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Mae
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 |  Subject: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Sat 27 Feb 2010, 9:23 pm | |
| Name: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat
Secondary Title: "The kind sadist" or "Mookdawon." (Which mean's pearl of the sea)
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Physical Appearance: She has light brown hair that lighter in some spot's then other's making them a blondish colour. Her hair is short like is all most the natural length of her hair and it has layer's that are hard to see because of the braid's she has in her hair. She is wearing a pock-a-dotted ribbin in her hair that matches the black scarf she has on. Her clothes give off this child like feel so she doesnt make anyone un-comfortable by her appearance. Her shirt is a dressy like top that is peach not pink because of her dis-liking of that colour. She is weaig a perl necklace that is past down in her mother's family for many year's that is the luck of the goddess of water. The necklace is a good luck charm for the person who wear's it but, that is only what her family say's. She holding her favorite teddy bear that was given to her by her dad. It is quite old now but it still hold's the same meaning to her that it did when she was a lttle girl. She is wear a black skirt that look's like paper and is more on the gray side and it is creased so it loks nice as if if she' wearn it for the first time.
Personality: She is kind and often soft spoken, She does not like when people yell at her or other people yelling, wants to learn medical ninjutsu , She often fells that her brother's death is her fault, she likes to be alone but likes to be with friends most of the time, when someone gets her really mad she will fight them till there on the ground (Better not make her mad). She likes to have fun but is shy when meets new people, She does not like to fight that is why she wants to study medical ninjutsu. She has a strange attraction to muscle guys but likes guys with great personality's. She hates the color brown and pink but she loves the color silver because silver is a mystical. She likes all kinds of animals, she likes staying up late and but hates sleeping all day. She doesn’t understand why all the villages have to fight all the time but she hates the sound village. Is a kind-hearted, loyal, honest and polite humanitarian who strives to see the best in others and has a very strong conviction to complete whatever task she feels is her duty to perform. She often places the needs of others above her own, often considering her needs secondary, or less significant, than the needs of others. Xina still can’t walk away from people in need. She loves the wilderness and everything in it, she wants to learn about all the animals in the world, she hates human war, she wishes they would stop, because they destroy the village, she hates people that are rude and talk about people, she is very nice and makes lots of friends. She usually blames herself if anything happens to her friends, because she wasn't there to protect them. She is always happy and peaceful, until fighting breaks out, she then gets mad.
Catch Phrase: "You lie like a rug...."
Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
What is the current rank of your character.
Village Affiliation: Kirigakure
Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.
Character Speciality:
You may pick 2 skills:
Main: Medical
Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity:
What element(s) your character possesses, no more than two
Main: Earth
Sub: Water
Special Characteristics: N/a
Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.
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- Name: Senshiwaga Ashi no Jutsu [Stab My Own Foot Technique]
Type: Taijutsu - Medical
Rank: D
Element: N/a
Description: This is a medical technique created for the sole purpose of inflicting damage to the user's foot, and is one of the few medical techniques that even a Genin medic can perform without prior training. To perform this technique the user must incorporate the user of some type of bladed/jagged object that has the potential of piercing flesh and drawing blood. Since this is a medical technique it is most common to perform this technique using a scalp, though a regular knife can work just fine. This technique incorporates the concept behind bloodletting when the user has been bitten by a venomous creature in the foot, allowing the user to bleed the poison within their foot out before it reaches the rest of the body by creating a gouge in their own foot. However, if this technique is not perform immediately after being bitten, the poison will require a alternate means of being evacuated from the body. It is theorized that this technique could be used to stab somebody else's foot, but so far no research has been done in order to turn this into an offensive or help other's move, and for now the ninja world will have to accept that this technique is only good for stabbing yourself in the foot.
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Medical use/Bastardized use: To stop an oppoent from moving.
Name: Headache Relief Jutsu
Type: Medicial
Rank: D
Element: N/a
Description: This is one of the first medical jutsu a medic learns. By emitting a pulse of green healing chakra through the finger tips, the medic is able to relieve the headaches of any person, regardless of cause (stress, migraine, other ailments, alcohol consumption, etc.) This jutsu has no further purpose, and is above all else a training jutsu for the medical arts.
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Medical use/Bastardized use: To Stop the llusion of the mind or stop the trama to the head.
Name: Bone Setting
Type: Medicial
Rank: D
Element: N/a
Description: After training, medical nins are able to diagnose and reset broken bones. This skills is limited as it is a physical repair, and is most effective on large bones such as leg or arm bones. This skill cannot treat fractures, and further treatment should be done. This is simply a quick fix to prevent further damage.
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Medical use/Bastardized use: To temperarely keep yourself moving so that you can get out of danger.
Name: Ketsuki Gyouko (Blood Coagulation)
Type: Medicial
Rank: C
Element: N/a
Description: A simple healing technique. The user uses his chakra on his wound to make the blood cells there coagulate quickly. Unlike the more complicated healing jutsus which create new cells altogether, this one simply speeds up the natural healing process, stopping the bleeding quickly when normally it would take many hours, maybe even days depending on the wound. The wound still remains but the bleeding stops, though sometimes only partially for deeper and more difficult wounds. It goes quickly for small wounds but larger ones need a couple of minutes to finish the coagulation. It can also be used on wounded allies.
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Medical use/Bastardized use:
Name: Blood Toxin Decontamination
Type: Medicial
Rank: C
Element: N/a
Description: After performing handseals and gathering chakra, the medic is able to use this jutsu to break down dangerous poison radicals into harmless proteins that the body will naturally dispose of. This jutsu is functional on most common poisons. The jutsu is most effective at time and point of infection, when the poison is localized. If the poison has spread through the body, the jutsu can still be effective but must be sustained for a long period as it takes time for the entire blood quantity to pass through the area of healing chakra being used. It is possible patients could die during this time.
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Medical use/Bastardized use:
Name: Blood Toxin Decontamination
Type: Medicial
Rank: C
Element: N/a
Description: After performing handseals and gathering chakra, the medic is able to use this jutsu to break down dangerous poison radicals into harmless proteins that the body will naturally dispose of. This jutsu is functional on most common poisons. The jutsu is most effective at time and point of infection, when the poison is localized. If the poison has spread through the body, the jutsu can still be effective but must be sustained for a long period as it takes time for the entire blood quantity to pass through the area of healing chakra being used. It is possible patients could die during this time.
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Medical use/Bastardized use:
Name: Chakra no Ito - Chakra Threads
Type: Medicial
Rank: D
Element: N/a
Description: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu is a special Ninjutsu techinque used by the Leaf ninja Yoroi. After activitating the technique, Yoroi's hand will glow with chakra. When he touches his palm on his opponents body, he can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases his advantage over his opponent.
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Medical use/Bastardized use:
Name: Chakra no Mesu - Chakra Scalpel
Type: Medicial
Rank: C
Element: N/a
Description: Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood veseels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.
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Medical use/Bastardized use:
Weapon Template:
Name: Needles
Quantity: 150
Rank: C-S
Appearance: It is like a double sided nail that is about 3-5 inches long an is used in the medic ninja's training now of today. Its less then a cenometer thick and almost weights nothing. Having more stealth to it make's it more diffualt to block compared to a kunai.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: It can be usd as a pin in surgery.
Origin: It came from the hospital ?
Item Template:
Name: Ox urn
Rank: B
Type: Medicine an Enhancer
Natural Abilities: It is used to stop bleeding to keep someone alive long an get them to a hopital so they can or maybe worked on. It consist of ox urn, grounded blossom's, curry. cinnamon, grounded clove's, yest,and soy protein.
Background Information
History: ((((Childhood)))))
She has one of the best IQ in the Takigalure village, She is one of the fastest learners and already was a genin at age 11 and is still a genin, She was taken under custody because she killed a Leaf ninja but was later let out because it was a accident. Her brother died because when she and her brother was walking from a mission a cloud ninja attacked them, they knocked her out and her brother tried to defend her and he did but it cost him with his life, when she returned to the village with his body they buried him but was she was in the hospital and when she got out it had been three weeks later and the chuunin exams already past, her mom lives in the hidden leaf village but it was destroyed so she suspects her mom is dead. She has one sister and she is 12 and they live together with their grandparents. Her Height: 5'4", and she weighs 128Ilbs, she was born in Kirigakure, she was later sent to Takigakure with her sister to stay with a old couple that didn't have no kids of their own, she tried out in the academy.
(((((((Genin )))))))
She soon became a genin when she was 12. 2 years later, when she is 14, the old couple died because of old age, she then lived in their house, but with her sister, she tried out for the chuunin exams and FAILED because of her lack of training in the art of genjutsu. She helps villagers around the country in what the need. You may find her in a forest or helping people, she spends much time in the forest, cleaning up trash, people have thrown in there or left it, her eyes begain to mutate over time making it diffualt to see clearly, one eye is a little more strained than the other so she focuses chakara to them to help her atlease see in wave length's. She is never seen in a fight unless trying to stop it. She is very intelligent, that is why she can pass almost any paper exam. She then later returned to Kiri to live with her aunt and uncle. Then moved to the Kirigakure and begain to live on her own accord so she could take on full responsility for herself. This is her homeland and she does owe her loyality to it ninja wise. Being at the age of sixteen now she hear's more from her sister because she is worried about her hooking up with men and not stayong focused.
Role-Play Sample:
Mae slowly walked across the bridge, she held a bag with supplies in it and then over the bag had a towel on it. She arrived to a tree stomp, she sat here things on it and then looked around, and smiled What should i do today, she thought, she then looked around and saw a tree, hmmm, that'll be a good start, she thought, walking over to the tree, she looked all around it, it seems to be a normal size tree, so she put her gloves on and then looked straight at the tree and started punching it, she punched, and punched, and punched with her brute strength, she then stopped when she felt her knuckles beginning to hurt and swell, she then took of her gloves and sat them beside the tree, she begin building up chakra in her hand and started punching the tree, until she saw it crack, she then punched and punched, sending more chakra to her fists, and with the last blow she sent half of her remaining chakra into her hand and hit the tree and she then watched as it fell to the ground broke in half, ."Man i need to keep this up or I’m going to be week the rest of my life." She said walking over to another tree, that was beside it and started punching it as hard as she could ." Left, right, left, right, arrghhh." She yelled, as she felt a numbing sensation in her hands, and did a couple hand signs ." Mystic palm technique." She said, putting her hands over each other and then stood back up when they were fully healed, she then looked at the tree which had blood all over it, she then walked up to it and started hitting it, she hit it and seen it crack and that’s when she drew back and sent chakra into her hand and hit the tree as hard as she could, she watched as the tree fell to the ground.
Last edited by Mae on Sat 13 Mar 2010, 1:47 am; edited 8 times in total |
|   | | Caranore
Age : 34
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Wed 10 Mar 2010, 5:14 am | |
| | alright. As your specialties are Med and Tai, you cannot have genjutsu techniques. Only open spot in kiri is Genin. Sand element is attributed to sabure clan, which is Suna specific, and Leaf isnt an element. |
| | | | Uchiha Osore
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| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Wed 10 Mar 2010, 1:54 pm | |
| Your coding is severely damaged, it needs to be looked over and corrected. Also, your history needs to be in separated arcs. Be aware that you will be held to post around your RP Sample, so be sure thats how you usually write.
Oh, and FYI, your picture is too large, get one that doesn't stretch the forum. |
| | | | Mae
Posts : 9
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Thu 11 Mar 2010, 4:34 am | |
| | Okay is this better ?!?!?!??!? |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 34
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Thu 11 Mar 2010, 5:11 am | |
| The code is stll messed up, but I cant seem to find the problem with it.
Edit your Rank to Genin.
Again, you cannot have a Genjutsu technique without the specialty of Genjutsu. Yours currently are Medical and Taijutsu.
If you want ANY Medical or taijutsu techniques, the need to be in this application before it gets approved. |
| | | | Mae
Posts : 9
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Fri 12 Mar 2010, 1:28 am | |
| | Okay Idk what a code is but I added some jutsu's and deleted the old one so the jutsu I have fit me better. I also changed my spill to the rank you requested is there anything that need's attenion o that addresses consern? |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 34
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Fri 12 Mar 2010, 1:36 am | |
| | Your jutsu need to be placed in the correct template, theres one provided in the original character template, and one under jutsu templates. |
| | | | Mae
Posts : 9
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Sat 13 Mar 2010, 12:04 am | |
| | Is this better? |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 34
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Sat 13 Mar 2010, 12:06 am | |
| Remove all techniques that are over C-Rank. You are a Genin, so you do not have access to those.
Any Taijutu techniques you want at time of approval ill need to be placed in the application now.
You have [quote] in front of every jutsu. If you are going to do that, close the code using - Code:
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[/quote] |
| | | | Mae
Posts : 9
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Sat 13 Mar 2010, 12:45 am | |
| | Okay dido |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 34
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Sat 13 Mar 2010, 1:29 am | |
| | Remove secret injury healing desctruction thing. Thatin my opinion is too high of a jutsu level for a Genin to be able to utilize. After that, everything else should be good to go. |
| | | | Mae
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| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Sat 13 Mar 2010, 1:49 am | |
| | Okay thank you for your help Cara ^^. Uh and Ill delete all the extra post's when approved |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 34
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Sat 13 Mar 2010, 1:50 am | |
| Nah, keep all posts here. It shows what was discussed and gone over.
Approved. Just remember your word minimum is 150 words at genin rank. |
| | | | Hugh
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| | Subject: Re: Mae Xina Fuma Outphat Mon 29 Mar 2010, 2:18 pm | |
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