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PostSubject: Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) EmptyWed 26 Dec 2012, 6:01 am

Death Song: Across the Line

Name: Hyuuga Yatsuo
Letter Rank: C (Experienced Genin)
Specialty: Taijutsu, Eijutsu
Elemental Affinities: Raiton, Doton
Combat Style: While he may defy his clan in many other aspects, in terms of combat, Yatsuo is the classic Hyuga. Utilizing his superior speed, Yatsuo likes to close the gap between him and his enemy, quickly debilitating them with the traditional Hyuuga gentle-fist. That said, sometimes, he disregards the finesse of the Hyuuga style, simply resorting to beating the tar out of his enemy with more traditional taijutsu. Against more long-ranged opponents, he makes quick use of his Byakugan to pinpoint their location, utilizing his evasive capacity and near 360 degree vision to keep out of harms way while he closes the distance downs to what he affectionately calls "face-eating range." While it might seem strange for a medic to be so eager to get into the fight, Yatsuo prefers to ensure his team doesn't take damage at all, instead of simply healing them when damage does occur.
Special Characteristics:
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Age: 13
Description: Loud, brash, open and honest, Yatsuo is everything a Hyuuga normally is not. A branch house member with prodigal combat skill, he has spent his entire life thoroughly disproving the "superiority" of the Main house. With a smile on his face and a heart on his sleeve, Yatsuo always seems to have a certain charisma about him, getting even people who absolutely hate him to regard him with grudging respect. Yatsuo is never afraid to let his opinion be heard, and unabashed of his branch house member ship, opting to wear his headband around his neck, always baring his seal to the world. He is firecely loyal to his comrades, and honest to a fault. He made a name for himself early on in his life when a rogue nin managed to sneak into the village and attack the academy. With their instructor down in the first volley, Yatsuo managed to keep the rogue occupied long enough for his classmates to escape and a KYOBU squad to arrive, cementing his reputation as a "Hero."

Thirteen years old and standing at precisely 5'0", he sports short, spiky black hair, his blindness-white Hyuuga eyes somehow far more expressive and earnest than most of his kin. His outfit usually consists of a short-sleeved, ocean blue jacket, perpetually unzipped, pockets adorning the sleeves, and tan cargo shorts reaching just past his knees. His only footwear is usually a pair of plain green sandals, with his ninja pouch strapped to his right leg. Defying the usual paleness of his fellow pale-eyed brethren, Yatsuo actually manages to sport a decent tan, his skin a light, sun-kissed bronzed, in comparison.
Jutsu:
Academy Jutsu
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Hyuuga Clan Jutsu
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Taijutsu
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Eijutsu
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Death Jutsu
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Equipment:
Name: Brass Knuckles
Rank: C
Type: Close Range - Knuckle
Quantity: 2
Description: 4 connected rings made from brass that, when placed on the fingers of its user, will greatly enhance the damage a punch deals. It does not increase the overall force applied; however the metal brass increases the energy transfer and can often be a brutal method of assault.

Name: Ear-Piece Mic Radio
Rank: C
Type: Main -Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 3
Description: The short range radio is capable of keeping ninja in contact up to 10 miles. The radio can accept multiple frequencies and is activated to talk by pushing a button on the neck attachment, making it simple to use even in the most dire of situations. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.

Kit
Name: Yatsuo's Field Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 6 Plastic Gloves [3], (4)50cm Bandage Tape [4], (2)500ml Antiseptic [2], 4 Finger Splints [2], 2 All-Purpose Splint [6], 3 Needle and Syringe [3], 10 Nutrition Pills [1], 6 Blood Pills [2], 3 Chakra Pills [3], 5m Sewing Thread [1], 1 Packet of Needles [1], 1 Scalpel [1], 6 Gauze Pads [3]
Slot Total: 32


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Death Song: S.C.A.V.A.

Name: Uchiha Garuga
Letter Rank: C (Experienced Genin)
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Katon, Fuuton
Combat Style: Gargua's prankster nature drifts over into his combat style, with surprising effectiveness. He will use his repertoire of genjutsu to delay and immobile his opponent, even using the same illusion multiple times to lull his enemies into a false sense of security. Once his opponent is immobilized or distracted, he further assaults them with ninjutsu, though rarely going for a direct blow, preferring to physically hamper or harass his opponents while letting his team-mates move in for the kill. That said, he is no slouch setting targets aflame and quickly expanding the inferno with his wind jutsu. He is also not above psychological warfare, continually taunting his opponent to enrage them into making a mistake.
Special Characteristics:
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Age: 13
Description: Uchiha Garuga is considered something of a disgrace to the Uchiha clan. While most members generally tout their name, Gargua does everything he can to defy it, always choosing the "common rabble" over the "high class." Gargua is a a light-hearted, carefree individual, always looking for a laugh. This has yielded itself to another aspect of his "disgrace" status, his incessant pranking. While he has all the signs of becoming an accomplished genjutsu user, Garuga is more well-known for his use of genjutsu in elaborate pranks than for combat. His driving goal is to one day accomplish such an illusionary prank that even Byakugan and Sharingan will fall for. In his spare time, when he's not pranking or planning pranks, he often spends time in the outskirts of the village, communing with wildlife. Odd to see such an energetic individual doing something as calm and peaceful as chatting with deer, but there it is.

Standing at 4'10", Garuga shares the common Uchiha features with dark, jet-black hair and eyes like polished onyx, when not graced with the blood-red of the Sharingan. His hair is short and flat to his head, excluding the two long bangs reaching down to his neck on either side of his face. He has a narrow face, high cheek bones and pointed nose giving him an almost vulpine look, which is only emphasized by his ever present, cheeky grin. He wears a tight fitting, bright-red jacket over a skin-tight blue t-shirt, the zipper pulled up level to his chest. He wears long, loose-fitting blue jeans, with a kunai pouch strapped to each thigh, and plain black sandals. Despite all his time outdoors, whether it be pranking of communing with nature, Garuga can never seem to escape the Uchiha paleness, despite sunburned cheeks showing his efforts to get rid of it.
Academy Jutsu
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Uchiha Clan Jutsu
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Ninjutsu
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Genjutsu
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Death Jutsu:
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Equipment:
Name: Ear-Piece Mic Radio
Rank: C
Type: Main -Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 3
Description: The short range radio is capable of keeping ninja in contact up to 10 miles. The radio can accept multiple frequencies and is activated to talk by pushing a button on the neck attachment, making it simple to use even in the most dire of situations. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.

Kit
Name: Garuga's Pranking Supplies
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 12m Wire [4], 15 Makibishi [3], 9 Smoke Pellets [3], 2 Smoke Bombs [6], (2)500ml Paint Cannister(Red and Green)[2], 1 Brush [1], 8 Shuriken [4], 12 Exploding Pouches [4], 3 Kunai [3], 1(Pranking) Journal [1], 1 Ink Pen [1]
Slot Total: 32


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Death Song: Across the Line

Name: Yakata Orihime
Letter Rank: C
Specialty: Weaponry (Long; close), Fuinjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Suiton, Doton
Combat Style: Yataka Orihime prefers to keep as much distance as possible in battle, utilizing her long-range weaponry to take down her opponents from afar. That said, she specializes more in hampering her foes than in outright subduing them, using her accuracy to nail enemies in place from afar before either finishing them off or leaving them for her team-mates. That is not to say she is completely helpless in close quarters; more often than not, any enemy attempting to close in on her will either find them self locked in place or assaulted by some sort of trap fuin, of which she tends to lay many around her in battle. The combination of fuin and weaponry simply means that few enemies have a chance to get close to her, and the few that do are generally crippled for their effort.
Special Characteristics:
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Age: 14
Description: Pretty as a picture, lovely as a sunset, sweet as cyanide. All phrases commonly used to described Yakata Orihime. The female member of this team is thoroughly determined not to let the infamous clans of her team-mates overshadow her clanless self. Orihime is a pretty girl of fourteen years, just starting to bloom into womanhood. With pale as cream skin, silky brown hair held up on either side of her head in two buns, and dazzling sapphire blue eyes, Orihime can smile and have all the boys swooning for her. At this point, she parts her full, unblemished lips, and verbally rips them in half for loosing focus over a pretty girl. She's most well known for her acidic tongue, rarely holding back when she feels someone or something is deserving of criticism. Standing at a slight 4'5" and wearing a simple navy-blue blouse with long, loose sleeves, the sort which can be easily pulled up and tied off, paired with loose fitting, pleasantly royal-purple pants.

Orihime is an accomplished fuin and weapons user, but outside of combat, her most prized skill is her ability to cook. She can make anything from just about anything, and make it tasty, a hobby which she enjoys taking part of. However, she is deeply affronted by those who would presume such a skill make her a less "serious" ninja, and more than a few boisterous lads have found themself sporting a few new holes after making some crack or another for her to "get back in the kitchen." Those who mention she'll "make a good wife one day" generally don't leave the hospital for weeks. Firey, fiesty, and determined, Orihime has her hands cut out for her getting her team-mates to be serious for very long, but she cares dearly for them all the same. If she doesn't look out for them, who will?
Jutsu:
Academy Jutsu
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Weaponry
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Fuinjutsu
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Death Jutsu
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Equipment:
Name: Longbow
Rank: C
Type: Long Range - Bow
Quantity: 1
Description: The longbow is a refinement of the shortbow, designed to increase the range and power of an arrow strike shot from it. The stave portion of a longbow is nearly as tall as the user who wields it, and can reach over six feet. It has the ability to fire just over twice the distance that a Short bow can fire with deadly accuracy and greater piercing ability.

Name: Explosive Quiver
Rank: C
Type: Long Range
Quantity: 1 Quiver, 15 Arrows (pre-wrapped in explosive tags)
Description: A plain brown leather tube-quiver, approximately two and a half feet long, containing 15 iron-tipped arrows, pre-wrapped with explosive tags. The arrows are each 33 inches long, just sticking out of the quiver for easy grabbing.

Name: Plain Quiver
Rank: E
Type: Long-Range
Quantity: 1 Quiver, 30 arrows
Description: Made of leather that's been died blue, to differentiate from the Explosive Quiver. Two and a half feet long, 30 33-inch long iron tipped arrows, sans explosive tags.

Name: Ninjato
Rank: D
Type: Close Range - Short Blade
Quantity: 2
Description: Short and straight, this blade takes a similar form of a katana, but without the curvature in the blade. With the blade measuring no more than one and a half feet, and a square guard on top, this weapon has been popularized by many ninja, especially the ANBU, hence the name.

Name: Ear-Piece Mic Radio
Rank: C
Type: Main -Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 3
Description: The short range radio is capable of keeping ninja in contact up to 10 miles. The radio can accept multiple frequencies and is activated to talk by pushing a button on the neck attachment, making it simple to use even in the most dire of situations. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.

Kit:
Name: Orihime's Field Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 5 Small Scrolls [10], 10cm Ink Capsule [1], 500mL Paint Canister [1], 1 Journal [1], 2 Tipped Pens [1], 1 Brush [1], 3 Ink Pens [3], 10 Explosive Tags [10], 6m Wire [2], 12 Senbon [4], 10 Makibishi [2], 6 Smoke Pellets [2], 10 Shuriken [5], 8 Explosive Senbon [4]
Slot Total: 47

Name: Small Scroll
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 5
Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a small scroll will measure up to fifteen centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching fifty centimetres.
Storage: In Kit

Scroll 1 Contents: 20 Kunai [10]
Scroll 2 Contents: 30 Senbon [10]
Scroll 3 Contents: 20 Arrows [10]
Scroll 4&5 Contents: Left blank


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Death Song: Indestrucible

Name: Tsugata Yoshiro, "The Decapitator."
Letter Rank: A
Specialty: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Raiton, Katon
Combat Style: Brutal. Dominating. Unplaccable. The shortest way to describe Tsugata Yoshiro's fighting style is "Shock and awe." The best way to describe it is liken watching him fight to watching a proverbial ton of bricks drop on his foes. Powerful, fast, durable, Yoshiro can take blows that would fell a lesser man, laugh in his enemy's face, then tear their head off with his bare hands. Yoshiro is an indomitable force on the battlefield, his speed ensuring that no amount of distance between him and his opponent ever lasts long. Once he's closed the distance, Yoshiro has no compulsions against using his greater strength to devistate his target with a powerful flurry of taijutsu. His great durability also frequently comes into play, allowing Yoshiro to walk through and shrug off all but the most devestating of attacks; "Nothing to put the fear of Kami into them like strolling through a fireball, or taking an exploding tag to the face and grinning." Indeed, Yoshiro often takes gambles on the battlefield, betting on his ability to survive particular attacks and keep fighting, especially against enemy taijutsu experts, sometimes evening singing mid-battle. "When you hit a man as hard as you can ten times and all it does is make him sing like little Richard, there's not a lot of plan B's." That said, Yoshiro is not reckless, and will avoid taking hits entirely if he feels it's a serious fight. Further, despite all his taunting, and despite possessing every capacity to outlast his opponent, Yoshrio never draws out a fight, and will end it immediately the first time the opportunity arises. On thosr rare occassions that Yoshiro cannot close the distance, or is face with a Genjutsu expert, Yoshiro resorts to a "scorched earth" battle field mentality. That's to say, he breaks out his most destructive and wide-spread jutsu to simply erase the surrounding terrain, leaving his opponent nowhere to hide, or else simply catching them in the cross-fire.
Special Characteristics:
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Age: 45
Description: Tsugata Yoshiro is a virtual mountain of a man, standing at a towering 6'9" and easily outweighing an Akmichi with sheer muscle mass alone, weighing in at an astonishing 250lbs of pure muscle. With a broad, square face, shoulders as wide as an ox, and a smattering of short, grey buzz-cut hair and equally grey beard and mustache, Yoshiro is often described as "A boulder that decided to go for a walk." Despite his intimidating stature and coal-black eyes that have been the last thing many an enemy has seen, Yoshiro is actually a rather jolly, amicable indivdual. With a loud, booming voice and a penchant for being boisterous, Yoshiro brings to mind the Vikings of yore, mountains of men who would laugh heartily, drink heavily, and snap a man in half with his bare hands, and usually all at the same party. Despite this noisy nature, Yoshrio manages to remain an effective ninja, never letting his desire for a good fight get in the way of practicality.

Above all, Yoshiro is fiercely loyal to the village, and even more so to those he think of as his "children." He is absolutely implacable to those who would threaten his "family." Some would call him a "brutal" man, but her prefers to think of himself as only setting an example for his enemies. And for the most part it works; in all his missions with his genin team, only once has an enemy nin directly threatened his team before attempting to take him down; a Kiri nin who fancied himself a demon in human skin, holding hostage Yukata Orihime after soundly beating both Gargua and Yatsuo senseless. Yoshiro gave the man on warning. The man laughed, and promised to "take his time" with Orihime.

A week later, the first piece of the nin arrived in Kiri, and every day for the following three weeks, a new piece arrived, culminating in the man's head, torn clean off his shoulders. Yoshiro wasn't called "The Decapitator" for nothing; his hit humor novel, "1001 Ways to Tear His Head Clean Off," was mostly based on his personal accounts of battles with enemy nin, nuke nin, and bandits. None were more surprised than his students to know Yoshiro is, despite being a mountain of muscle, an accomplished novelist, writing the above novel and a series of rather successful children's books.
Jutsu:
Academy Jutsu
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Ninjutsu
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Taijutsu
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Death Jutsu
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Equipment:
Name: Ear-Piece Mic Radio
Rank: C
Type: Main -Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 3
Description: The short range radio is capable of keeping ninja in contact up to 10 miles. The radio can accept multiple frequencies and is activated to talk by pushing a button on the neck attachment, making it simple to use even in the most dire of situations. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.

Name: Training Weights
Rank: A
Type: Main -Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 2
Description: Though an old fashioned training method, which can only be acquired by taijutsu specialists who also have the 'Flash Speed' special characteristic. These extremely heavy weights to increase their speed and movement over time. When worn in a topic (IC), the character's Flash Speed special characteristic is removed while the weights are attached. If the shinobi decides to remove these weights after four posts, their effective speed will double for two posts; before returning to normal. This may only be performed once per topic. These weights are usually worn under the warmers on the user's lower legs and are marked with the kanji for "guts".

Kits:
Name: Jounin Kit
Rank: A
Quantity: 1
Contents: 14 Kunai [14], 24 Shuriken [12], 15 Senbon [5], 20 Makibishi [4], 10 Exploding Notes [10], 6 Exploding Pouches [2], 6 Smoke Pellets [2], 21m String [7], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].

Name: Explosive Kit
Rank: B
Quantity: 1
Contents: 24 Exploding Notes [24], 24 Exploding Pouches [8], 3 Smoke Bombs [9], 2 Explosive Kunai [3], 6 Explosive Senbon [3].

Name: Kunai Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 24 Kunai [24], 8 Exploding Notes [8]


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Death Song: Hero

Name: Takeshi Hiro
Letter Rank: N/A (Civilian)
Specialty: Blacksmith
Special Characteristics:
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Age: 40
Description: Even if they were from across the world, had never met him before in their life, and knew absolutely nothing of the profession, even if he chose to wear normal civilian clothes, not a man or woman alive could look at Takeshi Hiro and not know him to be a blacksmith. Standing at an imposing 6'6", Hiro weighed in well at 200 pounds, a slab of civilian muscle hardened and tested in the fires of the forge as much as the very iron he worked. Indeed, Hiro looked very much like the lumps or iron that often passed through his forge to become weapons or tools of fine quality; rough, unrefined at the edges, his face not unlike a block of chiseled stone in its hard, unyielding lines. The illusion of a man made of rough iron was further enhanced by the perpetual, greyish-tint of the skin Hiro had come to possess, the result of many long days spent in a hot, smoky forge. His hair, once as black as coal, has taken on a salt-and-pepper look in the onset of his twilight years, Hiro being in his 40th Year. His outfit usually consists of a sleeveless white tunic, held in place with a rope belt, a sturdy blacksmith apron and plain worksman boots, and plain, dark grey slacks, frayed at the hems and a sooty grey from forge smoke.

Despite his foreboding, somewhat intimidating appearance, Takeshi Hiro is actually a rather amicable man, polite in ways one would never expect of someone so uncouth looking, rarely given to even so much as swearing. In his opinion, everyone is worthy of and should be given some measure of respect, until they prove themselves unworthy of it. He is also a plainspoken man, rarely refraining from saying what he means, and always one to honor his word, once he's given it. Around his friends however, especially drinking buddies, he is much less restrained, easily loud and boisterous when he's around people he considers his comrades. Indeed, most of the lines around his face are more from friendly grins than from angry scowls or the like. Hiro is very slow to anger, save for the case of insults to his smithing skills, or anyone besmirching the memory of his late wife.

Once a year, Hiro goes on a sabbatical of sorts, traveling around the elemental nations, meeting up with fellow smiths to discuss the trade and impart smithing techniques, or else learn new ones. Over the course of these yearly journeys, he has made many friends for himself amongst smiths in the various nations. As he bids his son goodbye on his first day of the Academy, he goes to meet the team that will be escorting him for this year's sabbatical. His Final one.

Equipment:
Name: Blacksmith Hammer
Rank: C
Type: Close-range
Appearance: A goody, sturdy hammer that Hiro generally uses for, well, smithing. It has a solid oak haft a foot and a half long, with a solid, sturdy three-pound block of iron set on the head, 2x2x5 inches. It has a leather wrap on the end, flowing out into a loop Hiro can put his hand through.
Quantity: 1
Storage: Hung on belt
Special Abilities: None, save that the craftsmanship is quality enough to rank it as a C-rank weapon in terms of durability.

Name: Blacksmith Apron
Rank: D
Type: Armor
Appearance: A thick, black leather apron Hiro typically wears when working, it hangs around his neck with a loop of cloth, a couple strings around waist level allowing him to tie it around himself. Overall, it's ornamental, little more than a large, black rectangle of leather, curved at the top to fit comfortably around the wearers neck.
Quantity: 1
Storage: Worn
Special Abilities: Fire retardant to D-rank and lesser flames, also non-conductive to electricity (though C rank and higher bolts can naturally overcome the resistance).

Name: Portable Anvil
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Appearance: A typical Anvil, little more than a 10 pound block of iron with a flat surface for pounding out blades on. Hiro generally carries so as to make small-scale repairs and such while traveling.
Quantity: 1
Storage: In knapsack.

Name: Hiro's Knapsack
Rank: E
Quantity: 1
Contents: 1 File & Scissor [1], 6m rope [3], 1 Journal [1], 3 Ink Pens [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 1 Kunai [1], 1 Ryo Pouch [1], Portable Anvil [5]
Slot Total: 17


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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) EmptyWed 26 Dec 2012, 8:19 am

Sorry to post here, Travis - I'll delete it after we've discussed everything. But if these are new character ideas, would they not be better suited for our blogging section?

May I move this there?
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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) EmptyTue 12 Mar 2013, 2:33 pm

And with this post, I christen these NPCs ready for approval. I never thought the day would come Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) 287405

For the sake of ease of Approval, all Custom jutsu will be listed in a Spoiler below. Exceptions include:
  • Supin- Spin, which is already approved and in use by my character
  • Explosive Seal, which is already approved and in use by Onyx
  • Paralysis Seal, which is already approved and in use by Caranore and is used with his permission.


All jutsu not listed above or below are Open, and can be found in the Encyclopedia.

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Now, something of further note; you'll notice under all the headings (Except Hiro) that there is a "Death Jutsu." You'll further note that these jutsu are beyond the skills of characters of such ranks. Genin performing an A-rank jutsu? Preposterous. Allow me to elaborate; within the topic I have planned for these NPCs, they are all going to die. All of them. The "death jutsu" is to be their final, parting shot into the Dark before succumbing. And it's natural, is it not, for people to accomplish things they'd never otherwise accomplish were it not for Death staring them right in the face. Just look at the show "I Shouldn't Be Alive." Back on topic, these jutsu are supposed to signal the "end" of each NPC; they can be used ONLY when the NPC is about to die. Once used, whether from having their throat ripped out or dropping dead from chakra exhaustion, the NPC will be able to make no further actions.

Why am I going through the trouble of trying to get a "Death jutsu" idea through? Because it will make their deaths so much more epic. I figure, it would not be too grievous a breach of the rules to allow it in this instance, for characters to use jutsu completely beyond their rank; they are all NPCs, they are all slated to die, their topics will involve no actual Player Characters whatsoever, technically occur several years in the past of the current timeline, and the jutsu will literally be the LAST things they do.

If you wish for more details on the planned string of topics, I will PM the outline.


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Let's work on the custom jutsu first:

  • Both Paint Bomb and Dangerous Paint Bomb, won't they affect even the character that uses this techs?
  • Multi-Shot. I may not know much about archery, but when I look at my hand, I see only 4 open spots to put an arrow. So how is someone able to fire 6 arrows at once?
  • Thunder Palm. I never liked the idea of paralyzing someone for a whole post, because with it, you're basically getting an auto-hit, or an auto-kill which I really don't like. And after talking with others, they agreed that complete paralysis should be only A rank. For lower ranks it should be just a momentary stun or something similar.


Huh. I thought this would be much longer... Much, much longer. Apart from the jutsu that I mentioned, I don't really have any problems with the NPC's.
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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) EmptyMon 18 Mar 2013, 9:22 am

You didn't tell me you'd editted that post Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) 287405 Moving on.

  • Yes, the Paint Bombs would certainly affect the user. I'll edit that in.
  • Thunderpalm will be edited down to partial paralysis; say, a single limb.


As for Multi-shot, and for how someone fires up to six arrows at once.
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COOKIE! Like that.
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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) EmptyMon 18 Mar 2013, 9:38 am

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As for Multi-shot, and for how someone fires up to six arrows at once.
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COOKIE! Like that.

Holly doodles! He hit them all! Well, anyway, I don't know how exactly approvals for NPC's go but I will give you Approved 1/2 since I want one more mod to check this.
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BK-201
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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) EmptyMon 18 Mar 2013, 10:14 am

That is agreeable.
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Sloth
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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) EmptySat 23 Mar 2013, 2:27 am

You know Travis I've put off looking at this for a while because it was so daunting and I expected to need to change a lot of stuff about it, however as is becoming a theme with the stuff I've seen of yours this is very very well put together and well thought out. Ivan took care of the issues I would've wanted addressed had I been the first on the scene however between the two of you I feel that this is more than satisfactory for me to put my stamp on. Good lock with the advancement of your plot, don't forget to RP with us plebians though.


Approved 2/2.
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Nomi
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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) EmptySat 15 Feb 2014, 9:21 am

Unapproved and moved due to user request.
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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) Sometimes Heros Die (NPCs) EmptySat 19 Jul 2014, 4:53 am

Is this still be working on? Asking due to archiving purposes.
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Archived.
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