is just for cool looks and the fact that the strap was a little longer on the left arm than the right.

The legs of Sora look rather long, but that is only because the kimono that she wears is rather short and shows a lot of her thighs. Her kunai pouch is strapped around her right leg with the same thin leather strap that is wrapped around her plum colored arm guards. It wrapped around her thigh, mid-way up just below where the kimono does not reach, so it is in plain sight for everyone to see. Moving on down to the actual leg and her feet. Sora wears something that looks similar to a boot, except that this boot is thin and made of off white cloth. It is only there to go over her feet and under her sandals. This cloth boot extends upward and not quite to her knee. The cloth boot is wrapped in leather strapping all the way up the boot. The leather strapping is also wrapped around the sandals that are on the feet of Sora.

Forehead Protector: Her forehead protector is not wrapped around her head like that of the common way. Sora has chosen to go with the minority and place her forehead protector in a place less common. The plum colored bandanna that is wrapped loosely around her neck serves as the holder of the metal plate where the symbol rests. The plate appears on the front side of the bandanna, which means it rests on her chest as it is attached to the bandanna that is loose around her neck.

Personality: Sora at first glance seems to be a rather odd person. Not many people hang out with her and that makes her a loner. Usually kids don't like to play with loners even if they think they may end up being a cool person. Kids do not know this however because they have been warned to stay away from her. Even if Sora walks up to a kid her age and is as nice as can be, they turn away and don't talk to her. Sora has pretty much given up trying to make friends with people. If someone wants to talk to her then they can try and talk to her.

She has good conversational skills and would easily be able to make friends but never gets the chance to do so because of the bijuu that rests inside of her. This made her resent her parents and part of the leaf village for a long time for putting the bijuu inside of her. Although as she progressed through the academy and became someone who loved the way of the shinobi, she has since dropped those type of feelings. They were nothing but a hindrance to her and held her back from becoming a potential awesome ninja. She has learned to accept the way things are and knows that she will eventually find someone that she can be friends with forever and to her, that is something of great importance.

Even if Sora is not liked by many people in the village because of what is inside of her, she still loves the village. Since she has let go and become a “free spirit” so to speak, she likes to prove herself. If she sees someone who could use help with anything she immediately offers her assistance, granted most people never take her offer and would rather spend all day getting something done. She likes helping people, she is caring, soft, joyful, and has a little bit of energy.

Outside of battle Sora shows remorse for anything that she might do wrong. She does not like to do things wrong or in a way that is incorrect. It makes her feel stupid and like she does not know what to do. She absolutely hates that type of feeling. However she does not ever show tears because of it. She is not one of those girls who cries over the little things. That type of emotion is only showed if something severe happens, say someone dies or something. She feels it is unnecessary to show that type of emotion, that it can only hinder you.

When Sora is battling or fighting she shows no mercy. She goes at everything with full force. However this does not mean that she enjoys killing or would simply try to kill someone. Although if it is necessary and to protect something or someone she will certainly do it. She won't lose any sleep over it what so ever.

A few things that Sora likes, she likes nice people of course. They are easy to make friends with and they usually do not judge. She also likes swords, she has a weird type of fetish that when she sees a sword of uniqueness she must talk to the person about it. Sora also likes candy, she is rather addicted to it if I must say so. Sora also likes ninjutsu, she enjoys studying it and seeing what different kinds there actually are. Water is something that calms Sora. She enjoys listening to the water, even when it is still and silent, it is almost as though she is in tune with it. Swimming is something she enjoys rather fondly, it gives her something to do and helps her focus herself. She also does like to laugh but to accomplish this, you must be doing something hilarious or she must really like you. She doesn't laugh in front of people very often.

A couple of things that Sora dislikes are, extremely light colors, she is more of the calming side of colors, something that is not too dark. She does not like foods that have a real thick slimy type of feeling. Sora's main pet peeve is bullies. She absolutely can not stand bullies. It tears her up inside to see a bully and it is one of the very few things that can completely set her off. It is definitely the second worst thing that could be done right in front of her. The first thing is someone attacking her village. Nothing more disturbing than that to her.

Clan: None

Nindō: “Fight every fight like its your last and always protect your comrades.”

THE NINJA.

Origin: Fire Country
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: C-rank (Genin)
Specialties:

Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Weaponry
Main: Swords
Sub: Exotic

Elemental Affinities:

Main: Suiton
Sub: Raiton

Combat Style: Sora's combat style is a strategic head on type of style. She enjoys fighting with her weapons and does so very frequently and often. She is not quite the strategist that she seems to be. Most of her stuff is created on the fly. Not really last second stuff, but something that just pops into her head. This may seems rather difficult to fathom because Sora's main specialty is ninjutsu and she does enjoy to use it but she likes to time her ninjutsu. Sora also likes to combine her two specialties and use them by timing as well.

Sora fights more close to mid range. She is not a long range fighter. That is her weakness, long range fighters usually give her trouble. On another note Sora does like to “capture” her enemies and then deal with them accordingly. A lot of her techniques involve capturing, sticking, or stunning.

Sora's trump card so to speak is her rather large volume of chakra that is because of her bijuu. Although she does not know how to control or even have anything to do with her bijuu yet, it takes her longer to get worn out and she is able to outlast others. Now as for a signature jutsu or something, she does not really have one, she usually uses all her jutsu pretty evenly.

Special Characteristics:

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THE BACKGROUND.

History:

The Birth

On the day of March 20 a beautiful baby girl was born into the world. She weighed 6 lbs 8oz when they weighed her right out of the womb. The name given to her by her father is Sora and of course her surname which is Yui, just like her parents. Sora was their first child and as far as they were concerned she would be their last. They, being the parents of Sora whose names were Kye and Amai Yui. They never really wanted a whole lot of children. It was always one and done. With them both being shinobi and on high level missions a lot, it was felt by both parents it would be difficult raising more than one child. While yes, they did consider the fact that having only one child would leave one lonely and with a want for a sibling, they also thought they focus all of there energy into just one and help them become an excellent shinobi. It was a dream that both Sora's mom and dad shared. However, there was also a secret that was not revealed to a lot of the Konoha village. Little Sora was the person who was kept most in the dark. Things would not be revealed to her until much later and so she would have to live with a fate that had been decided for her even before she exited her moms womb.

Bijuu Sealing

Being a jinchuriki for the Sanbi or three tailed bijuu was the fate that was decided for Sora. Things would be uncertain for Sora's future. So keeping the truth from her as long as possible was the thing that the higher ups of the village decided was best. The Sanbi, the three tailed beast, it was a giant turtle. A turtle that was the Demon of the Sea. It was the only way he ever terrorized anybody and he simply did it because fisherman were trying to catch the fish that were in his sea. They were his friends, every animal in the sea was the Sanbi's friend. He didn't like people messing with his friends so he defended them and his sea. It did give people the wrong idea about the Sanbi.

Well anyways, the sanbi was set to be sealed inside little Sora not long after she came out of her mom. It was the way everything worked. Amai and Kye both volunteered long ago, that when they had their first child, they would allow them to be the “vessel” so to speak, of the Sanbi. They thought they would be doing what was best for their child and would allow them to become a very important person to this village, not that Sora wouldn't be important even if she was not the jinchuriki because she certainly would be. Several hours after Sora was born she taken to the place where the sealing would commence. Of course they needed to bring in the 3 tailed bijuu that they had recently sealed.

Hachi Sumi Oni Shīru | Eight Corner Demon Seal. This was the name of the technique that the sealing squad was getting ready to use on little baby Sora. Hachi Sumi Oni Shīru holds it's ranking as being one of the most powerful sealing techniques in existence, with only a few shinobi in legend capable of performing it. The complexity of this seal is seemingly unfathomable to the human mind, as it incorporates eight divine seals and transmuting them into a single formation. This technique was designed solely for the purpose of sealing a bijuu into that of a host, which is highly dangerous and both obvious reasons and for the amount of chakra necessary to create the seal. This sealing technique is prepared by placing eight seals on a surface around a space, creating a perfect circle. Depending on the village one descended from, extra garments and accessories may be placed around the seal. When all is in place, the two most important elements are integrated, the host and the bijuu. The host takes their place in the center of the circle where they must remain still during the process. The bijuu must be within a close proximity of the ritual as well. Once all is prepared, the user forms a string of hand seals while repeating ancient kanji. While doing so the eight seals around the user glows with radiant blue chakra, and they being to unravel and move towards the host. The seals cover the host in their markings which then forms a single seal on a specific place on their body. The bijuu is forcefully sucked into the seal in a gaseous effect, each piece of its massive body sucking into the seal like a vortex. Upon the final kanji spoken by the user, the bijuu will be completely consumed and the technique is finished. The now "Jinchuriki" becomes unconscious during this ordeal, and they now host a bijuu. That is the description of the Eight Corner Demon Sealing Technique. Such a complex thing is necessary for a bijuu. Everything had been prepared already and now that the container was there with the bijuu sealed in it they would now seal it into Sora. Markings appeared all over Sora as the user of the technique started talking in ancient Kanji. The markings flowed as the jutsu went further on and part of the Sanbi began to swirl into Sora. So far so good, everything was running smoothly and everyone hoped it would continue to do so. The technique dragged on for almost what seemed forever. It was a lot tougher sealing the Sanbi into baby Sora than they all imagined. She was crying that baby cry as it was sealing into her, as expected it was very painful, and everyone hated to see the baby go through this but it was necessary. The technique was nearing its end and with the mutter of the last Kanji, the Sanbi was sealed into Sora. The seal appeared on Sora's stomach and suddenly she stopped her crying. She had been knocked unconscious with the sudden energy that had just entered her body.

Her parents were waiting on stand by at the hospital still hoping and waiting to hear something about their daughter. The medical unit that was at the sealing ritual had brought Sora in and gave her immediate treatment to make sure she would be okay. She would have to stay in the hospital until she regained consciousness and had good vitals. Sora's mom and dad stayed with her the entire time, never really leaving her side. A week later the hospital was releasing Sora into the care of her parents. They were finally going home to be a family and get started on their life.

Toddler Life

Sora's life as a toddler was really no different than any other kids. She learned to crawl, walk, talk, and had little toddler play friends. Though none of them knew of what was inside of her and since Sora did not know either it would be alright for the time being. She was a normal girl that advanced quickly in almost everything she did. At a young age she showed tremendous skill in the water. Learning to swim right after learning to walk and even being able to manipulate the water in some instances. Of course this was all due to the Sanbi being inside her but it most certainly made her parents pround and excited Sora at her young and tender age.

Seeing her advancing skill in this kind of stuff, her parents thought maybe she would advance quickly in other areas as well. They taught her to read at the a young age which helped her comprehension level reach great heights. They taught her the way of the shinobi and every someone would need to know about the shinobi. By the age of 5 Sora really began to understand and grasp what the shinobi way of life was about. She was competent enough to make the decision that she wanted to become a great shinobi. Hearing this, her parents were over whelmed in joy.

Her training with her parents began shortly after she turned 6 years old. They started off very light, giving her scrolls about techniques and what not just to get her use to everything. Once she read all of the scrolls they started her on a tougher regiment, teaching her basic taijutsu, ninjutsu, and about all of the other specialties. Soon after Sora learned specialties, she saw a blacksmith shop and was so enticed by what she saw with her father who also loved weapons. The swords caught her eye the most, the glimmer and shine of the sweet, smooth, and sharp blade excited her, even at a young age. That very experience is what got Sora interested in weapons later on.

Academy Life

Sora was turning 8 shortly and she was getting ready to join the academy. She had no doubt that she would do very well. She had been training with her parents for years now for this time and had learned a lot in that time. Really, she didn't even think there was anything new that she could be taught but she didn't let herself think on that too long. Going in with a cocky attitude like that is a sure way to get off to a bad start. However, her first day at the academy went very well. Sora hoped it would continue this way, because besides working on her ninjutsu that she had recently become very fond of with her parents help, the academy would pretty much her only source of training from now on. Her parents decided it was a lesson, she should learn to train on her own early to help her later on in life.

Sora finished her first year off at the academy with a bang, top of her class and rather popular with the other kids. It also helped that when they went swimming, they thought it was awesome how fast she could swim and how long she could stay submerged underwater with out breathing. Though this did pose a strange question to Sora, why could she do what she could do in the water. It was something she would certainly ask her parents. So one day when Sora had got home from her classes, she got the courage to ask the question. Why could she do what she could in the water? It is not not normal and even as awesome as it is, is rather strange. Her parents eyes widened and they knew they couldn't lie to her. It was about time that she found out and so they proceeded to tell her the story of how she is the jinchuriki of the sanbi, the three tailed bijuu. Of course, Sora did not know exactly what a bijuu was so this was another tale told by her parents. Sora did not know how to take the news but she knew she couldn't let her school mates know. So being the smart and mature girl Sora was, she acted no different when she heard the news from her parents. Went on about her daily business and continued to kick butt the next three years in the academy.

It took Sora 4 years to get through the academy, which was about the average. She did exceedingly well, finishing at the top portion of her class every year. She was about to become a genin and start her career as a shinobi. She was excited from her head to her toes. Becoming a full fledged ninja was every kids dream growing up. It was about to happen for Sora and she just couldn't control herself anymore. The teachers were calling kids up for their headbands and just as soon as Sora was about to bust out with excitement they called her name and her emotions were controlled, just like they usually were. Her life was about to change drastically and she knew it.

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THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu:

Suiton Jutsu:

Raiton Jutsu:

Non-elemental:

Weapons:

Genin Kit:

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Kunoichi (Female Shinobi)
Source: Photobucket
Image URL: https://2img.net/h/i115.photobucket.com/albums/n284/Fan_girl4evr/warrior/turesninja.jpg

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My only complaint is the Face Claim Image URL. You do not need to put the picture, just the link to where you got it from. And pardon me for asking but isn't this picture been in use for some while now? I've seen this picture awhile back and I do not think the name of the person is Yui, Sora. That's the character's name yes, but not the name of the original character. Correct me if I am mistaken.

Edit: Also, you are allowed just one C-rank item in the beginning of application process. Please remove one of the two.

Age : 32 Posts : 750

To be honest.. I just found this image on photobucket by searching Female Shinobi.. I don't know the characters name but yes it has been in use for quite some time. I don't know the characters name at all. It fits exactly what I was looking for so I thought I would use it.

I edited the weapons. Took out the retractable wrist blades. I will just train for those at a later date.

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Female Shinobi will do fine for the name of the character claim in this case.

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1/2

Approved

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

About your weapons, instead of removing the weapons you can change the rank into D Ranked. If you want to keep your Wrist Blades, add them as D Ranked blades.

EDIT: Great Turtle Dome: A 360 degrees dome, dense as steel, covering up to a 10m radius, as a C Rank? Weaken it down, or remove.

Some more Techniques will be checked again. Take care of these first.

Age : 32 Posts : 750

Changed the wrist blades to D rank.

Also, that technique is a site approved Technique for Jinchuuriki...

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

I am sorry, but I haven't worked a lot on Jinchuriki. Anyway, the Jinchuriki Jutsu are going to be updated in the near future, and then you will have them updated in your application.

Age : 32 Posts : 750

It is all good.. Soo what does this mean? Do I have to remove all of the jutsu that pertain to my having a bijuu?

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

Not at all. We can leave them be at the moment and have them updated in your application when changed. Just be careful with them because it's easy to overdo it, they are pretty powerful.

Age : 32 Posts : 750

Alright. So is this approved or no?

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I'm going to hold back my 1/2 till things are clarified

This is the original

Quote :: Name: Lightning Beam Circus
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close – Mid (0-10m)
Element: Raiton
Description: This technique is started out from Sora holding her hand out. Once she focuses her chakra she can launch beams of lightning right at the opponent. These beams are connected to the users hand and are able to be controlled and manipulated into doing whatever the user wishes. This technique is also a very fast technique, however with the speed that it holds it does lack a little in strength. At C rank the damaging is more impact. Shocking the opponent and giving them slight burns which irritate their skin, also 5 beams are the max at C rank. If the opponent is hit they could be paralyzed for one post and would have a cut where they were hit. At B rank the beams become more damaging. The shock is rather stronger and paralysis can hang around for 2 posts. Able to slightly pierce human skin, also the burns will be 3rd degree. Also at this rank 7 beams can be created. Now at A rank these beams can pierce the body and also cause 2nd degree burns. Paralysis can now set for 3 posts and 10 beam are fired at A rank.
Chakra Cost: C = 9, B = 13, A = 16

The original Ranton technique is as follows

Quote :: Name: Reizaa Saakasu - (Laser Circus) Diligent Crushing Chain Torment Element
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close, Mid, Long (0m-15m)
Element: Ranton [Storm Release]
Description: The user uses his Storm Release to create several bright beams of electricity that shoot at his enemy. A halo of bright energy spreads from the shinobi's hands as he uses this technique. The beams are able to alter their direction after being with pin point precision. Each beam has an impact force equivalent to five explosive tags. The user must remain still in order to control this technique and it is released in a "stream" so if it hits something or that stream is interrupted the jutsu will end. The number of bolts depends on the amount of chakra that is spent on the attack.
Chakra Cost: 20 - up to 10 beams; 25 - up to 15 beams + 5 per post.

It almost seems too similar in a sense that one uses the storm release while the other is simply lightning release. I can argue that you copied but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt that you didn't and you simply wanted a regular lightning version of the 'laser circus'. I must, however, say that something along the lines that is similar cannot be used in this case.

Edit: I don't usually have an issue with copies but if another moderator has no problem then I'll retract the following statement. If the second moderator does have a problem, the statement will stand.

Lightning Tornado- I must ask you to simply lower the stun effects from three to two (At A-rank) and from two to one (at B-rank)

Lightning Bullet- Again, lower the stun effects. It's a C-rank jutsu and as you said that what it has in speed, it lacks in power. At least a maximum of two post if hit with all three. If hit with two, a total of one post stun.

Age : 32 Posts : 750

You are correct, I just wanted a version of it, as it is my favorite technique I must admit. I understand your reasoning with this and am perfectly fine with it. Although, I suppose I will wait and see what Babis says.

Other modifications are completed as you have so asked me to do.

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

I received a complaint about this debated technique, the Lightning Beam Circus, and I will need you to either remove it, or make considerable changes and re-writing so that the techniques are not the same.

Age : 32 Posts : 750

I removed it 2 days ago when everything got out of hand about it and made the changes Blind asked me to make.

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

Swinging Strike - Weapons can be chakra conducive by the Rank of B. However, there is a technique, which is specific to Kumogakure, that allows Genin to cover their weapon with Lightning chakra. In order for you to use this technique, you have to first be able to channel chakra through your sword. Ask an admin through PM if you can create a "custom" jutsu, similar to the one Kumo ninja can use. If your request is denied, you will need to remove your technique. Pass my words here in a quote to the admin you send the PM.
Futago - Since you are only allowed one C Rank weapon upon approval, remove one of your two katanas and buy it through EXP after your character is approved.
Add this jutsu to your Academy List. I know it's not there at the moment, but it is to be added soon.

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[b]Name:[/b] Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Type:[/b] Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m - 5m)
[b]Element:[/b] N/A
[b]Description:[/b] A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1CP to seal; 1CP to unseal.

Age : 32 Posts : 750

Done. I just removed the swinging strike.

I also added jutsu since I have room to do so.

Rain Summoning
Rain Sphere
Stormy upheaval
Water Clone.

All water techniques.

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

Alright. Now, change your Face Claim to "Kunoichi" (=female shinobi), as requested before from Josi. You also have one more open jutsu slot. You can fill it in if you wish to.

Age : 32 Posts : 750

Done, thought I already did that oh well. It is completed

Nah, its fine just leave it be.

I feel like such a noob for having to make all of these corrections Sad

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

You shouldn't. I'm just taking it seriously, as always. Besides, you are applying for a Jinchuriki, not a simple character.

Anyway, I will have Enzo have a look as well. I will give you my approval after that.

Thank you for your work and patience.

Age : 32 Posts : 750

Meh, I filled the one slot for jutsu with the Water Drowning Technique.

Age : 28 Posts : 1797

There are some issues with the character app that I'll need to go through. Though it may seem extensive, do remember you are applying for a Jinchuuriki, and are therefore held on much higher standards than other members.
Personality ─ Though the personality covers just about everything necessary for a personalty, I still feel that there is more you could do with it. The reason I say this, is because I'm grading the app on the standard that Jinchuuriki should stand out and be unique. Your character on the other hand.. may as well be some random NPC. You don't even mention how the Bijuu could have traumatized the child; or how others would have treated her knowing that she held a three tailed demon inside her. Though I do not wish to insult your writing style, it would help if you shortened some of the personality (there's tons of filler) and made it something more unique. Her personality doesn't seem very realistic compared to her circumstances.
Combat Style ─ The entire second paragraph works more as a personality trait, rather than a description of your character's combat maneuvers. Please either replace the paragraph, or move it to personality and write something new in its place. Combat style should strictly be the following:

Quote :

How does your character like to fight? Hit and run tactics, a fearless tank on the battlefield or do you lurk in the shadows and kill silently. There are many different tactics and here is where you can write a brief description of the combat style in which encapsulates your character. This in some regards can be seen as a characters 'Combat Nindō'. Include such things as your strengths/weaknesses, the range in which your character likes to fight, any martial or other styles they have learn't, and your 'trump card' or otherwise known as 'Signature Jutsu'.

While you do not have to fill it all out as listed in the above description, it is recommended for a good combat style.
The rest seems fine, so let's move on to the jutsu

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Lightning Release: Shocking bullets

This jutsu is a tad bit confusing. First you state "These bullets only grow to a foot in width and 2 feet in height. The circumference around this bullet is 2 feet." which seems to contradict itself based on simple math; so please be more specific. It helps to use diameter or radius to describe the size of a sphere or circle, instead of circumference and width/height. Next up is the final bit of your jutsu; "They shock the opponent and that is about it. If the opponent is hit by this jutsu however they will be paralyzed for a single post. If they are hit by two bullets then they will be paralyzed for 1 posts, and the pattern continues for the third bullet. If the opponent is hit by three bullets they will be paralyzed for 2 posts." This part is far too over powered. I realize the technique isn't designed to do damage, and simply meant to stun, but the post amounts are far too great. C-ranks RARELY ever paralyze for a single post, and if they do, there's usually some drawback to using it. C-rank is just too low of a rank to essentially skip the enemy's turn. Because of this, the technique will need to be drastically toned down. You can change it to something like "Stuns the location struck," but a full body paralysis is too much.

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Lightning Tornado

This is the other jutsu that I have some problems with. First of all, either clarify the description into something that better explains the 3 levels of the jutsu; or just make it into a C-rank jutsu on its own, then apply for the B-ranks and A-ranks later. Secondly; your chakra cost for the A-rank version is way too small. A-rank needs to be at least 20CP; it's far stronger than 16CP worth of chakra. Third; the jutsu requires a maintaining cost. Which means it needs to be 'X per post' chakra wise. Finally, how is this even a Raiton technique? If anything, it's more of a Fuuton jutsu. It creates a tornado after all, how do you justify creating rotating winds using electricity? Just a little bit confusing is all.

That is all for now.