Yui, Sora [Konoha Genin] [3 Tails Jinchuriki]

Age : 32 Posts : 750

Personality - Almost totally reworked it. Hopefully it is better, I believe it is XD

Combat Style - Yes I see what you were saying about that. Removed the second paragraph and rewrote some stuff.

As for the jutsu

I reworked Shocking bullets, I have nerfed it quite a bit. I understand what you were saying.

Lightning tornado - you are correct it does seem more like a wind type technique, I completely removed it.

I know I have one slot for jutsu left available. That is fine and I am okay with the leaving that there as I have the jutsu I want and need for my character. Smile

Anything else please let me know.

Age : 28 Posts : 1797

I have no further comments.

[1/2]Approved!
(Previous 1/2 was revoked and never reimbursed. There have also been some drastic changes in the application, so a second approval is still necessary)

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

Thank you for your work.

Approved 2/2

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Age : 24 Posts : 1767

Archived.
Due to user inactivity.